TCF Reads the Dawn of War Omnibus by C.S. Goto

First off, the prologue, which is set in 999.M38.

This story opens up with Eldar under the command of Macha (the farseer from the first Dawn of War game) fighting against a daemon prince and a horde of cultists. Most of them are dead but some survive along with an Avatar of Khaine. Thanks to the daemon's presence in the area it is all but impossible to see what is going on which is severely hindering the Eldar's efforts against the daemon, after an attempt to close a warp rift Macha forsees the arrival of Space Marines on the scene.

Something shifted in her mind, and the eldar farseer strained her eyes into the night, struggling to fit images to the gyring confusion of thoughts that jostled for her attention. There was something else out there on the mountain, something moving with a hidden purpose. Macha could see flickering pictures in her head, a collage of past, present and future all blurred into one curdling image-pool. There were dark figures in those pictures - giant, pseudo-human warriors - and her heart shuddered each time her thoughts lingered on them. These clumsy humans were more fearsome than any daemon, in their own way, and Macha's soul was filled with dread by their sudden addition to the mix.

She's clearly not fond of them.

After that we cut down to the Eldar Storm squad facing the cultist hordes.

"For Khaine, the Bloody-Handed God!" he cried as he drew his long power sword and pushed its impossibly sharp blade through the abdomens of three humanoid cultists.

The call was returned by the rest of the Storm squad, but it was no dissonant cacophony of battle-cries. The Guardian eldar summoned their call from the depths of their souls, chanting it out in tones both too high and too low for human ears to make out. In an exquisite and rumbling harmony, the name of their god of war flooded out across the battlefield, energising each of the eldar warriors who heard it, rallying them into a renewed quest: blood for the blood god. Soon, the call was reverberating around the whole mountain, pulsing through the rock itself, making the earth move with its sonorous power. On the peak of the mountain, acting like a conduit for the chants of the Biel-Tan eldar, Khaine's avatar threw back its head and let out a scream of power, repulsing the warp clouds above it as though they were feathers in the wind, staggering the daemon prince in a moment of awe. The name was thrown up to the shrouded stars: "Kaela Mensha Khaine!"

Now where have I heard that before?

After this we get a scene of an Eldar named Jaerielle who has discarded his Shuriken weapon in favour of a power weapon and his old helmet from when he was a Striking Scorpion (his sister also got to keep hers).

the mandiblaster helmet, still edged in a deep red, was all that Jaerielle had kept from his time as an Aspect Warrior of the Striking Scorpions. It was a mark of unusual and great honour to be permitted to keep it, and he was glad of it now.

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Like her brother, she had served her Aspect with such devotion that the Exarch had made her a gift of the mask when she left the temple, hopeful that one day she would return.

And once done with that we get introduced to a Fire Dragon.

Frqual was an eldar Guardian on the edge, slipping in and out of the service of the Fire Dragon temple so frequently that it was difficult to keep track of when he was formally an Aspect warrior and when merely a Guardian. Never parted from his weapons, he lived to fight and relished the blood that soaked his long memory. He teetered on the edge of damnation, constantly questing for battles and contests. Jaerielle was sure that he would become an exarch one day, completely lost to himself but honed as the perfect embodiment of eldar warcraft.

Something about the phrase "Eldar Guardian on the edge" amuses me.

After this and some griping from the Eldar about humans the pov shifts to the Deathwatch Space Marines accompanying an Inquisitor (and it turns out that this planet was Tartarus all along).

Tartarus was not a battle that they could avoid - the farseer had been preparing for it for centuries. Guardian squads had been formed specially, and the Aspect temples had even consented to arm some of their most exalted former members, as well as dispatching their own Aspect warriors into the fray.

...They've been planning this battle for centuries and they couldn't arrange for some heavy vehicles (or even just some weapons platforms) to go with the Avatar of Khaine?

"Eldar wraithguard!" called Trythos, turning to face the new threat as his team brought their weapons to bear in instantaneous reflex.

A volley of bolter fire punched out of the line of Deathwatch Space Marines, smashing into the advancing line of wraithguard. Great chunks of psycho-plastic splintered away into the darkness, but the strange creatures just kept coming, as though they couldn't feel the impacts. Their weapons flared with life, returning fire with a hail of projectiles that hissed smoothly through the air, ricocheting off the power amour of the Marines.

How the fuck does power armour protect against a Wraithcannon shot?

After that the Deathwatch kill the Wraithguard by smashing the soulstones in the centers of their chests.

Macha senses this and gets rather upset since she knew one of the Wraithguard.

