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I very much disagree with committing ourselves to a long adventure on another continent in the middle of the Necromancy race. Staying home and continuing to work on our seals may not be glamorous as running around killing people and taking their things, but it's genuinely the best option available to us if we don't want the quest to end with Pein taking control of the world.

[X] Action Plan: Yuno, Ino, and Uplift
I also don't want to *commit* to this, but it's pretty likely our necromancy strategy will involve PS, and all the preparations are sensible anyways.

I will agree it feels a little out of place in the plan, compared to just "encourage Noburi and Kei to go on combat missions".

Also, we should be careful and smart about what missions they go on. We don't want to be rescuing *more* family from the afterlife.
 
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I very much disagree with committing ourselves to a long adventure on another continent in the middle of the Necromancy race. Staying home and continuing to work on our seals may not be glamorous as running around killing people and taking their things, but it's genuinely the best option available to us if we don't want the quest to end with Pein taking control of the world.

[X] Action Plan: Yuno, Ino, and Uplift
Bit of an unfair characterization. Getting more Honey Cave crystal is needed if we want to truly delve into PS, at least if we want to avoid having to bump ES another AB or two. The squirrel scroll will allow us to throw Mari at many of the conclave issues, and PS is needed to ultimately repair/replace the GS. You talk about avoiding Pain and the Akatsuki taking over, but we also have to avoid the Dragons eating all of creation and both of these goals work towards that goal.

Besides, PS might allow us to dial to specific Paths. After all, the GS cast the Dragons Elsewhere. Might be that Sealing can't recreate a Pure Lands rift, but PS can.
 
Bumping this.

@Acidhill, since I've incorporated your feedback (and that of several others), would you be willing to vote for my plan?

[X] Action Plan: Yuno, Ino, and Uplift
Wordcount: 387
  • Meet with Mari, Kei, Snowflake, Noburi
    • Relay our conversations with Yuno about Jashinism.
    • Yuno's hurting...
      • ...from her isolation within Isan, which catalyzed her love of violence
      • ...from Akane's death (arguably her first friend), which reinforced that violence was all she understood
    • Maybe Yuno was already predisposed towards Jashinism, but Hidan got to Yuno when she was hurting, and radicalized her. He saw a target in Yuno, and filled the cracks in her heart with bullshit.
    • She'll probably try to convert the entire clan, starting with y'all.
    • Mari:
      • Hidan may be a charismatic cult leader, but socials are your specialization. Could you un-brainwash Yuno?
      • Would help from another social spec be productive? Ami might leap at the chance to free someone from being slaved to the will of a god. Would you be comfortable working together/in tandem with her?
    • We'd appreciate your advice (regarding steering Yuno away from Jashin while still accepting her love of violence), and your help (with ensuring Yuno doesn't cause any incidents).
    • Also: any ideas on how to recoup our reputation?
  • Ino and the sale of Hazou's personal Goo Bomb seals
    • Internally:
      • Put on "Goketsu Clan Head" Hat.
      • The Yamanaka Clan Head wants a commission that eats into our best sealmaster's valuable time. Luckily, it's prosocial in intent, and our clans are allied. Allowances can be made where they might not otherwise be.
      • Trade in (and assume) good faith
    • Initial Proposal (sanity checked by Mari)
      • The Yamanaka Clan promises not to sell or reverse engineer them.
      • Supply is for genin-use only
        • Each genin gets three seals (be willing to negotiate to four/five, but not much more)
        • Genin are resupplied upon return from missions.
      • One Year Duration, revisiting the trade deal afterwards.
      • Goketsu Hazou will work to provide a backstock within the Goketsu Clan so that, should he be unavailable to resupply a Yamanaka genin, they're not inconvenienced.
      • We don't really need cash, so...
      • What're the Yamanaka Clan offering?
    • Let Hazou-pilot and Ino take it from there.
  • Offscreen
    • Ask Noburi...
      • To test if sealing an object sterilizes it (spirits are questionably alive).
      • Whether Arachnid Silk bandages would be an improvement for the hospital?
        • If so, donate a lot. We have ES50 and can afford to take a temporary hit on Arachnid Silk Trade.
    • Publicly denounce Jashinism
      • Optimize with Mari/Kei
 
