Out Of The Dark: Souls/RWBY. Artorias-centric.

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Chapter 1:

He was getting tired. His armor was in scraps, his blade dulled from the hordes of...
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Chapter 1:

He was getting tired. His armor was in scraps, his blade dulled from the hordes of the Abyss he had faced, his clothes in tatters from the millions of monsters he had slain, his body a ruined wreck without a intact bone in it only held together by the whim of the writhing Humanity infused into him by Manus, his mind shattering into millions of pieces from lack of sleep and stress.

But one thing still remained, a core of themselves that could not be shattered by any force in Lordran.

He had a duty.

He was Knight Artorias, the Abysswalker.

He would hold back the Abyss, stop the Dark from taking over. He had to.

Otherwise, the Age of Fire would end, and his king would sacrifice himself.

He would not let that happen.

It would not happen.

A monster is spotted.

Alone.


Chase it, kill it.

It jumps into a hole, he chases. It doesn't realize he's right behind it, and as it stops to look around, he jumps down and cracks the floor beneath it with the tip of his blade, the rest passed through it.

Another monster is spotted, dripping with Dark power on a level of a Lord. He throws the previous kill at this new abomination, a fresh hell thrown at him by the Abyss itself, but it dodges to the side, metal clanking as it rolls. Then it draws its blade, a claymore that's coated in crystals as a catalyst passes over it.

He screams with rage as he sees the Sorcery of his friend Seath in this Dark place, used by this new being to taunt him, and the Abyss screams with him. He charges, and his blows meet a silver shield, bouncing off the titanite-infused metal. The claymore cuts into his side, but it doesn't matter, the abomination slew one of the Silver Knights, his allies for that shield. His rage grows and grows, blow after blow after blow chained together by the god who was the greatest swordmaster in Lordran, but the abomination didn't die, its Black Iron armor keeping his blows from ending it, and the shield it stole from his allies deflecting his dulled blade. Yet he struck it, and the abomination was hurt, but it hurt him.

He screamed his hate at the Dark monster in front of him, that had slewn his allies and dared to taunt him with their equipment, and the Abyss laughed as it filled his frame with power and his powdered arm with sludge. Yet even with that, it did not die, despite all the skill and power the Wolf Knight could bring to bear, and it kept striking and striking and striking, his blows hitting air as it rolled, bouncing off its shield, and only denting the armor.

It wouldn't die, it would not die itwould notdie itwouldnot die itwouldnotdie itwouldnotdieitwouldnotdieitwouldnotdiehatehatehatetheDarkhatetheAbysshatehatehatepainchestcutthrustparryblockendwhyhelpciarannowhydeathwhywhywhywhy.

And so the Abysswalker fell, the unhealed wounds of centuries and the fresh ones inflicted by the Dark abomination in front of him working together to bring the swordmaster of the Four Knights down. And his killer, the Chosen Undead, looked at the body of the fallen knight, and nodded respectfully to his fallen foe before leaving the arena.

But there is no rest for a hero, no rest for a legend, no rest for a god. And so another world dripping with Dark pulled the Abysswalkers soul towards it, as his eternal quest to stop the Dark pulsed within.

He stood up. He didn't hurt anymore. It was dark, but not Dark. His arm was better, as was his everything else. He couldn't think, but he could see and feel truly once more, not the mockeries of the senses that the Abyss had 'blessed' him with.

There were monsters in front of him. They were Dark. The tunnel was dark, but his eyes could see. And so he drew his blade even as a explosion sounded over the clattering roar behind him, and gripped it with both hands. He knew what to do.

He had not his shield, but his arm was healed.

His armor was in tatters and he was exhausted and malnourished, but his body was no longer a pulped mass of flesh and bone only held together by what he hated most.

He had not the full capacity of his mind, but no tactics or higher though was needed here.

He had no talisman for his miracles, but the monsters in front of him weren't near enough to justify the skills that ended immortals.

And so the Knight of the Wolf, Artorias the Abysswalker, charged down the tunnel at the Dark hordes of monsters.

And they died.

A titanic scorpion thrust its tail at his head, but the scraps of the silversteel helmet infused with titanite were enough to deflect it, and he split it in half. A army of wolf-bears tried to charge him, and found that even though his blade was dulled from use, the titanite infused into it and his strength were more then enough to cut them as easily as air. Monster after monster after monster poured down the tunnel at the knight, and they died, a wall of dissolving corpses forming in front of him.

