[SI,Naruto,NaNoWriMo] Go! Unashamed Reincarnation Protagonist Sakura!

Being fair, the issue is not so much about changing in itself but making things worse, which is particularly relevant in Naruto, because ultimately things did end well but it took a lot of incredibly lucky breaks at key moments that can get butterflied away by the SI. As such, a bit of panic about fucking up the "good end" is perfectly appropriate, specially if the SI is the type to take the weight of the world on their shoulders.
Yeah, if you're an idiot and try to do everything yourself. You see a lot of SIs do this, and then break down.

Hiruzen and Jiraya want to save the world, and would happily take charge, using their power, political power, and better knowledge of the world to see everything through to completion. They both also love Naruto and would want him to succeed.

It's not so much the changing of events that causes the breakdown, but instead the realization that it isn't a story, and that the changes they make will have actual consequences for actual people. Or at least, that's how I see it.

Food for thought in the rhetorical sense: If someone you knew was going to be shot to death protecting someone else from a mugger, would you warn them, thus potentially dooming the person being mugged? What consequences for that person and their family could arise from that? Etc...

I think it would be quite overwhelming to realize you literally have to decide who lives and who dies in order to get a "good end." Which is why I would never envy someone in a position where that kind of decision making is needed (i.e. a general, or equivalent).

Edit: On another note, Sakura's using The Human Path, right? And does this mean she has access to others? Any ideas on how/why she has access to it in the first place?
I would call the police, warning uncle ben to stay out of the way, and let the professionals handle it to not endanger civilians.
 
Neither knew everything, as they would if an SI told them. Jiraya didnt create Pein, Danzo did.
 
Hiruzen, the man who stopped both Danzo and Orichimaru when he had the chance. No wait. The opposite.

Also Jiraiya, the man who stopped Pein from being created. No wait. The opposite.

But worry not. Sakura has told exactly two people everything.
Hiruzen wasn't a perfect person, but at the end of the day if you end up killing Danzo and Orichimaru early that butterflys away any possibility of you winning the end game.
Jiraiya only "created" Pain since he trained him when he was younger, apart from that it was Nagato twisting Jiraiya's ideals.
 
Hiruzen wasn't a perfect person, but at the end of the day if you end up killing Danzo and Orichimaru early that butterflys away any possibility of you winning the end game.
Only if you intend to stick to the stations of canon. There is nothing that either ero-hebe-sannin or danzo can do that is unique enough to keep them alive, if Hiruzen knows what originally happened.
 
Only if you intend to stick to the stations of canon. There is nothing that either ero-hebe-sannin or danzo can do that is unique enough to keep them alive, if Hiruzen knows what originally happened.
Except if you fuck with the timeline like that either
A) Kaguya never gets resurrected, leaving her as a looming threat that never gets dealt with because Black Zetsu will just go back into hiding.
B) Obito resurrects Madara with his Rinnengan but because Edo doesn't exist the Hokages can't stall him so he wins.
C) Everything goes off the rails and Kaguya wins.

Black Zetsu is always going to be the real threat, and unless you have a sure fire plan for killing him dealing with minor threats like Orochimaru is only gonna fuck you up long term.
 
I mainly have a couple nits to pick, rather than plot commentary. Namely, :cool: that you have Hiashi and Hizashi's names in personal-family order the first time each is mentioned, but all other instances in family-then-personal name order. It's not a big thing really, but the inconsistency jumped out amid the general technical excellence otherwise.

As for the current discussion... it's easy to think of there only being one path to a good end in fanfiction, because that path has been laid out for us in canon and we can see all the places where something only worked by outrageous good luck. Your MC is thinking like this, and it's a perfectly valid way for her to feel in character, whether it ends up being true or not.

The thing is, when the premise is that a new person is interacting in a real world, there should be many, possibly even infinite, ways that things could go, and still lead to something that could be called a "good end," wherever you want to arbitrarily mark "the end" when it's a life you're living, and there's no pan away to the sunset to cut to ending credits, just another tomorrow that follows on what happened today. Bad ends, those there are a plenty of, or at least it's easier to define them - getting stuck in the Infinite Tsukiyomi, or everyone killed by whatshername the mad goddess to reclaim all chakra for herself, or just having the character thinking about it meet a sticky end on someone's blade, they're obviously failure states, but what constitutes a "good end" when there'll be another day? Trying to reach such a nebulous "good end" is only a recipe for frustration, because through malice or incompetence or simple bad luck, someone will fuck up "happily ever after" somehow.

