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Hello!

If you're here on SV, chances are you enjoy reading fiction. You've probably seen the creative section of the forum, at the very least, even if you haven't spent time browsing through Quests or User Fiction. You may, of course, be one of the many wonderful authors SV is proud to host, or someone aspiring to join their ranks.

Well, for all current and aspiring writers on this site, we have an opportunity! As part of Summerfest 2023, we would like announce the First Chapter Contest, a contest to see who can craft the most compelling, attention-grabbing opening to a story!

The rules are simple. All you have to do is write out the opening post to a story or quest you would like to bring to life! But you only have 4,000 words in which to convince our judges and any would-be readers that your story shows the most promise of the lot, so every word counts! Your entry can be completely original, or it can be a fanwork set in an established setting.




Rules

Submissions
Submissions can be in the style of a work that would be posted to either the User Fiction or Quest subforums, and must adhere to the word limit of 4,000 words. Participants are allowed a maximum of one submission each. They can freely edit their submission as many times as they want up until the submission date.

To enter the contest, all you have to do is post your entry in this thread and our staff will helpfully threadmark the entry for you.

Prizes
All participants will receive a participation award of one month's silver subscription. And of course, the winner will receive three months of gold subscription! Additionally, if you'd like, one of the Judges will make themselves available if you want feedback, criticism or proofreading help with a writing project of your choice.

Judging
Entries will be judged by @Kei, @EarthScorpion, @Arcus, and @Skippy.

Dates
Submissions will be open until , then we'll announce the final results.




FAQ

What are the judges looking out for?

The most important thing is whether you can hook the readers in as strongly as possible! Sell us on your initial premise, make us fall in love with your characters and get invested in their goals, get us interested in seeing more of your setting! Of course, we'll also be judging on general writing quality, which means things like quality of prose and dialogue, technical writing quality (grammar and spelling), pacing, and whatnot.

In general, a good entry should aim for leaving their readers feeling like they have to keep turning the page. If you've ever watched the first episode of a TV show or read the first chapter of a book, and been left with the sensation that you desperately need to know what's going to happen next, that's the kind of feeling you should be aiming to capture.
Does my entry have to be a new work specifically created for the contest?

Generally, we would like to see new works! Of course, it can be an idea you might have been working on for a while and just never got around to posting (we can't tell anyway), but your entry should be something that can work as a standalone piece. That said, if you want to reuse or modify elements from things you've written before, we won't stop you.
Can I post something I've written for the contest elsewhere on the forum while the contest is still running?

Not only is it allowed, it's even encouraged! You're free to go ahead and cross-post something you wrote for the contest.
Can I submit an NSFW entry for the contest?

Yes, but your entry must be clearly labelled, spoilered and follow the Site Rules.
What and what doesn't count for the wordcount?

Basically everything except the story title, chapter title, and author footnotes are included in the wordcount. For quest entries, votes are included in the wordcount since they can have flavour text. Obviously we reserve the right to decide otherwise if it's obvious you're trying to cheese the rules.
I'm slightly over the wordcount, does that disqualify my entry?

Going over the word limit slightly is fine, we won't kill you or anything because you were over the limit by a bit. Again, just keep it reasonable and don't try to cheese things.


If you have any other questions not covered in the FAQ, you can ask them in this thread.
 
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The Blue (by Rockeye)
The Blue

Written in 68 minutes, just now.

Credit to Genarment for the worldbuilding, though I am putting my own spin on things (note that the linked story is weird, it's apparently designed as AI fodder): Blue Beginnings · The Bluse

"It's bright this close, isn't it?"

Coda just stares at the immense wall rising over everything. It oozes along at a slow walk, a wall of blue light that swallows everything too slow to keep ahead. Oblivion, advancing at a leisurely stroll. He's used to seeing it as a backdrop, with immense landscapes falling far below, plenty of distance between him and the end of the world.

There was a big lake visible when they got here, an almost circular patch of placid water. There must have been untold generations of fish, geese, and other creatures living in it. How many people sailed across it, ever forward? How many animals supped from its shores? Then the blue reached the edge of it, and the water started flowing down and down, consumed by the advancing wall. The ducks and geese all fled at the disturbance, and he saw a couple get picked off by birds of prey, the sort that likes lingering near the blue and just waiting for desperate prey to dive upon.

And now the lake is gone, living on only in memories and perhaps a few dusty maps. Unimportant and irrelevant.

The Blue is maybe an hour's drive away- That's a whole day of walking, though. Far enough that the edge of doom almost doesn't look like it's getting closer by the second... But close enough that it's half as bright as the sun, even at night. It advances at a slow, constant pace, eating up more and more of the world, though there's always more land off in the Gree - that is, the opposite direction from the Blue. Millions and millions of miles of untouched land, with no reason to think it doesn't just go on forever.

"I don't like being so close," Coda replies. "One bad day, or if the truck broke down, and we'd be eaten by it."

"Bluefolk deal with that all the time," his sister shrugs. "And they walk. The oldest and most reliable method of transit in the world. You're going to have to do a lot of walking if you want to follow me. 'Scout' is just another word for 'hiker'."

"Well, maybe I don't want that after all."

"Enh." Sammy shrugs. "Didn't you used to make maps for fun? And constantly bug me about my trips?"

"Sure, but all kids dream of ranging far. Staying on the city is the sensible choice, not... Going blueward on adventures."

"No room for advancement up there, unless you're connected to the Carvers. But whatever. I'm not mom."

"Let's not talk about mom," Coda says quickly, making a face.

Sammy shrugs. "Okay. Look, there's what I wanted to show you." Sammy steps back from the telescope with a grin. "Take a gander."

Coda takes a deep breath and swallows the sudden urge to say he's not that interested after all.

He doesn't want to look squeamish.

Stepping up to the telescope, he spies a rough-looking cart on a slight downward slope right up close to the Blue, with two horses hitched up in front of it. Such a crude thing, but a lot more reliable than a truck. Trucks don't eat grass and make more of themselves, after all. On the cart are two people - A man, driving it and chatting, and a child, maybe eleven, who he can't tell the gender of - they have long hair, but every single Bluefolk child has long hair, it makes an easy sacrifice. He decides to think of her as a girl anyway. What looks like the rest of their tribe is walking or riding maybe a mile ahead of them.

The blue wall is getting closer and closer to the cart, eating up the packed dirt trail behind it. A tree splinters and falls, briefly, before it too is swallowed by the advancing wall of light. As it approaches, the man flips his reins lightly, and the horses advance forward slowly, the cart exactly matching the pace of the blue wall. And the girl stands and walks to the back of the cart.

Standing steadily on the wobbly vehicle, the sandy-haired child holds a bundle of herbs and a knife. She seems to say a short prayer, her voice not carrying over the distance, then in one smooth motion cuts off her hair, bundling it in her left hand. Then she reaches towards the blue, and then leans forward, letting the light swallow the hair - and her entire arm.

Coda can't help but let out a loud hiss as the child pulls away, and slaps the bundle of herbs over the stump where their arm used to be. There's a splash of red on their clothes, and the wagon. She screams, inaudible at so far a distance, her face a mixture of joy and pain.

And then she waves with her remaining arm, casting some sort of green glitter over the driver and horses, who all immediately speed up, greatly invigorated.

"...Damn, that's a good one." Coda is forced to admit. "I feel like I'm gonna barf, though."

"What did she sacrifice?"

"Hair... And her left arm."

There's a low whistle from Sammy. "Whole arm? Yeah, that's pretty big."

"She has - some sort of enhancement, it made the horses faster. It looks like they're meeting up with their group again and gearing up for a feast. They're waving banners and jumping and shouting."

"Yeah. Bluefolk usually have a big party when someone sacrifices more than hair or toes."

Coda's eyes are locked onto the green glitter. The bundle of herbs was obviously a poultice empowered by someone with healing magic. But the girl's magic- How does it work? Is it exhausting her? Does it do more than invigorate them and speed them along? How many targets could she cover? An arm is a hefty sacrifice, definitely on the upper end of what most people are willing to offer of themselves.

"You know, you could make a sacrifice while we're here, too."

Coda shivers. "It's a very permanent choice. And you can only do it once. Hair and fingernails are nothing worth talking about... And would lock me out of trying to do it again. But I don't know if I could stand to give up an arm."

What would he get? Everyone agrees that it's all but random- No amount of ritual or wishful thinking reliably colors the results. A gamble. A good power will set you up for life, cripple or not. But not all of them are so obviously useful as the girl's wave of green glitter.

"You know, that's what your problem is," Sammy glares at him, and waves the end of her right arm at him. There's a blocky prosthetic hand on it, stuck in a pointing pose. "You're not a child anymore, you know? You need to pick a course and stay on it already. No more hovering indecisively. The blue doesn't wait for anyone."

Coda bites back a snappy response. She's trying to help him. They're all trying to help him. As much as it doesn't feel like it most of the time. That's what family is for. That's why they're all here with the annual Carver City Blue Pilgrimage. Given what the tickets cost, it's supposed to be a wonderful adventure. Not that he was actually asked if he wanted to come along.

He looks through the telescope again, and finds the girl- waving her remaining arm about animatedly, and drawing shapes in the air with multicolored sparkles. People are handing her food and laughing and hugging her.

It seems... Warm and fun, for all that they're dressed in leather and rough fabric, covered in dirt and callouses. I wonder if the hardship makes them closer to each other...

"...I'll think about it," Coda answers eventually. "Let's get back to the outpost."

They get in the mud-spattered truck, and Sammy starts it with a rattling noise as the old gas-burner roars to life. It jostles along the road- An aging stone road full of bumps and broken patches, probably built to last ten years, twenty years ago, with someone's terrakinesis power. The cracks and holes are not much of a challenge for the truck, and as for the quality- Why build a masterpiece that will last centuries when the Blue will get to it in a couple of decades? Better to lay down something quick and cheap, and better yet to build vehicles that don't need roads at all.

"Seatbelt," Sammy gently reminds him, and he flushes.

"Sorry, I don't use a truck very often. How much trouble do you think we're in for sneaking out?" Coda askes once they're on the way.

"Enh. You're sneaking, I'm scouting. Lemme focus on driving."

Coda shrugs, sighs, and stares out the truck's window. The drive is pretty boring, and he has a lot to think about. There's a primal terror in his head when he thinks about pressing part of his body to the deadly light. What would it feel like? Burning? Cold? Nothing? But magic... Everyone who's anyone has magic. Old Lucia Carver herself is nothing more than a torso and a head, they say, and yet she's literally the most powerful person in the entire floating city, holding herself and all the most useful citizens in the warm embrace of eternal youth. Or at least that's the public story, however her power really works.

They pass a Bluefolk family, an old man riding a horse and four jogging along behind. He sees cold frowns and stares in the mirror- And one pair of bright, actinic green eyes, on the old man- Who appears to be missing his legs, on further inspection. The saddle has a pair of fake legs attached to it, probably just as decoration.

"I wonder what that old man's power is..."

"-Was he missing a limb?"

Coda blinks at the sudden seriousness in Sammy's voice.

"Uh, yeah, both legs."

"Shit. Hold on." Cody yelps in surprise as she slams on the accelerator pedal, the truck roaring into higher speed.

"What's the big deal? Lots of Bluefolk sacrifice limbs."

"The big deal is that he was disguising it. I thought he was only riding because he was old. It might be nothing, or we might be driving into an ambush."

"You're being paranoid," Coda responds automatically, even as he starts to worry.

"That's literally my job. Quiet. I'm going offroad."

Coda is thrown into the door as Sammy suddenly turns left. "Gah! What the fuck?"

"Shut up and let me drive! Watch out for anything weird!"

Shit. She really IS serious. Are we in danger?

Coda does his best to look out. But it doesn't matter. The truck is slower off-road, slow enough that as they crest a hill a bit riseward of the path back to Carver City's home base he sees a pack of horsemen dashing parallel to them. And leading them-

-Is the most beautiful man Coda has ever seen. Despite the crisis, despite never having looked at another man that way before, he can't help but stand stupefied. Deep, soulful eyes, a rugged face that hints at ageless wisdom and boundless confidence, a beautiful smile that - he -

-The man is no longer quite so beautiful. But the truck is slowing down, and Sammy's movements are slow, almost languid. None of the tension and anger she had just a moment ago.

"Keep going, we can outrun them!" He pleads, even as he realizes what's going on.

Magic.

...Did he see anything of that man other than his face? How much of himself did he sacrifice? What kind of power could he have?

Sammy's voice replies, uncannily chipper. "No, everything is fine. Those are friendlies!"

Pretend to believe me, her real voice whispers urgently in his mind.

Coda blinks rapidly. "Um... Right. Okay. Did the pilgrimage make a deal with them or something?"

"Yeah, exactly! They're our local guides. Let's go say hi."

He has two powers - some sort of distracting allure, and puppetry. He is controlling my body, but not my mind. I don't know what they want. If you get a chance, RUN.

Coda goes stiff. Run? Alone, this close to the Blue, with some sort of crazy-powerful bandit around?

Sammy's body has slowed down and turned the truck to meet the approaching horsemen.

"Do you know them, Sammy?"

"A bit. They seem like nice people."

No. I think they want to take our camp. There's a lot of valuables in it- Goods and people, hostages. This is a disaster, but it is vitally important that you warn Captain Feel about this. There are precautions we can take so long as we have some warning about this. Don't worry about me. Get that information to the camp.

Right. Sammy's power is mental communication, but it's short ranged. (About 1.3 miles, in a sphere- Specifically, 6999 feet. Why so close to seven thousand? Is the number important? They don't know, and Sammy quickly got fed up with Coda's ideas for additional tests.) So, she can't warn the camp from here. Her other power might - might - help them escape, and is what made her career as a scout viable at all. They call it 'trackless', and all it does is make it somewhat difficult to find the person she uses it on for a few minutes, if they can break active pursuit. Weird and very specific. But potentially enough to let him get away.

"But-" He frowns, not sure what to say that won't give away that he suspects something. He tries to breathe shallowly, not to let the terror get to him. "Right."

That's an order, little brother. You can't fight them, Coda. I'd rather you escape than not. I'll hit you with Trackless when we're in that depression right ahead. Once I do, jump out and run- I'll tell you everything I can until you're out of range. You have your pack?

He turns around and grabs his backpack from the back seat.

"Hey, sit still!"

"Just grabbing my notebook!"

"Well, get it and settle down," the puppet says to him.

Good. Good luck. Don't give up. I need you to be strong. You can do this, I know you can.

He nods, tears in his eyes. The bulky truck rumbles through the grasslands, and down a hill. Coda cracks his knuckles and takes deep breaths. Where is the camp from here? Greewards, he knows, maybe fifty miles, and maybe a bit Risewards as well, towards where the sun ascends each day... He only did the basic navigation training, the perfunctory two-hour course that everyone who leaves the city sits through. And he's not exactly in great shape...

The truck slows as it trundles back upwards, out of the shallow valley. The horsemen aren't in sight, for a brief moment, waiting on a hill up ahead.

You're trackless. Go now!

Coda bursts into motion, yanking on the truck door and pushing it outward. He hesitates for a brief moment- Fuck, this is insane!- Until he feels his sister grasp at the back of his survival backpack. He surges forward, whacking his leg hard into the door and rolling over and over in the thick, scratchy grasses.

The truck slams to a stop, and he hears a faint, "Hey, are you okay?!"

GO GO GO RUN RUN RUN GO LEFT, LEFT, GO RISEWARDS, he's making me look on the truck's right- Yes, good, get away clean! We'll show these bastards, deliver the warning, that's all that matters. Make it out alive and deliver the warning. Stick to the depressions, don't walk along the ridges, you're visible for miles up there. Make sure to drink your water at a steady pace...

-And so Coda runs, the tall grass scratching at his face and arms, leaving a trail as he passes through them. He'll have to trust in Sammy's magic, which should make his trail completely untraceable... For a while. His sister alternates between words of reassurance and survival advice as he runs, panting and feeling his heart pounding in his ears.

He doesn't know how long he runs. Riseward and Greeward, but keeping in mind Sammy's advice, sticking to the vegetation, to depressions in the landscape. The horsemen are DEFINITELY going to be looking for him, if only to prevent witnesses. He keeps running long after he stops hearing Sammy's voice, tracking through the grassy valleys, avoiding anyone and everyone he sees in the distance. The sun is setting, but the Blue still lights up the world, conveniently for his ability to navigate... But bad for sneaking.

This is my fault, isn't it? It was supposed to be safe! The pilgrimage goes off without a hitch year after year- Except I had to go and screw it up. It was Sammy's idea to go see that sacrifice ceremony, but I went along with it and now she's some mind-controlling freak's puppet, and I'm being hunted like a wild pig.