I very much disagree with committing ourselves to a long adventure on another continent in the middle of the Necromancy race. Staying home and continuing to work on our seals may not be glamorous as running around killing people and taking their things, but it's genuinely the best option available to us if we don't want the quest to end with Pein taking control of the world.

While I 100% do want to go and do cool adventures that's not why I included that in the plan. I mostly was using it to give Noburi and Kei a narrative reason to go take combat missions to unstagnate their combat domains. I also didn't mention any team composition so we wouldn't be forced to send Hazou on the mission if we don't want to. I just added something to make that more clear
Hazou isn't sure on team composition because he might be stuck doing seal research but he wants everyone to be ready.

I will agree it feels a little out of place in the plan, compared to just "encourage Noburi and Kei to go on combat missions".

Would you mind on expanding on this? The plan is largely structured around preparing power ups if we confront Akatsuki. Tying the missions for unstagnating to getting a power up feels very narratively satisfying. That's actually the entire reason I wrote the plan. I felt just going hey Nobs and Kei go kill stuff would be to metagamey
 
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Bit of an unfair characterization. Getting more Honey Cave crystal is needed if we want to truly delve into PS, at least if we want to avoid having to bump ES another AB or two. The squirrel scroll will allow us to throw Mari at many of the conclave issues, and PS is needed to ultimately repair/replace the GS. You talk about avoiding Pain and the Akatsuki taking over, but we also have to avoid the Dragons eating all of creation and both of these goals work towards that goal.

Besides, PS might allow us to dial to specific Paths. After all, the GS cast the Dragons Elsewhere. Might be that Sealing can't recreate a Pure Lands rift, but PS can.
Heading over to Honey to physically harvest more crystal sounds, if anything, like one of the slowest prospect available to us for sourcing more material. We can hop over to 7Path right now and ask Cannai if he thinks there's a Dog who can help. We can see if Noburi's skill at chakra manipulation lets us grow one of our crystal samples into more crystal. I even wrote up an outline for how we could direct Orochimaru at the problem of synthesizing more crystal without compromising our control of the Honey cave for when we do go back to it:
edit: I think the right balance for Orochimaru might be sending him a letter containing our findings. We'll detail the experiments we did, being perfectly honest in how we did everything, and we'd detail everything we know about the Honey cave crystal, except instead of saying that it's from that cave in Honey we'll say that it's from an "unfortunately finite" source and offer to share our remaining samples in case any more can be made.

Conducted through text, we aren't going to get his aura looming down on us as he shakes us down for information, he'll have little reason to question the idea that we have no further sources of the crystal, and he'll hone in on the idea that he might be able to produce more out of our remaining samples. Done right, we'll get all the benefits of "Orochimaru helps us try to get more crystal" with none of the risk of "Orochimaru raids the Honey cave and takes all the crystals for himself".
We can do all of those things in, like, less than a week. Or we could spend a month going over to the Eastern Continent and securing a still-finite amount of crystal and unlock Primordial Sealing but soon be right back where we started as our stockpiles quickly diminish.

The Squirrel hunt I also don't see being particularly valuable to the Dragonwar. While it's a good powerup for Mari as a whole, we'd spend a month or so getting it, three months training Mari up to become a summoner, and then she'd start in the Squirrel clan in the far west of the continent and need to convince the Squirrels to send a squad all the way over to Pangolin (another long trip) before she can even physically enter the Conclave. With Enma already here I legitimately do not think the Conclave will last that long. By the time Mari could be of any help there I expect the Crusade to already be revving up.

