The Summoned Hero Is a Historical Materialist??

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This is a fanfiction of The Rising of the Shield Hero (the anime), except Naofumi is a socialist, an anti-monarchist and a slavery abolitionist (but I repeat myself). You don't need to have seen the anime in order to enjoy it.

Nominated Best User Fic and Best Ongoing Fic in SV User Awards 2022.
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Chapter 1: Justice Under Feudalism

Winged_One

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Author Note: I bumped up the ages of various characters to avoid dealing with minors. This will affect essentially nothing. Some other changes to the continuity have been made, but events will largely follow those of the anime to start with. As we get going, they will diverge.

The story is written in the style of a screenplay. I will include a dramatis personae at the end of every chapter - a list of key characters who appear in the chapter, and short descriptions of who they are, so you don't have to worry about forgetting people.

This story is mirrored on royalroad and Archive of Our Own.

SCENE: The masquerade. A giant town square is filled with elegantly dressed, masked DANCERS. Their clothes are incredibly expensive, showing gold, rubies, silk, intricate patterns and impossibly fine cuts. They spin and weave in a complex, perfectly coordinated dance, grouping up and splitting, moving as if more liquid than people. Music floats above the square.​

NARRATOR: Ants! What can a single ant do? Nothing, really. Yet, a group - a society of ants - can build massive anthills, coordinate raids, cross rivers, and fell giant trees! And yet, even as they do that, no single ant can possibly understand the complexity of their society!

DANCERS are speeding up, forming a hypnotic, shifting pattern. The music speeds up with them.​

NARRATOR: The laws governing antdom are incomprehensible to ants, and cannot be learned if you look at a single ant. Only when the entire system is in view, can they be studied. Humans are much alike: you cannot learn the laws of human society by looking at a single human. But then, what is a single human to do? If complex systems govern society, how could they expect to affect change?

DANCERS reach a ludicrous speed; it seems that at any moment, one of them will slip, fall, and bring the whole square down with them like so many dominoes. Music reaches a furious crescendo.​

NARRATOR: But sometimes, when conditions are right, a system can be pushed over with a single blow!

Gunshot rings out over the crowd, and the music stops. DANCERS flee the square in perfect coordination, leaving it empty in moments, with a single person standing in the middle, a revolver raised into the air.​


NARRATOR: It is by recognising these moments, that a single person can affect society!




SCENE: An opulent, spacious hall, decorated with gold, silk and marble. Windows cover one of the walls, from the floor to the ceiling, letting in bright, morning light. A giant door - or perhaps a gate - takes up another wall, with a decorated red carpet leading from it to a throne on the other side of the room. Two rows of columns flank the carpet, going down the length of the hall, supporting walkways near the ceiling, where crowds of courtiers have gathered to watch the proceedings. Murmurs of whispered conversation echo around the walls.

The throne is occupied by THE KING. By their side, there are guards and a small group of close advisors. In front of the throne stand four young men, dressed in modern clothes unfitting of their surroundings. Each of them holds one of four weapons - a SHIELD, a BOW, a SWORD and a SPEAR. THE KING has just stopped retelling an apocalyptic prophecy, with a grave look on their face.​

THE SWORD HERO: So, allow me to summarize. Once every few months, a set of portals opens up, spilling powerful monsters over a random location. If these monsters are not defeated, then the world moves closer to its end. These events are called "Waves of Apocalypse".

KING: That is correct.

THE SWORD HERO: And in order to defend against these waves, you have summoned us - four 'cardinal heroes' - each of whom carries a special, legendary magical weapon. These weapons will grow in power over time as we fight the monsters.

KING: Yes.

THE SHIELD HERO: A shield is a weapon?

THE SWORD HERO: It's magic. Even a fan could be a weapon with enough magic. Look -

He throws the sword to the side. After a moment, it winks out from the ground, and appears back in his hand.​


THE SWORD HERO: We can't even be separated from these weapons. Besides the weapons, we can access a mental menu, containing all our statistics, letting us keep track of our inventory, and so on.

KING: Indeed.

THE SWORD HERO: Currently, we are all level one, and therefore very weak. We would have to grind in order to be of any use in the waves. Unfortunately, the menu says that if we adventure together, we would level up slower, so we will have to split up.

KING: Yes, thank you. After a feast, we will bring in some volunteers to help you. And now, I believe it is time for the heroes to introduce themselves.

THE SPEAR HERO stands forth. He is blonde, tall, beautiful and exudes arrogance.​


THE SPEAR HERO: I'll go first! Kitamura Motoyasu, 23 years old, college student. Pleased to meet you!

THE SWORD HERO follows after. He is dark haired, with noble features, and is idly picking at dirt from under his nails.​


THE SWORD HERO: Next is me, I suppose. Amaki Ren. 18 years old, finishing high school.

THE BOW HERO continues the line up. Brown haired and shorter than the other three, he is dressed in bright, orange clothes, complimenting his smile.​


THE BOW HERO: I am Kawasumi Itsuki. 19 years old, college student.

KING: Hmm. Ren, Motoyasu and Itsuki, huh? Thank you heroes for introducing yourselves -

THE SHIELD HERO: Wait, what about me?

KING: Oh, forgive me. Please, go ahead.

THE SHIELD HERO: My name is Naofumi Iwatani, 20 years old, and also a college student.

KING: Excellent. Of course, once you have defeated all the Waves, you will be rewarded handsomely."

REN, THE SWORD HERO: Good. You didn't expect us to defend you for free, did you?




SCENE: A feast hall, filled with dozens of tables full of food. Dozens of tables are covered with small plates of varied food: dumplings, sandwiches, soups, puddings, tiny pies, and so on. Courtiers pass between tables, mingling with one another

The four heroes are huddled around one of the tables, discussing the events. Occasionally courtiers approach them for an introduction and a short chat, before leaving.​

NAOFUMI: Man, no way am I remembering any of their names afterwards.

MOTOYASU: Ha! Are you one of those people who never reads lore text?

NAOFUMI: Wait, lore text? What are you talking about?

The other three heroes share a look between them.​

MOTOYASU: Ah, from the item or quest descriptions? It mentions a lot of these people.

NAOFUMI: Item descriptions?

MOTOYASU: …yes. From the game, remember?

NAOFUMI looks around, clearly not understanding.​


NAOFUMI: Are you saying that, back on Earth, you played a game set in this world? So you already know who everyone is and how everything works?

MOTOYASU: Yes, of course.

REN: Me too.

ITSUKI: Same.

REN: Wait, how did you end up here then? I logged into the game and it pulled me in.

MOTOYASU: Yeah, me as well.

ITSUKI: Uh-huh.

NAOFUMI: I went to the library for some light reading and opened a book from the shelf. Didn't have time to read anything besides the title.

The other three heroes laugh.​


NAOFUMI: Oh man, really?

REN: Well, no wonder you ended up as a shielder then. Nobody played them in the game, the class was badly designed.

The other two heroes nod.​


NAOFUMI: Seriously? So I also get the short end of the power stick?

ITSUKI: Oh, don't worry too much. Things are a bit different here: only one player per weapon, so even if you are weaker, we could still use your help. And you'd have a party, right?




SCENE: Back in the audience hall. A long row of volunteers is standing in front of the King's throne. They are kitted in all sorts of gear - armor, bows, swords, magic staves, and so on.​

KING: And now, the volunteers would choose whose party they would join.

ITSUKI: We don't get to pick?

KING: No. These people are volunteers - I cannot force them to follow any of you. They will make their own choices.

Volunteers line up behind their chosen heroes. None pick NAOFUMI. He looks distraught.​


NAOFUMI: What? Nobody? Come on, I also need a party!

KING: Hmm. I admit I haven't been expecting this.

NAOFUMI: What? Did something happen?

KING: It seems that there have been rumors that the Shield Hero doesn't know anything about our world. It is only natural that none of the volunteers want to risk their life in this situation.

NARRATOR: Perhaps loudly discussing things at dinner is not the best idea!

NAOFUMI looks around, in shock.​

NAOFUMI: How can I fight the Waves like this? I can't even kill anyone, all I have is a shield…

NAOFUMI turns to ITSUKI.​

NAOFUMI: Hey Itsuki, could you at least give me one guy? You have five of them already…

MYSTERIOUS VOLUNTEER: Sir Hero!

Lightly armored, red-headed woman with a sword at her hip steps out from behind MOTOYASU. She is stunningly beautiful, and dressed richly.​


MYNE, THE MYSTERIOUS VOLUNTEER: I am Myne.

MYNE makes a curtsy, then turns toward MOTOYASU.​

MYNE: Would you allow me to join Sir Shield's party? I think it would be unfair to leave them with no companions.

MOTOYASU scratches his head.​

MOTOYASU: Are you sure? Well, if you are, I don't mind.

With volunteers distributed, THE KING gives every hero 600 silver coins as starting money. NAOFUMI gets 800 to compensate for their smaller party.​





SCENE: Evening in a large, busy tavern. The room is busy and loud, with waitresses running between tables, bringing food and drink. All four heroes, as well as their parties, are having a final meal before setting off out of town on the next day. The heroes are sitting together, with their party members spread throughout the room. They are discussing their life back on Earth.​

REI: I've been wondering, Naofumi - what are those?

He points at NAOFUMI's chest. On his shirt, there are three decorated pins. One of them has a red star.​


NAOFUMI: These? Oh, they are my student club emblems. You could get free food at the student faculty if you wore them. One was for singing, another for history… All sorts of stuff, really.

MYNE: Sir hero!

MYNE waves to NAOFUMI from across the room.​

NAOFUMI: Oh, Myne is calling me. I'll go talk to her - maybe she wants to discuss what we will do tomorrow.

ITSUKI: Cheers!

NAOFUMI gets up and heads to MYNE's table.​

MYNE: Oh, please, take a seat.

NAOFUMI takes a seat. They order some food, and MYNE orders wine.​

MYNE: Don't you want to drink Sir Hero?

NAOFUMI: Oh no, I don't drink.

MYNE: But we are celebrating!

NAOFUMI: Still.

MYNE pouts, but lets the issue go.​

NAOFUMI: Thanks. I think I will head upstairs - big day ahead.




SCENE: NAOFUMI in his rented tavern room, preparing for bed. The room is sparsely furnished - with a simple bed, a desk, and a closet, with little in the way of decoration. A set of chainmail armor is draped over the desk.​

NAOFUMI: This whole situation is quite something. Brought to another world, forced to fight these Waves… At least it seems I made some friends already. Myne showed me around town, so soon I won't be behind on my local knowledge. Even got this armor fitted to me, which was very nice of her - I wouldn't have known what to buy first.

NAOFUMI hefts the bag of silver in his hand, then takes out a dozen coins, and stuffs them in between his clothing and the shield.​


NAOFUMI: Eh, why not. I feel a bit like a paranoid tourist, but I won't break a habit built over years of college travels. This way I won't be out if someone steals my wallet.

NAOFUMI undresses, gets into bed, and crawls in. As he drifts asleep, he murmurs.​


NAOFUMI: Maybe things will turn out alright. I could even achieve something big in this world.

The room goes dark.​




SCENE: Morning. NAOFUMI is sleeping in his bed, turning from one side to the other. His earth clothes are where he left them, but the suit of chainmail, as well as the bag of silver, are gone.

NAOFUMI wakes up, and gets out of bed.​

NAOFUMI: What the - fuck! We've been robbed!

NAOFUMI quickly puts on his clothes, and rushes out of his room. He heads to the room right across, and knocks on the door.​


NAOFUMI: Myne! Wake up - we've been robbed!

The door opens as he knocks on it - it is unlocked. The room behind it is empty - Myne is nowhere to be found.​


NAOFUMI: She must have gone downstairs to get breakfast.

He rushes towards the stairs leading back to the tavern hall, but is stopped by a squad of armed guards heading in the opposite direction. The lead guad, wearing a crested helmet, glances at his shield, and his face contorts in disgust.​


GUARD WITH FANCY HELMET: Shield Hero? Please come with us. The king has summoned you to the castle.

NAOFUMI is surrounded by the guards, and is lead outside, confused.​




SCENE: Back in the castle audience hall. The crowds are absent now: only the KING, his guards, the other heroes and MYNE are present. MYNE is standing next to MOTOYASU, who is wearing the same suit of chainmail that was taken from NAOFUMI's room. As NAOFUMI is led through the doors, everyone turns to face him, their faces grave.​

NAOFUMI: What is going on? Myne, someone robbed us -

MYNE shrinks away from him, hiding behind MOTOYASU. NAOFUMI looks confused, until a guard behind him kicks him in the back, making him sprawl on the ground. The other guards unsheathe weapons and surround NAOFUMI.​


NAOFUMI: What is going on? I was robbed, and now this -

KING: Shut up, scumbag!

KING sighs, and covers his face.​

KING: Myne, you poor adventurer, could you please testify once more for us, as you have done for me in private?

MYNE, from behind THE SPEAR HERO: T-the Shield Hero barged into my room drunk and pinned me down. He said "The night is still young" and tore my clothes off. I somehow escaped and ran to Sir Motoyasu, who was staying at the same inn, for help!

NAOFUMI: What the hell?

MOTOYASU: If she hadn't asked me to wait till dawn and call the knights, I would have cut you down myself!

NAOFUMI: What? I went straight to bed after dinner last night! I don't even drink!

