The Force is Conflict (Alt-Power, Dark Jedi Taylor)

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A culture's teachings, and most importantly the nature of its people, achieves definition in conflict. They either find themselves, or find themselves lacking. The fate of Brockton Bay will be decided, as war is waged in the hearts of its people, against the Darkness... or the Light.
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Chapter 1: Krayt

0th Law

The Promethean Rose
Location
5 Minutes into the Future
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They/Them
Taylor meditated.

Most people who meditated did so to improve their focus and concentration, to become more mindful of the world around them, and in a sense, that is why Taylor was meditating. However, few people would be able to achieve as much as Taylor could, and certainly not by using her… particular methods. Whereas most would seek a sense of calm, she focused on her anger, her hatred. She cultivated it, letting it well up within her chest, before condensing it into a tiny ball of pure fury for later use. She would need it, if what her senses told her was correct.

You see, Taylor had a power. She could access some strange, ubiquitous energy field that seemed to stretch across the entire planet, binding all life together. It was generated by living things, and it flowed between them, carrying their thoughts, feelings, and passions. However, none could truly sense it beyond vague inclinations: that nagging feeling that tells you when someone is behind you, or the instinctual knowledge of a coming storm, removed from any meteorological observations. None could truly sense it, hear it, aside from Taylor, as far as she could tell.

Of course, her ability to access it stretched far beyond simply hearing it. She could draw upon it, using her hatred, anger, and pain to force the energy contained within to manifest, to fuel her body, and alter the world around her. She could move objects telekinetically, alter the properties of materials and charge them with the energy of all life, and most curiously of all, she could delve into the web of energy and listen to its echoes, the emotions of those around her, the whispered warnings of future events, and even the grand symphony of the Earth's biosphere.

And that is why she was cultivating her anger: she could tell that a critical moment was approaching, a significant encounter with the potential to alter the course of events in the city. More than that, she knew that there would be battle regardless of her presence. That last part was of particular interest to her, for she wanted to be a hero. Heroes with powers fought villains with powers, and Taylor, despite having powers, had yet to go out and actually be a hero. Part of the reason was that she sensed that the time was not right, and another part was that neither she, nor her… costume had been ready.

Of course, she called it a costume, but it was more accurate to call it armor, or a disguise, for it primarily served the functions of protecting her person, and concealing her presence and identity. It certainly hadn't been designed for aesthetics: it simply consisted of a long robe over plates of rudimentary plastic. She didn't have reliable access to things like resin for industrial-strength plastics, so she'd needed to make do with milk-based plastics, and after a significant amount of trial and error, she managed to create a material that would be suitable for armor through application of her power, hardening and reinforcing the plastic. As for the robe, it had been a relatively simple matter to sew it out of black fabric and then fireproof it. She'd attempted to figure out a way to make it blend in with the night for better stealth, but that hadn't panned out. Evidently her powers didn't exactly work that way. She also wore a simple black mask, also fireproofed, to conceal her identity, should any see past her hood.

The clock struck midnight, and she stood. It was time.

==*==​

If she was anyone else, Taylor would have chosen a slightly more… practical method of locating the battleground that she would fight at that night, but if she was anyone else, she also wouldn't have been able to sense that a fight would happen, so it all balanced out. She chuckled briefly at the thought, before shoving her mirth aside. It would not aid her in her first battle, so she discarded it.

...Perhaps that was why she endured the Trio's torments, then? They were a source of endless frustration and anger. Anger which she could use to further her wish of becoming a hero.

But gratitude would not do, either. It was better to cultivate her hatred for them, for as long as they continued to inspire the emotion in her.

Regardless, unlike at school, she had no trouble in finding her location. She simply listened to the echo of events yet to come, and began to walk, following the sound to its source. Out of the relatively safer parts of town, east through the Docks and to the Boardwalk, and then north, straddling the line between tourism and subjugation, safety and danger, wealth and lack thereof. It was a curious area, when perceived through the lens of her power: camaraderie, the bonds of desperation mixing with the isolation of those well-off enough to not care about others, turning into a twisted concoction of resentment and rivalry, driven by the galvanizing power that the gang leaders possessed.

The underlying echo of the power that both united and destroyed grew stronger, and Taylor followed it, deeper into the Docks. There were no streetlights, no light at all, aside from the flame of a single lighter, illuminating faces with an asian cast to them, belonging to people clad in red and green. Within them, Taylor could feel frustration and anger, but most prominently, fear. But fear of whom?

Her question was promptly answered when the gang members backed away from the doorway of a two-story building, making way for a man of impressive stature, wearing no shirt, nothing above his waist but an ornate mask, carved in the likeness of a dragon. His presence was strong, and carried with it a despotic anger, as if something important had been taken from him, as if he was wronged, and the only thing he wished to do was to kill those who had dared challenge him. Taylor knew immediately who he was: Lung, the leader of the ABB, a pyrokinetic who became gradually stronger, more like a dragon, if rumors were to be believed, the more he fought.

She wasn't entirely sure how the members of the gang were armed, aside from Lung, who was obviously armed with his flames. It was immaterial, though: she was confident in her ability to telekinetically disarm thugs.

