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Nefarious
Time to reap the evil of this world
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An: I have decided to join SV because FF.net never gave me proper feedback to make my story better so her it is and please be kind I've only been doing this for a few months
Chapter 1: I'm the Gamer!?
My name is David,13-years-old and a lover of anime, manga, and fanfiction alongside PS3 and PS4 games. Also a minor genius in my own right.
However, the one truly extraordinary thing about me?
I am the Gamer and this is my story.
That is what I woke up to one summer Thursday, the 2nd week of August to be exact. I first looked around to ensure that my mom was at work and my sister was out. Once I was sure I was alone, I let out a fangirlish squeal.
SQUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!
"ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod - OH. MY. GOD!" I kept babbling for 2 minutes straight until...
A powerful feeling of calm washed over me.
After I calmed down I waved away the screen and tried out one of the obvious commands in situations such as these. "Status."
Name: David
Title: The Gamer
HP: 400/400
MP: 200/200 EXP: 59/800
Level: 6
STR: 10
VIT: 5
DEX: 3
INT: 24
WIS: 29
LUK: 15
Bio: David is an average Jamaican 13 year old boy with anger issues. What sets him apart is that he was chosen to wield the Gamer ability. What will the future hold in store for him now...
Hmm. My HP was 400 while my MP was half that. Nice, at least I wasn't starting at 50 the way other Gamers I've read about in fanfiction did. And my INT, WIS and LUK are off the charts given my level. It's probably from my natural intelligence, the wisdom is likely from listening to my parents complain about life and taking their lessons to heart. My luck is probably because of the many risks I take like downloading various things that could have viruses or surreptitiously staying up all night.
I wave away the page and say "Skills."
Gamers Body (Passive) Lvl.MAX
Allows user to interact with the world they were a character in a game.
Gamers Mind (Passive) Lvl.MAX
Allows user to remain calm in dangerous situations. Grants immunity to negative mental status effects.
Fictional Adaption (Passive) Lvl.MAX
Allows user to take information and powers of fictional works, implementing them as 'truths'.
Woah! I was familiar with Gamers Mind and Gamers Body but Fictional Adaption came as a surprise. I've read about it in fanfiction, but it was a seriously OP skill. It did raise a few questions though; wouldn't it be hard to do techniques with a different source of energy? What if I wanted to do Kagebushin no Jutsu or Kido?
I swipe the window away and say "Guide."
That's gonna be hard. Not everyone will react nicely if you just come up to them and say 'Can I get a sample of your energy?' Yeah, a sword to the chest is what I would likely get. You may be asking yourself about why I was thinking about other energies and swords to the chest it's because I want to travel the multiverse. Why? Simple. This is a normal world and I always wanted to go on adventures and feel what it's like to fight with and against my favorite anime heroes and villains.
Well, sulking over this isn't going to help. If I want the powers, I will have to go to other worlds and thankfully, I have just the plan. It's the 10 step plan to travel the multiverse I came up with for fun one day. I suddenly hear a ping and look to see a quest window in front of me, making me grin at what it displays.
[10 Step Plan To Travel The Multiverse!]
Objective: Follow plan you have made to achieve the goal of being able to traverse THE Multiverse.
[ ] First Step: Train till you have 100 VIT, DEX, INT, WIS, and LUK. ( STR is optional but must be at minimum 50.)
[ ] Second Step: Learn enough about technology to make a fake identity and bank account to buy manga, games, comics and other necessities.
[ ] Third Step: Make lots of money.
[ ] Fourth Step: Learn Zelretch's Kaleidoscope.
[ ] Fifth Step: Learn to Teleport and help family reach wealth as a goodbye gift.
[ ] Sixth Step: Learn how to erase your existence from others minds so you can travel the multiverse without making parents and friends sad.
[ ] Seventh Step: Master the crafting skills such as cooking, building, engineering, etc.
