Obviously the entire point of talking to Ami is to get the Mizukage to approve of remove his enemies who support the previous regime.
There's no reason Mari should be doing the killing then. Get whatever Mist's equivalent of ANBU is to do it and have Hazou come in as the long lost cousin just trying to save the clan from destruction. That angle actually has a snowball's chance in hell of working. Not that I think it's particularly likely with Hazou's social skills.
That's fair. I personally think that we can easily manage that with some bribes and dead man boots promotions. But I haven't given a huge thought about the revenge angle. I'll spend some time pondering it hopefully can figure out a good way to avoid being poisoned
If someone had my father executed for a crime that he didn't commit and then offered me his job and $50,000 in cash I wouldn't be thanking them for the generous offer. This is an extended family, not some faceless corporation.
 
So back to my favorite line that's going no where conquering the Kurosawa!

The Mizukage might be convinced to expel the Kurosawa since Ren was a "traitor" which as Clan Head implies the entire clan is a clan of traitors (see Hazou, by contrast Hazou's mom was thrown out of the clan and is a loyal Jonin so she stays), they don't seem to have any Jonin (which is why Ren was leading them) so they're not a major military loss, their bloodline isn't known to have a sealing aspect in Water. If they're expelled for being traitors then most of their wealth and assets will be taken away as well, so they would be a homeless and destitute Clan.

At that point, Hazou, the Clan Head of a major Leaf clan, and arguably the next in line to be Clan Head of their clan extends an (Asuma pre-approved) invitation so be a subsidiary clan/branch family of the Goketsu.

That might work. He's already well known for his charity and caring about his family, to extend branch family status to them under his protection and Asuma's stern gaze and to become Leaf ninja rather than missing nin (or trying to join Rock, Lightning, or Sand - each risky and with more negatives) actually isn't a crazy choice.
 
Last edited:
Question: we know that Tsunade wrote a Summoning Theory book, and that that's what Kagome is studying, with Hazou's help in clarifying/expanding on parts that Tsunade didn't bother to. Could we work with the Nara to publish an annotated version of her book for the Leaf Public Library? Functionally, such a book could replace the need for a Summoner to direct Summoning Training, much in the same way that Jiraiya's Elemental Notes bypass the need for personal instruction in a new element.
 
So back to my favorite line that's going no where conquering the Kurosawa! Last time someone mentioned that some of the elders might not like it but is there any reason we can't just have Mari kill them? None of them can be really badass jounin because they didn't go to the battle of the gods. Since Ami runs the place we wouldn't be at risk of reprisal from anyone
Question for you Onei: Why? Other than hedonism, why?

We can gain a few more experts?

Also @Oneiros , we don't have to kill anyone, we just need Asuma/Mizukage/Ami/Ryu/whoever to support us. If they don't kill Ren then we have Hana and her too.
(Also probably to late, for Kurosawa politics)

Oneiros we're an outsider twice over to the Kurosawa. The traitor son of a woman who betrayed the clan. Literally no one in the clan will support us. It's relying on the Mizukage to forcible settle in-clan politics, which would kill the idea in its crib by itself. Maaaaaaaybe some minor faction would try to use us as a pawn in a power play but they won't care for our welfare whatsoever and will likely plan gaining political favor when we die and tensions rise between Mist and Leaf as a result.

There are so many incentives for the Kurosawa to fuck us over in every way they can and no incentives I can think of for them to help us. This is like the 'demand birthday presents from Ren' except less funny and less likely to happen

The Kurosawa kicked a jonin and chunnin out and lost their next heir, who turned out to be a sealing genius.
Just mock them. Hazou mocked a Hyuga on the Council and but we can't mock them?

And the Pro-Leaf faction just kicked Ren out.

The Kurosawa would gain:
2 jonin
A summoner with a connection to Leaf (maybe this would convince Cannai to send some Dogs to the Conclave).
Possible voting power in Leaf.

We would likely be seen like Ami is seen in Leaf, not-super loyal but to useful to be kicked out. Also Ami has 2-3 votes, we would only have one.

And Cannai is pretty Pro-Leaf, as long as everyone in Mist understands that, there is no "Kill him and take the scroll" thing.
 
