@Pittauro Thanks for the feedback. Made the corrections. At least a funny image pop up from my misspelling of Sombra. Petition to change Sombra's name to Sombrero when?
 
A/N: A little omake of a father's reluctance to let his son join the army.

Omake: A Father's Reluctance

Crownail stared off in the horizon where the setting sun set the sky aflame with a bloody red color. He considered it appropriate for what was to come for war was coming. There had been an upswing in military recruitment and equipment with unheard of spending by the Imperial Government for the past few months. Rumors flew about what for, ranging from mundane such as preparing a defense against the recently discovered Yetis to the ludicrous like Sombra's corpse rising out of the grave with an army of undead at his back.

But Crownail knew what this was all for. The flyers and leaflets urging patriotic young to enlist and enticing the rest with generous bonuses, the rapid construction of training centers to accommodate trainees, and countless factories, smithies, and manufactories churning out equipment by the cart load. It was clear to Crownail what the purpose of it all was. The preparations to invade Maretonia.

And oh how he wished the Maretonians had not enslaved his fellow countrymen and instead simply handed them back. Now their cesspit of a nation had deteriorated into a hellhole of constant war and suffering made all the worse by Pegicles' Storm and the Sacking of Roam. His younger self would have no doubt sneered it was all deserved. But he was older and more mature now. Fighting against the Sorcerer-Tyrant did that.

How terrible that war was with the Crystal Ponies trapped in their own bodies and the horrific abominations, twisted by dark magic. He still had nightmares where he would slay his adopted daughter just moments before Sombra was defeated by Hardbeak and his mind-controlled slaves freed. Crownail took comfort in the fact that , even though it was terrible and tragic, the War against Sombra was something of a… heroic thing. Or at the very least a necessary act to bring down a power-hungry, slaving despot.

Yet the looming intervention in Maretonia would be more muddled in comparison. He did not know to what extent though…

"Dad!"

Crownail was shaken out of his musing by the voice of his son, Cloudcrest. He turned around to see his son approaching with head held high and a flyer clutched in his right talons. Crownail let out a sigh, knowing what it meant.

"I know you don't want me to, dad, but if Pegicles manages to unite Maretonia, he'll set his sights on us and with the Crystal Protectorate between… I can't let sis be a slave again."

"Then I should start pressing her to return home again." Crownail set his beak.

He tried numerous times in the past to get her to come back home as the situation in Maretonia deteriorated, but she stubbornly refused, saying that many of the former slaves still needed a helping hoof in settling into their new lives. If she returned then Cloudcrest had no reason to be exposed to the horrors of war. His son's lustrous and pristine feathers would not dull like his, the light in his eyes would not dim, and he would most certainly not drink himself into a stupor to escape the nightmarish flashbacks.

"And you know what her answer will be."

"I just don't want either of you at risk."

"I know, dad. But please understand this is something I must do. I can't stay here while my friends fight."

Crownail let out another sigh. "Do you understand what you are getting into?"

"Yes. I know people die-"

"People don't simply die in war, Cloudcrest. They are crushed, skewered, sliced, and bleed to death!"

Cloudcrest took a step back from his father's sudden outburst. The anger seeping into his tone was enough to cause the griffin to flinch as if Crownail's anger was physically manifesting. Neither said anything as the blood red horizon darkened into a starless, lightless black.

Crownail took a breath to calm himself. "I'm sorry. I did not intend for that."

"Are you alright?"

"No, I am not. You are leaving for a war in a distant land and I am too old to stop it."

A good Omake. +10 to a roll.
 