And is Mari going to be helpful when it comes to fighting the Dragons? I mean, it can't hurt, but her skillset isn't particularly well-suited to fighting Dragons. Her genjutsu are useless against nonhuman foes like that, after all.
While I 100% do want to go and do cool adventures that's not why I included that in the plan. I mostly was using it to give Noburi and Kei a narrative reason to go take combat missions to unstagnate their combat domains. I also didn't mention any team composition so we wouldn't be forced to send Hazou on the mission if we don't want to. I just added something to make that more clear
That... honestly yeah that's pretty reasonable. What I said above still holds (that we have better/faster opportunities for sourcing more substrate, and that getting Mari the Squirrel Scroll isn't particularly valuable for the Dragonwar), but if it's not coming at the cost of Necromancy then it's a much better plan than I had thought.

(Honestly my opinion of the Squirrel Scroll hunt kinda soured when we went on it last time and kinda came face to face with "this mission, which we are embarking on for personal gain, will almost certainly require we actively kill people." That's where a bit of the invective came from in my former post because I really do not want to be gung-ho about murder, but it's just at a level of personal distaste. On net I would still say that getting the scroll for ourselves is a worthwhile endeavor for a variety of reasons.)
 
We can do all of those things in, like, less than a week. Or we could spend a month going over to the Eastern Continent and securing a still-finite amount of crystal and unlock Primordial Sealing but soon be right back where we started as our stockpiles quickly diminish.
Clarification: Why do we (as in Hazou) have to go to Honey? Just make Yuno head a mission to collect the crystals.
 
Slight modifications, highlighted below. Mostly organizational restructuring for ease-of-reading and improving clarity of intent.

[X] Action Plan: Yuno, Ino, and Uplift
Wordcount: 388
  • Meet with Mari, Kei, Snowflake, Noburi
    • Relay our conversations with Yuno about Jashinism.
    • Yuno's hurting...
      • ...from her isolation within Isan, which catalyzed her love of violence
      • ...from Akane's death (arguably her first friend), which reinforced that violence was all she understood
    • Maybe Yuno was already predisposed towards Jashinism, but Hidan got to Yuno when she was hurting, and radicalized her. He saw a target in Yuno, and filled the cracks in her heart with bullshit.
    • She'll probably try to convert the entire clan, starting with y'all.
    • Mari:
      • Hidan may be a charismatic cult leader, but socials are your specialization. Could you un-brainwash Yuno?
      • Would help from another social spec be productive? Ami might leap at the chance to free someone from being slaved to the will of a god. Would you be comfortable working together/in tandem with her?
    • We'd appreciate your advice (regarding steering Yuno away from Jashin while still accepting her love of violence), and your help (with ensuring Yuno doesn't cause any incidents).
    • Also: any ideas on how to recoup our reputation?
  • Ino and the sale of Hazou's personal Goo Bomb seals
    • Internally:
      • Put on "Goketsu Clan Head" Hat.
      • The Yamanaka Clan Head wants a commission that eats into our best sealmaster's valuable time. Luckily, it's prosocial in intent, and our clans are allied. Allowances can be made where they might not otherwise be.
      • Trade in (and assume) good faith
    • Initial Proposal (sanity checked by Mari)
      • Opsec Precautions:
        • The Yamanaka Clan promises not to sell them, reverse engineer them, etc.
        • Supply is for genin-use only
      • Each genin gets three seals, resupplied upon returning from missions
        • (be willing to negotiate to four/five, but not much more)
      • One Year Duration, revisiting the trade deal afterwards.
      • Goketsu Hazou will work to provide a backstock within the Goketsu Clan so that, should he be unavailable to resupply a Yamanaka genin, they're not inconvenienced.
      • We don't really need cash, so... what're the Yamanaka Clan offering?
    • Let Hazou-pilot and Ino take it from there.
  • Offscreen
    • Ask Noburi...
      • To test if sealing an object sterilizes it (spirits are questionably alive).
      • Whether Arachnid Silk bandages would be an improvement for the hospital?
        • If so, donate a lot. We have ES50 and can afford to take a temporary hit on Arachnid Silk Trade.
    • Publicly denounce Jashinism
      • Optimize with Mari/Kei
 
