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Nice chapter! Love slice of life, and I really dig all the little yet illuminating glimpses of these characters’ personalities and the nuance of their relationships. Cute!

Yo this a pretty fire for a first chapter. Took me a second but the quirky historian quote is kind of hilarious. I really wanna call out the intense focus on your description of bodily action here. I think you nailed physical sensation and the experience of just moving one’s body to...

This fic always makes me laugh. I like the light tone and the humor and the fact that, yes, Taylor’s mentality DOES seem to be skewed by her power, but in a way that’s not inaccurate. I love she does not seem to perceive her enforcement of the Law as dissimilar to the PRT’s role as law...

Playing off what Twei said about the dissonance between Addy feeling alone and being surrounded by supportive people, the scene with Alex is cool because it shows her support network CAN understand her issues in ways that matter even if they’re very different from what a human would deal with...

[X] Amity

Take all the rest you need, we’re not going anywhere. All this delicious “Addy navigates being a person” juice is delightful. Even when it makes my heart hurt, it’s a good pain because of all the warmth of people in her life.

[X] Captain: Taylor [X] Second: Kaya [X] Third: Luffy [X] Ask about Laboon’s story I think Luffy could maybe do with some leadership mentoring, and Kaya may have the second-most relevant experience in sapient administration after Taylor and Best Shard.

[X] New Skill: Gardening [X] Skill: Queen Administrator's Best Buddy [X] Nami There's a neat bond of trust that's formed between Tay and Nami, and warming Taylor up to entrust Nami with some of her own past could be beautiful. As Taylor's sorta-deuteragonist, that story may be best told by...