Fate Grand Order Character Sheet: The Emperor Of Feathers
Fate Grand Order Character Sheet
Saber Class, The Emperor Of Feathers

Class: Saber
Alternative Classes: Rider, Caster, Ruler, Shielder.
Also Know As: Emperor of Feathers, The Unifier, The Liberator.
Character Type: Servant, Gryphus

Neighponese VA: Jun-Ichi
Canterburian VA: Gracious Homestead
Gryphon VA: Not Yet Released

Gender: Male
Height: 1,5m
Weight: 310 Kg
Blood Type: Unknow

Birthday: Unknow
Affiliation: Griffon Empire
Addresses self as: Watashi (私)
Likes: Family, Calm, Trades, Strong Females.
Dislikes: Slavement, Tyrants.
Talents: Stepwarship, Diplomacy, Kingship
Natural Enemy: King Brochard

True Name: Garrick Golden-Feather I
Type: Heroic Spirit
Source: Historical Fact
Region: Griffonia
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Hidden Attribute: Earth
Armaments: Sword(s)

Parameters:
  • Strength: B
  • Endurance: B
  • Agility: B+
  • Mana: C
  • Luck: A
  • NP: A
Class Skills:

Magic Resistance: C++

Magic Resistance grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.

Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals. Garrick, knowing very well his strengths and limitations, always preferred to leave the confrontation against Mages or exotic creatures in more capable hands, such as his most Loyal Knight, The Hero of the Empire, and the Black Watch that he commanded. Still, due to his confrontation and eventual victory against a certain King (Tyrant), he is especially resistant against Black and Shadow Magic.

Riding: B

Riding is a Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding

Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill, even vehicles that did not exist in the time period one was alive in, for they are no exception. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts. A strange skill for a creature like Gryphus to possess, but one that nonetheless Garrick has at a respectable Rank thanks to the machines constructed during his reign.

Personal Skills:

Protection of the Crystal Heart: C

Is a Skill denoting a protection given by the Crystal Heart, a mysterious and very powerful object.

This particular Skill would be much stronger if he was summoned in the Caster-Class, but even so, in case of facing creatures whose hearts "Has been consumed by darkness", the user gains + modifier in the Parameter of his choice.

Charisma: B

Charisma is a composite Skill consisting of a person's charm as well as the natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. A rare talent, and an ability inherent to Servants of the Saver class. Having B Rank in this Skill is sufficient to lead a nation as its King/Queen. The morale of military forces he or she commands is extremely high

Infernal Queen's Training: A

A Skill derived directly from the anecdote where Garrick was trained directly under the supervision of his wife. To date, there are no documents that explain the exact details of the training regimen, however, if Garrick's expression when remembering the incident and the Skill's name is any guessing...

In times of need, Saber can dramatically increase his Strength or Endurance momentarily, but in return, great pressure will be placed on his muscles.

"Don't be fooled, Master, the memories of that 'training' hurt me more than using this 100 ... no, 1000 times in a row!"

Noble Phantasm:

Orichalcum Memento: Element of Denial
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: A
Range: 1~2
Maximum number of targets: 1
The sword carried by Saber in life was nothing more than an Orichalcum sword, in addition to its anti-magical properties and being a unique blacksmith work of its kind, there is nothing that really differentiated it from the ones carried by his family or the Grandmasters of the Knightly Orders of the Empire. However, in the eyes of his subjects ... no, rather, in the eyes of history, such a thought is impossible.

The collective belief that "That Sword must be special" has managed to affect the sword itself. Although it still retains its properties capable of denying/weakening magic, that effect has been significantly increased; Clairvoyance or Instinct like abilities with a lower Rank than A are severely affected, continuous contact affects the functioning of Noble Phantasm, and slashes made against creatures made of magical energy (such as Servants) are especially damaging. As expected, not even Saber is immune to the effect of this always active Noble Phantasm, so he must be really careful about not being hurt by it.

Truly, this sword could be considered a superior version of a certain crimson spear.

Ritterorden von Griffonia: Once More, More Than Ever, Answer!
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: B+
Range: 1~2
Maximum number of targets: 4 (?)

"Konrad, Colombroni, Adrian, Glimmer. Thou Spirits, Thou Strength, Thou Will, just like in yore, lend it to me! Ritterorden von Griffonia!"​

Not a warrior, but a King in whom his subjects could place their trust, that, combined with loyalty than the Grandmasters feel towards Saber, is the source of the power of this Noble Phantasm. By calling its the True Name, Saber is able to accomplish something that only a powerful Caster with a quality workshop and a not minuscule amount of time could do: Modify a Servant's Saint Graph and/or create Demi-Servants.

