The Lands of the River - A Bronze Souls Quest

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A quest in a Bronze Age Soulslike setting of my own devising, inspired by Ancient Egypt, with a dash of Disco Elysium vibes.

The magical waters that bring new life to the lands no longer flow, and you, a soul waylaid on your final journey, must walk the lands to discover why. Along the way you may also piece together who you were, and who you will become.
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0-1: You Are Dead
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You are dead.

There's no doubt about this, it's one of those things you're very certain of; the cessation of vital functions has a certain whole-body finality to it. You've been lying in state for what must be days without eating, drinking or breathing, and that would seem to be pretty conclusive.

The fact that your soul seems in no hurry to depart is, in the circumstances, something of an inconvenient detail.

You feel sure you could theoretically move, but it just feels like too much effort. Being dead seems to have a lot in common with being depressed.

Unless you're just dead, and depressed. I mean, being dead is a pretty depressing prospect.

Should you do something?
[ ] No.
[ ] Yes.

Hi, welcome to my first quest! (internal screaming)
Big thanks to @open_sketch and @Hakazin for helping me with this.
This is a quest in a Soulslike setting of my own devising, with a dash of Disco Elysium vibes. The mechanics, the world, and your character's identity will be revealed and/or defined over time as you discover/remember things.
 
[X] Yes.

Making yourself move around a bit helps with depression. It's not generally an option when you're dead, but if they're gonna give us a try at it, why not see what happens?
 
0-2: Coming Forth By Day
[x] Yes.

After a long struggle with executive dysfunction, you manage to sit up and open your eyes. It feels like a monstrous effort of will, though the physicality is extremely simple; you're not sure if this is because your body no longer has automatic processes for this, or if it's just depression again.

The midday sun beats down, as if judging you for rising late. You are sitting on a wooden bier, in a small barque which seems to be cast up on a sandy shore, dunes obscuring the view inland. If this is an afterlife, it's singularly lacking in the 'life' department. You can't quite remember what you expected, but it was at least a bit grander than this.

Actually you can't remember much of anything, come to think of it. Who were you, anyway?

[ ] A Noble Warrior - You were a highborn warrior of one of the Kingdoms of the River, skilled in all the arts of war. (A versatile pure martial fighter.)
[ ] An Outlander - You were a nomadic warrior-mystic from the Unwatered Lands beyond the River. (A specialist skirmisher, who can also call on a little of the magic of the God of the Desert Winds.)
[ ] An Astromancer - You were a Scholar of the Incantations, working magic by speaking words of arcane power. (A specialist arcane magic user, and also a passible skirmisher.)
[ ] A Priest of the Sun - You served the will of the Sun God, working magic through the Invocation of divine power. (A specialist divine spellcaster, and also a passible melee fighter.)
[ ] A Priest of the Moon - You served the enigmatic and many-faced Moon God, member of a mystic order of scholar-priests. (A multi-disciplinary pure magic user.)
[ ] A Serf - You were nobody of any great importance. (Warning: Hard Mode. You have no learning and only the barest militia training. The worst at almost everything and the best at nothing, this is the equivalent of Dark Souls' Deprived or Elden Ring's Wretch.)

You may also choose an Introspection; a question or topic you want to ask, recall or ponder. Introspection may sometimes take more than one update to resolve, and you may only focus on 1 topic at a time.
[ ] What was my name?
[ ] Write In.

From here on, you may always vote to Introspect if you do not currently have an active Introspection. You may unlock specific topics that will be added to the list, but write-ins are always welcome, and I may add particularly interesting failed votes to the list for later. Sometimes you won't get a good answer though!
 
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[X] An Astromancer - You were a Scholar of the Incantations, working magic by speaking words of arcane power. (A specialist arcane magic user, and also a passible skirmisher.)
[X] What was my name?
 
[X] A Priest of the Moon - You served the enigmatic and many-faced Moon God, member of a mystic order of scholar-priests. (A multi-disciplinary pure magic user.)
[X] What was my name?

I wanna kiss Rani
 
[X] A Priest of the Moon - You served the enigmatic and many-faced Moon God, member of a mystic order of scholar-priests. (A multi-disciplinary pure magic user.)
[x] What was my purpose?
 
[X] A Noble Warrior - You were a highborn warrior of one of the Kingdoms of the River, skilled in all the arts of war. (A versatile pure martial fighter.)
[X] How did I die?
 
[X] A Noble Warrior - You were a highborn warrior of one of the Kingdoms of the River, skilled in all the arts of war. (A versatile pure martial fighter.)
[X] What was my name?
 
[X] A Priest of the Moon - You served the enigmatic and many-faced Moon God, member of a mystic order of scholar-priests. (A multi-disciplinary pure magic user.)
[X] What was my name?
 
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