Bronze Heart

I should probably note- If you guys want to avoid the Lise vote going through, you should probably provide an alternative. Otherwise, the prior one will win by default.

Of course, whatever happens is fine with me- I just wanted to put that out there.
 
I should probably note- If you guys want to avoid the Lise vote going through, you should probably provide an alternative. Otherwise, the prior one will win by default.

Of course, whatever happens is fine with me- I just wanted to put that out there.
[X] Lise: Fight defensively; focus on surviving and keeping the boss busy, rather than defeating it.
 
[X] Lise: Fight defensively; focus on surviving and keeping the boss busy, rather than defeating it.

Don't really care about the cultist situation, Flora has that well in hand with ballistic Betsy in reserve, but Lise could easily go toast.
 
[X] Betsy: Sing a fighting song! Try to inspire Flora and Lise if they get here!
[X] Flora: We can't hear your thoughts anymore. Use anything you have that can hurt 'em.
[X] Lise: Fight defensively; focus on surviving and keeping the boss busy, rather than defeating it.
 
[X] Betsy: Sing a fighting song! Try to inspire Flora and Lise if they get here!
[X] Flora: We can't hear your thoughts anymore. Use anything you have that can hurt 'em.
[X] Lise: Fight defensively; focus on surviving and keeping the boss busy, rather than defeating it.
 
[X] Betsy: Sing a fighting song! Try to inspire Flora and Lise if they get here!
[X] Flora: We can't hear your thoughts anymore. Use anything you have that can hurt 'em.
[X] Lise: Fight defensively; focus on surviving and keeping the boss busy, rather than defeating it.
 
Oh right- assuming nothing happens, the next update should be this weekend at some point- Friday or Saturday ideally. I'll close the vote around then. I'm back in school now and looking for work, so I'm going to space out updates more than I had been.
 
[X] Betsy: Sing a fighting song! Try to inspire Flora and Lise if they get here!
[X] Flora: We can't hear your thoughts anymore. Use anything you have that can hurt 'em.
[X] Lise: Fight defensively; focus on surviving and keeping the boss busy, rather than defeating it.
 
[X] Betsy: Sing a fighting song! Try to inspire Flora and Lise if they get here!
[X] Flora: We can't hear your thoughts anymore. Use anything you have that can hurt 'em.
[X] Lise: Fight defensively; focus on surviving and keeping the boss busy, rather than defeating it.

I think I've forgotten to vote.
 
[X] Lise: That big crystal summoning circle spell thing looks important; go wreck it while the cultists are distracted.
 
Sorry, guys. I can't do bronze heart till probably the end of the month or longer.

Extreme personal issues (AKA Court- over something that's ridiculous, and I'm not sure how bad things are going to be) are currently coming up in a week or so, and my anxiety and depression are at an all time high. I'm extremely high strung and am not going to be able to write very well. Thank you in advance for your patience- I really want to work on Bronze Heart, but this is a very difficult time.
 
Update on... well, updates.

The problems in my personal life have been postponed for a few months thanks to a lucky break, which should give me more time to prepare (both informationally and emotionally).

Therefore... I should be back to updating by the end of the month! Expect Bronze Heart to resume around the 31st or 1st of Feb.
 
Vote Complete (1-31-22) [Confrontation]
Vote Complete! Post should be sometime today or tomorrow.
Scheduled vote count started by RunicRhythm on Jan 9, 2022 at 9:24 PM, finished with 26 posts and 15 votes.
 
Whew. Turns out we're coming back on a big one.

I've spent the last 3ish hours working on this update (I'm a bit rusty admittedly, so that contributes) and I'm quickly realizing that it might be best to put this off to tomorrow. Need to think a bit more on the flow and there's potentially a lot of drawing left to do.

It should be out sometime tomorrow early afternoon!

Edit: ...make that late afternoon.
 
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[X] Flora: We can't hear your thoughts anymore. Use anything you have that can hurt 'em.
[X] Betsy: Sing a fighting song! Try to inspire Flora and Lise if they get here!
[X] Lise: Fight defensively; focus on surviving and keeping the boss busy, rather than defeating it.

You're annoyed enough to fight right about now, so that's what you're going to do.

Well. Maybe not directly, anyway. You'd prefer to heal fully before stepping off the pedestal again. So you'll sing and support your friend(s). You hope Lise is doing alright.



(Potent Aura: MISS) Flora overcasts (losing 2 HP in the process) Potent Aura, hoping to poison the smug jerk standing in front of your prior assaultee...