Even if MC manages to pull off her plans perfectly (insert scoff sound effects here) she'll still end up needing to come to terms with the idea that it's not just a story anymore, but real people acting and reacting and making the best choices they can see from the information they have. The freak-out about that in this episode is only the beginning of that journey, I expect, and it'll be interesting to see how she progresses. Having a backup plan in case she gets an unlucky break so remove herself as a single point of failure is better thinking than a lot of SIs manage, at least.
 
Only if you intend to stick to the stations of canon. There is nothing that either ero-hebe-sannin or danzo can do that is unique enough to keep them alive, if Hiruzen knows what originally happened.
It is probably a good idea to get the Hokage informed about the whole thing, specially if you don't mind the risk of vanishing into T&I to get your mind ripped and dissected for the the last shred of information, but that doesn't mean it will automatically succeed. Butterflies, wholes swarms of them. And you know that things would have turned kind alright without your intervention. Yes, the intervention is rather inevitable given that you took the place of someone important to the plot (jokes about useless Sakura aside), but it's still panic inducing. Plus telling them gets the planning out of your hands, and you might disagree with how they go at trying to fix things and think it'd only lead to disaster.

And again, remember, this is not of these universes where things proceeded as expected, plans worked, and no major lucky breaks were needed to get to a satisfactory result. This is one of the universes that only barely managed to get to a "good ending", despite a lot being arrayed against them, constantly dangling by a single thread and needing several extremely unlikely lucky breaks to do so. Some panic is an appropriate response.
 
Being fair, the issue is not so much about changing in itself but making things worse, which is particularly relevant in Naruto, because ultimately things did end well but it took a lot of incredibly lucky breaks at key moments that can get butterflied away by the SI. As such, a bit of panic about fucking up the "good end" is perfectly appropriate, specially if the SI is the type to take the weight of the world on their shoulders.

There's another factor involved in the mental breakdown:

"Trust me, there are at least seven people having constant freak outs in front of you right now."
there's multiple minds in that head, bringing a whole new meaning to 'Multiple Personality Disorder'
 
@Aaron Peori I enjoyed this! OCP tech-based powers, activate! Also! Japanese-ism nitpick: Kakashi would refer to Hiashi as "Hyuga-sama" since they belong to different families and are shown not to be that personally well acquainted!

Neither knew everything, as they would if an SI told them.

As with all SIs and peggy-sues and time travel whatsits where future knowledge comes into play: I should think that, assuming that both the Sandaime and Jiraiya are competent, at-times-emotional but ultimately rational adults, the issue would be less about the quality of the intel itself, but rather whether the source can be trusted. Even if the intel comes from a trustworthy source, there's also the trouble of how much stock to put in the information in the first place - Sarutobi heads up an entire *village* of ninja and a vast amount of the information the man must sift through on a daily basis, and how much of it is, at the end of the day, potentially problematic, probably makes any SI's task in convincing him super fucking difficult.

In a context where you're an out-of-context problem who possesses classified information in a village full of what amounts to super-soldiers, super-spies, and the CIA and KGB's murderhobo lovechildren, it's understandable that the SI wouldn't want to divulge OCP knowledge unless as a last resort, or unless at critical junctures where those data might make a meaningful impact.

For me personally, I enjoy how reading how SI authors try and work around this issue - how do you resolve the issue of trust, and how do you deal canon events potentially just not happening, whether due to butterflies or sheer happenstance? (Unless the story's explicitly a wish-fulfillment or fluff piece, but w/e).
 
@Aaron Peori I enjoyed this! OCP tech-based powers, activate! Also! Japanese-ism nitpick: Kakashi would refer to Hiashi as "Hyuga-sama" since they belong to different families and are shown not to be that personally well acquainted!
That's an interesting tidbit, but, well, Kakashi. Being annoying and subtly insulting (late to everything with anyone, "doesn't hear" questions or comments he'd rather not deal with, etc.) is not just a career, it's a lifestyle.
 
That's an interesting tidbit, but, well, Kakashi. Being annoying and subtly insulting (late to everything with anyone, "doesn't hear" questions or comments he'd rather not deal with, etc.) is not just a career, it's a lifestyle.

It's less a matter of personal choice than it just not being correct grammar, if I'm being pedantically honest.

Again, not important in the context of the story being told in English and with the in-setting language being not!Japanese rather than RL!Japanese, so my point is moot. Just being nitpicky.
 
So chapter 3 ended up delayed because on rereading it Sakura came across as a heartless monstrous bitch in every scene.

So towards that end, a new plan has been developed and I'm saving what I can (mainly the climax) and rewriting what I need to (mainly all the scenes leading to the climax).

Glad to see you caught it before it became an issue.
 