And eventually, after a hour of death and killing, there were no more, all of them dissolving in a pile of scraps of meat and flesh and bone. He needed a rest, and he looked around. There were some people with masks.

The remnants of his mind threw up a fact: People with masks were important to him. Very much so. And so the knight carefully gathered them together, as they huddled in a corner and watched him in awe for killing a horde of Grimm that would have ended even Hunters. He sat down in front of them, and waited.

He would guard them from any more monsters.

He would.
 
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Chapter 2: Fucking Hunters
Out of the Dark, Chapter 2: Fucking Hunters.

Herun was not in a good mood. First, the Grimm alarm goes off right in the middle of his quality time with his girlfriend, then his Paladin got the Inquisitor upgrades taken off due to expense, then he had to deal with a drop without a puke bag, and then he had to go into a tunnel that a bunch of stupid first-years from Beacon were freaking out about with half the amount of Knights that his mech could handle backing him up. Fucking Hunters, couldn't they do this themselves? Sure, there were a lot of tunnels, but Beacon had loads of people in it, why couldn't they have them go in? Everyone knew that Hunters were rare, sure, but if they were taking those annoying first-years and that nutter with the coffee seriously, surely they could spare 10 or so to go deal with their damn jobs?

The bear Faunus sighed as he looked through the eyes of the fifty Knights that were patrolling down here. Of course, it was probably that these used to be sewers, and the stuck-up pricks didn't want their fancy clothes ruined. Assholes, strutting around like they owned the place just because they had a shitload of Aura, unlike the poor bloody grunts that had to actually go in and deal with the shit the assholes left behind. Mech pilots held the line across the 4 Kingdoms, and the Hunters just strutted around like each and every one was personally responsible for saving the world despite pilots dying by the dozens every day to hold the line, while Hunters got "Held in reserve to deal with extreme dangers" so they could laze around. Sure, when they got off their lazy asses, they were useful, but you never saw them actually helping, just stories and rumors that were impossible. Like the ones about the 4 first years taking out a prototype Paladin by themselves. Of course, it was a prototype and therefore nowhere near as good as the finished product, but still, it was a ridiculous pile of shit that nobody with a brain actually believed. Then Knight 14 popped up a warning on sensors, and he brought it up.

"Ok, the fuck?"

There was no way this was right. If the Knight wasn't malfunctioning, there was a guy that was a good 5 feet taller then his Paladin walking around with a pack of the Fang, while wearing armor to scale. There was no way humans or Faunus got that big, and nobody would be stupid enough to try and deal with Grimm, especially giving them armor and a fucking enormous sword. It would be like trying to lure Grimm, nobody was that fucking nuts without enough drugs to kill a Goliath being pumped into them. So what the hell was this big guy?

"Deep scan, move up 18, 22, 43, and 9 to observe. Stay in cover."

The 5 Knight mechs obeyed with mechanical precision, their sensors focusing on this impossible giant being. Herun's brow furrowed further as the results came in. No Aura? The bone structure was humanoid, as far as he could tell, but the metals in it's gear were fucking over his sensors something fierce. There was no way for something to fluctuate its mass that fast, or that much. And that wasn't even getting into the hardness! Even after he ran a diagnostic to confirm that something wasn't broken or jammed, the results still were just as physics-breaking. He hit the comms key on his control board and linked up the sensor feed to command.

"General Ironwood, I've got something. But it's impossible."

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Ironwood was not having a good day either. He hadn't had lunch outside of a MRE eaten while moving on-site to the reported Grimm assault, and now he had to deal with running a pack of Paladins through the old sewers while trying to keep track of what troops should go where to deal with problems. This was not a easy task, even with the command console built into his arm. Then a call pinged off from Paladin 14, and he hit the glowing icon representing it on the holographic overlay.

"What do you have, Paladin 14? I'm a bit busy here."

"Sir, look at the data feed coming in. Something weird is going on, and that doesn't say good things to me at all."