The horsemen would probably form a perimeter Greewards of him, Sammy had said. He'd be trapped- Capture on one side, the Blue on the other, both steadily advancing until there's no space left. But there might be a chance to get away.

He eyes a small red vial in the survival pack. Healing potion. Like those herbs. They could patch him up after a sacrifice, and gaining a power could be what he needs to get out of this mess...

The Blue draws his eyes.

Hopefully he'll be able to withstand the pain, and get something useful. If it comes to that. Sacrificing part of himself without all the safeties of the camp, watchers and helpers, a moving truck keeping pace with the Blue so he can precisely choose what to sacrifice... But it might be the only way. If he has to, he'll do it. Left arm. That sounds about right.

If it comes to that.

For now, he can't afford to sleep. He takes a few gulps of water from the canteen, and starts jogging away from the wall of light, praying not to be spotted.

As an author's note, I've noticed that commentary on these contest threads tends to be limited. I don't see an easy way around that though.
 
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Our Hero Academia (by Miho Chan)
Our Hero Academia

So, this was a project I started with the concept of small divergances amounting to a larger amount of butterflies. It's pretty rough at the moment, and it has a lot of different stylistic and grammatical choices that I don't always agree with (I was, to an extent, trying to make this seem more 'comic/manga like'), but it's still something I'm rather proud of. I'd love some feedback from the staff regarding recommended changes and such!



Chapter 1

"Kindness begets kindness. That's the ideal that I hold closest to my heart.

That was why I told the crying boy all those years ago that he could be a hero even without a quirk. I never knew the impact it would have on the world. How could I? I was only a kid at the time, and I don't have any kind of quirk capable of predicting the future. Do I think those words were a mistake?

Never. And I'm not just saying that because my Midoriya became a hero. I'm not saying it because of something inane like confirmation bias. My ideals still hold firm, even after all this time.

I suppose I should tell you that story then, starting from the day when it all began for me. It was sunny. It was mild; as most days in spring are, but it was particularly chilly that afternoon. I think I remember that day so vividly because I watched someone nearly die twice that day. And that changed me."


It was the sound of my phone ringing that woke me from my usual nap on the train, ears twitching in annoyance as I took a look at the caller. A frown wrote itself onto my face. Togata-kun usually texted. Tapping the accept call button, I raised the phone to my ears, bringing my left-hand wrist to my mouth. An annoying part of having a mutant quirk that there simply wasn't a good solution for yet.

"Hoshikawa Ēru speaking. What's up Togata?" I said, briefly taking note of the station I was just about to arrive in. Looks like I was still a few stops away. I could afford to focus on the conversation.

"There's a villain that uniquely suits your specialties loose in Mustafu. I thought you'd want to know since you're one of the few people in 2-B who got their Provisional License last year." My not-quite friend reported cheerfully, an edge of annoyance in his voice as well. Interesting. "None of the local heroes seem willing or able to handle him, either."

Ah. Yeah, that would explain Lemillion's annoyance.


"Let me pull up the incident, Togata. I've been looking for an excuse to try out some of my newer additions to the kit anyway." I replied quickly, disembarking from the train as it came to a stop at the next station with a sense of urgency. Looking around, I found an uncrowded corner to rapidly browse through the information that my friend had sent me, putting him on speaker as I did so, "Got it. The tentatively named 'Sludge' Villain, yes?"

"Yeah. That's him."

"I appreciate it Togata-kun. Thanks for the heads up!" I said cheerfully, moving to–

"No problem Hoshikawa-chan. Good luck."

Hang up. Inari damn it Mirio. I genuinely can't tell if you're into me or not, and it's driving me fucking insane.

'Think about hot boys later, Aile. Heroing now, schoolgirl later.' I told myself firmly, doing my best to put my train of thought back into order. Thankfully, I always carried my bow with me, and my 'civilian' quiver was present too. Thank fuck I had the foresight to demand Sekijiro sensei allow me to take the Provisional License Exam early. I hated being unarmed.

I shook my head again to refocus myself. Noticing someone walking up to me purposefully, I flashed the curious civilian watching me pull out the bow and quiver my license, receiving an approving nod from the busybody, who began to speak. Unfortunately for her, I didn't have time to talk though, and without any regrets, I slung both items in place and began my fairly irregular after school activity by walking onto the street rather casually. The Sludge Villain had been sighted around here recently, and now that I was plugged into the police scanner courtesy of my hero app-

[All Might in pursuit of the suspect.]

Well, that was… good? But why was All Might in Mustafu? His agency was in Tokyo, and I hadn't heard anything on the news about the number one hero being anywhere else. Curiosity and a desire to actually go home and game for a bit warred before I shook my head and continued towards the continually updating location of the villain, the Symbol of Peace dutifully reporting the location of the now likely terrified villain as he continued his pursuit. Thankfully, it seemed that the Number One was keeping good track of the villain. The map was updating constantly with pings, and-

[All Might reports that the suspect has fled into the sewers. He's lost them.]

That… was less than ideal. The sewer systems of Mustafu were a labyrinth and essential infrastructure that couldn't be damaged lightly. All Might also wouldn't fit into some parts that the villain likely could. I rerouted, heading towards an area that I knew contained a relatively safe sewer access, coincidentally one that the Villain could possibly choose to emerge from due to its relatively remote nature.

As I approached the tunnel, I heard the words that seared themselves into my brain.

"Fate, Destiny. You could call it a lot of things. I think it was just a coincidence that I ran into Midoriya before All Might."

"Don't worry. I'm just hijacking your body. Calm down. It'll only hurt for about 45 seconds... then it'll be all over." His voice was… so clinical. Insane. He was talking about someone's life so callously. I don't think I'd hated someone before today, but I was willing to change that now. Quickly, I sent the report,

"Provisional Hero Ranger. Encountered Sludge Villain at Yaruvenna underpass. Engaging. Civilian Life in Danger."

Methodically, I unslung my bow and approached. Ten seconds had passed since I first heard the villain speak. I had thirty-five left. I pulled out one of my strongest arrows, specifically enforced with the concepts of non-lethality, force, and wind. This one couldn't kill the civilian. It would hurt, but it was specifically designed to be as nonlethal as possible within the limits of my quirk. Nock the arrow, draw the bowstring back, and sight the target. Another three seconds. I could see the boy now. He was young, plain looking. Green… hair…

Midoriya?!

My precious junior from way back in Elementary School? The person responsible for me actually figuring out my quirk? Oh hell no. My hatred turned clinical as I adjusted my aim slightly to account for the villain's movement as the boy within struggled, and released the arrow moments later. The resulting blast of wind forced the villian off a person I had never really been able to properly thank, leaving him gasping for air and kneeling on the floor.

Unfortunately for both him and I, the villain was most certainly not out of the fight, and began to rapidly reform, at a pace that was frankly astounding given how much force my first arrow had contained. If I had ben confident in that one arrow's ability to finish this fight, I might have been caught with my metaphorical pants down.

Sadly for the villain, I was already preparing another. This one was not so nice. As I drew the second arrow, the specially inscribed concepts sent an ominous glow along the full metal body of my only authorized 'super-move', as the industry so loved to call it.

"Get clear Midoriya!" I yelled, my expression contorted with cold fury, eyes tracking the rapidly reforming blob of sludge as it surged toward me, keeping the shocked civilian between myself and him. Thankfully, hearing his family name seemed to shock the boy into action and he threw himself to the side. As soon as I had proper line of sight, I released the arrow, and this time, the effects were far more… . It struck the now reformed amorphous blob and set it aflame, sending the now screaming man to the floor. Regret briefly surged before I ruthlessly crushed with cold, hard logic;

'I don't have anything that can knock someone like that out of a fight outside of this.'

[All Might is arriving on station in ten seconds] My phone dully chirped.

'He might not have made it in time.' I snarled internally, drawing another arrow, this one not inscribed with any concept that might pose a problem to him, though the villain would not know that, "All Might is arriving in eight seconds. Surrender."

The man replied with screams of pain. Not unexpected. He was, after all, currently on fire. He also probably did not know that said fire could not actually kill him, and likely thought I was insane. I probably would be, if it wasn't specifically designed to not. Sucked to be him regardless, but the pain the arrow inflicted made it hard for most small-timers and even most villains in general to fight properly. Though I should probably figure out a use for this beyond 'incapacitate villain through agonizing pain'. Bad PR to be using pain as a deterrence, and I needed a more PR friendly use to label the arrow with.

"I AM- Wait, why is the villain on fire?!" The most recognizable voice in Japan exclaimed, sending me out of my internal rant quickly, though I didn't dare take my eye off the villain. I wouldn't consider him truly out of the fight until he was properly contained.

"It's not going to kill him." I replied curtly, "My quirk, 'Faker', lets me create bladed weapons enforced with a single "concept" on them, though through training and the help of a particularly smart boy, I managed to figure out how to overcome the "singular" concept limitation. That fire is explicitly nonlethal."

"... Using the pain to detain him then?" the Pro Hero asked professionally with an undertone of disappointment. That one… actually hurt, because he was both right and expecting too much at the same time.

"I wasn't feeling particularly merciful after he attempted to murder said smart boy." I admitted, tossing my head towards Midoriya, who was finally starting to come out of the adrenaline high, "And I didn't really have any other options for true containment beyond incapacitation."

"Understandable, if regrettable. Provisional Hero Ranger, I assume?" All Might stated, throwing a punch toward the burning villain, the sheer force behind it extinguishing the flames and scattering him. The man then duly contained the villain in a pair of soda bottles that he had just emptied. I felt my eyes twitch, before shrugging it off. It wasn't important. It wasn't like it was SOP to carry around containment for a near liquid mutation and or transformation quirk.

"Yes. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have a report to submit-"

"That. Was. Awesome!" And I was promptly interrupted by the gushing fanboy that was Midoriya Izuku. A small smile forced itself onto my face, regardless of how cool I wanted to play it. Same old Izuku. Always been a fanboy for heroes. "You used what I assume is an arrow to force that guy off me, then set him on fire!" Probably always would be too, even when he became a hero. "And then All Might came in, punched the guy, extinguished the fire and scattered him, then put him into Soda Bottles he probably just bought!" I raised my estimation of Midoriya again. He'd noticed the shopping bag on the when I had somehow completely missed it. Observation was supposed to be my thing! "Wait, Hoshikawa-senpai?!"

My smile grew even wider. He'd remembered me! "Hai hai, sup Midoriya-kun!"

Aaaaannd my smile was gone. Someone had made Izuku sad. Even someone who didn't know the cheerful boy could tell that smile was fake, and I was exceedingly good at reading masks. "I-I've-"

All Might's cough interrupted us, with a pointed cough, raising the shopping bag, "I apologize Ranger-shoujo, Midoriya-shounen. I must be going."

"Wait!"

Izuku's sudden exclamation had turned All Might around, the man- Why was he so nervous?

"Can someone who's quirkless become a hero too?!"

I felt my heart break all over again. Izuku had been so happy when I'd told him I believed he could at Graduation when I had moved out of his life. We hadn't even been in the same middle school during the one year we could have been. Something must have happened again to shake his will.

"Can even a quirkless person be like you someday?" Midoriya practically shouted to the world, earnestly making his question clear. I almost didn't notice All Might's flinch at those words. But I noticed it all the same.

"You're quirkless." He answered steadily, looking to try and continue before-

All Might just… What?!

Smoke, steam, something was coming off of All Might as he stood there. It was almost like…

"I'd learn a secret I'd take to my grave that day. I'd learn how much the Number One Hero had given for us all, and I'd use that knowledge to force myself beyond my limits for so long. Plus Ultra. Go Beyond. Originally Spain's National Motto. Then Yuei's famed mentality and motto. Eventually, at least if I had anything to say about it, the inclination of heroes everywhere."

It was like the very muscles on his body were fading, and in a flash of smoke, the muscled form of All Might was gone. Oblivious, Midoriya continued, but in my shock, I didn't really hear the words he said. But I did hear the most important part. He was being mocked and bullied. And that anger was enough to tear my eyes away from a revelation that had shocked me to the core and focus on the more important thing.

"... Midoriya-kun… Who hurt you this time?" I asked woodenly, tilting my head in such a way that my bangs hooded my eyes. "Who made you doubt your dream again?"

My reply had cut off whatever All Might was going to say. Which was good, because if he hadn't encouraged my precious Kouhai, I wasn't going to be responsible for what I did. Crushing someone's dream was never kindness, and though I didn't know why I so violently responded to people trying to do so, I knew that it was a core of who I was; and I wasn't going to try and change that. My heart fell, even more, when Izuku didn't answer, simply looking to All Might.

'Who's worked so hard to wear him down this much? The Izuku I knew before would have told me…'

"... I think that, even a few moments ago, I would have told you that I personally do not believe a individual without a quirk should be a hero." All Might began, his voice raspy, rough, and coarse, "But that would do a disservice to heroes like Ranger," He gestured towards me, "Whose quirk does not directly help them in combat without significant preparation." Sighing, the Number One ran his hands through his hair in what had to be a nervous gesture, before raising his shirt up, revealing a truly horrific wound, "A villain gave me this five years ago. My respiratory system is in shambles, and my stomach has been totally scooped out. I've wasted away between surgeries and complications, and healing quirks are rare enough that it's always a security risk to seek them out, or they simply cannot do anything about my wounds." He laughed darkly, "After all, what kind of Symbol of Peace is reduced to three hours of operation a day? What kind of Symbol is so grievously injured? I can't show the public my wounds, because 'the symbol of peace must never succumb to the forces of evil'."

"All Might…" Midoriya whispered, horror and… ah, sympathy, intertwining in his voice. My kouhai was as empathetic and kind as always. I was starting to feel like I was intruding on a moment that I shouldn't have, but I couldn't force myself to leave or look away.

"The reason I laugh is to distract myself from the pressure and terror that comes with my line of work." The Symbol continued, raising his eyes to meet those of Midoriya Izuku, "That was why I would have told you no." As my eyes darkened and my kouhai's dimmed, All Might continued, "Ranger, instead, has unintentionally reminded me that there's another part to being a hero. To inspire the people they protect." Pausing, he looked Izuku straight in the eyes, "You can become a hero if you try. If you put in the work, find the right support equipment, and train hard, I am sure you can do it. You might never make it to the top as I did. Your lack of a quirk will give you a massive disadvantage from the start to the finish, and people will constantly try and make you give up. Even knowing all of that, do you still want to be a hero?"

And with fires in his eyes, the person who had inspired me to my path answered as I expected him to: "Yes. I do."

"And that was the start of our Journey. The Unpolished Heroine. The Successor to an Ideal. The Mentor. And what a journey it's been so far. We'd add more recruits over time, though we'll get into their stories later. The butterfly's wings had already flapped, and by now, our world had changed from the course of yours. So, my kouhai of another world; are you ready to hear the story of Our Hero Academia?"
 
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Chasing the Sun Ch. 1: Treason (by GrayKnight3445)
Well, nothing ventured. Here's my 1st Chapter for my viking fantasy story titled "Chasing the Sun."

Chapter 1: Treason​

Arnulf opened the doors to the guard barracks and hurried inside. Despite the doors being open for mere moments, several off-duty guardsmen growled at him to close it faster as the freezing Spring rain and wind gusted inside.

He hurriedly put his spear in the rack near the door. The freezing cold still clung to his bones despite the miasmic heat filling the guard house. Finding his bunk and chest, he shrugged out of his cold, soaked clothing. Changing into dry clothes, Arnulf still felt the chill clinging to his bones. He tossed his wet clothes on top of the chest for later drying and went towards the massive fire pit burning at the head of the guardhouse.

He grabbed a wooden cup from a nearby table and filled it with cider from the barrel nearest the fire. Arnulf felt it washing down his gullet and into his belly, and he smiled. Before he could find a place by the fire, a squat, broad-shouldered man ambled up to Arnulf from the other side of the fire pit.

"Yer lass be looking for you, lad," the man said.

"Aye?" Arnulf replied. "What's the matter?"

"Dunno. She didn't say, but she looked worried. Told her you was on the wall and promised to tell you to find her once you were back."

Arnulf nodded, suppressing a sigh at the thought of going back outside. "My thanks, Sigi."

Sigi shrugged and went back to his chair. Arnulf downed his cup of cider in two large gulps and put it back on the table. He went back to his chest and pulled his sealskin cloak around himself, taking a moment only to buckle on his weapons belt and shoulder his shield.

Arnulf slipped out of the guardhouse and into the freezing rain. Despite the strong downpour, he followed the wooden planks that made up the road, allowing him to make better time than if he'd tried going through the half frozen mud under the awnings.