From there, Taylor knew that she had two choices in this situation: she could either walk away and waste all of her preparations… or she could fight. She smiled cruelly. There really was only one option that she could take. So, she began to stride forward, approaching the crowd of ABB members.

She wasn't exactly sure what had given it away. Perhaps it was the black robe, or maybe the smile she wore. It could even have been the fact that she got within ten yards of a group of gang members in the middle of the night, while obviously in full control of her faculties. Most likely, however, it was a combination of all of those factors. Regardless, the moment one of the ABB thugs spotted her, he shouted a word in a language she couldn't understand -- most likely something to the effect of "Cape!" -- and drew a pistol.

Now that wouldn't do.

Taylor summoned her rage, raising a fist as she seized the firearm telekinetically, and, with a flick of thought and a swing of her arm, she tore the gun out of the thug's hands, throwing it to the other side of the street. Then, before anyone else could react, she thrust her hands forward, focusing her rage into a wave of force.

The members of the ABB, all of them, were thrown around twenty yards backwards, tumbling across the pavement like a bunch of ragdolls. Between that and her wave of force, she doubted any of them would be getting up any time soon… of course, aside from Lung. He was struggling to his feet, his skin slowly taking on a silver sheen.

Unwilling to allow the villain to grow any stronger, Taylor walked forward, reached out and grasped Lung's neck with her powers, raising him up in the air and choking him. Once he lost consciousness, she would be able to… do what, exactly? Call the PRT? With what phone? Maybe she'd end up needing to drag his unconscious body all the way to the PRT's headquarters. It wouldn't be very dignified, a perfect outcome to force-

Her sadistic contemplation was cut short as her power screamed out in warning. Without thinking, Taylor released Lung and dodged to the side, just as a beam of flame shot past her head.

The Dragon landed on his hands and knees, individual scales just beginning to make themselves apparent. Taylor had only a moment to defend herself as he got up to a kneeling position and thrust his hand outwards, shooting a cylinder of flame at Taylor. Thankfully, a moment was all she needed to push against the stream of fire, parting it down the middle as if by a wedge.

But Lung was expecting that, it seemed. The parted flames changed direction, curling around to strike Taylor's back. Thankfully, her robe's fireproofing, despite making it rather stiff, held up, giving Taylor enough time to channel her power into her legs and leap upwards.

The power-enhanced jump took her ten feet into the air, not her best from when she had been experimenting with enhanced movements, but it was passable for how little time she'd had to make it happen. However, that was when Taylor realized something crucial: she didn't have any way to change direction in midair. Lung realized that too, evidently, as he dashed forwards in two bounds and grabbed Taylor's unprotected foot with a fire-wreathed hand and swung her onto the pavement.

Taylor's armor plating, despite her initial impression of success, was unable to withstand the impact of being slammed onto a hard surface by a superhumanly strong dragon, and shattered, the pieces digging into her back. Of course, that pain was nothing compared to the sensation of suffering third-degree burns, even on just her ankle. Taylor didn't let the pain stop her for more than a moment, though. Indeed, she concentrated on the pain, letting it give her focus, strength. And so, when she cried out, it was not a cry of agony, but rather a scream of rage, carrying every ounce of anger and hatred she could muster in that moment. It echoed through the streets, now lit, if only dimly, by fires that had yet to be put out. But the one most affected, the target of her wrath, was Lung. He lurched backwards, and… tanked the blast, standing up straight once more, an expression of inconceivable rage on his barely-human face. When had his mask come off?

Retribution was swift and painful: the dragon shot a beam of fire at Taylor's face underneath her hood. She desperately closed her eyes and mouth, but that did little to prevent the agony of having the majority of her face exposed to literal fire.

She couldn't do anything to prevent it: she knew no wrestling or martial arts techniques that could let her escape her bind, and the most she could preserve her face was to attempt to disperse the heat energy, at best a token act in front of such overwhelming power…

And then it stopped, and Lung's grip on her leg vanished. She tried to open her eyes, but her eyelids… weren't exactly in the best state. She couldn't use her eyes, then, but she still could sense the world around her with her powers. A moment of concentration, and the street unfolded to her perceptions: there were three new people who had entered the fight, along with four… dogs? But they were too large to be dogs, despite their minds being remarkably similar to the other ones she'd touched on occasion. Even the smallest… no, that was a human. So there were four new people and three canines of unusual size. The most reliable conclusion Taylor could reach was "Powers" so she moved on.

From what she could tell, one of the dogs had attacked Lung, and was currently trying to fend the Dragon off. His fire seemed to have no effect, but even still, the hound wasn't doing the best job of fighting Lung, its sheer mass nothing next to Lung's raw strength.

Taylor realized something then: in all likelihood, Lung would triumph in this encounter. He grew stronger with every passing second, and he was already winning against the supersized hound. She couldn't let that happen. The villain had set her face alight, after all, and the burns hurt perhaps even more than they had before, now that they were exposed to the sting of night air. In that case, she had to stop Lung, here and now. Subjugate him, and make sure he'd never hurt her ever again.