He pulled up the data stream, and his eyes narrowed as he saw the massive humanoid with a pack of the White Fang around it's feet. What were the White Fang doing here? The Huntresses that had rang the alarm said that they had been blowing holes in the tunnel to let in Grimm, but the tunnel was empty, although there were holes. He would normally have given them a blistering lecture about not panicking in a fight, and sent them to Ozpin for discipline, but their escort, Oobleck, had agreed with them, and that was alarming, because either a veteran Huntsman had panicked badly enough to ring the alarm, or something was keeping the Grimm out. Neither of those spoke of good things for Vale or his men, and he didn't like that all. The data kept streaming in, and then the density measures finished loading.

"I see what you mean by weird, Paladin 14. Human or Faunus, nothing is that dense except Grimm, and that's no Grimm that I've ever heard of. Group up your Knights and yourself near it. I'd send in the others, but that would take at least a hour, and at the current rate that group of the Fang are moving at, they'll hit the unmapped regions in 40 minutes. You're the only one close enough to grab them. Aim for nonlethal areas, but don't hesitate to kill if you're in danger. You matter a lot more then a hostage. And watch out for that big one, I'm uploading it's weak points from my Semblance right now."

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Herun nodded as his orders came in.

"Yessir, General Ironwood. I'll try for a capture. Weak points loaded into my Knights, and have been set up on my overlay."

"Good man. Keep the data-links running. I want to see what this new being is, and how it fights. If the White Fang made whatever that being is, they just jumped to my number one priority. And don't forget to record."

"Yessir. Moving out."

His fingers expertly maneuvered the keys and buttons running the machine he was piloting, and it turned on the new path as the rest of his 50 Knights converged on a intercept course with the White Fang group and the giant. He had a job, and he knew exactly what to do.

30 minutes later...

Artorias was getting tired. Normally, half a hour of walking with 10 minutes rest beforehand would be easy, but he hadn't slept for however long the Abyss had taken him, and that was taking its toll. The group of allies he had defended from the beasts had volunteered to take him somewhere safe where he could rest and eat. That would be nice. Especially if he could get a shield. He was good with a blade, but 2-handing wasn't his specialty. He was good at it, though, but not as good as he was with sword and shield. It was annoying to have to compensate for how rusty he was, literally and metaphorically. His voice croaked out a few syllables of amusement at the thought, the effort resulting in blood running down his throat from sheer lack of use. His allies heads snapped towards him like they were on one of Sen's gears, as he hadn't spoke since they met. One of them, with a ring of fur around her neck, spoke up.

"You can talk?"

This earned another bloody chuckle of amusement from the ancient knight.

"Y...e..s. N..o...t......W..e...l...l.....T....h..i...r...s..t..y."

The fur-necked woman grabbed a flask from her belt, and offered it to him.

"It's not much water, but it might help. Should I remove the cap? Your hands are a bit big for it."

The Abysswalker smiled, and his lips cracked and bled with the unfamiliar movement.

"N...o.....C...a...p....P...l...e...a....s...e."

The woman dutifully unscrewed the cap, and he delicately took it with two of his fingers, and lifted his helm up to drink from the comparatively tiny flask.

The lion Faunus stared at the giant knights face as it drank from her flask. It looked like it only had a few scars, all in the oddest places, until you looked closer and saw what looked like scars were the only places without any scar tissue at all. It wasn't a particularly ugly or handsome face, the green eyes weren't anything special, and the white hair was a mop, but the beings face had some odd feeling around it, like it was some sort of legendary orator. You wanted to look more, to examine it, to follow them and obey his orders like it was a general. It was strange, and it didn't make any sense, like its soul was somehow bigger then his body despite their lack of Aura, and it was pushing at her. She shook herself, and accepted the now-empty flask back from the being.

"T..h.a..n.k...Y.o..u."

"You're welcome, sir?"

The last word in a questioning tone, querying if sir was indeed it's gender, or if her mind was using the wrong pronoun. The massive knights mouth curled into a smile, and it's, no, his, head nodded. She kept walking towards the base, where hopefully they could rest for a bit. Walking this far after being thoroughly thumped by some Huntresses was tiring indeed.

The Wolf Knight felt much better after the drink. It wasn't much, true, but the gesture was nice, and it helped a bit. Still, he had to get to somewhere to rest soon, or he was going to collapse. Still, he could manage a few mo-What was that clanking noise?

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Herun grinned as he saw clear shock run through the huge frame of the unknown being. His tactic of going ahead of them had not been expected, as the Fang were in the front and between their guard and him. It had taken some careful maneuvering and a collapsed wall or two to get here, but the results were well worth it. A surprised enemy was halfway defeated already, and he turned on the external speakers on his Knights and Paladin, before pulling down the microphone that connected to them.