The farseer's pain was transformed into anger almost immediately, and she focussed her rage into a searing ball of energy that rocketed up towards the main summit of the mountain as she screamed her fury into the darkness. This time it smashed directly into the form of the daemon itself, sending it staggering back towards the precipice at the edge of the peak, pursued at each step by the frenzy of the avatar's wailing blade.

Good for her, she just messed up a nearly materialised daemon prince. After that hit she readies another hit to kill the daemon prince before it can fully materialise but just as she's about to launch it-

Then a blast of las-fire punched into the back of Macha's shoulder, pushing her forward, stumbling to regain her balance. The ball of flame hissed and then blinked into nothingness, as Macha turned to locate the origins of the blast.

A group of Chaos cultists had burst through the defensive line of the Storm squad.

A Cultist horde is actually useful... for the the few seconds before she turns them all inside out.

After that we cut back to the Guardian Storm squad fighting an acrobatic Bloodletter.

The creature seemed to slip and slide around his blade, as though it were not wholly solid. Jaerielle spun with his sword, taking clutches of clumsy cultists with each turn, but the dancing, devilish form seemed to evade his every move.

After this the Bloodletter takes out the Fire Dragon from earlier in an instant before going back to dancing with the Eldar.

Jaerielle moved first, lunging at the figure's naked legs with his sword, sweeping his blade in a lateral arc. But the bloodletter was too fast, springing into the air in a breathtaking pirouette, kicking its unearthly weight off Jaerielle's blade itself.

After that they manage to catch the Bloodletter between their blades and kill it before going back to chopping up cultists while the space marines finally realise that there's more going on than the Eldar killing Chaos cultists.

After that the pov shifts back to the Deathwatch observing the Eldar and Chaos forces fight while the Inquisitor explains why they're there.

"Not today, captain. We are not here for annihilation, but for knowledge. We are here because of that," explained Jhordine, pointing towards the fallen weapon of the avatar. "Over many millennia, the eldar have created a weapon to slay daemons and banish the forces of Chaos from this world - that is the Wailing Doom of Biel-Tan. That is why we are here. Even the smallest fragment could be wrought into a great weapon for the Emperor's Inquisition."

...Of course the Blood Ravens Omnibus opens with things getting stolen.

Once we cut back to the Avatar vs Daemon fight, the Avatar is on his last legs but he isn't going down without a fight.

With one last supernatural effort of will, the avatar brought the sword round in a magnificent arc. The weapon wailed into the eye of the storm that spiralled above it, promising doom, and the avatar let out a cry to Khaine. The sound brought silence to the mountain, as all eyes turned to watch the terrible blow. The eldar warriors had stopped fighting and a painfully beautiful chant rose from the remnants of their force - Kaela Mensha Khaine.

The Wailing Doom, the ancient weapon of the avatar of Khaine, seemed to fall into slow motion, sweeping up in a vertical crescent from the avatar's feet, leaving a stream of sparkling energy in its wake. Its tip ripped into the body of the daemon prince with the sound of reality being torn asunder, and the avatar pushed it on with the very last of his ageless strength. The blade ploughed through the abdomen of the shrieking daemon, spraying warp energy and toxic liquids across the mountain, and then sliced up through its neck, smashing into the base of its skull. The daemon's head was shattered in an immense explosion, sending the collapsing skull rocketing up into the gyring storm above.

For once the Avatar of Khaine gets to give a good showing.

Of course, as the Avatar dies, a bolt of lightning strikes the Wailing Doom, shattering it. Seeing their chance, the Deathwatch swoop in to steal it from the spent Eldar force.

Prothius could not let go of the sword fragment. It was as though it was fused into his grip. He felt weak and drained, and the shard had grown heavier with every hard fought step. Heavier still after they had climbed into the Thunderhawk and blasted away from Tartarus. It was as though it wanted to be back with the eldar. And the whispering wouldn't stop. His mind was peppered with thoughts that were not his own, chattering and debating all around him. But one voice was clear, and its pain was exquisite: Human, you know not what you have done.

I see no way that stealing this poorly understood psychic object from the Eldar can go wrong.:V

So far I've got Eldar planning a fight with a daemon prince with incredibly sloppy prep-work as my main complaint but compared to what I was expecting (something singularly terrible) this isn't bad. Let's see if my luck holds out.
 
Isn't Goto the guy who had the Eldar being Slaneesh worshipers?
 
all the multilasers. on more multilasers.
At least that sums up all I know about goto.
 
Not really, multilasers are in his Deathwatch series.
But don't be alarmed, DoW makes up for it with 20 page long Eldar torture scenes.
 
Funny story, my first 40K books were the 2nd and 3rd Dawn of War novels. That, a Soul Drinker's story, and the Cain omnibus got me into 40K.