The Grandmasters hear the call of their Emperor and respond without hesitation, their souls literally in the palm of his hands, a situation that would undoubtedly be traumatizing for any other being, produces nothing but joy in the Knights that are able to meet again with the man to whom they swore loyalty. By introducing these souls into a mortal, they becomes a Demi-Servant of the Saber-class, with physical capabilities far above most mortals, but still lacking a Noble Phantasm.

On the other hand, the effect on a Servant is as similar as it is different, depending on the abilities of the Heroic Spirit in question, it may well win the Double-Summon Skill if it has the necessary aptitudes for the Saber-Class or changing Class completely, which can negate the negative effects of Skills such as Madness Enchantment. In the former case-specific, it is possible for the Servants involved to use the Noble Phantasm of their Saber Class, but only once, and immediately thereafter the Knight's soul will permanently lose all effect until the end of the Holy Grail War.

Garrick Golden-Feather I wasn't a Warrior, instead, he was someone who depended on more capable people to fight his battles, something that is demonstrated when even summoned in the most offensive Class he keeps depending on others. There will be people who call him a coward for such a reason, but those who served under his reign know that such a statement is nothing more than slander. The Leader, the King, and the Emperor, doesn't need to attend the battlefield, such work must remain in the hands of those who in the grand scheme of things are insignificant, while the Monarch wisely guides the country towards a future that only they are able to see.

The fact that he still showed up on the battlefield is probably the reason why these knights keep follow him, even after their deaths.
 
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Personally, I think Garrick qualifies for Pioneer of the Stars (星の開拓者, Hoshi no Kaitaku-sha?, localized as "Settler of the Stars"EX) is the unique Skill given to heroes that became turning points in human history. All difficult voyages and challenges which are considered "impossible" turn into "events that can be realized.
 
And maybe something to do with the ridiculous spy organization that formed in his era?
Although it might not quite have enough impact for a special trait as a Saber.
Actually Assassin should be a possible class, for similar reasons as why Washington had that as a possible class.

Edit: Personal opinion of someone who is admittedly not much of an expert...
 
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Personally, I think Garrick qualifies for Pioneer of the Stars (星の開拓者, Hoshi no Kaitaku-sha?, localized as "Settler of the Stars"EX) is the unique Skill given to heroes that became turning points in human history. All difficult voyages and challenges which are considered "impossible" turn into "events that can be realized.
Yes and no. At first, I also thought the same, but after careful thought, I realized that it didn't make much sense. Archimedes was responsible for achieving the technological advances (we only placed the money) and defeating an incredibly powerful evil creature is not enough to have said Skill, because if that were the case, Sigurd / Siegfried, Arturia / Arthur, and Beowulf would have it. I mean, not even Romulus have it and he is ROMA.
And maybe something to do with the ridiculous spy organization that formed in his era?
Although it might not quite have enough impact for a special trait as a Saber.
Actually Assassin should be a possible class, for similar reasons as why Washington had that as a possible class.

Edit: Personal opinion of someone who is admittedly not much of an expert...
A case similar to the one above, the agency was formed during his reign, yes, but the fact that it work so well is due to is our Spymaster, so that Noble Phantasm would be more suitable for him. Even so, this would probably manifest in other Classes such as Caster (?) and Shielder (Probably Ruler?). I intend to publish those ones too, but first: Rider, which is gonna be by far my favorite. Trust me, it doesn't work at all like you are all thinking.
 
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Fate Grand Order Character Sheet: The Maiden of Roses
@NathanMedium hope you don't mind if I roll with this idea a little! :D

FATE GRAND ORDER CHARACTER SHEET
Assassin Class, The Maiden of Roses

Class: Assassin
Alternative Classes: Avenger
Also Know As: The Maiden of Roses, The Thorn of Gryphus
Character Type: Servant, Changeling

Gender: Female
Height: Unknown
Weight: Unknown
Blood Type: Unknown

Birthday: Unknown
Affiliation: Griffon Empire
Likes: Freedom, Roses
Dislikes: Tyrants
Talents: Assassination, Spying, Social Manipulation, Forgery
Natural Enemy: Queen Phalanx