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Artorias stared at the golem. It clearly wasn't Sen's work, he would have had anyone who had made anything with joints that exposed and with no weaponry aside from a pair of long tubes thrown into a pit of Titanite Demons. Its lesser companions looked like a dregling could tear them in half, for Gwyn's sake! Still, his allies were between it and him, but it wasn't attacking yet, so-

"Everyone, on the ground! Now! This is the Vale Military! You are to be taken into custody and interrogated on suspicion of terrorist acts! Drop your weapons, or I will be forced to use force!"

Artorias shook himself. He didn't know what the golem was talking about, but he knew what interrogation was. Not something someone let happen to their allies. He knew, in the scraps and remnants of his mind, that people with masks were his allies. Therefore, he would not let the people with masks be interrogated. It was simple, and so he hefted his blade, gauged the distance, and leaped over his allies at the golem, intending to carve through it's escorts before cutting it in half.

"By the unholy 9-balled nutsack of Armok, how does anything that big MOVE THAT FAST?"

Herun was not pleased with the situation. The Fang were damn close to surrendering, then the giant lunatic actually JUMPED over them like they were some kind of speedbump! You didn't do that without a Aura, but he quite clearly had none, as his Knights bullets sinking into the giants flesh without a single spark proved. He targeted the hand holding the massive blade with his plasma cannons even as his brain tried to think of a explanation for how something that big moved like that. The flashes of star-heart slammed into the monster's hand, and he saw the titanic blade fall out of its hands. But all the reaction that it got was a short shake, like it had just put its hand on a hot stove. The limb wasn't even visibly burned! Whatever this was, it needed to die, because the Fang were dangerous enough without something like this on their side. Half his Knights were gone already from their work, 3 from the lion Faunus with the hammer-crossbow. He triggered the missiles mounted on his Paladin's back, aiming them at the giants head, before stepping off the ground and launching his mech forward with as much force as it could muster, as it wasn't STOPPING despite the bullets sinking into it. He had to hit it with something big, and a Paladin had some very big fists.

Artorias's head shook as the anti-tank charges detonated on his skull, his vision rattling like he had just gotten clubbed on the back of the neck by Bishop Havel. And before his vision cleared, a fist slammed into his gut, driving his breath out even while the lesser golems around him pricked his skin like a swarm of mosquitoes. His instincts took over, and he dropped to the ground, letting the massive lump of metal fall on top of him while his hands groped for something to hit it with. Even as the machine fell, his hand found one of the lesser golems, and he slammed it into the machines back, denting the hunk of metal even as it tried to slam it's fists into his skull.

That wasn't good enough.

He needed to hit it harder. His sword was out of his reach, but the joints on the golem weren't too strong looking, and so he jammed his hand in and pulled, the whole limb coming off with the deific strength of the Wolf Knight.

Not good enough.

His other hand gripped the other limb even as the severed one was thrown into the crowd of lesser golems surrounding him, smashing them to bits with its force. And he threw, the massive machine flying through the air as he slammed it with the strength that had shattered the Everlasting Dragons. As it struck the ground, it came apart, some strange Sorcery protecting the inhabitant from harm as the golem he had apparently been controlling fell to pieces around him. He turned around, and felt his body finally give up the ghost, hundreds of years of exhaustion finally catching up to him as his body slammed into the ground, crushing a unfortunate Knight underneath his bulk.

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Ironwood stared at the data-feed from Paladin 14. The monster of a fighter, despite a lack of Aura, had just ignored 50 Knights and a Paladin hitting it with full force, taken a plasma cannon to the hand and acting only mildly perturbed in response, then somehow ripping off one of the Paladin's limbs and throwing it over 200 feet. What sort of creature did that? It was clearly clever, given that it hadn't just started whacking the Paladin with the torn-off limb after seeing the result of hitting it with a Knight. And judging by the state of its equipment, the creature wasn't even in top condition. No healthy fighter would ever let their gear degrade to the point where it was a few scraps of chain and cloth like that. He'd seen more cloth on strippers, for Dust's sake! Whatever it was, he needed his men out of there, now. That thing clearly needed a lot more firepower to take down, and he couldn't get anything near it in time that wouldn't just be ripped apart like Paladin 14.