Clarification: Why do we (as in Hazou) have to go to Honey? Just make Yuno head a mission to collect the crystals.
That's something that Oneiros just mentioned, yeah. Granted, I do think that if we go there we should do experiments to see if that helps us get a renewable supply, and if we aren't in a position to do that then we should leave the core of the crystal intact so we can come back and do that later, but if we just want to collect some more pieces for our own use there's nothing stopping us from sending other clan members to harvest them.
 
Would you mind on expanding on this? The plan is largely structured around preparing power ups if we confront Akatsuki. Tying the missions for unstagnating to getting a power up feels very narratively satisfying. That's actually the entire reason I wrote the plan. I felt just going hey Nobs and Kei go kill stuff would be to metagamey
Hazou isn't sure on team composition because he might be stuck doing seal research but he wants everyone to be ready.
This line addresses my complaint better than I anything I was proposing.


(Honestly my opinion of the Squirrel Scroll hunt kinda soured when we went on it last time and kinda came face to face with "this mission, which we are embarking on for personal gain, will almost certainly require we actively kill people." That's where a bit of the invective came from in my former post because I really do not want to be gung-ho about murder, but it's just at a level of personal distaste. On net I would still say that getting the scroll for ourselves is a worthwhile endeavor for a variety of reasons.)
I'm still in favour of going to Crimsion Island. We're quite aligned with the Rats, and I've a suspicion that most/all Chakra-dense locations have a chakra crystal.

...Wait, I'm an idiot. The Swamp of Death is right next door.
  • Equip Kei + Noburi with Chakdars, send them along with [Yuno? Mari?] to the Swamp of Death, to hunt for the most chakra-dense spot hoping to find another crystal. Try not to start a fight with it.
 
...Wait, I'm an idiot. The Swamp of Death is right next door.
  • Equip Kei + Noburi with Chakdars, send them along with [Yuno? Mari?] to the Swamp of Death, to hunt for the most chakra-dense spot hoping to find another crystal. Try not to start a fight with it.
I would prefer to not walk in Rock's direction if at all possible. Keep in mind that the Swamp of Death is technically now their land.
 
I also think that giving yamanaka genin an unlimited supply of goo bombs, but only 3 at a time, is a bad way to approach this trade.
It incentivizes each genin on a team to use their first 1-2 goo bombs casually, because they can easily get a restock at goketsu expense.
It also incentivizes the genin(and other yamanaka) to missreport their goo bomb usage to build up a stockpile. They are ninja. They want to survive. They will do this.

Giving a fixed payout of (for example) 200 seals lets know how much sealmaster time we're trading, instead of writing a blank check. It encourages the genin to use the seals mindfully, and not scam us.
If/when they run out, we can sell them more seals.

Also, giving our allies a strong reason to invisibly defect against us seems bad for our alliance, and kind of rude.
@RandomOTP @Oneiros:

May I suggest something to the effect of "every Genin gets 10 seals" rather than unlimited free restocks, for the reasons listed above?
The specific number doesn't matter, the point is that lump-sum payment is much better for us.
 
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Tenketsu are physical points in the chakra system that regulate the flow of chakra through the body, similar to a valve in the cardiovascular system. Noburi tells you that it's not particularly hard to open up a tenketsu. It is hard to get the chakra to flow out of someone rather than continue moving through their system (now in a disregulated, dangerous way), but it is possible. The really hard part, in his expert opinion, would be to ensure that the patient survives the surgery. He does not know if it is within his mednin prowess.
Ah, the old "I theoretically know how to do that, but my Calligraphy practical skills aren't that high yet."