True Name: Rose?
Type: Heroic Spirit
Source: Historical Fact
Region: Griffonia
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Hidden Attribute: Earth
Armaments: Unknown

Parameters:
  • Strength: E
  • Endurance: E
  • Agility: A
  • Mana: C
  • Luck: EX
  • NP: A
Class Skills:

Presence Concealment
(—): Due to the Skill "Espionage", Presence Concealment has been lost

Personal Skills:

Espionage: EX

This Skill does not conceal one's presence, but rather makes their very presence not feel like that of an opponent's. It causes misunderstandings such as one being a familiar neighbor, a harmless pebble, a beloved person, and so forth. Her skills in hiding herself away and adopting other forms and personas has no equal. For hers was so great she managed to fool and flee her very Queen's detection, and was only found by the greatest spies of her time because she allowed herself to be found.


Presence Detection: C

Her ability to find those in hiding is nearly unmatched, managing to find not only the spies of Gryphonia, but also her own fellow 'Queen-to-bes' when they tried their hardest to hide.

Beautiful Appearance(False): B

A Skill that, coupled with one's attire, one is endowed with a beauty that makes it difficult to discern the person's gender by means of appearance.

Independent Action: C

Her own Queen tried to control her, and failed. As such she needs no support to accomplish her goals.

Information Erasure: A

The very second she disengages, eye witnesses and opponents' memories about information concerning abilities, true name, appearance etc disappear. She can even erase existing information concerning her that exists in written form, and possibly replacing it with misinformation.

This is the personification of how she lived while in hiding, and her introduction to the King of Gryphonia, erasing incriminating documents and replacing them with doctored forgeries.

Noble Phantasm:

Flowering Rebellion: Every Rose has it's Thorns
Type: Anti-Country
Rank: EX
Range: 1~99
Maximum number of targets: Unknown

The culmination of the rumors regarding her role in the destruction of the reign of Queen Phalanx. It is unknown just how pivotal she truly was, but it is confirmed that she did indeed cause the first petal to fall.

As such this Noble Phantasm holds within it the power to destroy a country. Exactly how it does this is up for debate.


Rosaceae Mortis: Memento Mori
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: A
Range: 1~2
Maximum number of targets: 1


She was said to be the greatest assassin of her time, and whether or not this is true, she was never known to have failed or been caught in her missions, as such this is the culmination of her story as an assassin, the ability to kill her target no matter the cost.
It is even suspected that she was the one to kill the Queen of Maretonia before she joined Gryphus, with a flower.
These rumors are, ofcourse, unsubstantiated.
 
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I am looking forward to seeing Ravenbeak's page....


Title ideas

The King's Shadow, The Master of Whispers, the Emperor's Left Claw


Konrad would of course be his right.

One Claw in the open, hardened and mighty.... The Left sits in the shadow, unseen, unhead, but it's bite is felt all to well.....






EDIT:



Konrad Hardbeak's titles

The Emperor's Champion, The Knight of Knights, The Emperor's Right Claw



Thus he stood again and again, before all that would harm those who stood behind him and again and again they were cut down.
 
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Character Type: Servant, Gryphus
The problem is obvious
Hidden Attribute: Fire

These are the know hidden attributes. I think she fit Earth the better.
  • Heaven (天, Ten?) - Heroes who are related to the gods, whether they are Divine Spirits ranked down to becoming Heroic Spirits, children of gods, or incarnations of legends about gods.
  • Earth (地, Chi?) - Heroes who are known as the heroes of the land, known through mythologies and legends of a particular region. Fairies and Magical Beasts are included in this category.
  • Human (人, Jin?) - Heroes belonging to this category are those recognized through common knowledge as great people who contributed to humanity and were regarded as heroes for their actions since the start of the Common Era. They are generally heroes who were deified by the masses after death, but there are those who were truly superhuman in life.
  • Star (星, Sei?) - Heroes of this category, belonging to none of the previous three, are the "hope of mankind" and a "symbol of overcoming hardships." Although close in nature to the Pioneer of the Stars Skill that is given to heroes who became "turning points" in human history, it is an attribute fundamentally given to those that have left behind a great hope in the history of humanity. Simply achieving such exploits is not enough as they also have to be a "shining bright star" among the figures of mankind. It is an omnipotent attribute that possesses no minus towards any other categories. Parody Heroic Spirits from space all get this designation.[4]
  • Beast (獣, ?) - Rivaling the seemingly all-powerful Star, they are the Evils of Man that represent the Seven Sins of Humanity, beings that encompass all of humanity.[5]
Presence Concealment : EX