Through the sleet Arnulf marched to the base of the hill, where sat a small hut of a home near the mead hall. He knocked twice. No answer came. He knocked again, harder this time.

"A moment!" a young woman's voice said from within. The latch lifted and Ingrid opened her door. The redheaded sorceress's face froze into a pensive stare when she saw Arnulf, then softened into a worried smile. "Oh thank the gods. Come inside. Hurry!"

"What's the urgency?" Arnulf asked as he shuffled inside. Ingrid closed the door behind him.

She planted her hands on his cheeks and pulled him down, planting a warm kiss on his lips. Arnulf gave a murmured huff of surprise but did not pull away. He wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her close, enjoying the warmth of her body against him.

When Ingrid finally broke the kiss, Arnulf said with a cheeky smile, "Hello to you too, love."

Ingrid blushed a lovely red color and looked aside,saying almost sheepishly, "Sorry."

"Don't be."

Arnulf leaned in and kissed her on the tip of her nose. She smiled up at him, eyes warm with affection. Yet Arnulf saw worry behind the warmth. Perhaps even fear?

"What's wrong?" he asked.

A scowl marred Ingrid's face as she said, "Our Jarl Sigurd is planning to go to war against his neighbors, and soon."
Arnulf's gut twisted into a knot but fought past it, saying, "That's not the only thing bothering you, is it?"

"No," Ingrid said. "Tidings from the south trouble my mentor."

The idea of the powerful sorceress that was Ingrid's mentor being troubled scared Arnulf more than news of war. It must have shown on his face. Ingrid left his embrace and turned to tend the pot over her small fire.

"Ingrid," Arnulf said, following in her footsteps. "What's wrong? Truthfully."

Ingrid did not reply. Instead, she took a ladle and bent slightly, stirring something in the pot.

"Ingrid," Arnulf said again, softer this time. He placed a hand on her shoulder and gently squeezed. "Talk to me, love."

"It's the Blighted Scar," Ingrid finally said. "It's growing."

A chill colder than the sleeting downpour outside took root in Arnulf's heart. He stammered, "But, the Wardstones-"

"Are failing," Ingrid interrupted. She stood up, placing the ladle on her mantle, and turned to face him. Her emerald green eyes reflected firelight as she said in a conspiratorial tone, "Jarl Sigurd's gothi said as much when he consulted the runes. The Wardstones are failing and the Scar is growing."

"How fast? How soon until it reaches us?" Arnulf asked..

"I don't know, but it will happen."

Arnulf's mind went blank and his eyes became unfocused. Ingrid guided him to a wicker chair and waited for him to return to himself.

Of all the things he could imagine saying, he looked up at Ingrid and asked, "Why are you telling me this?"

"Because we don't have to die here," Ingrid said, forcing a smile. "Jarl Svenla of Raudvík is sending ships westward, across the Serpent Sea to Nýrheim! Lady Olga intends to join her, and I convinced her to let you join us."

Arnulf's first thought leaped from his heart, urging him to say yes and to follow her. The cold voice of caution tempered it, forcing him to ask, "Does Jarl Sigurd know of your mistress's intentions?"

A dark silence held the room, broken only by the crackling of the fire. Ingrid finally replied, "No. He believes Lady Olga is going to consult with Jarl Svenla about an alliance."

With a nod, Arnulf said, "So you're betraying him."

"He betrays us by refusing to do anything about the Wardstones failing!" Ingrid snapped. Her eyes flashed with anger, then softened somewhat, as did her tone. "Please come with us, Arnulf."

"Nýrheim is a death sentence," he replied. "It's infested with strange creatures and Skraelings. No colony has survived more than a single winter."

"I know," Ingrid said with a solemn nod. "It's dangerous, but staying here is a death sentence."

That final word hung in the silence that followed. Everything in Arnulf screamed to say yes and follow her.

"When are you leaving?" he asked.

"Tomorrow morning. Please don't tell anyone else."

Arnulf opened his mouth to answer, but no sound came out. His tongue felt tied into a knot. What could he say? What should he say? Ingrid looked at him with a pensive expression.

He looked down at his lap and said, voice heavy with defeat, "I won't say a thing."

"So you'll come with us?"

"Yes," He nodded weakly.

Ingrid embraced him and kissed his forehead.

"Thank you," she said, her voice almost a whisper. "This is for the best. I promise."

Arnulf closed his eyes and leaned into her embrace, breathing deeply of her to reassure himself he was making the right decision.
***​
Arnulf returned to the guard barracks in the evening after spending supper with Ingrid. Things had barely changed inside, which was typical. Nobody liked staying in the barracks when they could be at a tavern or brothel or really anywhere that wasn't the barracks. Arnulf found his bunk again and rested his shield against the chest at the foot of his bed that contained all of his worldly possessions.

"Arnulf!" a gruff man's voice declared. "Where have you been?"

Arnulf resisted a sigh of frustration and turned to face the source of the voice, replying, "Visiting my sweetheart, Captain."

Captain Bram glared at Arnulf, saying, "Well I hope it was worth it. You're wanted in the Jarl's hall."

Arnulf's eyes practically bulged out of his skull. He asked, "What? Why?"

"You think the Jarl tells me anything?" Bram sneered. "Get your ass up to the hall now!"

Captain Bram "escorted" Arnulf up the hill to Jarl Sigurd's meadhall, leaving him at the great doors. Ushered inside by the door guards, Arnulf was met by a gaunt woman who claimed to be Sigurd's seneschal. Arnulf was only dimly aware of what she said as they went through the main chamber of the hall. Despite his apprehension, he couldn't help but gape at the hall as he walked through it for the first time.

The walls were covered in knotwork-patterned tapestries depicting a multitude of events, most of which revolved around the past Jarls of Ívarsvöllur and their great deeds. Servants rushed about preparing for the evening meal, laying out trenchers and pots packed with enough food to feed the entirety of Sigurd's huscarl warbands, making Arnulf's mouth water despite already having eaten.

The seneschal brought Arnulf back to himself with a curt question. "Did you get all of that?"

"Um, yes," Arnulf said without conviction. Looking around, he saw they were in the apartments that filled up the back end of the mead hall. They stood in front of a door where two huscarls in lamellar plate armor with swords on their weapons belts stood guard.

The seneschal sighed and said, "Try to not embarrass yourself before your Jarl, at least. This could be very good for you." And with that she left.

One of the huscarls opened the door and looked at him expectantly. Arnulf walked through.

"Guardsman Arnulf to see you, Jarl," the huscarl said over Arnulf's shoulder, then closed the door.

Within was a small room with a fur covered bed in one corner. Several plush chairs masterfully carved from a dark wood sat in front of a fireplace already blazing. A tall, broad shouldered man with shoulder-length gold-and-silver hair stood up from one of the chairs. He cut a powerful figure with richly decorated and well made red clothes embroidered with silver thread. Golden torques covered his arms from bicep to wrist, and jeweled rings rested on his fingers. His blue eyes were bright and sharp, seeming to cut into Arnulf's soul.

"My Jarl," Arnulf said with reverence, falling to one knee.

"Rise, guardsman," Jarl Sigurd said with a rich, masculine voice. "We have important matters to discuss and I'd rather you not be kneeling the entire time."

"Yes, my Jarl," Arnulf said, hesitantly rising to stand up. "What can I do for you?"

"You can begin by taking a seat," Sigurd said, gesturing at a chair close to his. "Can I offer you a drink?"

Arnulf wasn't sure what the protocol was when a Jarl offered you a drink. He wished he'd paid more attention to the seneschal when she was telling him what to do. His silence did not go unnoticed as Sigurd poured mead from a pitcher into two golden cups.

"Speak up, man," the Jarl commanded.

"Y-yes, my lord," Arnulf stuttered out. He moved to the offered chair and accepted an offered cup from Sigurd. Arnulf couldn't help but marvel at it. The simply but intricately decorated drinking vessel was worth more money than Arnulf had ever earned, or would likely ever have. His sipped cautiously at his drink, enjoying the wholesome honey taste on his tongue.

Jarl Sigurd settled back into his chair and gave Arnulf a fatherly smile, saying, "Tell me about yourself, Guardsman."

Feeling cautious, Arnulf simply said, "I'm from the countryside. Grew up on my family's farm. It was good living."
"But not what you wanted," Sigurd stated more than asked.

Arnulf nodded. "I wanted to see the world outside the farm. So I left. Spent a few years going between odd jobs and guarding caravans until I got offered a job with your town guard. I accepted it and have been manning the walls and patrolling the streets of Ívarsvöllur for four years or so now."

Sigurd nodded along encouragingly. When Arnulf finished, Sigurd asked, "How do you know my Wyrd Speaker's apprentice?"

Arnulf's face flushed. Did Sigurd already know what was going on behind his back? The Jarl's eyes bore into Arnulf, forcing him to speak up. "We met a few times when she was at the market and I was on guard there. We arranged to meet after our duties were over, and we've been friends ever since."

"Oh do come now," Sigurd said with mirth in his voice. "You're more than friends. I'm surprised you two haven't married yet."

Arnulf felt like his face was hot enough to smelt iron. He stammered, "W-we thought about it. A lot. She has her duties to her mentor, and I'm just a guardsman. Maybe one day, when she's become a full Wyrd Speaker, I will have more to offer her."

Sigurd nodded. "I see. No wonder she managed to get you chosen for escort duty. Tell me, did she tell you about the Wardstones failing?"

When Arnulf's jaw gaped open in abject terror, Sigurd raised a hand. "Be at ease, Guardsman. I knew that she'd tell you eventually once she knew. She wants to keep you safe, and this is only the most prudent way to do it."
Arnulf managed to pick up his jaw and clench his mouth shut, not trusting his own tongue to not betray him.

Sigurd continued, "I'll assume she told you about my intentions to ally with Jarl Svenla to the west. Svenla, you see, is a powerful ruler. Her huscarl warbands are nearly equal to mine. With her army backing mine, we can unite the North and face the Blighted Scar with our full strength while the Wyrd Speakers find a way to restore the Wardstones."

The Jarl's face took on a hard edge as he said, "I'm placing a great deal of trust in you, Arnulf. The fate of the North is at stake here. I expect you to do everything in your power to make sure this alliance happens."

Arnulf nodded. "I will do my best, my Jarl."

Sigurd's face eased into a fatherly smile. "I know you will, if only for your love's sake. See this task done, Arnulf, and you will be welcomed among my Huscarls."

"My Jarl?" Arnulf stammered, once again slack-jawed. "You would honor me so?"

"I would," Sigurd said, "if this mission is successful."

A whirlwind of thoughts howled through Arnulf's mind. He'd grown up listening to tales of heroic huscarls fighting for their Jarls and peoples, slaying monsters and rescuing beautiful princesses from said creatures' clutches. He had wanted to become one of them for longer than could be remembered, but had given up on the dream shortly after leaving home.

His thoughts must have shown on his face, as Sigurd raised an eyebrow and asked, "Do you not think yourself capable?"

"No, my Jarl," Arnulf said perhaps a bit too quickly. "It's just that I've no great deed to my name to earn the chance to earn this honor."

"Ah, I see," Sigurd said with a chuckle. "I see you still think in terms of the skald's song and the sagas. Being one of my huscarls is more difficult than being a hero, Arnulf, or a guardsman, but I feel you are capable of rising to the challenge."

Arnulf's face asked the question he couldn't bring himself to voice. How could Sigurd know what he, who had never seen the Jarl up-close until now, was worthy?

"It's simple, really," Sigurd said. "I asked Captain Bram about you, and consulted with those of my advisors who busy themselves in the affairs of my town. Bram said quite plainly he'd never met a more capable guardsman."

"He said that?" Arnulf asked, astonished at the idea of his brusk captain saying such a thing.

"Well, he didn't use those exact words, but they meant the same thing to me. You're an honest man with heartfelt convictions of decency and law. Such a thing is rare these days, and are useful to Jarls who recognize them as such. Consider this diplomatic mission a test."

Arnulf nodded. He almost smiled, but the nagging reminder that he was ultimately abandoning Sigurd kept it from showing. Instead, he said, "I will see it done."
***​
The sleeting rain stopped during the night, leaving only the chill of the downpour to mingle with the chill of a gray Spring morning. People stirred from their beds and prepared for the morning chores. Arnulf felt frozen to his straw mattress. With great effort he moved on stiff limbs to sitting, then standing up. His stomach still felt twisted and his normally voracious morning appetite abandoned him, so he packed some extra dry rations for later and donned his gear, such as it was. Boiled leather and tightly knit cloth over his tunic and pants. His shield, carrying the dragon crest of Jarl Sigurd, he slung over his back. His axe went into a loop on his belt and his seax and its sheath hung at his side.

At the bottom of his chest, underneath his two spare shirts and extra set of britches, rested his few worldly possessions: A toy horse and rider his father had made for him long ago, a small wood bound book of poetry, and a purse containing all of his worldly wealth.

His eyes focused on the purse. Memories drifted to the top of his mind. Earning his first wage as a guardsman. Excitedly talking with Ingrid about buying a home for them one day. Watching his small hoard of silver and bronze coins grow, and with it, his future. Their future.

Closing his eyes, Arnulf shook his head to clear it. He stuffed it all into his rucksack, leaving the key on top of the lid.

Stepping out into the cold dawn, Arnulf didn't go immediately to the stables. Instead he stopped by the market, where he purchased three items before going to the stave church.

The church was empty save for himself and the gothi preparing his morning offerings to the gods. Arnulf walked to an alcove where a life-sized stone statue of a warrior in ornate armor, face obscured by an ornate helmet and long beard. Before the warrior was a small altar with a wax candle and stone bowl. Arnulf lit the candle with his flint and striking stone, then placed the items in the bowl: a small bag of threshed wheat, a piece of parchment with runic letters written on both sides, and a coarse piece of ash tree bark.

Arnulf bent to one knee before the altar, but kept his eyes locked with the statue's unseeing gaze.

"Hail and Glory to you, Baleyg All Father," he intoned with reverence. "I come to offer you gifts and ask for your favor. I go to walk on a dangerous road. I ask you, the Unending Flame, to light my path. I ask you, King of Solvakholl, to grant me courage to defeat my enemies and protect those who rely on me."

Arnulf took the candle from its stand and touched the flame to the contents of the bowl. As they burned, he continued to speak.

"I offer you the gifts you gave our ancestors long ago: the wheat you taught us to harvest, the parchment on which you told us to write our stories, and the ash wood from which you carved our first ancestors. I return these in part to you now."

Arnulf watched the offerings burn into cinders, then finished the ritual.

"From the earth you made us, and to the earth we one day return. Hail to my kin. Glory to the Victorious Dead."
***​
Arnulf found Ingrid and her mistress waiting for him at the stables. Both women had dressed for the road, wearing riding skirts, leather boots, and thick cloaks. Ingrid smiled at him. Arnulf smiled back, feeling a kernel of warmth become alight in his core.

"You're late," Ingrid's teacher said, dousing that kernel.

"My apologies, Lady Olga," Arnulf said, head bowed. "I was at the church giving offerings to the All Father."

Olga, called Stormcrow, looked worthy of her moniker. Even without the iconic gold trimmed blue cloak of her order, she looked like a Wyrd Speaker. Her hawkish face framed by steel gray hair looked down at him. Two blue eyes, sharp as iron spear tips, glared down at him and seemed to pierce into his thoughts. Her scowl lessened slightly and she said,"You are forgiven, but don't make it a habit. Time grows short."

The three of them mounted their horses and they set off. Olga led them with Ingrid and Arnulf riding side-by-side. Arnulf tried to think un-traitorous thoughts as they passed under Ívarsvöllur's gate. The guards looked as cold and bored as ever as they watched over the usual morning traffic. Huntsmen and trappers gone to prowl. Farmers to their fields. Herbalists to find their reagents.

Only after they left the gatehouse and were alone on the open road did Arnulf breathe a sigh of relief.

"Calm yourself," Olga commanded. "You look as though you walk to your own execution."

"Sorry," Arnulf said.

Ingrid guided her horse close to his and placed a slender hand on his, giving him a reassuring squeeze. He smiled back at her, and when her hand left his, he urged his horse onward to trot next to Olga.

"Lady Olga, might I ask you a question?" he asked.

"You already did," Olga replied, "but you may ask another."

Arnulf clenched his jaw in annoyance but kept civility in his voice. "Ingrid told me that the Wardstones are failing. How is that possible?"

The sorceress gave him a calculating look, then looked over her shoulder. Arnulf looked as well. The three riders were, for the moment, truly alone on the long dirt road that connected Ívarsvöllur to Raudvík.