It's okay Noburi, we've got you.
 
Each genin gets three seals, resupplied upon returning from missions
This is an unbounded commitment that incentivizes them to use Goo Bombs wastefully. IE, if they have ~20 genin, and they do a mission a week we are selling them ~3000 seals, potentially more if there are short missions. Why not just sell them some number a month (100?) to be used or stockpiled at their discretion, in exchange for some monthly or annual fee to the Goketsu? Why restrict to genin when they could save a chunins life, too? (Ie, an unlucky chunin rolls badly and needs to retreat from a chakra beast but due to wound penalties can no longer kill it.)


We don't really need cash, so... what're the Yamanaka Clan offering?
This is good. They know what they have better than we do.


Edit: Not a critique of the plans, but wanted to mention: Unless it gives us a SSA consequence, it seems outright treachourous to intentionally sell worse Goo Bombs than we can produce. They can't catch any of uplift anymore except on incredibly bad dice, so it's hardly even a risk. They're mostly good against genin, chakra beasts, and summons.
 
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I would prefer to not walk in Rock's direction if at all possible. Keep in mind that the Swamp of Death is technically now their land.
I didn't know that, thanks!

Does Fire directly border the Swamp of Death? Because if so, I bet almost anything that they aren't meaningfully guarding the border there.

Borders are porous at the best of times, and the SoD has killed(admitably, tired) Jounin who aren't familiar with the hazards. Naruto thought the place was dangerous. I really don't expect Rock to be spending ninja on active patrols inside the Swamp of Death
 
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This is an unbounded commitment that incentivices them to use Goo Bombs wastefully. IE, if they have ~20 genin, and they do a mission a week we are selling them ~3000 seals, potentially more if there are short missions. Why not just sell them some number a month (100?) to be used or stockpiled at their discretion, in exchange for some monthly or annual fee to the Goketsu? Why restrict to genin when they could save a chunins life, too? (Ie, an unlucky chunin rolls badly and needs to retreat from a chakra beast but due to wound penalties can no longer kill it.)

Scattershot thoughts as feedback...
  • "Use wastefully"
    • doesn't really exist, imo. They're genin. They're squishy. If using it helps them survive, or gives them better odds, then they should use it.
    • "No kill like overkill" is basically a Goketsu creed.
  • "20 genin" or "a mission a week"
    • That count is an overreach, I think. There are only 100 academy graduates every year, and genin die at a horrifying rate.
    • "week" is a bit much, don't you think? This isn't Yagura's Mist. Besides, they're genin. There's going to be less demand for their services than chuunin or jonin.
    • Besides, even if this is the case (which I remain highly skeptical of, and would need to see what citations you're basing these estimates off of), this means we can get even better stuff in return.
      • Ino is going to be playing fair and in good faith, after all. And so are we.
  • "Why restrict to genin"
    • because that's what Ino wants. That's what she's asking for. That's why she wants to buy them from us.
    • If she wants to make a separate deal for chuunin access, then we can make a separate deal for that.
  • "Why not just sell them a certain amount each month,"
    • 3 seals are a lot easier to keep track of.
    • Because, up until the genin restocks, these seals would be at the Goketsu Compound, where they're more secure and less likely to be misplaced or stolen by a non-Yamanaka ninja.
  • "The genin might lie and build up a stockpile"
    • Alright, and then the Hammer of Ino will come down on them for turning her into a liar.
    • Ino will be trading in good faith, and if one of her ninja makes a liar or a sneak out of her, then she'll have to punish them harshly.
    • Doing this tarnishes the Good Faith Deal that the Goketsu Clan and the Yamanaka Clan are making, and reduces the likelihood that a similar deal will happen in the future.
    • Hazou is publicly known to be a jonin-tier sealmaster. He has the rank. In this society, that means something. A genin going behind a jonin's back to steal a few seals? That's terrifying. Not everyone is as insane as Hazou is.
    • The Yamanaka Clan and Goketsu Clan are allies. This damages the political, economic, and military connections that the Yamanaka Clan has with the Goketsu Clan. A Clan that has a world-famous sealmaster as their clan head. It's a longterm dumbass move for a questionable short term benefit.
    • Eventually those stockpiled seals will run out. And if that genin ruins the chances of that deal being renewed? Then no one will have access to Goo Bombs.
      • And imagine that you're a Yamanaka genin.
      • Imagine that one of those Goo Bombs saved your life once, or your cousin's life, or your best friend's life, or even your neighbor's life.
      • And now, some no-name dumbass is going to diminish the chances that the clan gets more of those seals?
      • I imagine that the dumbass in question would be in for a mountain of trouble.
 