She let that fury build, stoking its flames until it burned bright, far too bright to hold onto any more. She forced the shaking in her chest down her arms, directing it out of her hands and at Lung. When the power emerged, it was a torrent of raw lightning, an attack that Lung had no way of preparing for.

It engulfed him, throwing him straight into a building with the sheer energy of the attack. It wasn't enough, by Taylor's estimate, not nearly enough. She poured more power into the electrical storm, forcing out every ounce of rage she had, every bit of frustration, every feeling of hatred and pain she had felt for the past month. And when that wasn't enough, she drew upon Lung's hatred as well, his anger. The anger of the dragon caused the lightning to intensify even further, until Taylor found herself at her limit. Her body simply wasn't capable of channelling so much energy at once, certainly not in any sustainable manner and not without practice.

She collapsed to the ground, breathing heavily, electricity still sparking around her forearms. If Lung had endured that, she knew that she would most likely die, pulverized by his ever-increasing might. With her power, she "looked" at his mind: it had quieted and fallen into unconsciousness, even deeper than the rest of the ABB goons.

She allowed herself a smile, relief setting into her. She had won. She'd needed the aid of… whoever those people were, but she'd won. With her eyes still effectively burned shut, she got up and walked over to the four people who had saved her with their… superdogs.

And then they were gone, their mounts turning and bounding away. Confused, Taylor reached out and touched their minds more deeply, and found confusion in all of them as well. All of them, save one, who felt fear and horror, directed at Taylor.

If she could have opened her eyes, she would have stood there, blinking in confusion. But, because she didn't, her first priority was to remedy that fact. Besides, she felt that events had not yet concluded, and she needed to remain at the site.

Taylor sat down, cross-legged on the flame-lit street, and meditated, much like before. She opened her mind to her power, and by concentrating on the pain in her face and ankle, drew upon the energy. She allowed it to flow through her, permeating every fiber of her being, invigorating her muscles and fortifying her bones. Then, she channeled the energy specifically to her face, strengthening and replenishing the tissue, forcing it to function despite its injuries. Once she felt the process succeed, she opened her eyes and mouth.

Pain. She experienced pain even greater than before, nerves, once charred, now forced to function as normal, sending signals of agony to her brain. She didn't turn away from it. Rather, she let it invigorate her even further as she stood up, just in time to sense another presence approaching, a presence promptly announced by the roar of a motorcycle.

Armsmaster came pulling up on his blue and silver vehicle, and when he spotted Taylor, he screeched to a halt, dismounting and drawing his halberd in a smooth, practiced motion.

"You gonna fight me?" He asked.

Taylor felt a brief flash of frustration, but then remembered that she was a figure wearing a black robe, surrounded by unconscious bodies, littering a street with a couple lingering fires. Who wouldn't assume that she was a villain?

"No." She answered. "I'm a hero." She felt that she deserved the classification after taking down a proto-dragon gang leader.

"You don't exactly look like one." He observed.

The hero was right, of course. She'd chosen black fabric out of the other possible options because it would theoretically help her blend in with the night… or something like that. In retrospect, it wasn't exactly her best decision. Taylor opened her mouth to respond, but Armsmaster added on something after his statement.

"But… you're telling the truth."

That was… curious. It was as if he knew for sure, as opposed to… No, Taylor. She thought. Don't go looking into the mind of a renowned hero.

"You need a hospital?" The hero inquired further, lowering his weapon and walking forward.

In response, Taylor pulled up her hood, revealing her masked face, disfigured by the third-degree burns Lung had inflicted on her. Her hair was okay -- she'd pulled it back into a ponytail -- but that was little consolation. "If it hadn't been for some other group of capes that intervened, Lung would have probably done a lot more than this."

"That's why we have the Wards program." Armsmaster stated plainly, not an ounce of judgement in his voice. "Where is Lung?"

Taylor pointed to the unconscious body of the leader of the ABB. His armor and bulk had mostly faded away, leaving nothing more than a man, covered in tattoos of the beings he emulated in battle.

"You mind if I secure him?"

"Go ahead." Taylor assented, watching as the Tinker unfurled a metal cage from the depths of his motorcycle (Where had he managed to store it?) and welded it to the ground around Lung. Then, a small attachment exited his halberd, poking the dragon with a needle. Undoubtedly, a tranquilizer to make sure that Lung would stay down.

"That should hold him long enough for the PRT to get here." He said. "Now, let me make a call, and hopefully, we can get you fixed up." He turned aside, put a finger to his helmet, and spoke some words that Taylor couldn't make out, waited slightly, then spoke more. After a minute or so, he looked back to her. "You're in luck: Panacea is currently helping out at Brockton Bay General Hospital, and has agreed to heal a fellow hero." Something told Taylor that it was more rare than one may initially imagine. "For now, do you need painkillers?"

Taylor shook her head. "The pain is the only reason I can use my eyes and mouth like normal."

"Something to do with your power?"

She nodded.

"Speaking of," Armsmaster continued, "I haven't seen you around before. Are you from elsewhere, or are you new?"

"New."

"You got a name?"