"The hands of men made the Wardstones," Olga said, looking forward, "even if it was the greatest Wyrd Speakers of the age who made them. Like all the creations of men, they will eventually fade. My order does their best to maintain the Stones. Even now, they consult the old lore and seek a solution. They will fail. The Blighted Scar will grow, and will consume the North."

"How do you know they'll fail?" Arnulf pressed.

"I have inspected them myself with the Wyrding Way. The magic imbued in them is fading, like a bonfire bereft of fresh kindling, and we do not know how to add more."

Arnulf's mouth dried up. He asked, "So why is Jarl Sigurd preparing for war against his neighbors?"

"When the Wardstones at last fail and the Blight finally breaks free, it will devour his lands first. First crops will fail. Then game and herd animals will all fall sick and die, and there'll be nothing to eat but bark and dry grass. Jarl Sigard intends to conquer as many of his weaker neighbors as he can to take control of their lands, holding off the inevitable for a miracle that won't be coming."

"Why isn't he trying to unite with them? Combining resources for the famine and preparing to fight the Draugr?"
"A noble idea. Alas, all nobility died with the Old Kingdoms, leaving only crows and ravens to pick at the bones."
"Then what makes Jarl Svenla so trustworthy?" Arnulf said with a hint of challenge seeping into his voice.

Olga turned and gave him a sharp glare, then said, "Before I was Jarl Sigurd's Wyrd Speaker, I was advisor to Svenla's father. I watched her grow into a woman and learn the ways of the world, and I choose to trust her self-interest to align with mine."

"What about Ingrid and I?" Arnulf asked

"Ingrid is my apprentice, so she will come with me. You are her beau, so you will follow where she goes. Whether or not I approve."

"Arnulf," Ingrid said, reproach in her voice. "It was Jarl Svenla who told Lady Olga of her intent and invited her. That should be reason enough to trust Jarl Svenla."

Arnulf had the good sense to look abashed, even if he still didn't fully trust in the good will of either Jarl Svenla or Lady Olga.

Everything has a price in this world, Arnulf thought. I hope the price for this deception and treason won't be our lives.
 
Unnamed Wildsea Quest Ch.1 (by sandamandias)
This is something I've had cooking for a little while, a currently-as-yet-unnamed quest set in the Wildsea.

They call it the Wildsea!

Or at least they do now, some three-hundred-ish years after the Verdancy, the cataclysmic growth of green that remade the world, turning solid land into a rarity.

They call it the Lignin Tide.

Where ships sail the Tangle, the keel riding in the Thrash, keeping far above the worst of the mutative crezzerin and the Darkness-Under-Eaves.

They call it the Treetop Waves.

But you already know this, just like you know why looking north too long brings ill luck, and why a wildsailor isn't dead until you find the body or a full winter has passed. This is your third time setting out on the spring tides, having overwintered in Kerzoka.

This is the Growcean, domain of a thousand horrors, home of a thousand wonders!

Things like the living storm your ship ran into. The last thing you remember is a bright flash, a boom of thunder, and the sickening feeling of the deck dropping out from beneath your feet.

The storm clearly did a number on your ship. And you, judging by the pounding headache. At least it's sunny now, if the light stabbing into your peepers can be trusted. Or it might just be a cauldron of sunbeam bats, in which case you should probably move.

Opening your eyes, you come face to face with your reflection.
Who do you see looking back at you?
[ ] A flat, simian face, weather-worn skin, and hair pulled back.
[ ] Vibrant green, flower-crown, and hard spines.
[ ] Black eyespots, soft gray flesh, and fluttering spore-gills.
[ ] Stitched leather, a veiled hat, and a few loose spiders.

What is the next thing you notice?
[ ] The tug of sword-memories at your belt.
[ ] The rattle of feathers shifting in the wind.
[ ] The scents of sawdust, blood, and hemolymph, very little of it yours.
[ ] The hunger of stolen starlight

Where do you head first and why?
[ ] The underthrash platform, where your diving gear is stored. Someone needs to check the underside of the hull, and that someone is you.
[ ] The seed bank. Spices are valuable and lightweight enough to easily evacuate.
[ ] The medical bay. If the ship is this bad, the crew is probably worse. Time to scrub in and get to work.
[ ] The observation bubble. Best to see trouble before it gets here, and shoot it before it can eat the people fixing the ship.
[ ] Write-in

UPDATE: We're doing it live!
 
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These are all great! So happy to see we've gotten some great entries already, and hope to see these as threads on the forum as well!

The judging team will be providing feedback if you'd like to wait until then, or feel free to post a link to the thread with your entry if you want to post it and enter it into the contest at the same time.

Hey just a question, for quests would the options to be voted on count towards the word count.

Yes, but if this pushes you slightly over the wordcount; don't sweat it too much. Honestly the most likely scenario where we're going to manually check the wordcount is if the entry seems obviously wayyy over it.
 
Just to clarify, but if I've started a Quest recently and I'm really proud of the first update would it be all right for me to submit it here?
 
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Since we're only allowed one entry, I've had a bit of trouble deciding which opening for a Quest Idea of mine I should go with. The one I'm most leaning towards, as it's the Quest I'm most eager to run, is for Fool Bloom, about a Magical Girl veteran now pushing forty and how she gets along with a MG fangirl who still has a lot to learn... and that the threat she faced years ago may not be truly gone.

The other two main ideas I had were a Final Fantasy Quest intro where you're the Last Human in a world of species mutated by the Crystals, a Doctor Who Quest starring The Master (from the POV of their 'companion'), and a prequel to my story Revalkyrie where the main character is no less than Elizabeth II.

Again, probably gonna go with the Fool Bloom intro (as a bonus, it'll also tie in with another of my Summerfest entries), though I did have a cool opening line in mind for my FF idea: "The wonderful thing about humans... is you're the only one."
 
Traveler (by azatol)
This is something I've written a few chapters of, but I've never published.

Traveler
Adam looked over the edge of the large passenger airship, as it swayed in the bitter north wind. The coals had been largely snuffed, he guessed, as the ship was descending steadily, still moving forward towards the Odawan bay and the city of Petoskey.

Adam's grandfather had traveled by a different sort of ship, when he immigrated to the Odawan nation years ago. The thought of a spaceship made Adam marvel. What a thing to exist, that travels between the planets, with a fuel that could barely be described, not coal, nor even what was now called petroleum.

It was hard to believe the true-believers, who spoke of the Ethereal people as flying in ships powered by their very life essence or "spirit". It made more sense if they sailed on the great Aether much as sailing ships sailed by wind on their Earth.

Grandpa would think it inconceivable that Adam had flown to England to take an exam, and then flown back. But he had to get into Oxford's International and Interplanetary Studies program, he had to!

Wesiinh was also planning to apply to the program. She was native born Odawan, and very proud of her people.

He had planned out their next several years. Six years in the INIP program at Oxford, then they could return together to Odawa, or travel the world, or what about traveling the planets?

Oxford's program was excellent, and he would be exposed to his home country again for a few years, and maybe make some connections with those who knew Ethereals. Or maybe he would meet an Ethereal himself.

England, France, Bavaria, these were the countries that had, just in the last twenty years, built the first human spaceships, following after the Ethereal design with modifications of necessity.

England had built a few dozen to France's 3 and Bavaria's 1.

Adam looked around at the airship compartment. It had internal walls but was against the edge of the airship, allowing him a view. There were a few other businessmen in his compartment. A few students like him.

He wore a black bow-tie with his grey flannel coat and black slacks. He was glad for the coat, though he wished for his feathered brown coat back home. He looked to his possessions, a simple black case with paper and inkpens, and the attestation of who he was.

"Adam Ryan, Odawan citizen, Alliance of Lakes."

His connection to England itself was also documented.

He had a few British pounds, and the rest of his money was in the common currency of the Lakes nations: The Lakeland dollar.

A crewman entered their compartment, and spoke to them in Ethereal, for some spoke Ottawa, some English, and some other languages entirely, but they all spoke Ethereal.

"We'll be landing in the next few minutes, please take your seats."

The crewman wore a black cap and a flannel uniform, and proceeded to sit down on one of the benches in their compartment.

Adam sat down next to some of the other students.

"If I might ask, what were you studying in England?" Adam asked the young man next to him.

"Spiritual philosophy," he said.

"What sort of thing do you study in that? I don't understand what I've heard. I'm still just an applicant."

The University student spoke to him without a pause, "We studied Ethereals and their first sense. I guess you could call our first sense sight, or perhaps a closer analogy would be smell. We smell, and we feel a gut level like or dislike for what we smell. The Ethereal people have a sense of someone's spirit, even their own, that is as visceral as that."

Adam thought it was all odd and unbelievable, "How could that be? What is spirit anyway? I mean I get the definition of the Church, that every human and Ethereal has a spirit which is slightly different and unique for every person. But I don't really get it."

It seemed that a person's innermost was completely private to them. His's inner thoughts should be kept to himself, not looked on like a Doctor's exam.

"Ships fly by the power of spirit, directed by conduit and piping, and if a ship's crew and yes, even passengers are out of balance, the ship will not fly," the student said fiercely. "Spiritual philosophy is as real as Natural philosophy. It is a real study. And also, your spirit is both entirely core and not separable from who you are, both also something which can be seen in plain sight by an Ethereal."

The airship made a solid, but momentary thud, as it landed.

"Perhaps, if I get accepted to the program, I could call on you in England? Mister?" he asked.

"Henderson. What program have you applied to?"

Adam gathered his case, and stood up from the bench. "IRIPR."

"Never had an interest in that. Didn't take you as someone interested in the political set. But, sure, ask for me at West hall."

After, it was the slow march of people out of the airship. He drew out his documents of Odawan status and kept them at hand, as a team of three receiving stations reviewed every passenger's documentation.

The Ethereals still have lifter craft that could make suborbital flights, and grandpa had arrived on one of those, but they were a rare thing, more likely was for immigrants to arrive on the Eastern coast, and some of those eventually found their way across to the Lakes.

After seeing to his paperwork, Adam walked across the open field to where people were waiting for the arrivals.

Some chauffeurs waited with their hansoms, while others were whole families with their carriage waiting.

The airship, and spaceships seemed so much more advanced that the horses they still relied on, on the ground.

There was talk of horseless carriages that a few inventors were experimenting with.

His father was waiting, and Wesiinh, was with him. It was odd that the two would have rode out to meet him.

Father wore his black bowler, coat and tie, and Wesiinh wore a dress, and had feathers in her braided golden hair. She was short, only five foot two, and father towered over both of them, at nearly six feet tall.

"I'm glad to see you back, son. How was your exam?" father said.

"It was a lot of unfamiliar terms, but I got most of them by context. I have a lot to learn, but I think the exam went well," Adam said.

There was a lot of diplomatic lingo that he didn't know. And another set of terms for interplanetary trade, and the Ethereals' established system, which Earth had adapted with the introduction of their own trading ships.

Wesiinh spoke suddenly. "My mother—she's sick. Well, I know we talked about going to Oxford next year, but I really can't go now, until mother is better and I'm sure that my father doesn't need me back at home. I'm going to study here in Petoskey, at least for now. They've already accepted me in the medical program."

Adam felt like he was punched in the gut. He was so excited to go study abroad.

They loaded up in his father's carriage. The driver looked back and them, and then proceeded to navigate through the mess of other carriages and hansoms making their way out of the airport.

"I talked to a Spiritual philosopher today," Adam said to Wesiinh.

"What did he have to say?" she asked.

"He's still a student of the program at Oxford. He talked to me about how Ethereals can see into their own spirit, and even human spirit. It's hard to believe, but I've heard that before. But thinking about how ships are powered by spirit, that's interesting. I would study spaceships all day if I could. But trying to be practical, I could study either Spiritual Philosophy or IRIPR."

"To be honest, the Ethereals are nice and all, but my primary goal was just the first part of that program. Knowing the International treaties, and learning about diplomacy. I want to be an ambassador someday, but there's no program here for that. I'd rather be doing something that's helpful, that dreaming about something I can't have."

The carriage ride was rather quiet after that. Wesiinh seemed distracted to Adam, and he was thinking about ships, but also about what might have been.

The ships helped keep his attitude right.

Adam settled into a routine as winter break wore on. He didn't talk to Wesiinh much. She was busy running errands for her father.

Adam's own father was away on business out east. He was a clothier, and with the ample supply of furs in the region, fur coats were made for good prices in Ryan industries.

His father always said he took English industry and Odawan character and put them together to run Ryan Industries.

He had to ride down to the station by himself when word arrived of a telegram from Oxford.

He was not accepted into the IRIPR program at Oxford, but he was welcome to come visit and try to apply to another department.

He wanted to speak with Wesiinh before he left for England. He loved Petoskey—for what it was. But his heart was set higher and further.

He sat down to dinner with her folks, as it was the only way he could meet with her. It seemed she was extremely busy.

"So you are going to Medical school, for sure?" he asked again.

It was winter, so they were eating from stored up foods, and what could be hunted in winter, which was mostly rabbit or deer. The venison stew was still very good.

"I've already started the program. It's 8 years, starting with the basics. My professor has even helped diagnose mother," Wesiinh said.

Adam wished he could see Wesiinh pursuing her dreams once more. Wesiinh seemed to have settled on something other than them.

"I'm headed back to England to try to get into another program. Oxford didn't take me in IRIPR, but they said I could apply to another program."

Wesiinh's father asked, "Do you have any family there?"

"Some third cousins, once removed," he said.

"I'm not going to England. I'm sorry Adam. I really do appreciate everything."

"You were a helpful friend for Wesiinh, I admit. But the time has come for two paths to separate," said her father.

It was strange to eat dinner and socialize the rest of the night. Not only broken up, but by her own father, and Wesiinh made no attempt to disagree with him.

Adam's father gave him enough savings to get to Oxford and live there. He promised to send some additional money as needed. But Adam didn't plan on living wildly in an expensive country like England.

So it was back to England by airship, to apply for the Spiritual philosophy program, although he wanted to first find out if there was a spaceship program or concentration.
 
I like the aesthetics here, but if anything it's *too* confusing and context-less, to the point where I'm not sure what each of the options presents or what exactly is going on. Magic apocalypse? Airships? I think?
TREE is OCEAN
CHAINSAW is SHIP
SPIDER is FREN

Part of the difficulty is that Wildsea, the setting, is shaped like itself.

I'd be happy to discuss this more over PMs, because I want to strike a balance between some mystery and also giving the players enough information they can have a reasonable idea of what to expect.

Although it's less apocalypse and more post-post-apocalypse salvagepunk.

Curious as to what makes you think airships, and which options you'd think about voting for
 
Rickety Hours Ch. 1 (by Gomlet)
Loosely based on a quest I read in a dream once. I promise my writing is not always this vicious.

Rickety Hours, Chapter 1

Here stands Rickety Hours. He used to be somebody.

Five years ago, the archetypical Dark Army swept across the countryside like a flood of locusts. They stole the peasants away from their farms. From the larger settlements, well-off laborers were fed into their shambolic militia. The Dark Army burnt and crushed the proper cities into rubble; then built gnarled castles from the remains. Everyone knew they were going to win.

Then their leaders were systematically routed and killed, the regiments dissolved, and the Demon Lord's dismembered body mounted upon eight obelisks before the church—one for the torso, one for each limb. His head was obliterated in the fight.

And then, they mopped up the remnants and took them to be tried. Among them stood one Rickety Hours. Notable for being a halfway-decent combatant despite knowing only one spell; Grasping Roots.

He, like most of the impressionable youths in the Dark Army, was offered the Merciful Ultimatum: Debt or death?

So alive he remains; now a humble [Woodcarver] and civil servant to the Duchy of Marchwind. The years of shaping chairs and prepping planks for cabins have done wonders for his dexterity, both physical and magical. It is here that he would have remained for the rest of his life, were it not for the seething injustice of it all.

For he never let his anger go. The Demon Lord promised freedom, and thrills, and many more complex things to more complex people. But what would I know about the latter? I'm the goofy mascot of the 52nd Regiment with only one spell, after all!

Damn them
.

His fury has simmered for the past 5 years, feeding off of every disdainful look, every noble's insinuation that he would never belong in Marchwind.

Damn them to the hell they preach!

Here stands Rickety Hours. He'll be somebody again, if it's the last thing he ever does.

It's a late night in the workshop, at the end of his third day in a row without sleep, when that conviction solidifies. The flickering manalights, made to provide just enough light to work by, cast writhing shadows over his face. He takes one last glance at his Status, and then-

Rickety slumps forward over his desk. He's fallen asleep in the middle of his crunch. His drool stains the workbench. The poor man must've been overwhelmed.

