"Alright, I think I have a few ideas."
"Let's hear them all." Fred smiles, the sort of smile editors who deal with a lot amateur authors might have.
"Well, first of all -" You pause, thinking of how to word your vision in a proper sentence, "-a spaceman crash lands on a planet."
"Typical." And there he goes. "Let me finish, okay? He crashes because the evil undead aliens damaged his ship while chasing him."
"Wait – they're undead and aliens both?"
"No… they're undead looking aliens." You decide after awhile. "Rotting, evil looking rotten beings. Like giant apes on legs. Well, anyway, he crash lands on the planet, and get this – it's a fantasy land."
"What kind of fantasy are we talking about?"Fred interrupts you once again. "Greek, Nordic, or the general medieval Europe with magic?"
"Medieval with magic." You briefly consider the ideas of a different fantasy world, but then discard it. You don't have enough knowledge about them. Perhaps after some research…
"Anyways, he crash lands on the planet – and so do the evil Trolls. They are fighting and there's a witch who interrupts in somehow."
"In favor of the space man, or the space trolls?"
"Well, first she helps out our astro-man, because space trolls think her of as an enemy. But later, after spaceman is about to fix his spacecraft, the witch turns against him cause she wants his magic."
"Magic?"
"The spaceship and his technology."
"Ah. That's clever. You want to point out that advanced technology would appear similar to magic, right?" Fred, as usual, states out something simple yet elegant that even you hadn't considered. Well, maybe you had considered it, but it was still nebulous and vague, lurking in your subconscious until he went ahead and put into words. And now that he has, it all starts to take shape. The Witch would cast a fireball and Spaceman would launch his force field… and both would be amazed.
"The space trolls seemed like a kind of weak link," Fred continues on, "-but you use them in the first few pages, make it clear that is science fiction, before switching them over to the fantasy, and introducing the Witch fighting them." He pauses there. "That could be a problem. Space trolls versus the Witch already somewhat gives away our idea."
"I think so too." It's clear now. "The trolls fight Astro-Man and damage his ship. He crash lands onto the planet. The Witch thinks he is a Wizard with a magic device and decides to pretend to help him look for parts for his ship and he accepts because he thinks she is just some farmer and they continue on together – UNTIL!" You take a breath. "Until they find the missing part, at which point they fight. The Witch thinks Astro-Man is a Wizard, while he thinks she's using some kind of sufficiently advanced technology." You conclude with a flourish.
Fred asks. "But how does it end?"
"Well – the Astro-Man somehow wins, and then he flies away, ruminating on his strange experiences." You explain with a confidence of an author who has the entire story clear in her head. Writing it down is merely a formality now.
Plot Gained: (Science Fiction/Fantasy) The Magic of Astro-Man
Major Idea Gained: Sufficiently Advanced Technology and Magic
Major Idea makes it easier to create similar plots.
***
"What about -" You begin again. "-a race?"
"There are elves, gnomes, trolls, goblins," Fred lists them off. "Which one you want?"
"No, I meant, an actual race, with cars and stuff."
"Seems interesting."
"BUT-" You interject. "- it's set in space, from one end of the galaxy to another, with spaceships."
"I sort of supposed that when you said it was a space race." He appears thoughtful. "From one end of the galaxy to another, so it's pretty far. Instead of being about focused on speed, it's about endurance. Go on."
"And the hero would be a poor sort of guy, in it just for the money, and the other racers race against him." You explain further
"I know what a race is, Emily. So what's your story?"
"Well, the other racers would try to sabotage him, and he would be left behind, but still manages to win by preserving on till the end."
"Wait, so they are all racing on a space-track or something? That would make it difficult it catch up, especially when you consider that he won't have a good car from the first place, right?"
"They don't need to be on a space track, they can chart their own separate courses," You object, "that way he can still have a chance of winning, right?"
"So how would the sabotage happen?"
"They'll do it before the race."
"So the challenge is to fix it in the middle of nowhere, which he would eventually do. But that point, it kind of loses the race aspect, doesn't it?"
You hate to admit it, but he's right. "I guess... maybe?"
"What you can do is make the length shorter, perhaps a lap of the solar system, and somehow the other racers knock him off course the solar track," He explains, "You could then make him come back – I don't know, by finding a secret dangerous shortcut, or get some extra fuel from the asteroids… What do you think?" He narrows his eyes when he looks at you. "Wait a minute – you didn't think of anything beyond having space-cars and a race, did you?"
"I kind of had the idea for the poor hero." You say, but even that sounds hollow.
"Well, I guess you could make a story out of the things I said," He says, "but if you really want to make a story about racing, at least read up on it, will you?"
