A Friend In Need [WORM/MLP]

So, on the whole, I noticed some issues with the story-telling structure on this second read-through, primarily in the narrative 'flow.'

Thanks for the thoughtful review, to be honest when I found my way past the piece of the story that had been giving me so much trouble these past few months I had similar thoughts. That I needed to expand the early sections of the story and build up Twilight's relationships in a more detailed way. And your dead on about my skimming past parts of the narrative.

After I finish the upcoming interlude I may try and do some minor reworking of the existing chapters, and possibly add a chapter or two between some of the already existing chapters to flesh the story out more properly. The trick is to do this without falling into the dreaded endless re-write trap so many authors fall into - As a reader I groan in frustration every time I see it happen, but rereading my own story I completly understand why it does.

Again thanks for the critique, hearing it helped confirm some of my own thoughts on the story.
 
As a probably less-useful bit of criticism, as it refers more to word-choice than structure, I have noticed some overuse of characters names in the text.

For example, there are six uses of Twilight's name in the following paragraph fragment. You could probably remove two or three instances without affecting the scene in any major way; indeed, removing words can add to the scene, making it 'punchier'.

"Oh Twilight, my Twilight, my faithful student, I have never doubted your bravery and you have always made me proud. If I could somehow spare you this know that I would. You are not being punished and you have not failed me Twilight. You are in danger though. You are extraordinarily talented and powerful Twilight, our being here in this place is proof enough of that." That caused Twilight to pull her head up and glance around. Twilight and Celestia appeared to be laying on a dim bed of stars, around them a blue nebula.


To generalise: there is a tendency to use names when simply 'he', 'she', or nothing would be a better choice, as the subject can be inferred from the surrounding text.
 
As a probably less-useful bit of criticism, as it refers more to word-choice than structure, I have noticed some overuse of characters names in the text.

For example, there are six uses of Twilight's name in the following paragraph fragment. You could probably remove two or three instances without affecting the scene in any major way; indeed, removing words can add to the scene, making it 'punchier'.

To generalise: there is a tendency to use names when simply 'he', 'she', or nothing would be a better choice, as the subject can be inferred from the surrounding text.

Thank you for the criticism, in that particular instance I purposefully used Twilight's name in repetition, because Celestia was trying to ground her, remind her, connect to her. Upon rereading it, I can agree that I probably over did it and a few instances could indeed be dropped.

After finishing the next interlude I am planning on going back through and doing a light editing round on the existing chapters to try and smooth out some things and catch stuff just like what you are pointing out. As I go through I will keep an eye out for proper names that can be replaced or dropped.

Thanks for taking the time to comment and point it out. :)
 
For that particular paragraph, it wasn't actually the initial repetition that felt jarring to me, as I could understand the reason it was there. It was the ones further on -- but like I indicated, it was a general observation, not limited to that particular paragraph.

That said, thanks for taking the time to write, and take on board criticism, no-matter how minor. :)
 
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I had intended to have all the previous chapters edited and cleaned up when before I posted this, but nah - anyone coming to this new will have to suffer through it like the old-timers did until my rewriting work ethic improves.

Requiem For A Dream (Part 1) - Tattletale

"but you look harmless enough-"

"..is Eidolon."

The first words she had said to the unicorn echoed in her head as Twilight finished her sentence and casually turned the world upside down. It wasn't the first time she had wondered just what the hell she had been thinking when she met the alien. She watched in mute horror as the Simurgh decided to crash the party Leviathan had started. Even in her shock, she drew on her power. She needed to know more like she needed air to breathe.

True. Leviathan only cares about Eidolon. Endbringers connected.
All Endbringers only care about Eidolon. Simurgh arrived to try and stop the release of this information.
Simurgh can't see Twilight Sparkle, only repercussions from her actions. Simurgh can't see the present.
Twilight Sparkle can counter the Simurgh's telepathy.
Twilight Sparkle has access to an ability that is the equal to the Simurgh's.
Twilight Sparkle has access to an ability greater than the Simurgh's.
Twilight Sparkle is-


Tattletale winced as pain spiked in her skull and she had to stop using her power. She watched the monitor as Twilight somehow turned an entire street into feathers to catch her and the others falling from the sky ship. The view on the screen rapidly filled with feathers and tumbled violently before suddenly shutting off.

Should she tell people what her power had told her? She didn't know if she could predict the ramifications even if she had been using her power, let alone without it. The screen clicked back on, showing the Simurgh and the city from a different angle, probably one of Dragon's drones. Fuck it, I've never been good with secrets anyway. She tapped the communicator on her wrist and broadcast to everyone still in the fight.

"Tattletale here. It's true, All the endbringers care about is Eidolon. They're connected to him in some manner. The Simurgh appeared to try and stop us from finding out. Somehow Twilight Sparkle can counter the Simurgh's telepathy, her precognition is hampered when something involves her. Also, I think she's mad." Tattle ignored the commotion this caused around her and watched as the Simurgh stopped everything and simply stared in the direction where the airship had crashed. She clamped down hard on her power before she could even be tempted to use it on the Simurgh again.

Her eyes flicked to another screen showing the ongoing fight against Leviathan. It wasn't good. Only about a half a dozen capes had abilities that could somehow account for or withstand Leviathan's recently revealed speed were still in the fight. They were trying their best to at least contain or herd Leviathan into already damaged areas, but he was simply too fast.

Especially since Eidolon had just headed out to sea in the middle of what looked like a major freakout. Everyone else not dead and still ambulatory had turned their efforts towards rescuing as many civilians as possible.

Too much damage, Simurgh exposure, government already calling for evacuation.
Brockton Bay will be quarantined, abandoned.
Protectorate now only hoping to prevent Leviathan from sinking large section of coast-

She shut her power down again as pain lanced through her head. Well, that's depressing. I was looking forward to seeing how Twilight's plan for the city would turn out. The blond thought as she was shoved back into her seat, the mobile command center she was in accelerating abruptly.

Dragon's/Armsmaster's program has predicted likelihood of Leviathan entering this area.

Pressing a hand against her left eye, she willed the the armored vehicle faster. She looked back at the monitor showing the Simurgh while someone scrambled to buckle themselves into the seat beside her. The Simurgh had come out of her trance and had flown into the heart of downtown. Without any capes to impede her, she was disassembling it with remarkable haste.

She saw a status indicator she had been monitoring click back to green and she switched the Leviathan monitor to a new feed. Kid Win's camera was back online. The feed shook and crackled with static and the sound of rushing wind. The Wards lay huddled on a rooftop that was illuminated in a purple glow that matched intense light emanating from the unicorn that stood in the center of the frame. Everyone she could see, including the glowing unicorn, looked like they'd been fed to Bitch's dogs. Twilight was missing half a wing, Gallant a leg, all bleeding, several unconscious. Then she noticed a building whip by in the background and blinked.

Twilight levitating entire rooftop

Huh, well thats certainly a novel mode of transportation.

Most of party too injured to continue, some need immediate medical assistance
Twilight Sparkle bleeding out from wing
Used too much power
Used too much power attacking Simurgh

When the fuck did Twilight attack the Simurgh?

Has/hasn't attacked the Simurgh

She groaned and laid her head down on the table, headache intensifying.

Can't sustain this, evacuating
Evacuating to closest rally point to their crash site-

Shit, losing the only pers-pony that had ever given the Simurgh pause was not something that needed to happen today. On top of whatever other insights Twilight had gleaned when she had done whatever the hell she had done to find the connection between the endbringers and Eidolon. She clicked her armband.

"Tattletale here, Wards and Twilight Sparkle are headed towards public school 67, several in party including Twilight are seriously injured. Scrounge a trauma team and an evacuation vehicle to meet them when they land, eta 7 minutes via flying rooftop. If you're in the area and wearing red shoes - I'd leave."

She signed off and flicked her eyes back to the Leviathan screen as whole vehicle bounced violently down a road that had obviously been on the city works to do list for quite a while. The fight seemed to be going a little bit more in the heroes' favor now. Leviathan had a new assortment of superficial wounds and was moving slower, closer to his traditional speed.

Alexandria and Legend looked like they were successfully herding the endbringer back towards the docks with Kaiser erecting metal roadblocks to assist. Occasional missile attacks from a Dragon suit detonating at just the right time and place to throw the creature just enough off balance for a punch from Alexandria or a Laser shot from Legend to knock Leviathan to the ground.