Scattershot thoughts as feedback...
  • "Use wastefully"
    • doesn't really exist, imo. They're genin. They're squishy. If using it helps them survive, or gives them better odds, then they should use it.
    • "No kill like overkill" is basically a Goketsu creed.
  • "20 genin" or "a mission a week"
    • That count is an overreach, I think. There are only 100 academy graduates every year, and genin die at a horrifying rate.
    • "week" is a bit much, don't you think? This isn't Yagura's Mist. Besides, they're genin. There's going to be less demand for their services than chuunin or jonin.
    • Besides, even if this is the case (which I remain highly skeptical of, and would need to see what citations you're basing these estimates off of), this means we can get even better stuff in return.
      • Ino is going to be playing fair and in good faith, after all. And so are we.
  • "Why restrict to genin"
    • because that's what Ino wants. That's what she's asking for. That's why she wants to buy them from us.
    • If she wants to make a separate deal for chuunin access, then we can make a separate deal for that.
  • "Why not just sell them a certain amount each month,"
    • 3 seals are a lot easier to keep track of.
    • Because, up until the genin restocks, these seals would be at the Goketsu Compound, where they're more secure and less likely to be misplaced or stolen by a non-Yamanaka ninja.
  • "The genin might lie and build up a stockpile"
    • Alright, and then the Hammer of Ino will come down on them for turning her into a liar.
    • Ino will be trading in good faith, and if one of her ninja makes a liar or a sneak out of her, then she'll have to punish them harshly.
    • Doing this tarnishes the Good Faith Deal that the Goketsu Clan and the Yamanaka Clan are making, and reduces the likelihood that a similar deal will happen in the future.
    • Hazou is publicly known to be a jonin-tier sealmaster. He has the rank. In this society, that means something. A genin going behind a jonin's back to steal a few seals? That's terrifying. Not everyone is as insane as Hazou is.
    • The Yamanaka Clan and Goketsu Clan are allies. This damages the political, economic, and military connections that the Yamanaka Clan has with the Goketsu Clan. A Clan that has a world-famous sealmaster as their clan head. It's a longterm dumbass move for a questionable short term benefit.
    • Eventually those stockpiled seals will run out. And if that genin ruins the chances of that deal being renewed? Then no one will have access to Goo Bombs.
      • And imagine that you're a Yamanaka genin.
      • Imagine that one of those Goo Bombs saved your life once, or your cousin's life, or your best friend's life, or even your neighbor's life.
      • And now, some no-name dumbass is going to diminish the chances that the clan gets more of those seals?
      • I imagine that the dumbass in question would be in for a mountain of trouble.
This strikes me as wishful reasoning.

Scattershot thoughts as feedback...
  • "Use wastefully"
    • doesn't really exist, imo. They're genin. They're squishy. If using it helps them survive, or gives them better odds, then they should use it.
    • "No kill like overkill" is basically a Goketsu creed.
"Sell the Yamanaka a staggering amount of goo bombs" starts taking more of Hazou's time for xp/seal research. Either way, I'd like to know how many goo bombs we're selling, so we can price accordingly.

