I have re-edited and redrawn my first chapter and didn't want to brutally murder my OP here, so I have started a new thread that will be home to this quest. Link is here. I am sorry for my randomness. I have asked the staff to have this thread locked after this post. Please direct to the new thread. Thank you guys and my sincerest apologies for my fault. All current votes must be redone for Vote Tally purposes. Like i said, I'd rather not brutally murder my OP here and redo this and make it confusing, which I understand is already.