Plot Gained: (???/Science-Fiction) Race For Stars
***
"Alright, a classic for once. Graverobbers-" Fred raises his eyebrows slightly, but you ignore him, "-in Victorian England, chance about a body with the eyes and organs missing." He leans back in his chair. "And now they've stumbled onto the activities of a pagan cult ritualistic sacrifice to bring their Dark God to Life."
"Is this some weird mix of Poe and Lovecraft?"
"Well, mostly Lovecraft." You confirm. "Does this end badly?" He asks. "Well, sort of. They run away in the beginning, but because they are drunk, they alert the cultists who knock them out after a short fight."
He sighs. "I guess they end up being the sacrifices?"
"Yeah. Tied up with everyone chanting, and somehow one manages to free himself, trips over candles sets the whole place on fire, and catches a teeny glimpse at the Lord of the Depths beyond before it all turns to black. And then, the next morning, when the constabulary arrive, they find nothing but a rotten stench of dead fishes with odd looking pinkish scales…" You lower your voice dramatically at the end. "Well?"
"Instead of the usual zombies, undead or ghosts, I liked that you went with Lovecraftian inexplicable terror. And the story's good too."He pauses. "Yeah, I think it's fine. Or even better, maybe. I am not a horror expert."
"So you have nothing to add?" Your victory over him today looks rather hollow.
"You say like it's a bad thing." Fred chuckles.
Plot Gained: (Horror) The Grave Terror
***
"A fantasy tale this time, and yes, it is set in some medieval magical world," You answer his obvious question before he interrupts, "about a cocky farmer who must save his village from a horde of… creatures."
"Creatures?"
"Well, something of a cross between a goblin and a troll. Let's call them Troblings, no, Trobs? Troks? Troks." You decide. "Well the Troks attack Erdin's village, and now he has to save it."
"And he's just a farmer? Not secretly a prince or anything?" He asks "No, it's not like that." Yeah, that wouldn't fit the story. You didn't know what did either, but that was hardly the point.
"But he trains with a sword or quarterstaff or something?"
"No to that either." Is that
"So he is just a cocky farmer? What's he so cocky about – growing the biggest pumpkins?"
You were about to say no – when your brain somehow magically produces the missing inspiration that ties the whole story together. "Yeah, he's the best farmer in the village." The idea guides you the way. "His grows the biggest pumpkins, his crops have the biggest harvest, the plants never rot or catch a disease. He is just a magical farmer."
"Ah…" He realizes it quickly. "So, he's a druid?"
"Yep. A druid." That name is a lot better than Earth-Mage. You're secretly glad that you didn't say it out loud now.
"So why hadn't he realized his powers earlier?"
"Cause he was too proud." Your answer is immediate, but only after you say it you realize how wonderfully it feels. "He was too egoistical and self concerned, so he couldn't hear the wisdom of the Earth." You have it in it's entirety. "But as he watches his farm burn down, he feels the pain of the land, and realizes there are somethings greater than himself." You pause. "Now, awakened to his powers, he goes on to face the Torks, who contrary to expectations, are not completely evil, just led by a bloodthirsty chief who they are all forced to follow."
"Why?"
"They are tribal people. Whatever the chief says goes."
"Ah, alright, go on."
"When Erdin defeats the…" You try to think of a name, "the Scarred Chief, the previous chief, who is also a druid, takes over the position, thanks him for his service, and ensures a peaceful coexistence between Man and Tork."
"Love it." Fred calmly states just .
"What?" He has never said those words that easily before. "You do?"
"I am a little biased towards fantasy stories with odd heroes, touching origin, skilful twists with a surprise ending." You are certain he stopped just there to heighten the tension. "In short, a great story. And you said just that."
You beam at the praise. "Well…. I am a writer, after all."
Plot Gained: (Fantasy) A Great Farmer
***
"What about Communists IN SPACE?"
"Fighting a war against USA IN SPACE?"
"Well, no. They just fought a common enemy and now think that the other has got too strong."
"Wow. Nobody has heard of that before. But tell it anyway."
"There's a space captain, and his battleship-, I mean, space battleship, is being sabotaged."
"So it's something of a mystery set with a political background in a science fiction setting?"
"Sort of." You say.
"Look, mixing things up is all fine and dandy, but," Fred sighs. "you got to be proficient in them both before trying them out, otherwise it just doesn't work. And just because you set a mystery story with science parts make you good at writing them, would it?"
"At least the science parts would be good." Your defense seems lacking. "And the genre just simply covers a wide range of things, so it's not my fault I get a little carried away."
"Well, I think a handy rule would be to remove all the science fiction elements, and see if the story still works. If it doesn't, or the story is worse off, then it falls under science fiction. If it works fine, then it's not. Simple, right?"