Course, my tastes improved, which got some of my books binned. Stupid Blood Angel series, Space Wolves....
 
after this we get a scene of an Eldar named Jaerielle who has discarded his Shuriken weapon in favour of a power weapon and his old helmet from when he was a Striking Scorpion (his sister also got to keep hers).
And somewhere Taldeer is screaming "Elder do not work like that".
 
As much as some of his novels were quite poor, and others had questionable decisions, I'm gonna do this.


Isn't Goto the guy who had the Eldar being Slaneesh worshipers?

Is that somehow a terrible problem?

I mean, the Eldar still continue to fall to the temptations of decadence, even after the destruction of the their civilisation.

Do you mean the Dark Eldar, or the Eldar example?

Was he the one with multi-laser fetish?

He's the one that got cartoonishly caricatured due to some guys using multi-lasers. Apparently the idea that they might do that was so horrendous, it made people stupider.

Because if you're fighting tyranids, toting a multi-laser isn't actually a terrible idea, and functionally, Marines can carry backpack powered plasma and lascannons. A multi-laser is no stretch at all.

Go Go Go Khornate Sorcerers!

Tell me you aren't upset because Sindri says "blood for the blood god"

And somewhere Taldeer is screaming "Elder do not work like that".

Is she? Former members of Aspect Shrines using wargear they are familiar with is hardly the fluff apocalypse. Particularly since Guardian officers are typically ex-Aspects. I would suggest a certain degree of cynicism involved as well, given that Aspect Shrines probably know full well that going into battle using the regalia of a former Aspect is likely to get them some recruits back.

How the fuck does power armour protect against a Wraithcannon shot?

After that the Deathwatch kill the Wraithguard by smashing the soulstones in the centers of their chests.

Macha senses this and gets rather upset since she knew one of the Wraithguard.

A genuine criticism to be made of these novels is that they were written as computer game tie-ins.

So several decisions were made in the DoW games on the basis of making things easier. I.e. Wraithspider weapons are rapid fire projectile weapons, because a cloud of entangling slicy death would be difficult as hell to make work. Wraithcannon and D-cannon are just fancy conventional guns, because ripping holes in reality would be a bit unbalancing.

These are unfortunately reflected in the novels.
 
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He's the one that got cartoonishly caricatured due to some guys using multi-lasers. Apparently the idea that they might do that was so horrendous, it made people stupider.

Because if you're fighting tyranids, toting a multi-laser isn't actually a terrible idea, and functionally, Marines can carry backpack powered plasma and lascannons. A multi-laser is no stretch at all.

I'd add that Gav Thorpe has done the same thing, except somewhat odder - he has Raven Guard Devastators using tripod-mounted multi-lasers in Deliverance Lost, while the Mantis Warriors are hefting hand-carried ones - and nobody said owt of that.
 
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I'd add that Gav Thorpe has done the same thing, except somewhat odder - he has Raven Guard Devastators using tripod-mounted multi-lasers in Deliverance Lost, while the Mantis Warriors are hefting hand-carried ones - and nobody said owt of that.

Gav Thorpe is usually a good enough writer to hide such flaws from the readers.

Goto.... isn't
 
My biggest problem with Goto was always his endings. His endings were almost universally terrible, anticlimactic, and usually downright stupid. Apart from that his stuff kind of reminded me in a way of Roger Corman flicks - stupid, cheap, rushed...and yet sometimes he had some decent ideas and a fair plot, and on occasion even some good imagery tossed in there. I'm admittedly going on several years' memory here, but as I recall his Deathwatch duology was pretty readable, and I'd say Salvation, his entry in the Necromunda anthology, was actually quite good.

But god damn, his endings were so bad.
 
Gav Thorpe is usually a good enough writer to hide such flaws from the readers.

Goto.... isn't

Except, how is it a flaw? Multi-lasers make sense as a weapons option for Astartes Devastator squads, and I really don't get why Goto gets so much stick over that, when there's legitimate flaws in his work that can be criticised;

My biggest problem with Goto was always his endings. His endings were almost universally terrible, anticlimactic, and usually downright stupid. Apart from that his stuff kind of reminded me in a way of Roger Corman flicks - stupid, cheap, rushed...and yet sometimes he had some decent ideas and a fair plot, and on occasion even some good imagery tossed in there. I'm admittedly going on several years' memory here, but as I recall his Deathwatch duology was pretty readable, and I'd say Salvation, his entry in the Necromunda anthology, was actually quite good.

But god damn, his endings were so bad.

Like so (and I entirely agree that the man can't manage a decent ending to save his life).
 
