Another thought on the story mechanics. As far as I understood it the PC can travel back and forward between canon GW and Void Ascension. Would this mean group-travel is open to abuse?
Void Ascension (ZnT/GW)
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koolerkid got the gist of it.Feuerklinge said:
However, think about this:
My character can transfer items and currency to and from the Guild Wars main servers to the new expansion.
I can do some serious farming for crafting materials, armor, weapons, consumables, and so forth to sell to the GW market for currency or keep said items and bring them to Void Ascension.
See where I am going here?
Many of the crafting materials that are relatively easy to acquire in Guild Wars are not necessarily easy to acquire in Halkeginia.
Let's just say I am a firm believer of Capitalism in this instance and you can imagine what may or may not happen, especially when I apply some aspects from the Art of War to protect my investments.
Chapter Two, Part Two: And So It Begins
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For awhile, I was rather content to walk with Louise in silence. For her, it may have been comfortable and satisfying to have enjoyed what happened earlier.
'After all, the actions of the Familiar reflect the Master and if I am responsible for dealing with that damn rat, then, by association, I guess she gets the credit'.
And so we were walking towards Louise' first class, when I had a few questions for the girl as I had begun forming some plans in my head that would not go well if she were to need my 'protection' as it was one of the duties of the Familiar.
"Master, does Mr. Gramont share a class with you?"
"Yes, why do you ask?"
"Well, I am afraid that Mr. Gramont will try to hurt you after he finds out that I was responsible for letting Montmorency loose on him. Will you be safe?"
*chuckles*"I suppose that might be true, but fear not as I am made of sterner stuff."
"If you are certain master, I -," I would have continued my conversation when suddenly a message appeared on screen:
"I am sorry Master, but it appears staying up all night has taken its toll on my body and I am now feeling its effects," I blatantly lied while text commanding Setsuna to give a sheepish gesture. However, I knew that Setsuna never needed to sleep and I could always conveniently save my progress before continuing anyway.
At my response, Louise gave me one of those looks after having rolled her eyes and muttering something about 'stupid Familiar'.
"While I commend you on your dedication, I believe that I can survive going to class for the day. Right now, I want you to rest. You do remember where the room is correct?"
"Yes, Master. Now please, do not be late on my account," while leaving out what I was saying yes to as she watched my character leave in the direction of her room.
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After having asked the passing maids, I discovered that Siesta was in the kitchen.
At the entrance, if I could only smell the various foods cooking, I might have been in heaven. As it were, I merely took in the view appreciatively as the various cooking staff members worked around their stations smoothly like a well-oiled machine.
"Now, where is that maid," I said, not realizing that a rather muscular man overheard me and had somehow managed to sneak close enough without alerting my targeting system.
"What would a noble want here?" questioned the muscular chef who was gazing at Setsuna with a stern gaze.
"Wha-, who are you?" I asked as I had been genuinely surprised that someone could sneak up on me, considering my class build.
"I asked you a question if you did not hear me the first time. Who. Are. You?"
"Setsuna!" cried a familar voice. "Marteau, please do not scare the one who protected me." At those words, the one named Marteau deflated slightly and went back to whatever he was doing, while he grumbled about this or that.
"Please do not mind Marteau. He only means well, especially when the nobles start acting up around the staff," Siesta said as she took my character's left hand and led her to one of the corner stations where there were two available stools.
"Setsuna," whispered Siesta as soon as we were seated. "Are you really a noble?"
"No, Siesta. I have never been a noble. I may have defended nobles in the past as part of my job that we spoke of last night. Besides, what brought up this question?" I asked as I did not remember when anyone coul- oh, now that I thought about it, I had been rather reckless in my use of the Shadow Steps to chase down that rat.
While I was busy with my thoughts, Siesta furrowed her eyebrows as though she were trying to connect two plus two but only got forty-two.
"Setsuna," whispered Siesta. "Marlene claimed that she saw someone wearing your clothing using some kind of strange magic to move from one location to another. But that could not be true because she also claimed that there were ink stains on your chest, when there is clearly nothing there. Besides, I can't think of any nobles willing to clean the clothing of a commoner with magic, right?"
"You are correct Siesta. You were there. You know what I am wearing right now, correct?"
"Yes, so it doesn't make sense."
At that, I merely smiled, "Siesta don't worry your pretty little head. Anyway, I just came by to check up on you."
"On me?"
"Yes, I mean we are friends, right?"
"Friends?" asked Siesta who then warmly smiled. "Yes, I like the sound of that. So, yes we're friends. And to answer your question. I am alright. Just a little nervous is all. But nothing that a good meal and an even better nights rest can't heal."
"Good to hear, Siesta. Well, I ho-
"Setsuna? Are you alright?" Siesta stood up to provide assistance when my character suddenly froze up.
"Nothing. I just need some rest since I haven't had any sleep since cleaning the laundry," I lied as I immediately minimized the message and put up the blocker before I received anymore that interrupted my gaming experience.
*gasp*"Oh, you poor dear. You should go to bed then. Enough worrying about me. Just go and take care of yourself. I swear, you nearly me scared me there like that one time my brother froze up and start shaking like he had been possessed," Siesta said while she stood with her hands on her hips.
"Yes mother," I teased back at Siesta who only responded by sticking her tongue out at my character.
And so, I headed for the dormitories.
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Once I arrived outside the correct room, I opened the door, entered, and closed it behind me. Immediately, I proceeded to use my targeting system to see if there were any people, familiars, or remote viewing devices within.
At first, I remembered that I had received two messages not too long ago from some of my friends, acquaintances, and allies.
"Let's see if I can get those idiots to back off for now," I chuckled as I removed the message blocker and saw that I had now a total of 41 messages from various sources.
I pressed 'send message' after having written a blanket response, but only received the error message of 'Voidhaxx Pwns You'. I pressed 'send message' again and received the same result.
And again.
And again.
So, I decided to log off Void Ascension and log into Prophecies. Once there, I was able to communicate freely with my fellow players. Long story short, I assured them that I was alright and that I was pre-occupied with another game.
I debated telling them about Void Ascension, however, I was still not sure if I had been the target of some kind of virus, trojan, or other malicious program and I did not want to inadvertently expose any of them. I had already run my entire system through several reboots, virus scans, and even a few reinstalls of my OS and everything else. Despite these measures, Void Ascension remained whenever I installed Guild Wars.
Call me foolish or idiotic, but one thing I hated was not understanding what I was dealing with. I tended to refuse any outside help until I could figure out what I had done wrong and what I could have done better.
So, I logged back into the new game I had and proceeded to figure out the details of all of these bonus skills I had been granted since Setsuna had been kissed by Louise.
"Well, let's see. Time to find out about all those skills I gained over the past few playthroughs."
It was then that I pulled up the skills screen together with the quests list beside it.
"Time to look at those skills. Let's see which one I want to view in greater detail. Hmmmm....might as well go for the first skill Setsuna gained when Louise kissed her."
....
"Well."
"Shit. Talk about overpowered. I just got hit with the mother of all steroids into my build and it's only at level one," I said as I only stared in shock at what had been granted to my character.
"And only minor increased range for the Shadow Steps. I was jumping at least a dozen times further than I normally do!"
Okay, calming breaths, calming breaths.
After all, it was not every day I just learned that my Assassin effectively became a sneaky tank.
"I will just have to see what Level 2 is like later on."
"Man, talk about boosts. And 30 drinks?! That is going to be a big pain in the butt considering just how hard I've been roleplaying as a semi-serious Familiar who is gaining the reputation as upstanding. Not to mention just how much it costs to buy one of those drinks when it's not a seasonal holiday in Guild Wars."
I smiled wryly at the thought of what the NPC's would think at seeing a very tipsy Setsuna.
"You shee itsh forsh regen....regene....whasheverish to get more badashy *hic* againsh!"
*facepalm* "Oh Founder, I thought that I had the perfect Familiar, but instead she was only hiding her alcoholic addiction. Just what other vices does she have?!
"We~ll Zero, does this mean you are a drunkard as well, hmmmm?"
"Shut up, Zerbst."
In the background of the growing, verbal fight, Setsuna falls over with swirls in her eyes.
At that mental image of a possible future encounter, I could not help but give out a few snickers. Once I had calmed down, I went ahead and close the skill file on the Left Hand of God.
"Well, let's see about the next skill."
....
Once again, I was speechless for just how radically different these skills were from what I was accustomed to in the other Guild Wars games.
Before I could go on, I heard a sound that showed a cell phone text about an emergency meeting at work.
"Well, I'll get back to this later," I muttered as saved my progress, removed the disc, and left for work.
------
Long story short, I proceeded to look over every stat, achievement, and skill that I had ever gained through completing certain events or avoiding others completely.
However, boredom soon set in and I began to talk aloud after checking my targeting system to make sure that no one was eavesdropping on Setsuna.
"Guess I have the rest of the day to myself since Louise will be stuck in classes for some time and Siesta still thinks that I need rest."
"That also rules out Jean since he will probably be teaching."
After ruling out any people I could speak with, a rather interesting grin appeared on my face.
"That means I can properly explore this world like any proper adventurer."
Immediately, I went about checking my targeting system and making sure that no one was in the vicinity and no one was scrying on my position. Once done, I had my character change clothing into a costume. Specifically the Shining Blade Uniform which showed a hint of cleavage and conveniently provided a hood to cover myself.
At the change, I had Setsuna approach the window of the room. Making sure that there was no one in the courtyard, I prepared a series of Shadow Steps to move rapidly from the Academy to the capital of this country that Siesta had once described during our first conversation.
Fortunately, there were no incidents along the way.
Clothing such as mine would probably appear to be a member of some kind of town watch or a noble man-at-arms with its purple coloring.
Inside the city, I had Setsuna explore the various shops and listen to the various vendors and shopkeepers.
"On sale today, fresh fish straight from the waters! Come and get them!"
"Three for one deals! Buy three dresses at the price of one before they're sold out!"
"You there, young lady! You look like a good judge of clothing! Come inside and see the finest that Joan's has to offer!"
"Weapons sales only today! Daggers, swords, bucklers, rapiers!"
"Fresh pastries from our ovens!"
And on and on with the sales pitches as Setsuna walked through the markets.
Occassionaly, I had Setsuna approach a few vendors to find out what they were selling.
Some were intimidated by Setsuna's clothing because of how fine the threadwork was for fear that their normal sales pitch would offend someone from a high rank or noble status. Others, not so much.
"Foreign noble! I am Germanian and know good warrior when I see one," boomed the heavily accented, burly man as he looked straight into my character's eyes.
"Oh. And what could you possibly offer for me, hmmm?"
"You have look of one who has seen war and could use good potion ingredients and potions."
"And these ingredients and potions would help me? I suppose I will have to see for myself."
"Yes, yes, come inside and know that Ludwig does not cheat good fellow warrior," spoke Ludwig the Germanian merchant before he continued in a hushed voice,"Unless you are bastard Tristain noble."
"I see. I suppose I will look at your wares good sir."
"No sir. Just Ludwig. And your name Fraulein?"
*laughter* "You presume much, Ludwig."
At my accusation, Ludwig only grinned broadly as the word Fraulein usually implied that the woman in question was single.
"By the way, please call me Hangaku Gozen."
"Hmmmm...." said Ludwig as he rubbed his chin with his eyes closed in thought. After some unseen signal, Ludwig opened his eyes and grinned broadly, "I like it. Good warrior name for good warrior."
Once again I laughed as I responded, "You have no idea, Ludwig."
Some of the potions ingredients could have been straight out of a fantasy novel as they were newt's eyes, rabbits' feet, and many others.
Others were more practical, like the potions themselves. Minor healing, heat tolerance potions, hangover draughts, poison remedies, and etc.
"Well Ludwig, I do not exactly have a use for many of these items just yet. However, I would like a few of those general healing potions."
"Good, good. And how many, Fraulein?"
"Make it twenty, Ludwig."
"Twenty it is. And your total comes to five gold. Normally, I charge ten, but you not bastard Tristain. So you get good deal."
"Thank you Ludwig."
"Your welcome."
That message gave me an idea. After all, it had said foreigners, not foreigner. Stupidity or rashness, I wanted some action to get my character to level up quickly and I had a feeling that this would help some of the plans I had been thinking about earlier.
Namely, the kind of plans that involved establishing an economic foothold for my own purposes.
"Ludwig, would you happen to know other foreigners who are around the area?"
"Why yes, Fraulein. I know others just like us. You seek to find companionship?" Ludwig said suggestively while he waggled his eyebrows.
*snort*"Hardly, Ludwig. Just want to see if there are any people who have similar attitudes about Tristain nobles and such. Especially those who are not exactly happy with the current situation."
"Hmmmmm....will cost much money to contact these people you have in mind."
"How much, Ludwig?"
"Afraid Fraulein does not have enough."
"I thought you were going to say that." At his words, several hundred gold coins appeared after I removed the gold from the inventory and had them appear before Ludwig. At the amount of gold on the counter, the wood began to creek slightly at the sheer weight, while Ludwig's eyes nearly bulged from their sockets at the sheer number of coins.
"I trust that this will be enough to contact these 'unhappy' people?"
....
"Ludwig?"
....
"Ludwig?"
"....yes. That will be more than enough," Ludwig said.
"Good Ludwig. When can I expect results?"
"Come back tomorrow. Wear same clothing so can tell you are you, Fraulein. Agreed?"
"Agreed."
What was already implied was the need for silence. Then again, Ludwig did think that I was a foreigner like him and thought that I might have had my share of troubles with the locals.
On the agreement, I had my character leave the shop and explore the rest of the capital.
The rest of the day passed without much fanfare as I thought about what I was getting involved in.
When the sun was in midday position, I had Setsuna return to the academy using a zig-zag route and re-entered the open window of Louise' room.
Once there, I saved my progress and left the game to grab some lunch.
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Sorry for the delay. Had to deal with real life issues. Anyway, hope that this is enough of an apology as I will be gone for some time to visit family halfway across the globe.
Comments, Constructive Criticisms, Suggestions.