You think over it for a moment. Yeah, even the other scientist idea seems mostly a blend of spy and mystery set in space. Maybe you could come back to it later, once you got the hang of the genre?
***
"You know I dreamt up a fantasy world?"
"What kind of fantasy world?"
"I don't remember it… just that were a lot of creatures, attacking strongholds of each other."
"Sounds riveting."
"I'll be sure to write it down in my dream diary next time."
***
"Oh, I have one with aliens. They have taken over the entire Earth, making people work, and our hero would be the one of the last members of the Resistance."
"That's terribly bleak, isn't it? And also, how are you going to make it interesting?"
"The aliens aren't actually that evil." This time, you could easily fill the blanks yourself. "They give everyone vacation and pay, and you can do all other human stuff in your free time. Everyone lives in a perfect world, with food, shelter, education. There's no crime and poverty."
"Wait – if they could do all that, what do they need us for?"
"Brain power." You say smugly. There was a whole essay about it in one of the magazines. "The machines aren't capable of abstract thought, so the aliens need us to solve problems."
"What kind of problem would be that?"
"Transcending dimensions? Preventing a collapse of the universe?" You wave your hand dismissively. "Anyway, they give us problems, and what they do with the answers is unknown. Wouldn't be alien otherwise."
"I get it. A utopia where you don't have freedom, or a free world that with all its dirt? And how does our protagonist would fight back?"
"The aliens are quite evolved, but very few in number. They live in huge black towers, looking down on our civilization. And our heroes are fight back with a suicide plan to bomb them."
"Do they get to meet the aliens?"
"Indeed." You raise your finger. "The aliens, being highly evolved, couldn't rationalize a suicidal attack, which the Resistance had successfully counted on. As the count down happens, the aliens, ask why?" You whisper the last word. "After giving equality to all, why would humans still try to overthrow them?"
"And what is the reason?" Fred leans in.
"It's simple. Equality." You take a few moments to admire your brilliance. "Equality is inequality itself. The people who work harder should receive more, while the people who don't should receive less. Everybody is different, so why should they receive the same amount of resources? And with that monologue, the bomb explodes – and the story ends."
"Brilliant…"Fred says after a long time. "That was really… brilliant." Yeah, even you were quite overwhelmed when the plot had revealed itself to you. He continuously praises you for a few minutes, while you modestly accept his compliments. Of course, Fred being Fred, still managed to throw a spanner into the works. "I mean, are you sure you don't want to send it to a magazine or something? I mean, it's such a great story, and all you want to make is a comic?"
Your reply to that is a kick to his shins.
Plot Gained: (Science Fiction) The Equal Utopia
Major Idea Gained: Equality means inequality.
***
"Another fantasy, this time in an Arabian nights setting. A clever sorcerer plays a game with a evil djinn to win a magic carpet."
"Let me guess; with riddles and tricks? Are you good at that type of stuff?"
Well, you hadn't specifically looked into the oriental world, you were reasonably certain you could pull it off. How hard could it be? "I can do it." You state.
"Fine, then." He says.
"That's it?"
"Well, these types of stories are only as good as the puzzles in them; aren't they?" Fred says. "As for the characters, saying sorcerer and djinn is enough. One or both would be wearing a turban, the other would appear out of the desert in shape of a cloud…" He trails off there. "I mean, you are good at fantasy, so I guess you could do it well. Read a few books on them and you'll be even better. As for now, all you need is some puzzles or puns that the modern American understands and you're set."
"You really like Arabian Nights, don't you?" You say sarcastically.
"There was a guy who believed he was the modern Scheherazade back in our old offices. I was his editor." He looks at you with hollow eyes. "I swear, I must have read stories of more than five thousands djinns, princess, the hellion thieves, scorpions, the cave with a magic keyword, clever daughters, stupid merchants, witty advisors, and adventurers pillaging in the eastern high seas." Then he snaps back. "So trust me on this one. Make some good puzzles, throw in some magic words, let the good guy trick the bad guy in the end… and you're done."
You open your mouth to say something, but he forestalls you. "Done." He repeats.
Plot Gained: (Fantasy) The Riddling Sorcerer
***
"Captain Jack Helsing-" You begin dramatically, but even here Fred is quicker.
"Is this another attempt based off on Captain America? Don't do it."
"It's not based -"
"We can't afford to be sued, especially now -"
"It's not based off on Captain -"
"And they will sue, cause that is their prize -"
"IT's not based on captain amerICA!" You shout. Deep breaths. Calm yourself. "I am past that phase, okay?" You explain. Fred still looks at you skeptically. "I'm listening." He finally says.
"Captain Jack Helsing dressed in full military uniform, doesn't have a shield, and instead of punching Nazis, he will kill Vampires." You leave out the part where they might have allied with Hitler. That would be too close to Captain America's territory.
