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[X] you are friends with two of the others in your group. You cant truly speak for the last yet, but you doubt that he wants to take a test meant for a team alone.

I'm always a fan of peer pressure
 
[X] you are friends with two of the others in your group. You cant truly speak for the last yet, but you doubt that he wants to take a test meant for a team alone.
 
[X] you are friends with two of the others in your group. You cant truly speak for the last yet, but you doubt that he wants to take a test meant for a team alone.
 
[X] you are friends with two of the others in your group. You cant truly speak for the last yet, but you doubt that he wants to take a test meant for a team alone.

Hmm, kinda like the vibe in this one, especially when Xifeng apparently buts in Chanying's

truce-" Chanying begins to say, but she is promptly cut off by Xifeng.

With this and her appearance last time, it seems like someone has serious control issues…
 
You know, she never really answered Lind's question about how we could trust her. All she did was point out that her group will do whatever she wants, so if she decides to betray Lind then they'd just follow her decision. Lind cannot offer a more concrete guarantee than what she is wanting to offer herself.

A big difference between them is that they came to Lind with the plan for an alliance and not the other way around. That means that among elements of their team Lind already has a reputation of being a decent bloke, reliable and trustworthy while she doesn't have this same reputation among Lind's group. Yet she feels the right to present herself as though she cannot trust Lind and he needs to prove his worth to her. I feel this answer is a good reflection of her own guarantee and if that's not good enough then tough.

[X] You are friends with two of the others in your group. You cant truly speak for the last yet, but you doubt that he wants to take a test meant for a team alone.
 
Muscles ripple along her forearms, her grip a vice holding them in place and the only thing that drags your attention back is a yelp from your training partner as you realise that you have thrown Chanying onto the ground rather unceremoniously as she tried to profit off of your distraction.
Lol. He gets distracted by Vijaiya's muscles and still yeets Chanying on reflex.
"If you have not already mastered the Valiant Champion then you are close. A few more weeks and you are likely to have it completed. With that in mind, come to the next few sessions that Elder Yu hosts and I will speak with him about allowing you access to the Archives, or to an experienced teacher. Don't show and I will assume that you have decided to find other means to pursue your training."
Hopefully this just means we need to have completed the Valiant Champion within the next few weeks rather than having to turn up to sparring every single week. Wouldn't be the end of the world if it's the latter, it is something we want to get eventually, but it'd be nice to be able to branch out a bit more in these first few weeks.
Training Boost +1 Die -1 Threshold

10 6 2 5 4 6 10 9 – 7 Successes
2 9 6 6 10 7 6 1 – 7 Successes
9 3 10 4 4 7 2 9 – 5 Successes
7 10 7 2 6 6 5 8 – 7 Successes

The Valiant Champion Level 4 Reached
Level 5 10/30
Close Combat Skill +1, -1 Defense dice, +4 Attack Dice
I think the dice here are Phys. Prowess plus Teaching (7+1=8), but should we have got our Unarmed skill added to it as well like the other sparring sessions?
 
Adhoc vote count started by Karnax626 on Feb 15, 2023 at 12:37 PM, finished with 21 posts and 13 votes.


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Foundation Explained
It's been a while - particularly soul-draining period at work, combined with having to work out the mechanics for the next cultivation stage. But here we are!

[X] you are friends with two of the others in your group. You can't truly speak for the last yet, but you doubt that he wants to take a test meant for a team alone.

The sword-bearing disciple's gaze pierces you uncomfortably, but you do not hesitate to answer.

"We don't have a leader, but Bai Ping and Medhi and I are friends, and I believe they would be willing. I cannot speak for Yan directly, but I do not think he would refuse."

Chanying's gaze softens slightly, but Xifeng's eyes remain fierce as she meets your gaze levelly.

Empathy + Discernment 0 (Heart-Reading 0)

7, 4 - 1 Success!