NAOFUMI notices the chainmail.​

NAOFUMI: Wait, that chainmail…

MOTOYASU: What about it? Myne gave this to me as a present when I met her at the pub yesterday.

KING: To think that the Shield Hero would commit the gravest sin in this country. In Melromarc, even attempting to sexually assault a woman is punishable by death! If you weren't a hero, you would be executed immediately!

NAOFUMI: Executed? I am telling you, you've got the wrong idea! I didn't do it! I don't drink, and I haven't even been in Myne's room!

GUARD WITH FANCY HELMET: Your highness, when questioned, tavern keeper confessed that he saw Sir Shield utterly drunk last night. Furthermore, when we searched the Shield Hero's room, we found this on his bed!

GUARD WITH FANCY HELMET presents a set of female underwear. MYNE schrieks and covers her face.​

MOTOYASU: You animal!

KING: There you have it. Undeniable proof.

NAOFUMI: What? This is all a setup! Come on, Itsuki and Rei, surely you saw that I didn't drink last night?

ITSUKI: After you left to talk to Myne, I haven't seen you.

REI: Me either. You think that just because you are a hero you can do whatever the hell you want and get away with it?

NAOFUMI: That's not even the least bit true!

MOTOYASU: You are not the be all and end all in this world! Know your place!

NAOFUMI looks around, confused and panicked.​

NARRATOR: Slowly, realization dawns.

A ray of light from the dawning sun reaches through the windows of the hall. As it touches NAOFUMI, SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI is revealed to be standing behind them, speaking their thoughts.​


SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: I see. Joining me was just a ruse meant to destroy me right here. It was all a lie!

NAOFUMI gestures to MOTOYASU and MYNE.​


NAOFUMI: You two planned this together! It's the only explanation!

REI: Refusing to admit his guilt and making nonsensical accusations.

ITSUKI: They never should have summoned the shield hero.

NAOFUMI: Fine. I don't care anymore. Just send me back to my world. And summon a new shield hero or whatever the hell you want? Why should I have to go through this for this world?

MOTOYASU: Yeah, get lost, who wants to fight alongside a rapist?

KING: I'd love to do as you wish and kick you out, but the legend says that new heroes can only be summoned once all four cardinal heroes die. You can only go home after you fight off all the incoming Waves.

Shocked realization spreads through the heroes. NAOFUMI uses this moment to bat aside the sword of one of the guards. As he does this, his shield emits a blast of force, sending the other guards stumbling back.​


NAOFUMI: Get off me. Will you throw me in jail until the next wave?

KING: I won't imprison you. Scum or not, you are still a hero, one of the only beings who can fight the Waves. But news of your crime is already spreading among the people. This is your punishment. Don't think you will ever get to lead a decent life in this country.

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: The bastard must have started the rumor himself.

NAOFUMI: Then I'll see you at the Waves.

NAOFUMI scowls, spits on the ground, turns around, and marches out of the hall.​





SCENE: A forest next to the town.​

NARRATOR: Some people learn best from books; others, from live instruction; still others, from practice. But there is one fact that remains true for most everyone: You cannot truly learn something, down to your very bones, until it affects you personally.

NAOFUMI: Rat-fucking bastards!

Man previously known as Shield Hero is punching a tree. Tears stream down his face.​

NAOFUMI: All I wanted was a fucking chance!

NARRATOR: Everything in the world appears set against him! He has neither allies, nor money, nor power!

NARRATOR: Wordless cries of dismay echo from his chest. He briefly considers ending it all.

NARRATOR: And yet, in the back of his mind, somewhere deep within the confines of his brain…synapses fire, connections linking together!

NARRATOR: These sparks grow, join up, and turn into a furious cascade, a flash of lightning that illuminates the void of despair surrounding him!

NARRATOR: This flash waxes, shifts, morphs, and turns into…a feeling! A desire! Desire for life! For survival!

NARRATOR: It is a call of the heart made in the darkest moment, a single spark that could set a forest ablaze, saying "No! I will not go silently into the night!"

NARRATOR: But a desire, on its own, is worth little. What good is a desire for an impossibility?

NAOFUMI slumps against the tree. He slides to the ground, his hand clutching his chest.​

NARRATOR: There is nothing he could do. He is all alone.

NAOFUMI's hand brushes up against the university club badges on his chest. He glances down on them. One of them - a red star, with writing around it - shines bright.​

NARRATOR: He remembers words he heard long ago. Ones that, at the time, sounded like empty platitudes.

SPIRIT OF THE PAST: To be a socialist is to believe that humanity can always do better. That even in the darkest night, the stars would not go out. That even if the entire world is full of evil, even if you are the last socialist in the world, even if all the armies in the world are against you, even if the road to a better future seems immeasurably long, you should rise up your tools and say 'We can build it!'

NARRATOR: The spark of desire touches these words, turning them into the driest kindling! Desire ignites, and turns into…conviction!

NAOFUMI, THE FIRST SOCIALIST: You fucking bastards. You think you can just wipe your boots with my face, because you are 'royalty'?

There are no more tears on NAOFUMI's face. His face is contorted in a grimace of cold rage!​

THE FIRST SOCIALIST: Because some fucking ancestor of yours killed enough people to put a crown on their head? Because you pillage and rob enough people that your troves of blood money can pay for an army? Because if anyone so much as farts against your wishes, you can cut off their head?

NARRATOR: Conviction hisses, heats up, boils over, and explodes, turning into a plan!

THE FIRST SOCIALIST: I will make you regret bringing me here, you feodal pieces of shit. I will bury you in the ruins of your own fucking castles. I - no, we, the workers you tread over, the peasantry your types always stomp into the ground, will dance so hard on your graves that you will hear the music in your fucking afterlife.

THE FIRST SOCIALIST stands up, and walks away from the tree. As he does so, he whispers.​

THE FIRST SOCIALIST: There is no time to waste: material conditions have to be engineered.




Dramatis Personae

THE NARRATOR. Visiting us from the Ultimate Survivor Kaiji. Voice of drama.
SPIRIT OF THE PAST. Voice of all that comes from Earth.
SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI. Voice of the heart.
NAOFUMI IWATANI, THE SHIELD HERO. The only socialist. Protagonist.
KITAMURA MOTOYASU, THE SPEAR HERO. Tall and handsome. Oblivious.
AMAKI REN, THE SWORD HERO. Dark and brooding. Practical.
KAWASUMI ITSUKI, THE BOW HERO. Bright and shining.
MYNE. Sorceress adventurer extraordinaire. Betrayed Naofumi.
GUARD WITH FANCY HELMET. Captain of the royal guards.
 
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Chapter 2: Bluffing With Bad Cards
SCENE: Fields of tall grass next to the town. NAOFUMI is attempting to fight an orange flying enemy shaped like a basketball. The ball tries to fly into him, teeth wide, and NAOFUMI's shield hand automatically moves to intercept it. He then punches the ball, causing it to fly back, and the process repeats. After several minutes of punching, the ball finally bursts into fragments, and NAOFUMI flops on the ground, exhausted.​

NAOFUMI: Okay. Fine. Yeah.

NAOFUMI: Christ, that was terrible. I can't do this for months at a time.

NAOFUMI: Okay, what did we learn.

NAOFUMI opens his status menu.


NAOFUMI: I need 20 experience points to level up. Each blob gives me a whooping one point. So theoretically, that's 20 blobs to level up. The problem is the fucking attack stat, which for me, is 1.

NAOFUMI: I guess low attack makes sense for a shield. The help menu gives no information about how the mechanics of the game actually work, but I can make some educated guesses. I can see the health of the blobs, and I deal one damage per hit. This can mean two things: one, damage is directly equal to the attack stat; or two, 1 damage is the minimum you can deal on the attack, rounded up.

NAOFUMI sighs, and rubs his eyes.​

NAOFUMI: But that's per hit, and I hit maybe, what, one attack out of ten? Twenty? The shield clearly gives me instincts for the defense - thank god for that - but it does nothing for attack. Once again, it makes sense, but that doesn't help me any. If I assume that mechanics are also responsible for the chance of hitting the enemy - and why wouldn't they be? - then it's very possible that the same stat is used for damage and for hit chance. That would compound my disadvantage, and it would only get worse with higher level opponents.

NAOFUMI: I must have fought each blob for, what, ten minutes? It felt like an eternity. I could go up to second level today… but it will take progressively more to push further up the levels. If only I had a party…

NAOFUMI takes one of the orange blob scraps on the ground, and brings it over to the big gem on the front of his shield. The scrap is sucked into the gem, and the shield changes into a round, orange form, styled after the blob.​

SYSTEM MESSAGE: Small Orange Shield unlocked!

NAOFUMI: At least I got a new shield.

NAOFUMI: Okay. New idea. What if I also got a sword.



SCENE: weapons shop in the middle of town. The room is filled with weapon racks, with the walls covered in various shields. Behind the counter, an absolute wall of a man awaits customers. He is bald, six and a half feet tall, and wears a smithing apron.

NAOFUMI enters through the door. The doorbell rings, and BLACKSMITH looks up from a book.​

BLACKSMITH: You! I heard what you did to that girl.

BLACKSMITH scowls, strides from behind the counter, and easily lifts NAOFUMI by the lapels, pinning him to the wall.​

BLACKSMITH: You deserve a punch to the face!

NAOFUMI stares back, silently.​

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: Even this guy is in on it. How quickly can this King work? It has barely been a few hours.

NAOFUMI: You know what, if that's what you believe, go ahead.

NAOFUMI sighs, closes his eyes, and relaxes in the BLACKSMITH's grip. BLACKSMITH stares at him for a while, then puts him down. NAOFUMI opens his eyes, surprised.​

NAOFUMI: Oh? Change your mind?

BLACKSMITH: Did you do it?

NAOFUMI: What good would my word be? The King says I did it.

BLACKSMITH: Did. You. Do. It.

NAOFUMI: No.

BLACKSMITH stares him down, then shakes his head.​

BLACKSMITH: Woman you were with yesterday, she asked me for how much I would buy back the chainmail you bought. Felt off to me, and you don't seem a liar.

NAOFUMI brushes himself off.​

NAOFUMI: How did you hear about this, in any case? Guards came by?

BLACKSMITH: There is an announcement on the central square.

NAOFUMI: Bastards. So now nobody will want to deal with me.

BLACKSMITH: Pretty much. Don't come to my shop either until this calms down, I don't need this publicity.

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: And yet, you won't throw me out immediately. I can work with this.

NAOFUMI: I need a sword. Nothing fancy, I am strapped for cash. Give me that, and you won't see me until the next wave.

BLACKSMITH shrugs, goes behind the counter, and takes out a short sword.​

BLACKSMITH: Five silver for this. Try the balance, then clear out.

NAOFUMI grabs the sword. As soon as his hand closes around it, sparks of lightning shoot out of his hand, causing him to drop it on the floor.​

OBNOXIOUS SYSTEM MESSAGE: CAUTION: INAPPROPRIATE WEAPON USE PROHIBITED

NAOFUMI: Motherfucker. This stupid shield won't even let me pick up a sword, let alone use it.

BLACKSMITH shrugs.​

BLACKSMITH: Sorry about that. Armor?

NAOFUMI: I only have seven silver to my name, plus what is on me right now. Can't afford it.

NAOFUMI turns to leave.​

BLACKSMITH: Hey, hold on.

BLACKSMITH rummages around behind the counter, then throws NAOFUMI an old green cloak. NAOFUMI catches it with a curious look.​

NAOFUMI: How much for this?

BLACKSMITH: Call it a clearance sale, it's free. At least this way you won't freeze at night.

NAOFUMI nods, and leaves.​



SCENE: Back in the forest around town. Sun is setting. NAOFUMI is sitting on a wide tree branch, eating an apple.​

NAOFUMI: Thinking logically, there is only one option left for me: to hire mercenaries. There is just one problem: money. Mercs would already be expensive; with my reputation shot to shit, even more so. What silver I have is far from enough.

NAOFUMI: This means I need a lot of money. My only real way to get money is to hunt monsters and sell their parts. But without a way to deal good damage, that takes forever, and I am exhausted quickly. To get access to damage, I need to already have damage. A classic catch-22.

NAOFUMI reaches into his pocket, pulling out a bunch of orange blob scraps. He counts them, then puts them back into his pocket.​

NAOFUMI: Sixty seven scraps… About three per blob, it seems. I'll see what I can fetch for this in town tomorrow.

NAOFUMI lies back on the branch, trying to find a comfortable position to sleep.​

NAOFUMI: No money for a bed in a tavern. Bum life it is. I guess we'll see if I fall down and break my neck midway through the night.

NAOFUMI hums "Hallelujah I am a bum", and slowly falls to sleep. The sun skips through the sky, and soon, it is morning again. NAOFUMI slowly wakes up, rubs his eyes, and climbs down the tree. He checks over himself.​

NAOFUMI: Well, what do you know, I don't hurt all over. Must be more shield magic.

NAOFUMI dusts off his cloak, pulls it tighter around himself, and heads to town.​

NAOFUMI: Alright, I think it's time to fraternize with the capitalist class.