The city is going to be abandoned, why are they herding Leviathan?

Herding towards another cape
Believe cape may be able to damage Leviathan
Believe cape may be able to damage Leviathan more than Alexandria or Legend
Dragon involved, Armsmaster involved, herding towards Armsmaster
Armsmaster has a new tinker weapon
Armsmaster has been planning this for a while
Manipulated other aspects of the fight to get to this outcome
Confident
Wrong-

Tattletale slumped in her chair feeling like her brain was melting. She'd used her power too much today, helping in the evacuation and planning the response when Leviathan had revealed just how much it had been holding back. Hardly able to form words through the pain she brought her shaky hand up to her wrist to let them know, it wasn't going to work, what they were doing wasn't going to- it was too late. Alexandria hurled Leviathan through a half collapsed warehouse and his head slid to a stop directly in front of Armsmaster who jabbed his halberd, which was surrounded in a grey fog, directly into the sea monster's face.

Leviathan writhed as the grey cloud began to dissolve anything it touched. For a second Tattletale dared to hope that her power had been wrong. Then Leviathan's tail whipped around in a graceful arc and when the blur passed Armsmaster's armor lay scattered over the street in dozens of blood soaked pieces. A scream broke over the comm and then a dozen missiles exploded in Leviathan's face, followed immediately after by Dragon's mech slamming into it at a couple hundred miles an hour and detonating in an explosion that leveled what buildings still stood in the surrounding area.

Tattletale let her fingers fall away from the wrist communicator, and then almost blacked out when the command center took a corner so fast that its right side wheels briefly left the asphalt. Pained curses chorused through the vehicle as people were flung into consoles or each other and then flung back into their seats as they accelerated forward once more. With a supreme effort of will she turned her head to look at the screen displaying the other eldritch horror of the day, and stared in shock.

The Simurgh was in two pieces. It's left arm, lower left torso, left leg, and the myriad wings that had been attached to those parts of its body were frozen in mid air along with most of the previously swirling debris cloud it had been working with. The rest of the Simurgh was floating a block away and staring at its suspended body parts. Not that the Simurgh's expression had changed in the slightest, but Tattletale took a moment to enjoy imagining that it was wondering what in the hell had just happened. Cheers echoed around her as other people took in the scene. No one had ever inflicted so much damage on an endbringer.

As Tattletale stared at the screen she noticed that the frozen area formed a sphere and faint purple lightning sporadicly crackled on its surface. 'Twilight,' she thought not needing her powers to deduce that the purple alien had done yet another impossible thing. The temptation to use her power to figure out exactly what that sphere had done was almost impossible to resist, but she knew from past experience that she was very close to wiping out her ability to function at all.

Several people gasped at once, and if she had not been in so much pain she might have giggled at how ridiculous it sounded. Instead she focused on what had caused the reaction in the first place.

"Something is happening in the sphere!" the woman to her left said much too loudly, as if everyone wasn't already looking at the feed and could see for themselves. "Everything inside the area of effect seems to be drifting towards the center." Indeed that was happening, and the speed of the drift appeared to be increasing, quickly. The purple sparks started to appear more often and traveled quicker along the surface. Tattletale glanced at another feed and noticed that the Simurgh seemed to be deliberately putting more distance between itself and whatever was happening.

Unsta-

Fuck! That fucking hurt. Screw it, she didn't need her power to tell her that something bad was about to happen, it was just that kind of fucking day. She quickly tapped her wristband.

"Hard override - everyone needs to put as much distance between themselves and downtown, repeat get the fuck away from there!" The items inside the sphere had begun a counterclockwise spiral into its center where a bright spot of light had formed and was getting brighter by the second. She looked over her shoulder and shouted towards the drivers cab and tried not to hurl from what the motion did to her headache. "That fucking includes us!" She lurched back in her seat as the driver headed her advice and the other console operators began barking into their headsets.

Without warning, all the screens flashed white, followed less than a second later by the vehicle being lifted off the road. The armored transport came down hard on its left hand tires, several of which succumbed to the impact and blew out. The vehicle tipped and came down hard on its side. Tattletale clutched her harness tightly as the vehicle slid down the road on its side and tossed everything not locked down inside it towards the new floor.

When the unholy screech of metal on pavement finally came to an end as the vehicle slid to a stop, Tattletale took twenty seconds just to hang in her harness. She heard other people starting to move around and unbuckle themselves, checking each other for injuries. She should be doing something like that, but..fuck, she just needed a moment before recognizing that this day wasn't over yet.

Someone abruptly grabbed her around her waist and released the five point harness she had been strapped into, her head very nearly swung into the console in front of her before whoever it was increased their grip and pulled her sideways and out of her seat. Gently she was lowered to stand on the base of the console that was now the obstacle strewn floor.

She looked behind her to see Catherine, the much taller and fitter PRT tech that had been working the next seat over from her. The tech gave her a weary smile, marred by a sizable cut in her right cheek and pointed towards the back of the vehicle where someone had just pushed open a door now above their heads letting in daylight and a steady stream of rain.

"Let's go," Catherine said, "Evacuation command has already dispatched a truck to pick us up. The explosion, whatever the hell that was, was apparently enough to convince Leviathan that he'd had enough for today. Alexandria just came in over the comms saying he took a quick dive back into the ocean minus a few bits and missing most of its face from what Armsmaster did."

Tattletale nodded as she shuffled towards..Rick, that was his name, who was helping to boost people up through the door.

"What about the Simurgh?"

"Missing half of itself, and drifting nonchalantly towards the southwest. Most of the heroes still onsite have had close to the maximum allowed exposure limit already, and nobody had planned for a Simurgh fight when we started today. Plan is to pull everyone back and regroup, and wait for some reinforcements that are staging in Boston before we try and drive her off - though honestly if missing half her body hasn't been enough to discourage her - I'm not sure what the hell is."

Tattletale grunted in pain and agreement as Rick hoisted her up into the rain and the arms of a waiting PRT officer. She quickly got out of the way and tried to watch her step on the slick side panels of the former mobile command center. Looking out she realized that they were most of the way up captain's hill. One of the nicer areas of the Bay, at least it had been. Now, despite the rain, it was mostly on fire.

She was a cynical supervillain with a fucked up history, was being blackmailed into working for a complete sadist, and had been helping to organize an a fight against not one but two lovecraftian horrors and still the vista in front of her staggered. From the elevated vantage point where they had crashed you could see the whole city, or what was left of it.

Downtown was simply gone, anything within about 8 blocks of where the sphere had been, just didn't exist anymore. Past that lay block upon block of flattened buildings, and beyond that was fire. If it weren't for the network of streets, it would have been hard to tell there had ever been a city here at all. Looking towards the fringes she could see lines of cars and what might have been crowds of people all trying to make their way from what had once been their home.

There had been worse endbringer attacks, but not many. And the Simurgh was still fucking here. Drawing her gaze towards the southwest it took her a second, but she spotted the floating white speck that had to be the creature in the distance. Just what the hell were they going to-

A pillar of rainbow colored light snapped into existence not far from where the Simurgh was floating. It pierced the cloud banks and appeared to continue all the way into space. The area around the pillar seemed to take on a glow. Tattletale felt a hum in the air and what felt like alternating waves of comforting warmth and cold despair washed over her.


Twilight Sparkle is-
Twilight Sparkle is-
Twilight Spa-

She dropped to her knees on the slick metal beneath her, cradling her head in her hands while a feeling of dread rose up from inside her oscillating in time with whatever was emanating from that rainbow pillar. Her power was useless, but something deep inside herself was telling her something bad was about to happen, something worse than an endbringer attack.

She looked out through the pain at the rainbow pillar that was somehow beautiful and awful simultaneously. The PRT troopers and staff around her were talking frantically to each other or to their wristbands. They felt it too, but there was nothing they could do against this. It was beyond. Nothing was going to stop whatever that was.

Then a jagged tear in the sky appeared, stretching a thousand feet from the ground near the base of the pillar of light into the sky. Suddenly it was night and Lightning crashed all over the city. As quickly as it appeared the rainbow pillar winked out of existence, taking the comfort and dread with it. The tear in the sky seemed to merge into the new born night and vanish like a mirage. The clouds grew, billowed and darkened as lightning danced between them. Rain that had been letting up intensified into a downpour hard enough that the fires started to go out.