Heart-Reading +1

There is a moment of connection between you and Xifeng. It has never been easy for you to connect with other people. You are a creature of open skies and winding trails, not of gossip and intrigue. But since you completed Consecration, you took more of the qi of the world into yourself than you had ever before. And you find something in yourself responding to something in Xifeng. It feels like stories you have heard, of cultivators being able to detect killing intent without eyes, of being able to communicate with their energy alone across a battlefield.

Xifeng is not just eager, but desperate to prove herself. If she is judging you harshly, you sense that same harshness of spirit directed at herself.

She pauses, but inclines her head. "Very well. Should you fail to follow through, we will show you no more mercy than any other team."

You nod as well, but linger a moment. You harbor suspicions about this girl's identity - but you are not a courtier. You have no need to suspect and deduce when asking will suffice. "Before I go, I must ask, exactly who have I bargained with?"

Xifeng's smile grows sharp, her eyes glint. Before she can answer, Wu raises a hand to her mouth, which is smiling at the corners. "Oh, Lind, did you not know? Before you stands Wen Xifeng, granddaughter of Elder Wen, also known as the Golden Monkey, or simply the Monkey, the Titan-Breaker, the Defender of the Dawnstar Gate, The One Who Did Not Kneel, and Head Elder of the Golden Reeds sect."

Well. That puts a few matters into their proper place.

You nod to Wu. "It changes nothing." You turn back to Wen, and extend a hand. She clasps it with a warrior's grip, and shakes it once.



From the sands of the lakeshore, you walk until you reach the main river which drains from it. The flow seems placid on the surface but inserting your hand into the crystal-clear water and feel its swiftness, a powerful pull that seems to be greater than the mere physical force would suggest. Your fingertips tingle slightly, a pleasant sensation from the spiritual energy carried by the liquid.

You walk upon the reed-bordered riverside, towards where you were told cultivation classes would be taught. Although you still do not practice the sect's breathing style, there may be other secrets you may learn.

Some of your fellows have joined you in the green-walled gazebo in the center of the placid lake. It is larger and more finely appointed than the first room you cultivated in, with greater power swirling through the air, but seems underfilled. An explanation is soon offered as it becomes clear that today's lesson is introductory in nature and designed for your incoming class. Presumably, most days are given over to meditation and larger groups attend. The cultivation trainer is Shen Tengfei, a portly man clad in spider-silk grey and a bushy beard. A rod of blue jade hangs in his hand, and he uses it to draw glowing words and illustrations as he speaks. "The Earthly Realms of cultivation are known as Consecration, Foundation, and Formation. The names are said to have derived from the stages of building a temple. First, the ground is purified. Next, the foundation is excavated. Finally, the temple itself is built." He gestures at the glowing pagoda-style temple he has conjured.

"Next are the Sky Realms," he points to the area above the temple, "where cultivators discard the shackles of the flesh and approach the spiritual, and finally the Immortal or Divine Realms."

"The vast majority of cultivators will never step beyond the Earthly realms, as the Heavens still level tribulations on those who step beyond the allotted power of mortals. The Elders of the sect and some of the Seniors are blessed to reside in the Sky realms. Of those in the Divine Realms…" his voice goes distant, "you all know the Emperor, Cao Feng." You follow the teacher's eyes, which are directed far off in the distance, and you know he gazes in the direction of the Imperial Capital.

"As your bodies have been purified of impurities and you have constructed a spiritual core in your dantian, it is time for you to focus on your meridians. There are numerous channels throughout your body through which qi can flow. However, there are eight which deserve special attention, as the body does not naturally allow more than a trickle to pass through these meridians at a given time. Each meridian is locked behind a "gate", which is both a spiritual and physical obstruction. Opening these "gates" is the way in which you will progress through the next stage of your cultivation. You must gather energy in your lower dantian and use it to force a way through the barrier without injuring yourself. Each Gate must be opened at once, and they will grow more difficult as you progress. Then, you must cultivate until you are ready for the next attempt."

