To Nurture the Next Generation (AU Naruto Sensei Quest)

Important announcement:

After a good amount of discussion with @Dark as Silver, we've added a new tier of High Jonin. The ranks are now as followed:

RankPoints
Civilian/Untrained​
0​
Genin​
5​
Chunin​
10​
Jonin​
15​
High Jonin​
20​
Kage​
25​

I also changed the number of points allowed for each skills, with 15 being the lowest average and 20 being the highest average, with only one skill allowed to be at 24 points. Also, you now have 300 points instead of 360/340 points.
Use them well.

I request that everyone chances their plans accordingly after this update.

Sorry for being such a bother and a fuck up. Hope I didn't ruin too much for you guys.

Kay, also does having a Kekkei Genkai add any bloodlines, or does it force us too have the two that make it up?

I.e Ice release means Water and Wind only
Yes, that is exactly what that means. Glad I could help.
 
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Important announcement:

After a good amount of discussion with @Dark as Silver, we've added a new tier of High Jonin. The ranks are now as followed:

RankPoints
Civilian/Untrained​
0​
Genin​
5​
Chunin​
10​
Jonin​
15​
High Jonin​
20​
Kage​
25​

I also changed the number of points allowed for each skills, with 15 being the lowest average and 20 being the highest average, with only one skill allowed to be at 24 points. Also, you now have 300 points instead of 360/340 points.
Use them well.

I request that everyone chances their plans accordingly after this update.

Sorry for being such a bother and a fuck up. Hope I didn't ruin too much for you guys.


Yes, that is exactly what that means. Glad I could help.
Kay, I have some more questions if you don't mind me asking
 
Ky

One. Whats the Deal with the Sub-Category for Ninjutsu

Two. What is a good example of a 24 Kekkai Genkai user?

Three. Will we get snippets of our old Jounin Team?

I'm not a writer so 3 isn't my place however I can give some insight on the mechanical details, unless quidrim overrides me.
1) Narrative fluff as well as situational uses, if you want to try and infiltrate an underground bunker, Earth Ninjutsu will give you different options than say fire.
2) Hard to say because Bloodlines vary so much. I could probably point towards Pain, as almost all his power comes from the Rinnegan however a 24 doesn't give you a Rinnegan. Picking a 24 there with the Hozuki bloodline isn't going to make you a city killer.
I hope that was less useless than I feel.
 
I'm not a writer so 3 isn't my place however I can give some insight on the mechanical details, unless quidrim overrides me.
1) Narrative fluff as well as situational uses, if you want to try and infiltrate an underground bunker, Earth Ninjutsu will give you different options than say fire.
2) Hard to say because Bloodlines vary so much. I could probably point towards Pain, as almost all his power comes from the Rinnegan however a 24 doesn't give you a Rinnegan. Picking a 24 there with the Hozuki bloodline isn't going to make you a city killer.
I hope that was less useless than I feel.
Kay, I mean do we have to put MORE points into the sub skills? Or is it covered by the ones we put in Ninjustu in general?
 
[X] Plan Seals are OP, ya know?
-[X] Shizuku (written with the kanji for "drop")
-[X] Man
-[X] 18
-[X] You were a clanless civilian who moved in into the village after its founding. You had to learn the arts of the shinobi and you worked very hard, managing to show an extreme talent for it that pushed you all the way to Jonin rank.
--[X] Write-In Surname: Kōzui
-[X] Ambitous and determined. Being of no clan but wanting to not be just another food-soldier, you realised early on that you'd need something to set you apart from the masses. Settling on Fuinjutsu meant that you became a very exacting and precise person, since mistakes can have quite far reaching consequences...
-[X] Appearance: something like this, but more muscled. (I don't really care)
-[X] Ninjutsu: 17
--[X] Water, Lightning
-[X] Taijutsu: 15
-[X] Genjutsu: 15
-[X] Bukijutsu: 17
--[X] Weapon Specialty: Bojutsu
-[X] Fuinjutsu: 24
-[X] Clan Art/Kekkei Genkai: 0
-[X] Acting: 15
-[X] Persuasion: 15
-[X] Intimidation: 15
-[X] Perception: 20
-[X] Information Gathering: 16
-[X] Cold Reading: 20
-[X] Code Mastery: 20
-[X] Sabotage: 19
-[X] Stealth: 20
-[X] Trap Making: 17
-[X] Poison Making: 15
-[X] Chakra Sensing: 20
 
Kinda want to suggest using a weapon like a bow or a glaive. Would make my own plan but don't think I'd do a great job making my own.

edit: Would like to vote for a plan using a clan though.
 