A voice felt more than heard echoed through the city, but Tattletale couldn't make out any of the words. They felt angry, commanding. She stared up at the growing storm, and a nighttime that had arrived hours before it should have. None of this made any goddam sense and she was sick of being out of the loop. She was probably going to be able to do fuck all down there, going down there was probably a one way ticket to a quick death, but at least maybe she would die knowing what the hell was happening.

She glanced around the neighborhood they were in.

No car
Evacuated with vehicle
Evacuated with vehicle
Looks vacant, owners on long term vacation, car in garage
Car in garage, spare keys in house-

Wincing and hoping that there were also some painkillers in that house Tattletale struggled back to her feet and walked towards the driver's cab, and from there towards whatever answers were to be found.
 
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A bit of a Authorial note - In writing and outlining the next chapter, I have decided on a new course. Tattletale's interlude will become the first part of a multi perspective interlude. I'm going to release this whole interlude together, as I think it should be read in one sitting. I kind of wish I had the epiphany a few days ago, as I know several people were disappointed in not seeing the Luna/Simurgh battle after having so patiently waited for it. Fear not, the battle kicks off the next part of the interlude. I have had a bit of an inspiration kick and have been able to churn out a good amount of story the past few days, so hopefully you won't have to wait to long. I am so very tempted to post things, but even the title of the new interlude is a little spoilerly, so...I must resist.
 
A bit of a Authorial note - In writing and outlining the next chapter, I have decided on a new course. Tattletale's interlude will become the first part of a multi perspective interlude. I'm going to release this whole interlude together, as I think it should be read in one sitting. I kind of wish I had the epiphany a few days ago, as I know several people were disappointed in not seeing the Luna/Simurgh battle after having so patiently waited for it. Fear not, the battle kicks off the next part of the interlude. I have had a bit of an inspiration kick and have been able to churn out a good amount of story the past few days, so hopefully you won't have to wait to long. I am so very tempted to post things, but even the title of the new interlude is a little spoilerly, so...I must resist.
You are a teasing teaser who teasingly teases.
 
Twilight Sparkle uses Summon Bigger Pony!

It is super-effective!

Sooo looking forward to the next update.
 
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Arise Dead thread, arise to 10k new words of story! The new content starts labeled part 2, part 1 is the previously released Tattletale interlude. A huge amount of thanks is due to Deadpan29, who over the past week has graciously beta-read all of this several times and found countless grammar, phrasing, and other mistakes. If any still remain, its because there were too many to catch for any mortal.

So without further delay:

Requiem For A Dream (Part 2/6) - Luna



..ALL DREAMS MUST END, AND THINE ENDS NOW!!"

Luna spoke as she simultaneously finished her working. While this sphere's moon was not hers it was of the night and so answered her call faithfully. The storm clouds directly above exploded as the magic of her working overcame them. Behind the cover of the clouds the moon had drawn close and now shone with an intensity that briefly rivaled that of the sun itself. The song of moonlight and magic reached a crescendo and a lance of lunar light and will pierced the atmosphere and struck the floating form of her opponent.

She opened her eyes as the light from her lance dissipated. Spurred by her magic the clouds once more grew to cover the moon, rain coming down in sheets as lightning crackled overhead. Before her, where the creature had been, now only a hole. Warily she trotted forward and stopped at its rim. Crystalline feathers far to dense to be carried off by the wind lay scattered about the fathoms deep abyss.

Acting on instinct deeper than thought, she transformed into mist just as most of a building flew through the spot she had been standing in. Reforming facing the direction of the throw, she leapt off the ground and spiraled to the side to avoid more telekinetic savagery. She spotted her opponent, missing more pieces of itself, but alive yet. Alive and apparently wishing a duel. A feral grin spread across Luna's face as she spun and dove around the projectiles thrown her way from all directions.

Her horn lit and reaching into the other she drew forth her battle raiment. Forged from moonlight and magic, luminescent plate and chain began to materialize on her frame, flowing like molten silver and solidifying into a an armor last worn more than a thousand years ago. The impact of something large and metallic knocked her sideways in the air, but could not suppress her adrenaline fueled smile as she felt the cool touch of lunar plate upon her muzzle. Intricate and ancient runes inscribed themselves in patterns both beautiful and deadly across the armor as the familiar weight of wingblades and edged hoofguards settled onto her body.

She rolled and spun through the air as a spiked and weighted braid of metal wove itself among the night sky of her tail. Now properly attired she focused her magic on the objects around her. The blizzard of projectiles grew as Luna added to the storm and wrested control over some already airborne. She danced the sky with death as her partner, but she was not one to be led in a dance such as this. Her horn grew brighter and the buildings and strange vehicles caught in her opponent's telekinetic grasp shuddered. Some dropped or flew into space, while others, guided by Luna, slammed into the alabaster figure knocking it out of the air to slide across the ground.

Luna dove forward, and extending a wing, sliced through a shield of crystal feathers that her opponent had brought up to protect against the attack. The razor sharp feathers struck back, scrapping against her armor but also finding flesh to cut. Luna rolled away through the air and was blindsided by a large mass of yellow metal and glass. She crashed through the one of the last standing walls of whatever structures had been here before her arrival and transformed into flock of ghostly bats before she could be crushed between the ground and whatever she had been hit with.

She flew in a hundred directions at once, and then dove and swirled around her enemy's wings and between them before reforming inside her opponent's winged guard. Hooves laced with mass increasing magic, she spun and bucked the alabaster nightmare in the face. Even as the creature was hurled backwards by her hit, its wings once again sought purchase against her armor, cutting grooves into its surface and slicing her lip open in a spray of blood.

Luna swung her head with the blow to minimize the cut while closing her wings and dropping to the ground to avoid a gigantic mechanical carriage that sped through her previous location and proceeded to smash a massive hole in one of the few standing towers by the city's bay. The ground rumbled beneath her hooves and she teleported to the billowing cloud bank above just before an enormous fireball erupted from the street. Even two thousand feet above the ground she could feel its searing heat against her armor.

She reared up and slammed her hooves into the clouds beneath, unleashing a blinding cascade of lightning towards the white speck far below. Using the lightning as cover she extended her bladed wings, dove, and teleported into the face of her opponent. She twirled and her blades sliced into the crystalline flesh beneath her. Her own flesh cried out as the living blades of her foe retaliated and found purchase on her body.

Her tail lashed out and wrapped around the remaining leg of the creature and the edged lunar metal woven in it bit deep. She increased her mass many thousand fold and swung her tail and the creature now trapped by it with all the force she could conjure. The beast was flung with speed enough that it did not so much as hit the water of the bay, but push it out of the way before slamming into the bedrock beneath. Luna settled to the ground and swung her tail in a complicated movement, allowing the leg still bound in it fall to the ground, cratering the pavement beneath.

Blood dripped from between the gaps between the joints and plates of her armor, and flowed from her lip and the top of her head where the stump of her left ear throbbed painfully. The sky roiled above as the storm grew fiercer still, and small hail stones began to plink against her armor.

The ruined form of her opponent rose from the waves, its former beauty cut from it as its limbs had been. It's face was marred by dozens of deep gashes. One wing remained whole and wrapped around a one-armed torso that was marred by the stumps of the others now littering the city around them.

Luna leapt once more into the sky and slowly began to make her way towards the bay and the creature above it. Ducking, teleporting, and weaving around a renewed telekinetic storm that almost seemed half-hearted in comparison to the barrage she had earlier endured. Retaliating in kind by altering the flight and accelerating thousands of pieces of hail to hypersonic speed into the body of her foe. She began to channel her magic once more through the moon, preparing a spell she hoped would end this.

Jerking her head back she narrowly avoided a gigantic metal beam that exploded from the side of the ruined building she was passing. The movement caused the line of blood flowing from her ear to divert and flood into her eye, and she lost the pattern of the working she had been preparing. Ire rose in her as the metal girder crashed into a line of overturned alien carriages.

"THY PETTY SCRYING SHALL AVAIL THEE NAUGHT. DOES NOT THY VISION SPEAK TRUTH? THY HOUSE OF CHANCE BE SCATTERED UPON THE WIND AND THE MACBRE PLAY'S STAGE LIES BROKEN. SURRENDER THYSELF UNTO THE COMING DAWN, RETURN WHENCE THOU CAME AND AWAIT A MORE WORTHY DREAMER FOR THY POWER. W-"

Her entreaty was ended as she found herself buried under a thousand tons of steel, bricks, and glass accelerated past the speed of sound. Reacting to instincts honed in battles long forgotten to time she dissolved herself into mist as soon as she was struck. The pain from the blow was substantial even as she became not so. As the boom and shockwave echoed out across the ruined city she seeped through the cracks and reformed into a new shape upon the settling pile of detritus.