The rest of the class is given over to an overview of the eight meridians. You are given a dizzying overview of dozens of theories - medical, spiritual, traditional. Entire scholarly careers have been built on writing dueling treatises regarding the Foundation stage. Everyone has an opinion, and each path undoubtedly offers significant advantages - the Gates opened first reveal the greatest benefits by the time the cultivator is ready to start the next phase. The Golden Reeds orthodoxy favors opening the gates of Affinity and Self first, as any path can benefit from greater depth of power, and leaving the Gate of Stars until you have a greater use for the insight it offers. But no one is here to make a decision for you.

The Foundation stage, also known as Excavation or Delving, is divided into eight sub-steps. Each meridian opened will give a continuous benefit as you cultivate, so the earlier you open it, the more of an effect it will have over time. The Gates are as follows:

The Gate of Affinity, which opens your body and spirit to the elements, making you closer to the world and making it easier to learn techniques.

The Gate of Skill, which attunes your mind and body to each other, making it easier to acquire mastery of skills.

The Gate of Lightness, which will increase your speed and dexterity, making your body lighter and faster

The Gate of Potency, which will increase the power you can bring to bear, in battle and out.

The Gate of Self, which will strengthen your self-assuredness and ability to defy fate.

The Gate of Humanity, which will open you further to the world around you and those who dwell within.

The Gate of Eyes, which develops your senses and ability to process information.

The Gate of the Stars, which opens the artist's mind to esoteric wisdom and understanding, including knowledge of the spirit world and the Heavens.

Author's Note: While the keen-minded may note that five of the Gates do correspond closely to Attributes, there are other benefits to be found than attribute increases.

After opening a Gate, the user must adjust their body to the increased qi flow and make ready before the next Gate can be opened. Thus, cultivation must be performed between breakthroughs.

As the cultivation class drones on, Lind sinks into the Devouring Crucible once more. As he does, he feels a flash of insight from the lessons imbued from that obsidian shard given to him by the Ghost. He can feel the flames of the Crucible eating away at the first of the Gates.

Devouring Crucible Foundation Stage Benefit Revealed - the target number of breakthroughs is reduced by 3 per Gate. However, Lind will take damage from each breakthrough equal to (7 x Gate Number).

First Gate Target Number - 17(20)! Which Gate Lind tries to open will be determined when he makes his first attempt! This target number must be met over one set of Cycling rolls, ie, in one action. Failing a breakthrough by a significant amount may have negative consequences.


There is enough time at the end of class that you could meditate, but you do not feel ready just now. Your head is too full of knowledge to make a decision yet on what you wish to attempt first. Instead, you must clear your head, and so you make your way to one of the sect dining halls.

Lunch is being served in a building half-opened to the air, and a dizzying array of disciples meet your eyes here. If you thought the sect members who travelled to and from town made for a diverse set, the exotic features (many nonhuman) outlandish clothing and dizzying array of weapons and spiritual tools on offer make for an arresting sight, as you are able to view all of them in the act of devouring bowls of rice topped with meat and sauce of their choice. Your spiritual senses do not tingle with the scent - this is good food, but mundane, and the Immortal Chefs ply their arts at the village or elsewhere in the sect. Still, the trays of dirtied dishes being removed and replaced at a steady pace speak to the quality of the meals on offer.

Roll: Insight (4) + Logic 0 (Math 0)

6 2 2 8 = 1 Success!

Something about the number of disciples, though, makes your mind itch. It takes you a moment, but only that.

There are too few for the number and size of the buildings here.

There have been hints. The ruined pagoda found by Bai Ping. The too-small meditation chamber, just now. Even the fact that a Senior of the sect would recruit students from so far afield as your village speaks to something. But now you are sure - the Golden Reeds has far fewer members than it once boasted. Why, you cannot say, but it is a question worth asking.