[X] Plan: I will carve my place in this world with my sword!
-[X] Naoki
-[X] Woman
-[X] Age: 18
-[X] You are a member of one of the many clans who had been around in the Land of Water, constantly fighting one another in the hopes of wiping each other out. But with the rise of Kirigakure things had to change, and although you still had the biases towards other clans, you learned to make them your comrades-in-arms.
--[X] You are a member of the Hoshigaki Clan, a very terrifying clan. This clan is known for its genetic mutation which has its members looking like a hybrid of human and fish, mostly sharks. They have great physical strength and lots of chakra.
-[X]Hot-tempered type. You have a strong sense of justice and are not afraid to tell people what you think of them. This does not mean, however, that you are dumb or overconfident. You may well be acting covertly or hiding your feelings and intentions - you just usually prefer not to do this. Much older shinobi avoid you, but you get along surprisingly well with children.
-[X] Ninjutsu: 19
--[X] Lightning , Water
-[X] Taijutsu: 15
-[X] Genjutsu: 15
-[X] Bukijutsu: 24
--[X] Kenjutsu
-[X] Fuinjutsu: 17
-[X] Clan Art/Kekkei Genkai: 15
-[X] Acting: 15
-[X] Persuasion: 16
-[X] Intimidation: 18
-[X] Perception: 20
-[X] Information Gathering: 17
-[X] Cold Reading: 17
-[X] Code Mastery: 15
-[X] Sabotage: 15
-[X] Stealth: 15
-[X] Trap Making: 15
-[X] Poison Making: 15
-[X] Chakra Sensing: 17

Most of the temperaments of the protagonists are pretty standard for such stories. I want to see something new!
It also seems like a waste to live in the early days of the Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist and not become one of them.
 
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[X] Plan Glacier moon
[X] Yuki MItshuhide
[X] Man
[X] 21
[X] You are a member of the Yuki Clan, a powerful and renowned clan. This clan is infamous for its Ice Release Kekkei Genkai, which makes the masters of this bloodline into a chilling and deadly foe on the battlefield.
[X] The stern and cold type. You are tough, but you are fair. You have a harsh exterior that is hard to crack and you are a person of few words. But when that exterior does break, people will find the hidden depths within you. / In addition to tending sadistic and psychopathic tendencies in a random way.

-[X] Ninjutsu: 17
--[X] Water and Wind
-[X] Taijutsu: 17
-[X] Genjutsu: 15
-[X] Bukijutsu: 15
-[X] Fuinjutsu: 15
-[X] Clan Art/Kekkei Genkai: 18
-[X] Acting: 15
-[X] Persuasion: 16
-[X] Intimidation: 24
-[X] Perception: 16
-[X] Information Gathering: 16
-[X] Cold Reading: 15
-[X] Code Mastery: 19
-[X] Sabotage: 18
-[X] Stealth: 19
-[X] Trap Making: 15
-[X] Poison Making: 15
-[X] Chakra Sensing: 15

Apparance: Aketchi Mitshuhide - Samurai Warrior
 
[X] Plan Seals are OP, ya know?
-[X] Shizuku (written with the kanji for "drop")
-[X] Man
-[X] 18
-[X] You were a clanless civilian who moved in into the village after its founding. You had to learn the arts of the shinobi and you worked very hard, managing to show an extreme talent for it that pushed you all the way to Jonin rank.
--[X] Write-In Surname: Kōzui
-[X] Ambitous and determined. Being of no clan but wanting to not be just another food-soldier, you realised early on that you'd need something to set you apart from the masses. Settling on Fuinjutsu meant that you became a very exacting and precise person, since mistakes can have quite far reaching consequences...
-[X] Appearance: something like this, but more muscled. (I don't really care)
-[X] Ninjutsu: 17
--[X] Water, Lightning
-[X] Taijutsu: 15
-[X] Genjutsu: 15
-[X] Bukijutsu: 17
--[X] Weapon Specialty: Bojutsu
-[X] Fuinjutsu: 24
-[X] Clan Art/Kekkei Genkai: 0
-[X] Acting: 15
-[X] Persuasion: 15
-[X] Intimidation: 15
-[X] Perception: 20
-[X] Information Gathering: 16
-[X] Cold Reading: 20
-[X] Code Mastery: 20
-[X] Sabotage: 19
-[X] Stealth: 20
-[X] Trap Making: 17
-[X] Poison Making: 15
-[X] Chakra Sensing: 20
 
[X] Plan: I will carve my place in this world with my sword!
 