The new Mizukage is also a former missing-nin and a living superweapon. Funny how that worked out. *shrug*
Yeah I also don't really see any huge risk in making a play. We'd have a friendly Kage that would come down on the Kurosawa like a ton of bricks if the elders tried to seriously move against us
 
Omake: Marked for Death Voyage: The Dream I Saw
MfD Voyage: The Dream I Saw

fifteen thousand seven hundred thirty five



The shattered pieces of Hazou's mind sparked. Thoughts collided against thoughts, and his inner world began to move again. The things he had left behind flooded back in through the hole in his own mentality.

The first, and the absolute principle that Hazou could never give up – his own will.

From his heart, he felt the first flutters of chakra begin to fire. Begin to answer his own will.

His fingers curled into a fist. Even tired and exhausted, his body would never disobey him, so long as he drew breath.

"We," he panted, "will get Neji."

From the haze of exhaustion, Hazou began flexing the first pieces into the ANGEL engine on his back. He fed his energy into a loop, felt it roil and fed the multiplied energy back into himself.

The pain reminded him he was alive, and the subjugation and sublimation of the chakra took only an exertion of will.

As his limbs began to function again under the crushing sea, Hazou looked back at one of his greatest allies.

Enrou.

That wolf boss, burning a ghostly blue.

Time slowed for Hazou. His mind sunk into his signature.

The Seven Paths that he knew of were the Human, Deva, Asura, Preta, Animal, Devil, and Seventh. Everyone began on the Human, for they had surpassed the temptations and the base instincts of the Animal Path. To advance from the Animal Path, it was not solely a matter of the Universal Transport, but also to transcend your own base instincts and join hands in a civilization.

But once you transcended the Animal and Human paths, the next step was to challenge the Asura path. Only those who had reached the Asura paths had even the qualifications to progress down the road. In the Asura path, eternal battlefields and glory awaited. It was not merely the animal joy of battles, nor the human joy of connections, but the test of whether the eternal glories that awaited on a ceaseless battlefield would hold you.

Only those who had a reason to fight as the last person in the Elemental Nations – as the last person in all of existence – would have the right to advance from the Asura path. If you could stride forward on your own two feet.

But when you proved your worth there, you would find yourself confronted with the Preta Path. The path that would test your ability to focus on the things that were important. It would give you everything you wanted and punish you for your excess. The only desire that could survive its passage would be desirelessness, and having refined a soul through the four paths, they would be ready for the refinement into the Deva Path.

The Summons were an exception to the rule. The one the Sage of Six Paths had introduced. They stood apart from the Paths. So it made sense that the Summons could help a few other souls break the rules, so long as they had their own way to reduce their metaphysical weight.

But of his own volition, there was one more exception to the rule.

Hazou Goketsu.

And he stared at Enrou's offered back, and he realized something.

"You're correct, but I can't accept your help."

The easiest way to traverse paths was to die and let your soul move on. The second easiest way to traverse paths was to rely on the aid of the Summons.

But those who tread along the path would only head along the intended destination of the creator. Those who achieved enlightenment the conventional method would only achieve the conventional enlightenment.

Hazou began circling chakra between himself and his GUTS suit. From his heart to another, and from another heart to his own.

"You go on ahead, Enrou. I'll handle this."

One and one became two, two and two became four, and four and four became infinity.

"Besides, this is still the Preta Path. Trusting someone else to carry on your responsibilities because you lack the strength is no way to ascend into divinity," Hazou laughed, draining out his chakra.

The ghost barked out its assent.

"Well said," the ghost said. "I'm sure Enrou would happy to hear that."

Hazou nodded, and shattered existence.

He was only traveling in the same Path, not different paths, so the strain would be less difficult, and he was still shooting in the dark based only on his own guess of where Neji would be.

Through the instant of time and point of space, Hazou found himself in the middle of an empty field. Dust swirled in a field lit only by a bright sky, lit by no suns.

At the center of the field stood Neji, armored in his GUTS suit. He looked down at a headband held in his hand, and an emblem on the ground. The Hyuga emblem.

"I'm surprised," Neji said. "I thought I would be consumed by my anger, but here I am."

His back was still turned to Hazou, as Hazou strode forward.

"Is this the place you want to remain?" Hazou asked, stepping inside the third ring from Neji. From here, if Neji chose to attack, the attack would certainly hit. "This barren land?"

"It's not the place," Neji said. "It's the time."

"Oh? What is it about the time?"

"Behold the end of the world," Neji said. "It's endless motes of dust, lit by no stars. Behold how even now, I still discharge my duty."

"Your duty to what?" Hazou said, stepping inside the second defensive line. Now only bare body lengths apart, they entered the area where neither could escape. Hazou should know. He helped design it this way.

