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Raiseth said:
[Q] Kwijibo.
-[Q] Tell him that Sayaka's in looo~ove
--[Q] With us and Hitomi.
---[Q] She's caught up in a vicious love triangle, afraid to hurt our feelings, yet still lusting after both of us, her dark emotions bubbling under a brash, tomboyish facade.
----[Q] Ask him for advice.
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This is wonderful idea.

 
A bit blunt and I don't really agree with the last bit. How about this instead?
[X] Ask Kyousuke what's wrong; he had a weird expression.
-[X]If there's a good time to let Hitomi take over as mediator, do so and slip out.
--[X]Wander off looking for Homura and Mami while keeping an eye out for Kyubey, there are a lot of desperate people in hospitals after all.
 
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[x] Ask Kyousuke which of you three he'd like to go on a date with.

A) We could put this love triangle to bed right now.

B) I'm in a weird mood right now, so I don't think I think right at the moment.
 
[JK] Ask Kyousuke which of you three he'd like to go on a date with.

[X] Ask Kyousuke what's wrong; he had a weird expression.
-[X]If there's a good time to let Hitomi take over as mediator, do so and slip out.
--[X]Wander off looking for Homura and Mami while keeping an eye out for Kyubey, there are a lot of desperate people in hospitals after all.
 
Retsof said:
Well it's 2am and I just read all this. good stuff. though your latest threadmark loops back to an older omake causing some confusion.
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The threadmark order puts omakes that A, aren't canon (#1) or B, we haven't reached that point so they aren't set in stone (#2) behind the rest of the story to let new readers keep a flow easier.
 
The last tally of 2017! Or first of 2018 for those east of me.

Vote tally:
##### 3.21
[X] Ask Kyousuke what's wrong; he had a weird expression.
-[X]If there's a good time to let Hitomi take over as mediator, do so and slip out.
--[X]There's a nonzero chance that Homura and Mami may have to fight a witch and wind up interrupting/derailing the conversation, so best to head things off now. This is important, dangit!
No. of votes: 1
ColdGoldLazarus
[X] Ask him if he met his fellow patients. They can understand him better, because of similarities of their situation.
-[X] Maybe some cute girl? *wink, wink*
No. of votes: 1
Shaseyu
[X] Ask Kyousuke what's wrong; he had a weird expression.
-[X]If there's a good time to let Hitomi take over as mediator, do so and slip out.
--[X]Wander off looking for Homura and Mami while keeping an eye out for Kyubey, there are a lot of desperate people in hospitals after all.
No. of votes: 2
tygerbright, Anya Homura
[x] Ask Kyousuke which of you three he'd like to go on a date with.
No. of votes: 1
NMS
 
[X] Ask Kyousuke what's wrong; he had a weird expression.
-[X]If there's a good time to let Hitomi take over as mediator, do so and slip out.
--[X]Wander off looking for Homura and Mami while keeping an eye out for Kyubey, there are a lot of desperate people in hospitals after all.
 
So it turns out putting "Plan" in front of someone's name doesn't mess up the bandwagon vote. Cold is put on the same vote as Tyger and Anya.
 
First of 2018 as far as I care!

Vote tally:
##### 3.21
[X] Ask him if he met his fellow patients. They can understand him better, because of similarities of their situation.
-[X] Maybe some cute girl? *wink, wink*
No. of votes: 1
Shaseyu
[X] Ask Kyousuke what's wrong; he had a weird expression.
-[X]If there's a good time to let Hitomi take over as mediator, do so and slip out.
--[X]Wander off looking for Homura and Mami while keeping an eye out for Kyubey, there are a lot of desperate people in hospitals after all.
No. of votes: 4
tygerbright, Anya Homura, ColdGoldLazarus, Jakobstj
[x] Ask Kyousuke which of you three he'd like to go on a date with.
No. of votes: 1
NMS
 
TankD115 said:
Natural 1, first.
Second, realistically, alienated yourself from all three others.
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100-sided dice doesn't have a zero?
... makes sense.
Don't know why I thought otherwise.
You know, I have an idea.
Pending.
Now.