ZnT/Guild Wars Crossover with PC-Controlled Assassin.
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'Well now, those are rather interesting. Guess I'll just have to find some time alone that I can practice those skills. Can't make heads or tales on that Montmorency Route'.
For awhile, I was rather content to walk with Louise in silence. For her, it may have been comfortable and satisfying to have enjoyed what happened earlier.
'After all, the actions of the Familiar reflect the Master and if I am responsible for dealing with that damn rat, then, by association, I guess she gets the credit'.
And so we were walking towards Louise' first class, when I had a few questions for the girl as I had begun forming some plans in my head that would not go well if she were to need my 'protection' as it was one of the duties of the Familiar.
"Master, does Mr. Gramont share a class with you?"
"Yes, why do you ask?"
"Well, I am afraid that Mr. Gramont will try to hurt you after he finds out that I was responsible for letting Montmorency loose on him. Will you be safe?"
*chuckles*"I suppose that might be true, but fear not as I am made of sterner stuff."
"If you are certain master, I -," I would have continued my conversation when suddenly a message appeared on screen:
"Familiar. Familiar. What is wrong with you Familiar," Louise asked as she looked worriedly at my character.To Sets-chan of Clan DMC:
Where've you been????
Haven't seen you in ages. Just had major LEEROY JENKINS FUBAR!}p
Should've been there!
Don't be a stranger now.
Mangochild of Clan NutBusters
"I am sorry Master, but it appears staying up all night has taken its toll on my body and I am now feeling its effects," I blatantly lied while text commanding Setsuna to give a sheepish gesture. However, I knew that Setsuna never needed to sleep and I could always conveniently save my progress before continuing anyway.
At my response, Louise gave me one of those looks after having rolled her eyes and muttering something about 'stupid Familiar'.
"While I commend you on your dedication, I believe that I can survive going to class for the day. Right now, I want you to rest. You do remember where the room is correct?"
"Yes, Master. Now please, do not be late on my account," while leaving out what I was saying yes to as she watched my character leave in the direction of her room.
------
After having asked the passing maids, I discovered that Siesta was in the kitchen.
At the entrance, if I could only smell the various foods cooking, I might have been in heaven. As it were, I merely took in the view appreciatively as the various cooking staff members worked around their stations smoothly like a well-oiled machine.
"Now, where is that maid," I said, not realizing that a rather muscular man overheard me and had somehow managed to sneak close enough without alerting my targeting system.
"What would a noble want here?" questioned the muscular chef who was gazing at Setsuna with a stern gaze.
"Wha-, who are you?" I asked as I had been genuinely surprised that someone could sneak up on me, considering my class build.
"I asked you a question if you did not hear me the first time. Who. Are. You?"
"Setsuna!" cried a familar voice. "Marteau, please do not scare the one who protected me." At those words, the one named Marteau deflated slightly and went back to whatever he was doing, while he grumbled about this or that.
"Please do not mind Marteau. He only means well, especially when the nobles start acting up around the staff," Siesta said as she took my character's left hand and led her to one of the corner stations where there were two available stools.
"Setsuna," whispered Siesta as soon as we were seated. "Are you really a noble?"
"No, Siesta. I have never been a noble. I may have defended nobles in the past as part of my job that we spoke of last night. Besides, what brought up this question?" I asked as I did not remember when anyone coul- oh, now that I thought about it, I had been rather reckless in my use of the Shadow Steps to chase down that rat.
While I was busy with my thoughts, Siesta furrowed her eyebrows as though she were trying to connect two plus two but only got forty-two.
"Setsuna," whispered Siesta. "Marlene claimed that she saw someone wearing your clothing using some kind of strange magic to move from one location to another. But that could not be true because she also claimed that there were ink stains on your chest, when there is clearly nothing there. Besides, I can't think of any nobles willing to clean the clothing of a commoner with magic, right?"
"You are correct Siesta. You were there. You know what I am wearing right now, correct?"
"Yes, so it doesn't make sense."
At that, I merely smiled, "Siesta don't worry your pretty little head. Anyway, I just came by to check up on you."
"On me?"
"Yes, I mean we are friends, right?"
"Friends?" asked Siesta who then warmly smiled. "Yes, I like the sound of that. So, yes we're friends. And to answer your question. I am alright. Just a little nervous is all. But nothing that a good meal and an even better nights rest can't heal."
"Good to hear, Siesta. Well, I ho-
"Damn it!"To Sets-chan of Clan DMC:
HHHEEEEEELLLLLLLOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
Please respond.
We need your help! We need our dedicated specialist now! We are getting shafted!
Mangochild of Clan NutBusters
"Setsuna? Are you alright?" Siesta stood up to provide assistance when my character suddenly froze up.
"Nothing. I just need some rest since I haven't had any sleep since cleaning the laundry," I lied as I immediately minimized the message and put up the blocker before I received anymore that interrupted my gaming experience.
*gasp*"Oh, you poor dear. You should go to bed then. Enough worrying about me. Just go and take care of yourself. I swear, you nearly me scared me there like that one time my brother froze up and start shaking like he had been possessed," Siesta said while she stood with her hands on her hips.
"Yes mother," I teased back at Siesta who only responded by sticking her tongue out at my character.
And so, I headed for the dormitories.
-------
Once I arrived outside the correct room, I opened the door, entered, and closed it behind me. Immediately, I proceeded to use my targeting system to see if there were any people, familiars, or remote viewing devices within.
At first, I remembered that I had received two messages not too long ago from some of my friends, acquaintances, and allies.
"Let's see if I can get those idiots to back off for now," I chuckled as I removed the message blocker and saw that I had now a total of 41 messages from various sources.
I pressed 'send message' after having written a blanket response, but only received the error message of 'Voidhaxx Pwns You'. I pressed 'send message' again and received the same result.
And again.
And again.
So, I decided to log off Void Ascension and log into Prophecies. Once there, I was able to communicate freely with my fellow players. Long story short, I assured them that I was alright and that I was pre-occupied with another game.
For the most part, they were accepting of the fact that I was busy because I was known to go offline for weeks at a time due to work, family, and other problems whenever real life intruded in my game time.
I debated telling them about Void Ascension, however, I was still not sure if I had been the target of some kind of virus, trojan, or other malicious program and I did not want to inadvertently expose any of them. I had already run my entire system through several reboots, virus scans, and even a few reinstalls of my OS and everything else. Despite these measures, Void Ascension remained whenever I installed Guild Wars.
Call me foolish or idiotic, but one thing I hated was not understanding what I was dealing with. I tended to refuse any outside help until I could figure out what I had done wrong and what I could have done better.
So, I logged back into the new game I had and proceeded to figure out the details of all of these bonus skills I had been granted since Setsuna had been kissed by Louise.
"Well, let's see. Time to find out about all those skills I gained over the past few playthroughs."
It was then that I pulled up the skills screen together with the quests list beside it.
"Time to look at those skills. Let's see which one I want to view in greater detail. Hmmmm....might as well go for the first skill Setsuna gained when Louise kissed her."
....
....
"Well."
"Shit. Talk about overpowered. I just got hit with the mother of all steroids into my build and it's only at level one," I said as I only stared in shock at what had been granted to my character.
"And only minor increased range for the Shadow Steps. I was jumping at least a dozen times further than I normally do!"
Okay, calming breaths, calming breaths.
After all, it was not every day I just learned that my Assassin effectively became a sneaky tank.
"I will just have to see what Level 2 is like later on."
"Man, talk about boosts. And 30 drinks?! That is going to be a big pain in the butt considering just how hard I've been roleplaying as a semi-serious Familiar who is gaining the reputation as upstanding. Not to mention just how much it costs to buy one of those drinks when it's not a seasonal holiday in Guild Wars."
I smiled wryly at the thought of what the NPC's would think at seeing a very tipsy Setsuna.
"You shee itsh forsh regen....regene....whasheverish to get more badashy *hic* againsh!"
*facepalm* "Oh Founder, I thought that I had the perfect Familiar, but instead she was only hiding her alcoholic addiction. Just what other vices does she have?!
"We~ll Zero, does this mean you are a drunkard as well, hmmmm?"
"Shut up, Zerbst."
In the background of the growing, verbal fight, Setsuna falls over with swirls in her eyes.
At that mental image of a possible future encounter, I could not help but give out a few snickers. Once I had calmed down, I went ahead and close the skill file on the Left Hand of God.
"Well, let's see about the next skill."
....
....
Once again, I was speechless for just how radically different these skills were from what I was accustomed to in the other Guild Wars games.
Before I could go on, I heard a sound that showed a cell phone text about an emergency meeting at work.
"Well, I'll get back to this later," I muttered as saved my progress, removed the disc, and left for work.
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"So that is what Level 2 looks like. Not as drastic a change as gaining Level 1 from the start. I suppose that I can only hope for a better increase somewhere down the line. Oh well," I spoke to myself in Louise' room as I had opened up my character stats page once I logged back into the game.
Long story short, I proceeded to look over every stat, achievement, and skill that I had ever gained through completing certain events or avoiding others completely.
However, boredom soon set in and I began to talk aloud after checking my targeting system to make sure that no one was eavesdropping on Setsuna.
"Guess I have the rest of the day to myself since Louise will be stuck in classes for some time and Siesta still thinks that I need rest."
"That also rules out Jean since he will probably be teaching."
After ruling out any people I could speak with, a rather interesting grin appeared on my face.
"That means I can properly explore this world like any proper adventurer."
Immediately, I went about checking my targeting system and making sure that no one was in the vicinity and no one was scrying on my position. Once done, I had my character change clothing into a costume. Specifically the Shining Blade Uniform which showed a hint of cleavage and conveniently provided a hood to cover myself.
At the change, I had Setsuna approach the window of the room. Making sure that there was no one in the courtyard, I prepared a series of Shadow Steps to move rapidly from the Academy to the capital of this country that Siesta had once described during our first conversation.
Fortunately, there were no incidents along the way.
Clothing such as mine would probably appear to be a member of some kind of town watch or a noble man-at-arms with its purple coloring.
Inside the city, I had Setsuna explore the various shops and listen to the various vendors and shopkeepers.
"On sale today, fresh fish straight from the waters! Come and get them!"
"Three for one deals! Buy three dresses at the price of one before they're sold out!"
"You there, young lady! You look like a good judge of clothing! Come inside and see the finest that Joan's has to offer!"
"Weapons sales only today! Daggers, swords, bucklers, rapiers!"
"Fresh pastries from our ovens!"
And on and on with the sales pitches as Setsuna walked through the markets.
Occassionaly, I had Setsuna approach a few vendors to find out what they were selling.
Some were intimidated by Setsuna's clothing because of how fine the threadwork was for fear that their normal sales pitch would offend someone from a high rank or noble status. Others, not so much.
"Foreign noble! I am Germanian and know good warrior when I see one," boomed the heavily accented, burly man as he looked straight into my character's eyes.
"Oh. And what could you possibly offer for me, hmmm?"
"You have look of one who has seen war and could use good potion ingredients and potions."
"And these ingredients and potions would help me? I suppose I will have to see for myself."
"Yes, yes, come inside and know that Ludwig does not cheat good fellow warrior," spoke Ludwig the Germanian merchant before he continued in a hushed voice,"Unless you are bastard Tristain noble."
"I see. I suppose I will look at your wares good sir."
"No sir. Just Ludwig. And your name Fraulein?"
*laughter* "You presume much, Ludwig."
At my accusation, Ludwig only grinned broadly as the word Fraulein usually implied that the woman in question was single.
"By the way, please call me Hangaku Gozen."
"Hmmmm...." said Ludwig as he rubbed his chin with his eyes closed in thought. After some unseen signal, Ludwig opened his eyes and grinned broadly, "I like it. Good warrior name for good warrior."
Once again I laughed as I responded, "You have no idea, Ludwig."
Some of the potions ingredients could have been straight out of a fantasy novel as they were newt's eyes, rabbits' feet, and many others.
Others were more practical, like the potions themselves. Minor healing, heat tolerance potions, hangover draughts, poison remedies, and etc.
"Well Ludwig, I do not exactly have a use for many of these items just yet. However, I would like a few of those general healing potions."
"Good, good. And how many, Fraulein?"
"Make it twenty, Ludwig."
"Twenty it is. And your total comes to five gold. Normally, I charge ten, but you not bastard Tristain. So you get good deal."
"Thank you Ludwig."
"Your welcome."
When Ludwig turned around to adjust his stock of potions on his shelves, I immediately put away the purchases into my inventory as I read the achievement message. Once he turned around, he raised an eyebrow at how quickly the items had disappeared, but said nothing.
That message gave me an idea. After all, it had said foreigners, not foreigner. Stupidity or rashness, I wanted some action to get my character to level up quickly and I had a feeling that this would help some of the plans I had been thinking about earlier.
Namely, the kind of plans that involved establishing an economic foothold for my own purposes.
"Ludwig, would you happen to know other foreigners who are around the area?"
"Why yes, Fraulein. I know others just like us. You seek to find companionship?" Ludwig said suggestively while he waggled his eyebrows.
*snort*"Hardly, Ludwig. Just want to see if there are any people who have similar attitudes about Tristain nobles and such. Especially those who are not exactly happy with the current situation."
"Hmmmmm....will cost much money to contact these people you have in mind."
"How much, Ludwig?"
"Afraid Fraulein does not have enough."
"I thought you were going to say that." At his words, several hundred gold coins appeared after I removed the gold from the inventory and had them appear before Ludwig. At the amount of gold on the counter, the wood began to creek slightly at the sheer weight, while Ludwig's eyes nearly bulged from their sockets at the sheer number of coins.
"I trust that this will be enough to contact these 'unhappy' people?"
....
"Ludwig?"
....
"Ludwig?"
"....yes. That will be more than enough," Ludwig said.
"Good Ludwig. When can I expect results?"
"Come back tomorrow. Wear same clothing so can tell you are you, Fraulein. Agreed?"
"Agreed."
What was already implied was the need for silence. Then again, Ludwig did think that I was a foreigner like him and thought that I might have had my share of troubles with the locals.