Only a keen eye would note the oddly tidy position of the knives upon the table, as if the [Woodcarver] had put them back in their place right before passing out.

---

Far beyond the gates of the manor, in a commercial district that is merely many shacks, one Rickety Hours awakes from the sweetest nap of his life. He clears the rest of his backlog that morning, then slips on a vest and sling-bag.

He heads out into the district square and promptly slides into the unwashed tide of people. A [Messenger] boy's cries of big news flit in one ear and out the other. The crowd parts around [Tamer] Bob and his gallivanting goat pack, so Rickety parts with it.

I'll miss this place when I leave.

Rickety ducks into a tavern. Rory, the [Butcher], 40 years young and with only a smattering of hair, breaks from his animated discussion and waves. Rickety waves back.

"Rick, good to see ya! Come on over, get some soup and hear the good news, yeah?"

Rickety plops into the seat with a contented sigh, brushing his scraggly brown hair back from his eyes.

"Ahh, Rory. Won't be much of a talker today, I'm afraid. I was up all night filling new orders from the Duchy."

Rory nods sagely. "Sounds like you, yeah! But if you're reacting like that, you don't know, do you?"

"Mm?" inquires Rickety through a mouthful of the other man's soup.

"It's all in the paper, kid, sheesh!"

Rory slides an article up to Rickety. He takes a good look.

MARCHWIND MURDERED!
On this morning, in the year of our lord 7-5, Duchess Marchwind II was found as a desiccated husk in her favorite rocking chair. Its wooden arms were covered in claw marks and signs of struggle. The maids of the main estate whisper of incubi, the chefs shout of vampires, and her political opponents speak of easy pickings. There is a wide chasm opening beneath Marchwind. Its name? Power Vacuum!

Rickety blinks twice. Rory leans in conspiratorially. "You know, kid, in a wild situation like this, no one will care if ya run for the hills. I doubt whatever new management we're getting will care to chase down one indenture."

A slow grin creeps over Rickety's face.

"You know, Rory, I think you might have the right idea."

Rory barks a laugh. "Don't I always! Good luck out there, kid. Teary goodbyes are for the weak, you know. And I'm strong!"

---

That evening, Rickety sweeps through town to buy all sorts of mostly useful supplies, as well as a proper backpack. In hindsight, he may have splurged a bit when it came to the [Butcher]'s shop.

Standing on a hill overlooking the district, Rickety finally lets himself cry. It's after he said goodbye to everyone, so it doesn't count.

He turns his back on the shacks. He starts walking.

I hope you burn in hell, Duchess! Tell my brothers and sisters from the 52nd who sent you!

He flicks open his Status.

NAME: Rickety Hours
HP: 102/102 (+1/min)
MP: 26/26 (+1/sec)

BASE CLASS: [Linchpin Wizard] Lvl. 13/20
A [Wizard] who has devoted themselves to a single spell, forgoing exploration of any other.
  • Selected Spell: Grasping Roots
  • Per-Level: 4 Control. 4 Power. 2 Skill Points (All). 2 Skill Points (Magic). 2 bonus levels in the Selected Spell.
SECONDARY CLASS: [Woodcarver] Lvl. 17/20
A [Carpenter] with a focus on stripping away extraneous wood to reveal the ideal shape.
  • Per-Level: 1 Pool. 2 Dexterity. 2 Control. 3 Endurance. 1 Skill Point (All). 2 Skill Points (Crafting).
PHYSICAL STATUS
Strength: 10 (Potential 10)
Dexterity: 32 (Potential 34)
Endurance: 46 (Potential 51)
Vitality: 10 (Potential 10)

MAGICAL STATUS
Power: 38 (Potential 42)
Control: 62 (Potential 66)
Pool: 16 (Potential 17)
Recovery: 10 (Potential 10)

SPELL
Grasping Roots
Lvl. 26 (20/20)
Cost: 1~13 MP/sec
Guide tendrils of wood to ensnare a target.
  • Lvl.5: You can gradually harden the materials affected. Effectiveness improved by Power. Increases channeling cost by 1.
  • Lvl.10: You can damage and drain 10 HP from ensnared targets per second. Damage improved by Power.
  • Lvl.15: You can generate usable wood from your MP. Increases channeling cost by 1.
  • Lvl.20: Generated wood remains in existence and can continue draining targets on command, even after you've stopped channeling.
  • Lvl.25: You can project your senses or move your body through wood left by Grasping Roots. Increases channeling cost by 9.
SKILLS
Magic (29)
Durable Constructs Lvl.12
Objects generated from your magic have 120% bonus durability.
Intense Channelling Lvl.10
Your channeled spells treat your Power as if it were 10% higher.
Effective Leech Lvl.7
Your draining spells provide 70% bonus HP.
Crafting (24)
Lasting Carpentry Lvl.4
Wooden objects you craft last 40% longer under mundane stress.
Fast Whittling Lvl.20
You and your spells carve wood with 200% bonus speed.
Physique (0)

She wasn't even worth a level.

 
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Dead Engines intro (by Winged Knight)
This is the first update of my Quest, Dead Engines.




Corpses in the fields, toiling away
Corpses in the streets, marching all day
Corpses surround us, all on display
But it's the Senate, sitting in array
That fills my poor heart with so much dismay
-The Everlasting Senate


The stone is rough beneath your hands as you fall, scraping the skin and letting thin blood trickle out between your fingers to join the muck. The stench, the putrid remains of food and waste, sting at your eyes and nose from where they flow in the languid stream beside you. It takes everything you have left not to fall over, to keep from collapsing into the sewage and drowning in it.

There is so little remaining of you now. You have wandered this sewer for what seems your entire life, starving and dehydrated. Your mind barely even recognizes itself, the needs of the body overwhelming even the pit of grief waiting ever on the wings to engulf you within its bitter depths. Instinctively you flee from self-awareness, from acknowledgement of who you are and all your myriad failures, and take refuge in animal instinct to avoid having to live with the agony of being human. The sorrow is still too fresh, and if you linger upon it then you might willingly throw yourself into that nearby river of filth to escape the pain.

With effort you push yourself up, almost falling again as your waterlogged shoes slip on fetid mud. They are coming apart around your feet, as ragged as the rest of your clothing. In the dark, the fumes of human excrement and chemical runoff tear at your eyes to leave you doubly blind. Everything hurts, your joints screaming at you to stop. As always you ignore this sensation, continuing as you have for longer than you are able to conceive, listening to the sound of water dripping and the lapping of liquid garbage against raised stone.

It is meditative, those rhythmic notes, but dangerous. Even here, so far underground, it is too open. Baring your teeth, bleeding palms slapping against the walls, you seek entrances into deeper tunnels with nothing but the dulling awareness of your injured hands. You will go down into the earth, into cleaner gloom, and shelter within its depths.

They might still be searching for me, comes the whisper of a mind wishing only for its own silence. Need to run. Need to hide.

People are hunting you. Even the haze brought on by the gaping pit where your stomach used to be cannot fully smother this truth from beastly perception. If they catch you then you will suffer a fate worse than death, though could not the same be said for your current existence?

You shake your head, fleeing from the notion before it can take root and rush into a side passage. Your legs ache, and the burn in your hands grows worse as the sludge that coats everything down here beneath the earth slowly worms its way into your body from your open wounds. But it is a welcome distraction. Physical suffering blocks out mental anguish, chasing after you as surely as the pursuers you know seek to take you before cold eyes and even colder souls.

Finally, after a small eternity, you collapse again. The demands of your body will no longer be denied, forcing you to stop no matter how much you want to keep running. Even your breathing is slowing, its pace coming down along with your heart as manic energy dies and you are left with only weariness so complete it is but a few steps from death.

There is movement nearby, the skittering of tiny claws on stone. It approaches in fits and starts, waiting for long moments at a time before continuing its advance. Something wet pushes itself against your face, and you slowly open a single eye to see a whiskered snout exploring your unmoving form.

You catch the rat with fingers that are far too thin, desperation giving you strength and swiftness beyond what the chains of exhaustion have taken from your flesh. The poor rodent squeals as you sink your teeth into its back, ripping open the spine and killing the animal before it has a chance to suffer. The sigh that escapes your lips as the blood fills your mouth with its metallic tang is like that of a man finally coming up for air, hunger and thirst abating such that thoughts begin to emerge.

But with thought comes memory, and with memory comes suffering.

"Oh god," you moan, red spilling between your lips to dribble onto your chest. "Oh god, Kendra. I'm so sorry."

Now come the tears, hot and fresh, even as you continue to devour the rat. No matter how total your misery you cannot stop yourself from eating, taking in raw flesh and drinking crimson life in order to extend your own.

Who's there?

The voice echoes strangely in this tunnel, which you now notice is built differently from others you have wandered in your half-maddened state. There are etchings on the walls, worn down through water and time, showing a woman with long hair and her hands outstretched. Beneath those hands are two stone discs turning against each other, pushed by bodies neatly cut and bandaged in obvious display of their preparation after death.

The rest of the walls show similar scenes. People working with each other, a grand collaboration toward the building of this engine. Hands are joined, everyone coming together to create something greater than the sum of its parts. On display is the dream for a better world, of fields worked through the power of corpse labor and houses built using the same. A world of plenty, where none need concern themselves with the necessities of survival and instead pursue their aspirations as equals.

Laughter rips its way out of your throat, spilling more blood and sending you into a coughing fit. You almost drop the rat, but panic once again grants you ability beyond your current limitations and you maintain your grip on your meal. Your mirth dies as you once more bury your face into organ and muscle, drinking deep fresh blood that is swiftly running out. There isn't much left of the rat at this point, and you can already feel your stomach turning as this unclean feast makes its way through a body so ravaged that sustenance of any kind has become unnatural.

Why do you laugh? the voice calls out again, drawing your eyes to the door at the end of the tunnel. The metal has rusted, dirty brown melding with the stone to create mortar only long years could produce. Please, tell me about the world above. I want to know what has become of my work, of everything I hoped to create. Has the grand experiment born fruit?

The crunch of bone and meat between your teeth, you take what meager power you can to stretch out the rat's bones into a solid bar. Another effort of will gives it a tapered edge, and you pry it into the door.

"Whoever you are," you whisper hoarsely, throat already drying now that the blood has stopped flowing. You don't so much push as lean your body on the bar, slowly forcing the door open. "Whatever your desires… I doubt they've come true."

o\O/o​

You awake with a start, almost falling from the corner booth in this shabby cafe you've hidden away in. The ceiling fans turn slowly overhead, doing little to disperse the cigarette smoke wafting from the other patrons, and fill the air with a constant squeak that underlies the scratchy radio playing music over the counter where a bored looking woman waits at the register. Flies circle around the half-eaten sandwich on the plate before you, and you wave a skeletal hand to disperse them.

"Showing me visions of the past, Ellowyn?" you ask the air, reaching for what remains of the glass of water that came with your food. "I don't need reminders."

I've done nothing of the sort, comes a voice only you can hear as you drink. My voice, ephemeral as my presence but hinting at something vast settled just behind you. Your dreams are your own, Randall. Our agreement makes sure of that.

"Sometimes I wonder…"

Your eyes fall down to the knife by your sandwich, dull and barely suitable for spreading butter. Idly, you wonder if it might be sharp enough for you to slit your throat. It would take some effort, but with enough force you might be able to puncture your windpipe and choke to death.

Commotion by the door thankfully draws your thoughts away from suicide. A portly man stumbles through the entrance to the cafe, holding up a handkerchief to his mouth in a vain attempt to spare himself from the smoke. His brown jacket is worn at the sleeves, and his pants wrinkled, but his clothes are still too nice for this place. Worst are his shoes, which shine in the dull light. Those aren't the shoes of someone down on his luck, polished as they are, which makes up most of the people gracing this establishment.

He tutters about, looking this way and that, before his eyes finally settle on you. He knows to look for the figure in the corner, covered in a raincoat. Why he's wasting so much time with this display is beyond you, but eventually he makes his way in your direction and everyone else in the cafe returns to their business.

"Randall?" the man asks quietly, trying to peer under the hood of your cloak. "Randall Dunstan? Is that you?"

"I'd appreciate it if you didn't speak my name out loud, Harold," you reply, picking up your sandwich and taking a bite. It's gone cold by now, but corned beef holds an appeal even if it isn't warm. "Considering my grandfather is still looking for me."

"Good lord," Harold says, staring at your hand with wide eyes. His horror is understandable. There isn't much in the way of muscle left on you, after all. You're mostly just pale skin tightly wrapped around bone, a dull gray bracelet embedded so deep as to latch on to even that. "What's happened to you?"

"That's not what we're here to discuss," you reply. Another bite, and the paltry meal is finished. "And there's no time for pleasantries. The longer we speak the more danger we put ourselves in, so I suggest we get to the point."

Harold flinches, and a pang of sympathy blossoms in your chest. It is hot and sharp, digging at the remnants of you and scraping against the bones of your ribs like a claw. But it does not draw blood, no matter that your heart skips a beat. What remains of your soul is too tough, too scarred over for anything other than self-loathing or grief.

Might you be kinder, gentler? Once upon a time you loved this man, shared his embrace on cool evenings upon the hills as the sun set. He is taking just as much of a risk as you in meeting here. If you had any other choice you'd not hazard leaning on old friendships, old romances, but the trail has gone cold and there isn't much time left.

The mission must be completed within the year. Any longer and there won't be enough left of you to go on, crumbled to dust and blown away on the wind. Such is the price you have paid for power.

"Yes," Harold says, composing himself. "I suppose we should get to it, then."

He pulls an envelope from his jacket and slides it over to you. You take it with both hands, eliciting another flinch from Harold as he seems your other arm is equally emaciated and bedecked in that same jewelry that appears to have merged with the very sinew of your limbs.

You pull out a map, notes written on the margins, detailing a mountain range. It's mostly barren, just forest and rock. Only a few villages eke out a living upon those slopes, barely any roads connecting them to the rest of the country. But right there, in Harold's own hand, where the mountains border one of the great rivers that feed into the capital, he's circled one peak in particular.

"This took some time to figure out," Harold says, taking out his handkerchief and wiping his brow. You remember him having more hair, but you suppose age takes its toll on everyone in its own ways. "All the signs are in the records, of course. Little things like money transfers and building contracts. They were spread out over years, hidden within projects to help the rural communities nearby, but the picture comes together if you know what to look for."

"This is good," you say, looking up at the other man as he preens. You smile, and the harsh edges of your face soften. "You've not lost your skill at accounting, Harold. With this I should be able to keep moving."

"Yes, well…" Harold begins, a faint blush coming over his face as he scratches his nose. After a moment he takes a deep breath, reaching out a hand to rest on your own. "Randall… Yes, I know you told me not to say your name. Just… I want you to know I'm sorry about what happened with Kendra. It wasn't supposed to be this way."

Your good cheer vanishes in an instant, and you pull your hand away.

"No, it wasn't. My grandfather wanted to have me instead, but made do with her."

"That's not what I meant!" Harold says, putting his hands on the table. He looks about to lean forward, but at the last moment settles back down. "Look, I know you're upset with the senate, but it's not as if you were targeted specifically. The law applies to everyone, and the preservation of institutional knowledge makes sure the country runs smoothly. Besides, it's just a temporary measure."

"A lie," you growl, folding the map and standing up. "My grandfather hated when we were together, you know. Hated it just as much as when I married Fatima. You'll never be acceptable in his eyes, Harold. You'll never be acceptable to any of them."

You turn to leave, map safely tucked away in your coat pocket. Harold grabs you before you can walk away, his fingers touching as they close entirely over your atrophied wrist despite the bracelet. He stares at it, then up at you with horror writ on his face. You match his gaze coldly, eyes like a blade that cuts into the other man.

"I heard," he begins, pausing just long enough to regain some moisture in his mouth. "I heard about the death of that senator up north last year. The perpetrator hasn't been caught, and Lord Edmund Sable is here to oversee the improvements to the local Kordian satellite…"

"Are you asking me if I pulled a monster out of that poor boy?" you ask, pulling away. "That old ghoul was possessing a child, his own flesh and blood. Yes, Harold, I killed that senator. I ate his god damned soul."

You leave Harold staring at your back, mouth agape, as you make your way through the smoke and exit the cafe. The air outside is hardly cleaner, the stench of factories pumping smog into the air by the lake. It's difficult to see more than a few streets down, your every step kicking up dirty mist that breaks apart and reforms in the drizzle falling from the sky. The wind that blows over the water should be cool and refreshing, but instead washes over you with an acidic heat unusual for autumn.

