zhuull
SB still lying to protect Racists what else is new
True but it's absolutely terrible what with her accidentally killing her father in the first chapter, being sent to the Birdcage, and then being made everyone's prison bitch.
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Colafusion
Verified Na’vi
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- Mars
Is editing and correcting your story beyond you?
I originally thought that the basic mistakes were a result of not proofreading or using a spell check, but now, based on you ignoring corrections I'd be more likely to say stupidity and ignorance.
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- Texas
More lazyness and a strong desire to put out new content as fast as possible rather than fix old
Colafusion
Verified Na’vi
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- Mars
You can put out all the new content you want, it doesn't matter if a reader looks at the first few chapters, notes the awful spelling and thinks 'nope, this isn't worth the headache it'll give me'.
Not only that, but it only takes 10 minutes to chuck something through a service like grammarly, and that's overestimating.
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- Texas
See i take the bathesda approach to content. As long as the content is good enough people arnt gonna care about some technical issues.
Colafusion
Verified Na’vi
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- Mars
Apparently so. Of course you're forgetting the fact that your content will be a pain in the arse to actually find and read due to lack of thread marks. Not only that, but srsly, comparing skyrim, with its exceedingly rare issues, to a badly written 500 word prologue rife with mistakes?
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- Texas
Your the only one claiming its badly written. Every other comment is nothing but praise.
Grounders10
Nine-Tailed Kitsune
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- British Columbia, Canada, Mars
<.< >.> 
rofl: *Amused Kitsune is Amused*
rofl: *Amused Kitsune is Amused*
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- Earth Prime
Rather the other way around.
But yeah, the rest is a good summation. It has a highly tragic start, even by Worm standards.
zhuull
SB still lying to protect Racists what else is new
If Taylor eventually turn things around in prison it took a few chapters to get to that part and I lost all patience with the story after reading about her being dragged across the floor of the common area by her throat by one in mate to teach her a lesson.
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- USA
Tenatively watched, if only to see tiny Slaanesh make everyone in its general vicinity EXTREMELY uncomfortable.
Colafusion
Verified Na’vi
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- Mars
Probably due to the fact that most people are so used to such things that they can ignore them lol. That, and if you're not going to read it why bother commenting? I only did when you ignored corrections.
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- Texas
Ive actually been struggling with how to deal with Slaaneshes powers and still keep this SV appropriate. Eh ill cross that bridge when I come to it.
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- California
Keep in mind, Slaneesh is not beholden to simple physical pleasure. They are also the patron of excess and perfection. Possible powers could include mastery of any skill, the ability to induce intoxication with a touch, or the ability to really *really* good nachos. Addictively so, in fact.
Also, I seriously suggest you consider Colafusion's commentary. Correcting past mistakes is less important than making progress with your writing, true, but the quality of your writing is directly impactful on the quality of your story. People are reading because this is an interesting idea that has not been used before (or at least, not like this). Once the novelty wears off, the persistence (and quality) of your audience will directly correlate with how good you're writing is. You're not bad, at least by the dubious standards of the internet, but if you want this go anywhere you will need to get better.
Ridli Scott
(Verified acid sweater mutant)
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- The Periphery
Yes, we always sexualice Slaneesh because... well the obvious. But she is more than that. She is the princess of excess... all of them.
That aside: Nachos for the Nachos God!!
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- USA
MILK FOR THE KHORNE FLAKES
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- Earth Prime
It didn't take long. But to each their own.
That's a new one to me, and I approve.
There's actually multiple ones, though all are dead.
Ridli Scott
(Verified acid sweater mutant)
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- The Periphery
As far I remember not all, for example, The Nightmare queen is still alive. Besides, of course, the said Exponential Growth.
And Grimm Mother is finished, but the plot is pretty different from the original idea of Death!Danny. It has an ongoing recursive spin-off, though.
I was talking about specifically ones where she gets MtG Slivers. Of the ones mentioned, Exponential Growth is the only one with that specific element.
Ridli Scott
(Verified acid sweater mutant)
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- The Periphery
Oh, sorry I understand fics about Danny dying.
Well, after getting a PM out of the blue last week from the OP, I am intrigued as to how this goes. Hopefully he can avoid schedule slippage better than I can.
My only recommendation to the OP is find a good Beta - trust me, it's hard having to mentally shift gears properly from writer to editor.
My only recommendation to the OP is find a good Beta - trust me, it's hard having to mentally shift gears properly from writer to editor.
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- Texas
No Malal?