Lightning made more of moonlight and magic than electricity rained down and struck her alabaster foe, driving it back as her new bipedal shape solidified. A flowing cape of green settled upon new shoulders as a deep cowl came to rest on her brow. Long sleeves covered her glowing minotaur-like arms and her voice deepened to a masculine tone as she spoke once more.

"FIE, SO BE IT. IF THOU CANST UNCOUPLE THYSELF FROM SUCH A FOAL'S FANTASY AS THIS, THEN IT SHALL BE AS THOU WISHEST. COME, COME AND MEET THY MAKER UPON THE FIELD OF BATTLE, AS IT WILL BE THY LAST!"
 
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Requiem For A Dream (Part 3/6) - Flame Dancer


Flame Dancer lay against the rough and wet asphalt as the rain picked up again and tried not to think of the dozens of throughly squished cockroaches beneath her as she began to blink the spots from her eyes. A pained groan came from her left and she turned to see Twilight struggle to get her forelegs underneath her and with a rictus grimace across her face, succeed in lifting her barrel from the pavement. When she turned towards her she had to fight an instinctive flinch. Twilights right eye was swollen shut and marred by a horrible slash through its center that was oozing blood and other fluids down her muzzle. Combined with her badly singed fur and grisly truncated wing her friend looked like a zombie parody of herself.

Forcing herself to her own feet, newly acquired bruises and cuts tried made themselves known to her as she reached out and gently hugged Twilight to her chest, doing her best to avoid the pony's injuries. Twilight sniffled and with effort raised one of her legs to return the hug.

Twilight started to talk, but soon trailed off into nearly inaudible mumbles. "I…I…I'm so…no, no, its not the time for that, not the time, not enough time, keep it together, have to keep it together for my friends…ah" She shook herself and with a deep rattling breath started again. "I'm so glad your okay Flame Dancer, we, we need to get moving, we need to find Taylor…And…and then the others too, we need to make sure they're ok."

"Ok Twilight, thats-" She was cut off as the street once again rumbled beneath them and a unholy screech of a building collapsing echoed from several blocks to their east. A plume of dust erupted from the impact point, but with the steadily increasing rain she soon lost sight of it. The early night that had come with the other pony didn't help either. The other pony! There was another pony like Twilight, Twilight knew her! Oh I hope she's okay, Twilight needs someone so badly…And maybe, if, if she knows how to go back to Twilight's home, I can go too, away from this, away from that other me, forever.

With that bright thought in her mind she gently released Twilight and stood up from her crouch. Taking as much care as she could, she wrapped her arms around the unicorn and gently lifted to help Twilight get her rear legs underneath her. With an unsteady wobble Twilight slowly put a hoof forward, and then another. After she had moved all four hooves she let out a small puff of relief and twisted her neck to face her.

As the earth shook again, Flame Dancer nodded at the unspoken question and replied "Let's go find them."

They stumbled over the broken pavement in the dark, careful not to loose sight of the trail of bugs in the dim light cast by fires fueled from gas main leaks and the near constant lightning that arced between the clouds above. It was another two blocks before they heard a muffled yell coming from the direction the bugs were pointing to. Abandoning caution and appearing to momentarily forget her injuries Twilight leapt forward and began a awkward limping cantor towards the sound, Flame Dancer running close behind.

As they got closer they picked out a light flashing through the rain and a voice that slowly got clearer. "Over here! stay to the left side of the street!" Uber. Twilight shifted her course to the left and she followed along until Twilight came to a panting, skidding halt in a circle of light cast by a propane lantern held up by the one time villain.

She saw Twilight give him a relived smile, which she mirrored before a gasp escaped her throat. As Uber lowered the lantern, its circle of light illuminated a body laying on the ground behind him, its right arm pinned just below the shoulder underneath a pile of bricks and twisted metal.

"Ta-Skitter!" Twilight cried as her eyes had also been drawn to the sight. Taylor's face was hidden behind her mask, but she tried to give a cheery wave with her free hand.

"Its good to see you guys, I-Twilight! Are you ok?!"

"Am I ok? I'm not the one buried under building! Oh, this is all, its like before, I saved them…but then he…killed them, killed them all, no, not this time, keep it t- I'll…I'll get you out Skitter, Just let me think for a second."

"The whole pile is unstable, I've been looking for a way to free her, but I'm pretty sure moving anything is going to bring the whole pile down on top of her," Uber interjected. "We're going to need more people or some of your mojo if we are going to get her out safely."

"Okay, okay if we can't move the pile, I'll just move her. Uber, Flame Dancer, please get back about ten feet." Twilight said as she laid down beside Skitter and extended one of her forelegs so that it rested against skitters stomach. She closed her good eye and a soft purple glow surrounded her horn. "Skitter, this is probably going to hurt, a lot."

"Do it"

With a bright flash and pop Twilight and Skitter disappeared and reappeared on the ground fifteen feet from the collapsed wall. Skitter let out a pained cry as the pile of rubble shuddered and slid down to cover the area they had just left. Uber and Flame Dancer rushed over to the pair as Twilight's horn began to glow again and a similar glow encased Skitter's crushed right arm. Flame Dancer knelt beside Twilight in worry as Uber stood still for a moment before crouching down and examining Skitters arm intently. Blood seeped through her costume between her shoulder and her elbow, and though she didn't know much about anatomy, how the arm was laying just looked wrong.

"Her upper arm bone is crushed pretty badly, luckily it doesn't look like the artery was damaged. It's going to need surgery, not much we can do besides immobilize it as best we can for now." He stood back up and pulled off his vest and then his shirt and then began to tear neat even strips off of it.

Uber quickly fashioned the strips into a sling and after slipping Skitter's head and arm through it, Twilight gently levitated her into a standing position. Flame Dancer stood up and gave Skitter a half-hug around the uninjured side of her body just in time to steady her as a huge fiery explosion lit up the sky a couple of miles to the east. The ground bucked beneath them, but Uber grabbed them both and seemed to know just how to move to allow them all to remain standing.

"Okay, I don't know what that was, but the good news is that the battle seems to be moving away from us." Uber said in as serious a voice as Flame Dancer had ever heard him use. "Skitter do you still have a bead on where the others are holed up?" She nodded and pointed in the direction of a cross street.

"Yeah, I think, I think almost everyone else is about 4 blocks down that road, in…it feels like a small warehouse space of some kind."

"Anyone else between us an them?"

"Not that I can see with my bugs, but most of them are useless in rain this heavy. If anyone's out in the open I wouldn't be able to sense them."

"Alright, then let's get getting while the getting's good."

Uber started off down the street with a measured pace that Flame Dancer was sure was meant to go easy on Skitter and Twilight. He held the lantern out in front of him to light their way as they sloshed through several inches of deepening water, the pounding rain beginning to overcome what remained of the storm water system. What would have been a five minute walk took ten at their pace, but finally they reached an intersection with an old gas station garage on the opposite corner with lights flickering in the windows.

Standing underneath a ramshackle metal awning, just outside what looked like the garage's office and illuminated by light spilling from the doorway, stood Aegis. A smile spread across his face when he noticed them and ignoring the rain he dashed out to meet them. Just before he reached them a flash lit up the city from the east, followed by a rolling staccato boom of hundreds of lightning strikes. Aegis Looked up nervously as cloud lightning danced above them, he turned about and waved for them to follow him inside.

The unholy din of the pounding rain on the garage's metal roof was the first thing she noticed, but after a moment to adjust to it and another to appreciate the first time she'd been under shelter since the battle with Leviathan began, she noticed everyone else in the building.

A chorus of smiles, tired waves, and a sudden appearance of Vista hugging Twilight about her neck greeted them. Kid win was sitting at an old wooden desk with an array of tinker tech and antique electronics scattered around him. Leet and Gallant were both wrapped in bandages on a large work bench in the center of the room and being tended to by a tall woman in a torn PRT officer's uniform. Gallant appeared unconscious, but Leet had a relieved smile for them.