It doesn't bother you much, nor does it seem to inconvenience the residents of this town. They are dressed in their own raincoats, cloth masks over their faces. The factory, refining ore from the mountains into steel, is the beating heart of this community. The wealth it brings is evident in all the new buildings coming up. The sound of construction reverberates up and down, men and women in overalls hard at work setting up lodges and other places of business.

And yet despite this there are many on the street holding out their hands. Men, women, and children all in clothes tattered from long walking. They've the look of farmers, tanned skin growing as pallid as yours from malnutrition. Men and women who worked the fields before new laws from the Everlasting Senate set up unliving labor to ensure food production at costs no living person could ever hope to match.

There was no respite in the cities, for there is no work to be found for those lacking in specialized skills. The factories are manned by the dead and their handlers, while the construction unions can only support so many within their ranks. So they settle here, hoping in the goodwill of their fellows to see them through their trials.

Hope misplaced, as down the street comes a policeman in a black uniform. Four hulking revenants walk behind him with spikes the same dull gray as the jewelry around your wrists jammed into their heads. They are armored all over, thick metal plates that would tire out anyone with a pulse of little impediment to muscles necromantically empowered. Almost they resemble the knights of old, but they lack helms with proud plumage or heraldry. All they have are masks covering the lower half of their faces to hide mouths that have been sewn shut.

"All right, off with you!" the police officer says, brandishing his club menacingly. The corpses behind him, dead eyes unseeing over their masks, raise their own. All it would take is the officer's command and they will march forward, laying into the huddled beggars with mechanical brutality. "You know you can't be making a nuisance of yourself on the main street, so move along or I'll make you move. This is your only warning."

You turn away as one of the men tries to reason with the officer, not wanting to witness the beatings likely to ensue as people with nowhere else to go are forced to stay out of sight. Others walking the street, from the construction workers to those in finer clothes holding up umbrellas against the rain, do much the same.

But there is a difference between them and yourself. They cannot change what is happening, while you can. You could reach out, force your will past the todstein spikes set into the revenant's heads and have them beat the officer to death. The wards inscribed wouldn't stop you, would be cut as easily as a knife through cloth.

Instead you continue walking, ignoring the cries of the desperate behind you as they flee. You have a mission to accomplish here, and it will be difficult enough without drawing attention to yourself in meaningless gestures. Or so you tell yourself, at any rate.

Your target will be near the metalworks, an unassuming block of concrete with little in the way of decoration. It's easier to defend, which is all that is important for the Kordian satellite. It's but one node in the grand necromantic web that covers the nation, and without it…

"…but the military assures us conflicts at the border colonies are nothing to worry about, and that with fresh bodies our brave necromancers at the front will see the empire victorious despite these setbacks," comes a voice from a radio set above the door of a shop selling such things. Wonders of vacuum tubes and electromagnetism bringing close voices from far away. "And now, a statement from the prime minister."

You stop dead in your tracks, turning toward the radio with wide eyes. Others on the street move around you, cursing you for a layabout, but you do not hear them. Your attention is focused wholly on the voice that comes out from the speakers.

"My fellow citizens," it begins, sibilant and almost musical in tone. It is a singer's voice, projecting powerfully and with confidence. "Many of you might believe your concerns beneath my notice, but rest assured nothing could be further from the truth. I come before you to say that all is well, and that preparations are coming apace for celebrating the Great Winter Festival next month."

It is your daughter's voice, but not her words. Kendra would never talk like this, sentences twisting like smoke. They are your grandfather's words, Aidric Dunstan's words, forced through her lips to assault your ears.

"There are some who have said we should take caution, encourage people to stay home and celebrate in a more private manner. To these cowards I demand silence!"

"Kendra…" you whisper, the tears coming as you slowly raise your hands to your face to block out the world, to block everything. It is little use. You take a shuddering breath, barely able to bring the air through a throat clenched so tight the skin threatens to break, and fall to your knees in an alleyway just off the street. "I'm so sorry."

"Our great nation faces threats from within and without, but we shall stand strong in the face of this adversity. Alba is without peer, our traditions and ingenuity allowing us to overcome any terroristic threat. The security within the capital and beyond will be managed by our fine men in uniform and bolstered with necromantic power. So please, my fellow citizens, rest assured the guiding hand of the Everlasting Senate has everything under control."

"I failed you… It should have been me."

Randall, comes my voice in your ear, the gentle presence over your shoulders like a warm breeze. You have to stand. There's still a chance to save her. There's still a chance to save your daughter.

"I shouldn't be alive. I shouldn't…"

Never say that! I shout, and my presence firms from wind to something more substantial. It pulls you to your feet, envelops you like a blanket, and the pressure lessens its terrible grip just enough to let you breathe. She needs you, Randall. Your daughter needs you. Stand, and I will stand with you. You don't have to do this alone.

With a gasp you lean against the wall, your heart pounding in your ears. It is a welcome reprieve, finally blocking out the sound of rain and people and most of all the radio as it moves on to reports of some sports game. Seconds turn into minutes, your grasp of time loose as you focus entirely on taking one breath, and then another.

When you finally come back to yourself the rain has stopped. The shadows have grown longer, the sun beginning to set, with lamplighter revenants going about their programmed duties to prepare the town for the night to come. With effort, your joints protesting after so much time locked in place, you push away from the wall and back out into the street.

"Thank you, Ellowyn."

You are always welcome.

Your destination, gray and drab in the coming darkness, looms before you in the distance. Inside is your target, an old soul forced into one who shared their blood in life. They will have knowledge, and with knowledge will come memory. Even more, it will create chaos. Confusion among our enemies can only benefit us, especially now there is so little time left.

The only question is how you will proceed.

[] With overwhelming force. Every moment counts, and you will not be delayed any longer.
[] With stealth. You can afford yourself this small luxury, to move into the best position before you strike.
 
What Have You Done? (by PapaShake)
Something I posted on another site and haven't posted here. It's a Naruto idea that came from a joke I heard. Hope you like.


What Have You Done?



Hiruzen Sarutobi was a smart man. He was the longest serving Hokage for a reason. He was called The Professor for a reason. He was known of and feared as The "Kami no Shinobi" for a good damn reason. Hiruzen Sarutobi was a very smart man.

However, even this legend needed a moment to process the information given to him by his most trusted physician, Dr. Kamo "Bones" Heboisha.

"Could you repeat that, Kamo-san," the Sandaime quietly requested.

"Which part?", the gravel voiced doctor asked.

"Why don't we start back at the beginning , hmm.", Hiruzen tiredly replied as a weary sigh escaped his wrinkled lips. He felt older than even his advanced years could warrant, but then, given the amount of stress laid back upon his shoulders six years ago from the sacrifice of his successor and the resultant dumpster fire of public relations that was the Fourth's legacy, one would really have to forgive him this small moment of self pity.

"Damn it Hiruzen, I'm a doctor, not a bloody secretary. If your gonna forget it the moment it leaves my mouth, then write it down, for kami's sake. Better yet, kill two birds with one stone and get that little brunette you've got manning the door in here. She can take notes for you and give me something better to look at than your saggy old ass!", the cantankerous old healer groused, "It's the least you could do for all the times I've sewn that leathery carcass of yours back together."

The third chuckled warmly at his ranting old friend. "Bones" was one of the very few people left in the village older than the Hokage himself, and despite his gruff nature, one of most caring souls he had ever encountered. An accomplished healer before Hiruzen even became genin, Bones had taken care of countless injuries to Hiruzen and his teammates through the years. During that time, he never missed an opportunity to lecture them on the idiocy of their chosen profession. The abrupt doctor hated needless bloodshed and would often say to them as he treated them 'Why would anyone choose to work in a field where the usual plan of action is to kill the other poor bastard before he kills you. I swear, shinobi are born crazy or stupid and then spend their short lives trying to be more of both!'.

Yep, Bones was a piece of work, alright. Brilliant doctor, adamant pacifist and a mouth that will have it's say, attending company be damned! Even the Fire Daimyo was not immune. 'I delivered the brat, I'll say what I damn well please! Besides, at my age it would be considered a mercy killing.' Not that there was any danger considering the Daimyo also had a great fondness for the good doctor. No, Bones was the one person Hiruzen could always trust to tell him the truth. Admittedly in the most stark possible terms, but the truth regardless. And in the world of shinobi , that was a precious commodity. Especially when the subject was a politically charged six year old. Resident jinchuriki, Uzumaki Naruto.

"Please old friend, humor me. Just hit the important parts." Hiruzen said.

"Fine, damn it. Take Two." Bones snipped to the Hokage's further amusement. "The patient, one Uzumaki Naruto, was placed under my care five days ago for evaluation of abnormal behavior reported by the boy's watchers. Why the boy is just now seeing me and who thought it was a good idea leave the boy in ANBU headquarters for six months, I don't have a clue!"

"We had no choice," the Sandaime said, almost apologetically, "After what happened at the orphanage, it was the only option given the boy's fragile state of mind."

The ancient physician, while not physically impressive with his average (for a man in his late eighties) build, close cropped grey hair, and slightly rumpled brown kimono, still possessed an aura that spoke of authority. And as Bones' steel grey eyes bore into him, Hiruzen could not help but feel like a child under the disappointed gaze of his father.

"That's not what I'm talking about. I agree the boy should have been taken from that hell hole, and I wouldn't piss on the ashes if you burned the place to the ground. I also agree that he should be somewhere safe, and it doesn't get much safer than "Spook Central" I suppose." Hiruzen smirked at Bones' nickname for ANBU HQ. "No, what I'm upset about is the fact it took you almost half a year to contact me about the boy. What I'm hurt about is that you thought those snot-nosed, bed-wetting, numbnuts you call medics were more qualified to deal with an imbalanced container than the personal physician of Mito Uzumaki. What I'm mad about is that those masked morons of yours showing him how to access his chakra. Then they proceed to teach an unstable six year old how to do some basic jutsu, specifically the Henge, the Kawarimi, and the Bunshin no Jutsu. Might as well give a pound of chocolate and a pot of coffee to a schizophrenic squirrel. No, no, that was simply not far enough for these geniuses, no. They had to go and top themselves by allowing the brat to oversee one of them doing the Kage Bunshin. I mean, what's the worst that could happen if a slightly psychotic six year old with a metric shit-ton of chakra were to learn the ONE seal needed for damn thing. It's not like the little blond tornado is gonna get bored and try to imitate the funny "Doggy-faced Man", right? Morons." As he said this, a certain Inu masked ANBU was sweating nervously in the corner of the office, trying hard to blend further into the background.

" Now, instead of one sugared up spider monkey, we've got two hundred sugared up spider monkeys. I am too old for this shit, Hiruzen.", Bones huffed.

The Sandaime shook his head slowly with a bemused look on his face. "Yes, I'm aware of the efforts of certain subordinates of mine going outside the mission parameters and have spoken to them at length. I assure you, they were only trying to bond with Naruto-chan, in hopes that the friendship would help his fragile mindset. And I'm sure," he says as he stares at the corner of the room Kakashi is standing, "it was never intended for Naruto-chan to learn the Kage Bunshin at such a young age."

At that moment, Kakashi was trying to squeeze further into the corner, thinking this would be a good time for a national emergency.

"When a normal person tries to bond with a child," Bones said, " they buy 'em some ice cream, maybe take then to the park. What does a ninja do? Teach the kid how to kill a man with a paper clip. I'm starting to believe little 'Ruto may be the only sane one amongst them."

Hiruzen let out a heavy breath. "Bones, please, if we could return to the main topic of discussion. As I've said, I'm aware of the chakra training, and it's not the point. What I want to know about is Naruto's mental state at the moment. Now, if we…,"

"NO!", Bones shouted while stomping his foot beneath his chair, causing the Hokage to raise his eyebrows in surprise. " That is the point, Hiruzen."

Those techniques," Bones continued, "especially the shadow clone jutsu have made a touchy situation exponentially worse. Let's see if I can put this in terms even Hatake could understand." He sniped.

"When a child is born, it, like most animals, begins the process of imprinting. It starts learning, more or less, how to be human. How to act like any other member of society, everything from communication to hygiene. This early childhood is crucial for development, and if something is missed during this time, it will NEVER be fully fixed. There will always be something missing, so to speak, in the child's behavior as he grows. "

"In 'Ruto's case," Bones continues, "he was placed in a tiny room with almost no human contact for the first five and a half years of his life. Besides the bare minimum contact for feeding and washing, his sole form intellectual input was a small television and basic cable. Even taught himself to change the channels. He learned to speak watching reruns of sitcoms and game shows. His only reference for social interaction was Pro Wrestling and Soap Operas. He was educated by the Science Channel and learned of God from TV Evangelists. Simply speaking, there is no Uzumaki Naruto. There is no real life for him. We are all part of another TV show to him and he believes he can simply change the channel when he get's bored."

"Now, that in itself is bad enough," Bones said," however, thanks to Wonder Mutt over there, this problem just got a whole lot stickier. In most children, when they learn to use their chakra, they start from a position of 'what can it do', meaning they have built in governors, or limiters of what they're physically and mentally capable of doing. This is important due to the imprinting process. By setting the boundaries, their own sub-conscious stunts their growth to a certain degree, but by doing so it allows for safer growth overall. This is necessary. It keeps all these chibi psychopaths from blowing out their own chakra coils in an attempt to do something they're not physically capable of. A circuit breaker, if you will. Normal. Healthy."

"Of course, there are exceptions to every rule. Occasionally you get the young prodigy that pushes the envelope further than their peers. Take Wonder Mutt , (the rain clouds deepen over Kakashi as he realizes that name is staying) or that freaky, little Uchiha zombie,.."

"Itachi." Sarutobi interjects.

"Whatever." Bones growls back, "Little bastard gives me the creeps. Anyway, those two were able to achieve things no one at their age should be able to, due to these inhibitors. They instinctually push past these barriers while their bodies adapt to the stresses and allow growth at an accelerated rate. However, keep in mind, accelerated - not exponential. They still conform to certain rules. Remember, this is Kami's game and everybody has to follow the rules. Everybody." He emphasized with a fist to Sarutobi's desk.

The look on Bones' face was not missed by anyone in the room. An already ancient man seemed to age further and had an expression that wavered between awe and denial. "At least," the good doctor continues, "everybody but 'Ruto."

"What does that mean, Kamo-san? Why would Naruto be any different." The Third ask. He had become nervous at the change in Bones' demeanor and almost dreaded the forthcoming answer.

Dr. Heboisha took a long drink from his sake saucer and slowly placed it back on the Sandaime's desk. "As I told you," he began, " most children begin with " what can it do" and crawl forward. Naruto, on the other hand, was raised without that grounding in reality. Thanks to his boob-tube upbringing and his almost unlimited source of chakra, he asks " what can't it do" , sprints forward and proceeds piss on the very rules the rest of us are shackled with."

A bewildered Hokage wrinkles his brow in thought, " I'm afraid I don't follow."

Bones cackles lightly, "Of course you don't," he croaks, " you think in the same three dimensions the rest of us do. 'Ruto is unique. He is a perfect storm of incredible genetics, bijuu chakra, heartbreaking childhood and absolute belief."

"In just the few days I've known him, I've come to see him as my own. You can't help but be drawn in by the smiling little ball of sunshine and insanity. But, he scares even me, Hiruzen," he finished softly.

The Hokage raised a graying eyebrow at that last bit. "Surely you're not afraid of the seal being weakened,. Jiraiya has looked at…"

"Nothing to do with the damn fox!" Bones injected forcefully, "A 50 meter murderous chakra construct bent on world destruction I can wrap my mind around. A six year old chakra generator with a questionable grasp on reality , a terrifying ability to bend said concept to his will and absolutely NO restraint to do so at any time for his own amusement scares the piss out of me. I'm not afraid of dying, hell, it'll be the first real vacation I ever got. But the thought of being trapped forever in a world of Ruto's making…"

"That's the part I'm not following," the Hokage interrupted, "what is this ability that has you so wound up? How dangerous could it be?"

An uncomfortable silence descended on the office as the aged healer simply stared out the window at the slowly fading light of day. When he finally spoke, it was with a soft and somewhat haunted tone.

"You ever wonder where God came from?" Understanding the obvious rhetorical nature of the question, no one answered and Bones continued. "Did He develop over time or just wake up one morning and fall into divinity. I only ask because that's what I wonder every time I watch Ruto "play" with the world around him. You could compare it to the Kurama clan's Genjutsu techniques, in as much as you could compare a tin butter knife to a masterwork katana. They create lifelike illusions that fool the person into believing what the Kurama wish them to, illusions so realistic that they can physically affect the victim to certain degree and, in the cases of certain clan prodigies, to an even more devastating degree. But still, these are just illusions. Incredible illusions, but illusions nonetheless."