Author Note: This is the song: https://youtu.be/E5Ll51kcbjo



SCENE: An alley within the town, with small market stalls selling and buying various odds and ends. One of the stalls is filled with various animal parts - skulls, furs, bones, claws, and so on. In front of this stall, a customer is selling their haul to a pudgy merchant with shifting eyes. NAOFUMI watches the sale take place from outside of the merchant's view.​

MERCHANT: Alright, that's seven minor griffon talons for fourteen silver total, five hearts for seven fifty, and fifteen orange balloon scraps for fifteen copper, totaling up twenty one sixty five.

MERCHANT counts out the coins, and hands them off to the customer.​

MERCHANT: Always pleasure doing business with you!

The customer leaves, and NAOFUMI takes this opportunity to approach, putting his orange blob scraps on the counter. MERCHANT's eyes widen and he steps back.​

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: Oh here we go, he recognised us.

MERCHANT does not make a comment, and simply counts out the scraps.​

MERCHANT: Sixty six, sixty seven… This would be six copper, but I'll round it up to seven.

MERCHANT confidently smiles at NAOFUMI. NAOFUMI stares into the MERCHANT's face, unblinking.​

MERCHANT: Well? Price is set, if you want to haggle, go somewhere else.

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: Bastard. You know nobody wants to trade with me as is. There is a reason I am not doing this in the big shops on the central street.

MERCHANT smirks at NAOFUMI. NAOFUMI tiredly closes his eyes, and cycles his breathing several times. His eyes snap open, and he lunges for the MERCHANT's collar, and slams their face into the counter. MERCHANT yelps in alarm.​

NAOFUMI: Do you know who I am?

NAOFUMI's voice is calm, as if discussing the weather. His other hand jams the shield up to the MERCHANT's throat, silencing his cries of alarm.​

RASPING MERCHANT: The…The shield hero! You raped a girl, we all heard it!

NAOFUMI: Is that so? And what's the punishment for rape?

RASPING MERCHANT: It's…execution.

NAOFUMI: Funny, I seem to be still alive. And what's the punishment for me killing you right now?

RASPING MERCHANT: It's…also execution.

NAOFUMI: Now isn't that interesting.

NAOFUMI leans close to the MERCHANT's ear.​

NAOFUMI: What do you think, should we see if I could dodge death a second time?

MERCHANT trembles without answering.​

NAOFUMI: How about this. You trade with me on fair terms - I believe it's one copper per scrap? - and then we won't have to conduct this little experiment. And why don't you tell other merchants about this, I don't want to have the same talk again.

NAOFUMI releases the MERCHANT. They begin hurriedly counting out copper into a bag, before handing it over to NAOFUMI.​

NAOFUMI: Thank you. Now, wasn't this much easier?

NAOFUMI leaves.​



SCENE: Montage as NAOFUMI works on strengthening his abilities.​

NARRATOR: Sixty-odd coppers for a full day of work is essentially nothing. If NAOFUMI is to be ready for the Wave of Apocalypse, he will need a much faster way of making money!

NAOFUMI is heading out of town. On the way there, he passes by a potions store. He stops, looking curiously at the herbs displayed in the window.​

NARRATOR: He finds it! Reaching back through history, it is … hunter-gathering!

In the forest around town, NAOFUMI is picking up the same plants he saw in the store. He feeds one of them to his shield, turning it into a giant leaf.​

OBNOXIOUS SYSTEM MESSAGE: Small Plant Shield unlocked!

NAOFUMI: Hm. Shield says it grants me "Foraging" skill while worn, which increases the quality of plant ingredients I pick up. Convenient.

In the potions store, THE POTION MAKER - elderly, but lithe individual - is surprised by the quality of ingredients NAOFUMI offers, saying he didn't think they could be found this close to town.​

NARRATOR: The more he gathers, the more money he gets! The more money, the more tools and shields! The more tools, the easier it is to gather!

NAOFUMI is sitting near a river, taking out dozens of tools out of a backpack: axes, mortars, fishing rods, knives, calipers, and so on, feeding all of them to the shield. Shield quickly shifts from one form to another.​

NARRATOR: He learns! Grows! Masters his toolset! Problems of the past fall apart before his mind!

NAOFUMI is back in the grassy fields. Several orange blobs surround him. Instead of fighting them, he is holding a cloth bag: as a blob comes flying in, he captures it in the bag, quickly pulling it closed with a piece of rope, and picks up a new bag. The blob within the bag attempts to fly away, but cannot, because the bag is tied to a larger backpack. Soon enough, a dozen blobs are captured in bags. NAOFUMI grabs them one by one, puts them between his legs, and hammers on them with his fists until the blob inside bursts.​

NAOFUMI: Finally, third level!


SYSTEM MESSAGE: Small shield mastered! Mastery bonus: when a shield is used for a while to achieve a certain level of proficiency, it will grant its wielder permanent bonuses.

NAOFUMI: Very interesting. "Used for a while", huh. Three plausible things this could mean: either I have to simply have it out as I go about my day, or I have to be using it in combat, or it has to specifically block damage. Time to experiment. Damage from these blobs can no longer outpace my health regeneration, and I don't feel pain as long as my health is high enough, so they would serve as perfect targets.

NAOFUMI takes one of the blobs out of its bag, and puts it on his leg. The blob starts happily gnawing on it.​

NAOFUMI: Let's see how quickly I could master other shields I have now.

NARRATOR: The time passes, and Naofumi's wealth grows! But without increasing his level, he would be a sitting duck during the Wave. And without foraging in more dangerous areas, he cannot unlock more shields. He is stuck! There is only one solution: mercenaries. After another week of gathering, he feels confident enough to go for it!



SCENE: Dark alley at night, next to a seedy tavern. NAOFUMI is haggling with three mercenaries over wages. Mercenaries are poorly armed, and look unprofessional.​

NAOFUMI: Look, this is a fair deal, and I will not budge on this. Profit from sale of monster parts is split in six parts; two go into a party pot, to be used for party expenses. I get one part, and each one of you gets one part.

MERCENARY 1: Yeah, see, me and the boys ain't seein' it, ya get me.

MERCENARY 2: We figure you should sweeten the deal, you know. How about a sign up bonus?

MERCENARY 1: Yeah, all sweet-like, say thirty silver per head?

NAOFUMI: Nonsense. You know as well as me that you are underleveled, and nobody in the city - in fact, the entire country - would offer to split the profit with you better than 1 to 1. The only reason I am even here is that I am out of options, but I am fair, and so am offering this incredibly generous deal.

MERCENARIES glance between themselves.​

MERCENARY 1: Yeah, how about this. Wallet or your life?

NAOFUMI: You don't want to do this.

MERCENARY 1 pulls out a knife, and NAOFUMI raises his shield. The other two MERCENARIES try to flank him, but when they go for a stab, are blown back by a wave of force from NAOFUMI's shield. NAOFUMI follows it up by reaching under his cloak and pitching an orange blob at each of them. Having lost their nerve, MERCENARIES flee.​

NAOFUMI: Fucking bastards.

NAOFUMI kicks a nearby wall.​

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: The fuck am I supposed to do now? This was the last plan I had. If even this scum can't see beyond the tip of their nose, then where am I going to find people?

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: Without the party, I can't level. Without leveling, my stats will be shit. With shit stats, I will probably die in the first Wave. But forget the stats; if I want to take on the institution of monarchy, I need to organize other people. But with my reputation in the shitter, I can't organize anything. Of course, if only I had the stats, I could clear my reputation by defending people from monsters. A catch-22.

NAOFUMI wanders down the alley, aimlessly, his eyebrows furrowed in thought. Suddenly, he is stopped by a disturbingly cheerful voice coming from an even darker alley.​

MYSTERIOUS VOICE: Hehehe, you seem to have a bit of an 'employee loyalty problem', one may say.

NAOFUMI turns towards the voice. He sees a short, pudgy man, wearing what could only be described as a pimp outfit, complete with a cane. His face is occupied by three things: enormous glasses, a grin stretching from one cheek to another, and a disgusting mustache with the middle shaved out. It is, in fact, the legendary "reverse Hitler".​

MYSTERIOUS PIMP: Now, now, no need to be hostile, you can scowl at me after you listen to what I have to say. How about I help you out, eh?

NAOFUMI: Help me out how?

MYSTERIOUS PIMP: Oh, by finding you a 'worker', shall we say. I heard all about you, and I think you'd be a great client - how about I even offer you a discount?

NAOFUMI takes a moment to decide, then shrugs, and follows after the mysterious man.​



SCENE: A giant circus tent set up in an isolated square in the seedy part of town. The entire tent is filled with cages, stacked multiple layers high. Inside some of the cages are creatures: werewolves, griffons, giant birds, mantids the size of a person, and so on. Inside other cages - less numerous, but still common - are people in chains.​

NAOFUMI: Slaves. You sell slaves.

NAOFUMI is scowling.​

SLAVE TRADER: Oh, come now, it's perfectly legal. I know you don't know much about our world, but demihuman slavery is omnipresent.

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: Does this fucker think my objection is with legality? Slavery is one of the worst things you can do to a person! It is the epitome of capitalist control: the ownership not of capital, or of land, or of the means of production, but of life itself. The very idea is anathema to any socialist!

SLAVE TRADER: There are great advantages to it, you know. Slave crest prevents them from disobeying or harming you - if they do, they may even die. Of course, demihumans are usually obedient by nature, but ones that have been trained for combat can be feisty. In your situation, with no reputation to speak of…it is truly the perfect choice!

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: Demihuman… That must mean non-humans, various animal folk.

Looking over the cages with people in them, NAOFUMI sees that they do, in fact, have animal ears, tails, and so on.​

NAOFUMI: Are they sentient?

SLAVE TRADER: Oh yes. Some are dumb, but no more than regular people can be, if you catch my meaning hehehe.

They walk past the rows of cages, as the SLAVE TRADER is throwing out prices and advantages of any given slave.

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: My reputation must be truly dire if he thinks I would be in favor of this.

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: I am not so far removed from a slave, when you think about it. I will be teleported into the Wave against my will, when it starts, and forced to fight it. Could I force someone else to fight alongside me?

SLAVE TRADER describes a strong combat werevolf, mentioning it costs 75 gold, and NAOFUMI interrupts him automatically.​

NAOFUMI: I don't have that much. Do you have anything cheaper? A lot cheaper?

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: No, I couldn't. Fuck it. At least I'll free someone. If they don't want to help me, so be it, not like I have anything else to spend the money on. And if I survive, I'll burn this whole fucking place to the ground.

SLAVE TRADER: Cheaper, hmm… Well, I have some eggs - you could try your luck with those. You would have to raise whatever pops out, and it could be completely useless, but the price is low. Hey, you could even get lucky and get a dragon, hehehe!

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: Even in Isekai, there is no escape from gacha.

NAOFUMI: Sounds good. Lead the way.

As they are walking towards the SLAVE TRADER's office, they pass by a cage with a coughing girl, perhaps 16 years of age, wearing a tattered cloak. A tail pokes out from underneath the cloak, marking the girl as a tanuki. NAOFUMI stops dead in front of the cage.

NAOFUMI: How much for this one?

SLAVE TRADER rubs his chin in thought.​

SLAVE TRADER: This one? Just 30 silver, but she's weak and sick. Her previous owner liked to torture her. Completely useless for you, I should think.

NAOFUMI: That's fine, I could cure her.

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: Enslaved children… I will hang this motherfucker with my own two hands, so help me.

SLAVE TRADER shrugs, and opens the cage.​



SCENE: SLAVE TRADER's office. It is richly decorated, with solid wooden furniture, carpets, and bookshelves adorning the walls.

SLAVE TRADER shows NAOFUMI how a slave crest is made. It is a deceptively simple procedure, consisting of two steps. First, a special ink is mixed with the "master's" blood, and then a sigil painted on the chest of the slave. While the SLAVE TRADER is focused on painting the sigil, NAOFUMI swipes some ink on reflex, pouring it into his shield.​

SYSTEM MESSAGE: Slave master's shield unlocked! Special: Increases rate of growth of controlled slaves.

SLAVE TRADER begins the second step: binding the slave with a special incantation. As he intones it, lightning arcs shot out of the painted crest on the girl's chest. The girl twitches in obvious pain, but is too weak to cry out.

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: Fuck me. But no way he would sign the sale contract if I asked him not to use the crest, he would just kick me out and this girl would stay here.

The egg is bound by drawing the crest on the egg shell. As SLAVE TRADER explains, this would transfer the binding to the hatched creature. With the two bindings complete, NAOFUMI hands over one hundred and thirty silver to the SLAVE TRADER, and kneels down next to the girl.​

NAOFUMI: What's your name?

Girl's voice is barely above a whisper.​

RAPHTALIA: Raphtalia…

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: She needs food, medicine, and sleep, in either order.

NAOFUMI: Do you want to eat something, Raphtalia?

RAPHTALIA nods, cautiously. NAOFUMI motions for her to follow him, and heads to a tavern.

Dramatis Personae

NARRATOR: The voice of drama.
SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI. Voice of the heart.
SYSTEM MESSAGE. Claims to not be obnoxious - lies. Voice of the status magic.
NAOFUMI IWATANI, THE SHIELD HERO. The only socialist. Protagonist. Known criminal.
ERHARD THE BLACKSMITH. Best weapons trader in Melromarc.
THE POTION MAKER. A source of knowledge.
SLAVE TRADER. Just doing business, oh ho ho.
RAPHTALIA. Racoon girl. Presently enslaved. Sick.
 