(Shade Shift: 11 + 3 CREATE) But she can't maintain line of sight, as a shadowy wall springs up between the two of them. The man lets out a surprised laugh and closes one of his eyes.


You have some sense of vague respect for his carefree attitude toward getting attacked, even if you are mad at him.



Eve(?) flinches behind the shadowy cover, stepping back a bit more.


Without skipping a beat, the man's face turns deadly serious.





...this is probably bad, right?
Unfortunately, it's too late to do anything besides watch. She's too far away. The girl's entire body is quickly enveloped in shadow.

And then it all goes dark.

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The very foundation under the park shakes from the sheer force of the girl's spell. You find yourself thrown off balance as the metal pedestal under you rumbles.

And then it's over.



You're not dead, but you are dizzy and knocked on your butt. Eve(?) also seems winded from whatever it is that she just did, as she's fallen to her knees. You watch Len float on down to her with a concerned look as you regain your own bearings.

Flora looks shocked. You force your shaky body to standing to look at whatever she's gawking at.

What is it n-



Oh.

Oh no.



There's a new fountain in both the west and the north. The west one is unremarkable besides being another giant pulsing dark spout of nightmares, but the one to the north is wrapped around a giant black tree that you're fairly certain wasn't there before.

This sure is a problem, isn't it?

 
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So those are letters. Comparing against the ones on the targeting ring thingies from switch-o-vision... I see an L and a K on Eve's ring, and an A on Betsy's... do those just say ASDF and HJKL? And the letters on Betsy's flame might be "K?S ??AL?", though they're hard to read. Eve's spell in the image has a K at the end, and if the second rune is an A (it doesn't look quite right), then it might be "DARK", or it could just be rune salad.

EDIT: no, wait, ASDF can't be right. We know what S is.
 
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[X] Betsy: This is the final cute girl for your cute girl party. You must obtain her. Hop off the platform and claim your final party member (by force if necessary).
[X] Flora: Hold your phone up at the evil guy and tell him you're going to get a video of him and post it to social media. He's officially CANCELLED.
[X] Lise: please come to the pedestal we're worried you are dead or eaten
 
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[X] Betsy: This is the final cute girl for your cute girl party. You must obtain her. Hop off the platform and claim your final party member (by force if necessary).
[X] Betsy: Hug atleast someone
[X] Flora: Hold your phone up at the evil guy and tell him you're going to get a video of him and post it to social media. He's officially CANCELLED.
[X] Flora: Also, ask what the hell the tree fountain thing is.
[X] Lise: please come to the pedestal we're worried you are dead or eaten
 
[X] Betsy: This is the final cute girl for your cute girl party. You must obtain her. Hop off the platform and claim your final party member (by force if necessary).
[X] Betsy: Hug atleast someone
[X] Flora: Hold your phone up at the evil guy and tell him you're going to get a video of him and post it to social media. He's officially CANCELLED.
[X] Flora: Also, ask what the hell the tree fountain thing is.
[X] Lise: please come to the pedestal we're worried you are dead or eaten
 
[X] Betsy: This is the final cute girl for your cute girl party. You must obtain her. Hop off the platform and claim your final party member (by force if necessary).
[X] Flora: Hold your phone up at the evil guy and tell him you're going to get a video of him and post it to social media. He's officially CANCELLED.
[X] Lise: please come to the pedestal we're worried you are dead or eaten
 
Something's wrong on my end, the images aren't loading even if I right click and try to load them in a new tab.
 
I think the enemies might be about to retreat. Both Eve and Stubble Guy have been indicating that they'd rather leave than fight us. They've probably just accomplished the thing they were here to do. They've got a warp crystal right there. The party is distracted, and Eve is exhausted.

This seems like the perfect time for them to just warp away. Given the tactical situation, it might be too late to stop them. If I had to guess, I'd say they leave, Lise and Big Wisp reenter the scene, and we finish the Big Wisp boss fight to close out the chapter.
 
Something's wrong on my end, the images aren't loading even if I right click and try to load them in a new tab.
There's a number of reasons this happens, whether it be your internet connection or region you're living in. It usually comes back, but if using a different connection doesn't fix it, let me know and I'll move the image links over to an alternate site tomorrow. If anyone else is having the same issue, lemme know.
 
[X] Betsy: This is the final cute girl for your cute girl party. You must obtain her. Hop off the platform and claim your final party member (by force if necessary).
[X] Flora: Hold your phone up at the evil guy and tell him you're going to get a video of him and post it to social media. He's officially CANCELLED.
[X] Lise: please come to the pedestal we're worried you are dead or eaten
 
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