[X] Plan Stoic Yuki
-[X] Susumu
-[X] Man
-[X] 19
-[X] You are a member of one of the many clans who had been around in the Land of Water, constantly fighting one another in the hopes of wiping each other out. But with the rise of Kirigakure things had to change, and although you still had the biases towards other clans, you learned to make them your comrades-in-arms. (Pick one clan from the list below)
--[X] You are a member of the Yuki Clan, a powerful and renowned clan. This clan is infamous for its Ice Release Kekkei Genkai, which makes the masters of this bloodline into a chilling and deadly foe on the battlefield.
-[X] The stern and cold type. You are tough, but you are fair. You have a harsh exterior that is hard to crack and you are a person of few words. But when that exterior does break, people will find the hidden depths within you.
-[X] Appearance:
-[X] Ninjutsu: 20
--[X] Water and Wind
-[X] Taijutsu: 15
-[X] Genjutsu: 15
-[X] Bukijutsu: 20
--[X] Kenjutsu
-[X] Fuinjutsu: 15
-[X] Clan Art/Kekkei Genkai: 24
-[X] Acting: 15
-[X] Persuasion: 15
-[X] Intimidation: 15
-[X] Perception: 20
-[X] Information Gathering: 17
-[X] Cold Reading: 17
-[X] Code Mastery: 15
-[X] Sabotage: 15
-[X] Stealth: 15
-[X] Trap Making: 15
-[X] Poison Making: 15
-[X] Chakra Sensing: 17

@radioxaxa Your plan is invalid at the moment. Can I convince you and @Warmach1ne32 to vote for my plan?
 
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[X] Plan Mud
-[X] Name: Kousuke
-[X] Male
-[X] 20
-[X] You are a member of one of the many clans who had been around in the Land of Water, constantly fighting one another in the hopes of wiping each other out. But with the rise of Kirigakure things had to change, and although you still had the biases towards other clans, you learned to make them your comrades-in-arms. (Pick one clan from the list below)
--[X] You are a member of the Doi Clan, a powerful and renowned clan. This clan possesses the Mud Release Kekkei Genkai, though it is much less heard of than the likes of Wood Release, yet this ability is indeed very powerful.
-[X] The laid-back kind. You don't really get nervous or stressed easily and you take your time as much as possible. People are just too eager to do stuff and they die without appreciating life. You, on the other hand, get to appreciate every second.
-[X] Ninjutsu: 20
--[X] Water and Earth
-[X] Taijutsu: 15
-[X] Genjutsu: 15
-[X] Bukijutsu: 18
--[X] Bōjutsu
-[X] Fuinjutsu: 15
-[X] Clan Art/Kekkei Genkai: 24
-[X] Acting: 15
-[X] Persuasion: 15
-[X] Intimidation: 15
-[X] Perception: 15
-[X] Information Gathering: 20
-[X] Cold Reading: 15
-[X] Code Mastery: 15
-[X] Sabotage: 15
-[X] Stealth: 17
-[X] Trap Making: 17
-[X] Poison Making: 17
-[X] Chakra Sensing: 17

Hopefully I counted right.
 
Hello everyone, I just wanted to tell you all that I added a new specialty to the Bukijutsu sub-skills: Kyujutsu (bow and arrow techniques). This was one I wanted from the start but I forgot about. So anyone who is a bow and arrow over now has this.

Anyway, for those of you interested, 24 points in a skill is almost kage level, but I mean kage level as part 1 Old Sarutobi and the 5 kage from the Kage Summit Arc. Not too gigantic in scale but still powerful and deadly.
So just imagine the things regular kage-level shinobi can do and think that you are in one skill almost reaching that. Almost being the key word.

Anyway, today I will make a post about how I see the top tiers in this world, Bijuu and more.
 
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