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On one hand the premise looks good. On the other, script fics are a nightmare to read. I'll wait for a few more chapters to see how this goes.
 
I was excited to see the story idea something I hadn't read and would enjoy. But well I hate when stories are written as scripts. I find you just can't get dragged into the story when it is.
I'll be back if you ever decide to put it in a narrative I can enjoy.
 
I haven't read a script fic before, but it does seem like if you eliminate most of the descriptive text, you're going to need what remains to do some very heavy lifting.
 
SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: My reputation must be truly dire if he thinks I would be in favor of this.

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: I am not so far removed from a slave, when you think about it. I will be teleported into the Wave against my will, when it starts, and forced to fight it. Could I force someone else to fight alongside me?
For a moment, I thought this was two different internal voices in a dialogue, one responding to the other, Disco Elysium style. Which now that I think about it would be perfect for a scrip style of writing. Though probably not with the same number of voices...
 
For a moment, I thought this was two different internal voices in a dialogue, one responding to the other, Disco Elysium style. Which now that I think about it would be perfect for a scrip style of writing. Though probably not with the same number of voices...
Multiple internal voices are actually planned, but will get introduced slowly. Naturally, not 26 of them, but some amount will be there.
 
Chapter 3: Forming the Party
SCENE: The same seedy tavern where NAOFUMI tried to pick up some mercenaries. NAOFUMI is confidently approaching the doors, RAPHTALIA follows. NAOFUMI is wearing a cowl and pulling his cloak tight around himself, to conceal his identity. On one side of the doors, there is a candle set above the tavern sign. Below the name of the tavern, it says "We don't serve demihumans".

NAOFUMI pauses in front of the door for a step.​

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: Damn it, how did I miss this last time? Should I pick a different tavern? No, it would be pointless. There isn't a single tavern keeper in this town who will serve me willingly anyways.

NAOFUMI enters the tavern. RAPHTALIA follows at first, but also sees the sign and stops.​

RAPHTALIA: Um… Mister?

NAOFUMI: Come on, ignore it.

RAPHTALIA follows, cautiously. The tavern is half full, even this late at night. RACIST INNKEEPER mans the counter. His eyes pass over NAOFUMI, not recognising him due to his cloak, and stop at RAPHTALIA, his face contorting in disgust.​

RACIST INNKEEPER: Oi, what's that dog doing here? What part of 'We don't serve demihumans' did you miss? Can't read?

NAOFUMI stops in front of the innkeeper and pulls back his hood. RACIST INNKEEPER takes a moment to recognise him, then recoils back.​

NAOFUMI: I don't know. What part of your face will I have to use to wipe that sign off?

WHISPERING TAVERN GUEST 1: It's the shield hero!

WHISPERING TAVERN GUEST 2: I heard he is part of the mafia. That's why they let him walk free despite all his crimes.

WHISPERING TAVERN GUEST 3: No, that is nonsense. He actually has blackmail on the Pope, that's what I heard.

RACIST INNKEEPER scowls at NAOFUMI, clearly on edge.​

RACIST INNKEEPER: What do you want?

NAOFUMI puts some silver on the counter.​

NAOFUMI: Need a room for three nights, with two beds. Bring some food up, too, and a pot of boiled water. Oh, and -

NAOFUMI leans in closer.​

NAOFUMI: If the food for my friend will be bad, I'll know. Let's make sure that doesn't happen.

RACIST INNKEEPER reaches under the counter, and takes out a key, handing it to NAOFUMI.​

RACIST INNKEEPER: Two floors up, third room on the right.

SCENE: Small, almost cramped room in the attic of the tavern. The ceiling is sloped, going from seven feet on one side of the room to only three on the other. A small window is set in the short wall, with two beds to the sides of it. A small desk with a stool stands to the left of the door, leaving little floor space free. The room is lit by a single oil lamp, standing on the table.

NAOFUMI is setting down plates of steaming food and a kettle on the table. RAPHTALIA is sitting on one of the beds, rubbing her eyes. She keeps her eyes on the food, and licks her lips.​

NAOFUMI: There we go. Dig in. I'll see if I can make some medicine for your cough while you eat.

NAOFUMI motions to the plates. RAPHTALIA scampers to the desk and starts eating, with gusto. NAOFUMI opens the door to the room, pokes his head out, looks this way and that, and closes it, locking it from the inside.​

NAOFUMI: Okay, now that we are alone, I should clarify some things.

As he is talking, NAOFUMI puts down his backpack on one of the beds, and starts taking out alchemical supplies from it: various herbs, roots and mushrooms, a mortar and pestle, a set of measuring cups and glasses, a small knife, and so on.​

NAOFUMI: My name is Naofumi. I am the Shield Hero. I hate slavery of all forms. If I could have gotten you out of that place without the slave contract, I would have, but that slave trader wouldn't have let me.

RAPHTALIA chokes on her food, looking at NAOFUMI with big eyes.​

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI: Oh come on, did she hear the rumors too? How?!

SPIRIT OF RAPHTALIA: THE shield hero? From the stories?

NAOFUMI continues on.​

NAOFUMI: If I was stronger, I could have done it regardless of what he thought. Break in, beat up his guards, free everyone. But right now, I can't do that. I don't have allies and my shield is too weak to harm anyone.

NAOFUMI looks down at his tools, and starts making medicine. He cuts up the herbs and slices off some parts from the roots, grinds them down with the mortar, and separates different components into different glasses.​

NAOFUMI: As far as I am concerned, you are a free woman. I'll find out how to remove the slave crest - I am sure there is a way - and in the meantime, I disabled all punishment settings on it. If you want, you can walk through that door, never turn back, never see me again. I'll give you money to tide you over, until you get to someone who can support you. If you don't know anyone, then I'll pay for room and board for you for as long as it takes for us to find someone who can take you in.

Measuring out precise quantities of each ingredient, NAOFUMI mixes them all together into a larger glass.​

NAOFUMI: I wish I could leave it at that, but the world won't let me. There are these Waves of Apocalypse, events when massive numbers of monsters spill into the world on schedule. The next Wave is in three weeks time. If the Waves aren't stopped, then the world will end.

NAOFUMI gets up and takes the kettle with hot water, pouring it into the glass. He sets it down on the table, covers it with a little plate, and leaves it to infuse.​

NAOFUMI: As a Hero, I would be teleported to wherever the Wave takes place when it starts. As I am now, I would probably die. There are other heroes - maybe they can stop them alone, maybe they can't, I don't know. Maybe the King will summon more heroes to deal with this problem. But I am too weak to deal with anything.

NAOFUMI: I hate to be asking this - especially given your position - but I desperately need help. I literally, physically, cannot hold a sword - the shield makes it fly out of my hands if I try. Because of this, I can't kill monsters, and killing monsters is how I am supposed to grow in power. I need someone to hold the sword for me.

NAOFUMI looks up at RAPHTALIA with pleading eyes.​

NAOFUMI: You don't have to decide right away, and as I said, I am fine with just helping you find a family that will take care of you. But you should know that there is a real chance that in three weeks, without help, I will be dead.

NAOFUMI finishes his speech, and waits for RAPHTALIA to respond. She focuses on her food, her eyebrows furrowed in thought. Finishing it, she sits in silence for a bit, before speaking.​

RAPHTALIA: My parents told me legends about you, you know.

NAOFUMI: What?

RAPHTALIA: Yeah. About the four heroes who protected the world in the past. How Shield Hero helped us demihumans the most, hid us from the rampaging Spirit Turtle. When I was young, I um. Wanted to meet you. My parents said if I behaved well, they were sure it would happen.

RAPHTALIA blushes and looks down.​

RAPHTALIA: When everyone from my village was enslaved, we wished every day that the Shield Hero would come and save us. We'd make up stories about how he - uh, you, I guess - was held up somewhere, but was on his way, and soon we'd all be free. It was the only thing that kept us alive.

NAOFUMI: I am sorry.

RAPHTALIA shakes her head. A tear rolls down her cheek, and she wipes it, and tries to continue speaking.​

RAPHTALIA: You- no - you, you didn't…

RAPHTALIA fails to keep herself together. As the tension in her body abruptly releases, she starts bawling, tears streaming down her face. NAOFUMI gets up, kneels next to RAPHTALIA's stool, and hugs her. She buries her face in his neck.​

NAOFUMI: There, there. It's okay, you are safe now. Shhh.

Crying continues.​

SCENE: The same room. NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA are sitting on the bed, side by side. RAPHTALIA has mostly stopped crying. She sniffles and sobs, wiping her face with a towel NAOFUMI gave her. NAOFUMI's brow is furrowed in thought.​

NAOFUMI: We will free your people from slavery.

RAPHTALIA glances up at him in shock.​

RAPHTALIA: But the waves -

NAOFUMI: Nonsense. Waves are dangerous, but you can't live just to survive. You need something to strive for.

NAOFUMI reaches for his chest, and takes off a pin with a red star. He holds it out in front of RAPHTALIA.​

NAOFUMI: This pin comes from my world. We had our own kings and slavers, but there were some people who wanted to build a better world. One where everyone, everywhere, would live as equals, regardless of their parentage or race. Where nobody would go hungry or sick, and if they did, they would have help. A world without slaves, kings or subjects. They were called socialists, and this red star is their symbol.

RAPHTALIA sniffles.​

RAPHTALIA: It sounds nice.

NAOFUMI: It is nice. It is also very difficult. All the powerful people - the kings, the nobles, the rich - would put aside their differences when they sensed that a socialist revolution might be near. They go to any extreme to stop it. Often, they would rather sell their bodies and souls to fascism than let a common person live a bit freer. If you are a socialist, you aren't just fighting a difficult fight - you are fighting every army in the world, at once. In my world, they haven't managed it yet. But it is a good fight to keep fighting.

NAOFUMI: I want to fight it in this world. Free the slaves and hang the slavers, blow up the noble castles, and keep going until the last remnant of the old order is gone, and the soil where it could take root is salted and burned so that it could never grow out again. Until a better world is here, and it is here to stay.

NAOFUMI: I was going to do this well before I met you. Yes, right now, my biggest problem is the Waves; but long-term, I need to build an army to take on all the forces of feudalism. Freeing your people isn't getting in the way of the Waves; it's the other way around.

RAPHTALIA: Thank you.

NAOFUMI pats RAPHTALIA's head.​

NAOFUMI: Tell me everything about the people who enslaved you. How did it happen?

RAPHTALIA hugs her knees, staring into space.​

RAPHTALIA: I was born in Lurolona, a small village on the coast. It was named after a character from Shield Hero stories - Lula, his pet bird. My parents would fish, and sell the fish to the only town near us. A year ago, our village was destroyed in a Wave, and right after soldiers came and captured everyone, killing anyone who resisted.

RAPHTALIA squeezes her eyes shut, willing herself to continue the tale.​

RAPHTALIA: They brought us to the manor of some nobleman - I don't know his name, servants just called him "master". He was fat as a pig, middle-aged, with yellow hair and a little mustache. And he had this disgusting laugh when he would torture us.

RAPHTALIA sniffles. NAOFUMI hugs her.​

RAPHTALIA: He lived at the edge of some city - not the town near us, further away. It is also far away from this city - after he sold me to the slave trader, we drove for more than a week to get here.

NAOFUMI: That's a start. Now, you must be exhausted, so you should sleep. Tomorrow, we can talk more about this.

NAOFUMI gets up from the bed and takes the glass of medicine he prepared earlier. He focuses on it for a moment.​

SYSTEM MESSAGE: Skill used: potion enhance 1!

The glass of medicine shines for a second, and NAOFUMI hands it over to RAPHTALIA.​

NAOFUMI: Drink this. It should help with your cold.

RAPHTALIA takes the glass, and drinks it. Her eyes bulge, and she barely manages to finish the glass.​

RAPHTALIA: Ew! So bitter!

NAOFUMI: Yeah, I should have warned you, it doesn't taste very good.

NAOFUMI dresses for bed. RAPHTALIA is sitting on her bed, deep in thought. As NAOFUMI reaches for the lamp to extinguish it for the night, she speaks.​

RAPHTALIA: How should I call you?

NAOFUMI: Just Naofumi. Comrade Naofumi, if you want to be formal.

RAPHTALIA looks up at him, her eyes full of determination.​

RAPHTALIA: I want to help. This better world, I want to build it.

NAOFUMI: You really shouldn't decide this right now.

RAPHTALIA: No. I have decided. This is the right thing to do.

NAOFUMI looks at her for a while, then stretches out his hand. RAPHTALIA looks at it curiously, and NAOFUMI has to take hers and show her how to do a handshake.​

NAOFUMI: Good to have you on board, comrade Raphtalia.

NAOFUMI turns off the light.​

SCENE: Weapons shop. Counter is still manned by THE BLACKSMITH. The door rings as NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA enter. RAPHTALIA is wearing a pair of pants ten sizes too large for her, tied at the waist by a rope and rolled up so much they look like bloomers. Her shirt goes down to her knees. BLACKSMITH looks up as they enter, and sighs.​

THE BLACKSMITH: I thought I told you not to show up here.

NAOFUMI: It's an emergency. Raphtalia here needs armor and a knife.

BLACKSMITH looks down at RAPHTALIA, who meets his gaze confidently. He sees the slave crest poking out from behind her shirt, and scowls.​

BLACKSMITH: You are using slaves now?

RAPHTALIA: I am no slave!