[ ] Eighth Step: Learn how to make Ultra Rare items.
[ ] Ninth Step: Get laid.
[ ] Tenth Step: Travel the multiverse.
Time Limit: 3 years and 6 months
Reward Per Step: 1,000 EXP, $10,000
Final Reward: 900,000 EXP, $900,000,000
Failure: Depression for 6 months, quest must be redone.
Okay, let's do this! I will reach my goal AND be bad-ass while doing it!
END
END
Okay bitches was that awesome or what!
I will regrettably will be doing alot of time skips since David will be doing a lot. And when I say alot I mean ALOT!
BYE FOR NOW.
Chapter 1: I'm the Gamer!?
My name is David,13-years-old and a lover of anime, manga, and fanfiction alongside PS3 and PS4 games. Also a minor genius in my own right.
However, the one truly extraordinary thing about me?
I am the Gamer and this is my story.
Congratulations!
You have been chosen to hold the most overpowered ability in existence!
That's right, you are now The Gamer!
Have fun!
You have been chosen to hold the most overpowered ability in existence!
That's right, you are now The Gamer!
Have fun!
That is what I woke up to one summer Thursday, the 2nd week of August to be exact. I first looked around to ensure that my mom was at work and my sister was out. Once I was sure I was alone, I let out a fangirlish squeal.
SQUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!
"ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod - OH. MY. GOD!" I kept babbling for 2 minutes straight until...
[Calm]
A powerful feeling of calm washed over me.
After I calmed down I waved away the screen and tried out one of the obvious commands in situations such as these. "Status."
Name: David
Title: The Gamer
HP: 400/400
MP: 200/200 EXP: 59/800
Level: 6
STR: 10
VIT: 5
DEX: 3
INT: 24
WIS: 29
LUK: 15
Bio: David is an average Jamaican 13 year old boy with anger issues. What sets him apart is that he was chosen to wield the Gamer ability. What will the future hold in store for him now...
Hmm. My HP was 400 while my MP was half that. Nice, at least I wasn't starting at 50 the way other Gamers I've read about in fanfiction did. And my INT, WIS and LUK are off the charts given my level. It's probably from my natural intelligence, the wisdom is likely from listening to my parents complain about life and taking their lessons to heart. My luck is probably because of the many risks I take like downloading various things that could have viruses or surreptitiously staying up all night.
I wave away the page and say "Skills."
Gamers Body (Passive) Lvl.MAX
Allows user to interact with the world they were a character in a game.
Gamers Mind (Passive) Lvl.MAX
Allows user to remain calm in dangerous situations. Grants immunity to negative mental status effects.
Fictional Adaption (Passive) Lvl.MAX
Allows user to take information and powers of fictional works, implementing them as 'truths'.
Woah! I was familiar with Gamers Mind and Gamers Body but Fictional Adaption came as a surprise. I've read about it in fanfiction, but it was a seriously OP skill. It did raise a few questions though; wouldn't it be hard to do techniques with a different source of energy? What if I wanted to do Kagebushin no Jutsu or Kido?
I swipe the window away and say "Guide."
"Hello Gamer I am an A.I made to function as your 'Guide'."
A window that appeared in front of me while a robotic female voice said relayed the text displayed. I raise an eyebrow but just decide to shrug it off and asked my questions, "Okay, I just wanted to know if I can use any other sources of energy? And if I can; how?"
"You will be able to do so but will require a sample of the target energy to absorb into your body so that it may be adapted and incorporated."
I sigh at that before giving her a quick thank you and dismissing her.
That's gonna be hard. Not everyone will react nicely if you just come up to them and say 'Can I get a sample of your energy?' Yeah, a sword to the chest is what I would likely get. You may be asking yourself about why I was thinking about other energies and swords to the chest it's because I want to travel the multiverse. Why? Simple. This is a normal world and I always wanted to go on adventures and feel what it's like to fight with and against my favorite anime heroes and villains.
