- My idea was that Ayaka initially sees Nanase as an extension of her rather than her own person, given she usually leaves Nanase to go off and do MG stuff. So she wants Nanase back for the same reason someone would want a limb or even piece of their soul back if it was taken from them. That they took a part of herself would be how she'd try to get her Team on-board, that and the MGs not liking the VR world stealing a whole bunch of people already.
That all makes sense, but this raises the follow-up question: if using Nanase hasn't caused any significant negative effects (that she noticed) so far, what makes her realize that she needs Nanase back?
I'm guessing your idea that "Nanase is a piece of her soul" is more figurative than literal, but what if we took it literally instead, and have Nanase be a piece of Ayaka's soul/emotion, or something along those lines?
If we go with the idea that Ayaka is a magical warrior, then that could conveniently explain why she lacks the power to purify those who are corrupted by the monster attack.
But we can also make it work with the non-combat "idol" approach as well. We could say that Ayaka gives Nanase a spark of one of her emotions (restraint? Compassion? something else that maker her more suitable at accepting her role to take over Ayaka's role in the mundane world). At first she finds that the lack of that emotion allows her to succeed more as a magical idol, which might encourage her to abuse her powers more, and spend longer and longer times away from Nanase herself. She would present a friendly face to her adoring fans, but in private her haughtyness is ramped up to 11, going full on Queen Bee, and taking it out on her supportive staff. But she doesn't care if she harms the staff that help her, as long as she believes in her powers, and that her fans adore her, nothing is wrong in the world!
That is, until a disgruntled fan calls her out for the lack of (insert missing emotion here). She dismisses it at first, but then she starts hearing other fans making the same comment, and even her assistance whisper the same behind her back. But that can't be right, how can they say she is lacking emotion X when she has done stuff in the past that shows that emotion? If she's done it before, then surely she can show that emption again, right? Right?
But then she finds that she can't do that, or at the very least she can't express that emotion honestly without her haughtyness ruining it for her. So then she investigates things further, trying to find out what could have caused such a change in her, until her closest magical confidant (see below) prompts her with the idea that she doesn't have that emotion because she gave it away... to her construct Nanase. And perhaps if she were to fully reabsorb Nanase (dismantling her until there is nothing left of the construct), then she might regain the piece of her missing soul, and be whole again.
Or at least, that is what Ayaka is made to think. Whether it is true or not would be up to us to decide collectively.
I alos had a bit of an idea for a plot twist: Perhaps the disgruntled fan that calls Ayaka out in the first place is none other than Risa. And Risa is calling her out because Ayaka is not her friend Nanase, not because of any magical ability that can sense the piece of Ayaka's missing soul. I guess this would work regardless of whether we make it true or not that Ayaka transferred a spark of her emotion/soul into Nanase, or leave it ambiguous.
What do you think?
- I see Gloriana already knowing what happened to Nanase (especially if we go with Nanase arranging her kidnapping), but still leading a search for her to make it look like she's going something. When Nanase arranges her own kidnapping, I can see Gloriana trying to frame Midori as the kidnapper, so that Ayaka goes after her rather than Kyoko. After that, Gloriana would then get involved in keeping Nanase away from the Wasteland that's been popping up, along with preparing for the final ritual.
- I like Gloriana taking desperate measures to really become Risa if Nanase works out she isn't her. Nanase at first thinking Gloriana really is Risa I feel gives Gloriana's character more weight. But I also like the idea of her trying to make Nanase absorb Ayaka instead, given its full circle nature. Though no reason the ritual couldn't involve both. For the latter idea, I picture Nanase being tempted, but getting talked against it.
I like the idea of Gloriana misdirecting Team Ayaka, that works well as the pinch point for the team's storyline
I guess I still have to learn about all the characters in the crossover, because I originally thought Midori was Miyako. My line of thinking would be that Gloriana could be getting Team Ayaka to go and capture Miyako in order to a) get Ayaka away from Nanase, and b) capture the person she needs to complete the ritual later in the story.
But now that I've re-read who Midori is, and what her goals are, I can see that makes sense as well. I look forward to reading more about Midori, and see how she would fit in the story.
One follow-up question: would Midori be collaborating with Kyoko to allow Kyoko to pull off the kidnapping, or has she been framed? Was she present at the point when Nanase gets kidnapped to do some mischif? Has she carried out some mischif in the past that warrants Gloriana to send someone to defeat her, hence her quest to Team Ayaka?