Clockblocker was leaning nonchalantly against what looked like an old shop towel suspended in mid air. Shadow Stalker stood by an open door at the far side of the room and after a cursory glance returned to staring out it. A cape she didn't know that had evacuated the stadium on the air barge with them, and who she still didn't know their name had commandeered a ratty old sofa, and a teenager with a splint around his right leg was leaning his back against a large metal toolbox.

Clockblocker of course was the one who spoke first. "Well look what the Endbringers drug in." Then in an overly posh female accent he continued, "I just love the style you guys have going there, sort of a Zombie apocalypse meets shipwreck survivor motif. It's going to be all the rage this year, I've got a sixth sense for these things you know."

Clockblocker suddenly found himself enveloped in Twilights magic and drug into the extended hug she was having with Vista, as she started to laugh and cry simultaneously.

"Something I said?" He said with a crooked smile as he was pulled tight into the hug.

"I…(hic)…ha…I really needed that Clock. Its just, you somehow just reminded me vividly of two of my best friends back in Equestria, also I'm just so happy that you all are okay."

"Okay might be stretching it, alive at least." Aegis interjected with an apologetic seriousness. "Leet and Gallant really need actual medical treatment sooner rather than later." He paused and looked closer at Twilight, "for that matter so do you. And it certainly wouldn't hurt the rest of us either."

"I, I don't think I can do another major levitation like I did before, not safely, not right now." Twilight said in a disappointed tone.

"Hey, thats okay, we just need to find some other transportation. Kid's been trying to get comms back up, all of our stuff got fried in the explosion. How's it going Kid?"

"Another 10, maybe 15 minutes. If I can get it to work at all that is."

"Okay, so any of you happen to see any cars or trucks on your way here?"

"Ones that weren't on fire?" Clockblocker interjected as he was released from the telekinetic hug.

Uber shook his head. "If you're going to be picky, then no, I don't think you're likely to find anything serviceable anywhere east of us. Which is where we all came from."

The building shook and its rafters groaned as another titanic boom echoed over incessant noise of the rain. Dust rained down from the ceiling and Flame Dancer couldn't contain a series of sneezes that reminded her of just how many bruises she had accumulated today.

"Alright then here's the game plan. Uber, Clockblocker, and I are going to spread out and search to the west for a working vehicle or help. We'll meet back here in 20 minutes and see if Kid's got comms back up and go from there."

"Somebody call for a ride?" Everyone jerked in surprise and spun towards the open door. Leaning against the frame and twirling a set of car keys around her fingers stood a short blonde wearing a purple domino mask, long rain coat, and a weather-beaten fedora. A wide vulpine smile stretched across her face.
 
23
Requiem For A Dream (Part 4/6) - Chevalier

A hush fell over the room as all eyes focused on the big screen. A skinny technician, glancing quickly between the scrolling text on his terminal and the main screen was the first to break the silence.

"Did it, did she, did Death Metal Pony just rip a leg off the Simurgh?"

A pause, then a loud, "FUCK YEAH!" from a burly cape standing in the back of the room set off a chorus cheers and claps. A screeching whistle from Director Preston quieted the room back down in a hurry.

"Keep focused people, this shit ain't over yet. Thompson! Why's screen three still filled with static? Whats the status on UAV-4?"

"No telemetry sir, Its gone. The last shockwave just scrapped 2 as well."

"Fuck, ETA on replacements? We need those eyes on site. Fry, give me a sitrep on Brockton Mobile Command."

"UAV's are being fueled at Logan. Time to site 10 minutes."

"10 minutes! Bullshit 10 minutes, this thing could be over in 2 minutes, get those things rolling."

"Sir we're still getting no response from Brockton Mobile, local command has officially transferred to Rally-1, Alexandria is on site."

"Good, patch her through and detail one of those replacement UAV's to do a flyby of the last known location of Brockton Mobile. And get someone on the goddamn line that can tell me why the sun decided to set 2 hours early."

Chevalier stood against the wall and watched the controlled chaos of the Boston PRT operations center as he waited for orders. He was worried about Hannah. He knew she'd escaped Leviathan's initial attack, but her comm had failed not long after and no one had seen her since. Unfortunately, he did know what happened to Armsmaster. One more of the original wards gone forever. Who else had died today? How many were still to die before the day was over? No matter how many Endbringer battles you had been to, there was no getting over the nervous dread of it.

The rest of his team and others were being staged on the roof for a teleport if and when the call came in. The Thinkers in Chicago were still debating if further cape deployment would help or hinder the alien's battle against the Simurgh. He told his teammates that he was coming down here to try and get a better picture on what was going on, so that when they were deployed they'd have a better idea what they were jumping into. All of that was true, but really he was down here to distract himself, something external to direct his thoughts to. As one of the static filled screens showed the now truncated form of the Simurgh rise from the ocean his emotions swirled. This distraction isn't working very well.

He clenched and unclenched his hand slowly, he wasn't sure what he should be feeling. Elation? No one, not even Zion, had ever caused this much damage to an Endbringer. Disappointment? Regardless of the damage, the Simurgh was continuing the fight. Sadness? At the loss of life and the erasure of another irreplaceable piece of humanity at the hands of the Endbringers and these new aliens. Resentment?Irrationally thinking on the fact that after all the sacrifice they had made over the years in battling the Endbringers, it looked like a couple of aliens were going to step in and save them. If humanity was going to be saved, why hadn't someone done it before the loss of so much, and he so many friends? Hope? Real hope? Even with the devastation of the day, if it ended with a dead endbringer, it could be the start of something. A turnaround humanity desperately needed.

Last he wondered what he would see, if he met these aliens in the flesh. Before the Endbringer attack Alexandria had been trying to arrange just such a meeting. Were they like us, simply more powerful? Or were they something truly…other?

"…NASA just confirmed that earth's rotation at the equator has increased to 1,954 kilometers/hour, no they can't explain it…"

"…Director we have Thinker confirmation that something Twilight Sparkle did, does seem to have limited or interrupted the Simurgh's singing, but we instituted those protocols for a reason and I'm reluctant to override them when we understand so little about what is going on, and so many capes here close to the maximum exposure limit…"

"…NWS reports abnormal tidal readings across the country, the storm over Brockton Bay is expanding and moving contrary to any of their models…"

"Oh shit-" Conversation cut off as what looked like an entire city apartment block punched through the sound barrier and blindsided the alien horse. Two more screens went blank in the resulting shockwave from the hit. The technicians frantically worked their comm sets trying to reestablish contact. One of the screens returned. A jittering image of the impact site, subtitled Dragon-fast2. He let out a relived breath as it picked up and focused on a glowing midnight mist rising from debris.

"…45 seconds to Rally-1, you should be getting my telephoto feed now…"

"Confirmed Dragon, good signal, we-what the hell?!"

What the hell?! His thoughts echoed as the mist reformed not into the armored horse, but Eidolon. Another screen clicked back on with a much better feed. Then the Eidolon clone spoke, and spoke with his voice. If it had not been for the alien language, he would not have been able to tell the difference. It even stood in one of the cape's favored poses.

"Alexandria, are you seeing this?"

"Yes." She paused for a moment, "Does anyone have a location on the real Eidolon?"

"Mind games." Chevalier said, mostly to himself, but Preston was close enough to hear him.

"What, explain that."

"If what Twilight and Tattletale said earlier is true, then the only thing the Endbringers really care about is Eidolon. If Twilight was somehow able to communicate that to this new one, it may be some kind of psychological ploy."

"The Endbringers seemed to care fuck all whether Eidolon was facing off against them before."

"Jus-"

Then conversation ended as the alien in Eidolon's body teleported to avoid another hurled building. She? He? Reappeared briefly, slashed a hand, and half of the Simurgh's face simply ceased to be. He appeared again, raised his other hand, and a searing beam of energy shot from it. The Simurgh twisted in a blindingly fast movement but the beam still scored a deep line against its remaining torso before cutting off.

Chevalier stared in disbelief at the monitors. The alien was fighting like Eidolon. The alien was fighting like Eidolon had in the beginning, using powers he hadn't seen the real one use in years. A giant whirling cloud of material, at least a mile wide rose up from the remains of the city and engulfed Eidolon and the Simurgh momentarily before the vortex of material exploded outwards in all directions. Something hit one of the UAVs and its feed tilted and then began to spin in a dizzying blur before snapping off to a blue screen.