Well, sulking over this isn't going to help. If I want the powers, I will have to go to other worlds and thankfully, I have just the plan. It's the 10 step plan to travel the multiverse I came up with for fun one day. I suddenly hear a ping and look to see a quest window in front of me, making me grin at what it displays.
[10 Step Plan To Travel The Multiverse!]
Objective: Follow plan you have made to achieve the goal of being able to traverse THE Multiverse.
[ ] First Step: Train till you have 100 VIT, DEX, INT, WIS, and LUK. ( STR is optional but must be at minimum 50.)
[ ] Second Step: Learn enough about technology to make a fake identity and bank account to buy manga, games, comics and other necessities.
[ ] Third Step: Make lots of money.
[ ] Fourth Step: Learn Zelretch's Kaleidoscope.
[ ] Fifth Step: Learn to Teleport and help family reach wealth as a goodbye gift.
[ ] Sixth Step: Learn how to erase your existence from others minds so you can travel the multiverse without making parents and friends sad.
[ ] Seventh Step: Master the crafting skills such as cooking, building, engineering, etc.
[ ] Eighth Step: Learn how to make Ultra Rare items.
[ ] Ninth Step: Get laid.
[ ] Tenth Step: Travel the multiverse.
Time Limit: 3 years and 6 months
Reward Per Step: 1,000 EXP, $10,000
Final Reward: 900,000 EXP, $900,000,000
Failure: Depression for 6 months, quest must be redone.
Okay, let's do this! I will reach my goal AND be bad-ass while doing it!
END
END
Okay bitches was that awesome or what!
I will regrettably will be doing alot of time skips since David will be doing a lot. And when I say alot I mean ALOT!
BYE FOR NOW.
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Zimary
[Cakravala Cakravrtin] [Penguin of the Sith]
- Location
- Portland, OR
This looks promising, I did some deep beta to it. My several complaints though:
You wonder about how you will go about learning techniques that require different energies such as Kagebunshin, the Guide says you need a sample of that energy to absorb and incorporate. Yet one of your goals is to make a mana base Henge, so what is stopping you from doing the same with the other techniques?
You might want to lower your goals a bit because you're setting yourself up as Godlike, not OP. For instance, the crafting skill goal and the stat point goal both need to have the bar lowered unless you're spending multiple chapters - an entire arc - in your home dimensions in which case the stat points are more sensible. Similarly, the reward for completing the quest is ridiculously high. Learning to make Ultra Rare items should be completely removed and left as a surprising discovery for when you're grinding your crafting skills and have reached a high enough level, maybe make an Appraisal skill once you reach a high enough level in several Crafting areas that allows you to see how rare an item is as well as what it is made of and maybe even a recipe for it at a higher level. Finally, none of the goals actually cover how you will learn to travel the multiverse.
Other than that, I look forward to the next chapter.
- Location
- New Zealand
It's like you ate a character sheet and a children's essay after drinking a bottle of tequila and vomited this all over the page.
- Location
- Courthouse
FUI (fanficcing under influence) should be prohibited.
themisticShroud
The Red King And His Court
- Location
- The Seireitei
This looks very promising but make sure it has good grammar. Still not bad.
- Location
- Australia
Use fiction adaption on himura kenshin movies/books/anime/manga to learn the best sword style ever. Hiten mitsurugi-ryu. When himura uses it hes a badass, and tgats when he is only a bit above average in speed compared to a normal human but when compared to his master hiko seijuro hes subpar. Imagine useing that sword style with a superhuman body and awesome sword. Also try jojos bizzare adventure for the martial arts style seen here Ripple
It doesnt say anything about it requiring a specific power, it only says that the users breathing helps him to take in the power of the sun. So if anything you gain a powerful fighting style that you can use pretty much anywhere while also being full of positive energy which is extra useful against any dark aligned supernatual enemies while also being powerful against any other type of enemy.