"All units, exit the tunnels! Unknown adversary has just destroyed Paladin 14 and its escorting Knights! If the unknown being is encountered, do NOT ENGAGE. Knights didn't do more then scratch it, and a plasma cannon just annoyed it. Pictures and data on it are transmitting now. I repeat, all units, exit the tunnels!"

Next time it showed up, he would be ready. If it could ignore Knights, and Paladins only annoyed it, then he would hit it with enough artillery to make a Goliath into paste. That should work, and if not, he would have Hunters standing by to finish it off. If it could survive that, then all he could do is hope it didn't attack anywhere populated, because that would mean it's not stoppable without strategic weaponry. He didn't want to use strategic weaponry. The side effects were unpleasant, and he never wanted to see them again. Never again.

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Ash shook off her hammer and mane, coated in oil from the Knights she had crushed. The remaining Fang members hadn't taken any losses, though that was only because the Knights had been single-mindedly focused on her new ally. Even as he had somehow managed to throw a Paladin well over her head, she had been putting bolts through the CPU of the Knights around him, hoping that reducing the sheer volume of rounds would help him not die instantly. It hadn't been necessary, as he had charged right through with nothing more then minor scrapes, like those a child would have from falling off a bike.

Then she saw him fall, the titan that had just chucked a state-of-the-art piece of military machinery hundreds of feet collapsing like a ragdoll. Orders started snapping out of her mouth, "Get the sword! Pick him up! Get moving!" but she couldn't get her men to do the impossible.

Carrying the blade alone took 6 of them, and the rest could barely even drag him along, yet alone lift him. She would have to leave him behind, unless a miracle happened.

And so one did, as a familiar mask pattern started glowing in the dark ahead.

Adam nodded towards her. "Good job getting your subordinates out of that mess, miss. Your name?" She jumped in shock, Adam was here! He was practically the reason the Fang still existed after that bitch had betrayed them.

"Uh, Ash Williams, sir!" Adam nodded.

"Right. Now, who's this new fellow? An ally?" He gestured to the collapsed titan recumbent on the floor.

"Uh, yessir! He took out the Grimm that were being lured by the train, and this Paladin right here! We even managed to grab the pilot, a bear Faunus."

"Good job, Williams. This job is FUBAR already, and I'm quite glad that you've managed to salvage something from this trainwreck. Now, I've brought some Paladins in case of heavy gear showing up, so let them pick this new guy up, and while we walk, you can tell me all about exactly what happened. In detail."
 
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Chapter 3
Chapter 3:
White Fang base, Mountain Glenn, 12 hours later.

"…And that's what happened before you came along, sir." Adam Taurus nodded in acknowledgement. "Good job, Williams. You and your men should go get some rest." She saluted, and walked off.

The bull Faunus shook his head, and walked over to this new arrival. Going by what Williams had told him, he had killed every single Grimm that had followed the train. By himself. That was a feat he himself would be hard-pressed to match, yet alone exceed. Given that the man lacked any apparent Aura? It wasn't something that could happen. Perhaps he had some Semblance that let him internalize his Aura somehow, turning his body into something that could fight Grimm on an equal level? Maybe, but then why didn't he go back to normal when he collapsed? Semblances had to be consciously maintained at that level of power for most people, outside of edge cases with very limited powers, or those with obscene amounts of it. So what was going on?

The leader of the White Fang, veteran of hundreds of raids on the Schnee Corporation, stood next to the ancient god-knight, lost in thought, trying to understand the impossible warrior before him.

However, his train of thought was interrupted by one of the Fang's medics tapping him on the shoulder. "Sir, I've got that report you wanted on our new guest. What we could manage, at least. There are far, far too many things we don't know about him, so there's holes the size of a Goliath in it." He grabbed the paper being offered, and started scanning it, his eyes passing over medical jargon and calculations without comprehension, and he looked up. "I'm no doctor. Could you summarize for me?" The man took a deep breath, and began to speak.

"First, sir, he's incredibly durable. We've pulled well over a hundred rounds out of him, and several of them were just flattened on his skin." He walked over to the massive being, and plucked a flat metal disc off his arm. "As you can see here. This means that we can't get any needles in, and that we can't really stitch up his wounds. We have cleaned him up, but we can't administer anything until we know how to actually perform an injection." He dropped the flattened bullet on the ground, and as it clattered on the concrete floor, the Faunus pointed to a place on the new mans arm where a round had eaten a chunk of muscle.