  • "20 genin" or "a mission a week"
    • That count is an overreach, I think. There are only 100 academy graduates every year, and genin die at a horrifying rate.
    • "week" is a bit much, don't you think? This isn't Yagura's Mist. Besides, they're genin. There's going to be less demand for their services than chuunin or jonin.
    • Besides, even if this is the case (which I remain highly skeptical of, and would need to see what citations you're basing these estimates off of), this means we can get even better stuff in return.
  • "Why restrict to genin"
    • because that's what Ino wants. That's what she's asking for. That's why she wants to buy them from us.
    • If she wants to make a separate deal for chuunin access, then we can make a separate deal for that.
This makes sense, and your numbers check out. good reasoning.

  • Ino is going to be playing fair and in good faith, after all. And so are we.
It's kinda rude to make a deal bassed on the(good) assumption of Ino's good faith, while giving every one of her subordinates a reason to act in bad faith on her end of the deal, thus betraying her good faith on her behalf. When one of them bends the deal, it puts Ino in an awkward position.

  • "Why not just sell them a certain amount each month,"
    • 3 seals are a lot easier to keep track of.
Who do you think will be losing track of the seals? I can keep £10 in my wallet as easily as I can keep £3, and I don't lose either.

  • "Why not just sell them a certain amount each month,"
    • Because, up until the genin restocks, these seals would be at the Goketsu Compound, where they're more secure and less likely to be misplaced or stolen by a non-Yamanaka ninja.
I really don't think "they have a hundred goo bombs" is going to be a decisive consideration in an operation a big as raiding the Yamanaka clan vault. If I wanted goo bombs that badly, I'd steal them from a Genin.

  • "The genin might lie and build up a stockpile"
    • Alright, and then the Hammer of Ino will come down on them for turning her into a liar.
The Genin probably don't plan on getting caught. the people most likley to notice(their squadmates) are going to be the least likely to snitch on them, especially as they all benefit from extra goo bombs.

  • "The genin might lie and build up a stockpile"
    • Alright, and then the Hammer of Ino will come down on them for turning her into a liar.
    • Doing this tarnishes the Good Faith Deal that the Goketsu Clan and the Yamanaka Clan are making, and reduces the likelihood that a similar deal will happen in the future.
The Genin might not know/care about there political dealings. If caught, they likley wouldn't expect Ino to volunteer that breach to the Goketsu.

  • "The genin might lie and build up a stockpile"
    • Hazou is publicly known to be a jonin-tier sealmaster. He has the rank. In this society, that means something. A genin going behind a jonin's back to steal a few seals? That's terrifying. Not everyone is as insane as Hazou is.
Eh, how's Hazou ever gonna find out? Besides, he made a deal practicaly asking to be grifted, he probably doesn't care that much.

  • "The genin might lie and build up a stockpile"
    • Eventually those stockpiled seals will run out. And if that genin ruins the chances of that deal being renewed? Then no one will have access to Goo Bombs.
The deal might not be renewed? Sounds like an excellent reason to stockpile! Those extra seals could save your teammate's lives one day!

  • "The genin might lie and build up a stockpile"
    • And imagine that you're a Yamanaka genin.
    • Imagine that one of those Goo Bombs saved your life once, or your cousin's life, or your best friend's life, or even your neighbor's life.
I have. I would want to make sure I have some extra, just in case of a long mission, or if the deal doesn't get renewed. After all, I've seen them save my best friend's life!

  • "The genin might lie and build up a stockpile"
    • And now, some no-name dumbass is going to diminish the chances that the clan gets more of those seals?
Again, how the hell would the Goketsu learn about this? even IFF Ino catches you, would she tell the Goketsu?

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Sorry if I'm spending so much effort on this, I guess it dosn't matter that much. Such an unforced error just bugs me.
Make it easy on everyone, negotiate for the number of actual seals we'll sell, then sell them. It's that simple. If they run out, sell more.
 