It doesnt say anything about it requiring a specific power, it only says that the users breathing helps him to take in the power of the sun. So if anything you gain a powerful fighting style that you can use pretty much anywhere while also being full of positive energy which is extra useful against any dark aligned supernatual enemies while also being powerful against any other type of enemy.
themisticShroud
The Red King And His Court
- Location
- The Seireitei
That is not a bad idea. With the ripple it can certainly help help and has a advantage that the ripple can hurt vampires.
So... Usually when I see this many warning flags I just move on but for some inexplicable reason I feel compelled to offer advice on some small, general bits of wisdom.
-Conflict does not (just) mean punching people in the face. Nor is it over the top contrived suffering.
-Character developent is not about acquiring cool new powers.
-Agency is something all characters should have.
'Op protagonist' can be done well (see one punch man) but it takes effort. A good SI can be written. But it requires a certain amount of introspection and maturity. Good luck.
-Conflict does not (just) mean punching people in the face. Nor is it over the top contrived suffering.
-Character developent is not about acquiring cool new powers.
-Agency is something all characters should have.
'Op protagonist' can be done well (see one punch man) but it takes effort. A good SI can be written. But it requires a certain amount of introspection and maturity. Good luck.
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Nefarious
Time to reap the evil of this world
- Location
- Jamaica
Thanks for the constructive criticism and those who tried to make fun of me(I say tried because I don't give a fly f**k)can kiss my ass and yes I'm 13 but that won't stop me from cursing you to oblivion oh and I will try to make the chapters longer and fix the grammar. Oh and thanks Zimary for editing it and I might think about the rare items thing it's just that his weapons will be made by him and I don't to have him to suddenly have master blacksmith skills no one heard about and most of those things you put into the edit I don't know how to add except the bold. Also I want all of your opinions on making him a lone wolf and someone tell me how to use some of the things on this site as I am new. And to all the critics please hold your tongues unless you have something thing constructive to say you pieces of dog shit! *Huff huff* sorry about that I really do have anger issues so please keep your hurtful words down. I came to this site because I could get responses on how to get better so please constructive criticism only.
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Nefarious
Time to reap the evil of this world
- Location
- Jamaica
Highschool DxD
Naruto
Bleach
Fate/Stay Knight
Marvel(X-Men Avengers etc)
DC
DBZ and some others on the way
Preveiw of Chapter 1
Nefarious
Time to reap the evil of this world
- Location
- Jamaica
Chapter 2: Training Montage 1!
For the rest of the day I went and exercised upping my Dex,Str and Cut by 3. I found it I didn't have to by the exact books to use my Fiction Adaption skill. I could just print them. I found this out when I printed of information about Zelretch's Kaleidoscope and some Nasueverse books and the pop up appeared asking if I wanted to learn them. It worked and I got a Kaleidoscope skill that uses 300 MP. I wanted to just immediately jump to some universes and get some energy samples but I squashed the idea when I didn't even have a way to collect samples as of yet without getting killed. I found out that Fiction Adaption let me live out any characters lives so I would get their smarts increasing my Wis and Int which are currently at 35 and 50 respectively. Another thing was that all their items and powers wouldo go into my inventory, magic skills didn't appear but meta powers like the Flash's super speed appeared. I decided not to use them until I decide to go to a universe with similar powers.*sigh*Well better get some training over with.
(5 Weeks Later)-(September on Monday)
I was a little miffed that school was gonna officially start back today. It would mess up my plans for training. I didn't go into any dungeons yet. I was primarily working out learning all sorts fighting styles like Sanji's Black Leg style from One Piece and Hiten
mitsurugi-ryu from Rouronin Kenshin.They came up like this
BLack Leg Style-(Active)
The Black Leg Style is a martial-arts style that was created by Sanji under training byZeff. It is designed to free the use of one's hands and prevent them from being damaged during a battle, something that is disastrous to a chef like Sanji or Zeff. As a result, practitioners tend to drop into certain stances in which their upper-body portions are most relaxed, such as placing their hands inside their pockets or crossing their arms together across their chest, and only puts them into action whenever the event requires them to do certain maneuvers such as handstands, which aren't prohibited
Collier : A kick to the neck which the user does whilst still on the ground. This attack forms part of the Collier, Épaule, Côtelette, Selle, Poitrine, Gigot, Mouton Shot combo.