BLACKSMITH stops in confusion, and looks between RAPHTALIA and NAOFUMI. NAOFUMI leans against a wall and smirks.​

BLACKSMITH: Did he make you say that? I can see the slave crest from here.

RAPHTALIA crosses her arms.​

RAPHTALIA: And? Just because of some tattoo I am somehow less of a person?

BLACKSMITH: …That is usually how it works, yes.

RAPHTALIA: Nonsense. I am a free woman who happens to have a slave crest at this time. You, on the other hand, are a slave who happens to not have a crest.

BLACKSMITH looks between NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA in sheer bafflement.​

NAOFUMI: I've been arguing with her about it since this morning. Made the mistake of explaining some socialist theory to her first. She picks up the rhetoric very quickly.

BLACKSMITH: What's socialist theory? Wait, nevermind, what does any of this mean?

NAOFUMI rolls his eyes.​

NAOFUMI: I told her we should get the crest removed. We asked around - it would cost, but I could afford it.

RAPHTALIA spins around to face NAOFUMI, pointing a finger at him.​

RAPHTALIA: We don't have the money to waste! We have to prepare for the Wave. Every coin counts!

NAOFUMI: Yeah, see what I have to deal with.

BLACKSMITH rubs his eyes, not prepared to deal with the fact of his enslavement by the forces of manorialism.​

BLACKSMITH: Okay, whatever. You said you needed armor?

RAPHTALIA: Yes. Me and Naofumi.

NAOFUMI: I don't need armor, I have a shield boosting my stats into the stratosphere. Every coin counts, remember?

RAPHTALIA scowls at NAOFUMI, but cannot find a way out of the rhetorical trap. BLACKSMITH comes out from behind the counter, a roll of measuring tape in hand.​

BLACKSMITH: Well, let's measure you up, so the armor fits you better than your clothes.

NAOFUMI: Tailor said we'd have clothes by the evening. Gave Raphtalia his old clothes in the meantime, all she had was a cloak. Can't go around town without pants.

BLACKSMITH skillfully measures RAPHTALIA's size, writing down numbers on the back of his hand with a pencil. He goes behind the counter and takes out several pieces of armor: a chainmail coat, heavy pants, undercoat and boots, putting them all on the counter. Taking out a small glowing hammer, he starts tapping on the pieces of armor, resizing them. After a few short minutes, the armor is done. RAPHTALIA takes it and goes behind a curtain to try it on.​

NAOFUMI: Good that you are against slavery though. Was worried I'd have to find another blacksmith.

BLACKSMITH: I am not your blacksmith!

RAPHTALIA comes out from behind the curtain, having put on the armor. It fits her well.​

BLACKSMITH: And now, for the sword… I think something like this would be good to start with.

He hands a short steel sword to RAPHTALIA. She grasps it uncertainly.​

BLACKSMITH: Do you know how to use it? Here, let me show you the basics. I used to be an adventurer when I was young.

BLACKSMITH shows RAPHTALIA some basic sword forms.​

NAOFUMI: For what it's worth, I think the status magic will give you the knowledge pretty quickly, just from being in my party.

NAOFUMI counts out the price of the armor and the sword, his pouch seeming much smaller afterwards.​

NAOFUMI: Well, thanks for your help.

NAOFUMI heads for the door. RAPHTALIA pauses, and turns to the BLACKSMITH.​

RAPHTALIA: What's your name?

ERHART THE BLACKSMITH: Erhart. Would you believe that this guy never asked?

RAPHTALIA sighs.​

RAPHTALIA: Yes. Thanks for your help, Erhart.

ERHART: Yeah, no problem. Keep each other safe, alright?

SCENE: Fields of tall grass next to the town. NAOFUMI has caught an orange blob and is holding it in his hands. RAPHTALIA is standing nearby, holding the sword in her shaking hands. Orange blob snarls and bites at the air, attempting to get at her. RAPHTALIA keeps her distance.​

NAOFUMI: Come on, I know you can do it. Just stab it.

RAPHTALIA: What if it bites me?

NAOFUMI: It's not going to bite you. Besides, you have a lot of health, I'll get it off you in no time.

RAPHTALIA: Easy for you to say! You don't even feel pain because of the shield!

NAOFUMI: Only when my health is full! Come on, just do it, let's get it over with.

RAPHTALIA clenches her teeth and looks straight at the blob. She psyches herself up and rushes at it with a scream. The blob is pierced by her sword and explodes instantly.​

NAOFUMI: There we go! Now we just have to do this another ten thousand times, and we'll be getting somewhere.

RAPHTALIA narrows her eyes at him.​

NAOFUMI: Hey, don't look at me like that. Why, back in my day, I had to bash them to death with my own two hands! Youngsters these days.

Dramatis Personae

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI. Voice of the heart.
SPIRIT OF RAPHTALIA. Likewise.
SYSTEM MESSAGE. Claims to not be obnoxious - lies. Voice of the status magic.
NAOFUMI IWATANI, THE SHIELD HERO. The first socialist. Protagonist. Unwilling slave owner.
RAPHTALIA. Racoon girl. Second socialist. Hadn't read theory.
ERHARD THE BLACKSMITH. Concerned weapons trader.
 
Chapter 4: Forming A Plan
SCENE: A forested hill situated over a paved road. The other side of the road is flanked by fields of tall grass. A long stretch of the road can be clearly seen. The road is empty, except for a caravan of five wagons, drawn by big birds. The birds look like emus, but thicker, taller, with more plumage and brightly colored. Every wagon is packed with barrels, and driven by two armed guards. Two mages with staves sit on top of the middle wagon.

NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA are sitting on the hill, taking a break from grinding mobs. They are eating sandwiches for lunch. Behind them is a small pile of various animal corpses, body parts, and other materials.​

NARRATOR: After two days of grinding, our revolutionaries advance by leaps and bounds, already reaching ninth level!

RAPHTALIA: So, what is our plan?

NAOFUMI: Well, there are three things we have to do. First of all, bump up our levels, which is going great. Secondly, find out who that yellow-haired noble is, and where his lands are. Finally, get in touch with local revolutionary movements, or failing that, agitate them into existence.

RAPHTALIA: Revolutionary movements?

NAOFUMI: Yeah. Material Conditions will always bring them into existence in places with injustice. But more on that later: pay attention to those wagons.

As the wagons come close to a point where grass has grown up to the edge of the road, they slow down. Pair of mage guards stand up, raise their staves, and start chanting. Crystals on the ends of their staves glow, and a large ball of fire slowly forms in the air, leisurely flying towards the grass. Where it passes, the grass is instantly incinerated. The mages take a break after the spell, as the glow within their staves slowly recedes.​

NAOFUMI: So, what do you think?

RAPHTALIA: They want to see if there are any monsters hiding in the grass before they pass, right?

NAOFUMI nods.​

NAOFUMI: I think so, yeah. But why is the grass there in the first place? You would think it would be all burned off by now.

RAPHTALIA: Maybe it grows out every day?

The mages continue working as the wagons move, burning off a line of grass a good twenty feet wide to the side of the road. NAOFUMI finishes his sandwich, and starts feeding monster parts into the shield.​

SYSTEM MESSAGE: Small rabbit shield unlocked! Special: Perception 1. Allows you to see broad statistics of others.

The fields of grass close to the wagons start rustling, and a pack of varied monsters sprint out, heading for them. Guards pull out their weapons and prepare for battle, with the mages starting to channel another ball of flame. NAOFUMI concentrates, and his shield turns into a ball of rabbit fur. He scans the fight through a small magical circle hovering a few millimeters in front of his right eyeball.​

NAOFUMI: Those guards are only level four. Come on, we have to help them!

NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA sprint down the hill, joining the guards in the fight that quickly devolves into chaos. With their help, monsters are driven off without any casualties. RAPHTALIA heads off to pick up the loot.​

SWEATING SOLDIER: Thank you. I thought we were going to be toast.

NAOFUMI: Why didn't you just drive off? They'd stop chasing you pretty quick, and I've seen how quick those birds can move.

SWEATING SOLDIER: Filofials? Yeah they are fast, but we're moving food. It's like catnip for the monsters, they don't let you go. Our filofials would get tired and slow down, and it would be all over.

NAOFUMI frowns, deep in thought. RAPHTALIA returns with their packs, full to the brim with monster parts.​

NAOFUMI: How about you guys give us a ride back to town. We have to sell our pickings, and we wouldn't want this to happen to you again.

RAPHTALIA: We're going back?

NAOFUMI: Yeah. I just had an idea. We are going to visit a library.

SOLDIERS climb back onto the wagons. RAPHTALIA and NAOFUMI take seats on the front one. As they drive off, RAPHTALIA engages SOLDIERS in conversation. NAOFUMI takes out a notepad from his bag. His shield changes into a giant inkpot and he starts writing something down with the quill that appears in his other hand.​

SCENE: Inside of a massive gothic cathedral. Ceiling is so high up it is clouded in darkness. Light comes through intricate, stained glass windows, coloring the floor in a tapestry of light. Rows of seats lead to an altar, which houses a large, golden symbol of the Church of the Three Heroes.

On one side of the hall, NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA are arguing with a PRIESTESS standing in front of a large set of doors. Above the doors, a set of large golden letters spells out "GRAND CHURCH LIBRARY".

PRIESTESS has a look of disgust on her face.​

PRIESTESS: I am sorry, but we cannot open the library to Sir Shield.

NAOFUMI: Why not?

PRIESTESS looks around, as if searching for someone.​

PRIESTESS: It is closed due to renovations.

NAOFUMI looks behind the PRIESTESS. Library is clearly visible through the doors, and doesn't appear to be being renovated. PRIESTESS steps in front of him, interrupting his view.​

NAOFUMI: Can we at least borrow some books?

PRIESTESS: No. The Church of the Three Heroes does not extend this service to Sir Shield. Please leave.

RAPHTALIA: Hey! What is that supposed to mean?

RAPHTALIA begins to argue with the PRIESTESS.​

NARRATOR: But now… Naofumi notices the sigil of the Church! As if snapping into focus, the complex symbol resolves itself into a bow, a spear and a sword overlapped together. There is no shield in sight!

NARRATOR: His spirit is conflicted! It fights against itself, not knowing what to do. Finally, it splits!

SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI wobbles in place, growing less coherent, before a small part of it splits off. The main part of the spirit resolves itself into SPIRIT OF THE HEART. The smaller part that split off grows, solidifies, and turns into NAOFUMI, but wearing black clothes, with a red scarf covering his mouth. On his shoulder, there is a large white letter D, in a circle. It is the SPIRIT OF DIRECT ACTION!​

SPIRIT OF DIRECT ACTION: Look, she is clearly bullshitting, and just wants to get in our way because of who we are. Shove her aside, go into the library, take the books we need. There is no need to debate this.

SPIRIT OF THE HEART: No! We can't do that. We are already on shaky ground; if we antagonize the church on top of everything else, we will be too mired in enemies to get anything done.

SPIRIT OF DIRECT ACTION: What part of "revolutionary action" involves "not antagonizing" existing power structures? Monarchy and religion are always tightly intertwined, you can't break one without the other.

SPIRIT OF THE HEART: Obviously! But not at the same time and not when we have zero support from anywhere. There is a reason we didn't go punch the king in the face yet!

SPIRIT OF DIRECT ACTION: Oh, bullshit, what do you think will happen? She will go complain to her boss, that boss will complain to the king, by the time anything happens we will be long gone. They didn't even put us in jail for the rape nonsense, reading some books which we clearly need to do our job won't make the weather happen.

SPIRIT OF THE HEART: A church of this size no doubt has guards of its own, and likely high level ones, ones we can't deal with yet. King won't care if we take the books, but he also won't care if we get both our legs broken.

As NAOFUMI debates his actions, the SWORD HERO exits the library, and notices the commotion.​

REN, THE SWORD HERO: Naofumi? Elnin? What is going on here?

ELNIN THE PRIESTESS: Sir Hero -

NAOFUMI: We want to look at the regional maps and this priestess is telling us we can't enter the library.

RAPHTALIA: It clearly isn't closed. She's just giving us the runaround!

RAPHTALIA gestures to the open doors REN has just walked through. REN frowns.​

REN: I see. Elnin?

ELNIN bows to REN.​

ELNIN: Sir Hero, the Church has an old rule that we must refuse all service to Shield Heroes. I apologize.

REN: We will need all the help we can get for the waves. Can you make an exception?

ELNIN: For you, Sir Hero, of course.

REN: Excellent.

REN motions for NAOFUMI to follow him. They enter the library, RAPHTALIA following after them, raising her nose at ELNIN as they pass.​

REN: I was already looking at maps, so I'll save you the time searching for them.

NAOFUMI: I thought you already knew everything from the game?

REN: Not everything was in the game. Unimportant facts not written into the lore, areas that were only going to be added in a DLC, that sort of thing.

NAOFUMI: Didn't expect you to help me.

REN: Don't mistake this for friendliness. We may simply need your abilities for the Waves. If you are clearly trying to not be useless, I may as well help you.

REN: Besides, you found someone willing to work with you, so clearly you aren't completely hopeless.

SPIRIT OF THE HEART: Let's not mention the slavery part.

They walk through the library, finally reaching a reading room. Inside the room are nine wide tables, two of which are piled with books. Warm daylight streams in through a wide window. REN reaches the table with the books, pulling out one, and opens it to show a map of Melromarc, split into many regions.​

REN: I suppose I should start from the beginning.