"Naruto Uzumaki, however, is no illusionist." As Bones spoke, his gray eyes inferred a mix of childlike wonder and an ancient fear, equally calming and upsetting. "No," he shakes his head slowly "Naruto's chakra saturates everything around him, both inanimate and living, and injects itself. It's not painful and unless told so, you would never be aware. It's really insidious that way. There is no way we know of to stop it, with jutsu or seal. It imprints itself into everything but still remains HIS. This is the key. Because the chakra around him now belongs to both him and the those around him, he exerts his will upon it, and changes it to his desire. Now you might think this is impossible, I too felt that way, at first. But remember what we said about his development. If two ninja of equal chakra levels and ability were given a challenge to Kawarimi with the same object at the same time, all other things being equal, the ninja with the greatest WILL would succeed. In Naruto's case, he has more chakra than any thirty ninja in this village combined and one other key ingredient, absolute belief. No doubt, no fear and an unshakable will. To stop him from changing his environment, and subsequently you, to his whim would require not only equal or greater chakra levels but even greater willpower. And once he decides to change things, there is no real limit to what changes he can affect."


The other's present inside the Hokage's office grew pale with that statement.


"In essence, by giving him access to his chakra, those stupid spooks have given an insanely powerful, utterly believing, and firmly convinced of his own worldview - chibi-kami - the one thing you should never trust to a child."


"The remote control."


Just an idea I have been playing with. Opens a lot of avenues for plots and twists and funny business. -ShakePapa
 
This contest seems like a great idea, but I am torn with indecision. Should I write a LitRPG apocalypse story about a landlord or try to write a planquest set in Exalted where you play as a Hearteater.
 
Small Things (by ScottotheUnwise)
Small Things

"Run!" The voice managed to be familiar and at the same time pitched high, like a permanent helium level as it shrieked.

"No! Ride!!" The sound of thumping on the ground made her look back in horror as I pulled even with her and yanked her up on the back of my trusty –okay I trusted him as far as I could throw him– steed.

Sticky sap held me to his back, the wide flat area plenty big enough for her to cower behind me.

Emma realized she was clinging and tried for a moment being aloof, until she almost fell off. Her balance restored itself as I commanded our mount to stop, reorient to the right and charge perpendicular to the giant chasing the sounds of our movement.

Cats.

Or at least one right now.

"Why am I even here?!" She screamed, holding my shoulder again, almost pulling off my scrounged garment. It was made from a folded flap of material, incredibly smooth –well it is silk– cut from her blouse. Or at least the blouse she was wearing when I –er, we– triggered.

"You invited yourself to this party, you smarmy git!"

She growled, but hung on, the clasp of her earring around her waistline clanging off the same I was wearing. It wasn't a comfortable look but we could work the hooks on them to hold the silk ponchos in place. The less said about the diapers made from cotton panties the better. Stuck next to me with a bit of web was a plastic toothpick, some more material from our blouses, extra diapers (I was on my period, sue me) and a small piece of glass I'd used to cut the stuff.

"I didn't do…" She gestured wildly, "THIS!"

I guided our steed into the heavier weeds around the gigantic –to us– structure. We scooted between old rusty cans and discards, through a chain link fence and paused as our mount needed a rest.

"How?" She swallowed. "How do you know it won't eat us?"

I looked at her. "You didn't see the spider wrap me half up and stop just short of biting?"

For just a moment she slipped back into the self of years gone by. "Did it spit you out because you taste bad?"

I had to laugh a moment. Just as high pitched as her own voice. I reached to adjust glasses that weren't on my nose.

She huffed now. "Really? Flicking me off!?"

"Psshaw. If I was flicking you off, I would use BOTH hands."

The cat eyes watched.



She came back to their hidey-hole in the docks and found… no one.

"The fuck?" Sophia Hess stomped around. "I was gone for fucking minutes."

She'd had a text on her phone, forwarded from her Ward phone by an app since she'd left the other device at home. It said there was activity near the docks, to stay clear. She'd left Emma watching over their captive, trussed up like a pig.

Then she spotted the jumble of ropes. She'd learned some interesting knots from good old mom's magazines –ones to underline worthlessness. She'd brought along a crop to… nevermind that. There, in the shadows. There was the beanpole's jeans, her top… and bra? Emma's pants and blouse.

Kinky.

And then she noted a tear in the silk blouse, holes in the cotton briefs. Both girls were gone. And someone had taken trophies.

Fuckity fuck.

She stepped back and crushed the glasses.

Crap.

Sophia looked at the area again, now with the eyes of a crime scene investigator. It was one of the only interesting subjects the PRT had deigned to let her study in the coursework they had online. Something to pass the time on quiet console days.

She would help shape the narrative– Emma and Taylor had snuck off here to explore aspects of budding sexuality. Totally throwing red under the bus, but she'd live if they found her. Unless she 'spilled' and Sophia would have to kill her.

Someone found them and took them. With very little struggle. Naked? No other prints in the dirt. Emma's phone lay there unused, so no tracking.

Fuck. She needed to call this in.

"PRT support line… Oh hello, are you in danger?"

"I'm secure, alone but there is a problem. I will need the police on this…"

"Do tell." The voice didn't sound like a certain Canadian Tinker, but she often ran call centers for the PRT to cover costs.
 
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To the Esteemed Grand General of the Second Army (by Goob)
I wrote this a a couple weeks ago (with significant edits made today) and I enjoy how it serves both as a standalone short story and a potential prologue/chapter 0 for a full original work.



To the Esteemed Grand General of the Second Army,

Blood overflows the rivers of the North. An invasion force of unknown allegiance and size has found itself in our empire and has begun to raze its towns and slaughter its citizens. How the guards of our borders and coasts have let pass an army great enough to break the fortress of Terrikan within only a few days I do not know, but they shall come upon us soon.

We only became aware of this incursion because of a ceasing of lumber shipments from Harran, a port town to our north. When I sent a scout to inquire about the problem, they did not return and I was forced to send another, who came back with reports of a ghost town populated only with hundreds of dismembered corpses of soldiers and civilians, men and women, young and old.

The scout seemed disturbed, and I must admit I shared in his fear when he told me the buildings and the contents within were unscathed. Even the stocks of food, invaluable to any force, were untouched. What sort of barbarous fiends would even think to do such a thing, and not even dispose of the corpses, leaving them to rot in the streets? It only increased my worries when they also informed me that they could not identify any fallen enemies on the town's streets. Perhaps they were diligent in burying their own, but I find it unlikely that not one man would've been missed in the sea of bodies they must've picked through.

I was hopeful for information when a town nearer to us fell and we received refugees fleeing from the slaughter, but their reports were nonsensical, and I could get nothing of use out of them. War addles the mind, I suppose. As for my own theory on the invaders, I suspect it to be those wicked Nahashenee from the sea. They likely landed in some obscure cove and began their brutal path of destruction, as they have before. I'll have you know that they will regret angering our great empire for generations to come, once we repel this army of theirs from our lands and take the fight to them.

Of course, we shall require your help. We hope to catch them up in a lengthy siege; they have not faced a task as daunting as seizing the Bulwark of the North, Haukkanan. Our stores are plentiful, soldiers hardy as lions and trickeries many. We shall not fall as easily as Terrikan. If the forces of the Second Army could strike unexpectedly, we could crush their forces between your hammer and our anvil. Of course, as General, I shall leave the specific tactics of your own army up to you.

I shall attempt to stay in contact. Even in a siege, we have many ways to get messages out to our allies. I shall also disclose a way for your messengers to get inside the city, in the case our enemies have already arrived…


Barruth Jaran, Lordbreaker and the Esteemed Grand General of the Second Army, read over the creased and crumpled letter once more, as he had many times in the days since he received the letter. It was from an associate of his, the Duke of Haukkland, and it troubled him deeply. What it implied seemed impossible: an army, sneaking into the North and wreaking havoc?

This was knowledge that should've arrived at the Grand General's desk within a day or two of its arrival, not after more than a week or possibly even more. No army large enough could possibly be that subtle, especially with the mass slaughter the Duke had said was occurring. He rubbed his chin, scruffy after many days of travel. He also found the theory of these mysterious invaders being the Nahashenee to be unlikely. Not only did they rarely go far from the coast, but they had suffered an intense civil war a mere year ago and could not fathomably muster an army on the scale the Duke described.

But, who then? Diplomatically, the Empire of Beddarre was warm with its neighbors besides the occasional border dispute here or there, and it couldn't have possibly come from within the empire itself. After all, the North was well-known to be the most loyal part of the empire, and the Duke was trustworthy enough to discard the idea of them lying for some ulterior motive.

The Grand General grumbled in frustration as he continued to stare at the letter, the rocking and bumping of the wagon he sat inside ignored as he tried to piece the puzzle together. If only the Duke had described what those refugees had said instead of merely brushing it off as folly… the General had dealt with many such asylum seekers, and while they were often war-addled as the Duke described, few ever truly meant to lie.
Barruth scoffed and folded the letter back up. Whoever was assaulting the Empire would become clear once they had reached Haukkanan, only a day's march away. They would be crushed under the General's spears and swords just as the Lord's Rebellion in the South had years prior.

The General leapt out of the wagon and began to walk beside it. To both his sides were hundreds of his finest soldiers, the elite companies spearheading the miles-long column of the greatest army on the planet, with Barruth being the star that led them. A veritable sea of blades, points, shields and armor, all within capable hands and all at his command. If he wished, The General could become the safest man on the planet, with so many bodyguards that it took an entire train of wagons to feed them all.

The hills of the North that they traveled across were overcast with a sea of gray clouds, promising to quench the cracked ground of its thirst sometime soon. But for now, the grass and the dust it clung to remained as dry as a peaceful death.

Across one of the small dips created by these hills, Barruth noticed a lone figure. They were far enough away that Barruth could only guess that they were a man clothed in a red uniform and carrying a sword. The general's own troops mostly wore a drab olive color to identify themselves, immediately raising suspicions about this odd figure's allegiance- though Barruth knew no land that used such colors.

The General raised one hand and yelled a booming "HALT!" out to all that could hear. His soldiers, well trained, did as he ordered, but still a murmur went through their ranks. One man, unidentified and alone, should not be enough to make an entire army stop.

A feeling clawing at the General's heart told him otherwise, and he was determined to find out why. The figure was the only one to ignore the General's orders as they slowly shuffled down the hill they stood upon, straight towards the army before them.

"Identify yourself!" He called out, his voice echoing over the hills. An equally confident voice replied.
"I am but a man," a masculine voice answered, voice plain. Ignoring the vague answer, the General asked another question
"Where do you arrive from?"
"I come from the fortress of Haukkanan," they replied. "It has fallen." Another murmur rippled through the army. It was impossible. Haukkanan should've taken months, years even to collapse, not mere days.
"Who do you pledge yourself to, you who are but a man?" The general himself, usually a direct and decisive man, questioned himself. Had he placed too much importance on some lone traveler, irrelevant to the current war?
The man simply replied, "I serve only myself."
"No one serves themselves alone. Have you no king? No family? No people to rule over?"
"No." The man said. He was halfway down his hill by now, sword leaving a gouge in the parched earth behind him.
"What has occurred in Haukkanan, then?"
"I have destroyed it," the man said, voice still calm despite his claim.
"Hah! That I doubt. If you have taken the Bulwark of the North, who did you use to storm its walls, kill its defenders, and seize its keep? Where is your army?"
Only this question was enough to finally get the man to stop, looking directly at the general for the first time, before asking their own question.
"Army?"

Jaran turned to the nearest contingent of his finest archers. "Kill him." he said, knuckles white as he clutched the hilt of his sword. The archers hesitated only for a moment, doubt clear in their eyes; but they were loyal. Forty arrows flew only moments later, whistling through the air.

Not one hit their mark. About half missed entirely- understandable from this distance, even for archers of such skill- but the ones that should've skewered the man instead seemed to have shattered midair in an explosion of wood and a flash of metal. The man seemed utterly unharmed. The worried mumblings of the army grew louder while the man gave no more reaction to the attempt on his life, continuing to shuffle forward towards the General and his army. He was at the trough of the two hills now, and beginning to climb.

Barruth could see the man more clearly now, and finally the Lordbreaker realized that the dark red color of the uniform he wore covered not just his legs, torso, and arms, as fitting for clothing, but also his hands, his neck, his feet, his sword, and much of his face.

It certainly wasn't dye.

The General took a step back at the realization, and repeated his earlier sentiment:
"KILL HIM!" he cried, and stumbled backwards, back towards the wagon from which he had emerged. He heard battle cries behind him as his men charged. It was only one man, one man, versus an army. He didn't stand a chance.

For some strange reason, the General didn't believe it when he told himself. He was going to fight- the Lordbreaker was no coward- but there must be a warning, somewhere, of what he began to see as waves of soldiers crashed into the 'man.' He leapt back into the wagon and fumbled with an inkpot, quill, and piece of parchment, rushing a message down onto the page which would soon be given to a fleet-footed messenger, and rushed off away from the encroaching dread.

By the time it reached its intended recipient, it would also be adorned with splatters of blood.

To someone with power,

A demon has come to our lands. It slaughters endlessly with its sword, too long for a respectable warrior. It shows no mercy. It kills but cannot be killed, as is the righteous way of things. It claims to be a man but, for these reasons, I cannot believe it.

I am not sure it can be stopped, or appeased, or imprisoned, or escaped from. I do not know if it even has a goal beyond senseless murder; and unfortunately, I do not believe I shall be in a state to ask before this letter reaches anywhere of significance.

I cannot help you now.
Good luck.

Barruth Jaran, Esteemed General of the Second Army
 
The End of a New Beginning (by RealOtto)

November 12, 1928

"As a Commonwealth general has very truly said, the Imperial Army was 'stabbed in the back'… Like Siegfried, stricken down by the treacherous spear of savage Hagen, our weary front collapsed."
General Johannes Ludwig von Hildenburg, October 1928


(Picture of Das Imperial Reichstag in ruins.)

Ruble upon ruble with craters of different shapes and sizes – cracks and pebbles that strewn around here and there. The devastation in the City of Berun demoralises all who see it, and all who once lived and still live in the capital of the disunited Empire. The buildings that once proudly displayed the Imperial Eagle, are all in tatters, burnt for warmth by its civilians, and used as toilet paper with the commodity either gone away or joined the list of rare items in the war torn country.

The City of Berun is a great example to any observers, its current state can be seen across the splintered Empire.

It was from this morbid scenery of the once symbol of the Rise of Das Reich that one woke up, in what remains to be the General Hospital that once stood proudly in Berun like the many other buildings before the end of their splendour..



A sudden shock of a thousand needles or more puncturing my head caused me to jolt, my heart racing as the headache that ruptured my mind set my already burning world ablaze..light shining into my widened eyes.

I couldn't help it, with my senses overflowing like melted chocolate in an ice cream sundae, I swiftly felt the embers of the subconscious mind taking fullforth, away from the pain I could imagine may be what the soldiers of the Rhine Stalemate felt..



There are some things that shouldn't make sense – even in the world of mages, no matter how rare they are – and I can safely say this is one of them.

Different from my first awakening, I could feel a sense of calmness welcoming the return of my consciousness to the forefront of the mind after the receding of my subconscious. My eyes open to finally spectate the view of the room – an old-fashioned hospital room from what I can tell – with great interest in wondering where I am.

My sense of wonder for the environment satisfied for the moment, I look down to where I am laying, only to end up with a shock with a chill of the coldest winters I've faced before accumulated down my spine.

While I may be one of the shortest of my grade by the time I graduated a few weeks ago, I didn't remember being slightly shorter, especially wearing what seems to be a military uniform cut open with bandage-

Wait..bandages?

Without noticing, I moved my hand onto the bandage from what I can see covers the chest area of what I can reasonably think of as my new body. Upon impact I hold a grimace on my face as a dull phantom pain echoes throughout my nerves, leaving me to pull back from the now confirmed injury.

This made me curious how I even managed to get myself injured quite badly, not to mention how I was even hurt in the first place. From what I could remember, I was already heading back to my bedroom to take a kip for the night, and fell asleep on my bed. However, waking up in this unknown but generally identifiable place made me think of possible interventions from a third-party: divine or not.

Thinking about it made my eyes narrow, a sense of paranoia and adrenaline rise sharpened my senses to a greater focus. I look around the room with a keener eye at anything, from the furniture up to even the most unassuming object. It was when I looked upon a clock on the wall with its movement stopped, not even the smallest needle moved.

Once that detail was known to me, I became befuddled by its freeze. I could only rationalise the clock may be broken or run out of batteries..or, for some reason or another, time was stopped..