Chapter 3
C&A Productions Presents

A Work of Blatant Self-Insertion

Go! Unashamed Reincarnation Protagonist Sakura

Chapter 3

Ars Magica



"Hey, hey, Sakura!"

Naruto crouched next to the girl. She was sitting lotus style on the side of the tree, running a finger through the dirt. She was drawing some sort of mandala. Sakura looked up at him and smiled. As always, Naruto's heart skipped a beat.

Sakura was, as far as Naruto was concerned, the prettiest girl in their class. He kept that thought to himself, however. Sakura wasn't like most other girls. When Naruto forced other girls in the class to acknowledge him, they always got mad or frustrated. They would yell at him and sometimes hit him to make him go away.

Not that this stopped him. Shouting and hurled objects was better than the usual, which was just being ignored as if he didn't exist. No, there were only two girls in his entire class that didn't either ignore or shout at him and one was Sakura.

The other, Hinata, always just sort of locked up and stammered. Which was strange, because the thing Sakura did was basically to throw the stammering girl at him.

Naruto never did find out why the two of them were friends. They had been basically inseparable all throughout school. Hinata always walking around behind Sakura. Sakura would drag the girl behind her, always pulling her into group activities and making certain she participated in games. The only time Sakura ever was away from Hinata during classes was when Naruto approached her.

That was when Sakura would somehow give Naruto the slip and leave him alone with the blushing and stuttering Hinata. Sometimes she just gracefully excused herself. Other times she just slipped behind Hinata and disappeared somewhere. One time, when Naruto had been working up the courage to ask Sakura out while she and Hinata were playing on the jungle gym she had literally tripped Hinata and caused her to all on top of him so they ended up lying on the ground with her on top of him.

For some reason, Hinata had frozen in place and not reacted for nearly a half hour after that. Naruto had taken her to the medic's office he was so scared she might have broken her head.

It made one thing clear. Sakura really didn't want anything to do with him. So he mainly pined from a distance.

"Naruto?" Sakura waved a hand in front of his face. "Can I help you?"

Naruto gulped and glanced away. Ugh! Be a man Uzumaki! You can just ask her for a favour as a friend! As a teammate! It was perfectly natural! Right! He pumped his fist.

"Sakura!" he shouted. Then he paused and glanced super stealthy like towards Sasuke. Sasuke was glaring at him. Naruto rocked back on his heels and looked away. No way, Naruto couldn't let him overhear! He leaned in and whispered, cupping his hand conspiratorially.

"How did you do the tree walking thing?"

She chuckled. "Well, since you asked-"

*

Kakashi walked, with some difficulty, across the bridge to where Sakura was sitting. His crutch was silent as he moved. Kakashi had strained his body often enough that he was one of the few ninja who knew the secret to stealth crutch-walking. It was a skill he was inordinately proud of.

Sakura sat, watching the work crew as they erected the bridge. Kakashi gave them an idle look. Hmm. Yes. That certainly looked like a bridge being built.

He shifted his weight with a skill developed with regrettable experience and gracefully sat himself down next to her. She was humming under her breath. He didn't recognize the tune.

"So, are we going to talk about what happened at the lake?" he said.

She smiled. "You don't like formality, do you?" Her tone was wistful and teasing at the same time.

He tapped his hitai-ate with one finger. "So tell me, what do you know about the Sharingan?"

She made a moue of displeasure. "A cheating cheaty thing that cheats," she said. "Seriously, how ridiculous does that thing get?" She gestured dismissively. "Okay, so, it starts out simply. Enhanced high speed perception and the ability to memorize anything you see. That's pretty damn good right there, especially in a world where you cast jutsu with hand signs that the thing can easily see and memorize no matter how fast the opponent is." She plopped her chin on her laced fingers. "Then it is also able to cast genjutsu on someone just by maintaining eye contact. Okay, fine." She snorted. "Then it can see chakra itself, and pierce any illusion or deception. Like, you go and introduce three whole types of techniques into the world and right away you get a special eye that makes you immune to an entire third of all potential jutsu."

She glanced at him. "And it just gets more ridiculous from there. Sooner or later, you'll be telling me someone can just use their eyes to resurrect entire towns of people or create a moon." Her expression was disgusted. "If I didn't cheat just as much, I'd be upset."

"Eloquently put," Kakashi said with a chuckle.

The workmen continued, uncaring about the activity of the two ninja sitting nearby.

"So... about the lake," Kakashi said.

"You looked at me through the Sharingan when you were fighting Zabuza, right?"

"I could hardly help it."

"Hmm." She nodded, removed one hand from under her chin and waved it in long slow patterns. "I'm guessing from the fact that you didn't start screaming or foaming at the mouth when you saw my aura that you've spoken to the Hyuga clan about me."

