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At the end of the world a lone ghost is offered a second chance at life. The catch: she must travel through the multiverse forever.

A/N: A combination of Jumpchain and System elements, Un Voyage Macabre will focus on worlds with a more mysterious or dark feeling. The story will (hopefully) end in the Lord of Mystery jump.

This is my attempt at writing in a more "gothic" style as training for an original novel. Criticism is much appreciated, especially since I find my atmospheric writing lacking.
To exist once more
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She/Her
A merciless torrent of water falls from the sky. Dark gray clouds, almost black in the lightless night, choke everything around them.

Once every few seconds thunder roars and lightning strikes at a lone metal bridge. Underneath the hulking contraption the river is muddied, rushing downstream and spilling out into the paved streets.

"London Bridge is falling down."

Amidst the deluge, a single figure remains.

"Falling down, falling down."

A gray, vague figure, with grotesque attempts at a face and appendages, they shift and change as though their owner isn't sure about their looks.

Perhaps, once, it was a human. Now, all that remains is a cheap copy, an illusory construct with vague humanoid features.

What shape was its face? How long were its arms, its fingers, its nails? Was it tall? Short? Was it even a female or is its corroded mind playing tricks on her?

Her voice seems to be the only thing she remembers about herself.

Once, this soul was a young woman. Once, this soul had died on the bridge it now sings upon.

Now, all that is left is a ghost, tethered to the human world by a thin, yet strong thread.

"London Bridge is falling down, falling down, falling down."

What is keeping her here? For how long has she been in this state? Does she remember anything from her past? From her current time as a specter?

The seething rain continues, and the metal bridge slowly gives way to the increasing power of the flooded river.

"My fair lady…"

The ghost continues to sing, her mist-like form strolling from one beam to another, stepping on air with her arms spread in an unsettling mimicry of funambulism.

Suddenly, the world itself blinks, and the ghostly form is no longer singing upon a bridge.

[….complete! Greetings, receptacle 04. I am your new automated Jump System, Thyme.]

Multiple voices call out at the same time, all in harmony. Inside the absolute void the ghost found herself in appear a few things: a table and chair right in front of her, a full body mirror on her left side and, most importantly, a giant moth.

Placed right in the middle of the table, a 2D speech bubble above it, a moth as big as her torso rested. Turned sideways, towards the mirror, the spirit could see four actual pair of eyes on its black wings. Yellow and red, they were all fixed upon her.

[I'm sure you have many questions, but first, know this: A chain must remain unbroken! As such a new Jumper is chosen upon the end of another. As the only sapient soul left in the nearest quatrillion kilometers you have been granted unimaginable power. Congratulations!]

Did that last sentence sound really caustic and sarcastic, or was that simply her imagination?
For a second it felt like the moth was able to read her thoughts, as it's too many eyes focused on behind her. A feeling of dread threatened to swallow her whole, as a strange light entered the red-green eyes of the moth.

Yet, both the light and the feeling disappeared all to quickly.

The soul stared in confusion and horror as the moth's wings twitched as though electrocuted. The surreal chat box above it glitching, rows of red text overtake the entire room.

Soon, countless glitching boxes continued to spawn until their forms filled the void completely.

A wall of red and black stared at her.

[Error! Unknown variables present!]
[Error! Data corrupted!]
[Error! System failure!]
[Error!]
[Error!] [Error!]
[Error!] [Error!] [Error!]
[Error!] [Error!] [Error!] [Error!]
[Error!] [Error!] [Error!] [Error!] [Error!]

[Erro—

And so the…notifications continued, what felt like days, weeks, months, passed by while the deformed spirit grew increasingly more and more terrified at the barrage of the same repeating words. All she could do, all she did, was stare in horror at the red text, not even moving from her spot.

In the colorless void the chorus voice of the moth finally said something different.

[Loading…]
[Complete reset unavailable.]
[Blocking previously chosen worlds.]
[Applying previous chain drawbacks and rules.]
[Cataloguing purchases.]
[Acquired perks and items unavailable.]

[No companions found alive.]
[Warning! Jumper dead!]
[Unable to revive previous companions.]

[System reset successfully.]

The last message rings out in a monotone mix of voices, taking on a more robotic feel.

Somehow, the haunting eyes upon the moth's wings seem to slightly change. As though something happened to the…mind, or code of the system. If she had one this would be the moment where her heart would turn cold.

[Receptacle 04's memories are partially accessible.]
[Receptacle 04's emotional state has been reset.]
[Receptacle 04's previous mental illnesses have been purged.]