Usually I'd make that solution as a joke..however.. I thought to myself with scrunched eyebrows with a still narrowed look in my eyes. I wouldn't be surprised something on the scale of the supernatural had occurred..besides, I didn't wake up to find my bedroom..

"Is it a good time to appear?"

I jumped – a spike of adrenaline and heart beats following the movement – with a great startle. Was it simply something out of my imagination? The fact a random voice spoke out somewhere and not a single soul except mine was in the room became quite troubling..

It's either my memories playing the part..or..

"Well..at least you didn't completely forget about me..unlike another unpleasant soul I've met before."

Yep, not imagining things. I internally noted as I looked around the room once more, only to see a person that I was quite sure wasn't there earlier looking at me with a smile of happiness.

"Hello there!" The person waved cheerfully. "Here I am! I've been watching your journey for some time now!"

God? I thought to myself in awe with my adrenaline and paranoia increasing..only by a little.

"It's nice to see a faithful like you!..no matter how unorthodox you are.." He muttered quietly at the end, but he refocuses. "Regardless..I need your help."

Help? I thought to myself with wonder swindling through my eyes. It wasn't everyday God, or anyone of the Divine, would request for help..but what do they need help for?

"A..miscalculation of sorts.." He admitted in what seemed to be a sheepish tone. "I have heard your wishes – and perhaps ambition – while I was looking in your original world..and found them to be right for this situation..not to mention to rein down a certain someone as well."

Really? I asked in my thoughts with a hearted feeling in my chest, of warmth and excitement at the thought of attempting to do something I've wished for a while..but which one was he alluding to?

"That is all I need for you to do." He answered, not bothering to specify. "This will be a great undertaking, for there is no such thing as too lucky and unlucky..Although I believe I can give you help with new knowledge." He places a hand on my head.

All at once, my head started to hurt in ways I could not comprehend – nevermind that I couldn't even think at any time. All I can feel is the rising heat across the top of my head, an indecipherable flowing of thoughts and other forms of knowledge, my head muscles and other nerves felt as if they were overloaded.

Compared to my earlier headache, this is worse.

As quickly as it came, the headache receded – as if it were healed instantly by an external force (in which description I would internalise to also be a work of God.) I sag back to the hospital bed I am on with a relief of once held breath, its tension escaping away with the reduction of the sudden pain my head had gone through.

"I have given you the knowledge of hidden treasures and gold The Empire had looted away from the cities of Francois up to Moscou." He tells me with great seriousness in his voice, reciprocated with his facial expression of absolute stern. "You may not need it now, and the days and weeks later..however, I'd seek it if your dreams are to be in fruition."

"I..thank you God." I spoke aloud this time, my voice speaking volumes of my gratitude at the gift I was given from the Divine being. "I will do as you ask..as I sought to them too..however, who is it I am tasked to 'rein in', to put it in your own words." I ask with curiosity tingling through my tone.

Immediately, God's face soured on that particular topic – making me wonder who caught his attention in such a negative light that darkens his face.

"..That particular mess of a person is one you – or rather your lifetime here – have met before..her name is Tanya Degurechaff..like I said, you may know of her." The being replied with a tired look and sound in his answer.

For reasons unknown to me, I feel a surge of anger rising and flowing through me. It was then that memories I was sure did not belong to me went to the forefront of my mind. A particular memory that..

"The girl that hides her true feelings like other people's money?" I retorted with a slight question, barely constrained by anger speaking through my voice. "Why anyone thought she was an innocent child is beyond me."

"Yes." God cut in before I could continue a tirade that was bolstered with my snark. "She..has caused trouble.." He coughs uncomfortably before continuing. "Your job – as both you and I mentioned three times – is to rein her in from the worst compulsions she can perform. However, that will be secondary to your primary goal."

During his talk, I managed to swiftly – by imagining the feelings of anger moving from the centre of my chest, all through to my entire body, and occurring in cycles – lose my anger and contain it. I couldn't believe that a child (ignoring that I am the same age as her biologically) could actually fool my superiors in the military.

I could see that, with the right combination and if played correctly along with the situation, a young child could theoretically manipulate the hearts of adults into going along their way-but I couldn't help but think it absurd and, quite frankly, concerning. The trope may be fiction, but the idea has to have some kind of origin of their existence..

'I'm getting ahead of myself.' I thought to myself as I cast my earlier thoughts into the abyss, not willing to even continue the rabbit hole.

I was shaken out of my thoughts as my mind was finally drawn back to the conversation.

"..and that was all that needed to be discussed." God finished the conversation as he turned around to face the wall."Like to all my faithful and non-faithful believers, I will meet you again someday..never forget to pray."

Right before my eyes, a spectacle of a bright light of colours reaching either white or yellow impacts my sight, causing me to quickly close my vision at the sudden assault on my optics. No sounds were made – except of the rustlings of the covers, blanket, and pillow of the hospital bed I was on by my flinch of pain.

After a moment or two of silence – aside from the creaking of the bed – the light went down from its brightness, this wait and reduction of luminosity allowed me to open my eyes to see the Divine being was gone from my sight. The only form of glowing light was from the full moon out from the window.

I sag my body right on the bed, my head reaching the pillow with a surprising softness, and begin to think about the day and night I've just had. The series of shocking events is becoming much more prevalent with more time given towards reviewing the basics of them. From my first awakening all the way to the now..

'It's getting late..' I thought to myself with a yawn, my eyes at times involuntarily closing out of sheer sleepiness before forcing them to open again.

My last thoughts as the night reaches its apex – as I lie on the hospital bed – were the still shocking revelations of being given the green light to attempt to make the world a better place, regardless if this new world were to be different from the one I know.

Besides, if the world is unfair..then why not make it fair?



A Fanfiction Idea that later became its own chapter made a week ago with some major revisions over the following days up to this morning, to make this have context as it is only one chapter: This is an AU of a Post-War Youjo Senki.

I would like some feedback if it can be given please. (This is my Second Draft, after all.)

The Story is temporarily called: The End of a New Beginning
 
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This War of Ours (by OperationRubix)
Here is the first chapter for my ace combat fan fiction, This War of Ours.

Operation: Umbrella
Location: North Osea

"Follow this spearhead. The bombers are in front of me.." - Mao


Weather forecasts say to expect heavy rain across North Osea. However, the sun bakes the ground, with no clouds to provide cover from its ray. So people walk out onto the street in summer clothing, discussing weekend plans and grocery shopping without an umbrella in hand. People only scramble for their umbrellas when the thunderstorm rides on top of them, and the rain would have soaked them by that point.

NNNRRRRRRNNNNN NNNRRRRRRNNNNN Air raid sirens echo through the bustling streets as a swarm of Erusean drones approaches the city. Anti-aircraft missiles launch in pairs of two from a nearby military base. The leading drones explode into black smoke, but more take their place as the swarm flies evasively toward their target. At the desired range, they open their bellies. Missiles swirl gracefully around and between pillars of 35mm autocannon shells, then dive onto the self-propelled anti-aircraft guns (SPAA) like hail. One by one, the anti-aircraft missile pods, their accompanying radar array and SPAAs blossom into orange flowers from their black carcasses. The drones perform a chandelle to the left and right to make way for the 'rain.' Three squadrons of Tu-160 Blackjack, flying in a diamond formation, open their bomb bay doors on top of the defenseless base. Without their umbrella, Osean army personnel and their mightly armored vehicles bathed in 1500 kg precision guide bombs unprotected from the elements. On the ground, Osea soldiers listen to their fellow comrades' prayers, their commander's orders, the chaotic footsteps of routing men and the deafening whistle of those munitions before… impact!
When the rain clouds pass away, every building, equipment and even ground is soaked in orange flames, black smoke, debris and the blood of the fallen. These rain clouds have already moved past the first line of North Osea's aerial defense and are conversing on radar stations, military airfields and strategic depots within what remains of Osea's broken Umbrella.

"Melee Squadron, take off. We got enemy bombers inbound!"
"Polearm flight, head off to the runway. Hurry!"

An F-14D Super Tomcat and a Shen Yang J-16 taxi onto the runway side by side. Behind them in the waiting area, ground crews make their final double checks on a Shen Yang J-15B, a YF-23 Black Widow II and an F-15C Eagle. The pilots of the F-14D and J-16 test their combat flaps, rudder and aileron one final time before calling the control tower.

"This is Ji. Ready for take-off."
"This is Ge. Ready for take-off. "
"Ji, Ge, You are clear for take off. Link up with Tactician "
"Got it, Control. Wish us luck. Out."

The twin thrusters on the super tomcat shove the 35 tons metal bird forward along the tarmac. The J-16 follows closely behind, splitting out blue flames from the back of its thrusters. When the front wheel of both planes leave the ground, the J-15B and YF-23 II side onto the runway. Within three minutes, all members of Polearm Flight are in the air in a V formation, with Ji at the center of the V, in front of everyone.

"Roll call, Polearm Flight, check check."
"This is Ge. To your right, Tomboy." The J-16 shakes its wingtips after the transmission.
"This is Qiang. I'm on your left." Ji looks to his left and sees the pilot of the J-15B waving at him.
"This is Chan Zhang. I'm in the left corner, Tomboy." The YF-23's pilot responds next.
"This is Mao. I'm in the right corner, Tomboy." The F-15C performs an aileron roll while staying in formation.

"Polearm Flight. Status report."
"All pilots present, Dress Sword."
"Good sh*t. Maintain course, Tomboy. I mean Ji. Sorry." Melee Squadron's leader ends the transmission, satisfied.

"What a stupid nickname," Ji complains through the radio jokingly.
"Think about it, Ji. You are a boy in a Tomcat." Mao giggles at Ji's complaint. "If there is someone who should complain, that would be me. Why is my nickname Fluffy?"
"Fake Shen Zhou! Twinky!" Chan Zhang cuts into the conversation, "If you know your Chinese, you would have known why."
"The kettle is calling the pot black. If you were a pure-blooded Shen Zhou, you would be in one of these Shen Yangs, Monk." Qiang sarcastically mocks Chan Zhang for 'bullying' Mao. "Can't read the Chinese control panel? Eh?"
"But Ji uses an Osean plane, and we call agree that he's a pure-blooded Shen Zhou." Chan Zhang claps back at Qiang, "What is this double standard, Half Breed? Lmfao."
"Tomboy has flown Shen Yangs before in the IUN. When you were drawing dragoons in your mother's car after a shot of whiskey, Ji and I were sending AAMs up Free Erusea pilots' rear end, high on adrenaline and amphetamine." Ge scoffs at Chan Zhang's excuse, chuckling as he remembers the old days. "Ain't I right, Tomboy?"
"Of course. You prehistoric Fossil."

"Sorry to interrupt, boys." An unknown male voice forces itself into Polearm Flight's radio chatter. "I'm Tactician. I will be your AWACS until you are transferred or die."
"Talking about dying while alive is bad luck, Tactician. Anyway, what's the mission?"
"I'm certain you will live, Ji. It's a simple mission. Take out the bombers heading toward our airfield. If those assholes make it through, they will tear apart our base and put a hole that leaks more than when I'm done with your mother in our fuel supply."
"Put some soap in your mouth, Tactican."
"You can try once we return. I promise I will tear you a new asshole. I'm sending you their location on the radar. Your flight goes after the third group."
"Copy that. Out."

Polearm Flight breaks off from the main squadron, turning southeast towards their target. When approaching the interception point, all pilots lost contact with the enemy formation on their radar.
Adding to the trouble, the area they will be fighting is currently cloudy with a chance for rain.

"They have a Growler in their mix?" Qiang scans the horizon for any signs of hostile aircraft.
"I'm catching a blip of them to our northwest, 80 degrees." Ji glues his eyes to his radar screen.
"Ah. I see them." Mao breaks formation and flies in front of Ji, speeding ahead by himself.
"Where?"
"Follow this spearhead. The bombers are in front of me."
"K. All pilots. Weapons free. We are hunting."

Following Mao, Polearm Flight found themselves approaching the enemy formation from their 4 o'clock direction. Thanks to his powerful radar, Ji is able to lock onto the leading Blackjacks in the bomber formation. At the same time, the other pilots have their sights locked on a few fighters at the rear of the formation. Ji waits for his other wingmen to get into range for their radars to lock on. At the last moment, an Erusea pilot in a Mig-29 spots them and radios the other fighters of the approaching attackers. However, it is too little, too late.

"Fox three." Ji clicks on his click on the red trigger on their central stick and fires off four AIM-54 Phoenix missiles at bomber formation. It zips past the bewildered escorts and detonates against the leading flight of blackjacks. None of them survive; either their fuselage snaps from 60 kgs of explosives or one of their sweep wings gets torn off by the blast. Mao and Qiang fire next. Switching to their 6AAMs and 4AAMs, they lock onto two flights of fighters before pressing the trigger.

"Scratch 2, you're up, Ge," Mao announces through the intercom.
"Scratch 1. Unlucky."
"Skill issue. Watch this."

Ge and Chan Zhang line up their 4AAMS and press the trigger. The eight missiles swirl through the grey sky before detonating against six flighters, downing four of them. With ⅓ of their bombers left and about half their interceptors remaining, the Erusean forces begin their counterattack. The remaining escorts perform Immelmann turns and face their Polearm Flight in a head-on duel. Two Eruseans on each Osean. They believed they had the upper hand. Ji proves the fighters wanting to pick a fight with him wrong with two additional phoenixes. Their planes explode into a fireball just as they begin their approach.

"Really going to fly in a straight line while waiting for missile lock?" Mao and Qiang switch to guns. The autocannons on their J-15B and F-15C spring to life, showering the attackers in a hail of high explosive ordinance. The two Erusean F-15Es dueling Mao tumble out of the sky like bricks. Their bodies were riddled with fist size holes. The two Mig-29As facing Qiang dive down to avoid the autocannon fire. Qiang followed suit, eagerly biting onto both their tails.

"Dash and Splash. Chan Zhang. Remember what I taught you?" Ge pushes his throttle to the max, then starts swinging his aircraft evasively.

"No need. I have my ways." Chan Zhang flips his plane upside down and performs half of an outside turn. He wiggles the rear of his YF-23 at his Erusean opponents.

"Ah. You are doing your bait loop." Ge's comments are interrupted by his voice warning system (VWS) screaming the word "missile" repeatedly in his ear. He sees four missiles approaching from his right side and left side. Two other Erusean pilots want to take a swing at the Ge. Without delay, he banks his ride into a high G maneuver and drops chaff. He dodges six of the eight missiles. The impact of the missiles shakes his plane as he starts succumbing to the Gs. The VWS continuously reminds him that he's about to stall. Just in the nick of time, he pulls out of the turn and punishes the Erusea fights for overshooting with another salvo of 6AAMs. He downs two of them and critically wounds the other two. Switching to regular missiles, he fires one additional salvo of two at the tailing Eruseas, who overshot him. In a ball of flames, one of the hurt Erusean Su-27 tumbles toward the ground.

"Not bad for an old man like you." Chan Zhang congratulates Ge as his VMS screeches in monotone as four missiles approach his rear. "Look at this. My turn." Chan Zhang pulls up into a steep climb. Using his speed, he shakes two of them. During the climb, he drops chaff to distract the remaining missiles, but they are locked onto his 'forbidden heat source' and will not let go matter what.
"Oh shit!" Chan Zhang rolls his plane over before descending into a sharp drive toward his attacker. The two missiles chasing him slide right behind his wing and detonate harmlessly nearby. His plane took a bit of damage from the shrapnel, but nothing damning.

"Sup B*tches!" Chan Zhang fires his 4AAMs into the hostile aircraft. He takes out one of them at the start of his dive. At speeds he is diving at, he would outrun his own missiles. He could feel his eyeballs compressing against the back of his skull and blood retreating up his bloodstream.
"Switching to guns." The YF-23 lets off a long burst toward the hostile aircraft. The 20mm shells from his Vulcan shred the Erusea fighter's cockpit and leaves it a flying phantom when Chan Zhang crosses paths with it in his dive.

"All right, boys. It's Turkey shooting time." Just after Ji makes his announcement, his VWS screams that a missile is locked onto him. He tries to evade, but the two missiles strike his engine. Now his tomcat was limping on one engine. The other members of Polearm Flight received the same treatment, with varying levels of success in evading the damage.

"Far East Squadron. Dere flight. Sorry, we late." A female voice pieces Ji's headset. He can hear the Erusean cheering. 'We are f*cked!' Ji thought to himself as he finally put a callsign onto the voice. Dere Flight, Mayadere, Veteran of the First Continental War, their death.
 
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