I just need to decide how blatant I want my expies to be I guess.
I'm gonna be honest. This is my first time really writing something, and it's mostly just an attempt to get me used to writing. I'll worry about things like plotting and creating characters later. There will be a lot of expys in this quest, and while will attempt to hide them that won't always be successful. Its hard to tell how much detail is too much in a written medium
 
[X]Laughter – This kid is brave, you respect that. You aren't so small a man as to lose your temper over an insult like this.
[X] Yes
 
I'm gonna be honest. This is my first time really writing something, and it's mostly just an attempt to get me used to writing. I'll worry about things like plotting and creating characters later. There will be a lot of expys in this quest, and while will attempt to hide them that won't always be successful. Its hard to tell how much detail is too much in a written medium
No I understand. I actually feel really hypocritical. Cause while I normally avoid fanfic that leans on exported characters, I've made fanfic plans that were based around expies myself. (Soul Eater and Black Cat characters in One Piece and Black Cat and Busou Renkin characters in Bleach.)
 
[X]Laughter – This kid is brave, you respect that. You aren't so small a man as to lose your temper over an insult like this.
[X] Yes
 
[X]Laughter – This kid is brave, you respect that. You aren't so small a man as to lose your temper over an insult like this.
[X] Yes

Can we sneak in some Conqueror's Haki to make our laugh a Super Laugh?
 
[X]Laughter – This kid is brave, you respect that. You aren't so small a man as to lose your temper over an insult like this.
[X]No
 
[X]Laughter – This kid is brave, you respect that. You aren't so small a man as to lose your temper over an insult like this.
[X]No

I want our character to only be able to laugh this off because he believes (most enough of) his crew is still alive.

Cause, otherwise it comes across as he doesn't care.
 
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[X]Laughter – This kid is brave, you respect that. You aren't so small a man as to lose your temper over an insult like this.
[X]No
 
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