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I also had a few more ideas about Ayaka as a non-combat idol magical girl, and a bit on her backstory before she enters the VR world.
I was thinking on how her suggested powers to create magical steampunk constructs would work for an idol magical girl type, and then I remembered about
Saheeli Rai, the Planeswaker from the plane of Kaladesh from the Magic: the Gathering multiverse. To quote from the wiki article, Saheeli is "is a brilliant inventor who specializes in creating lifelike animated constructs as beautiful as they are deadly." She also participates in underground "inventing" tournaments, where inventors create new inventions on the spot to battle it out between each other. Perhaps that is what Ayaka could do as a magical girl idol, which could give her some knowledge of combat? Or we could just stick to the "quick invention" challenges, perhaps themed like Pokemon Contests?
(There are some other interesting parallels between Ayaka and Saheeli that are worth noting:
- Saheeli is a Planeswaker, a traveller between planes. With this story, Ayaka is going to be taking the first steps into the our crossover magical girl multiverse
- Saheeli's home plane of Kaladesh is basically the MTG steampunk plane, except with more filigree than gears and bolts, and with a more Indian theme rather than Victorian
- Saheeli is a lesbian, and we suggested that Nanase, and therefore Ayaka, could be queer).
If Ayaka is going to be a magical idol girl, then she could probably join an agency to represent her. Whether she does the Creamy Mami routine of only appearing at certain hours and disappearing after she's done her part, or whether she stays with the company longterm as Nanase takes on her mundane responsabilites is something we can discuss later. In any case, I was thinking, given that Huli is a multimedia company, what if the agency that Ayaka joins is a branch of Huli itself?
If we go down that route, perhaps we can have the reason that Nanase finds out about La Val Sans Retour and wins the prise is because Ayaka tasks her to deliver something to the Huli HQ, or Nanase is curious about all the flyers and letters that Ayaka receives from the agency, but due to a misunderstanding, Nanase gets put in the prize event for the VR world and wins, leading her to meeting Risa, etc.
As for the mysterious magical mentor that advises Ayaka of the fact that she is missing part of her soul... well, if the agency is Huli related, there may be someone on the staff who knows about magic and can advise Ayaka further. But here is a more intriguing option: what if the mentor was Mathurine?
Now, this would be Huli!Mathurine, i.e. the animatronic in the entrace hole that holds the real Somnia Virtua lyre, not her VR world counterpart. I would say that this version of Mathurine is more restricted (in that she can't leave the perimeter of the stage she is on), more robotic, and perhaps more friendly and welcoming than the variant in the VR world, who is able to move freely and is more malicious due to her Jester role and soaking up Gloriana's negative side.
Still, Huli!Mathurine does have some limited artificial intelligence boosted by the Lyre. She uses that in order to attract people into joining the VR world, as per her programming, but because of the Somnia Virtua lyre, some of her approaches are outright manipulative, even if she doesn't recognise them as such.
Anyway, I had this idea that perhaps Ayaka would "befriend" the Mathurine animatronic and confide in her, perhaps due to her affinity with constructs? Mathurine could then befriend Nanase when she gets recruited into the VR world, and offer a similar comforting role. Mathurine does eventually figure out that Nanase is a creation of Ayaka, just as she realized that Nanase has a great potential to become the VR world's conductor. Due to what she learns from Ayaka's confession, when Nanase goes to Mathurine to seek her comfort after the incident with Risa, Mathurine may trick Nanase into staying and hiding, just as Ayaka comes in seeking comfort as well. It is then that Mathurine suggests her idea that Akaya lost a part of her soul, and that she needs to absorb Nanase, unknowingly confessing Nanase's true nature to Nanase herself. When Nanase then asks Mathurine where she could hide, Mathurine then guides her to la Val sans Retour, kickstarting our plot...
I also have an idea for the story Stinger: While Gloriana's ritual fails in the climax, some part of it still succeeds by hitting Mathurine, prompting the VR version of Mathurine to fuse with the animatronic counterpart in the real world. Free at last from her ties to the Virtual world, and with the boost of magic from the ritual and from the Lyre, Mathurine cuts the strings tying her to the stage, and steps off the platform...