"I never really thought of one." Taylor admitted. "The thought just… hadn't crossed my mind."

"Have you thought of joining the Wards?" Armsmaster proposed. "We have people whose job it is to think of things like that."

"I…" Taylor began, then stopped herself. She had considered it before, obviously, but she'd dismissed it: she didn't want to get caught up in any sort of teenage drama, and frankly, she didn't think that authoritative oversight was entirely necessary to becoming a hero. But, now that she had experienced battle firsthand, she more fully realized the perks: she would have a team at her back, with powerful allies that could prevent her from having her face burned off again. If she wanted to be a hero, she needed that power. "I think that I am going to join the Wards, now that I've experienced actual 'hero work.'"

Armsmaster smiled good-naturedly. "That's excellent. If you want, we can go over the specifics right after we get you fixed up." With that, he mounted his bike, and with the push of a button, a sidecar folded out from his vehicle, once again with no indication of how he actually managed to fit something that large inside the motorcycle. "Jump in."

Taylor nodded, putting on the helmet that spontaneously popped up the moment she sat down, and the pair sped away.
 
The Wards?????? Christ. 🤦‍♂️ :facepalm: :facepalm: :facepalm: :facepalm:
I feel its a waste and a HUGE disappointment. Dark Jedi in the wards.
OKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk.:rofl:
 
I think this is leading up to become a slightly crack Fic, of Taylor being Dark Side nuts and the PRT trying to PR the whole situation.
Que Highjinks.
 
Having Sophia nearby should be a font of power I think
Oh yeah. But let's not forget about what a Dark Jedi has for problems. Self control... I have a feeling Sophia should end up in a ditch somewhere really quick... Especially if she is the pushy I hate you and will not stop variant.
 
Oh yeah. But let's not forget about what a Dark Jedi has for problems. Self control... I have a feeling Sophia should end up in a ditch somewhere really quick... Especially if she is the pushy I hate you and will not stop variant.
Or she might see how strong in the Dark Side Taylor has become and start liking her.
 
I think this is leading up to become a slightly crack Fic, of Taylor being Dark Side nuts and the PRT trying to PR the whole situation.
Que Highjinks.
I'm more going for a... "Dark Side Taylor progressively subverting the PRT, Wards, & Protectorate in order to achieve her ends" vibe.
Oh yeah. But let's not forget about what a Dark Jedi has for problems. Self control... I have a feeling Sophia should end up in a ditch somewhere really quick... Especially if she is the pushy I hate you and will not stop variant.
Or she might see how strong in the Dark Side Taylor has become and start liking her.
I can confirm that neither of these will happen. What will happen instead... well, that's for me to know, and you to discover.
 
Dark Jedis are interesting as they are not evil for evil's sake. For dark jedis the dark side is only a means to an end and they really only want the fulfillment of their personal goals. In any case, significantly better than siths and ideal for a setting like worm.
The first tinkering should be your laser saber and i'm curious if Taylor can use Mechu-deru to free Dragon..
 
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Chapter 2: Vader
Panacea, Taylor decided, was not what she had expected. She wasn't entirely sure what she had expected, but she knew that what she saw was not it. The heroine stood at the door of the hospital, evidently waiting for Taylor and Armsmaster. However, even the cursory glance Taylor took as she got out of the sidecar revealed that her heart was not into it: her shoulders were slumped, her eyes drooping, and her stance heavy, weighed down by the white and red cloak she wore, and while Taylor didn't know how much of that assessment was based on her power as opposed to her intuition, the question was immaterial.

Upon their arrival, Panacea looked up in recognition and walked forward to meet them. "So, you're the new hero?" She asked rhetorically, then sighed, extending her hand. "Do I have permission to heal you?" Her voice carried many of the same notes as her appearance: exhaustion, disinterest, and a hollowness where… something was supposed to be.

Something was off about Panacea, Taylor decided. A healer of her caliber should be enthused about what she was doing, if nothing else. Yet she was not. If I can figure out why that isn't the case, then perhaps I can use that information. She thought. How, exactly? That remains to be seen, I suppose.

"I… am." Taylor finally replied in a measured tone. She was still doing her best to assess the healer, but did not want to make it seem as if she was avoiding answering. She took Panacea's hand to shake it. "And yes, you do."

==*==​

Amy pursed her lips, assessing the new cape's condition. Parahuman biology could get weird at times, and while it was most consistently observable in Case 53s, there were situations in which other capes had their biology altered by their powers, such as in the cases of people from Browbeat to Pretender to even Crawler.

Needless to say, this was one such case. This cape's facial tissue was, in many ways, acting as it normally would, with the significant caveat that they weren't supposed to be acting normally: far too many cells in the dermis and epidermis had been simply obliterated, or had all of their proteins denatured, or had been severed from their connections. Yet, somehow, the cells functioned normally, which in a curious twist of luck, led to them harming what living cells remained.