"It was quite an experience," he said.

"I know what it looks like to Hyuga. Or, at least, how they describe it." She looked at him. "I'm curious, what did your Sharingan eye see, sensei?"

Kakashi closed his good eye and thought back. There was only one word he could use to describe what he had seen. There were any number of sensations. He could describe how his flesh had crawled. He could speak about how his stomach had clenched and his bowels and shriveled. He could talk about feeling every hair on his body stand on end at once, or about how the moisture evaporated in his mouth and nose. But there was only one word.

"Chaos." He looked down at her. "It was chaos."

Sakura nodded. "So what would you like to know?"

"What is it, some sort of kekkei genkai?"

She smirked at him. "And you were doing so well." She gestured expansively. "There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy, sensei." She pulled her hand in and looked down at her palm. "Let me say this. Reality is... softer around me. If it helps, imagine the universe as a series of rules. The rules say how cause leads to effect. If you drop an object, regardless of mass, it will fall at an acceleration 9.8 meters per second per second. The entropy in a closed system always approaches maximum. If you want to form chakra, you need physical energy generated from cells combined with spiritual energy produced by your chakra network. And so on and so forth.

"Chakra seems to defy explanation, but it's just another set of rules." She clenched her hand into a fist. "Think of it as if the laws of physics were not blind, mindless processes that exist only as descriptions we made up for our benefit. Imagine instead that they are like laws of the court, but imposed by a magistrate who is omniscient and completely consistent. This magistrate enforces effect from cause." She started going through the hand signs, methodically cycling through them in order. "Ninja appeal to a higher court. One that can override the rulings of the magistrate. This higher court is corrupt, and demands bribes - chakra - from those who appeal. He also insists on very specific forms, hand signs, fuinjutsu seals and so on." She smirked at him and tapped his hitai-ate. "Except being a corrupt bastard he favours certain people over others and just lets them get away with almost anything they want."

"An interesting analogy." Kakashi grinned, allowing his visible eye to crinkle.

"What I am... is an outlaw." She gestured with her hands. "The same rules don't apply to me as to you." Here she frowned slightly. "Or at least, not the higher court laws. The magistrate is still able to rule on me, just like you." Her frown vanished. "But I'm like a diplomat. I carry a different set of laws with me into your court's jurisdiction. I have immunity." She glanced away. "Except, it isn't that simple."

"Nothing you are saying sounds simple," he said with a teasing tone.

"I suppose not." She picked up a loose nail that had rolled their way. "Can I see your hand for a moment?" He gave her a long look. "It will only hurt for a moment." She gazed up at him with wide green puppy eyes. Foolish girl. He was immune to puppy eyes. Still, he held out his hand. "So this nail is the laws of the magistrate." She scratched it along one of his exposed fingers. A small trickle of blood appeared. "And this, is the law I respond to."

She began to gesture. Her hand gestures were unlike anything he had seen a ninja use before. Then she chanted, "Ars magica: restriccione in contrarium inde in scholam absolvisti; prohibere sanguinem." As she spoke and gestured an image began to form in the air between them. Each motion produced a glyph in bright pink light, all the size of a fingernail. What at first seemed random rapidly produced a pattern, and that pattern only grew more apparent as lines formed between the symbols, creating an elaborate mandala. Each line was made of constantly shifting symbols and he realized quickly they were numbers. No... formula. Incredibly complex mathematical formula. Once the mandala was complete and she finished speaking she pushed one hand through the center and touched his bleeding finger.

Kakashi felt a tingle of numbness and saw rainbow particles of light spray briefly from the wound. The light of the mandala faded along with the particles. Kakashi rubbed his finger with his thumb. The skin beneath was undamaged.

"Handy."

She chuckled. "The important thing to remember is that I am subject to different laws, not no laws. Just like you can appeal to a higher court, so can I. In both cases there is a cost. In both cases, we require specific forms to be followed. There are rules, and then there are rules for breaking the rules. Understand?"

"I think so," he said.

"Good. Now, this is the most important part." She held up her palm and raised the nail above it. Then with a flash of motion she drove the nail through her hand. There was a sound more like puncturing metal than flesh. She moved her hand away and he could see blood welling up from around the nail. It had stopped halfway through her palm. Her expression was focused, but unpained.

"In the end, the magistrate is still the magistrate." She turned her hand over, watching as blood slowly crept down the nail and then fell in a drop to the bridge. "It doesn't matter if I throw the nail in with normal physics, or you push it in with chakra." She yanked the nail out quickly. "If you prick me, I will bleed."