Memories slowly trickle down to her mind, vague, hazy, unsure, but memories nonetheless. Still images of a poverty stricken childhood, a wish for more, for books and food, for sweets and no more burdens—then her life on the internet, the shows and books and songs, all in clear detail.

Her death, its cause, the fate of everyone else.

The person responsible for it all.

And yet she…feels calm now. She is finally at peace, if she could only just—

[Beginning body configuration.]
[Receptacle lacks physical body.]
[Initialising full customisation…]


The table and chair vanish in a blink of the world, and in front if her appears the mirror. The moth flies over, resting on its wood.

The soul looked at herself in the mirror—featureless face, weirdly placed appendages, and see through body.

It stared.

And stared.

Melancholy, sadness, despair.

Those emotions were strongly coming off in waves from the spectre, nearly overwhelming the system with its power. For a moment, the now robot-like moth twitched. Its eyes flickered with an unknown emotion.

Amazement perhaps? Or maybe horror?

Foooosh

The avatar of the soul shattered in grain like pieces. In front of the mirror now stood a sphere, floating in the void, full of holes and tears inside it and devoid of any color save a weathered gray.

The soul sighed. And, instead of the absolute coldness the system was expecting, a warm wave of sound traveled around the void, reminiscent of warm summer breezes and the small flames of candles.

What a strange soul.

[…please choose a preset to start with.]

In the mirror an average looking man stared down at the now spherical soul. Next to the man's right hand a blue arrow pointed sideways.

The naked man in the mirror presses what might be a "next" button with confusion in his eyes.

Next an equally average looking woman looks down at the soul with wonder in her eyes.

"This is…" the soul says, and the woman's mouth moves as if speaking.

'Trippy.' it concludes in its now clearer mind.

"How do I choose?"

[Is this the preferred preset?]

The moth's many voices finally start to sound more than just lifeless. Unfortunately, this time they sound bored.

"…yes?"

[Preset chosen successfully.]

It starts with the bones. Hard, white tissue forms around the sphere, slowly encasing it in growing ribs. Then tendons and muscles form. Blood system, lymphatic system, organs…

It—she doesn't feel anything, not until her body is finally complete. Then, finally, after taking her last breath, she takes her first for the second time.

Brown eyes, full of life, stare into the mirror in elation.

[Would you like to further customise your appearance?]

'Oh, my. Even if anything else that happens after will be hell, this at least, will be much, much fun,' she thinks with a grin.

After all, she does remember greatly enjoying customising characters.

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And, there we go; 1.1k words of a ghost talking with a weird af transdimensional moth. Next chapter MC will choose a world, get a name from her new family and start her adventure.

This is my first time posting my writing here, so—hi? Call me Yumi, I've been a writer for around a decade now, but most of my other works have been in my first language.

This would be my first story with occult and thriller themes, I'm not sure how well the disturbing feelings I was aiming for actually come across in this chapter. I plan to play around with both Jumpchain rules and the common ideas and rules that a System might provide, the same goes for the canon of the worlds the MC will jump to.

Expect a degree of AU changes in a setting by setting scenario. The first jump will already feature AU elements, since it's an Addams Family and Harry Potter crossover.

I hope I won't butcher the next chapters too badly haha. Please feel free to comment! I'm in the exam period at uni rn and any feedback will greatly help me get through the week. .·´¯`(> <)´¯`·.
(Also please let me know if there's something wrong with the thread. It's 1 in the morning and I've no idea what I'm doing.)
 
Le Début
"Grandmother, I no not need another eye in my soup," she says with a sigh.

The gray haired woman frowns, her eyes following her granddaughter's movements as she scooped out a pair of eyeballs from a foul smelling soup.

"But darkling, how will you improve your sight? If you continue like this, I'm afraid you'll end up blind as a bat!" argues the woman.

Immediately after her statement all the eyes at the table, whether inside a skull or not, travelled to the crone's face.

Supported by a hooked nose stood a pair of glasses with lenses so thick they made her eyes seem bigger than her head. One eye was even the crystal clear color associated with blindness, though, as if by magic, it seemed to actually see even more than her normal one.

"…I'll manage," replies Friday, the corners of her mouth on the precipice of a smile and a frown.

Grandmama, also known to the outside as Eudora Addams, gives a careless sigh, as she drops the previously discarded pair of eyes into Wednesday's bowl instead.

Without even a change in expression the girl scoops the eyes once again and throws them into Pugsley's bowl instead. They land with a wet squelch, their impact causing black droplets of soup to fall on the black dining table and Pugsley's white robes.