On the agreement, I had my character leave the shop and explore the rest of the capital.
The rest of the day passed without much fanfare as I thought about what I was getting involved in.
When the sun was in midday position, I had Setsuna return to the academy using a zig-zag route and re-entered the open window of Louise' room.
Once there, I saved my progress and left the game to grab some lunch.
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Sorry for the delay. Had to deal with real life issues. Anyway, hope that this is enough of an apology as I will be gone for some time to visit family halfway across the globe.
Comments, Constructive Criticisms, Suggestions.
ZnT/Guild Wars Crossover with PC-Controlled Assassin.
Chapter Three: Sowing the Seeds
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After having had some rather tasty sandwiches, I decided that one more run in the game would be nice before going to bed.
Once the game loaded, I found Setsuna inside the room of her master, Louise Valliere and nothing to do but wait.
Unfortunately, I wanted to see if there was anything else I could do before Louise returned from her classes.
Checking the targeting system and the active quests list, I found that I would not have enough time to pursue anymore 'drama' that was the Disgruntled Foreigners Quest until tomorrow when, hopefully, Ludwig would come through and assemble whatever sorts of people he could bring.
If my hunch was correct, then this might be the perfect opportunity to establish a vital link into the darker and seedier side of Tristain.
"After all, it never hurts to have an ear or two to the ground just in case I could recruit some like-minded individuals as information brokers and other less than legal activities," I chuckled to myself as I had Setsuna exit the room and wander the halls and avoid any passing students, staff, or faculty.
Once I had Setsuna reach the gardens just outside the castle, I discovered a familiar name listed on my targeting identifier as one 'Montomorency'.
"Hmmmm....why would she not be in classes, after all that wou- oh....now I remember. The incident at Alviss Hall not too long ago. I suppose I could visit her and see what is going on in the latest episode of 'As Halkeginia Turns' and see if I can do something that wont be utterly boring," I muttered to myself as I had Setsuna approach the corner and overheard some sniffing and quiet crying.
"Oh Guiche. Why? Why can you not see that I have always loved you? Am I not good enough*sniff*for you that you must pursue others behind my back? *blows nose*Will I always be doomed to fall for the unfaithful? What have I deserved to be treated like this...." and on and on Montmorency went about infedility and other such things that the adolescent heart tended to do with such large amounts of hormones, which in turn super-charged such feelings to near-suicidal tendencies at times.
"Enough of this," I whispered as I had Setsuna step out in full view of Montmorency who had been sitting on a bench with a piece of cloth in her hands, "if I do not intervene now, I might not ever find out what the Spirit of the Lake Quest and the Montmorency Route are all about."
"Oh Guiche, why wou-"
"Need a shoulder to lean on, Montmorency," I asked with a politely neutral face as she looked up with tear-stained, red-lined eyes. At first her face had shock, then anger, and finally settled in politeness.
"Familar of Ze- I mean, yo- I mean....actually, I do not know your name?"
At her question, I text-commanded Setsuna to bow, while I spoke, "My apologies for not properly introducing myself earlier, but there did not appear to be any good situation that would present itself. My name is Setsuna."
At my bow, Montmorency stood up and curtseyed in response that seemed more on auto-pilot than anything else.
"Well met, Setsuna. No apology is needed from one who has done much good for the maidens of the Academy. I am Montmorency Margarita la Fere de Montmorency and I must apologize for not having properly introduced myself earlier."
"It would appear that we are beginning to argue over who should apologize to the other," I spoke with a wry smile on my face as Setsuna stood up from her bow and I continued, "I propose that we are both forgiven of our offenses before we start an argument over semantics that we would both regret."
At my proposal, Montmorency blinked a few times before she gently laughed with her hand covering her mouth.
"A good idea, Setsuna, and one that I wholeheartedly agree upon."
"Good. Now let us deal with this small matter of your crying."
And so we talked for a long time, before I decided that I needed to log off for sleep.
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Comments, Constructive Criticisms, and Suggestions are welcome.
A bit in a rush as I have sporadic internet connection at the moment and my vacation has turned into an impromptu funeral for a loved one at the moment, which has killed a bit of my inspiration for writing right now.
ZnT/Guild Wars Crossover with PC-Controlled Assassin.
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After having had some rather tasty sandwiches, I decided that one more run in the game would be nice before going to bed.
Once the game loaded, I found Setsuna inside the room of her master, Louise Valliere and nothing to do but wait.
Unfortunately, I wanted to see if there was anything else I could do before Louise returned from her classes.
Checking the targeting system and the active quests list, I found that I would not have enough time to pursue anymore 'drama' that was the Disgruntled Foreigners Quest until tomorrow when, hopefully, Ludwig would come through and assemble whatever sorts of people he could bring.
If my hunch was correct, then this might be the perfect opportunity to establish a vital link into the darker and seedier side of Tristain.
"After all, it never hurts to have an ear or two to the ground just in case I could recruit some like-minded individuals as information brokers and other less than legal activities," I chuckled to myself as I had Setsuna exit the room and wander the halls and avoid any passing students, staff, or faculty.
Once I had Setsuna reach the gardens just outside the castle, I discovered a familiar name listed on my targeting identifier as one 'Montomorency'.
"Hmmmm....why would she not be in classes, after all that wou- oh....now I remember. The incident at Alviss Hall not too long ago. I suppose I could visit her and see what is going on in the latest episode of 'As Halkeginia Turns' and see if I can do something that wont be utterly boring," I muttered to myself as I had Setsuna approach the corner and overheard some sniffing and quiet crying.
"Oh Guiche. Why? Why can you not see that I have always loved you? Am I not good enough*sniff*for you that you must pursue others behind my back? *blows nose*Will I always be doomed to fall for the unfaithful? What have I deserved to be treated like this...." and on and on Montmorency went about infedility and other such things that the adolescent heart tended to do with such large amounts of hormones, which in turn super-charged such feelings to near-suicidal tendencies at times.
"Enough of this," I whispered as I had Setsuna step out in full view of Montmorency who had been sitting on a bench with a piece of cloth in her hands, "if I do not intervene now, I might not ever find out what the Spirit of the Lake Quest and the Montmorency Route are all about."
"Oh Guiche, why wou-"
"Need a shoulder to lean on, Montmorency," I asked with a politely neutral face as she looked up with tear-stained, red-lined eyes. At first her face had shock, then anger, and finally settled in politeness.
"Familar of Ze- I mean, yo- I mean....actually, I do not know your name?"
At her question, I text-commanded Setsuna to bow, while I spoke, "My apologies for not properly introducing myself earlier, but there did not appear to be any good situation that would present itself. My name is Setsuna."
At my bow, Montmorency stood up and curtseyed in response that seemed more on auto-pilot than anything else.
"Well met, Setsuna. No apology is needed from one who has done much good for the maidens of the Academy. I am Montmorency Margarita la Fere de Montmorency and I must apologize for not having properly introduced myself earlier."
"It would appear that we are beginning to argue over who should apologize to the other," I spoke with a wry smile on my face as Setsuna stood up from her bow and I continued, "I propose that we are both forgiven of our offenses before we start an argument over semantics that we would both regret."
At my proposal, Montmorency blinked a few times before she gently laughed with her hand covering her mouth.
"A good idea, Setsuna, and one that I wholeheartedly agree upon."
"Good. Now let us deal with this small matter of your crying."
And so we talked for a long time, before I decided that I needed to log off for sleep.
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Comments, Constructive Criticisms, and Suggestions are welcome.
A bit in a rush as I have sporadic internet connection at the moment and my vacation has turned into an impromptu funeral for a loved one at the moment, which has killed a bit of my inspiration for writing right now.
ZnT/Guild Wars Crossover with PC-Controlled Assassin.
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Well, it's good writing that you take time to let the plot flow, but it's a little boring to see Setsuna plotting and preparing and keeping up the perfect act without anyone starting to get suspicious in a way that would not allow her to bullshit herself out or anything going wrong. Throw some obstacles in her path that would force her to reveal some of her abilities and make cracks appear on her mask for Louise and others!
Also don't make the noble girls too grateful to Setsuna for catching the mouse. Remember how majority of the ZnT nobles are, most probably think that they have shown her enough favor by simply congratulating her on a good job done, nobles take commoners doing them good service for granted. Unless she starts showing some magical abilities, this "Honorary Noble Status" should never advance post Level 1 and without some magic shown, even that level 1 seems to much right now for simple temporary gratitude.
I was also surprised that you didn't have her buy Derflinger. She doesn't need it just yet, but it would be amusing to have a talking "NPC" sword and to see how are its stats shown in the inventory equip screen.
And why is dear Ludwig living in Tristain in the first place, if he hates it so much?
Also don't make the noble girls too grateful to Setsuna for catching the mouse. Remember how majority of the ZnT nobles are, most probably think that they have shown her enough favor by simply congratulating her on a good job done, nobles take commoners doing them good service for granted. Unless she starts showing some magical abilities, this "Honorary Noble Status" should never advance post Level 1 and without some magic shown, even that level 1 seems to much right now for simple temporary gratitude.
I was also surprised that you didn't have her buy Derflinger. She doesn't need it just yet, but it would be amusing to have a talking "NPC" sword and to see how are its stats shown in the inventory equip screen.
And why is dear Ludwig living in Tristain in the first place, if he hates it so much?
True.Khaos said:
I have made only minor adjustments to what I have posted in the ZnT crossover thread.
But from here one out, they will be new ones as soon as I can get past this writer's block I have right now.
I originally made them up at the beginning, but now, I have made an entire list that Setsuna may or may not achieve.EmptyHollow said:
Thank you for the compliments and the commenting.
As soon as I can get past the introductory phase, I can get to more of the clandestine missions I have in mind, once I get past my writer's block.Iron Roby said:Well, it's good writing that you take time to let the plot flow, but it's a little boring to see Setsuna plotting and preparing and keeping up the perfect act without anyone starting to get suspicious in a way that would not allow her to bullshit herself out or anything going wrong. Throw some obstacles in her path that would force her to reveal some of her abilities and make cracks appear on her mask for Louise and others!
Also don't make the noble girls too grateful to Setsuna for catching the mouse. Remember how majority of the ZnT nobles are, most probably think that they have shown her enough favor by simply congratulating her on a good job done, nobles take commoners doing them good service for granted. Unless she starts showing some magical abilities, this "Honorary Noble Status" should never advance post Level 1 and without some magic shown, even that level 1 seems to much right now for simple temporary gratitude.
I was also surprised that you didn't have her buy Derflinger. She doesn't need it just yet, but it would be amusing to have a talking "NPC" sword and to see how are its stats shown in the inventory equip screen.
And why is dear Ludwig living in Tristain in the first place, if he hates it so much?
Honorary Noble Status is something the player will soon learn just means that Setsuna has been upgraded from 'seen but not heard' to 'cannon fodder'.
Derflinger will come in due time.
As for Ludwig, you'll just have to wait.
Thank you for the comprehensive review and constructive criticisms. I will keep them in mind.
I have been trying to improve my writing style and I will continue to try to improve myself.LordsFire said:
Thank you for reading and I hope to continue to entertain as soon as I can get past my writer's block.
Chapter Three, Part Two: Sowing the Seeds
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"And please do not forget that we cannot be seen together in public."
"Why would that be a problem?"
"You are clearly both a foreigner and a commoner and may not be accustomed to our ways, but please know that while it is not against any laws, it is looked down upon by many of my peers if I should associate with you in open places."
"I see."
"Please do not take this as an insult as I have come to value your opinion after you comforted me with your stern, but necessary words."
"I do not agree with how your 'peers' would treat you if you were caught with me, but I do understand and I will try my best not to get you in trouble."
*sigh* "Thank you for understanding, Setsuna. I must take my leave now before my friends begin to look for me."
"Your welcome, Montmorency. If you ever need a someone to talk to, I'm all ears."
"Once again, thank you."
These were the words that ended my previous conversation with the one known as Montmorency as I re-entered the world of Void Ascension.
"Nobles and their silly notions. I'm just glad that I don't live in a country like that."
"Whatever. Time to find out what happened to my pink-haired master."
So, I had my character back inside the room she shared with her master and waited for a few minutes before I heard the sound of the door opening.
What greeted Setsuna was not the proud, pink-haired noble wearing a clean uniform. Rather, what greeted my character was a disheveled, little girl with a downtrodden look on her face.
'If I were one of those moe lovers, I would probably squeal right about now' I thought to myself.
"Master, what happened to you?"
*mumble, mumble*
"Master, I cannot hear you."
*mumble*explosion*mumble*
"Master!"
"eeeeee!" she screamed as she jumped up in fright while looking about as though she had not been paying close attention to her surroundings.
*laughter* "Oh master, you should not be so focused on your thoughts that you are not aware of what is around you."
"F-Familiar! Do not laugh at your Master or else I will punish you!"
"Master, you should see the look on your face. It was absolutely priceless. Why, if I had a camera, I would have taken a picture," I laughed as I could help comparing her face to that of a five-year old throwing a temper tantrum but only managed to look adorable in the process.
"Camera? Picture? What is this nonsense you speak of? And cease this laughter at once or else I will have to whip some sense into you!"
I continued to give out fake laughter in the hopes that Louise would not notice any noticeable change in Setsuna's demeanor. Then again, with how angry she looked, she was probably not focusing on the difference between real or fake laughter.
'How am I going to explain this one now? I mean I should be smarter than to go around dropping those kind of words in a less advanced world'.
At least, I would like to think that that was my thought process. In actuality, my only thoughts in the moment were:
'Oh shit, oh shit, oh shit'.
Then, I had a flash of brilliance or a flash of absolute desperation and stupidity as I remembered her word about whips.
"Oh whips master? Then I must tell you something about me that you must know!"
"Wha- do not change the subject before I really bring out the whi-"
I knew it would be foolish, but I began singing the rather amusing song from Tom Lehrer while I text commanded my character to clap:
"I ache for the touch of your lips dear
But much more for the touch of your whips dear
You can raise welps, like nobody else
As we dance to the masochism tango!"