I guess it dosn't matter that much.
Let me know which one of these is the deal breaker that's keeping you from voting for my plan, and we can discuss it accordingly.

In the effort of full transparency, I will state that I'm unlikely to make major changes to an established action plan that several people have already given their vote for.

To do so feels, to me, like bad democracy.

Imagine that someone gives their vote to an action plan that they like ("Interlude: Hazou and Ino, Coffee Shop AU"). Then, because of meatspace responsibilities (which are far more pressing and important), this voter isn't able to keep up with the thread. They return after voting closes to find that the plan has changed far beyond what they had initially voted for ("Interlude: Hazou makes Snowflake cry"). Suddenly, they're left with their vote supporting a version of a plan that doesn't reflect their desires, and no way to unvote.

This is good. They know what they have better than we do.

Thank you. I'll admit that this phrasing wasn't originally part of my plan, but I forget who exactly did.

Collaboration often leads to refinement, after all.

Edit: Not a critique of the plans, but wanted to mention: Unless it gives us a SSA consequence, it seems outright treachourous to intentionally sell worse Goo Bombs than we can produce.

Ino is specifically wanting Hazou's personally made Goo Bombs. They're the ones with a TN60, and it doesn't take SSA to make. Thus, my action plan has Hazou, personally, making the Goo Bombs.

Ino knows that she's adding more to Hazou's plate, and that her commission isn't helping with his backlog of research.

Ino knows that she's asking to buy a notable amount of time from a (spec) jonin ranked sealmaster.

Ino knows what she's commissioning is a big ask, even ignoring the whole "clan secrets" side of things. That's why she was so hesitant/apologetic when she initially asked for it.

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Disclaimer: going to be AFK for a bit. Meatspace calls, and I really should've waited until later on to replied to this.
 
The squirrel scroll will allow us to throw Mari at many of the conclave issues

[X] Action Plan: Irons in the fire

Can we please have something wholesome soon? A beach episode, a wholesome Hazou-does-Sealing-with-Harumitsu, an AU Akane-Hazou wedding, a Snowflake Interrupt where she blatantly confesses her love to Hazou because Sage knows that the boy won't pick up on it otherwise, an Ami Interrupt where she and Hazou eat shaved ice and braid each other's hair again, Shard apologizing for her lashing out, something?
Honestly, this.

By which means the Path Drain can be avoided.
Do we have reasons to believe chakra behaves differently between different paths, such that we can't test equipment/seal for chakra impermeability?
 
Let me know which one of these is the deal breaker that's keeping you from voting for my plan, and we can discuss it accordingly.

In the effort of full transparency, I will state that I'm unlikely to make major changes to an established action plan that several people have already given their vote for.

Sorry if I've been unclear.
Please make our trade offer in the form of a specific actual number of seals. Not an unbounded ongoing contract that actively encourages everyone to grift us.

To my mind, this is a clear improvement over the currently-written plan. Switching to it sacrifices nothing, and should be unobjectionable.

Beyond that, negotiate from the same good-faith clan-head perspective that you already proposed. Ask for the same kind of payments you are already asking. No changes to our goals, objectives, or tone.

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For example, replace:
  • Each genin gets three seals, resupplied upon returning from missions
    • (be willing to negotiate to four/five, but not much more)
  • One Year Duration, revisiting the trade deal afterwards.
  • Goketsu Hazou will work to provide a backstock within the Goketsu Clan so that, should he be unavailable to resupply a Yamanaka genin, they're not inconvenienced.

With this:
  • Yamanaka get 100 seals, to divide among their Genin as they see fit.
    • Be willing to negotiate higher, but not >200

Or with this:
  • Each Yamanaka Genin gets 10 seals.
    • Be willing to negotiate higher, but not more than 20 per Genin

Or anything else to this general effect. Change the numbers as you find reasonable. Say [Mari-approved number] if you must.
 
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