He adopts a practiced lecturing tone, as if he has given this talk many times before.​

REN: Melromarc is split into twelve areas called duchies. In the game each of those corresponded to a loading zone, but that doesn't matter now.

REN points out the duchy borders on the map as he is talking.​

REN: These are further subdivided into marches, counties and baronies, in order. Each duchy is administered by a duke, march by a marquess, county by a count, and barony by a baron. The Queen has the power to bestow and retract ducal titles, and thus determines who administers which zone. Dukes, in turn, have the same power over the marquess titles, and so on down the pyramid. In practice, with rare exceptions, this selection is done from among the past holders of the titles or their families, and generally from among those who already live within the corresponding area. This means that the titles tend to be heritable.

NAOFUMI: You really know your stuff, huh.

REN: I was planning to study history in university. Let's continue. The duchy of Melromarc - yes, named the same as the country and the city - is managed by the royal family. Here is a list of current dukes - there were recent changes done by the King, so don't look for it in the books - as well as where they are situated, what they administer, and basic details about their character and appearance. That's who we'd have to work with to organize cleanup after the Waves.

REN hands NAOFUMI a piece of parchment. NAOFUMI quickly scans it. On one side, there is a long list of information. On the other side, there is a sketch of Melromarc, with all duchies outlined and labeled, and with notes for major cities and roads, and even with approximate travel times between points.



NAOFUMI: You said there were recent changes?

REN: Something about poor management by some dukes. Several of them got removed from their provinces, but I didn't ask about the details.

NAOFUMI: How about marquesses and counts? Do you have a list for those?

REN sighs in frustration.​

REN: Look, there are twelve duchies. This means more than a hundred marquess, and somewhere between one and two thousand counts. Furthermore, there are places which violate this pattern - some lands are managed by the Church, some towns manage themselves, occasionally this neat pyramid of titles has people out of place, and so on. It's a mess. They don't have a census, either, or any kind of centralized data collection - if a duke changes a marquess, it will be weeks before the capital even finds out. Any records you may find here are almost certainly out of date, if they ever were accurate in the first place. Don't even try to focus on the details, just go to the duke and they will know how to delegate the work.

NAOFUMI: I see. Thanks for your help.

REN: Yeah, yeah. Be there at the Waves and don't fuck it up, got it?

NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA turn and leave the library.​

NAOFUMI: Remember how I said that I don't have allies?

RAPHTALIA: Yeah.

NAOFUMI: Well, it's worse than that. I am still not sure why, but when I arrived here, the King and his cronies framed me for a crime I didn't commit. I am now starting to suspect it had something to do with the Church.

RAPHTALIA hisses in sympathy. They exit the Church, and head into the city.​

NAOFUMI: The thing is, because of it, it's very difficult to work from Melromarc. Everyone here has heard of me, and a lot of them hate me from the onset. And if the Church dogma literally has no place for me… I am thinking we should leave the city after stocking up on equipment. We can grind levels anywhere there are monsters, and it would be much easier to build up reputation if we don't have to work against the current. Plus, I now know where to start looking for that noble who enslaved your village.

RAPHTALIA's head jerks up, and she fixes her gaze on NAOFUMI in rapt attention.​

RAPHTALIA: You do? Where?

NAOFUMI: Well, think about what we know. None of the dukes on the list fit your description: this means he is at most a marquess. We also know he captured people from a village several towns away from his own. A nobleman could hardly raid villages outside of his domain, could he? And I don't think a baron could control multiple towns. So he is either a count or a marquess. We know your village was on the coast, and so his manor must be somewhere close to it. Finally, look at the map.

NAOFUMI ducks into a side alley, and takes out the map he got from REN. He squats on the ground, showing RAPHTALIA what he means.​

NAOFUMI: This country has two coastlines, and we are right here. You said you drove for more than a week to get here - using REN's notes, we can draw a circle that is a week's travel away from Melromarc, and one that is two weeks away.

NAOFUMI draws two wide circles around the city of Melromarc.


NAOFUMI: See this? It only leaves four duchies that are on the coast and within a correct travel distance: Langurohel, Javganon, Dornuromarc and Noruroter. So all we have to do is get to those four dukes, and ask them about their marquess who have lands along the coast. We might hit the jackpot and find our target right away; if not, we will simply go to the marquess and ask them about the counts. And knowing the names of the cities, we can easily get there by taking a ride alongside some merchants heading in the right direction, or hiring a wagon of our own.

RAPHTALIA's eyes shine, full of hope.​

NAOFUMI: At this point, it's just a question of time until we find him. He isn't getting away.

SCENE: Montage, as NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA prepare for the Wave.​

NARRATOR: But first…they must survive the Wave!

NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA are running through a field of grass. Whenever a monster pops out, RAPHTALIA snaps to it, killing it quickly.​

NARRATOR: They grind! Their stats take off into the sky! But the stats alone will not get them there fast enough. To catch up with the other heroes, they need to punch well above their weight class. They need tools! Levers!

Magic store. Walls are covered in bookshelves and presentation stands, full of staves, crystal balls, wands, amulets, glowing rocks, and so on. Arrays of dreamcatchers hang from the ceiling, casting flickering shadows on the walls from a single lamp that lights up the store. OLD WITCH is showing NAOFUMI several magic orbs. NAOFUMI's brows are attempting to escape his face.​

NAOFUMI: It costs how much for one spell orb?

OLD WITCH: The church sets the prices quite high, yes. If that doesn't fit your budget, there is an older, cheaper method, using spell books. Of course, that way you won't learn a spell instantly, but by studying for a long time you could learn as many as you want.

OLD WITCH goes to a bookshelf, and brings out several magic books, showing them to NAOFUMI.​

SPIRIT OF THE HEART: Cheaper my ass! Is this book made of gold?

NAOFUMI: We'll get back to you on this.

Scene transition. NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA are in a potions store. NAOFUMI is looking through recipe books, before purchasing several.​

NARRATOR: Forget magic. Alchemy! An easy way to boost stats and abilities!

A rented tavern room has been turned into a base of operations. Furniture has been pushed to the sides of the room, and the floor is covered in various equipment: bags, ropes, clothing, tools, and so on. Ropes have been anchored to the walls of the room, forming a net just below the ceiling from which hang a variety of dried plants, mushrooms and animal parts. RAPHTALIA is sitting cross-legged on the floor, her mouth covered with a tight scarf, and is grinding dried mushrooms with an alchemical mortar. Two rows of bowls flank her: on one side, full of unprocessed plants, fangs and roots, and on the other side, filled with dust, diced roots and plant mush.

Table in the room is full of glassware. NAOFUMI is standing in front of it, pouring a ready potion mix from a pot into smaller bottles. One end of the table has rows of capped potion bottles on it. Other end has a portable stove, with fire coming from a red magical crystal.​

NARRATOR: But for the best tools, they need funds. A get-rich scheme! Erhart gets them in touch with a traveling merchant, who gives them a tip: a day's travel away from the capital, there is a mine that has been closed due to monsters, full of expensive magical ore. If they could get in and mine some, all the profit will be theirs!

NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA climb onto a wagon, drawn by a pair of filofials, followed by the TRAVELING MERCHANT. They set off through one of the city gates.​

NARRATOR: Five days remain until the Wave!

SCENE: Late evening. Wagon of the TRAVELING MERCHANT enters a village. It slows down and comes to a stop in front of an inn. NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA dismount, and follow TRAVELING MERCHANT inside.​

TRAVELING MERCHANT: Welcome to the Lute village. Next morning I'll show you where the mine is. Come on in, my wife owns the tavern here.

NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA get a room at the inn, and retire for the night. In the morning, they wake up before the TRAVELING MERCHANT, and go for a walk through the village to pass the time. They walk across a scene of ROYAL GUARDS arguing with a crowd of VILLAGERS. ROYAL GUARDS are loading barrels into a wagon drawn by a pair of filofials.​

ROYAL GUARD WITH FANCY HELMET: You know the law! Tax is to be paid in full and on time. If you don't have ore, we will take it in wheat.

VILLAGER 1: But the mine is full of monsters! Even the guards that were supposed to guard it ran away!

VILLAGER 2: How can we mine if you don't clear out the mine? It's your job!

VILLAGER 3: And you even raised the tax!

ROYAL GUARD unsheathes a sword. The crowd shrinks back.​

ROYAL GUARD WITH FANCY HELMET: Enough! You dare question the King's authority? His majesty is working hard to deal with the Waves! Of course the tax was raised. The mine will be cleared out once we have the troops for it. Just do your duty and pay the tax!

ROYAL GUARDS load up the wagon, and set out. RAPHTALIA watches on, her face full of pity.​

RAPHTALIA: My parents used to say that the nobles could make stones bleed taxes. The whole village would always worry if we could pay them on time.

NAOFUMI: This, comrade Raphtalia, is what is called a Material Condition. Come on, I'll explain at the tavern.

Dramatis Personae

SPIRIT OF THE HEART, PREVIOUSLY SPIRIT OF NAOFUMI. Voice of the majority of the heart.
SPIRIT OF DIRECT ACTION. If not you, then who? If not now, when?
SYSTEM MESSAGE. Provider of skills. Voice of the status magic.
NAOFUMI IWATANI, THE SHIELD HERO. The first socialist. Protagonist. Went to a library once.
RAPHTALIA. Racoon girl. Second socialist. Picking up theory by osmosis.
AMAKI REN, THE SWORD HERO. Practical. Opener of library doors.
OLD WITCH. Magic store proprietor. Taxed by the Church.
 
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I think the spirit of exuberance with which this story is written may be its strongest asset. I can practically hear the narrator booming in my head.

It also says something about canon that the most suspension of disbelief-threatening element of the story so far is Ren being useful.
 
I think the spirit of exuberance with which this story is written may be its strongest asset. I can practically hear the narrator booming in my head.

It also says something about canon that the most suspension of disbelief-threatening element of the story so far is Ren being useful.

I thought about what to do with the three heroes, and decided that having three separate characters (five, potentially, if you count king and myne?) whose entire personality is "Helpless obstructionist moron" is a bit much. As a result, changes have been made.
 
Is there a reason you keep avoiding gendered pronouns for anyone except the two main characters and the heroes? If you've used them anywhere else then I've missed it. It's not a big deal, it's simply that I keep tripping over places like this, where it makes no sense that the guard wouldn't know the gender of the King and therefore this implies that the king is non-binary, which didn't seem supported in the text or anime.
 
Is there a reason you keep avoiding gendered pronouns for anyone except the two main characters and the heroes? If you've used them anywhere else then I've missed it. It's not a big deal, it's simply that I keep tripping over places like this, where it makes no sense that the guard wouldn't know the gender of the King and therefore this implies that the king is non-binary, which didn't seem supported in the text or anime.

In this case it's a case of me being a Russian native, where rulers are traditionally addressed in neutrum. I'll correct it.

In other cases it's due to me being a gender abolitionist and so trying to avoid them on principle, except in cases where it'd be too awkward to phrase things.
 
I am really looking forward to their interaction with the queen and after. She would be rather against Naofumi's rhetoric, i'd wager
 
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Biggest problem in the future of the Revolution is the Queen coming back and all the people upset about the King's Coup going home.

Also how did Politico-Naofumi miss the bit about the QUEEN having the power to appoint Dukes and marquises, but the KING doing a recent bit of reorganization. That is clearly a Coup rewarding loyalties and exactly the kind of thing Revolutions use to point out the unsuitability of Monarchy.
 
Biggest problem in the future of the Revolution is the Queen coming back and all the people upset about the King's Coup going home.

Also how did Politico-Naofumi miss the bit about the QUEEN having the power to appoint Dukes and marquises, but the KING doing a recent bit of reorganization. That is clearly a Coup rewarding loyalties and exactly the kind of thing Revolutions use to point out the unsuitability of Monarchy.
I'm not sure if you're referring to canon or quest worldbuilding, but pointing out just in case you haven't seen/read the original: in canon, the king wields zero political power that is not derived from the queen, and the popular support he has is only enough that the queen prefers that Naofumi spare his life (her attitude is more explicitly cold in the LN than the anime). If a coup is possible, it's only in the quest, and I think relies on more evidence about the state of the kingdom than we've had so far.
 
Chapter 5: Material Conditions
SCENE: NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA arrive back at the tavern, and order some breakfast. The hall of the tavern has a dozen tables for eating. Behind the counter, INNKEEPER is taking a nap. She is surrounded by shelves full of glasses and plates, and a board with hooks for room keys. Two of the keys are missing.

Except for NAOFUMI, RAPHTALIA and the INNKEEPER, the inn is empty.​

NAOFUMI: How much do you know about history?

He gestures with a fork as he talks.​

RAPHTALIA: Um. You mean like who the previous kings and queens were? I know a bit from an old scholar who lived in our village. He taught me to read, and some things he considered important to know.

NAOFUMI: Yeah, that's a good start. You were probably taught who annexed which bit of territory and when, what kind of wars they fought, which dynasties married one another, that sort of thing?

RAPHTALIA: Yeah.

NAOFUMI: In my world, a lot of people also were taught history that way. This is called the "great man" theory of history: that most of the change happens because of the people at the top, like kings, emperors, generals, religious figures, and so on.