Now is not the time, however. You scan the crowd and find the raggedy-haired figure of Medhi sitting alone at a corner table. The once-scrawny disciple has filled out into lean muscle, fed by Consecration and, you suspect, new access to regular meals. But even as he idly moves barbequed pork from bowl to mouth, you see that there is distraction in his eyes. His eyes glance to the vast shimmering lake, the mountains, and even back to the village.

If it were you looking at the distance like that, you would be fighting wanderlust. You know you have barely scratched the surface of the sect grounds. But Medhi wandered not from choice, but from necessity. He does not have the look of a hunter.

He has the look of prey.

You take your own bowl, filled with some form of shellfish and a lesser version of the sour-and-sweet sauce that you ate with the Kraken's tentacle, and sit next to Medhi. Without saying anything, you tilt the bowl and offer some of your food, which he takes, and with the slightest gesture does the same, which you reciprocate. You both chew in silence for a moment.

"It is good," you comment.

"...yes." He says.

"There would not be such good food in the lands beyond the mountains," you comment.

"...I could grow my own food. I have been learning."

You bite back a comment about whether a month makes Medhi the equal of a skilled farmer, and shrug. "I suppose you could."

You eat for another few moments.

"I liked it here. I really did." Medhi sighs as he stares at the lake.

"There are parts I like," you comment neutrally.

"...that is a way of saying there are parts you don't."

"No path in life is perfect. The broken cobbles let you gauge your pace," you say, quoting something from the Travels of Li.

Medhi snorts, and it almost comes out to a sob at the end. "They're setting us up to fail, Lind. Even our 'teacher' doesn't believe in us. I don't want to play their game. I'm feeling I should just leave."

Medhi appears to be having a crisis of confidence. What do you say to reassure him?

[] Your team is not as disadvantaged as it appears. Each of you has talents, the same as the other three teams, and you have made it this far. If you work together, you can be even stronger than those with advantages.

[] Your teacher has seemingly treated your poorly, but there must be more to it. At your next meeting, you will challenge her as a group and force her to explain herself.

[] At least one of the other teams is willing to work together. Perhaps this competition will not be so serious as to ruin your odds of success at the sect. Maybe it could even be fun?

[] Write-in
 
[X] Your team is not as disadvantaged as it appears. Each of you has talents, the same as the other three teams, and you have made it this far. If you work together, you can be even stronger than those with advantages.

Hmm voting this for now.
Gate of Affinity seems to be a good enough gate.
Gate of Potency might be needed in order to not get wrecked by the 7x8 dmg we have to tank for the final gate.
 
[X] Your team is not as disadvantaged as it appears. Each of you has talents, the same as the other three teams, and you have made it this far. If you work together, you can be even stronger than those with advantages.

Extra write-in, mostly to inspire others:

[X] Nothing ventured, nothing gained. Wherever we go, we can only get as much as the world offers. We could grow and be happy in poor lands, or stagnate in paradise. What matters is how much effort we want to put.
 
[X] At least one of the other teams is willing to work together. Perhaps this competition will not be so serious as to ruin your odds of success at the sect. Maybe it could even be fun?

For the Gates, I think we should open Humanity first. People skills are Lind's biggest weakness.
 
Devouring Crucible Foundation Stage Benefit Revealed - the target number of breakthroughs is reduced by 3 per Gate. However, Lind will take damage from each breakthrough equal to (7 x Gate Number).
Damn, no wonder Devouring Crucible increases Strength and Will during Consecration. You need it when you reach Foundation.

Makes me wonder whether it'll still do that as we open the Gates in addition to what each meridian gives us.
 
[X] At least one of the other teams is willing to work together. Perhaps this competition will not be so serious as to ruin your odds of success at the sect. Maybe it could even be fun?

A shift in perspective is probably the healthiest for his mental health. Don't look at the challenges as tests of grave importance, but ways to test yourself in exciting ways.


Dunno why, but i'm having flashbacks to might guy and rock lee. What with each gate making us more powerful but hurting us more than the last.
 