For the rest of the day I went and exercised upping my Dex,Str and Cut by 3. I found it I didn't have to by the exact books to use my Fiction Adaption skill. I could just print them. I found this out when I printed of information about Zelretch's Kaleidoscope and some Nasueverse books and the pop up appeared asking if I wanted to learn them. It worked and I got a Kaleidoscope skill that uses 300 MP. I wanted to just immediately jump to some universes and get some energy samples but I squashed the idea when I didn't even have a way to collect samples as of yet without getting killed. I found out that Fiction Adaption let me live out any characters lives so I would get their smarts increasing my Wis and Int which are currently at 35 and 50 respectively. Another thing was that all their items and powers wouldo go into my inventory, magic skills didn't appear but meta powers like the Flash's super speed appeared. I decided not to use them until I decide to go to a universe with similar powers.*sigh*Well better get some training over with.
(5 Weeks Later)-(September on Monday)
I was a little miffed that school was gonna officially start back today. It would mess up my plans for training. I didn't go into any dungeons yet. I was primarily working out learning all sorts fighting styles like Sanji's Black Leg style from One Piece and Hiten
mitsurugi-ryu from Rouronin Kenshin.They came up like this
BLack Leg Style-(Active)
The Black Leg Style is a martial-arts style that was created by Sanji under training byZeff. It is designed to free the use of one's hands and prevent them from being damaged during a battle, something that is disastrous to a chef like Sanji or Zeff. As a result, practitioners tend to drop into certain stances in which their upper-body portions are most relaxed, such as placing their hands inside their pockets or crossing their arms together across their chest, and only puts them into action whenever the event requires them to do certain maneuvers such as handstands, which aren't prohibited
Collier : A kick to the neck which the user does whilst still on the ground. This attack forms part of the Collier, Épaule, Côtelette, Selle, Poitrine, Gigot, Mouton Shot combo.
- Collier Shoot : Collier enhanced version. The user jumps high into the air and lands a powerful kick to the opponent's neck.
- Épaule : A downward kick targeting the opponent's shoulder, meant to knock them off balance or drive them into the ground.
- Épaule Shoot : Épaule enhanced version. Jumps into the air then brings his heel down on the opponent's shoulder.
- Côtelette : Dropping down into a one-handed handstand position, the user kicks the opponent hard in the ribs, this attack is usually followed by Selle.
- Selle : Commonly used as a combo attack with Côtelette, using the momentum from the Côtelette attack the user(still in a handstand) spins around in the opposite direction to deliver a fast kick to the opponent's lower back or lumbarregion.Selle is the French term for lower back meat.
- Poitrine: A stabbing kick straight into the opponent's chest. Also used in a series of kick and as a named attack against Kuroobi.Poitrineis the French term for breast meat.
- Poitrine Shoot : Poitrine enhanced version, except that this time you aims a little higher and kicks up instead of down.
- Gigot : Running at the opponent the user delivers a sweeping kick to the knee caps, the opponent is either send flying or slammed to the ground as a result.
- Mouton Shot : One of the strongest angle kicks, and a common finishing move.The user starts by jumping or flipping into the air and then channels all his might into one leg to deliver a kick to the opponent's midsection, or sometimes their head, that sends them flying. .Mouton is French for "mutton", meaning cooked lamb meat.
- Reception : Lifting one of your legs up high and hooks your foot around the opponent's neck, then uses that leg to smash the opponent's face into the ground hard. This attack is not named after anything food-related, but after the "Reception" that one gets when entering a restaurant.
