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Kaizuki

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  • Ugolino
    thats not true though kai_we just knew,who she was and her issues, not just LOL DEAD MAMI. that vote akes sabrina,a liar..
    Ugolino
    Ugolino
    Now that I'm on PC, read the Poptart edition of your latest vote, and have to say other than my issues with the opening line, I think I really like the rest. :)
    Kaizuki
    Kaizuki
    Yeah the opening line is... There's kind of a minimum threshold as i mentioned in convo but it could be toned back significantly. "I had honest reason to believe that I needed to intervene for your safety," even, would be truthful
    Ugolino
    Her life, maybe, but her sanity? The Lichbomb basically broke Mami and no one in the quest wanted a repeat of that reaction.

    Right now, compassion is the most important thing in the reply. Mami needs to see that Sabrina really does care.
    Ugolino
    Can't speak for redshirt, but in my thought proceess, the vote edit is meant as an opening that explains things and gives us room to explain further as needed more than anything. Second, the lines starting with -[]We just and -[]We're...we're sorry are meant to address the issue you raised about manipulation. If it becomes an issue, the vote cuts off for explanations.
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    Ugolino
    Ugolino
    If we need to tackle the manipulation issue more openly, the response to those two points will make it fairly obvious and the follow-up vote can do just that in great detail, but a)and b) come first for a very tricky conversation. Priorities.
    Kaizuki
    Kaizuki
    Much as she trusts us she is ALWAYS dreading that something bad will happen between her and us. ALWAYS. I agree that Mami is biased in our favor but we should leave as little to chance here as possible and, in the process of doing so, we will be able to authenticate how important this is to us.
    Ugolino
    Ugolino
    I think you're misreading Mami's specific fears (She trusts Sabrina, she's just afraid of abandonment.). Narrator has pointed out why I think it's not a good idea to go that approach now, and I agree with him that it seems counterproductive. For this vote, anyway.
    ApocalypticFish
    How have things been lately?
    Kaizuki
    Kaizuki
    Well, I keep trying to force myself to write this godawful paper by restricting my access to games and then it doesn't work because the paper is godawful. But im finallymaking progress :)
    ApocalypticFish
    ApocalypticFish
    That's good. The making progress bit, I mean.
    ApocalypticFish
    How's it going? *pets*
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    Kaizuki
    Kaizuki
    Nope. Didn't even see that I was agreeing with him, bitched at me about my example still being wrong.

    Q_Q
    Kaizuki
    Kaizuki
    Worst part of it all was that it was one of those completely nonproductive arguments, where the talking points don't change at all and nothing gets constructed. Sigh.
    Kaizuki
    Kaizuki
    *pumps fist* the English teacher I respect the most out of all English teachers I have ever known sided with me. I am completely okay with everything that has happened tonight.
    ApocalypticFish
    Hey, you alright? Did you figure out the cause of it?
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    Kaizuki
    Kaizuki
    Terraria's half off atm, so if you're interested in a few hundred hours of gameplay, I'd suggest picking that up for $5. Can honestly say I've never met anyone who didn't enjoy it.
    Kaizuki
    Kaizuki
    XCOM is also $7.50 atm, but Terraria is definitely a better buy. XCOM isn't a game for everyone, although admittedly I have uh... 1118 hours logged on it.
    ApocalypticFish
    ApocalypticFish
    HOORAY! *glomps*
    Kaizuki
    Tentative estimate: Friday.
    Kaizuki
    Kaizuki
    Still getting feedback but I think I'll have it in by wednesday.
    Kaizuki
    Kaizuki
    Delays. Feedback delayed, I'm delayed too -- finals are stress. I dunno whats gonna happen. But I'm gonna start some rewrites friday and we'll go from there.
    Alphaleph
    *beep*
    Kaizuki
    Kaizuki
    Some of the betas are taking a while. And one in particular managed to deconstruct my entire narrative FOR me, and I need that.
    Kaizuki
    Kaizuki
    So... Yeah. When that gets done I'll have something to say again >.>
    Kaizuki
    General editing complete (I thinhk?) for first 40 pages (51 total). Implementing extra scene...
    Kaizuki
    *waves arms ineffectually* Yah! Go away filthy homework! On the upside this math is going very quickly so far. *hope intensifies*
    Kaizuki
    General edit complete. Secondary edit WIP, should be short, but need to be rested. Then the rest of the todo list.
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