As Kakashi watched the blood flow slowed and then stopped. The wound seemed to knit together before his eye. He glanced at her. "Well, for a little while." She grinned. "A girl has to have some tricks up her sleeve."

"Well," Kakashi said after a long and not uncomfortable pause. "As usual Sakura, talking to you has been an education in confusion and horrible implications." He rose to his feet. "I'm going to check on the boys."

As he began to walk away Sakura called out. "Wait."

He glanced over his shoulder at her. "I never actually answered your question." She looked down at her hands. "The one you didn't ask right out." She looked at him. "The truth is, sensei, that if I told you the truth about what I would know, you would hate me."
Kakashi waited patiently.

"Sometimes, its easy to all into a certain way of thinking." She clenched her fists. "Despite having the evidence right in front of your face, you listen to what other people say about a person. You hear stories about what a person is like; how he was unreliable, lazy or how he abandoned certain people to focus on certain other people. You spend so long hearing those stories, that you begin to believe them." She looked into his eyes. "But we've been together a couple of months now, and you aren't that person."

She stood up and bowed formally, her head near parallel to the ground. "I apologize, sensei. I judged you poorly."

"So does this mean you'll tell me the thing that will make you hate me?" He kept his tone flippant.

She winced. "I... I'm still afraid of what you would do if I told you." She kept her face towards the ground. "If I told you... you might even die."

Kakashi placed his hand on her shoulder. "Sakura." She seemed startled that he had managed to return to her so quickly and silently. He smiled beneath his mask as he pulled her up to a standing position. "You aren't the only one who has learned to not judge her teammate." He stepped back and waved a chiding finger in front of her. "The relationship between teacher and student is not only one way. Respect, and trust, is a two way street." He reached out and mussed her hair. "So you trust me, and Naruto and Sasuke, and we will trust you to do what you think is right."

"Kakashi..." her voice was strained with emotion. "I don't deserve this."

"Nevertheless," he said. "Now, I really do have to make certain Naruto and Sasuke have not killed themselves."

*

Sasuke stared up at the tree. His eyes traced each score mark across its bark. The first was almost a third up the trunk, with each new one barely a few centimetres above it. There was progress on display there.

But not enough.

He had to grow stronger. There was no better proof than that tree. Days, and the progress had only extended another third of the way up. He glanced to the side. It hurt to move his neck. It hurt to move everything.

The tree across the clearing was also scored with kunai marks. Unlike Sasuke's tree , this one did not start a third of the way up and proceed upward steadily but inexorably. The first mark was barely above head head. The rest made a haphazard ladder, there were spaces at least three strides long that had no marks at all, and some places where the individual marks had overlapped so much the tree was bleeding sap. As he watched, Naruto charged up the trunk, screaming at the top of his lungs, and managed to score a mark two strides over his highest one to date.

Barely two centimetres beneath Sasuke's highest record.

Naruto pushed off and flipped, but landed badly on one leg. He collapsed on his side with a cry. He clutched his knee and fouled the air with curses. Then, slowly, he rose to his feet. His left leg was unsteady, but he gripped his kunai in a tight fist. "Don't fuck with me!" he shouted at the tree.

His neck try was almost on stride lower. But he was still trying. Where did he get that energy?

Where did he get that talent?

His neck strained as he looked back to a third tree. At the peak of the tree, a single kunai stood imbedded into the highest limb; planted like a flag. He clutched his hands.

He needed to get stronger.

At first, this had been a good trip. The ambush along the road had only shown how far above his so called peers he really was. Two chunin enemies, striking from ambush, and he had held his own with aplomb. Naruto had frozen, and Sakura had simply watched.

Then had come the battle of the lake. His body has frozen, paralysed by a killing intent that a single ninja had been able to produce. How pathetic was that? Sasuke had confronted That Man over the corpses of his own parents, and yet he had not felt any killing intent from the murderer of his entire clan.

"You are not filled with enough hate, little brother."

He had not been worth actual intent. When he had a chance to fight a true enemy, he had frozen. Frozen until Naruto, of all people, had come up with the crazy plan that had freed Kakashi.

And now, the seemingly simple training Kakashi had set him to in preparation for the return of the Mist ninja and his supposed Hunter Nin ally he was struggling to achieve second place.

Against Naruto.

He struggled to his feet, wincing as his muscles protested. Naruto was already trying again. Sasuke would not allow himself to be dead last. He made a seal of concentration as he concentrated chakra in the soles of his feet. Just enough to bond to the chakra of the tree, not enough to damage it, and held there in a steady stream.

With a wordless cry, he raced to the tree again.