"Second, he's healing too fast. I know that sounds odd as a problem, but it ties into his third problem. When you compare how fast he heals to a scaled-up normal human, he's about 3 times as fast as he should be. This is another problem with getting an IV into him, the few we did manage to get in just got pushed out slowly."

Adam nodded. Those both made sense. "So, what's the third problem?" The medic winced.

"Third, and arguably worst, is that he's malnourished to the point I'm amazed he's not dead. He has no fat on his body we can see, so he doesn't have anything to work with for his healing. Unless he has some sort of ability to generate nutrients, proteins, and sugars, he HAS to have materials to fix himself with. Normal people have fat, but he doesn't have any, so his body is going to take from muscles, bones, less-used organs, everywhere really. Unless we can feed him, he's going to autocannibalize himself. He's already showing signs of extreme muscular degradation. We've managed to get some fluids down him, but any attempts to get anything more solid then milk down just hits the gag reflex."

The medic shook his head, in awe at the beings sheer refusal to die. "Sir, he should be dead. His rate of healing, combined with his lack of anything vaguely resembling reserves to work with, means he's going to die in around 20 days. Maybe more, if we work on pumping fluids with nutrients down his throat, but the only method we have is literally propping him up and pouring it down his throat. Even then, he throws it up half the time."

Adam nodded his understanding again.

"Thank you. Try and get him fed. We can stay here for quite a while, so you should be able to get something together to feed him. Talk to the engineers, they should be able to make something that's long enough to fit down his throat." Adam stood up, and shook the medics hand. "Tell them I want something to feed our new arrival. They'll probably grumble, but they should do it. If they don't, tell me. This new person is a significant force on his own, given that he can pick up and throw a Paladin. If we can replicate his equipment, we should be able to move up our efforts significantly. If you need anything to get him up and healthy, don't hesitate to ask."
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I'm in the dark. I'm not in the Dark. I can't see. I can't feel. I hurt. I collapsed. This is bad. I can't do anything. I have to live. I have to live. I have to keep going. I have to fight the every-growing Dark. I have to defend people against Humanity run rampant, the Abyss. I have to. I have to. It's my purpose. I have to.

I writhe in my own mind, the shattered remnants of self refusing to coalesce. I can't think, my body is shattered, and my armor and weapon are rusted and ruined. I still have to fight. That is why I am, why I am the Wolf Knight. I know I am the Wolf Knight. This is what I know. I hold this, and try to assemble the thousand shards of my memories around this core concept.

And while I work, I feel. I feel heat, a familiar thrum against my skin, but not on the skin of my body. It's the power of a Lord. I've felt it before, when fighting alongside Lord Gwyn. When he threw his lightning, this same feeling ran over my skin. Then it stops, and again I feel Dark. Dark pushes, massive amounts equal to a Lord coming towards me. And then, it stops. Like some force beyond comprehension pushed it somewhere else. Then the heat of the flame created by the Witch with her own soul, creating the mutated cripple cousin of the First Flame, bathes my skin for a fraction of a second. It is not so gentle as a Lord, and in the privacy of my mind, I scream in agony.
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And in the Emerald Forest, a titanic monstrosity land noisily upon a tree, corpulent weight bearing a massive hammer. The Asylum Demon stood up. It wasn't an intelligent being, by any measure, but it knew its job. Kill any humans who try to leave. Then one had killed it. Now it was here. Its job was to kill humans. It would find some. And so the enfleshed automata walked off.
 
Well, at first glance I'd say that walls of text, man. Be careful, they'll bleed your eyes until you aren't sure if you were on that line or the next.

Put each new reply "..." on it's own line. Because damn.

Space it up.

That'd already do wonders.

Can't make myself read it other than skimming.
 
Well, at first glance I'd say that walls of text, man. Be careful, they'll bleed your eyes until you aren't sure if you were on that line or the next.

Put each new reply "..." on it's own line. Because damn.

Space it up.

That'd already do wonders.

Can't make myself read it other than skimming.
Spaced it up a bit, anything else? Always willing to take advice.
 
Hmm, I like it. Goes to the high end interpretation of dark souls, and I'm more than perfectly fine with that.
 