"Only Vampires?" He questions.
"Only Vampires." You solemnly say. "No Nazis."
"Still think the Captain part leaves us too vulnerable. What about calling him Special Operative? Cause of the supernatural and all that?"
You are loathe to let the Captain go, but Fred's right. With some trepidation, you think of the words Special Operative Jack Helsing. It doesn't sound too bad, but it still rankles. "I am still calling the team Paranormal Corps though." You warn Fred.
"So their job is to fight Vampires?" Fred asks. "Vampires, and all other paranormal stuff. But yes, mainly vampires."
"So how do they fight? I am guessing they use modern weaponry, with perhaps holy water grenades…?"
You hadn't quite considered that part, but it seems right. "Yeah, they enter the manor which they have reports is the lair of the vampires, and then shoot with the …silver bullets and the grenades, cleverly evading their traps while showing the old bloodsuckers the power of the new age." The slick line easily rolls off your tongue. You got to use it for dialogue for one of the team somehow…
"I guess you do know the horror part…" Fred says, "What about Helsing's team?"
"Well, there's Helsing, and the other soldiers… and one of them would be perhaps an Irishmen -what?" You ask when you see him staring at you.
"I meant about their roles." Fred sighs, "Forgot that you don't read any action stories. Right, don't name the people on the team, make the Irishman a sidekick, give the leader of the vampires a name, and I think we have a story."
"I know about army stuff, okay?"
"What's the difference between a second lieutenant and the first lieutenant?"
"One of them has a higher rank?"
"Which one?"
…..
Plot Gained: (???/Horror) The Guns of Helsing
***
"Our universe is at war against an evil side, and one guy from Earth gets drafted on to fight for the good side."
"Ah, must you always present these complex plots?" Fred's ready with his sarcasm. "Why does only he get drafted again?"
"Cause he got lucky." You say. "So he joins this force of good guys, with lots of different aliens, and he gets new powers to fight the evil."
"So basically give him cosmic powers and set him loose? Aren't they afraid he'll use it against them?"
"No, they can take it back whenever they want." You say. "And he was carefully chosen, so no, he won't use it against them."
"That's quite reassuring when you say it like that. So what happens next?"
"Well…. He fights the bad guys along with his team-mates on a planet, and then leaves."
"Okay, this sounds a lot like a feel good story about drafting up and fighting the bad guys in space world war two. Is there a clever idea or interesting alien coming?"
You think for a while. "I am sure there will be one, but I can't see it yet."
"Until then, let's put this idea on hold, shall we?" Fred says.
You acquiesce. You're going to have come with some specific scenarios if you want to take this idea further….
***
"You know, I think I could come up with a small ghost story if we can't fill in the pages."
"It shouldn't come to that, surely?"
"Eh, you never know."
Gained Plot: (Horror) A Small Ghost Story
***
You have 8 plots! Assign them to pages and features.
[] 60 pages - $30,500 (base publishing cost)
[] 36 pages - $20,500 (base publishing cost)
[] 25 pages - $15,500 (base publishing cost)
[] 22 pages - $12,500 (base publishing cost)
[] 20 pages - $10,500 (base publishing cost)
[] 18 pages - $7500 (base publishing cost)
Pages ≥ 18 means a main feature!
18 > Pages ≥ 11 is a major feature!
11 > Pages ≥ 5 is a standard feature!
5 > Pages is a minor feature!
Please vote by Plan!
[] Plan Name
-[] No. of pages
-[] {Main Feature} Genre, with Plot
-[] {Minor Features} Genre, with Plot
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A/N: Never again. DO YOU HEAR ME? Never again shall I write so much!
But now that I have, what's a few more words, eh? I think the update clearly covers which ideas worked and didn't, and along with the reasons as well. If you have doubts, you can ask me, and I'll answer. All the plots with ??? and another genre meant that you lack knowledge of the genre in question and since genre-mixing isn't introduced yet, your plan gets a high threshold. (Yeah, later on, you can select two or more genres. So keep your ideas close, it will have its day once again). The DOTA thingy gets automatically high threshold (what's a batrider? At least take something from the lore).
DS's idea went quite complex, with mostly politics with a dash of sci-fi, instead of the opposite, and I hope I reflected that properly. Almost of the plot explanations are varying in length and quality, cause that depended on how the dice worked. I wanted to show how your ideas changed to form in Emily's brain, but in a few cases, it became too much/too less talking, so I tried to make it even wherever possible. The length has nothing to do with the plot generated, I assure you.
Okay, now my brain's short circuiting. I'm going to update it now and go to sleep.
Also, a very HAPPY NEW YEAR, wherever you are.