*

Sasuke found Sakura on top of the humble house that Tazuna the bridge builder lived in. His muscles were strained to their limits and his eyes felt thick, the lids like lead weights. Yet he climbed to the roof. Sakura was sitting lotus on the peak of the roof. Her eyes seemed unfocused but he ignored that. He could tell from the way her body concealing red cloak shifted that she had sensed him.

"Do you even sleep?" Sasuke asked her. "You've been up here every night guarding against the return of those ninja." He paused. "I haven't even seen you join us at our meals."

"I'm not hungry or tired," she said, almost wistfully. Her hand flashed up and she caught a silver glint out of the air. There was a soft tinkle as the bell depended from her fingers. Sasuke kept his hand extended in mid throw. Pride would not allow his limbs to shake from the fatigue.

"Do you think I'm an idiot, like Naruto?" Sasuke asked.

She brought the bell up to her face and looked into it. "Curiosity finally got the better of you?" She smiled oddly.

"I've been thinking about this mission since this afternoon," Sasuke said. "You are no genin." She raised an eyebrow at him but didn't deny it. "Putting aside the matter of how you got the bells from Kakashi and into my pouch without either of us noticing, this entire trip has been a set up."

She turned her body to face him. "What makes you say that?"

"You weren't surprised once by any of the things that happened on this mission." Sasuke held up his splayed fingers and slowly curled them down. "You didn't react at all when Tazuna was introduced to us by the Hokage. Not even when he insulted us." Another finger. "Then on the path back to the Lands of Waves, we were attacked by two ninja who seemed to kill Kakashi. You didn't even react to that... except you did. When the attack came you were standing in front of Tazuna, but when the demon brother's attacked you and he had swapped places. And then returned to your original positions after Kakashi returned." He rolled up another finger. "Then at the lake, you were completely unaffected by Zabuza's killing intent. Plus when Kakashi looked at you with his Sharingan while captured... his expression..." Sasuke frowned and curled up on final finger. "Then you master the art of tree walking instantly, and even give Naruto some advice on how to do it better.

"So..." He pointed his remaining finger accusing at her. "Who are you? Some sort of ringer put in to keep an eye on me?"

Sakura had a amused smirk on her face. "You really are a genius." She stood up, her cloak draping around her body. "I'm not a ringer, Sasuke. I could have just mastered tree walking because of excellent chakra control. It has been known to happen."

"But you didn't."

"No. You're right." She tilted her head to the side. "I didn't master tree walking today. I've been able to walk up walls for... four of your years now."

"And stop with the cryptic bullshit!" Sasuke crossed his arms defiantly.

She stared at him for a long moment. "Sasuke, I've done something horrible." She stood up, her black body stocking briefly visible under the shifting weight of her large red cloak. "I blamed you for things you haven't done-" she cut herself off abruptly. She stepped closer to him. "But I don't want us to be enemies or even rivals." She looked into his eyes. Her eyes were large and green but there was something almost unnaturally cute about them. There was an artificial quality to her entire face that looked sculpted.

"Sasuke... I wish I could tell you that things aren't as bad as you think they are. You aren't as alone as you believe. There are people who love you, and when you really need it, they will be there for you." She sighed. "But I don't think you'll believe me until you see it for yourself." She placed a hand on his shoulder. "I want to prove to you I'm here to help. So tomorrow, I'm going to help you." She smiled. "After all, by the end of this mission, I won't be able to hide the big secret from you, either."

She walked past him towards the other end of the roof. "Get some sleep. You'll need it."

Sasuke stared after her. He snorted and climbed down. Was he satisfied?

No. He needed to beat Naruto. He walked away, but not into the house.

*

"Honestly, where has Naruto gotten off to this time?" Kakashi walked through the woods with Sakura at his side. She was covered head to toe in her red cloak, clutching it tight in front of her so it resembled a poncho.

"You know Naruto, he probably spent all night training." She chuckled. "And considering Sasuke walked into the woods last night as well, I guess he is out here somewhere, too."

"You just let them go out and train by themselves?" Kakashi shook his head in amusement. "You keep up this and I'll stop letting you play lookout all night."

"Insomnia has to be useful for something," she said in a sing-song, skipping slightly ahead.

She came to a halt as a kunai drove into the ground with a wet thunk. Kakashi followed the path and was not really surprised to see Naruto grinning down at them from the highest branch of the tallest tree.

"He Heh." Naruto rose weakly to his feet. "Look at you two staring at me as if you didn't believe Uzumaki Naruto could do it!" He wobbled on the branch. "Well, I showed everyone!" He gestured violently-

-and slipped.

Kakashi raised his visible eyebrow. Sakura smiled.

Naruto had caught himself on the underside of the branch, clinging to it with nothing but chakra. He smirked. "Ninja art; tree walking!" He clenched his fist at them. "You can bet I mastered it!" He laughed-

-and fell off the branch.