Thankfully, skin was relatively easy to work with. Amy broke down the destroyed epidermis and dermis, subsuming their components into the subcutaneous adipose tissue. From there, she reconstructed the epidermis from the top down, pushing the epithelium up with successive layers, largely mimicking the epidermal stem cells in function. Once the epidermis was completed, she cloned the cape's fibroblasts, and set them to work synthesizing the collagen that would form the majority of the dermis. While they were working, she began replicating the girl's lymph and blood vessels, as well as her nerves, reestablishing the network that had been practically burned away. Finally, she drew on the resources that were beginning to flow again in order to construct sweat and oil glands.

All in all, it was a simple, albeit tedious process. Everyone who believed that she could just instantaneously cure them in a touch either had no understanding of biology, or vastly overestimated her abilities.

"And that's everything." Amy said, letting go of the cape's hand. "I fully repaired the damaged skin, except for the hair follicles, but I don't think that'll be a problem: you're not going to be growing a beard anytime soon regardless. However, I couldn't do anything about your eyes. Biologically speaking, there's nothing irregular about them."

"What do you mean?" The cape asked, tilting her head with an inquisitive expression on her regrown face.

Amy suppressed a sigh. "Your eyes are yellow, far more yellow than those of people with amber eyes." She explained. "Moreover, the primary pigment in your eyes is eumelanin, not lipochrome. I can only assume that your eye color is a result of your power somehow altering the wavelength of reflected light… or something. I don't know physics." She spread her arms helplessly, shrugging. Right now, what she really needed to do was go to sleep, not entertain the questions of some newbie cape.

…She was letting herself get too agitated. She closed her eyes for a couple seconds to bring herself back into the moment, and when she opened them, she saw Armsmaster showing the new cape a mirror that had been stored in his halberd.

"-lenses through government channels, in order to protect your identity as one of the Wards." The Tinker was saying.

"I see." The new cape said, smiling. However, something was distinctly wrong about her smile. It unnerved Amy, but she couldn't figure out why. "I think I'll take you up on that." The two of them began to leave, but then the cape stopped and turned, as if she'd forgotten something. "One last question for you, Panacea."

Suppressing a slight twitch in her eye at the mention of her cape name, Amy raised an eyebrow. She had a bad feeling about this, but still… "Yes?"

"You don't feel as if your healing has any value, do you?"

Amy's eyes flared. How did she know about that? "What's it to you?" She challenged, scowling.

"Just curious, is all." The cape defended. "You seemed strange to me, and I believe I've figured out why."

"I never said that your guess was correct." Amy denied.

The cape smiled once again. "You didn't need to." With that, she got in the Armscycle's sidecar and was driven away with Armsmaster.

As Amy stood there, she realized what was wrong with the cape's smile: it carried no joy. Pleasure, yes. Satisfaction, also yes, but nothing truly human, or even happy.... Still, there were known cases of parahumans having their minds altered by their powers. The PRT would hopefully recognize whatever was going on with the cape. Amy didn't need to do anything about it.

She began the walk home, thankfully devoid of yet another responsibility.

==*==​

Taylor approached the street her house was on. Somewhat regrettably, she had been unable to do anything actually related to joining the Wards that night. Something about not holding informational sessions at three in the morning? Regardless of the validity of the reason, it was vexing all the same, and Taylor had been carrying that frustration all the way home.

She was making a mountain out of a molehill, but that was intentional. After all, frustration was a passion through which she could derive strength, power.

She stopped herself as she drew closer to her residence. There was a conscious presence in the house, abuzz with thought and activity without the thick blanket of sleep to muffle it. She closed her eyes and reached out further with her perceptions, listening for anything that would indicate if this person was a threat or not.

The fact that there was nobody else in the house was a warning sign, but the possibility of the presence being that of a murderer was quickly discounted: the person reeked of concern and worry, and there was only one person alive Taylor could imagine worrying in that context, especially when she took into account her current situation. It was her father, undoubtedly.

Taylor felt the flame of anger, true anger begin to grow within her. How dare he be worried about her. After her mom's death, he'd been absent, and had done nothing when her life had fallen apart, when Emma had betrayed her.

No, not now. She thought, gritting her teeth. I still need him, if only to allow me to enter the Wards and gain the power to finally be something more than a weak, helpless teenager.

...Well, that wasn't necessarily true, now that she thought about it. If he was dead, then the Wards would essentially have to take her in. Of course, that came with its own problems, such as probably needing to enter the foster system, which was undesirable at best. And how would she go about the deed, anyway? From what she knew, murder wasn't exactly the most subtle of arts, and she'd need to make it so that she had a reliable alibi, on top of providing enough false leads to divert suspicion...

Ultimately, she decided against murder. It was, quite frankly, far too much of a hassle to even plan, with too many externalities that she'd need to worry about. Besides, she still hadn't tried the "playing nice" approach. And since her father was already up…

==*==​

Danny stood with a start as the front door to the house opened and closed with a dull thud, followed by the sound of light footsteps making their way upstairs. The sound was immediately recognizable: it was practically impossible to live with someone for years and not recognize their gait. Taylor was home, and she was making no effort to conceal herself, unlike when he'd just barely heard and been woken up by the sound of her leaving five hours ago. Was she confident that he was sleeping deeply enough to not hear her? Regardless, he felt a rush of relief at the fact that she was back, and safe enough to-

Taylor's footsteps stopped in front of his room, and the door swung open, revealing… Taylor? For a moment, he doubted the person before him was her. Perhaps it was the black robe, or maybe it was the ponytail she wore her hair in (she always wore it down). Even more disconcerting was the fact that she wasn't wearing glasses, the slight clearing-up of her face, and… her eyes. No longer were they the brown he'd grown used to. Instead, they were an angry, luminescent orange-yellow, as if a fire burned behind them.