And on I went until I had finished the song and text commanded Setsuna to stop clapping.
At the end, I only saw Louise frozen in shock with her eyes wide open with the occasional 'murgle' sound coming from her open mouth.
"Heh. Works like a charm. See you later, Mast~er!"
When the door closed, I heard a muffled thump as I imagined Louise had fallen into her bed. However, I had forgotten to check for anyone outside the room as I ran into none other than the Dairy Cow and the Midget Dragon Rider who were both looking at Setsuna with looks of shock and in the Dairy Cow's case, what appeared to be a bit of arousal.
"...."
"...."
"...."
"Shocking."
"Agreed midget."
"Not midget."
"Name?"
"Tabitha," came the whispered reply.
"And the Dai- I mean your red-haired friend?" At my near miss, Tabitha's eyes narrowed ever so slightly, but her whispered tone did not change in volume.
"Kirche."
"Nice to meet you Tabitha and you as well Kirche. I must be off now."
"...."
And so I left to meet up with Professor Colbert now that it appeared that classes were over, Louise was still in shock, the red and blue duo were standing in front of the door, and I had a potential information source in the form of one of the faculty.
"I swear, I thought I heard Louise scream something about not being a deviant or some such. Oh well."
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Comments, Constructive Criticisms, and Suggestions are welcome to help me improve my writing.
I think I have my inspiration back. Just hope I can continue before I run dry of ideas again.
ZnT/Guild Wars Crossover with PC-Controlled Assassin.
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"And please do not forget that we cannot be seen together in public."
"Why would that be a problem?"
"You are clearly both a foreigner and a commoner and may not be accustomed to our ways, but please know that while it is not against any laws, it is looked down upon by many of my peers if I should associate with you in open places."
"I see."
"Please do not take this as an insult as I have come to value your opinion after you comforted me with your stern, but necessary words."
"I do not agree with how your 'peers' would treat you if you were caught with me, but I do understand and I will try my best not to get you in trouble."
*sigh* "Thank you for understanding, Setsuna. I must take my leave now before my friends begin to look for me."
"Your welcome, Montmorency. If you ever need a someone to talk to, I'm all ears."
"Once again, thank you."
These were the words that ended my previous conversation with the one known as Montmorency as I re-entered the world of Void Ascension.
"Nobles and their silly notions. I'm just glad that I don't live in a country like that."
"Whatever. Time to find out what happened to my pink-haired master."
So, I had my character back inside the room she shared with her master and waited for a few minutes before I heard the sound of the door opening.
What greeted Setsuna was not the proud, pink-haired noble wearing a clean uniform. Rather, what greeted my character was a disheveled, little girl with a downtrodden look on her face.
'If I were one of those moe lovers, I would probably squeal right about now' I thought to myself.
"Master, what happened to you?"
*mumble, mumble*
"Master, I cannot hear you."
*mumble*explosion*mumble*
"Master!"
"eeeeee!" she screamed as she jumped up in fright while looking about as though she had not been paying close attention to her surroundings.
*laughter* "Oh master, you should not be so focused on your thoughts that you are not aware of what is around you."
"F-Familiar! Do not laugh at your Master or else I will punish you!"
"Master, you should see the look on your face. It was absolutely priceless. Why, if I had a camera, I would have taken a picture," I laughed as I could help comparing her face to that of a five-year old throwing a temper tantrum but only managed to look adorable in the process.
"Camera? Picture? What is this nonsense you speak of? And cease this laughter at once or else I will have to whip some sense into you!"
I continued to give out fake laughter in the hopes that Louise would not notice any noticeable change in Setsuna's demeanor. Then again, with how angry she looked, she was probably not focusing on the difference between real or fake laughter.
'How am I going to explain this one now? I mean I should be smarter than to go around dropping those kind of words in a less advanced world'.
At least, I would like to think that that was my thought process. In actuality, my only thoughts in the moment were:
'Oh shit, oh shit, oh shit'.
Then, I had a flash of brilliance or a flash of absolute desperation and stupidity as I remembered her word about whips.
"Oh whips master? Then I must tell you something about me that you must know!"
"Wha- do not change the subject before I really bring out the whi-"
I knew it would be foolish, but I began singing the rather amusing song from Tom Lehrer while I text commanded my character to clap:
"I ache for the touch of your lips dear
But much more for the touch of your whips dear
You can raise welps, like nobody else
As we dance to the masochism tango!"
And on I went until I had finished the song and text commanded Setsuna to stop clapping.
At the end, I only saw Louise frozen in shock with her eyes wide open with the occasional 'murgle' sound coming from her open mouth.
"Heh. Works like a charm. See you later, Mast~er!"
When the door closed, I heard a muffled thump as I imagined Louise had fallen into her bed. However, I had forgotten to check for anyone outside the room as I ran into none other than the Dairy Cow and the Midget Dragon Rider who were both looking at Setsuna with looks of shock and in the Dairy Cow's case, what appeared to be a bit of arousal.
"...."
"...."
"...."
"Shocking."
"Agreed midget."
"Not midget."
"Name?"
"Tabitha," came the whispered reply.
"And the Dai- I mean your red-haired friend?" At my near miss, Tabitha's eyes narrowed ever so slightly, but her whispered tone did not change in volume.
"Kirche."
"Nice to meet you Tabitha and you as well Kirche. I must be off now."
"...."
And so I left to meet up with Professor Colbert now that it appeared that classes were over, Louise was still in shock, the red and blue duo were standing in front of the door, and I had a potential information source in the form of one of the faculty.
"I swear, I thought I heard Louise scream something about not being a deviant or some such. Oh well."
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Comments, Constructive Criticisms, and Suggestions are welcome to help me improve my writing.
I think I have my inspiration back. Just hope I can continue before I run dry of ideas again.
ZnT/Guild Wars Crossover with PC-Controlled Assassin.
Hmm, whips. [irony] I don't see anyway this could turn into a rumor. [/irony];7
Easy?NecroMechanoid said:Innocent minded girls are so easy.
I almost wish you could show them S&M. Louise would overheat.
Certainly, especially when she is blindsided by my little verbal detour.
Show S&M?
As if I would be so cruel as to further despoil her innocent mind.
Rumor?Feuerklinge said:
Surely you jest.
Would I be so cruel as to do such a thing?
I was tempted to post a youtube link to the video of the full song in question, but I was rather worried that Tom Lehrer and his creativity might not be looked upon kindly by the moderators.
Chapter Three, Part Three: Sowing the Seeds
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As I traveled down the various hallways leading to the faculty, I noticed that many of the female nobles that had once congratulated Setsuna earlier were now ignoring her like the rest of the cleaning staff.
'Guess Montmorency was right about nobles and their attitudes. So much for the books in the library talking about nobles looking out for the welfare of the commoners', I thought to myself as I continued to make my way toward Professor Colbert's office.
One glaring problem, however.
I had forgotten to ask him where his office was and I did not have the patience to search the castle for the next few hours.
Just as I reached a relatively isolated hallway, I immediately noticed on my targetting system, a figure shimmer out of invisibility.
"Pardom me, Familiar of Louise. Might I have a moment of your time?"
As I turned Setsuna around, I was confronted by the image of an old man that could have come straight out of a generic fantasy novel. However, I noted that his hair and beard looked a little frazzled, semi-visible dark rings around his eyes, and a less than pleased look on his face.
"I suppose that was not a question and more of an order, I take it?"
"You suppose correctly."
I text commanded Setsuna to take on a confused look and responded with, "I don't suppose that I could inform my Master before I travel with an old man who might do or request something....questionable?"
While he did not shout or attempt any kind of physical retribution for my insinuation, I noticed that his left eyebrow twitched in what I could only assume as irritation. Or was that anger?
'Maybe I can delay him and possibly figure out what he wants from me. I just hope he did not somehow track me to Ludwig in the capital. That, would be bad. Very bad'.
As I was thinking, the old man in front of me inhaled deeply, held his breath for about ten seconds, and then exhaled quietly. He turned to face Setsuna with a somewhat stern and imposing visage that would have worked had I actually been there.
Unfortunately for him, I was not only unimpressed, I had dealt with many rude and overbearing customers in the past, and I had been thorougly de-sensitized from the likes of SB and its many interesting posters.
"Now why would you ever think that I would do something....questionable, as you say?"
And so I began to speak in my driest and most unamused voice while I text commanded Setsuna to take on a pondering look.
"You are a wrinkled old man, not dead, so I can safely presume that you have certain desires like any red-blooded male."
*eyebrow twitch*
"Now that is not tru-"
"I heard a voice similar to yours that screamed something about a trap on the night that Professor Colbert landed on my person in a compromising way and a certain rodent trying to make its getaway."
*eyebrow twitches twice*
"Young lady, I do not condo-"
"I also read your lips in the Alviss Dining Hall about missing the glory that was panties and other parts of the female anatomy." In actuality, all verbal dialogue in Guild Wars always has a written component, so I just read the text over his head. But, he did not know that and I had no intention of letting him know either.
*eyebrow twitches thrice*
"You do not know the glory that is panti-"
"Lastly, that rodent that I chased had more endurance, speed, and intelligence than any normal rodent, including it raising its forepaw in a universal sign of victory."
*head twitch*
"...."
"In conclusion, I can only safely assume that the rodent, the Familiar rodent, was linked to a rather perverted Master as the Familiar reflects the Master. And now, the Master wants his Familiar back."
At my conclusion, the old man sighed and looked like a five-year old having been caught with his hand in the cookie jar.
On seeing his defeated posture, I text commanded Setsuna to stop the pondering gesture.
*grumble*
"What was that?"
"....What do you want," he asked with a wince as he realized that he had essentially given me a blank check.
He winced once more when he saw the rather toothy smile appear on my face.
"Well you see. There are a few things I would like to have done."
"I will have you know that anything that harms the students, faculty, or servants will not be acceptable," he said sternly while he tried to regain some of control of the conversation.
'Well, rumors do travel faster than the speed of light and I could use what happened earlier to my advantage. Besides, I can try to test and see if he heard my little song. If he is too focused on the conversation, I may not be able to milk this for all its worth'.
"Harm my good man? I would not harm any of them unless they asked nicely and are into....whips," I said in a teasing manner.
At my proclamation, the old man's eyes glazed over and it almost appeared as though he were about to drool.
'Jackpot'
"And that would be another mark against you my good man for, dare I say it, eavesdropping on the activities between a Master and her Familiar," I dryly pointed out.
That shook him out of his little fantasy somewhat and he attempted to rejoin the verbal spar.
"Harder....I mean that is completely out of line as an accusation and I will-"
"Even if I were to involve the green-haired secretary and myself in some whipping," I teased as I wanted to keep on throwing him off-balance.
Once again, his eyes glazed over, but he recovered quicker this time.
"....I will not allow any whipping of my delicious secretary and you will do wel-"
*overdramatic sigh*
"I guess I will have to inform my Master's parents, the Duke and Duchess Valliere, of your desires on her precious Familiar," I spoke with a put upon manner as I remembered reading about how the Valliere's were a very powerful family.
On my interruption, he paled slightly and once more, took on a defeated posture.
"Fine. Name your terms," he said as he began to sulk once more.
This was going to be a very good day for me.
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Comments, Constructive Criticisms, and Suggestions are all welcome.
Author's Note:
Negotiation time! Let's see in the next installment what I can get away without pissing of the old man.
ZnT/Guild Wars Crossover with PC-Controlled Assassin.
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As I traveled down the various hallways leading to the faculty, I noticed that many of the female nobles that had once congratulated Setsuna earlier were now ignoring her like the rest of the cleaning staff.
'Guess Montmorency was right about nobles and their attitudes. So much for the books in the library talking about nobles looking out for the welfare of the commoners', I thought to myself as I continued to make my way toward Professor Colbert's office.
One glaring problem, however.
I had forgotten to ask him where his office was and I did not have the patience to search the castle for the next few hours.
Just as I reached a relatively isolated hallway, I immediately noticed on my targetting system, a figure shimmer out of invisibility.
"Pardom me, Familiar of Louise. Might I have a moment of your time?"
As I turned Setsuna around, I was confronted by the image of an old man that could have come straight out of a generic fantasy novel. However, I noted that his hair and beard looked a little frazzled, semi-visible dark rings around his eyes, and a less than pleased look on his face.
"I suppose that was not a question and more of an order, I take it?"
"You suppose correctly."
I text commanded Setsuna to take on a confused look and responded with, "I don't suppose that I could inform my Master before I travel with an old man who might do or request something....questionable?"
While he did not shout or attempt any kind of physical retribution for my insinuation, I noticed that his left eyebrow twitched in what I could only assume as irritation. Or was that anger?
'Maybe I can delay him and possibly figure out what he wants from me. I just hope he did not somehow track me to Ludwig in the capital. That, would be bad. Very bad'.
As I was thinking, the old man in front of me inhaled deeply, held his breath for about ten seconds, and then exhaled quietly. He turned to face Setsuna with a somewhat stern and imposing visage that would have worked had I actually been there.
Unfortunately for him, I was not only unimpressed, I had dealt with many rude and overbearing customers in the past, and I had been thorougly de-sensitized from the likes of SB and its many interesting posters.
"Now why would you ever think that I would do something....questionable, as you say?"
And so I began to speak in my driest and most unamused voice while I text commanded Setsuna to take on a pondering look.
"You are a wrinkled old man, not dead, so I can safely presume that you have certain desires like any red-blooded male."
*eyebrow twitch*
"Now that is not tru-"
"I heard a voice similar to yours that screamed something about a trap on the night that Professor Colbert landed on my person in a compromising way and a certain rodent trying to make its getaway."
*eyebrow twitches twice*
"Young lady, I do not condo-"
"I also read your lips in the Alviss Dining Hall about missing the glory that was panties and other parts of the female anatomy." In actuality, all verbal dialogue in Guild Wars always has a written component, so I just read the text over his head. But, he did not know that and I had no intention of letting him know either.
*eyebrow twitches thrice*
"You do not know the glory that is panti-"
"Lastly, that rodent that I chased had more endurance, speed, and intelligence than any normal rodent, including it raising its forepaw in a universal sign of victory."