I don't have the faintest clue as to what's what in the RWBY universe. I only know Dark Souls. A few things to keep in mind-

1) Artorias was known to have a near unbreakable will

2) Elizabeth commented that Artorias' Soul didn't ever know a sliver of darkness, unlike a humans.

So he's probably the A-typical Paladin type. This is further reinforced by the cut dialogue you can find on Youtube. He's concerned for others above himself.

You need to keep something in mind though. (Again I have no idea as to the inner workings of RWBY) But keep in mind your escalation factor.

Artorias is half dead at the moment, armor, weapons etc. all near shot to shit, hardly in top form and he still largely curbstomped everything. That means that when he eventually gets back to full form he'll be even MORE powerful.

This means that in order to keep balance you'll have to keep upping the ante and eventually that might just get ridiculous. Arty is a demi-god so he is powerful as hell, but don't go completely overboard to the point that his opposition has to bring out the equivalent of Imperator Titans on their tech and power scale to make a dent.
 
I don't have the faintest clue as to what's what in the RWBY universe. I only know Dark Souls. A few things to keep in mind-

1) Artorias was known to have a near unbreakable will

2) Elizabeth commented that Artorias' Soul didn't ever know a sliver of darkness, unlike a humans.

So he's probably the A-typical Paladin type. This is further reinforced by the cut dialogue you can find on Youtube. He's concerned for others above himself.

You need to keep something in mind though. (Again I have no idea as to the inner workings of RWBY) But keep in mind your escalation factor.

Artorias is half dead at the moment, armor, weapons etc. all near shot to shit, hardly in top form and he still largely curbstomped everything. That means that when he eventually gets back to full form he'll be even MORE powerful.

This means that in order to keep balance you'll have to keep upping the ante and eventually that might just get ridiculous. Arty is a demi-god so he is powerful as hell, but don't go completely overboard to the point that his opposition has to bring out the equivalent of Imperator Titans on their tech and power scale to make a dent.
Well, Remnant doesn't have the type of Bullshit Soul Magic needed to replicate Silversteel, and they lack Titanite entirely right now, so they can't really replace his gear. Also, he took on a horde of mook Grimm. A few really big ones could smash him. He is the biggest individual shitkicker on Remnant, though. That just means that he's not going to fight 1v1 much. Also, he's a god, not a demi-god. Nitpick.
 
Well, Remnant doesn't have the type of Bullshit Soul Magic needed to replicate Silversteel, and they lack Titanite entirely right now, so they can't really replace his gear. Also, he took on a horde of mook Grimm. A few really big ones could smash him. He is the biggest individual shitkicker on Remnant, though. That just means that he's not going to fight 1v1 much. Also, he's a god, not a demi-god. Nitpick.

I don't think so. The only "Gods" are the Four Original Souls. (Gwyn, Nito, Izalith, Manus) everything else is either a Demi-god, a Dragon or Mortal.

(Edit: Save for Gwyn and Izalith's Kids)
 
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I don't think so. The only "Gods" are the Four Original Souls. (Gwyn, Nito, Izalith, Manus) everything else is either a Demi-god, a Dragon or Mortal.

(Edit: Save for Gwyn and Izalith's Kids)
Anor Londo, City of the Gods. The 4 souls are Lords. They are far, far beyond Gods. Gods are a race, Silver Knights are gods. Also, Mortal and Human aren't the same things.
So there is:
1:Lords. 4 souls. Bullshit.
2:Gods. Silver Knights, Black Knights, Royal Sentinals, Gwyndolin, Gwynevere.
3: Humans. Bear part of the Dark Soul. You know who these are.
4: Dragons. You know these.
5: Other. Animals, animate golems, giants, etc. The weird shit.
 
Anor Londo, City of the Gods. The 4 souls are Lords. They are far, far beyond Gods. Gods are a race, Silver Knights are gods. Also, Mortal and Human aren't the same things.
So there is:
1:Lords. 4 souls. Bullshit.
2:Gods. Silver Knights, Black Knights, Royal Sentinals, Gwyndolin, Gwynevere.
3: Humans. Bear part of the Dark Soul. You know who these are.
4: Dragons. You know these.
5: Other. Animals, animate golems, giants, etc. The weird shit.

Meh, kind of a moot point really.