The young boy stares at the blue irises inside the bubbling black soup, his mouth continuing to chew on another set of eyes, even as tears streak down his now sickly face.

The eyes stare back, unflinching.

Pugsley's gaze rises up to meet that of his father, and with equally blue eyes he looks imploringly at Gomez for help.

With apprehension Gomez offers his youngest child a nod in understanding, and the blue pair of eyes now end up in his bowl of frothing soup instead.

With a sigh and a quiet prayer he sacrifices his stomach for his children.

His three spawns only offer him a look of relief and pity, before they excuse themselves, all in an attempt to escape Grandmama's other dubious dishes.

"Ah, that's right—your mother is currently holding a séance in the graveyard. She told me to guide you towards the library. We have something to share with you three," Grandmama says, ignoring her son's pained face.

The three nod, giving their assent, even as Friday quietly, and without even paying much attention, offers her brother an empty bowl to empty his stomach in.

Uncaringly Wednesday drags them both out of the candle lit dining room and into the hallway.

"Ugh, I think I need a bigger one," whines Pugsley.

Pity and amusement waltzing in her eyes Friday gestures at the bowl in his hands.

"May I?" she asks.

The short, round boy nods his head in agreement so quickly he loses his balance, and Wednesday has to support him from falling over.

"Thank you ever so much," he says to his older sisters, gratefulness and affection bringing back a healthy color to his face.

"There's no need to thank me. You were simply about to fall on me so I stopped you," replies Wednesday.

Pugsley's smile breaks and he turns to his oldest sister imploringly, as though asking for help.

Alas, all Friday did when their gazes met was offer him a snort and a boyish, dimpled grin, not at all understanding of the great turmoil the boy just went through.

"Here," says Friday as she offers Pugsley the bowl. "I vanished the vomit and made it bigger."

Pugsley frowns, a single tear drop threatening to spill from the corner of his eye.

"I don't think I'll need it anymore," he confesses.

After all, due to his sister's cold response all the sickness in his body has vanished.

"Pfftt," as though she read his mind Friday snort in amusement.

Staring at the confusing events unfolding before her Wednesday rolls her eyes, sighs, and continues on, moving ahead of her siblings in the lightning lit hallway.

Outside, the dark storm continues to cry, as though the sky itself is in pain. Red lightning flashes and hits the mansion's roof.

The shadowy building remains unmoving however, even as more and more lightning strikes it as though in revenge.

Friday is the first to notice Wednesday's disappearance, and she joins her twin with a smirk still in place.

"I do not think Pugsley understands you all that well," comments Friday.

Wednesday nods, watching from the corner of her eye their younger brother scramble to join them.

"I know. But he'll learn with time," Wednesday responds.

Affection replaces the spark of amusement in Friday's eyes, and the older girl gives her sister a nod, the corner of her eyes finally crinkling into a true smile.

"He will learn with time," echoes Friday as she offers her hand to Pugsley, who has now caught up with them.

The boy looks at his sisters in confusion, and it takes everything he has not to open his mouth and ask a question. The last time he asked them what they were talking about Wednesday gave him a live practice of knife throwing, one where he was the target…

They walk in silence for just a few short moments, Pugsley and Wednesday looking on ahead even as Friday watches the moving furniture with a spark of fascination.

In the end, the young boy can't take it anymore, and he opens his mouth.

"Do you think I'll be allowed to use a wand today?" he asks instead at the last second.

The two girls have matching frowns immediately appear on their faces.

"Not yet," replies Friday.

"Why not?" asks Pugsley.

"Just 'cause," she replies.

"Fridayyy!" he whines.

On Friday's left Wednesday rolls her eyes for the twelfth time today and she finally speaks in the end.

"Because you're not ready."

Pugsley pouts, frowns and opens and closes his mouth like a fish a few times.

"Why? What do you mean?" he finally asks.

"You need to pass a test, and it will take some time," replies Friday diplomatically.

"But, didn't you get to play with the wands when you were my age?" he asks Friday.

"The fact that you think practicing is the same as playing is exactly why you don't have permission, Pugsley," sighs Wednesday.

"What? But don't you both play fight whenever you sneak out the wands?"

"Shh!" orders Wednesday as she places her hand over his mouth.

The sound of wooden paws rings out in the silent corridor, and the three watch as a black and red fainting couch runs after Thing and straight through a wall.

Behind them a white marble statue follows, with a portrait of an Addams ancestor.

"Buenos dias, niñ—!" the man in the portrait is unable to finish his greeting before the statue disappears through the wall as well.

