Hawkatana
That jaywalking punk anarchist
- Location
- That place in the thing
- Pronouns
- He/Him
So, I'm presently in the midst of writing a mecha story in a fantasy setting, and is about a revolution overthrowing a tyrannical empire and the resulting wars to install democratic republics in its place. The main character of the story is a former slave who was liberated in the initial revolution and is currently fighting for the Republic to bring about a better world, and I want to make sure I'm doing it right without pissing off marginalised people and trivialising the worst thing we as a species have ever done. Especially as I am a white Australian who has never experienced slavery, nor any experience comparable to it more extreme than high school.
To summarise the major points I'm worried about for context:
To summarise the major points I'm worried about for context:
- Most importantly: slavery is portrayed as what it is: a completely negative thing that enables our species' worst and cruellest behaviours and only benefits those in power, and that violent resistence to both this institution and tyranny as a whole is not only morally-justified, but completely necessary.
- The Empire in which slavery is/was rampant, the Asterian Empire is structured like the Holy Roman Empire with 11 duchies and one crownland. It's a counterpart in culture to Western and Central Europe, primarily France, Prussia, Austria, Spain and Italy. Serfs, the working class, merchants and especially slaves are held in disdain while the nobility are exalted as paragons of virtue, grace and glory.
- Despite being a confederation of multiple autonomous, culturally-diverse duchies, it holds a very narrow view of who is considered "Asterian" on account of religious dogma, and routinely enslaves other ethnicities, even "white" cultures from the same continent as them. Though it absolutely still enslaves those of darker skin, and they get a worse deal.
- The model of slavery the empire implements is similar to Roman slavery as opposed to American chattel slavery, often as a punishment for prisoners of war and their children. Different types of slaves are specialised for different purposes (labourer, servant, gladiator etc.).
- Slaves are branded with a permanent tattoo on their face denoting them as either being or having been a slave, with the expressed purpose of causing further discrimination down the line.
- The MC, Roland is half Garl on his father's side (one of the duchies, based on France), half Efrigardian on his mother's (Scandinavian, transitioning out of a viking phase, have red hair), discriminated based on the latter. Trained as a gladiator to fight in Mail (the name for the aforementioned mecha) and learned under another gladiator taken from Abyssinia (an old name for Ethiopia).
- He was concieved through... non-consensual means after his mother was captured following a failed coastal raid, though she escaped after giving birth and not only retains agency in the plot, but is a badass in her own right.
- The revolution of the Republic of Garland ended up freeing Roland and other slaves, though he still faces discrimination from the public ("Barbarian" is a common slur against Efrigardians).
- Roland is not the only formerly-enslaved character, not even among the main characters. Seif Al-Mufti is a Zazamanci (Maghreb-inspired culture) Mail knight who was captured by the empire in a prior war and is both a sous-lieutenant in the Garl Revolutionary Army, an ace pilot and a major character in the story.
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