But for arguments sake:

"City of the Gods" is more Hyperbole than literal in my eyes. Of course humans would consider it a "City of Gods" with the massive difference in power from a human in comparison to even the lowest of Anor Londo's people. And in a way, they're right. All of them HAVE the blood of Gods, but they're not Gods in any real sense because, unlike the 4 Lord Souls, none of the people of Anor Londo are 'aspects' of anything. Look at Gwyn, Nito and Izalith. They are X thing made manifest. An expression of the world in physical form. Like the greek Gods. Zeus God of Thunder, Gwyn God of Sunlight, Hades God of The Underworld Nito God of Death and Disease, Poseidon God of oceans, Izalith Godess of fire.

All the other people of Anor Londo have power and...that's it. They aren't 'aspects' of the world made manifest like Gods in certain Mithos' are known to be and as the Lord Souls themselves are.

Hence why, in my mind, they're infact "Demi-Gods" not true Gods like the 4 Great Souls.
 
Meh, kind of a moot point really.

But for arguments sake:

"City of the Gods" is more Hyperbole than literal in my eyes. Of course humans would consider it a "City of Gods" with the massive difference in power from a human in comparison to even the lowest of Anor Londo's people. And in a way, they're right. All of them HAVE the blood of Gods, but they're not Gods in any real sense because, unlike the 4 Lord Souls, none of the people of Anor Londo are 'aspects' of anything. Look at Gwyn, Nito and Izalith. They are X thing made manifest. An expression of the world in physical form. Like the greek Gods. Zeus God of Thunder, Gwyn God of Sunlight, Hades God of The Underworld Nito God of Death and Disease, Poseidon God of oceans, Izalith Godess of fire.

All the other people of Anor Londo have power and...that's it. They aren't 'aspects' of the world made manifest like Gods in certain Mithos' are known to be and as the Lord Souls themselves are.

Hence why, in my mind, they're infact "Demi-Gods" not true Gods like the 4 Great Souls.
I think we just disagree on tiers here. You say Anor Londo has 4 Gods, and is full of demi-gods. I say what you call Gods are Lords, and that Gods are another race, if one greater then most Humans. Given that both are supportable, how about we call truce on this? It's not exactly a major thing. Criticism on something I fucked up somewhere, or something I could do better, that would be nice.
 
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Truce?

NEVAH!



:p

As for criticism. None yet. Like I said I don't know the first thing about RWBY to comment on the legitimacy of the story on that front and Arty is still kinda Abyss crazy so his characterization can't be commented on much either.

I will say this though, there are quite a few typos and word repetitions. Sooooo Good Beta would be my suggestion for now.
 
Truce?

NEVAH!



:p

As for criticism. None yet. Like I said I don't know the first thing about RWBY to comment on the legitimacy of the story on that front and Arty is still kinda Abyss crazy so his characterization can't be commented on much either.

I will say this though, there are quite a few typos and word repetitions. Sooooo Good Beta would be my suggestion for now.
Try watching it. Plot is pretty terrible, but the fight scenes are worthy of legend. It's on Youtube, a quick search should easily find it.
 
I like this story, but whom in Remnant can match Artorias?
1v1? Nobody. You may notice that Ironwood's thoughts on dealing with him are "trap in area, hit with artillery, send in lots of Hunters with heavy support, nuke if that fails." That would kill him, even without the strategic weaponry. He's tough, but Hunters aren't mooks to him.
 
What are the chances that Artorias would be able to piece together a decent talisman for him to start casting Miracles with?
 
What are the chances that Artorias would be able to piece together a decent talisman for him to start casting Miracles with?
Once he's sane? It's a piece of cloth. All he needs is something to focus on to cast Miracles through. Hell, he could do it with his blade. Not as effective, though.
 
I have to side with Archalngel on the matter of gods vs. demigods.

Why you ask?.

Because the Ring of the Sun Princess explicitly states that Gwynevere married "Flame god flann"

Also, Velka is explicitly referred to as the goddess of sin (Velka's talisman.). Likewise, the Embraced armor of Favor and the ring of Favor and protection both explicitly come from the goddess Fina (She's referred to as the goddess of love in DS2.)

Then of course, if you kill Gwyndolin and return to the fire keeper in Anor Londo (lady of the darkling.), She reprimands you for laying a blade against a god before trying to kill you.


So yeah, at least two goddesses and a god have a "domain". Whether or not Gwyndolin has actual dominion over the moon or is just associated with it is up to debate.
 
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