The ability to hide one's very existence, a skill innate to her by her very birth as a changeling. However unlike others of her kind, her skills in hiding herself away and adopting other forms and personas has no equal. For hers was so great she managed to fool and flee her very Queen's detection, and was only found by the greatest spies of her time because she allowed herself to be found.
In this case in specific, this would work better:

Presence Concealment (—): Due to the Skill "Espionage", Presence Concealment has been lost

and put this in Personal:

Espionage: EX
This Skill does not conceal one's presence, but rather makes their very presence not feel like that of an opponent's. It causes misunderstandings such as one being a familiar neighbor, a harmless pebble, a beloved person, and so forth. Her skills in hiding herself away and adopting other forms and personas has no equal. For hers was so great she managed to fool and flee her very Queen's detection, and was only found by the greatest spies of her time because she allowed herself to be found.
Presence Detection: A+
Maybe change it for Espionage or lower its rank to C. A+ is the same that Enkidu and he was a construct from Gods designed to battle Gilgamesh. He can feel Watcher, something that for all means should be imposible. In other words, a little to OP and not fitting.
 
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@NathanMedium
Thanks!

I overlooked the Gryphus part. Now says Changeling.

Thanks, I messed up on the attribute. Fixed.

Ah, I forgot about Mata Hari's Skill, that does work better. Changed.

Got it, lowered to C Rank.

Edit: added pics for NPs
 
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Any one else extremely interested in how our meeting with the two sisters will go or even how equestria currently is. Like more then the war.
 
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I have two reasons why, even as I feel wary of the outcome, we should try for a protectorate solution.

1. This reason is the pragmatic one: magical access. A vassal state with magical traditions and base pop could circumnavigate our starting malus and entrench us as the predominant world power for generations.

Merlins' work and the birth of the hippogryphs have already set us migitating factors, but it's Maretonia that may elevate us to a near parity on magical potential.

2. This reason is the humanitarian/protective one:

I'm absolutely terrified for what happens if we aren't there to act as a force of order, when a population of former slave- (mostly Earth Ponies) and-third caste (Earth Ponies) of Maretonia finally come to the realization that slavery is now forbidden, they have easy access to steel weapons including crossbows and these former unicorn - and pegasi nobles, their mercenaries and professional armies aren't looking so good, Chief.
 
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I have two reasons why, even as I feel wary of the outcome, we should try for a protectorate solution.

1. This reason is the pragmatic one: magical access. A vassal state with magical traditions and base pop could circumnavigate our starting malus and entrench us as the predominant world power for generations.

Merlins' work and the birth of the hippogryphs have already set us migitating factors, but it's Maretonia that may elevate us to a near paritymagical potential.

2. This reason is the humanitarian/protective one:

I'm absolutely terrified for what happens if we aren't there to act as a force of order, when a population of former slave- (mostly Earth Ponies) and-third caste (Earth Ponies) of Maretonia finally come to the realization that slavery is now forbidden, they have easy access to steel weapons including crossbows and these former unicorn - and pegasi nobles, their mercenaries and professional armies aren't looking so good, Chief.
But there are issues with this.



The cultural issues of how, unless we manage some amazing local pr, we are likely going to face a lot of local hatred and push back which would make things much much harder.

Somewhar similar in theme to what happened in the middle east with America.


Next is that we will have to deal with said remnants of nobles and such, which are unlikely to be pleasant as I can almost bet they will try to introduce some corruption into our ranks


Then there is the issue of any pr hits we might take when the war is over.