Please tell me they are like Kyras. He technically didn't break khorne's rules. Skirted the line, but he never actually uses his abilities to directly interfere.

Still don't know why a librarian corrupted by a Great Unclean One suddenly goes off to worship Khorne though.
 
Honestly, I think people get too worked up over Goto the same way they do Ward because they become a symbolic representation of their frustrations over perceived 'inconsistencies' (or just simply things they don't like in the setting.) A scapegoat at the extremes, if you will. That isn't to say that Goto is a fantastic writer (he's pretty average) but he's not uniformly horrible either (I liked the Deathwtach novels both... and the only novel of his I truly loathed was Eldar Prophecy. Keep the guy away from Eldar.) But as far as writing and mistakes go, I didn't find anything that was notably better or worse than any other 40K writer, because every writer approaches 40K with their own point of view and sometimes they overlap and sometimes they don't. And its further complicated by the fact different segments of fandom apply different lenses to the work (some people love Abnett/McNeill/ADB/Forge World and will gloss over any 'flaws' that may exist, whilst others may loathe those same people for 'ruining' the setting or not writing it 'authentically' from their POV and will magnify those flaws. The only difference between them and Goto/Ward is the magnitude of the perceived dislike or 'problem' they represent, nothing more.)

If anything, I think Goto (and Ward) are prime examples of why falling into memetic groupthink is generally a bad thing. I would also say I'm vaguely disturbed by the level of inordinate obsession to detail over the 'flaws' in Goto's novels (rivalling some critics of the Honorverse, I think, in obsessive detail), but I probably have committed one too many of those sins WRT Star Wars and the EU in my own past. :p

The short of it is: he's a writer, writers ain't perfect, and the setting itself aint perfect. You take stuff on a case by case basis, just like everyone else does, and sometimes you laugh at the perceived silliness and then move on. That's literally the best way to approach the setting.
 
Khornate Sorcerers is the problem, it doesn't reconcile with lore about Khorne.

You don't think Sorcerers can summon khornate daemons?

Which instance from CS Goto's novels is the problem here? Because using the power of the warp doesn't make you instantly incapable of being involved with Khorne in any way. Quite the opposite.

Please tell me they are like Kyras. He technically didn't break khorne's rules. Skirted the line, but he never actually uses his abilities to directly interfere.

Still don't know why a librarian corrupted by a Great Unclean One suddenly goes off to worship Khorne though.

Kyras tells you during the game that he was led to the truth path after a lesser power shows him the way.

There isn't a requirement he becomes a nurgle guy just because he talks to a Nurgle daemon. It needn't be as simplistic as that. A daemon might convince him that his current path is flawed and misguided, it doesn't mean it hit the jackpot and convinced him to go full Papa Nurgle.

As a Librarian and a Chapter Master, Kyras undoubtably had access to a great deal of forbidden lore, and went digging from there. As a wholehearted repudiation of everything the highly psychic and mystical Blood Ravens stood for, I don't think you can go much better than Khorne.

Out of universe, its undoubtably because they'd just done an expansion with a Great Unclean one as the big bad, and wanted something different.

My biggest problem with Goto was always his endings. His endings were almost universally terrible, anticlimactic, and usually downright stupid. Apart from that his stuff kind of reminded me in a way of Roger Corman flicks - stupid, cheap, rushed...and yet sometimes he had some decent ideas and a fair plot, and on occasion even some good imagery tossed in there. I'm admittedly going on several years' memory here, but as I recall his Deathwatch duology was pretty readable, and I'd say Salvation, his entry in the Necromunda anthology, was actually quite good.

But god damn, his endings were so bad.

If I had to pick a truly, utterly dire Black Library novel, it'd be Eldar Prophecy. I can't even nail down precisely why, but a huge part was that it was so spectacularly boring.

I don't think it even reflected any of the usual criticism of a Goto novel either, I genuinely consider it the odd one out of his Black Library work.

I also think his short story where an assassin shoots an Eldar autarch or aspect lord in the face, after watching the eldar beat the shit out of a company of Dark Angels was spectacularly terrible, and almost like it was written to fufil every bad thing said about the guys writing, by someone pretending to be him.

Compare it to a short he did about a Fire Dragon from Saim Hann, that was interesting and pretty fun to read, and its like the guy was off his meds or something every now and again.
 
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Please tell me they are like Kyras. He technically didn't break khorne's rules. Skirted the line, but he never actually uses his abilities to directly interfere.

Still don't know why a librarian corrupted by a Great Unclean One suddenly goes off to worship Khorne though.
This one I can answer, at some point he apparently got possessed by the daemon of the Maledictum released back in the original DoW game according to Adrastia in the Imperial Guard campaign.
 
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