RAPHTALIA: Great man? But most of the history is about queens…

NAOFUMI: This is because Melromarc is a matriarchy. In my world, those were rare.

RAPHTALIA nods, listening attentively.​

NAOFUMI: Another theory of history is called the "spirit of history". In it, history is mostly determined by ideas. For example, an idea might spread that slavery is bad, or that good rulers should educate their population; this leads to societies changing, and drives history forwards. A subset of this theory is the so-called "whig history", which claims that these ideas get better over time, and so society inexorably improves. I would call it a just-so story.

RAPHTALIA: So an idea is… For example, thinking that peasants should "do their duty" and pay taxes, that's an idea, right?

NAOFUMI: Exactly.

RAPHTALIA: And it would influence society because if peasants believed it, they would pay more taxes?

NAOFUMI: That's right. Of course, both of these "theories" can, once in a while, be applied to a particular historical development. You can find examples where something major happened primarily because of an individual person, or some idea randomly spread and influenced things. But advocates of these theories of history don't claim they are applicable once in a while; they claim they are the primary drivers of historical development, and that's just not true. Furthermore, neither of these theories is capable of going one step deeper: asking what brings these "great people" or "ideas" into existence in the first place, and puts them in a position where they can spread.

RAPHTALIA: Is there a better theory?

NAOFUMI: It's called materialism. In it, history is primarily determined by Material Conditions: things that directly influence your life. For example, when it comes to people in this village, they have to pay heavy taxes to the king; this is a material condition. What people own in society, how much they eat, how long they work, what laws they have to obey, how those laws come into existence - all of those are Material Conditions. It's a very broad term. These Material Conditions then influence what you consider good or bad, and how you behave in society.

RAPHTALIA furrows her brows in thought.​

RAPHTALIA: So there is some kind of Material Condition which makes nobles and guards talk about duty a lot?

NAOFUMI: Oh, they probably believe it themselves. Material Conditions cause them to believe it, but the people themselves may not even be aware of this relation. See if you can figure it out.

NAOFUMI takes a sip of cider, and leans back in his chair, giving RAPHTALIA time to think. RAPHTALIA closes her eyes in concentration.​

SPIRIT OF RAPHTALIA: Okay, I have to think carefully. Guards believe that peasants have a duty to pay taxes, and they have a duty to collect those taxes. Why might they think so?

SPIRIT OF RAPHTALIA: Well, they had to learn it from somebody. This could be their parents, or they could have picked it up on the job. But why would their parents teach them this? And why would they learn this on the job? It doesn't have any obvious connection to being a guard…

NARRATOR: Slowly, gears inside of Raphtalia's head spin up! They accelerate! Where gear teeth grab one another, they start to throw off furious sparks!

Many sparks start to come out of the head of SPIRIT OF RAPHTALIA, as it frowns in concentration.​

NARRATOR: Soon, a thought forms! A conception! A theory of socialism!

Shower of sparks intensifies into a volcano, until it looks like a powerful, glowing mohawk on the head of SPIRIT OF RAPHTALIA. Soon, the sparks slow down, recede, and reveal a smaller figure sitting on top of SPIRIT OF RAPHTALIA's head. It is only a foot tall, and looks like RAPHTALIA wearing a tuxedo. The suit is tight, and wiry muscles visibly bulge under it, rolling around with every movement. Its face is framed by a wide, long beard. No, not "a" beard; THE beard. Charisma emanates from THE beard, lighting up the entire room. Once your eyes glance upon THE beard, they cannot leave.

It is RAPHTALIA's SPIRIT OF THEORY.

SPIRIT OF THEORY hops down from the head of SPIRIT OF THE HEART (formerly SPIRIT OF RAPHTALIA) and turns to face it.​

SPIRIT OF THEORY: I see it! We have to think materially!

SPIRIT OF THE HEART: What do you mean?

SPIRIT OF THEORY: Think about it! It's difficult to get a man to understand something when his pay depends on not understanding it. The guards' job is to take food away from the peasants; of course they will develop all sorts of crazy theories about why it is justified! Otherwise, they couldn't live with themselves.

SPIRIT OF THE HEART: But why would the guards do this job?

SPIRIT OF THEORY: Material conditions, once again! First of all, the guards have to eat and pay for a place to live. This means they don't really have a choice wherever to do a job or not! And secondly, this sort of job would inherently attract the sorts of people who would be fine with robbing peasants: those who aren't would probably leave, or know what sort of work it is in advance and not sign up for it!

SPIRIT OF THE HEART: Okay, I think I get it now.

RAPHTALIA opens her eyes.​

RAPHTALIA: It's because the guards get paid to rob the peasants of food, right? So over time, they would come up with a theory of "duty" to justify their actions. Generations of guards would teach it to one another, fill in the logical holes, and make it more and more complex.

NAOFUMI smiles.​

NAOFUMI: Very good. Of course, you are only a third of the way there, but you can't come up with the entire theory inside your own head without learning anything. This is still a very important discovery.

RAPHTALIA cheers up.​

NAOFUMI: You are missing two key parts. First of all, the nobles. They are the ones paying the guards; and they, too, would come up with all sorts of ideas about "divine rights of kings" to explain - to themselves, and to the guards - why they should stay on the throne, and accumulate wealth and power. These theories would, of course, drip downwards, and influence what the guards think.

NAOFUMI: Furthermore, do you remember that guard with a fancy helmet? Did you see how he looked at the villagers? It was a little different from the other guards, wasn't it?

RAPHTALIA narrows her eyes, trying to remember.​

RAPHTALIA: Yeah. It was like he was…disgusted?

NAOFUMI: Yeah, I also think so. I am willing to bet money on this, but I think he is a son of some noble or other. Not a prince or a duke, or anything similarly high-placed; but someone smaller, like a baron. Of course, because his family is the one benefiting from the arrangement, he would be very motivated to come up with a reason for why it was justified!

RAPHTALIA sits up straight in her chair.​

RAPHTALIA: No way!

NAOFUMI: Yeah. This is what is called a "class conflict". A "class" is simply a group of people with common characteristics; usually, as socialists, we distinguish them based on how they relate to producing or owning goods. For example, here, we can distinguish three classes: villagers, who produce food, nobles, who take that food and spend it on whatever they want, and guards, who transport the food and enforce the entire system. "Class conflict" then is simply a term for how this tension between the classes manifests: for example, villagers want to keep more food to themselves so they don't starve, while nobles want to keep more to themselves because they are pests.

NAOFUMI: Final piece of the puzzle you are missing is everyone else. For example, take the Church. At first glance, it's not a part of this structure, right? But actually, it is. Nobility would, of course, influence the church: for example, they could donate money to it, or they could change laws around what kinds of lands they can own. As a result, the Church will tend to slant things in favor of nobility. In their sermons, they will also talk of duty, and needing to follow "tradition". This will affect all three classes, cementing the system in place. It will also make it harder for people to see the system: after all, it just seems like how things always were, right?

RAPHTALIA puts her head in her hands.​

RAPHTALIA: It's all so tied together!

NAOFUMI: Yep. Don't worry, you'll learn it all as time goes on.

As they finish their breakfast, TRAVELING MERCHANT finally comes downstairs.​


TRAVELING MERCHANT: Oh, you are up already? Good. Let me have some food, and then I'll show you the mines.

SCENE: Road leading to the mines. TRAVELING MERCHANT, RAPHTALIA and NAOFUMI are traveling in the wagon. NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA are looking at a piece of parchment with a scribbled plan of the mine. One point in the mine is marked with a cross.​

TRAVELING MERCHANT: Remember, go straight to the center. That's where they stored the ore before moving it out. When the monsters came, everyone abandoned the mine in a hurry, so a lot of the ore is still there. You just have to put it on carts and move it out of the mine, and I'll take it from there.

NAOFUMI: May I ask why you are doing this? I thought you weren't related to the mine, but if your family lives in the village…

TRAVELING MERCHANT is silent for a while.

TRAVELING MERCHANT: Well, first of all, ore isn't ours, we just give it out as tax. By the time they get around to clearing up the mine… Who knows where the ore went, right? Maybe the records will go missing too. It's not like the count knows how much ore was mined but not shipped out.

TRAVELING MERCHANT: Plus, well, there are monsters, right? They are too strong for us, but you are a Shield Hero, dealing with monsters is your job. Maybe you clear them out, and then our village could mine again. But if you don't run into them, at least the ore won't be sitting there unused.

RAPHTALIA: Oh, this is also a Material Condition, isn't it Naofumi? Villagers not owning their mine?

NAOFUMI: Yes, very good.

The wagon rolls into view of several buildings, flanking the cave-like entrance into the mine. TRAVELING MERCHANT stops next to one of them, turning the wagon's back to the mine. He hops off, unstraps his filofials from the carriage, and cautiously leads them to the building.​

TRAVELING MERCHANT: Come, this is the office. I'll hide inside until you are done, in case anything comes out of that mine.

NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA quickly sweep the building for threats, but find nothing. TRAVELING MERCHANT locks himself inside, and they head towards the mine entrance. Right by it, he sees a set of pickaxes, picks one up and feeds it to his shield.​

SYSTEM MESSAGE: Pickaxe shield unlocked! Special: mining 1.

SYSTEM MESSAGE: Rope shield unlocked! Special 1: Air Shield. Creates a shield of force in the air at the target location. Special 2: Grappling hook.

NAOFUMI concentrates, and changes his shield into a flat roll of rope. RAPHTALIA raises an eyebrow at him.​

RAPHTALIA: You unlocked a rope shield from a pickaxe?

NAOFUMI: No. There is a tree of shields: some earlier shields are required to unlock later ones. It seems that the rope shield was locked behind a pickaxe shield. Now, let's see, how do I use this…

NAOFUMI: Air Shield!

A giant, glowing green shield shows up in mid air, hovering a dozen meters away from them.​

NAOFUMI: No idea why a rope shield would let me use this.

RAPHTALIA: It seems pretty useful though.

Having tested the new shield, they walk into the mine.​

SCENE: A wide central area within the mine. Wooden beams support the low ceiling. The room is filled with various mining equipment: carts, boxes, pickaxes, and so on. Many tunnels lead away from the room into the darkness. On one end of the room, there is a mine shaft, leading deeper into the mine. NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA are stacking boxes full of glowing rocks on top of a cart.​

NAOFUMI: Okay, I think that's enough. Let's get it to the entrance.

NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA try to move the cart, but it quickly gets stuck in the loose earth on the ground.​

NAOFUMI: Damn. We must have put too much on it. Help me take some boxes off.

RAPHTALIA sniggers.​

RAPHTALIA: Is this also a Material Condition? No wooden planks on the floor, so carts can only carry so much?

NAOFUMI: It is. Now do less theory and more lifting.

RAPHTALIA: Sure, just - AAAAH

RAPHTALIA shrieks, leaping away from the cart. She cowers on the ground, eyes wide, hand pointing to the other side of the room.​

NAOFUMI: Raphtalia!

From a tunnel entrance on the other side of the room comes a monster. It is the size of a horse, with two dog heads. It snarls, and charges, slamming into an Air Shield NAOFUMI puts in the air in front of it. NAOFUMI moves to stand between the giant dog and RAPHTALIA, taking out a potion from his bandoleer and drinking it in one gulp.​

NAOFUMI: Damn, it is five levels above us. We should still be able to take it. Raph, take all the buffing potions.. Raph? Raph?!

RAPHTALIA is not listening. She is hyperventilating on the ground, staring at the giant dog.​

NAOFUMI: Fuck.

Air Shield winks out, and the giant dog charges at NAOFUMI. As the jaws of the dog are closing on NAOFUMI's neck, a second Air Shield snaps into existence between them, pushing NAOFUMI away. The dog crashes into the shield, sending it sprawling on the ground. NAOFUMI turns and runs to RAPHTALIA, picking her up. He turns towards the exit.

The dog is on the ground in between them and the exit, standing up.​

NAOFUMI: Motherfucker.

NAOFUMI turns around and runs to the mine shaft on the side of the room. He leaps into it, activating the grappling hook from his Rope Shield. The hook impacts the ceiling beams, lodging itself in them. NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA fall down the shaft and stop with a jerk, suspended from the grappling line.

The dog reaches the mine shaft, staring down. Saliva drips from its jaws, flying past NAOFUMI into the darkness. NAOFUMI stares it down. RAPHTALIA is gripping him tightly. NAOFUMI keeps her from seeing the dog. After several minutes, the dog leaves.

Slowly, RAPHTALIA's breathing slows down.​

NAOFUMI: Raph, are you okay? Please talk to me.

RAPHTALIA: Yeah. Yeah, I am here.

NAOFUMI: That dog. You said that a dog monster killed your family in the first wave.

RAPHTALIA stills, then nods.​

NAOFUMI: We need to get past it to get to the exit. Could you kill it? You are strong enough.

RAPHTALIA shivers, then shakes her head.​

RAPHTALIA: No.

NAOFUMI: Okay. Then we'll have to run. Can you take out a stamina potion from my bandoleer? I used a bunch on the shields back there.

RAPHTALIA carefully opens one of the bandoliers on NAOFUMI's chest, and takes out a stamina potion, before feeding it to NAOFUMI.​

NAOFUMI: Here is the plan. We will drink speed potions so we can run faster. I will reel us back up. I don't think the dog is really gone, so just before we cross the edge of the shaft, I'll make an Air Shield in front of it. Once we are on stable ground, you run to the exit as fast as you can. I will cover the retreat. Your goal is to get to the office where that merchant is holed up and get on top of one of the filofials. From there, we could flee properly.