Lots of veterans now without being needed we will need to find jobs for which alone could lead to some issues.

Next is them bringing back any stories about resentful locals as there is little doubt a not insignificant portion blame us for everything.

After all we make easy scapegoats for them as this all started not long after we came into contact with them. It isnt logical but it doesn't need to be in this case. It is something to latch onto to help them rationalize what is going on and maintain some level of control. It isnt their fault their ticking time bomb finally went off, its all the griffon's fault! Is probably going to be a common concensus.




Now if we can have ways to address these issues we would be golden.
 
Personally I don't think we need to expand any more, and we are still developing the Crystal Protectorate.

I think we should just put The Abolitionists in charge, offer some aid, and form a very tight alliance, closer than even the Yaks and Neighponese.
 
I will be more happy in the role of "Don't make me come over there" than imperial hegemon for Griffon Empire. Because there's superpowers and then there's superpowers.
 
Fate Grand Order Character Sheet
Saber Class, The Emperor Of Feathers

Class: Saber
Alternative Classes: Rider, Caster, Ruler, Shielder.
Also Know As: Emperor of Feathers, The Unifier, The Liberator.
Character Type: Servant, Gryphus

Neighponese VA: Jun-Ichi
Canterburian VA: Gracious Homestead
Gryphon VA: Not Yet Released

Gender: Male
Height: 1,5m
Weight: 310 Kg
Blood Type: Unknow

Birthday: Unknow
Affiliation: Griffon Empire
Addresses self as: Watashi (私)
Likes: Family, Calm, Trades, Strong Females.
Dislikes: Slavement, Tyrants.
Talents: Stepwarship, Diplomacy, Kingship
Natural Enemy: King Brochard

True Name: Garrick Golden-Feather I
Type: Heroic Spirit
Source: Historical Fact
Region: Griffonia
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Hidden Attribute: Earth
Armaments: Sword(s)

Parameters:
  • Strength: B
  • Endurance: B
  • Agility: B+
  • Mana: B
  • Luck: A
  • NP: A
Class Skills:

Magic Resistance: C++

Magic Resistance grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.

Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals. Garrick, knowing very well his strengths and limitations, always preferred to leave the confrontation against Mages or exotic creatures in more capable hands, such as his most Loyal Knight, The Hero of the Empire, and the Black Watch that he commanded. Still, due to his confrontation and eventual victory against a certain King (Tyrant), he is especially resistant against Black and Shadow Magic.

Riding: B

Riding is a Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding

Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill, even vehicles that did not exist in the time period one was alive in, for they are no exception. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts. A strange skill for a creature like Gryphus to possess, but one that nonetheless Garrick has at a respectable Rank thanks to the machines constructed during his reign.

Personal Skills:

Protection of the Crystal Heart: C

is a Skill denoting a protection given by the Crystal Heart, a mysterious and very powerful object.

This particular Skill would be much stronger if he was summoned in the Caster-Class, but even so, in case of facing creatures whose hearts "Has been consumed by darkness", the user gains + modifier in the Parameter of his choice.

Charisma: B

Charisma is a composite Skill consisting of a person's charm as well as the natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. A rare talent, and an ability inherent to Servants of the Saver class. Having B Rank in this Skill is sufficient to lead a nation as its King/Queen. The morale of military forces he or she commands is extremely high

Infernal Queen's Training: A

A Skill derived directly from the anecdote where Garrick was trained directly under the supervision of his wife. To date, there are no documents that explain the exact details of the training regimen, however, if Garrick's expression when remembering the incident and the Skill's name is any guessing...

In times of need, Saber can dramatically increase his Strength or Endurance momentarily, but in return, great pressure will be placed on his muscles.

"Don't be fooled, Master, the memories of that 'training' hurt me more than using this 100 ... no, 1000 times in a row!"

Noble Phantasm:

Orichalcum Memento: Element of Denial
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: A
Range: 1~2
Maximum number of targets: 1
The sword carried by Saber in life was nothing more than an Orichalcum sword, in addition to its anti-magical properties and being a unique blacksmith work of its kind, there is nothing that really differentiated it from the ones carried by his family or the Grandmasters of the Knightly Orders of the Empire. However, in the eyes of his subjects ... no, rather, in the eyes of history, such a thought is impossible.