The Simurgh was now clutching something in her remaining hand. Dragon's feed and the remaining UAV tried to zoom in on it as the Endbringer dove and ducked around more beams and explosions that appeared from nowhere.

A jagged hole appeared in mid-air and the Simurgh spun into it. The Alien yelled in rage in Eidolon's voice and pursued the Endbringer into the hole just before it sealed back up. Twenty seconds of shocked silence ticked by as everyone held their breath, then every feed flashed white and went dead at the same time.


Everyone yelled into their comms at once.
 
24
Requiem For A Dream (Part 5/6) - Vista

Vista finished spreading out the old packing blankets and towels in the bed of truck Tattletale had arrived in. She absently itched around the bandage covering the cut on her face. When she had asked how the Villain had found them Tattletale had smirked and simply replied, "psychic." She frowned as she hopped out of the truck and walked back over to where the psychic was talking with Twilight, Skitter, and Aegis.

"…You're the girl from the roof! I met you the first night I got here."

"Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the worlds, she walks into mine."

"Huh?" Twilight replied looking to Skitter for clarification.

"Movie ref. No, let's not get sidetracked. Vista, is the truck ready for Gallant, Leet, and Jonathan?"

"As ready as it's going to be, even with that padding we're going to have to go slow if we don't want to rattle everyone's bones out of their bodies. I'm not sure if the thing ever had suspension."

"Sorry, I didn't have time to browse Captain's Hill for an Escalade."

"Easy," Carlos said patting the air with his hands. "We're grateful." He raised his voice and called inside the door of the garage to be heard over the rain. "Lieutenant Joarez, we're ready out here." After a response that was lost in the rain noise, Aegis turned and stepped into the back of the truck. Skitter and Twilight backed away from the doorway and she followed behind so she wouldn't get in the way.

Uber and Lieutenant Joarez eased through the doorway awkwardly, each holding the edges of a blanket that was cradling the unconscious Dean. Oh Dean, you're the last person that deserves this. After them came Dennis and Sofia also cradling opposite sides of the blanket and Lightsout came last cradling the bottom of Dean's remaining leg. It hurt to see, but she didn't look away from it. Sometimes this is what being a hero was.

Uber and Joarez handed him off to Carlos and he stepped further back into the truck bed before gently lowering Dean and sliding him the rest of the way in. Everyone marched back inside to get Leet ready for the same procedure. Flashes of light and a couple more dull booms echoed from the east, but whatever was going on out there seemed to have calmed down for a moment. As the others started working their way back outside with Leet, Tattletale turned to Twilight again.

"So, I don't think I've ever been more wrong in a first impression with someone, or somepony. Even before I got my power. That was quite a rainbow light show you put on out there earlier. What was that?" Twilight looked down and to the side, looking upset. Vista turned a glare towards Tattletale who brought up her hands in surrender. "Hey, I don't mean to upset you, but this is an Endbringer battle we're talking about, and one that has already thrown out all the rules we thought we knew. You probably did more damage to one than everyone combined has up to this point, but that rainbow thing, it gave me the serious wiggins."

Vista wanted to tell Tattletale to stop upsetting Twilight, her friend had already gone through so much today, and she was so badly hurt. She didn't know how the pony was still standing with all the injuries she had, but Tattletale was right. Any information was important, and she knew just what the Villain meant when she described the feeling she got from whatever that Rainbow pillar was, apparently something Twilight had done.

"…I…It was…wrong. I shouldn't have ever done something like that. I was just so mad and scared, and I thought, I thought everyone was dead and lots of people probably are, and its all my fault." Twilight started to sniffle quietly and Vista knelt down and carefully wrapped an arm around her in comfort. She looked back up to find Tattletale looking a little remorseful, but the girl doggedly continued.

"Hey, we all make mistakes. I have certainly made more than my share. The important thing to remember is everyone that was hurt today, wouldn't be if Endbringers hadn't attacked. Thats on them, not you. But we still need to know what that was, who stopped you, and who is currently fighting the Simurgh."

Vista looked up at Tattletale in shock, trying to get her head around everything that had just been implied. Tattletale put her hand to her head and winced a little, before continuing. "The answer to the last two is the same person, no, no, not a person…pony. Someone else from your planet showed up. That's who's been throwing down with the Simurgh since whatever it was that happened." A gasp escaped Vista's throat at this as Tattletale winced again and paused taking a deep breath. Carlos, Dennis, and Sophia came over as Uber and Joarez finished settling Leet and Jonathan into the truck.

"Not only did they stop you and pick a fight with the Simurgh, they caused the tear in the sky and the sudden night! Just who is this pony?"

Everyone except Tattletale had varying levels of shock on their face now. Twilight, seemingly more at ease now that the questions had veered slightly away from whatever it was that she had done, turned back to look at the group that now formed a loose half circle around her. A small smile even graced her marred face as she spoke.

"That was Princess Luna, The Princess Of The Night. She's one of the two rulers of my country. She's also, she's also a good friend. I wouldn't worry about the early night, I'm sure she'll be happy to put the sun back on schedule once she…Oh, oh no, she's out there, maybe all alone, fighting that thing. I…I've got to go help her!" Twilight jerked in her arms, like she meant to run off into the storm right that second.

"Hey easy," Vista said. "Twilight calm down, look at yourself. You're in no condition to go anywhere but a hospital."

"Vista's right Twilight," Aegis spoke up in a calming voice. "If she's half as tough and smart as you, I'm sure she's fine. And I doubt she's alone. They may have been scattered by the explosion, but the Protectorate is not going to give up the fight. I bet reinforcements are already on the way or in the fight right now."

"…Don't worry, she'll bring back the sun? I did just hear that?" Dennis whispered to Uber who had come over during the explanation.

"I, for one, welcome our new pony overlords."

"You would."

"I know Aegis, I know I'm in no shape to do this, but I just have to go. She's all alone in a new world, she hasn't even gotten speaking modern equestrian down yet, she wont even be able to talk to anyone. I respect your advice, I really do, but she's my friend and I'm going." Twilight seemed to straighten up as she finished speaking and something steel-like, almost regal, settled into her posture. Vista knew that they were not going to talk her out of this.

"Then I'm going with you Twilight." She said as she stood up. Twilight looked like she was about to object but was cut off as more people spoke up.

"What the hell, what's the worst that could happen." Dennis said as he circled around and threw an arm over her shoulder. Uber looked back at the truck bed and saw Leet giving him a thumbs up. After hesitating another second he stepped forward and knelt as if a knight before his queen.

"I too will join you in this quest my liege. I would face the peril beside you."

Flame Dancer, Vista soundly rejected thinking about any other name she might have once had that had quietly circulated around the Protectorate, simply hugged Twilight close and nodded her head. Skitter looked down at her arm, shook her head and spoke in a rueful tone.

"Yeah, me too. If I didn't come you two would probably get sidetracked reorganizing a library or something."

"What, you think I committed grand theft and purposely drove into the heart of an Endbringer battle to stop here? I'm going." Tattletale said with a smirk that Vista was quickly growing sick of.

"…Fucking lunatics…" Sophia mumbled before continuing louder, "We're all going to fucking die." She didn't move to join the line, but shifted her stance ever so slightly to indicate she was going too.

"…But, hey, I'm the leader here. This is mutiny. Besides we need to make sure the wounded get to a hospital."

Vista walked up and hugged Carlos, before stepping back and saying, "Sorry bossman. Twilight's committed, and I don't think you're going to talk her out of it. If you can't talk her out of it, you're not going to talk us out of it. Now when this is all over, if you really feel like filling out all the insubordination paperwork, I'll even help you. You, Lightsout, and the Lieutenant should be enough to discourage anyone up to no good that's stupid enough to still be hanging around. Get D-Gallant the help he needs, that's whats really important right now. Besides with me along, we'll have a ready made shortcut in and out, escape if we need it."

"I, you." Twilight's eye misted up as she looked around at everyone. "You don't have to do this. You shouldn't do this. You don't even know Princess Luna and it's probably going to be really really dangerous. Just because I have to go doesn't mean you do too."

"You're our friend Twilight, and friends help each other. Isn't that what you told me after the bank robbery?"

"Yeah, I'm pretty sure that's what she kept telling us." Kid Win said as he emerged from the doorway with a box of parts in his arms.