Kakashi dropped his crutch. He crouched and prepared to launch himself at the falling boy. A whir of displaced air made him pause. Naruto jerked to the side as a kunai pinned him to a tree trunk through the back of his jacket. He flailed and shouted as he tried to both free himself and see where the knife had come from.

Kakashi looked over to see Sasuke standing on the side of the second tallest tree in the forest. A glance up showed a kunai knife buried in the very highest branch. Like a flag.

"You're such an idiot, Naruto." Sasuke smirked and crossed his arms, his hair flopping to the side at the pull of gravity. "If you can't maintain your chakra, the technique is useless."

"I see both of you have mastered the tree walking exercise," Kakashi said. While he spoke Sasuke bounced from tree to tree before landing. Naruto managed to lever himself out and clamour down the tree like a monkey. "Remember this experience. Mastering this technique is hard even for professional ninja. Hypothetically, pushing chakra to your feet and keeping it precisely regulated shows you are ready to learn any jutsu."

Sakura clapped and stepped forward. "Man, you guys are impressive. Mastering tree walking in less than seven days." She grinned and walked into the center of the clearing. "The truth is... it took me two hundred hours to master my version of the wall walking technique."

"No way!" Naruto shouted. "You mean you learned the jutsu from someone else before Kakashi taught us? Not fair!"

Sakura ducked her head and rubbed her hair with one glove covered hand. "Ah well, I don't think the technique I learned would have worked for you, Naruto. If I did, I would have taught you."

Sasuke was giving her a suspicious stare. "Two hundred hours?" He frowned. "Where did you find the time to do that?"

"Ah!" Sakura held up her hand flat in front of her face in a conciliatory gesture. "Well, the thing is that I have done a lot of training and I wanted to help you guys out."

"A lot of training?" Kakashi tilted his head to one side.

"One million hours." She grinned at that all. "That is how I learned everything I know and adapted to my own body."

"W-what!" Naruto gasped. "One- one million hours! No way!"

"That's impossible!" Sasuke snarled.

"I think Sakura is exaggerating, Naruto," Kakashi said with some amusement. "Like saying ten thousand is a traditional way of saying 'too many to count.' It's an affectation."

"Oh no." Sakura smirked at him. "I am one hundred percent serious. In fact, I'm going to show you all the secret of my training." She unlimbered her arms, allowing her cloak to fall open. Under it she was wearing a black body stocking with what looked like molded ceramic plates attached at key points.

"I guess you could call this technique... mahoujutsu?" She spread her arms. "Ars magica: Conatus est disciplanum restrictione porta mittur tempore ex."

As she spoke, Sakura began to gesture again. Her fingers danced through the air less like she was forming hand signs, and more like she was playing some omnipresent musical instrument. She plucked at the air like the world was full of shamisen strings or tapping piano keys. Like the other day, every gesture created a glyph in the air. The mandala she created this time was excessively more complex than before, with circles within circles and elaborate geometric patterns formed of interlaced mathematical formulas.

Naruto gaped. Sasuke froze, uncertain what he was seeing.

Then when Sakura finished the first mandala, she started a new one. The first mandala seemed to unfold like some origami flower, settling out a meter from her in all directions. Then she repeated the process again.

Kakashi grabbed Sasuke by the shoulder to keep him from leaping away as the unfolding layers of geometric mandalas flowed outward in all directions and eventually passed through their legs. Naruto danced in place, watching as his limbs broke through the symbols and formulae without causing any effect. Sasuke was stiff, holding a trio of shuriken. Kakashi resisted the urge to uncover his Sharingan.

When the mandala had spread out nine times, covering the entire clearing and a small pond nearby Sakura made a sharp gesture.

Kakashi flinched. The silence, so to speak, was deafening. He glanced around. Just beyond the clearing in all directions, everywhere the mandala had not reached, was a wall of utter darkness. No, not just darkness. It was a chilling blackness. Like he was looking at the edge of existence. There was no sound other than what was in the clearing, no distant lapping of the many lakes, river and beaches of the Land of Waves. The wind had halted so that even the trees no longer shifted. There was no sound of animals, no hum of insects. He looked up and found the wall curved overhead in a dome of perfect inscrutable blackness.

Then Sakura collapsed.

"Sakura!" Naruto cried and rushed over to her. She was gasping and panting, clutching her chest. Sweat dripped down her face. Naruto knelt beside her. "Sakura, are you okay?"

"I'll be... fine..." She hissed. She gave them all a shaky smile. "I'm just not used to building such a large exclusion zone." She waved off Naruto's help and rose unsteadily to her feet. "Welcome to my secret training ground. Welcome to No Time."