"Dad," she said, the normality of her voice immediately assuaging most of Danny's current concerns. "We need to talk."

Danny could tell from her tone that this was going to be an immensely painful conversation, but… whatever it was, it evidently had to happen. So he swallowed his concerns, and replied in the most supportive way he could think of. "What do you want to talk about, Taylor?"

"I'm a cape," she said bluntly, "and I'm going to join the Wards."

Danny blinked, completely flatfooted. What!?

It made sense, of course. Her eyes were very clearly supernatural in origin, and her outfit made the most sense as some sort of cape costume. But even so, her words caught him off guard, and a million questions raced through his head. How did she become a cape? When was it? If it was earlier than this night, then why did she keep it secret, and why hadn't she joined the Wards earlier? Were her eyes something she'd always had, or were they a recent development? What could she do?

And then another line of thought reared its head. From what he knew, the Wards were, buy-and-large, incredibly safe in a typical city, on top of being an incredible investment for a child's future. However, Brockton Bay was far from a typical city, considering its complete oversaturation with neo-Nazis, druggies, human traffickers, robbers, and just criminals in general. As a result, the Wards were… markedly less safe. Considering that, there was only one response he could give.

"I'm sorry, but no, you're not." He stated firmly. "If this was another city, maybe, but here… it's too dangerous."

He saw Taylor's eyes flare, and her reply was markedly more confrontational. "And by joining the Wards, I'll be able to make it less dangerous."

"You'll be able to make it marginally less dangerous, but only by putting yourself in danger." Danny explained, doing his best to remain patient. "And besides, you're just one person. One person can't change this city, one person can't take down the Empire, the ABB, the Merchants, Uber and Leet, and however many other villains that are in the city. Most of all, one person certainly wouldn't be able to deal with the power vacuum that would follow."

"So you would have me do nothing?" Taylor challenged. "And what of the resources available to the Wards, would they not be able to help me at all?"

"The problems of this city aren't ones that can be solved by being a hero, not really." Danny refuted, exasperated. "They run far deeper than villains needing to be defeated. Because of that, more money that's focused towards stopping the villains is less money that's being put into fixing the real problems."

"And what if I can fix the real problems by being a hero?"

"You're not listening to a word I'm saying, are you!?" Danny said, accidentally letting some of his frustration slip out in the form of a raised voice. He took a deep breath, trying to calm himself down.

"However, if I don't join the Wards, my identity will be exposed." Taylor replied, switching gears completely. "I'll need contact lenses to conceal my eyes."

"Then…" Danny sighed, trying to find words that would get through to her. "Then we can have you homeschooled, or get hard contacts ourselves."

"Except we don't have the money for either of those things, and both inevitably carry the risk that I'll be discovered by untrustworthy people." Taylor pointed out, with an argument that Danny couldn't refute, because it was true.

"Still…" Danny hung his head helplessly. "I can't let you risk your life." He looked up. That was the bottom line. If there was something he could do, he would do it. He'd draw on contacts in the union, he'd talk to his parents-in-law, he'd go into debt. "Anything to keep you safe." He finished his thoughts out loud.

Taylor scowled. "You will let me join the Wards." She intoned, and Danny felt… something pressing up against his mind. He tried to resist it, but it flooded through the cracks in his resolve… and then nothing. What had he been resisting? Nothing, to his knowledge. But he was missing something… Oh right! He needed to let his daughter know that he agreed with her.

"I will let you join the Wards." Danny responded, and was rewarded by the sight of a smile growing on his daughter's face. "Anyway," he said, "we should probably get at least some sleep."

"You do that." Taylor agreed, and walked out of his room, leaving him alone.

Even as he went to bed, though, he couldn't shake the feeling that he was missing something...
 
I aint even mad at her for this, you continue to live in this dangerous hellhole but now its too dangerous.
Other than the utter stupidity of working for the people actively screwing things up, I can't be mad at this at all.
 
Great chapter, thanks for the update!
It's always funny for me to see how people always start to shout PRT BAD at sight of Taylor joining Wards when author portraits protectorate/prt as somewhat competent or doing thier best or even remotely not-stupid.
I forgot to comment that, but in previous part i thought that Taylor should've *jump* at chance of some sweet frustrating teenage drama in Wards as it's only a pro for her.
And damn, I want to see PRT reactions when (if) she tells them that her powers work on anger (cue Yamada, probably)
 
Danny's not entirely weak-minded, but he's got way too much stress to deal with, and even the strongest mind can only handle so much.
 