Tattletale suddenly looked distinctly uncomfortable as Twilight continued. "I, yes, but that was…oh. Ok, ok." She paused and the biggest smile Vista had ever seen her have crossed her face. "Friends then, together. Thank you, all of you. It, it means more than I can say properly in your language, but &#$@#$(&&#, all of you."

"Is it just me or did we somehow just switch over to the Hallmark channel in the middle of the apocalypse?" Dennis muttered and got a smack to the back of the head for it.

Carlos cleared his throat. "I…alright, I still think this is a mistake, but if you guys are sure. Ok, stay together, remember our training, watch each others backs. I would tell you not to be heroes, but I know that's hopeless. Ok, Lieutenant you ready there?"

"Yeah, they're as strapped in as I can make them. Drive slow."

"Hey Lightsout," Kid Win called as the cape was swinging into the cab. He walked over and handed him the box. "It doesn't have much range, but if you get within a mile or two of someone with a PRT communicator you should be able to pick them up."

"Alright, Lightsout drives, and I'll fly above and keep a lookout." Lightsout closed the door of the truck and Carlos walked over and gently closed the tailgate before slowly lifting himself off the ground. He took one last look at the group staying behind, opened his mouth, closed it, and then said as if saying it could make it true, "I'll see all of you later."

The truck started up and drove slowly out into the street. A minute later the tail lights swung around a corner and were gone. Vista looked around at the bandaged and bleeding adventure party and wondered briefly just what the hell they were all thinking.

A paper fluttered past and then they were all thrown to the ground by a hurricane force blast of air. The garage awning moaned and then tore away to tumble down the street. Thoroughly soaked once more, they all staggered to their feet and looked at each other.

"So, now what?" Dennis inquired as he helped pull her to her feet.

"I've got a plan." Skitter said

"Ohh, me too." Tattletale smiled.
 
25
Requiem For A Dream (Part 6/6) - Twilight Sparkle

Creeping through the ruined streets of Brockton Bay, mane plastered to her skin by the driving rain, Twilight still could not help but be fascinated by Vista's power. The group walked forward and were instantly two blocks closer to the coast. Despite her nervousness and her worry, both for Luna and her friends, she couldn't stop a small part of her mind from working on a spell that would replicate the effect. She could think of a thousand uses for it if the spell working could be standardized.

Lightning struck nearby and everyone dove to the wet ground as though it had been a directed attack against them. Shadow Stalker flickered into her gaseous state.

"That. Was. Close. Hey Twilight, didn't you say ponies controlled the weather where you're from? Can you do anything about this?" Clockblocker asked as they all got back to their feet and stepped two blocks closer to the sounds of battle and to the fiercest part of the storm. She looked up at the swirling maelstrom above as Vista checked the street in front of them.

"Oh, no. I've barely learned the basics cloud walking. Weather shaping is incredibly complex. Pegasi train for years to learn how to do it. Besides, I can feel Princess Luna's magic in the clouds. I don't know why she's strengthening the storm, but she must have a good reason."

"Yeah, not going to argue with the pony that turned off the sun." He theatrically looked up at the sky. "I could get used to it."

Twilight shook her head at Clockblocker's completely inaccurate statement. Princess Luna wouldn't do any such thing. She was quite sure the sun was perfectly fine, if not currently visible. She had told him that, but for some reason Clockblocker just wasn't letting it go. She shook the thought from her head as Vista waved her hand and the group stepped forward again, covering five more blocks. The wind had noticeably picked up as they had gotten closer, and now the sting and noise of hail stones began to replace that of the rain.

She raised her good wing above her head to try and shield her face from the worst of it, but gave up after a moment because the force of the wind was tiring her out. They were close now, and Twilight laid her ears back from the near constant roar of thunder and explosions. The earth and air seemed to be trying to shake the very bones from her body. Vista waved her and everyone else close so she could be heard over the constant noise of the storm and the battle.

"Uber thinks we should go on without my power from here," she pointed to a cross street, "He says that's Lord Street, so we're only a couple blocks from the bay. They must be fighting out over the water." Uber nodded and spoke.

"From the trail of destruction, at least one of them seemed to be purposefully leading them to the bay."

"Luna was," Tattletale cut in. "She directed the fight in this direction to try and keep it away from Twilight and the Evacuation."

"So, moment of truth time, we're doing this?" Skitter asked.

"We're going to fucking die." Shadow Stalker said.

"Don't be such a pessimist, there's definitely a slim possibility that we'll survive." Tattletale Replied.

"Ok, Shado-" Suddenly Twilight was blind and deaf. She felt herself fly off her hooves and tumble across the pavement. She cried out in pain as her truncated wing drug across the ground, but she couldn't hear herself. It was like the very idea of sound had somehow been rendered mute. She scrabbled her hooves against the asphalt and when she came to a stop pressed her chest against the pavement desperately. If not for the feel of the ground beneath her, she thought she would have lost all sense of reality. It was terrifying.

She was unsure of how much time had passed, but slowly her vision began to return along with a ringing in her ears. The ringing slowly faded into Princess Luna's voice which started as a whisper and steadily climbed back to the range of the Royal Canterlot Voice.

"…'Twas a fine gambit fiend. If thou hadst been facing THY MAKER IN TRUTH, MIGHTN'T YE BOTH HAVE PASSED INTO THE ETERNAL DAWN FOREVER." Princess Luna was standing atop a small hill that might have once been a building above her. A long bloody slash ran down the left side of her barrel. The blackened remains of armor plate still hung above the cut, and her wing on that side looked burnt and was missing most of its feathers. Worst of all though, was her left foreleg, or the fact that almost all of it was no longer there. A shimmering dome shield stretched around the ruined building and its surroundings. Beyond it, the Simurgh.

As bad of shape Luna looked to be in, the Simurgh looked worse. Its remaining torso was scarred and riddled with craters. Half of its head was gone, and the remaining wing was nearly devoid of feathers. Twilight had seen into the creature's dark mind, and knew the scale of its power, its cruel ambition, and its relentless, remorseless drive. She still could not fathom how something so injured could still be alive, let alone fighting.

"TWICE WE HAVE BESEECHED THEE TO UNSHACKLE THYSELF FROM THY TWISTED PURPOSE. THRICE IS THE LIMIT OF OUR ENTREATIES. BE OUR DUEL ENOUGH TO SATE THY DESIRE, OR ART THOU IN TRUTH NOT BUT A SLAVE? WE FEAR THAT IF WE ARE TO CONTINUE THY FINE SPORT OF EXCHANGING LIMBS, THOU HAS A NIGH INSURMOUNTABLE DEFICIT TO OVERCOME."

Twilight stared momentarily dumbfounded before a wheezing laugh came from behind her. She turned to see Tattletale chuckling and slowly standing up and brushing herself off. Clockblocker was helping Vista back to her feet while Flame Dancer was pulling Skitter up. Her heart froze when she continued to look, but couldn't see Uber, Kid Win, or Shadow Stalker.

"Hey, easy. They're fine, they just got thrown to the other side of the pile." When Twilight looked at her harder Tattletale gave a crooked smile. "Psychic"

Twilight let out a breath, everyone was ok. Then her pulse quickened again as she looked back at the standoff happening above them.

"Yeah, I think it's safe to say the plan just got eighty-sixed." Tattletale said.

Shadow Stalker appeared as if from nowhere. "Got any other bright ideas Captain Custer? Maybe find some fucking cover?"

"You want to try to find cover, from the Simurgh?" Clockblocker asked skeptically.

"Better than standing out here." Shadow Stalker glanced nervously at sky.

"I'm not so sure."

"Yeah, like you have a fucking bead on things. It was you and the Bug Girl's brain trust that got us here."

They continued to argue, but Twilight wasn't paying anymore attention. Her eyes were locked on Princess Luna and the Creature just beyond the edge of the shield. Something was wrong, something didn't feel right, then a wave of vileness pulsed out from the Simurgh and something inside of her pushed back.

"THRICE OFFERED, THRICE DENIED. MAY WHAT AWAITS THEE IN TARTARUS BE ALL THAT THINE UNREPENTANT HEART HATH EARNED! TWILIGHT SPARKLE, BE THOU READY TO PROTECT THY FRIENDS?"