The collective belief that "That Sword must be special" has managed to affect the sword itself. Although it still retains its properties capable of denying/weakening magic, that effect has been significantly increased; Clairvoyance or Instinct like abilities with a lower Rank than A are severely affected, continuous contact affects the functioning of Noble Phantasm, and slashes made against creatures made of magical energy (such as Servants) are especially damaging. As expected, not even Saber is immune to the effect of this always active Noble Phantasm, so he must be really careful about not being hurt by it.

Truly, this sword could be considered a superior version of a certain crimson spear.

Ritterorden von Griffonia: Once More, More Than Ever, Answer!
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: B+
Range: 1~2
Maximum number of targets: 4 (?)

"Konrad, Colombroni, Adrian, Glimmer. Thou Spirits, Thou Strength, Thou Will, just like in yore, lend it to me! Ritterorden von Griffonia!"​

Not a warrior, but a King in whom his subjects could place their trust, that, combined with loyalty than the Grandmasters feel towards Saber, is the source of the power of this Noble Phantasm. By calling its the True Name, Saber is able to accomplish something that only a powerful Caster with a quality workshop and a not minuscule amount of time could do: Modify a Servant's Saint Graph and/or create Demi-Servants.

The Grandmasters hear the call of their Emperor and respond without hesitation, their souls literally in the palm of his hands, a situation that would undoubtedly be traumatizing for any other being, produces nothing but joy in the Knights when meeting again with the man to whom they swore loyalty. By introducing these souls into a mortal, they becomes a Demi-Servant of the Saber-class, with physical capabilities far above most mortals, but still lacking a Noble Phantasm.

On the other hand, the effect on a Servant is as similar as it is different, depending on the abilities of the Heroic Spirit in question, it may well win the Double-Class Skill if it has the necessary aptitudes for the Saber-Class or changing Class completely, which can negate the negative effects of Skills such as Madness Enchantment. In the former case-specific, it is possible for the Servants involved to use the Noble Phantasm of their Saber Class, but only once, and immediately thereafter the Knight's soul will permanently lose all effect until the end of the Holy Grail War.

Garrick Golden-Feather I wasn't a Warrior, instead, he was someone who depended on more capable people to fight his battles, something that is demonstrated when even summoned in the most offensive Class he keeps depending on others. There will be people who call him a coward for such a reason, but those who served under his reign know that such a statement is nothing more than slander. The Leader, the King, and the Emperor, doesn't need to attend the battlefield, such work must remain in the hands of those who in the grand scheme of things are insignificant, while the Monarch wisely guides the country towards a future that only they are able to see.

The fact that he still showed up on the battlefield is probably the reason why these knights keep follow him, even after their deaths.
GODDAMN THIS IS SOME QUALITY ASS SHIT RIGHT HERE PLEASE INJECT IT INTO MY VEINS

...Ahem. Now, as a man who loves himself some Servant sheets (I write them myself and have a whole compendium of my sheets), this good sir is nothing short of one of the highest quality Servant sheets I have ever seen. Amazingly creative in crafting the abilities that fit in with the character. If I had one suggestion, I'd say Charisma would be A-rank on account that Garrick's popularity is extraordinarily high.

I'm also curious how garrick would function as a Caster, given that, as a griffon, he lacks magic to begin with.
 
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I'd say Charisma would be A-rank on account that Garrick's popularity is extraordinarily high.
First, thanks. Second. A-Rank is equal to Iskandar which is...fair, but I'm not 100% convinced, at least not at this point in the Quest. As a Ruler, he would have it at that Rank, no question asked.
I'm also curious how garrick would function as a Caster, given that, as a griffon, he lacks magic to begin with.
Runes and summons would be my guess
A little guessing:
Protection of the Crystal Heart: C

is a Skill denoting a protection given by the Crystal Heart, a mysterious and very powerful object.

This particular Skill would be much stronger if he was summoned in the Caster-Class
 
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