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themisticShroud
The Red King And His Court
- Location
- The Seireitei
It is a good start but add a few more snippets of details but with more time I believe that you can achieve a good quality to your posts. So keep it up my friend.
themisticShroud
The Red King And His Court
- Location
- The Seireitei
Jest press the replay button or the +quote one, and it is okay.
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Energy/Forces types you should have already they are so readily available. Electric, thermal, kinetic, magnetic, chemical etc. Possibly subgroups if they rate seperately as well. Then once you sample the more exotic stuff, you can translate them into 'normal' devices that can do the same thing. If you can change them as well - you suddenly have no risk of running out of mana - you just walk, or drink, or electrocute yourself, or burn yourself etc
Energy/Forces types you should have already they are so readily available. Electric, thermal, kinetic, magnetic, chemical etc. Possibly subgroups if they rate seperately as well. Then once you sample the more exotic stuff, you can translate them into 'normal' devices that can do the same thing. If you can change them as well - you suddenly have no risk of running out of mana - you just walk, or drink, or electrocute yourself, or burn yourself etc
No longer Canon
Nefarious
Time to reap the evil of this world
- Location
- Jamaica
Hey sorry for the short chapter last time my moms phone was dieing and I had to let it charge. So let the story begin.
Chapter 3: Training Montage 2!
Chapter 3: Training Montage 2!
I was currently outside on the football(soccer) field outside my house. It was eerily quiet even though it was the middle of the day. I had just recently gotten the ID Create and ID Escape skills. I was currently in a meditation position with my eyes closed feeling out my mana making it flow around my body ,feeling a warm sensation as I made it enter my every cell,muscle and bone strengthening my body beyond compare. I opened my eyes as I heard a *ping*
Str,Vit and Dex have been increased by 5
2 new skill have been created!
Meditation-(Passive)-Lvl.1
A method to regain used up Mana and recovers it quite rapidly. Additional 30 MP gain per minute when activated
Wis increased by 15% when activated
Body Strengthening-(Active)-Lvl.1 200MP
A skill made by you to permanently strengthen your body by flowing mana into them making them stronger
permanently increases Str, Vit and Dex by 5 every hour active
I smiled at the 2 new skills as I get up. I then destroyed the empty dungeon and put up a zombie one. I immediately take out Ghost Riders chain I got from a comic I printed of the internet. It was one of the weapons that will be my main form of attack. I swung it at a slowly approaching zombie and watched as it wrapped around its head. I pulled and its head popped right off and turned into ash instantly along with its body which dropped some soul stones. I watched as the drops were transported to my inventory thanks to Auto Loot only to notice a horde of Zombies around me....wow well that was certainly.....fast.*gulp*
I sighed and decided to do something stupid but fun to spook some of the future universes I might travel. I literally had nothing to do but kill zombies now and I know it might get boring and annoying so.....
"Options"
Automatic Dungeon Entry Y/N
Music Y/N
Chat Y/N- Audio/Video
Save Y/N
Respawn Y/N
Auto Loot Y/N
Music Y/N
Chat Y/N- Audio/Video
Save Y/N
Respawn Y/N
Auto Loot Y/N
I turned on the music option noticing all I had to do was think the song and it would start playing so I picked 'Kryptonite' by 3 Doors Down . I then used the kaleidoscope to broadcast myself across multiple universes that I new could never have anyone come to my universe well except that one Bleachverse I knew was watching as I bet Urahara could find out how to get to me or much more realistically a different version of me as I can tell there are millions of Gamer versions of me with the Kaleidoscope because there are too much universes for there not to be. So lets get this on with!