*head twitch*
"...."
"In conclusion, I can only safely assume that the rodent, the Familiar rodent, was linked to a rather perverted Master as the Familiar reflects the Master. And now, the Master wants his Familiar back."
At my conclusion, the old man sighed and looked like a five-year old having been caught with his hand in the cookie jar.
On seeing his defeated posture, I text commanded Setsuna to stop the pondering gesture.
*grumble*
"What was that?"
"....What do you want," he asked with a wince as he realized that he had essentially given me a blank check.
He winced once more when he saw the rather toothy smile appear on my face.
"Well you see. There are a few things I would like to have done."
"I will have you know that anything that harms the students, faculty, or servants will not be acceptable," he said sternly while he tried to regain some of control of the conversation.
'Well, rumors do travel faster than the speed of light and I could use what happened earlier to my advantage. Besides, I can try to test and see if he heard my little song. If he is too focused on the conversation, I may not be able to milk this for all its worth'.
"Harm my good man? I would not harm any of them unless they asked nicely and are into....whips," I said in a teasing manner.
At my proclamation, the old man's eyes glazed over and it almost appeared as though he were about to drool.
'Jackpot'
"And that would be another mark against you my good man for, dare I say it, eavesdropping on the activities between a Master and her Familiar," I dryly pointed out.
That shook him out of his little fantasy somewhat and he attempted to rejoin the verbal spar.
"Harder....I mean that is completely out of line as an accusation and I will-"
"Even if I were to involve the green-haired secretary and myself in some whipping," I teased as I wanted to keep on throwing him off-balance.
Once again, his eyes glazed over, but he recovered quicker this time.
"....I will not allow any whipping of my delicious secretary and you will do wel-"
*overdramatic sigh*
"I guess I will have to inform my Master's parents, the Duke and Duchess Valliere, of your desires on her precious Familiar," I spoke with a put upon manner as I remembered reading about how the Valliere's were a very powerful family.
On my interruption, he paled slightly and once more, took on a defeated posture.
"Fine. Name your terms," he said as he began to sulk once more.
This was going to be a very good day for me.
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Comments, Constructive Criticisms, and Suggestions are all welcome.
Author's Note:
Negotiation time! Let's see in the next installment what I can get away without pissing of the old man.
ZnT/Guild Wars Crossover with PC-Controlled Assassin.
- Location
- Estonia
Coincidentally, is it the same "honor" that the non-mage higher ranking professional soldiers, especially the ones like Agnes, have in the eyes of an average noble?HecateGW said:
If he is a spy for Germania, then I could see the protagonist helping him. If he thinks in the spirit of RPG "faction quests", then Germania, as the most egalitarian state of the Brimirian civilization, would seem the most like a "good" faction. If not for Louise, then most crossover familiars would be more inclined to support that country, than Tristain. Well, with luck, Setsuna might consider Henrietta as the leader of the "main" "good" faction, she does literally give quests in a very unsubtle way.HecateGW said:
It's even funnier if you remember that the player already got an achievement for avoiding the S&M route. So that means that all that is merely a pale shadow of the real thing that could have been. ;7HecateGW said:Show S&M?
As if I would be so cruel as to further despoil her innocent mind.
Wow, that's the second recent fic in this site that has the protagonist use the Masochism Tango as a weapon against a tsundere. Did you get the inspiration from the Rodyle's Fate Zero/Sekirei crossover or is it a case of a coincidental parallel evolution?HecateGW said:
And the moderation is not that strict, it's just a song, not a porn pic or a video or a full lemon text, it's not forbidden to just strongly hint on things and use the "fade into black" technique. Or even just state that sex happened, as long as you don't describe it. As long you keep anything seriously sexual away from lolis and ponies, you will be fine on SpaceBattles, at least according to my experience.
Don't be too harsh on your terms and make him hate Setsuna, remember, the Hentai-Dumbledore is still unquestionably one of the better ZnT nobles.HecateGW said:
You probably know that too, because you wrote yourself: ""I will have you know that anything that harms the students, faculty, or servants will not be acceptable," he said sternly"
Many nobles would have forgotten the last part, in a situation where they are being blackmailed, "noblesse oblige" or not.
In long term, winning his respect, even a grudging one, would be a better option than short term gain.
Easy solution. Except for having a powerful starting player character (playing on the Easy Mode?Larekko12 said:
), Void Ascension is a graphic MMORPG in style of an old school roguelike, save functions more like a "pause" to make it possible to exit the game and upon character death, is permanently deleted.And that bravado does not apply to the fates of the people of Halkeginia, if the protagonist finally finds out that they are more than just "NPCs".
P.S. I imagine that Louise will also not take it calmly, when she finds out that it's actually a man who is using Setsuna's body as a "marionette". It would be very creepy for a culture of their level of development, thinking perverted devils and demonic possessions (like the Na'vi about avatars) and all.
And even that would be better than finding out that their world is a game to the protagonist. That creeps into full lovecraftian existential cosmic horror territory.
Thank you for reading and thank you for the compliment.koolerkid said:
As for Osmond, I have seen far too many fics that make him some kind of invincible wizard of ages past when he is a human being with magic.
That is not to say he is not a 'good' or 'powerful' person, just that I am ruthlessly exploiting his one noticeable weakness for my own gain.
I honestly was not certain how to play the scene in any other way without detracting from the player interaction with the 'game world' and crossing the line into 'generic ZnT familiar crossover' territory.Larekko12 said:
Anyway, thanks for the observation.
It might or might not become some kind of semi-recurring theme as the 'player' can only have so much of an emotional bond and realistic interaction with any game world, until I realize that it is not just a game, then we get into some interesting interactions.
I certainly hope it doesn't suck.Vorpal said:
The "honorable noble status" is more like a subtle aura that exudes from my character's person.Iron Roby said:
At this point, I have been upgraded from 'seen but not heard' to 'cannon fodder' in the sense that I have a miniscule value among the general noble populace, with some notable exceptions, like Montmorency.
This will play a role in dealing with the likes of professional soldiers as some will feel threatened in a subconscious manner, if they were given their position, or will feel some kind of pseudo-respect/pseudo-kinship, if they earned their position.
Spy?
I do not want to give away his story just yet.
Germania does tend to be the most 'good' nation in the sense that everyone has a chance to rise through the ranks when given the right tools, enough resources, and necessary ambition.
I am just surprised that many other ZnT crossovers have not tried to capitalize on that facet. But I suppose that it would be a lot of work to do the necessary world-building to do Germania, its culture, and other facets of that nation any justice.
One thing to note: my interpretation of Germania has a strong core of merit-based, non-mage military personnel, which means that there will be a much greater reliance on gunpowder for ranged capabilities.
This may play a role in later developments.
True.It's even funnier if you remember that the player already got an achievement for avoiding the S&M route. So that means that all that is merely a pale shadow of the real thing that could have been. ;7
The achievement does mean that we probably will never have any real progress on that front.
Although, that does not mean varying amounts of teasing will stop.
Actually, I am a bit of a fan of listening to Tom Lehrer on Youtube and I suddenly remembered that another story had made use of it while writing out that scene, but I had forgotten who had wrote it at the time.
I did have inspiration from Rodyle's fic to use it, but I was trying to think really hard where I read it from again and again.
Now I remember, thanks to your reminder.
Good to know.
While verbal teasing may come up now and a again, actual physical scenes are definitely not something I will do.
I wont be too harsh as I have noticed that he could have done much worse to my person, when one considers that he was invisible and I did not notice him until he revealed himself to me in a semi-private setting.
It's good to know that my hint at his 'goodness' was noticed in that he does care for every person under his authority including the servants, even if he is a bit of a pervert.
While he is being blackmailed, he still had enough sense to think about the servants and gained a bit of my respect in that I realize I am dealing with a person with magic (ie noble) who actually gives a damn.
He had enough respect not to appeal to the higher authority aka Louise Valliere, Master of Setsuna, and deal with her directly and not bring in any outside third parties as back up either.
How I deal with him will determine how he views Setsuna in future interactions.
Calmly?
We all know that tsunderes, especially super-tsunderes like Louise, will always be calm.
Right?
Right.
I don't being reminded again and again about how I should be doing this since I have been told that I have a very thick head at times.}pRodyle said:
In the future, I will try my very best to act more like a player than a normal player.
I will see what I can do about this snip and see if it is possible to alter the scene without changing the flow too much.
Omake 002
What if Louise had summoned my Elementalist character while in one of my celebration clothing (Grenth's Regalia without helmet) sets as I 'roleplay' with my friends?
"Well that's a rather interesting manner to bring me into another location."
Once the cloud of smoke had cleared, I saw that there were multiple threats ready to be taken down, including a freakin' dragon.
At first, I heard laughter about some kind of 'zero' and 'commoner' or some such nonsense, until someone in the crowd pointed out the rather fine and dark clothing on my character.
Then, silence.
Of particular note, a pink-haired girl looked rather pale.
After a few seconds, a bald-headed man with a staff in hand approached my character cautiously with a hesitant smile on his face.
"If I may be so bold, may we know your name and hope tha-"
"Hope is the first step on the road to disappointment. You would do well to remember that," I said in a monotone voice as I had my character swivel his head from side-to-side.
When my character's eyes landed on a particular person, he or she would look away, stand straight, or close their eyes in response.
In reality, I just wanted to get a better view of the courtyard.
At my interruption, the bald-headed man frowned and tightened his grip on his staff momentarily. Then, he relaxed his white-knuckle hold and let out a breath of air as he addressed my character again.
"But would it not be prudent to keep an open mind to all ide-"
Once again I interrupted," An open mind is like a fortress with its gates unbarred and ungaurded. However, a small mind is easily filled with faith."
"Enough of this nonsense. Send a messenger to the Church and inform them that an Inquisitor of the Ordo Hereticus requests their aid. NOW," I stated with more aggression to my voice as I was really enjoying the reactions of such realistic NPC interation.
On hearing the words 'Inquisitor' and 'Ordo Hereticus', the bald-headed man paled and the pink-haired girl fainted dead away.
At the same time, I heard some pale, blond male mutter,"I think this counts as a more impressive summoning than just a fire salamander."
"Shut your mouth, Guiche," quietly responded an equally pale, red-haired girl with ample assets.
What if Louise had summoned my Elementalist character while in one of my celebration clothing (Grenth's Regalia without helmet) sets as I 'roleplay' with my friends?
"Well that's a rather interesting manner to bring me into another location."
Once the cloud of smoke had cleared, I saw that there were multiple threats ready to be taken down, including a freakin' dragon.
At first, I heard laughter about some kind of 'zero' and 'commoner' or some such nonsense, until someone in the crowd pointed out the rather fine and dark clothing on my character.
Then, silence.
Of particular note, a pink-haired girl looked rather pale.
After a few seconds, a bald-headed man with a staff in hand approached my character cautiously with a hesitant smile on his face.
"If I may be so bold, may we know your name and hope tha-"
"Hope is the first step on the road to disappointment. You would do well to remember that," I said in a monotone voice as I had my character swivel his head from side-to-side.
When my character's eyes landed on a particular person, he or she would look away, stand straight, or close their eyes in response.
In reality, I just wanted to get a better view of the courtyard.
At my interruption, the bald-headed man frowned and tightened his grip on his staff momentarily. Then, he relaxed his white-knuckle hold and let out a breath of air as he addressed my character again.
"But would it not be prudent to keep an open mind to all ide-"
Once again I interrupted," An open mind is like a fortress with its gates unbarred and ungaurded. However, a small mind is easily filled with faith."
"Enough of this nonsense. Send a messenger to the Church and inform them that an Inquisitor of the Ordo Hereticus requests their aid. NOW," I stated with more aggression to my voice as I was really enjoying the reactions of such realistic NPC interation.
On hearing the words 'Inquisitor' and 'Ordo Hereticus', the bald-headed man paled and the pink-haired girl fainted dead away.
At the same time, I heard some pale, blond male mutter,"I think this counts as a more impressive summoning than just a fire salamander."
"Shut your mouth, Guiche," quietly responded an equally pale, red-haired girl with ample assets.
- Location
- Estonia
As I said, make it to be like a roguelike. Trust me, if you have ever played a roguelike or Diablo 2 in Hardcore mode with a character you have invested a lot of time into, then you start caring about keeping them away from permadeath with paranoia.HecateGW said:
And with how strong of an intensity to you roleplay? I remember when I once played a heavily modded Oblivion with tough player level independent monsters and tried very hard to save all those redshirt legionnaires, with a lot of angry swearing, because I thought that would be in character for my PC.
Is your protagonist already dreading the coming of escort missions, like any experienced player? He may find the (usually
) non-suicidal "combat AI" of his "essential NPC" party members a pleasant surprise. No more having an unarmored old lady armed only with her fists, who you have to protect, immediately charging alone into a coming horde of Daedric monsters, faster than your heavily armored ass can catch up with her, like can happen in Elder Scrolls games.I don't think that would be that much of a work really, Just make it fantasy pseudo-Germany with Slavic elements, like the other countries are fantasy pseudo-France, Belgium and England. If you take Kirche and Louise's rants as proof, then the national stereotype would be more boisterous and fun loving. Think more Southern Germany and Slavs than Prussia. You could also have an association of free merchant cities with their own representation, like a local Hansaetic League, that would only be accountable to the Emperor directly and not to the local nobles. The fact, that nobility titles can be bought, indicates the existence of notable bourgeois class, that are technically commoners, but can have more power than poor nobles.HecateGW said:
I think that it's more about most writer being mostly interested in the Louise-Familiar dynamic, than the general political landscape of the setting. Also, because there is no way Louise is going to switch her allegiance to Germania, so if you expand the setting and write about how relatively egalitarian it is compared to Tristain, then you may come to the realization, that your protagonist is fighting for the "bad guy" feudal conservatives, instead of the "better" progressive guys, but switching sides would be devastating to your relationship with Louise and most writers may not want to go there.