I aint even mad at her for this, you continue to live in this dangerous hellhole but now its too dangerous.
Other than the utter stupidity of working for the people actively screwing things up, I can't be mad at this at all.
The PRT aren't screwing anything up. They're just severely outmanned and outgunned, with even just the E88 having more active, trained capes than they do. They're not malicious or inept, they're simply... underpowered.
I forgot to comment that, but in previous part i thought that Taylor should've *jump* at chance of some sweet frustrating teenage drama in Wards as it's only a pro for her.
She doesn't actively seek out frustration, she gets enough of that already.
 
The PRT aren't screwing anything up. They're just severely outmanned and outgunned, with even just the E88 having more active, trained capes than they do. They're not malicious or inept, they're simply... underpowered.
In the day to day handling? Maybe you are correct, all that corruption they have is certainly not helping them.

But as an organization with influence on laws in regards to Parahumans, they are something between incompetent and slightly malicious (the PRT could have provided the correct information to get Canary free, the laws to prevent parahumans from getting a job (or just profiting from their ability, am not sure), Rachel Lindts case (should have been detected!), Sophia Hess's case (should have really been detected as soon as she was inducted to the wards!). Oh, and that is ignoring who the big boss is.
 
But as an organization with influence on laws in regards to Parahumans, they are something between incompetent and slightly malicious (the PRT could have provided the correct information to get Canary free, the laws to prevent parahumans from getting a job (or just profiting from their ability, am not sure), Rachel Lindts case (should have been detected!), Sophia Hess's case (should have really been detected as soon as she was inducted to the wards!). Oh, and that is ignoring who the big boss is.
The thing that you have to realize is that the PRT is not a monolithic organization. Each director runs things differently, and has a different view regarding other directors which determines inter-branch relations. Canary's case was a result of an unfavorable public consciousness, a knee-jerk reaction to what she did, and possibly Cauldron wanting to keep her for Gold Morning. In her case, it was far better to sweep the incident under the rug as best they could in order to stymie a potential rise in anti-cape sentiment.

Heck, the PRT, by and large, is in many ways focused on creating a society in which capes are able to seemlessly integrate. They don't discourage parahumans from getting jobs or making money off their powers, they in fact encourage it.
Interlude 9.1 said:
"As the number of parahumans first became clear, a long-term plan was established. In the early phases of the plan, much effort was dedicated to setting up the Protectorate and Wards, ensuring the public had heroes they could look up to, likable faces, likable personalities. Merchandising, interviews, tv shows, music, movies and more were all encouraged and supported with the idea of building up this image. Law, policy and rules for the official groups were all shaped with the idea of gradually building confidence in heroes."

Weld nodded.

"As we enter the next phase, our objective is to push the public a margin beyond their comfort zone. We are encouraging and promoting the existence of rogues, which is an unfortunate term that heralds back to the early days."

"Right," Weld responded. The term 'rogue' applied to anyone with powers who wasn't hero or villain, the negative connotations of the term tying back to an era when expectations had been rather different, much the same way the brute classification had been coined.

"This is a sensitive subject, slow to advance, as major corporations are particularly litigious when parahumans get involved. In simple terms, the big businesses do not want people with powers affecting the status quo, and it is very easy for them to derail years of work with one bad media campaign targeting parahumans."

As for your other examples, it is shockingly easy to figure out the solution to a problem or discover a secret when you already know the answer. You don't work forward based on the vast plethora of potentially trustworthy information you have, since you can work backwards, and cherry-pick the right information out of a vast array of red herrings.
 
The thing that you have to realize is that the PRT is not a monolithic organization. Each director runs things differently, and has a different view regarding other directors which determines inter-branch relations. Canary's case was a result of an unfavorable public consciousness, a knee-jerk reaction to what she did, and possibly Cauldron wanting to keep her for Gold Morning. In her case, it was far better to sweep the incident under the rug as best they could in order to stymie a potential rise in anti-cape sentiment
Which is the opposite of what they actually did. Sweeping it under the rug would have been being clear about her actual powers (brute constraints). Instead Of doing anything sensible they polarized society against Parahumans and any kind of human master in particular. Also, if I would be a human master and have seen that, my reaction would not be to be quiet and go to the law. It cannot be trusted. My reaction would be to follow in heartbreakers shoes, because he does not get the torture prison or death... Which is not good for anything the PRT should want. And you said it yourself. Because Cauldron might have wanted her for gold morning. A clear case of corruption. And something like that can very easily be taken against the organization as a whole. Why should I trust them with anything if something like that happens and there are no consequences? (As a Rouge parahuman, especially with PR unfriendly abilities...


EDIT: That case did a lot against Parahumans / human relations. Or would have in the real world. Basic PR. We against them. Just taking the Brute restrictions away would have helped. The PRT should have a campaign going that this might be an outlier and not every human master is bad. We know they did not. They promoted it as every human master is Bad. And the jump from that type of Parahumans is bad (especially if you speak about multiple types) to all Parahumans are bad is easy. (There always is a wave of hate crimes against muslims after a Terror attack by Muslim radicals. Even Muslims that openly and clearly (and supported by the government) state that they condem this. They are a different group, sometimes follow even a different school, but they are attacked as well...) This is what will happen (or would happen in the real world.)
 