NAOFUMi grits his teeth.

NAOFUMI: Now, I won't lie to you, this will be very dangerous. There is a real chance I will die -

RAPHTALIA jerks back, coming to face NAOFUMI. The grappling line they are hanging from sways dangerously.​

RAPHTALIA: No!

NAOFUMI: Listen to me. This is a very dangerous monster. This plan I have? It can fail in any of a dozen ways. The single most important thing here is that we don't both die. If it catches me, you run away. If I stumble and fall down? You run away. If it corners us? I will delay it, and you will run away without me. Don't look back, get to the merchant.

RAPHTALIA shakes her head.​

RAPHTALIA: No! We are going to get out together, and -

NAOFUMI puts a hand on RAPHTALIA's mouth and stares into her eyes with a cold expression.​

NAOFUMI: Raphtalia, I am not joking here. I really need you to agree to this.

They stare each other down, until RAPHTALIA squeezes her eyes shut and nods shakily. NAOFUMI takes off his hand.​

NAOFUMI: Good. Now, what do you do if the dog catches me by the leg?

RAPHTALIA: I run away.

NAOFUMI: Excellent. I left our money in the tavern room. You take it, and you get to Erhart. From there, you should be safe.

RAPHTALIA nods shakily again.​

NAOFUMI: Alright. Let's wait for a couple more minutes so your breathing is completely level.

They hang in the silence and darkness. NAOFUMI strains his ears for any sounds of the dog, but hears nothing.​

NAOFUMI: Alright. Potions, bottoms up.

RAPHTALIA takes out several potions, and drinks some herself, feeding others to NAOFUMI. NAOFUMI starts to slowly reel them up the shaft.​

NAOFUMI: Prepare to jump off.

NAOFUMI speeds up the reeling speed. As they cross the edge of the shaft, he summons an Air Shield. Dog, lying in ambush at the edge of the shaft, crashes into it with a howl.

RAPHTALIA jumps off, running past the dog picking itself off the ground. NAOFUMI reaches the edge, but is slowed down by the grappling hook being stuck in the beam. He changes his shield into a steel one and back into the rope shield, making the hook vanish, and freeing himself. He starts running, casting another Air Shield behind himself to block the dog off.

As NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA run up the tunnel, the dog chases after them. NAOFUMI casts another Air Shield, but the dog avoids it, having learned now. It catches NAOFUMI by the neck, and he cries out. Second dog head bites him on the shoulder.​

RAPHTALIA: No!

NAOFUMI: Keep running, you idiot!

Instead of running, RAPHTALIA turns around, spins through the air, and stabs deep into one of the dog necks. The dog howls, releasing its hold on NAOFUMI's neck and tries to bite RAPHTALIA. NAOFUMI summons an Air Shield, blocking the dog off. RAPHTALIA keeps rapidly stabbing the dog in a rage until the dog stumbles and falls down, dead. RAPHTALIA jumps off its corpse, landing on her feet, her breathing ragged. NAOFUMI slumps against a wall.​

NAOFUMI: Oh fuck, this actually hurts.

RAPHTALIA spins to face him, dropping to her knees and fishing out healing potions from her bandoleers. As they take effect, NAOFUMI sighs.​

NAOFUMI: This was very dumb and you should have kept running.

RAPHTALIA scowls at him and hits him on the head.​

NAOFUMI: Ow. Thanks for saving my life, though.

RAPHTALIA hugs NAOFUMI. As tension in the air releases, she starts to laugh.​

NAOFUMI: What?

RAPHTALIA: Oh, it's just - oh gods. Well, you freeing me from slavery and then us training together. It's a material condition which lead to both me not running away and being able to kill this dog, isn't it?

NAOFUMI rolls his eyes at giggling RAPHTALIA.​

NAOFUMI: You are really stretching the definition there.

They sit in peace for a moment, before NAOFUMI cuts off the dog's ear and feeds it to his shield, unlocking the greater dog shield.​

NAOFUMI: Alright. I don't think this dog would have let anything else live in the mine, so I think we are safe. Are you up for checking the rest of the mine though?

RAPHTALIA: Yeah. I feel much better now.

She kicks the dead dog.​

NAOFUMI: Let's go then.

SCENE: Montage, as NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA do final preparations for the Wave.​

NARRATOR: They return victorious!

NAOFUMI, RAPHTALIA and the TRAVELING MERCHANT arrive back at the tavern. They hop out, and explain to the INNKEEPER that they cleared the mine of monsters. Other villagers gather as they hear the news, and thank NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA.​

NARRATOR: With the ore in hand, they finally have the funds they need to finish their preparations!

NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA are in the weapons store again. RAPHTALIA looks smug as NAOFUMI is getting armor fitted to him.​

NARRATOR: Even the mysteries of magic are finally in their grasp!

Back in the magic store, RAPHTALIA is sitting at a table. Her hand is placed on top of a crystal ball. On the other side of the table, OLD WITCH is staring into the ball, muttering spells, her creaking voice unintelligible. NAOFUMI is looking through the merchandise, paying attention to the process out of the corner of his eye.​

OLD WITCH: Alright, this one is pretty clear. Young lady here has a light and shadow magic affinity. I could have guessed, what with her being a raccoon girl.

NAOFUMI: Is that typical?

OLD WITCH: Oh yes, very, among raccoons. Your affinity for healing and support magic is, on the other hand, quite rare. Maybe one in fifty humans has it.

NAOFUMI: Interesting. We'll take one spell book for each of our affinities. Oh, and -

NAOFUMI goes up to one of the display stands, and picks up an orb of milky crystal.​

NAOFUMI: It says here this is an "eye of memory" and that it can record your surroundings. What exactly does it do?

OLD WITCH: It's pretty easy to use. You push mana into it, and it will passively record everything that happens around you, and allow you to play it back as an illusory scene. Mostly they are used by the guards for recording testimonies, and sometimes for plays. That's a basic model, and it will only record what you see; more expensive ones can record sound, or even transmit the picture to a second orb.

NAOFUMI: So I could turn it on, record a fight with a monster, and then see where we made mistakes?

OLD WITCH: Yes, I think that should work.

NAOFUMI: We'll take it as well. Here is your payment.

NAOFUMI hands over a sizable bag of coins. OLD WITCH opens it, and starts counting out coins to check the amount.​

NAOFUMI: Pleasure doing business with you.

As they leave the store, NAOFUMI feeds the memory orb to his shield, unlocking the SHIELD OF VIEWING.​

NARRATOR: They study! They crunch! In the three days before the Wave, each of them manages to learn one spell! But the time for the wave is fast approaching…

SCENE: Light streams through the glass ceiling of a tall room, with several stories of observation decks. In the middle of the room is an enormous pedestal, above which hovers a mechanism of gold and ivory, as tall as a dozen men, every part of it spinning and changing. Every individual part is engraved with pictograms of monsters, and two large statues of dragons complete the design. In the middle of the mechanism, there is a large sand clock. The sand has almost run out.

This is the Dragon Hourglass, counting down time to the next Wave.

NAOFUMI approaches the Hourglass, and raises his shield. A ray of light shines between them, and glowing Arabic numerals appear out of thin air. Six hours and twenty five minutes remain until the next wave.​

NAOFUMI: Thankfully the Church let us in here. Would have been hard to prepare without knowing the exact time.

RAPHTALIA: Are those symbols from your world?

NAOFUMI turns to her, in confusion.​

NAOFUMI: What, the numbers? Can't you read them?

RAPHTALIA: No. That's not what our numbers look like.

NAOFUMI rubs his forehead.​

NAOFUMI: But I can read your language. The shield must be translating for me.

MOTOYASU, THE SPEAR HERO: Is that Naofumi I see?

SPEAR HERO, MYNE, SWORD HERO and BOW HERO, as well as their respective parties, enter the Dragon Hourglass room. They are all equipped with top of the line armor and weapons, unlike NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA. MOTOYASU is leading the group. He glances over NAOFUMI and smirks in disdain.​

MOTOYASU: My, what shoddy equipment. Where did you find that, in a bargain bin sale?

NAOFUMI ignores them and motions for RAPHTALIA to follow him, heading for the door.​

MYNE: Hey! Sir Motoyasu is talking to you!

MOTOYASU approaches RAPHTALIA as she passes by, drops on one knee, and clasps her hand. RAPHTALIA pauses out of sheer surprise.​

MOTOYASU: Hello. I am Kitamura Motoyasu, the Spear Hero.

RAPHTALIA: Yeah, I figured.

MYNE twirls to face the scene, one of her eyes twitching. NAOFUMI looks back, and pauses, waiting for RAPHTALIA.​

MOTOYASU: So cute!

MYNE: Sir Motoyasu! Why are you complimenting a filthy demihuman!

MOTOYASU ignores MYNE, focusing on RAPHTALIA.​

MOTOYASU: A girl as adorable as you shouldn't wield a sword; I'll protect you!

RAPHTALIA looks at MOTOYASU in confusion, until something clicks in her head.​

RAPHTALIA: Wait.. The Spear Hero?

RAPHTALIA starts chuckling, until she descends into laughter, bending at the waist.​

NAOFUMI's SPIRIT OF THE HEART: Oh boy.

RAPHTALIA: You mean that moron that couldn't see past his own nose? Naofumi told me all about you.

MOTOYASU: What? You are with Naofumi?

RAPHTALIA: Of course I am with Naofumi. He freed me and will free the rest of us demihumans.

RAPHTALIA tears her hand away and walks after NAOFUMI.​

MOTOYASU: No! You can't. If you stay with him, you will be in danger -

RAPHTALIA spins to face MOTOYASU.​

RAPHTALIA: Oh please. That bitch -

She points to MYNE.​

RAPHTALIA: Is all but ready to skin me alive and turn me into a rug. I'll take any monster over that.

RAPHTALIA turns to NAOFUMI and heads for the door.​

RAPHTALIA: Come on, we are leaving.

REN: See you at the Waves.

SCENE: NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA are back in the tavern room they rent as their base of operations. They are sitting on their beds, surrounded by several packs. NAOFUMI is holding a checklist in his hand.​

NAOFUMI: Armor, sword, daggers?

RAPHTALIA: Check.

NAOFUMI crosses out items on the checklist after they both make sure they are fine.​

NAOFUMI: Replacement sword, inside of pack 1?

RAPHTALIA: Check.

NAOFUMI: Rope, pack 1?

RAPHTALIA: Check.

NAOFUMI: Potions in bandoleers: healing, mana, stamina?

RAPHTALIA: Check.

NAOFUMI: Potions in pack 2: speed, strength, defense?

RAPHTALIA: Check.

They continue down the checklist until the end.​

NAOFUMI: Seems we are as ready as we'll ever be. Now we just have to wait for the Wave to start.

To pass the time, they play a couple games of go. Finally, light surrounds NAOFUMI and RAPHTALIA. They stand up and pick up their packs. In a moment, they vanish into thin air.​

NARRATOR: The Wave of Apocalypse has begun!

Dramatis Personae

SYSTEM MESSAGE. Provider of skills. Voice of the status magic.
NAOFUMI IWATANI, THE SHIELD HERO. The first socialist. Protagonist. Makes plans and checklists.
RAPHTALIA'S SPIRIT OF THE HEART. Voice of the majority of the heart.
RAPHTALIA'S SPIRIT OF THEORY. Anathema to idealism. Grows with knowledge. Voice of materialism.
RAPHTALIA. Racoon girl. Second socialist. Junior theorist.
TRAVELING MERCHANT. Knows the prices, knows the places, has a swanky wagon.
INNKEEPER. Owner of the tavern. Married to the TRAVELING MERCHANT.
OLD WITCH. Magic store proprietor. Provider of books.
MOTOYASU, THE SPEAR HERO. Creep. Misogynist. Allegedly a hero.
MYNE. Definitely racist. Casual slavery enjoyer. Betrayed NAOFUMI.
REN, THE SWORD HERO. Hero. Gave NAOFUMI a map once.
ITSUKI, THE BOW HERO. Hero. Mysterious. Stance on slavery unclear.
 
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It is only a foot tall, and looks like RAPHTALIA wearing a tuxedo. The suit is tight, and wiry muscles visibly bulge under it, rolling around with every movement. Its face is framed by a wide, long beard. No, not "a" beard; THE beard. Charisma emanates from THE beard, lighting up the entire room. Once your eyes glance upon THE beard, they cannot leave.

It is RAPHTALIA's SPIRIT OF THEORY.
Why is a female raccoon's SOT dressed in male clothes with a human-style male beard?

while nobles want to keep more to themselves because they are pests.
Seems a little reductive, but I guess Naofumi isn't the most unbiased teacher and he's trying to keep things simple for a first lesson.

RAPHTALIA slumps down, brought low by the weight of all the knowledge.
NAOFUMI: Yep. Don't worry, you'll learn it all as time goes on.
This comes off as very condescending, and the first part is coming straight from the author so it can't be blamed on in-character bias. Might be worth toning it down a smidge.

She covers on the ground,
Typo: cowers

RAPHTALIA: No. That's not how our numbers look like.
Grammar: "how our numbers look" or "what our numbers look like"
 
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