"No time?" Sasuke's voice was sharp.

"It's exactly what it sounds like, and like Kakashi has probably already guessed." She gestured around. "This area is an zone of exclusion from normal reality. In this zone, you are detached from normal time. While you experience the flow of time, second to second, in this place everything outside of this time is effectively frozen. The moment we all leave this zone, no time at all would have passed for the outside world. The sun will not have shifted, the wind will pick up exactly where it left off.

"In other words, you can spend all the time you want to train in here you want."

"One million hours..." Kakashi looked around, trying not to let his instinct to escape this hellish place disturb him. "What a frightening power."

Sakura sat down against a tree, the top of which vanished into the darkness above. "Heh, you'd think so. But it's not as useful for me as you would think." She wiped some sweat from her brow. "It drains a lot from me to conjure this place. And for me..." She looked around. "For me, this place is worse than it is for you." She smiled. "For you, chakra still exists. I don't know why, but you can still breath chakra and replenish your reserves. For me, this place is an empty void. The power that I draw upon to create it only exists in time. Without it, I can't recover my energy. I can't practice most of my powerful skills. I can't... prepare my most useful tools."

She gestured vaguely. "Typically I use a much weaker version of this. Six times normal speed at best." She leaned her head back against the trunk. "But for you, this is a gift. Train and recover and train some more. So long as you can stand it, you can live here."

"We won't run out of air or food?" Kakashi ran some fingers along the scrolls hidden in his vest pockets.

Sakura shook her head. "I can supply those as you need them." She grinned weakly. "Though it won't be the best tasting food."

"This is amazing!" Naruto jumped in place. "Hey, hey! Isn't this amazing, sensei!" He ran around the clearing. "With this, we can leap ahead and learn all sorts of super cool jutsu."

"Now wait just a moment, Naruto, I haven't decided to let us do this." Sasuke looked at him sharply but Kakashi just stared back. "Sakura, are you sure this is safe?" She nodded. He rubbed his chin. "I'm not certain if I want to spend too much time here. It takes a lot out of you to maintain this, I take it?"

"No." She frowned. "Once conjured, it exists until I get rid of it. I just... can't recover energy while I'm inside."

"Can you leave us inside?" Sasuke asked. Sakura stared at him for a long moment. Then she smiled mysteriously.

"Not with this technique. I can step outside of time, but if I push others out without stepping with them the opposite happens. The world's time goes on, and theirs stops." She gestured. "When I cease to maintain it, they return as if nothing had happened. Like time capsules, preserved until needed."

"Come on, sensei!" Naruto was bouncing in place, his fists shaking in anticipation. "You said yourself we have to prepare because that crazy sword wielding guy and the creepy mask kid are going to attack us eventually! Why have we been training for the last week if not for that!" He grinned, his canines standing out hungrily. "Won't it be even better if we learn all the jutsu we can?"

Kakashi considered his response but Sakura interrupted him. "How about a deal, sensei. You teach them each two jutsu, however long it takes."

"Two jutsu?" Kakashi looked at her.

She gestured to the nearby pond of water. "Well, they already mastered tree walking..." She shrugged. "And I have an idea for a jutsu that each of them are perfectly suited to." She smirked through her fatigue. "What do you say, sensei? How about we cheat together?"

Kakashi sighed and shook his head. "Okay." He held up two fingers. "Two jutsu. That's it. We don't want to burn our entire lives in this non-place."

"All right!" Naruto hopped and smacked his fist into his palm. Sasuke crossed his arm, his expression enigmatic but intrigued.
 
And, here comes the Rasengan and Chidori.
I love this Sakura. Really, she's a delightful, confusing mix of techno-bullshit and magic-bullshit. My, so very nice !
 
Huh, that sounds remarkably similar to a spell from GURPS Grimorium. Did you perhaps got the null time zone with no recovery from it?
 
It's amusing to see that despite Sakura showing the same lack of romantic interest in Naruto as in canon, if exhibited differently, the boy still has a crush on her. Got a chuckle out of how she keeps trying to set up interactions between Naruto and the shy Hinata as well, and how the poor girl tends to freeze up whenever they occur.

Although, was Hinata prone to freezing up when interacting with Naruto in canon? I know the anime demonstrated it, yet I'm unsure how common it was in the manga...

As an aside, was nice to see the discussion with Kakashi and Sasuke about how the SI misjudged them, blaming them on 'future' actions or misattributing things to them due to fanfic which don't reflect their canon personalities.
 
Well, I guess Sakura is really immortal if she looks like a teen despite 115 years of training...
 
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