[X] Your team is not as disadvantaged as it appears. Each of you has talents, the same as the other three teams, and you have made it this far. If you work together, you can be even stronger than those with advantages.
 
[X] At least one of the other teams is willing to work together. Perhaps this competition will not be so serious as to ruin your odds of success at the sect. Maybe it could even be fun?
 
The Gate of Affinity - Techniques

The Gate of Skill - Skills

The Gate of Lightness - Agility

The Gate of Potency - Strength

The Gate of Self - Will

The Gate of Humanity - Empathy

The Gate of Eyes - Insight

The Gate of the Stars, which opens the artist's mind to esoteric wisdom and understanding, including knowledge of the spirit world and the Heavens.
My read as to what each Gate encompasses, though I have no idea what Star refers to.

I'm actually tempted to go for the Gate of Skill first. It's attribute agnostic, and Lind picking up lots of different skills on his travels is pretty appealing.

Though we do have to get either 7 more Strength, 11 more Will, some combination of both, or an improved Health trait in order to get enough Health for the later Gates, so that's something to bear in mind. If needs be we could always get something like that Kraken meal to tip us over temporarily, I guess?
 
[X] Nothing ventured, nothing gained. Wherever we go, we can only get as much as the world offers. We could grow and be happy in poor lands, or stagnate in paradise. What matters is how much effort we want to put.
 
[X] At least one of the other teams is willing to work together. Perhaps this competition will not be so serious as to ruin your odds of success at the sect. Maybe it could even be fun?
 
I really love the Lind is someone who doesn't really care about all this political and position stuff. Sure he's aware of it and isn't stupid, Lind is just someone who focuses on his passions and interests. I love that he straight up said to Xifeng your family and position changes nothing for me.
 
[X] Your team is not as disadvantaged as it appears. Each of you has talents, the same as the other three teams, and you have made it this far. If you work together, you can be even stronger than those with advantages.

For the Gates, I think I want to go for Potency then Humanity for our first two. Strength is already our highest stat, I wanna see how close we can get to Xianxia!One Punch man :p
Humanity would help shore up empathy, and I like the idea of Lind looking at his cultivation and deciding he wants to reach out to other people more.
Poor Medhi. Though I am not sure why he is spooked so.
My guess is Medhi's shocked he's got this far. His background sounded pretty bad, so he's looking at the sect as his chance to get a better life; now he's looking at his competition on the other teams (and a little on this team - it was Bai Ping and the 4th guy who got a pill from the Senior) and he's worried he's only got into the Sect through luck/our help.
That's my theory anyway.
 
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Maybe something like:

[X] Do you really thing elsewhere you'll find something better than what you have here? Stop comparing yourself to others and start thinking of your own choices.

But maybe there's a better way to put it.
 
[X] Your team is not as disadvantaged as it appears. Each of you has talents, the same as the other three teams, and you have made it this far. If you work together, you can be even stronger than those with advantages.

As for gates, we might need to open one that makes us healthier/resistant to pain first, if it's going to hurt more than normal to open the following gates.
 
[X] Your team is not as disadvantaged as it appears. Each of you has talents, the same as the other three teams, and you have made it this far. If you work together, you can be even stronger than those with advantages.

Gate of Eyes would synergize well with the Hunter archetype and be able to track prey, better scout opponents, and react quicker to situations.

Gate of Self is also intriguing for the line about defying fate, especially since Lind has a target on his back with his cycling technique.
 
[X] Your team is not as disadvantaged as it appears. Each of you has talents, the same as the other three teams, and you have made it this far. If you work together, you can be even stronger than those with advantages.

[X] Nothing ventured, nothing gained. Wherever we go, we can only get as much as the world offers. We could grow and be happy in poor lands, or stagnate in paradise. What matters is how much effort we want to put.

I feel like we should get a gate that lets us learn things faster like the skill or affinity gate. But we definetly need health so gate of self or gymbro gate should be #2/3
 
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