"You know, Kwijibo," Madoka said, her face alight with madness. "Oh, by the way, can I call you Kwijibo?"

"Uh, no?" Kyousuke answered, frowning.

"Great, thanks, Kwijibo!" She smiled amiably. "So. You know, I always thought you were a shitty musician."

Everyone present in the room gasped. Kyousuke looked like he was punched in the gut; Sayaka looked like she wanted to punch Madoka in her guts instead. Hitomi looked like she was on the verge of tears, her noble demeanor crackling under the weight of Madoka's baseless accusation. How could she be so cruel?

"That's... That's not true!" She cried suddenly, her eyes burning holes in Madoka's face. "Take. It. Back."

"Or we'll make you, friends or no friends." Sayaka agreed, clutching her hands together.

Wait. Madoka didn't want that. Her idea was basically applying some shock therapy on Kyousuke to snap him out of his depression. Clearly, it didn't work as intended. She opened her mouth to apologize, and-

"Oh, come on! Stop enabling him!" Madoka blurted out. Her eyes widened in horror at realization of what she'd just said, but her mouth couldn't stop. "Everyone's crying boo-hoo! Kyousuke had such a bright future ahead! Don't make me laugh! He couldn't even differentiate between si-major and re-minor!"

Kyousuke flinched and started trembling.

"That's it, you little pink bitch!" Sayaka shouted. "I'll gut you like a fish with my own hands!"

"I'll help." Hitomi added darkly.

"W-wait, girls!" Madoka whined. "You misunderstood! I was reading these books and decided to try shock therapy, and it didn't work, but I kept trying to force it, and then I rolled one on Social..." She kept on providing excuses, but her voice dropped to inaudible whispers, as she observed her former friends' unchanging expressions of disgust and hatred.

"I'll tie her down." Sayaka mused aloud.

"I'll open the window." Hitomi offered.

"I wasn't even here." Kyousuke said, his voice quiet and shaky. "My rehabilitation exercises began five minutes ago."

My first dark omake! Yay!

... I don't want to do it ever again.

Sadly, my brain isn't asking for my opinion.
 
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Eh, sorry for alert updating, but since you can clearly see I'm not the OP, well.

[X] Plan tygerbright.
 
Raiseth said:
"I'll tie her down." Sayaka mused aloud.

"I'll open the window." Hitomi offered.

"I wasn't even here." Kyousuke said, his voice quiet and shaky. "My rehabilitation exercises began five minutes ago."
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Thrown out the window by her own best friends, Madoka closed her eyes to spend the last moments of her life in contemplation. Was her mistake really so horrible to undo all years of their friendship? Did she really deserve to die just because of her ill-thoughted attempt to help?

Then a pair of gentle hands caught her.

"Eh?" Madoka opened her eyes and found herself in the arms of red-haired girl with pocky in her mouth.

"Hi there." Madoka's saviour said. "I heard your speech. It was beautiful. Sad that some people too stupid to get it, eh?"

Madoka nodded uncertainly.

"Name's Kyoko. Yours?"

"Ma- Madoka." She answered, blushing. Why she's blushing?

"Want to return there and shank a bitch or two?" Kyoko asked.

Madoka thought about it for a moment and nodded decisively. To shank some bitches would be beneficial for her traumatized psyche.
 
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Shaseyu said:
Thrown into the window by her own best friends, Madoka closed her eyes to spend the last moments of her life in contemplation. Did her mistake really was so horrible to undid all years of their friendship? Did she really deserve to die just because of her ill-thoughted attempt to help?

Then a pair of gentle hands catched her.

"Eh?" Madoka opened her eyes and found herself in the arms of red-haired girl with pocky in her mouth.

"Hi there." Madoka's saviour said. "I heard your speech. It was beautiful. Sad that some people too stupid to get it, eh?"

Madoka nodded uncertainly.

"Name's Kyoko. Yours?"

"Ma- Madoka." She answered, blushing. Why she's blushing?

"Want to return there and shank a bitch or two?" Kyoko asked.

Madoka thought about it for a moment and nodded decisively. To shank some bitches would be beneficial for her traumatized psyche.
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Beatiful.
 
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