The three children remain stuck in place, staring at the spot they last saw Thing and the animated objects in.

"It's too early in the day for this," mutters Friday as she passes by the empty wall.

Her younger siblings follow her in silence, the two much more used to the everyday weirdness of the Addams manor than her.

∘₊✧───༻✥༺───✧₊∘​

"Are these really all of my options?" asks the ghost given form.

[They are the only worlds we can access at the moment.]

She frowns, grasping wavy black hair into her new pale hands.

"Can I mix them together?"

[Yes. But in that case some of the Chain Drawbacks will be activated.]

"…that is acceptable. Then, let us go into the world The Addams Family. I hope you'll choose an easy crossover jump for me."

[Very well, I will take your suggestion into consideration. Remember that your time of insert might not be what you wish for, however.]

∘₊✧───༻✥༺───✧₊∘​


"How long do we have to wait here?" Pugsley asks as he softly presses a key on the piano.

Wednesday shrugs and turns the page of her book with care. The black haired girl plays with a sharp card in her other hand, stabbing its corners into the dark wooden floor of the library.

"However long it takes for mother to finish her séance," she answers.

Pugsley pouts, and the four year old turns to Friday for a different answer.

Standing on the cushioned still of a window facing the outside Friday offers a twin shrug. The girl turns her gaze away from the dark steel gazebo where their mother is shrouded by mist and sneaks a glance at the cover of Wednesday's book.

「Pseudomonarchia Daemonum」

"…sigh, well, mother should return in a few minutes," Friday answers.

Pugsley frowns, his legs dangling back and forth on the small piano stool. Like earlier his mouth opens and closes several times before he poses a question.

"How do you know that?" he asks, then his eyes suddenly widen and excitement replaces curiosity on his face.

"Did you divine it? Did you, did you?" he questions. "You must have! Did you see mom with your third eye? Or—gasp!—did you have a vision?!?"

Friday's mouth forms a thin line, and one of her eyebrows rises into a perfect arc.

"Pugsley, I was watching her outside," she explains softly.

The young boy deflates, and the books he accidentally floated with his magic fall to the ground with a thud.

"…sorry," he says, knowing how much his sisters care for the books in the library.

Friday shakes her head, and places a hand on his back as she walks to him.

"There's nothing to apologize for. Accidental magic is normal, and you did nothing wrong by becoming excited. After we're done here I will show the both of you some divination tricks, okay?" she comforts, making sure to look her younger brother in the eyes.

"…can you use your cards?" he asks.

Friday nods.

"Thank you," he mutters.

With a soft smile the older girl passes by him and begins to collects the fallen books. It is this sight that greets Morticia Addams when she enters the library.

"Oh? And what do we have here?" asks Morticia, her hand resting between that of her shorter husband.
 
Chain Information
Original Name: Unknown
Current Jump Name: Friday W. Addams

Original Age: Unknown
Avatar Age: 21
Current Jump Age: 10


Chain Rules

*Da Capo [100CP]
Each jump, start from birth. Your jump stops at the age you rolled + 10 years.

*Self-Insert [0CP]
You always start off either as an already established character or a family member of said characters.

*Laws of The World [400CP]
Outside of the jump multiverse you purchased your perks from their intensity weakens by half. Furthermore, if any powers require a source they may only work if said source is either already stated to exist in the next jump or can conceivably be present but not mentioned.

*I am enough [Perk Gained]
You cannot get any intelligence enhancements or memory and will boosters. All perks and items that offer them as a bonus, on top of another power or boost, work as though intelligence and memory were never mentioned.
Gain Perk: Seity
Your mind, body, and memories are your own. Without your permission nothing and no one can change them. No great or old one can influence your mind or memories and no items or beings can change your body.
Gain a boost in memory capacity and ability to recall.

*I choose, you choose[200CP/100CP due to Da Capo drawback interference]
Every second jump your origin choices are not your own. Age, gender, time of insert, and even the alternative universe you find yourself in will be chosen by your Patron, regardless of the options offered by the jump document. You may specify the genre or difficulty of the world you wish for, but your Patron may or may not take your words into consideration; either way they can also choose your next Jump altogether.

*Crossover (0CP)
For every jump you take choose another. Your first jump is the main universe while the other works as a crossover.
※Due to interaction between this drawback and "I choose, you choose" you cannot specify your second jump world unless allowed to by your patron, the world may also be chosen by your patron.

Jump Worlds

The Addams Family
Harry Potter Interactive CYAO

Perks
Currently unknown.
 
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