Twilight's horn lit, and despite her exhaustion, she found her magic waiting eagerly. She took over the shield working and gave a solemn nod. Princess Luna nodded back with a grim smile, reared back, and teleported into what remained of the face of the Simurgh, delivering a blow that threw the creature backwards and away from them. Outside of the shield radius, a blizzard of debris rose from the ground, which began to slam into the dome like a thousand battering rams.

"Holy shit, she's a badass." Skitter exclaimed.

"What, you didn't get that from the whole darkness descends when she wills it?" Clockblocker replied.

"There's turning off the sun, and then there's punching the Simurgh in the face." Skitter said.

"Point."

"So, anyone got any ideas on how to defeat the eldritch horror, or get out of this alive? Preferably both." Clockblocker asked as the rest of her friends, all ok, gathered around her and watched the battle above.

A searing beam of green energy cut across the sky. The Simurgh dodged backwards to avoid it and was subsequently hit by a punch in the back that threw it forward into one of Luna's hooves. Alexandria and Legend. Suddenly, the battering against her shield stopped as another larger dome of energy encompassed it. She looked, and standing just outside her own shield was the naked horned human she had seen just before Leviathan attacked. Beside her, a large mechanical suit. Dragon.

She dropped her own shield and ran as fast as her limp would allow her and gave one of the suit's legs a hug. Her heart swelled in relief. Dragon was ok, another one of her friends was still ok. She heard the others run up and Tattletale started to speak before anyone else could.

"Dragon, the Endbringer's bodies get progressively denser the farther from the surface you get. Which is why we've never really done more than scratch them. Something about the blades Twilight's friend is using is somehow just ignoring that fact. Anyway, the important thing is they have a core. Destroying that is the only way to kill them." She paused and brought a hand to hand to her face, wincing in pain. Then braced her other hand against Twilight's back to steady herself. "The Simurgh wouldn't have its core somewhere obvious, not in the head or, no, it's in the wing, her remaining wing…top joint, thats what-" She gasped and slid the rest of the way to the ground.

"Tattletale! Are you okay?" Twilight asked as Flame Dancer knelt down beside the girl. She gave the barest hint of a nod.

"I have relayed the information to the rest of the protectorate, but the one that truly needs it is the pony that has the ability to do the damage needed. Twilight do you have anyway to talk with her?" Dragon asked as something truly massive slammed into the shield with an ear-splitting sonic boom. The horned human staggered and Twilight thought quickly.

As she racked her brain for an answer, another wave of vileness came from the sky. Her whole heart rebelled against its very nature. Uncalled, her horn shone with magic. It flowed into her eyes, and she saw, she understood. The spiderweb of relationships and magic that bound the world together unfolded before her, and the dark core that she had mistaken before as the center of the black threads, was itself just a small part of a larger whole. This wasn't a battle that could be physically won. They could defeat the Simurgh, but the malignant well of power and thought that fueled it would remain. It would send something else to take its place. Something worse.

"…Twilight! Are you okay? What are you doing?" Taylor-Skitter was hugging her and nearly shouting in her ear. Flame Dancer was leaning against her as well while she cradled Tattletale in her lap. Around her, nearly all the friends she had made since coming to this damaged world. This damaged world that still had so many good things, good people in it.

Something swelled within her and a multicolored aura surrounded her.

"I, I need your help. All of you, my friends, guide me."

As she turned her eyes skyward once more she felt arms wrap around her, some questioning, some confident. She heard comforting assurances and love. Laughter in the face of Danger. Giving everything, even oneself, for the lives and happiness of others. Kindness in the presence of overwhelming cruelty. Honesty when all the world seemed to crave was deceit. Loyalty past the point all bonds should have broken. Everything that was right and true and good.

She felt the aura around her begin to shine from her friends as well, some bright and steady, others dimmer. One the barely flickering, but glowing even so, struggling to reach past years of pain to the core of herself. She leaned on their strength and was answered with more. Her call answered by five hearts impossibly distant, regardless that they knew nothing about what was happening, they still believed in her, were with her.

In an explosion of light the rainbow aura around them expanded outwards and upwards, then unfolded like a flower greeting the sun. A rainbow colored wave of power swept out and struck the Simurgh faster than thought. Even as the Simurgh's dark weavings collapsed, The elements followed them back. Harmony raced along the paths of its influence, and then struck at the black well that sat at the heart of it all. A remorseless selfishness so great that it even death had not stopped it.

It was so vast, it spread even beyond this reality. Twilight felt herself and the others sag under the strain as the elements' power stretched to encompass the entirety of something too big for her to even conceive. She felt another join her and at last the depths of the well were reached, reached and swept away. The power flowed back and then began to spread out again, so much destroyed, so much lost. It could be remedied, it-

"TWILIGHT SPARKLE, COME BACK TO THYSELF. CEASE THIS. HARMONY KNOWEST NO BOUNDARY. WITHOUT FOCUS THOU WOULDST CHANGE THE VERY BEDROCK UPON WHICH THIS WORLD RESTS, AND LOSE ALL THAT THOU HOPED TO SAVE. THOU ART VICTORIOUS. IT IS ENOUGH."

Princess Luna's voice seemed distant. Something urged her on, there was so much left to do, but the biggest part of being friends, was listening to them. Trusting them as they had trusted her. Reluctantly at first, and then with a rushing snap, the power of the elements cut off and she collapsed into the soft grass and flowers beneath her.

Soft grass? She looked around to find herself surrounded by a huge semi-circular meadow bounded by the sea and stretching at least a mile in every direction. Her friends stood around her, gaping like fish. Above them the sky was clear, the moon looming bright and full. Though they looked exhausted and confused, their injuries were gone. Skitter was slipping her arm out of her sling in disbelief and Princess Luna stood proudly beside them on all four legs.

She was just beginning to marvel at her own lack of pain when Clockblocker spoke up.

"So, uh, I have absolutely no idea what just happened, but we won right? It kinda-sorta felt like winning."

Tattletale, arms splayed out and laying in the grass beside her laughed.

"Yeah, I'm pretty sure that was winning."

"TWILIGHT SPARKLE, WOUDST THOU INTRODUCE US TO THY COMPATRIOTS? WE HAVE MUCH TO CELEBRATE AND MANY THINGS OF WHICH TO DISCUSS. NAMES ARE REQUIRED, FOOD AND WINE AS WELL!"

As a crowd of capes landed nearby and began to approach, Twilight brought herself back to her hooves and smiled, smiled enough to hurt her face. She ran forward and threw her forelegs around Princess Luna's neck in a fierce hug. Then settled and nuzzled her deeply.


Everything was going to be just fine.







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On the other side of the world, on a cliff above the sea a body lay in repose among a nest of wildflowers. No longer wearing a mask, its green hood pillowed under its head, providing a comfort no longer needed. Resting in harmony with the world around it.

In the sky above, a golden man looked on.

 
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Okay, I don't know what just happened there. Did Twilight hit Simurgh so hard that it killed Eidolon, too?
 
Quoting from backgroundpony over at SB:

backgroundpony said:
That "malignant well of power" was Eden, the 'dead' entity, also known as the source of David's powers. Without it there's nothing keeping him alive. It's sad, but he would have wanted it this way, in fact, if he had known he probably would have insisted on it.

Luna saw into the core of the Simurgh's being and tried to get it to abandon it's mission. When that didn't work she played along with it in order to back it into a corner before issuing one final ultimatum.

This is just an educated guess, but I think the Simurgh was probably the only Endbringer smart enough to disobey it's 'prime directive,' at the very least Luna certainly seemed to think so. But in the end it just wasn't willing to stop, even when faced with the reality of it's own imminent demise. Whether it was the strength of the compulsion or the result of the Endbringer's own decision we'll probably never know.

and myself:

 
Well... Shit.

Because now Zion knows that there is a power that could hurt him, and he's going to come knocking.

Of course, then again, Unlimited Harmony Works.

Addendum:

"To get this straight, Death Metal Pony in fact can throw around the planet like a soccer ball."

"Yes."

"And Twilight beat the shit out of her when she was throwing a temper tantrum using that funky rainbow after a thousand year timeout until her morale improved."

"Also yes, apparently. Kind of confusing."

"And Death Metal Pony makes it her mission in life to heal minds, slay the wicked, and generally be the biggest badass on the planet, but Twilight still manages to be more of a badass?"

"Yeah..."

"So... uh, who's up for giving the tiny purple pony all the flowers and chocolate so she doesn't befriend the shit out of us?"
 
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