So many use the greater reliance on gunpowder part for Germania, that I thought it was actually canon? But it is a logical and a good idea, so don't let it's relative unoriginality stop you from using it, especially if you are actually going to do the work of worldbuilding its society.HecateGW said:
Especially if you consider that the school is practically his fiefdom and nothing would really stop him from taking his behavior a few steps further into actual physical territory, at least with maids. It's an age when women have "virtue", but the concept of workplace sexual harassment is not invented yet, especially for female commoners. Compare him with the likes of Mott.HecateGW said:
Actually that part might be more because of selfish reasons than actual respect. I don't think that he would want the youngest Valliere, and thus potentially the other female students, to find out who really is the perverted master of that mouse and backup might spread rumors or if they already know, then be a one witness too many to a potentially humiliating negotiation. Besides I doubt that he really thought that he needed backup in the first place, he probably is cautious to not underestimate Setsuna, but he most likely still is greatly underestimating her.HecateGW said:
Super-tsundere? Is it something like a supernova?HecateGW said:Calmly?
We all know that tsunderes, especially super-tsunderes like Louise, will always be calm.
Right?
Right.
I think that the term you are looking for is "tsuntsun" and I actually meant feeling real horror, like thinking he is a demon controlling a poor helpless girl, who is still conscious, but can't move or even blink herself or that Setsuna's body was put together from the parts of fresh corpses or something "Oh Founder, what have I summoned into my world!?" like that and then, when she has digested the whole explanation, also the existential "is my world just a game?" horror.You could have the protagonist use more RPG slang and mode of thinking in his narrative, like calling people NPCs, "combat and path finding AI", "faction quest", "alignment", "realistic graphics", wonder if certain things might be "easter eggs", have her pick up items that don't "belong" to anybody and put them cleptomanically in your inventory, try to sell stuff from your inventory and discover with surprise that many shops only sell and don't buy, take joy in freely jumping over feet high fences and not finding any invisible barriers, take joy in not having loading screens, etc.HecateGW said:
Basically, remember the way all the games, that you have played, have been (gameplay, story, encounters, common types of quests etc.) and have your character assume that things would be like they were in them and then have him comment his surprise when they are not or applaud himself for being "genre savvy", if they actually happen to be.
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Chapter Three, Part Four: Sowing the Seeds
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"Sooooo, Mr. Creepy Old Man, as you probably already know my name from peeping, sorry, I mean eavesdropping, that is to say, keeping an eye out for potential dangers," I said with a shit-eating grin, "I don't suppose you would deign to give me your name?"
*grumble*"It's Osmond, little witch, you better watch yourself," Osmond said as he continued his sulk.
"Oh? Did I just hear you say that I have to inform all the women who's the Master of this little mouse in my possession?"
*grumble*
"I did not catch th~at," I continued my taunting.
"I said fine, witch. Name your terms so that I can be rid of your presence."
"Now now. No need to be rude as you will soon find that I am not so harsh in my demands, after all. Rid of my presence, my dear Osmond? You wound me after you tried to have Jean molest my virginal, pure body," came my reply in a lighthearted tone of voice as I was very much amused by his childish fit.
*grumble*
Even though Osmond continued his grumbling at my teasing, he did not stop from taking the occasional, appreciative glance of Setsuna. Specifically, Setsuna's v-neck line and what lay underneath.
'Well, at least the programming for the stereotypical, dirty old man. works perfectly in-game. If this were real, I would be so creeped out'.
"I am certain that you appreciate the view. However, I would like to get down to business," I stated more seriously.
In response, Osmond straightened his posture and closed his eyes as though he were about to face the executioner's axe.
"Now, we are going to discuss what I can provide for the prestigious, Tristain Magical Academy and more specifically, you my dear Osmond."
"What," came the dumbfounded response as Osmond had most certainly not expected that.
'What I wouldn't give to have some kind of Paragon or Renegade Interrupt right about now'.
"Although, I was having fun at your expense, I do sympathize with your plight of not having your needs fulfilled. In my generosity, I will allow you to have your Familiar to engage in 'panty peeping'...."
"Praise the Founder!"
"With conditions," I sternly interrupted, which froze Osmond in a rather comical position of fist up in the air, just like his Familiar the night of the incident.
"You must be far more discrete...."
"But, but....the women always find out and then, and then...."Osmond interrupted, much to my annoyance and I decided to head him off before he started getting desperate. Desperate in the physical violence kind of desperate.
'If he starts attacking me, I won't ever get to level up LHoG to 20 since it's pretty much a given that old, perverted men in magical settings are really badassess in disguise'.
"As I said before, you must be discrete on and around Academy grounds. However, should the ladies prove to be a bit too perceptive, I would not mind taking the Familiar with me outside the Academy."
"Outside? You mean..."
"Yes, I would not mind allowing 'Panty Peeper'-"
"Chuchu."
"Chuchu?"
"Yes, I named him after my favorite panties."
"Thank you confirming that you are actually his Master," I teased once more as his widened in realization that I did not actually know his connection with Chuchu until he said it himself.
"Well played, Setsuna of Cantha," came the more sharp retort from the more serious Osmond.
At his implied message that he had observed my character during my meeting with Siesta, I could only text command Setsuna to bow her head as an acknowledgement that our negotiation had just upped a notch.
'Really enjoying the trigger mechanism in the AI interaction here'.
"As I said before, I do not mind bringing Chuchu with me on my excursions beyond the walls of Tristain Magical Academy. Last I checked, you have been rather interested in my activities and what better way to keep me in line than your precious Chuchu," I proposed to the now serious looking Osmond.
After five seconds of silence, Osmond nodded seriously and broke the moment by revealing a very perverted grin on his face, "All those lovely panties*sigh*."
"And my other condition is that Chuchu not peak on Master Louise, Montmorency, Tabitha, and Kirche as I consider them valuable assets."
'After all, the main party members of any good raid are the named ones'.
"Acceptable," Osmond stated, "And your other terms?"
"I will offer access to some of my valuable items as I understand that any Academy will always be concerned about funding."
A left eyebrow raised in question to my proposal.
"Surely, you do not believe that this Academy would accept any kind of bribery that would lead the Court to issue an Inquiry?"
"Surely, you as a crafty old man have reliable connections that would leave this Academy plausible deniability."
"Crafty? You are not insinuating something are you," came the rhetorical question as he avoided my statement.
"Just to make the deal sweeter, you can keep all the profits from any sales of any items I provide," I said as I ignored his probe into what I may or may not know of his person.
At the mention of keeping all the profits, Osmond looked slightly skeptical, "And what would you gain from just handing over such items in question with no coin?"
"Coin has no value to me and I strongly believe that there is a good business venture to be had here. After all, I am correct about the funding, am I not? Just how many times have you had to fight for more gold to be directed to this Academy by some upstart noble or old rival?"
*grumble* "More times than your years, witch. I still do not know what your take is on this. There is no such thing as charity when there is blackmail involved."
"Point taken. But as I said before, coin has no value to me and what I want is protection and secrecy as the source of these exotic and rare items from the land of Cantha."
"And just how will you traverse across the Great Ocean to get these items?"
At his question, I activated one of my spells from the Elementalist skillset, Frigid Armor.
"So Jean was right in his suspicions," came the whisper.
"Let's just say I have abilities that allow me to travel instantaneously from one location to another that I have already traveled beforehand," I said vaguely as I tried to re-word how I usually just clicked the menu and traveled from one town to another through the game interface.
"Incredible. Are you a noble?"
"As I said to Jean and I will say to you as well. No, I am not a noble."
I was a bit surprised when Osmond's face appeared to pale slightly when he asked another question, "Are you royalty?"
"I suppose not."
"That was not a clear denial."
"Let's just say I am incognito and leave it at that," I teased as I wanted to see how well the AI behind the script could handle my made up backstory.
"I see. So that is why you ask for protection and secrecy? As long as you are on Academy grounds or on any designated safehouse, you will have protection in exchange for the delivery of the exotic and rare items."
"I was reading in the library about how the various dyes used by the Royal Family and the Nobility are rather pricey. I believe that I could help in that area."
"And what kind of dyes would you have to offer?"
"Purple for one. And silver, and black, and any other host of colors that I believe are difficult to acquire especially for Tristain. Here, take a free sample," I said as I removed one purple, one silver, and one black vial of dye that appeared out of nowhere before Osmond who gasped in surprise and muttered something about 'wind illusion'.
"I can provide at least a hundred vials of select dyes a month and, once again, the Academy may keep all the profits."
"You are still assuming that I can sell these without getting caught."
"Please, Osmond. Do not insult either of our intelligence that you do not have your ways to get around getting caught."
*grumble* "What do you want in return for this then?"
"I want three things this time as dyes will be far easier to sell, transport, and explain than Canthan items."
"Fine. But they had better not be unreasonable, witch."
"Heh, still with the witch insults? First, I want plausible cover stories ready to be distributed should I ever be gone from the Academy grounds when I visit any of my new 'friends'."
"I know whom you speak of and they are good men, if a bit misguided at times. Although I cannot think of why you would need their services."
"Ah, my dear Osmond. Any good raiding party needs some good mooks."
"What?"
"Nothing."
*grumble*
"Anwyay, my second is that if there are any Inquiries on Master Louise, Montmorency, and myself, they will die off quietly and without much fuss."
"You do not include Tabitha or Kirche this time," questioned Osmond.
"I do not know if they are worth the investment."
"Cold, but practical," nodded the old pervert.
"Third, I want to make sure that no Tristain politcal entities will interfere in any of my business investments...."
"I cannot agree to that as I do not possess that much power."
"And again you stopped me from speaking before I could finish," I admonished Osmond as he took on a sheepish look, "No Tristain political entities will interfere without my being alerted immediately."
"Now that is far more reasonable. Yes, that is quite possible. And how do you want to be alerted?"
"I'm sure a man in your position has ways."
"Hmmmm," hummed Osmond as he stroked his awesome beard.
"Anything else, wi-, I mean Setsuna?"
"One last thing. I want three future favors, within reason of course."
"Of course," spoke Osmond as he continued to stroke his beard, "And what would the Academy receive in turn?"
"I would look favorably on Tristain Magical Academy as my first choice when pursuing a neutral location for any legitimate transactions that require a third party to play mediator. There will be a commission included, naturally."
"Naturally."
"I trust my terms are acceptable, Headmaster?"
"Setsuna, I must confess that I thought you would attempt some nefarious scheme. Instead, you only asked for that which I would give to any good friend of Tristain Magical Academy. And please, do call me Osmond, even though you have already taken the liberty to do so."
"Now, now, Osmond. What I ask for is simply good business as it would not do to alienate potential clients. Besides, I am not so cruel as to deny a man his needs."
"And for that you have my thanks."
"Please, do remember that I had better not catch you or your Familiar in the act of satisfying your urges."
*laughter*"By the Founder, if I did not see it firsthand through Chuchu, I could have sworn that you have the heart and mind of a man trapped in a rather fetching woman's body."
*chuckle*"You have no idea, Osmond."
"As for you terms, they are most generous. In fact, if you should ever find yourself in need of assistance, please, do not hesitate to come to my office as it will always be open to you."
"Thank you, Osmond. Rest assured, Chuchu is in safe hands."
"I do have some questions if you would satisfy an old man's curiosity?"
"Of course."
"Why do you serve Louise when you have clearly shown magical abilities?"
"Osmond, after reading about just how much power and influence the Valliere family has, how could I not afford to ingratiate myself into her good graces?"
"Securing a political foundation, hmmmm?"
"And your other question, Osmond," I asked as I ignored his comment.
"Ah yes. Would you be interested in becoming a noble? Not in Tristain, but in Germania."
"Tempting, but not just yet."
"I understand. However, should you ever find yourself in trouble, just ask for Erzherzog Herwald and he should expedite any letters patent."
"Thank you for your generosity. Are there any other questions as I am hoping to meet with Professor Colbert?"
*laughter*"Off with you."
"Have a good day, Osmond."
"You as well, Setsuna."
"Seriously, whoever wrote the backstory of this game expansion did a pretty good job integrating it into the game. Not to mention that the AI is very impressive in negotiating details on agreements and responding accordingly," I spoke quietly as I heard some laughter coming from some of the nobles from some of the hallways my character passed.
And so, Setsuna found herself in front of Professor Colbert's office and I found myself a bit drained from the lengthy talk with Osmond and decided to save and exit for now.
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Comments, Constructive Criticisms, Suggestions. As usual, I am open to them.
Author's Note: I have changed the scene in order to show the deal itself.
ZnT/Guild Wars Crossove with PC-Controlled Assassin.
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"Sooooo, Mr. Creepy Old Man, as you probably already know my name from peeping, sorry, I mean eavesdropping, that is to say, keeping an eye out for potential dangers," I said with a shit-eating grin, "I don't suppose you would deign to give me your name?"
*grumble*"It's Osmond, little witch, you better watch yourself," Osmond said as he continued his sulk.
"Oh? Did I just hear you say that I have to inform all the women who's the Master of this little mouse in my possession?"
*grumble*
"I did not catch th~at," I continued my taunting.
"I said fine, witch. Name your terms so that I can be rid of your presence."
"Now now. No need to be rude as you will soon find that I am not so harsh in my demands, after all. Rid of my presence, my dear Osmond? You wound me after you tried to have Jean molest my virginal, pure body," came my reply in a lighthearted tone of voice as I was very much amused by his childish fit.
*grumble*
Even though Osmond continued his grumbling at my teasing, he did not stop from taking the occasional, appreciative glance of Setsuna. Specifically, Setsuna's v-neck line and what lay underneath.
'Well, at least the programming for the stereotypical, dirty old man. works perfectly in-game. If this were real, I would be so creeped out'.
"I am certain that you appreciate the view. However, I would like to get down to business," I stated more seriously.
In response, Osmond straightened his posture and closed his eyes as though he were about to face the executioner's axe.
"Now, we are going to discuss what I can provide for the prestigious, Tristain Magical Academy and more specifically, you my dear Osmond."
"What," came the dumbfounded response as Osmond had most certainly not expected that.
'What I wouldn't give to have some kind of Paragon or Renegade Interrupt right about now'.