I sang along with the song and whipped at the Zombies making them back off. I couldn't mess with worlds if I was dead! I flooded the chain with mana and watched as my mana bar went down to 200 it burned bright with a dark evil aura. I guess the chained gained some powers from being around Ghost Rider so much. Well time to stop dilly dallying. The time to troll commence! I swung the chain and it lengthened to wrap around several zombies. I grabbed the chain and swung the zombies around boxing others away. I released some of the mana I put in the chain and looked as it burned the zombies wrapped up in the chain watched them burn with a maniacal grin. THIS! IS! SO! FUN!
I wrapped the chain around my arm not minding the burning sensation on my arm as it quickly vanished thanks to Gamer's Body. I ran and punched a hole into a zombie's chest. I twisted as that one burned into ash. I spent the next half an hour incinerating zombies until a Legion Zombie popped up.
I sang along with the song and whipped at the Zombies making them back off. I couldn't mess with worlds if I was dead! I flooded the chain with mana and watched as my mana bar went down to 200 it burned bright with a dark evil aura. I guess the chained gained some powers from being around Ghost Rider so much. Well time to stop dilly dallying. The time to troll commence! I swung the chain and it lengthened to wrap around several zombies. I grabbed the chain and swung the zombies around boxing others away. I released some of the mana I put in the chain and looked as it burned the zombies wrapped up in the chain watched them burn with a maniacal grin. THIS! IS! SO! FUN!
I wrapped the chain around my arm not minding the burning sensation on my arm as it quickly vanished thanks to Gamer's Body. I ran and punched a hole into a zombie's chest. I twisted as that one burned into ash. I spent the next half an hour incinerating zombies until a Legion Zombie popped up.
Legion Zombie Lvl.30
I hadn't planned to have it pop up but might as well get this over with.
I checked and saw that my mana had refilled. I grinned at that ,untangled the chain and accessed my EMIYA knowledge. I hear the ping as I got his weapon copying skill and accessed any bleach knowledge but then remembered that I never absorbed any. Heh I still continued and used my knowledge from the anime to make copy of his first bankai, robes included.
I grinned and disappeared into a blur(well for the Legion Zombie) and appeared above it striking down.
This was gonna be fun!
I checked and saw that my mana had refilled. I grinned at that ,untangled the chain and accessed my EMIYA knowledge. I hear the ping as I got his weapon copying skill and accessed any bleach knowledge but then remembered that I never absorbed any. Heh I still continued and used my knowledge from the anime to make copy of his first bankai, robes included.
I grinned and disappeared into a blur(well for the Legion Zombie) and appeared above it striking down.
This was gonna be fun!
AN:Hey well what do you think! I know that it my seem stupid or rushed to have him expose himself to other worlds before he is super strong but I couldn't keep this idea out of my head and just had to put it in but if you guys want it I might reconsider and edit out. OH and those with ideas for omakes can send them to me and I'll post them after each chapter.
*After fighting the Legion Zombie*
I leaned against Tensa Zangetsu as I took deep shuddering breathes and looked around to see rubble every where and the disappearing body of the Legion Zombie along with various parts of my body that I were replaced by new organs with Gamer's Body. If not for that and healing potions I would of died.*gulp*
"Yeeeeeaaaahhhhh fuck that I'm not doing that again" I said as I took up my new sword and exited the instant dungeon. I need a shower.
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themisticShroud
The Red King And His Court
- Location
- The Seireitei
It is a good one and there is no need to rush but other than that good job.
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Krazyfan1
Worrying for the future.
- Location
- Australia
hmm...how about Wakfu and Dofus for future worlds?some of them have good loot and stuff
like, 12 gods and goddesses, with you gaining their apperence and powers the more you follow their ideals....except most of the ideals are easy, and the punishments arent even severe
like, 12 gods and goddesses, with you gaining their apperence and powers the more you follow their ideals....except most of the ideals are easy, and the punishments arent even severe
themisticShroud
The Red King And His Court
- Location
- The Seireitei
You could also go to the Jojo bizarre adventure universe. You could try and unlock a [stand] for yourself.