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Which is the opposite of what they actually did. Sweeping it under the rug would have been being clear about her actual powers (brute constraints). Instead Of doing anything sensible they polarized society against Parahumans and any kind of human master in particular. Also, if I would be a human master and have seen that, my reaction would not be to be quiet and go to the law. It cannot be trusted. My reaction would be to follow in heartbreakers shoes, because he does not get the torture prison or death... Which is not good for anything the PRT should want. And you said it yourself. Because Cauldron might have wanted her for gold morning. A clear case of corruption. And something like that can very easily be taken against the organization as a whole. Why should I trust them with anything if something like that happens and there are no consequences? (As a Rouge parahuman, especially with PR unfriendly abilities...


EDIT: That case did a lot against Parahumans / human relations. Or would have in the real world. Basic PR. We against them. Just taking the Brute restrictions away would have helped. The PRT should have a campaign going that this might be an outlier and not every human master is bad. We know they did not. They promoted it as every human master is Bad. And the jump from that type of Parahumans is bad (especially if you speak about multiple types) to all Parahumans are bad is easy. (There always is a wave of hate crimes against muslims after a Terror attack by Muslim radicals. Even Muslims that openly and clearly (and supported by the government) state that they condem this. They are a different group, sometimes follow even a different school, but they are attacked as well...) This is what will happen (or would happen in the real world.)
Ultimately, this is where the fact that this is a fanfic is a benefit, as I can simply alter the way it was done in this specific timeline, and thereby bypass the parts of canon that are mostly a result of Wildbow being Wildbow. Here, it was/is mostly the result of Cauldron trying to keep Paige around for Gold Morning, and was heavily swept under the rug. Here, Cauldron realized that if Paige were to go free, anti-parahuman sentiment would most likely increase, due to the sorts of people who are receptive to those ideas discovering that she's free, and arguing about how her punishment was too light, she should've gone to the Birdcage, et cetera. This way, they can keep those people placated while not encouraging those views by diverting public consciousness towards more... favorable things.

And regarding Cauldron... without them, the state of the world would more closely resemble X-Men, with Parahumans being heavily persecuted by the populace at large. The fact that the PRT is basically under Cauldron's control is not a testament to its corruption, but rather a testament to their goals & actions being largely pointed in a direction that Cauldron has deemed favorable due to their (Nearly) Omniscient Morality License.
 
Ultimately, this is where the fact that this is a fanfic is a benefit, as I can simply alter the way it was done in this specific timeline, and thereby bypass the parts of canon that are mostly a result of Wildbow being Wildbow. Here, it was/is mostly the result of Cauldron trying to keep Paige around for Gold Morning, and was heavily swept under the rug. Here, Cauldron realized that if Paige were to go free, anti-parahuman sentiment would most likely increase, due to the sorts of people who are receptive to those ideas discovering that she's free, and arguing about how her punishment was too light, she should've gone to the Birdcage, et cetera. This way, they can keep those people placated while not encouraging those views by diverting public consciousness towards more... favorable things.

And regarding Cauldron... without them, the state of the world would more closely resemble X-Men, with Parahumans being heavily persecuted by the populace at large. The fact that the PRT is basically under Cauldron's control is not a testament to its corruption, but rather a testament to their goals & actions being largely pointed in a direction that Cauldron has deemed favorable due to their (Nearly) Omniscient Morality License.
It is your story. I dislike stories that make cauldron out as having a positive effect on the relation part, considering they are responsible for Nilbog, S9 and friends. (As well as the Endbringer, but they do not actually know about that so let's ignore them for now). And it is made very clear in canon that her going into the birdcage is actually illegal. So take that as you wish. Canary punished? No problem. Sentenced to 30 years in prison (mundane one, it is fairly easy to block her ability)? Fine. Birdcage is the problem. You know, that prision that says to basic human rights f***-you and tortured (and kills) most of the ones that go into (which is another point against the Cauldron wanted her for Gold Morning. It is understandable for capes that are really violent (and thus really likely to be killed), but for her, nearly protectionless, the birdcage is a death sentence (it is pure luck that she survives that long in canon...)

Cauldron have a noble goal. The only reason in canon they succeed in reaching it is pure luck (Taylor could easily have died in the locker, and Khepri is necessary in the end. Just as one example. Which is ignoring that PtV is not all knowing. I believe it cannot see triggers (or predict them completely (I.e. abilities). It cannot see Eidolon or the Endbringer (red flag here. Why did nobody see that). It cannot see the thing it is being run against (Scion!). They essentially asked it: how do we get the strongest abilities. And it said: suffering means more triggers. Dumb luck will work, right? Ignoring the fact that those same abilities come from the exact being they want to kill...
 
Note: next chapter will most likely be delayed heavily, because college more or less just started for me.
 
Progress update: I've gotten enough time to finish the first half of the third chapter, and the other half should be done soon™.
 
Take your time, we'll be looking forward to it. IMO that story has very good beginning and a great potential, keep it up :)
 
I'll guess that Sidious will be the next chapter title, since she will be joining the Wards and Insidious seems like a good word for a corrupt person joining a hero team.
 
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