The voice within - Inner Sakura quest

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Experimental quest to see how much I can get away with the bare minimum. Still a newbie QM.
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You are a unique entity. Born from suppression of a little girl, a split personality of some sort. No one know of your existence except the girl herself. Sakura called you inner for your existence,your voice is only in her head. Normally you would only be the reflection of her mind. But somewhere along the way you start to think different, whether you are wiser or more stupid than your host. Only time will tell.

Your change started from

[]Before the first year of the academy.(pre-cannon)
[]On the day of Sakura graduation.(start from cannon)

Naruto quest with no bloodline limits MC in the world with cannon power scales. Because I just want to know if one can survive without magic eyeballs.

The premise is simple. You can only vote what inner tell Sakura. Sakura may or may not agree with you depending on her character and your relationship with her. The goal is to survive until the end.
 
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The birth of inner
It's just another day at the Konoha playground. The sun is shinning, the birds are singing, many children run around on the green grass field creating a lively atmosphere. In the conner of the field four children facing each other, they seem to be in a heat discussion.

"I pick it up so it's mine!"
"No! I saw it first!"
"You are both wrong! I'm the leader so it belongs to me!"
"What's that has to do with anything?"

One of the four, the girl with pink hair listened to the other three. She opened her mouth with a meek voice.

"U-Umm it's just a rock?"

"No! It's the most awesome rock in the world! Look at those white layers there must be a treasure inside!" The boy talk back.

"What is it forehead? You are jealous aren't you?" The girl in the group asked.

"F-Forehead?" Young Sakura muttered in a low voice.

"Yes! Your dumb big forehead look so lame I bet you are jealous!" The girl continued.

[Shannaro! Who are you calling forehead you absolute yacky vegetables!] The voice rang within Sakura head.

[Yes! Who are you calling forehead? Wait! Did I just think that?] Sakura thought.

[I thought so] the voice replied.

Wait a moment....

[What!]
[What!]

Immerse in her own thoughts, Sakura doesn't notice that all of the children are further and further away.

[Who are you? Why are you in my head?] Sakura asked.

[I don't know. Why am I in your head?] The voice asked back.

One moment it is Sakura, then it is not. This thing is so confusing!

"Sakura-chan! It's time to go home" a female voice coming closer.

The pink hair girl turn her head only to see her mother calling with a smile.

"Yes, mom!"

..........

You 'watch' as Sakura and her mom walk to Sakura's home. You are a little bit confused and terrified. What are you? Why do you exist? But one thing that you remembered is that in less than a week, Sakura will go to the academy. You wondered. What will happen then?

You should talk to Sakura. But what to talk about?

Maybe you will talk about your existence? Alternatively you can have Sakura learn more about the academy, right? Or just stay silent? Hmm what to do....

.......

That's the first update.

You will notice that there is no choice. This is because I want you to come up with the phase yourself. Of cause, you always have one option available, to stay silent. If you don't want inner to talk just vote

[]Stay silent

But why would you do that?

The choice is just a guideline, you can talk to Sakura about anything. Be aware that inner only have Sakura knowledge and at present it is not much. You can ask me about what inner/Sakura does or does not know and I will answer.
 
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