"Although, I was having fun at your expense, I do sympathize with your plight of not having your needs fulfilled. In my generosity, I will allow you to have your Familiar to engage in 'panty peeping'...."
"Praise the Founder!"
"With conditions," I sternly interrupted, which froze Osmond in a rather comical position of fist up in the air, just like his Familiar the night of the incident.
"You must be far more discrete...."
"But, but....the women always find out and then, and then...."Osmond interrupted, much to my annoyance and I decided to head him off before he started getting desperate. Desperate in the physical violence kind of desperate.
'If he starts attacking me, I won't ever get to level up LHoG to 20 since it's pretty much a given that old, perverted men in magical settings are really badassess in disguise'.
"As I said before, you must be discrete on and around Academy grounds. However, should the ladies prove to be a bit too perceptive, I would not mind taking the Familiar with me outside the Academy."
"Outside? You mean..."
"Yes, I would not mind allowing 'Panty Peeper'-"
"Chuchu."
"Chuchu?"
"Yes, I named him after my favorite panties."
"Thank you confirming that you are actually his Master," I teased once more as his widened in realization that I did not actually know his connection with Chuchu until he said it himself.
"Well played, Setsuna of Cantha," came the more sharp retort from the more serious Osmond.
At his implied message that he had observed my character during my meeting with Siesta, I could only text command Setsuna to bow her head as an acknowledgement that our negotiation had just upped a notch.
'Really enjoying the trigger mechanism in the AI interaction here'.
"As I said before, I do not mind bringing Chuchu with me on my excursions beyond the walls of Tristain Magical Academy. Last I checked, you have been rather interested in my activities and what better way to keep me in line than your precious Chuchu," I proposed to the now serious looking Osmond.
After five seconds of silence, Osmond nodded seriously and broke the moment by revealing a very perverted grin on his face, "All those lovely panties*sigh*."
"And my other condition is that Chuchu not peak on Master Louise, Montmorency, Tabitha, and Kirche as I consider them valuable assets."
'After all, the main party members of any good raid are the named ones'.
"Acceptable," Osmond stated, "And your other terms?"
"I will offer access to some of my valuable items as I understand that any Academy will always be concerned about funding."
A left eyebrow raised in question to my proposal.
"Surely, you do not believe that this Academy would accept any kind of bribery that would lead the Court to issue an Inquiry?"
"Surely, you as a crafty old man have reliable connections that would leave this Academy plausible deniability."
"Crafty? You are not insinuating something are you," came the rhetorical question as he avoided my statement.
"Just to make the deal sweeter, you can keep all the profits from any sales of any items I provide," I said as I ignored his probe into what I may or may not know of his person.
At the mention of keeping all the profits, Osmond looked slightly skeptical, "And what would you gain from just handing over such items in question with no coin?"
"Coin has no value to me and I strongly believe that there is a good business venture to be had here. After all, I am correct about the funding, am I not? Just how many times have you had to fight for more gold to be directed to this Academy by some upstart noble or old rival?"
*grumble* "More times than your years, witch. I still do not know what your take is on this. There is no such thing as charity when there is blackmail involved."
"Point taken. But as I said before, coin has no value to me and what I want is protection and secrecy as the source of these exotic and rare items from the land of Cantha."
"And just how will you traverse across the Great Ocean to get these items?"
At his question, I activated one of my spells from the Elementalist skillset, Frigid Armor.
"So Jean was right in his suspicions," came the whisper.
"Let's just say I have abilities that allow me to travel instantaneously from one location to another that I have already traveled beforehand," I said vaguely as I tried to re-word how I usually just clicked the menu and traveled from one town to another through the game interface.
"Incredible. Are you a noble?"
"As I said to Jean and I will say to you as well. No, I am not a noble."
I was a bit surprised when Osmond's face appeared to pale slightly when he asked another question, "Are you royalty?"
"I suppose not."
"That was not a clear denial."
"Let's just say I am incognito and leave it at that," I teased as I wanted to see how well the AI behind the script could handle my made up backstory.
"I see. So that is why you ask for protection and secrecy? As long as you are on Academy grounds or on any designated safehouse, you will have protection in exchange for the delivery of the exotic and rare items."
"I was reading in the library about how the various dyes used by the Royal Family and the Nobility are rather pricey. I believe that I could help in that area."
"And what kind of dyes would you have to offer?"
"Purple for one. And silver, and black, and any other host of colors that I believe are difficult to acquire especially for Tristain. Here, take a free sample," I said as I removed one purple, one silver, and one black vial of dye that appeared out of nowhere before Osmond who gasped in surprise and muttered something about 'wind illusion'.
"I can provide at least a hundred vials of select dyes a month and, once again, the Academy may keep all the profits."
"You are still assuming that I can sell these without getting caught."
"Please, Osmond. Do not insult either of our intelligence that you do not have your ways to get around getting caught."
*grumble* "What do you want in return for this then?"
"I want three things this time as dyes will be far easier to sell, transport, and explain than Canthan items."
"Fine. But they had better not be unreasonable, witch."
"Heh, still with the witch insults? First, I want plausible cover stories ready to be distributed should I ever be gone from the Academy grounds when I visit any of my new 'friends'."
"I know whom you speak of and they are good men, if a bit misguided at times. Although I cannot think of why you would need their services."
"Ah, my dear Osmond. Any good raiding party needs some good mooks."
"What?"
"Nothing."
*grumble*
"Anwyay, my second is that if there are any Inquiries on Master Louise, Montmorency, and myself, they will die off quietly and without much fuss."
"You do not include Tabitha or Kirche this time," questioned Osmond.
"I do not know if they are worth the investment."
"Cold, but practical," nodded the old pervert.
"Third, I want to make sure that no Tristain politcal entities will interfere in any of my business investments...."
"I cannot agree to that as I do not possess that much power."
"And again you stopped me from speaking before I could finish," I admonished Osmond as he took on a sheepish look, "No Tristain political entities will interfere without my being alerted immediately."
"Now that is far more reasonable. Yes, that is quite possible. And how do you want to be alerted?"
"I'm sure a man in your position has ways."
"Hmmmm," hummed Osmond as he stroked his awesome beard.
"Anything else, wi-, I mean Setsuna?"
"One last thing. I want three future favors, within reason of course."
"Of course," spoke Osmond as he continued to stroke his beard, "And what would the Academy receive in turn?"
"I would look favorably on Tristain Magical Academy as my first choice when pursuing a neutral location for any legitimate transactions that require a third party to play mediator. There will be a commission included, naturally."
"Naturally."
"I trust my terms are acceptable, Headmaster?"
"Setsuna, I must confess that I thought you would attempt some nefarious scheme. Instead, you only asked for that which I would give to any good friend of Tristain Magical Academy. And please, do call me Osmond, even though you have already taken the liberty to do so."
"Now, now, Osmond. What I ask for is simply good business as it would not do to alienate potential clients. Besides, I am not so cruel as to deny a man his needs."
"And for that you have my thanks."
"Please, do remember that I had better not catch you or your Familiar in the act of satisfying your urges."
*laughter*"By the Founder, if I did not see it firsthand through Chuchu, I could have sworn that you have the heart and mind of a man trapped in a rather fetching woman's body."
*chuckle*"You have no idea, Osmond."
"As for you terms, they are most generous. In fact, if you should ever find yourself in need of assistance, please, do not hesitate to come to my office as it will always be open to you."
"Thank you, Osmond. Rest assured, Chuchu is in safe hands."
"I do have some questions if you would satisfy an old man's curiosity?"
"Of course."
"Why do you serve Louise when you have clearly shown magical abilities?"
"Osmond, after reading about just how much power and influence the Valliere family has, how could I not afford to ingratiate myself into her good graces?"
"Securing a political foundation, hmmmm?"
"And your other question, Osmond," I asked as I ignored his comment.
"Ah yes. Would you be interested in becoming a noble? Not in Tristain, but in Germania."
"Tempting, but not just yet."
"I understand. However, should you ever find yourself in trouble, just ask for Erzherzog Herwald and he should expedite any letters patent."
"Thank you for your generosity. Are there any other questions as I am hoping to meet with Professor Colbert?"
*laughter*"Off with you."
"Have a good day, Osmond."
"You as well, Setsuna."
As Setsuna contined her walk towards Professor Colbert's office, I could not help but feel that I was getting the better end of the deal, considering that all of the items I promised were fairly easy to acquire and cost very little in Guild Wars, but were considered very expensive to purchase due to the many problems that plagued a Rennaissance era society, economy and infrastructure, especially in the small country of Tristain.
"Seriously, whoever wrote the backstory of this game expansion did a pretty good job integrating it into the game. Not to mention that the AI is very impressive in negotiating details on agreements and responding accordingly," I spoke quietly as I heard some laughter coming from some of the nobles from some of the hallways my character passed.
And so, Setsuna found herself in front of Professor Colbert's office and I found myself a bit drained from the lengthy talk with Osmond and decided to save and exit for now.
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Comments, Constructive Criticisms, Suggestions. As usual, I am open to them.
Author's Note: I have changed the scene in order to show the deal itself.
ZnT/Guild Wars Crossove with PC-Controlled Assassin.
I hope you're not planning on keeping the "skip to agreeing to the deal, then explain what the deal was in an author's note" structure in the final version.HecateGW said:
I agree with this, to a extent. I'd find it interesting for Setsuna to haggle with Osmond about the terms, and laying out the terms between them in full would make it seem less likely some development in the future be seen as 'ass-pull' from a undisclosed fine-print section.Random832 said:
Once again, thank you for the comrehensive review and the very helpful comments, suggestions, and constructive criticisms.Iron Roby said:
I really am grateful for all that you have pointed out and I hope that this story will continue to entertain.
Story has been edited. I have no idea why I chose to be such an idiot by posting it that way.Random832 said:
Agreed, the snip has been edited in order to show the actual deal itself.Flere821 said:
Hopefully, the story sounds better this way.
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My only complaint is that he seems too loose with RPG speech. It's okay when it's to himself but he shouldn't have said anything to Osmond.
EDIT: That looked more negative than it was. I love everything else.
EDIT: That looked more negative than it was. I love everything else.
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Chapter Three, Part Five: Sowing the Seeds
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As I logged on to Guild Wars, I decided that it would not hurt to do a little grinding for some of the so-called valuable items that I had promised my reluctant business partner, Osmond.
For the next two weeks, I had Setsuna grind away in the Nightfall campaign in order to get more skill points as I had a feeling that I would need the extra abilities for the Ranger class when I changed my profession as a result of becoming a Weh no Su.
Normally, any character could change their secondary professions for a fee of 500 gold for each change. However, on receiving the blessing/title of Weh no Su, I could freely change my secondary profession to any of the available classes that I needed. On the downside, Setsuna would never benefit from the primary attribute of the other classes except her assassin primary attribute of Critical Strikes, which allows for a much greater chance to make a critical hit.
Once I was satisfied by my haul, I left the Nightfall campaign and headed for the world of Void Ascension.
I appeared once more where I had last left Setsuna. Right in front of Professor Colbert's office.
Now, my problem was that I had the items that would be provided to Osmond as part of our agreement and I really did want to speak with Jean and see if he could give me a different point of view on the Tristain Magical Academy.
"Oh well, NPC's always wait until the player is ready for them, anyway," I shrugged as I had Setsuna search for Osmond in the winding passages that lead to his office.
Once there, I made sure that I was not being followed by keeping an eye at all times on my radar targeting and moved away or stayed still until the person or persons would pass and I was out of their zone of notice.
Of particular note, I saw that the one marked as Guiche was stalking up and down a hallway near the Water Tower area.
"Poor fool. Don't pity him though as he did bring it on himself. Maybe I can goad him into some kind of fight later on and see just how well LHoG stacks up in combat."
Once I arrived within extreme range of my detection display, I noticed three people inside Osmond's office.
Two I recognized as Osmond and Jean, but the third was only named Suspicious Secretary.
"Heh. Knowing tropes and cliches, that Suspicious Secretary might be some kind of intermediate boss," I spoke to myself as I approached the door and activated the knock function when the command presented itself.
"You may enter, Setsuna," came the old pervert's voice as he thought that he would get the drop on me by calling out my character's name.
Inside the office, Osmond was sitting behind his desk while Colbert and the Suspicious Secretary were on sitting on either side of his desk.
"Hello, Headmaster. I hope I am not interrupting your peeping," I said with a grin.
At my verbal jab, the green-haired secretary snorted while Professor Colbert palmed his face with one hand as he muttered about 'inappropriate' and other such things.
Osmond, on the other hand, only coughed into his fist as he tried to regain his wits with a much louder voice, "Setsuna, I was just discussing your person with my colleagues here. Oh, and before I forget, Miss Longueville, this is Setsuna, the Familiar of Louise Valliere. Setsuna, this is Miss Longueville, my personal secretary and -"
"Your constant target of peeping," I interrupted with a hint of laughter in my voice.
Again, Osmond only coughed into his fist as Miss Longueville's left eyebrow rose and she gave me a smile that seemed to give off some kind of gratitude. Meanwhile, Colbert's other hand joined his first in palming his face as he groaned and muttered about, "At this rate, the Academy shall be known more for its perverted headmaster than anything else."
"Maybe not just its perverted headmaster, Jean. If I remember correctly, you were able to enjoy two handfuls of myself last night," I grinned widely as I wanted to see just how far I could get the AI behind these NPC's to react in such human-like ways.
At that, Colbert's body froze in shock at the reminder and his neck began to grow red in embarrassment as Miss Longueville turned to give Colbert an accusatory look, "Handfuls, Professor Colbert?"
"Oh yes, he was so....eager to 'help' me that he buried his head between my breasts when we had just met."
"Wha- you....I was only trying to help-"
"Me by grabbing hold of my chest and then forcing me down to the floor?"
"Yes! I mean no!"
Before I could go any further, Osmond burst out in a bellyache laugh as he appeared to genuinely enjoy the teasing of the red-faced Colbert and Miss Longueville's deadpan stares at Colbert.
"Sorry, Jean. I have to admit that the accusations are refreshing when it is against someone else," said Osmond as h wiped away a few tears leaking from his eyes.
"Easy for you to say, Headmaster."
Once the laughter had more or less died down, I addressed Osmond as I already had my first shipment ready.
"Now that the fun is over, I do have some pressing business with the Headmaster and it involves some matters of a personal nature, if that is not too much of a bother."
"Of course not, of course not. Jean, Miss Longueville? If you would give Setsuna and I some privacy, please?"
"Very well."
"Yes, Headmaster."
Once the two had left the room, I turn to addressed the still amused Headmaster once Professor Colbert and Miss Longueville left the range of my targeting radar.
"Osmond, I have what you need, however, I will have to make several trips as I could not carry everything in one pass. Where would be an acceptable location to bring those items?"
"That was rather quick."
"I do not believe in wasting time. After all, time is money."
"Hmmmm....I do have chest in this room that can carry some of the items."
"Do you have something that you can write with."
"Oh? Something I can write with? Do not mean something that you can write with?"
"I prefer not to do the writing as it is a rather distinctive style that may lead to implicating me as your source."
"Ah, how forgetful of me. Now let met get that quill."
In the end, I was amused as I saw just how high Osmond's eyebrows were raised to the point that they almost disappeared in his hairline.
"900 items? When you said that you would get me some items, I thought that you meant some."
"Well, we never did specify any hard numbers other than the vials of dye. If you would prefer that I provide less...."
"No, no, this is quite fine. I do believe that there are some sheds hidden underneath the Tower of Earth that require a very specific set of keys."
The list was written as follows:
"You as well, Setsuna. Take care not to be seen."
"I will do that."
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Comments, Constructive Criticisms, and Suggestions on anything I have written. I might not get back to you soon, but I will try to respond and change what I have written when I have enough time and am not too lazy
Author's Note: This one was a real pain to write as I made over 15 different versions and I was not truly satisfied with any of them. Hopefully, number 16 is better than the rest.
ZnT/Guild Wars Crossover with PC-Controlled Assassin.
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As I logged on to Guild Wars, I decided that it would not hurt to do a little grinding for some of the so-called valuable items that I had promised my reluctant business partner, Osmond.
For the next two weeks, I had Setsuna grind away in the Nightfall campaign in order to get more skill points as I had a feeling that I would need the extra abilities for the Ranger class when I changed my profession as a result of becoming a Weh no Su.
Normally, any character could change their secondary professions for a fee of 500 gold for each change. However, on receiving the blessing/title of Weh no Su, I could freely change my secondary profession to any of the available classes that I needed. On the downside, Setsuna would never benefit from the primary attribute of the other classes except her assassin primary attribute of Critical Strikes, which allows for a much greater chance to make a critical hit.
Once I was satisfied by my haul, I left the Nightfall campaign and headed for the world of Void Ascension.
I appeared once more where I had last left Setsuna. Right in front of Professor Colbert's office.
Now, my problem was that I had the items that would be provided to Osmond as part of our agreement and I really did want to speak with Jean and see if he could give me a different point of view on the Tristain Magical Academy.
"Oh well, NPC's always wait until the player is ready for them, anyway," I shrugged as I had Setsuna search for Osmond in the winding passages that lead to his office.
Once there, I made sure that I was not being followed by keeping an eye at all times on my radar targeting and moved away or stayed still until the person or persons would pass and I was out of their zone of notice.
Of particular note, I saw that the one marked as Guiche was stalking up and down a hallway near the Water Tower area.
"Poor fool. Don't pity him though as he did bring it on himself. Maybe I can goad him into some kind of fight later on and see just how well LHoG stacks up in combat."
Once I arrived within extreme range of my detection display, I noticed three people inside Osmond's office.
Two I recognized as Osmond and Jean, but the third was only named Suspicious Secretary.
"Heh. Knowing tropes and cliches, that Suspicious Secretary might be some kind of intermediate boss," I spoke to myself as I approached the door and activated the knock function when the command presented itself.
"You may enter, Setsuna," came the old pervert's voice as he thought that he would get the drop on me by calling out my character's name.
Inside the office, Osmond was sitting behind his desk while Colbert and the Suspicious Secretary were on sitting on either side of his desk.
"Hello, Headmaster. I hope I am not interrupting your peeping," I said with a grin.
At my verbal jab, the green-haired secretary snorted while Professor Colbert palmed his face with one hand as he muttered about 'inappropriate' and other such things.
Osmond, on the other hand, only coughed into his fist as he tried to regain his wits with a much louder voice, "Setsuna, I was just discussing your person with my colleagues here. Oh, and before I forget, Miss Longueville, this is Setsuna, the Familiar of Louise Valliere. Setsuna, this is Miss Longueville, my personal secretary and -"
"Your constant target of peeping," I interrupted with a hint of laughter in my voice.
Again, Osmond only coughed into his fist as Miss Longueville's left eyebrow rose and she gave me a smile that seemed to give off some kind of gratitude. Meanwhile, Colbert's other hand joined his first in palming his face as he groaned and muttered about, "At this rate, the Academy shall be known more for its perverted headmaster than anything else."
"Maybe not just its perverted headmaster, Jean. If I remember correctly, you were able to enjoy two handfuls of myself last night," I grinned widely as I wanted to see just how far I could get the AI behind these NPC's to react in such human-like ways.
At that, Colbert's body froze in shock at the reminder and his neck began to grow red in embarrassment as Miss Longueville turned to give Colbert an accusatory look, "Handfuls, Professor Colbert?"
"Oh yes, he was so....eager to 'help' me that he buried his head between my breasts when we had just met."
"Wha- you....I was only trying to help-"
"Me by grabbing hold of my chest and then forcing me down to the floor?"
"Yes! I mean no!"
Before I could go any further, Osmond burst out in a bellyache laugh as he appeared to genuinely enjoy the teasing of the red-faced Colbert and Miss Longueville's deadpan stares at Colbert.
"Sorry, Jean. I have to admit that the accusations are refreshing when it is against someone else," said Osmond as h wiped away a few tears leaking from his eyes.
"Easy for you to say, Headmaster."
Once the laughter had more or less died down, I addressed Osmond as I already had my first shipment ready.
"Now that the fun is over, I do have some pressing business with the Headmaster and it involves some matters of a personal nature, if that is not too much of a bother."
"Of course not, of course not. Jean, Miss Longueville? If you would give Setsuna and I some privacy, please?"
"Very well."
"Yes, Headmaster."
Once the two had left the room, I turn to addressed the still amused Headmaster once Professor Colbert and Miss Longueville left the range of my targeting radar.
"Osmond, I have what you need, however, I will have to make several trips as I could not carry everything in one pass. Where would be an acceptable location to bring those items?"
"That was rather quick."
"I do not believe in wasting time. After all, time is money."
"Hmmmm....I do have chest in this room that can carry some of the items."
"Do you have something that you can write with."
"Oh? Something I can write with? Do not mean something that you can write with?"
"I prefer not to do the writing as it is a rather distinctive style that may lead to implicating me as your source."
"Ah, how forgetful of me. Now let met get that quill."
In the end, I was amused as I saw just how high Osmond's eyebrows were raised to the point that they almost disappeared in his hairline.
"900 items? When you said that you would get me some items, I thought that you meant some."
"Well, we never did specify any hard numbers other than the vials of dye. If you would prefer that I provide less...."
"No, no, this is quite fine. I do believe that there are some sheds hidden underneath the Tower of Earth that require a very specific set of keys."
"Thank you Osmond. Now, can I see that list to make sure it is correct?"
The list was written as follows:
"Well, it looks just fine. I will have your shipment there within the hour. Good doing business with you, Osmond."
"You as well, Setsuna. Take care not to be seen."
"I will do that."
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Comments, Constructive Criticisms, and Suggestions on anything I have written. I might not get back to you soon, but I will try to respond and change what I have written when I have enough time and am not too lazy
Author's Note: This one was a real pain to write as I made over 15 different versions and I was not truly satisfied with any of them. Hopefully, number 16 is better than the rest.
ZnT/Guild Wars Crossover with PC-Controlled Assassin.
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The version, when the deal making is actually shown, is indeed much better and what was that about not clearly denying being royalty? Do you plan to make them believe that Setsuna is some exiled royal bastard princess or something? Or a member of a deposed dynasty, who had to get by herself?
I understand that the Academy will keep the profits, but will the protagonist then at least get the "base prize" re-compensated or is it just all a bribe to gain favor?
You mentioned being a firm believer in the capitalism, but why even bother, if you could just use the standard MMORPG gp gold, where grinding that is much easier in Guild Wars than in Void Ascension? If the coins are suspicious, then just melt the precious metal.
Only reason I can see for you to bother with exporting items to ZnT verse, is to supply a local army with superior equipment and the population with luxury items. Why are you already doing that when you don't even know which "faction" you want to support and advance in?
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Heh-he, "Suspicious Secretary" "NPC". Good idea mentioning the targeting radar, it nicely reminds the readers about game mechanics being in use and what their effect would be to normal interaction. Also nice to see the protagonist wonder about tropes and cliches and see him push the limitations of "AI", do you, and by extension the protagonist, know about Turing test?
It was also good you showed Setsuna actually having fun, makes it more believable that the protagonist is still just playing a game in his own mind. That kind of a playfully mischievous roleplaying is actually believably what some people would prefer while playing an RPG, given the conversation options. I always pick the snarky ones.
P.S. How is the protagonist interacting in conversations? Are there full conversation options presented to him by destiny or just code words or phrases like in Morrowind or Mass Effect? Or does he actually type in the text like in a text based adventure game?
I understand that the Academy will keep the profits, but will the protagonist then at least get the "base prize" re-compensated or is it just all a bribe to gain favor?
You mentioned being a firm believer in the capitalism, but why even bother, if you could just use the standard MMORPG gp gold, where grinding that is much easier in Guild Wars than in Void Ascension? If the coins are suspicious, then just melt the precious metal.
Only reason I can see for you to bother with exporting items to ZnT verse, is to supply a local army with superior equipment and the population with luxury items. Why are you already doing that when you don't even know which "faction" you want to support and advance in?
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Heh-he, "Suspicious Secretary" "NPC"
. Good idea mentioning the targeting radar, it nicely reminds the readers about game mechanics being in use and what their effect would be to normal interaction. Also nice to see the protagonist wonder about tropes and cliches and see him push the limitations of "AI", do you, and by extension the protagonist, know about Turing test?It was also good you showed Setsuna actually having fun, makes it more believable that the protagonist is still just playing a game in his own mind. That kind of a playfully mischievous roleplaying is actually believably what some people would prefer while playing an RPG, given the conversation options. I always pick the snarky ones.
P.S. How is the protagonist interacting in conversations? Are there full conversation options presented to him by destiny or just code words or phrases like in Morrowind or Mass Effect? Or does he actually type in the text like in a text based adventure game?
Hmmm, I will look into those scenes and see if I can change it to be more streamlined without the RPG elements.Observer said:
Thanks for reading and thanks for the constructive criticism.
The part about denyng royalty is mostly me thinking that I am still just playing a game and that I am going by an in-game Guild Wars joke from my old guild members when my character was appointed guild leader of the alliance of ten guilds of nearly 800 active members at one time.Iron Roby said:
The title they gave Setsuna was the Incognito Princess of the Jade Throne as a joke about how I would often be gone for weeks at a time because of how busy I was in highschool due to having school, two part-time jobs, and two extracurricular activities (piano lessons, volunteer hospital work).
Right now, I am playing from that fun little background as I do not fully comprehend just what the consequences will be.
Once I do, however, well let's just say other people in Halkeginia who are 'in the know' will think that Setsuna is just vehemently denying the truth for whatever fanciful reasons they can come up with when using their imaginations to fill in the gaps.
Bribe to gain favor as I do realize that Osmond is one of the better nobles and I am basing my judgment on the trope that no one gets to be old in a position of power without having a few dozen aces up their sleeves and the power to back up any of their claims.
Or so I think according to the magical genre of stories I have read and applying such thinking to the game.
The capitalism aspect will come into play when dealing with Germania. Also, one thing I will take full advantage of is that Germania allows people to purchase their titles. And another thing to note is that Osmond already recommended someone with the equivalent noble rank of Archduke to sponsor Setsuna should she ever be interested.
I am exporting the items to see the reaction and try to bait any suspicious groups into action as I am thinking that maybe I could 'enourage' some conflict as it has been a bit boring.
I will regret this though as once things start to snowball, they will avalanche, especially in regards to Reconquista.
I will regret this though as once things start to snowball, they will avalanche, especially in regards to Reconquista.
I do know of it, but the protag is not actively thinking about such because of how much fun it is to have such 'realistic AI dialogue interaction' in the moment.For the next snippet:
Heh-he, "Suspicious Secretary" "NPC"
Yeah, I usually start of as very serious in the beginning and, as time goes on, I tend to start choosing any of the more snarky dialogue options whenever possible in order to see the more interesting reactions.It was also good you showed Setsuna actually having fun, makes it more believable that the protagonist is still just playing a game in his own mind. That kind of a playfully mischievous roleplaying is actually believably what some people would prefer while playing an RPG, given the conversation options. I always pick the snarky ones.
P.S. How is the protagonist interacting in conversations? Are there full conversation options presented to him by destiny or just code words or phrases like in Morrowind or Mass Effect? Or does he actually type in the text like in a text based adventure game?
Good point on the interacting conversations part. I had initially been influenced by kiraikuma's Fallout/ZnT crossover fiction of having the player just speak aloud and certain key words would trigger certain reactions, but now I am not certain about how to play this part. Will have to get back to you on this.
Once again, thank you for your detailed reviews, critiques, and helpful advice. They have really been a great assitance to helping encourage and refine my writing skills.
It does feel forced as I pretty much wrote and deleted this snip at least fifteen times and I am still not satisfied how those lines came about.Rodyle said:
Glad to hear that I have somewhat fixed that aspect of 'playing a game' and not being too much like just another character inserted into ZnT.
Thanks for reading and thanks for the advice.