"My destiny as a member of the Hyuga," Neji said, turning. He wore a contented smile. "Everything I have done has had a purpose, and it leads to this point in time."

Hazou stepped inside the third defensive line – the point when they were face to face. He looked around that barren land. None of his family were in the picture. None of his children, none of his parents. None of his friends, none of his enemies.

Only him, and his dead white eyes.

"Well, with one exception," Neji said, self-satisfied smile dropping into a scowl. "You."

"Me," Hazou agreed, spreading his arms wide. "Even at the end of the world, I'll never be just a memory."

"A memory of what?" Neji spat.

"That's a better look, Neji," Hazou said. "Are you starting to remember? The reason we asked you to come with us?"

"Because it is my destiny to serve the Hyuga, and if that means joining the madman, then I join the madman," Neji said, facial muscles trying to resume his serenity.

"How self-centered," Hazou shot back. "I didn't ask you why you joined. Shino was certainly quick enough to decline."

"Who can guess how a madman thinks?" Neji said, shrugging his shoulders.

"I think I can," Hazou said. "And I can tell you why."

"No need. You chose me for my ability to work with the others. I have done just that." Neji said, resuming his serenity.

"No, you fool. I chose you because I have your measure," Hazou said. "Your body may have submitted, and your mind succumbs – but I can still see that your heart has not yet failed you yet."

Neji's eyes sparked, and the absent light returned for only a brief instant. Then it was washed away.

"I don't know what you're talking about," Neji said.

"I hate liars," Hazou baldly said. Then he snapped a kick into Neji's open jaw.

Neji's head ducked, and his hands picked up Hazou's leg. From his anchored feet came the rotation, and Hazou was bodily thrown a dozen meters behind Neji. Disengaging the chakra adhesion midair, Hazou got rid of the stone attached to his feet and engaged his third generation flight seals.

Neji looked up at Hazou, and the lights holding him in the air.

"Try as you might, you will not dislodge me from my destiny," he confidently said.

"True enough," Hazou said, shrugging. "I won't."

Then the light converged into a roaring inferno behind Hazou, and he launched into a lunge. In his wake, a boom sounded, and in front of him was his fist.

The thrown fist was caught and sent on its way by Neji with only a slight rotation of his feet. The impact shattered the earth and sent Hazou on a rolling tumble over hundreds of meters.

"But still, I have to try," Hazou said, kipping up to his feet unphased.

"You will try fruitlessly," Neji said, artificial muscles of the GUTS suit glowing from exertion. "But I will be here to reject your advance."

His hands flashed in a string of handsigns. That old friend of Hazou's, the firefly jutsu, wielded in Neji's hands. Before Hazou was a constellation of fireballs, each exploding into a thousand thousand blue lights.

In Neji's hands, any one of those uncountable lights could kill.

"That's more like it," Hazou laughed happily. "Show me more that burning spirit within you!"

In his hands, he flickered through his own sequence of seals. Into the effect slot, he slammed in the Blizzard clip.

At once, the heavens of light descended on Hazou's course, as a brilliant jet of fire erupted behind him. Brilliant blue streaks whipped at him as Hazou's own ice blue icicles met the dancing lights with a tidal wave of cold. If Hazou couldn't match the sheer perfection of Neji's net, he would overcome it with a difference in number – or a difference in kind!

The icicles evaporated into a thick scalding steam, and for the first time Hazou realized he may have made a mistake. After all, Neji could see perfectly fine through the steam, but Hazou couldn't. Reversing his thrust and planting his feet into the ground, his hands flashed through the sequence for the Multiple Earth Wall.

Out from the earth came a tower of granite – or a cannon, if you were so inclined.

Hazou was so inclined.

The roaring of his flight seals turned his infinite chakra into boundless speed.

If Neji's control was unparalleled, Hazou simply had to start from high enough that his control didn't matter.

Hazou ascended as a plume of white.

Behind him, the trails of blue seemed to light his way, as even Neji couldn't keep up with Hazou's ascent, now kilometers into the sky.

"So? What will you do now?" Neji asked, over the GUTS comm channel.

Hazou took out an ordinary storage seal.

Out came a hunk of rock, light enough to hold in one hand with chakra boost, let alone the enhancements of the GUTS suit.

"If you won't be moved from your destiny, I'll simply destroy your destiny," Hazou replied, reshaping the stone to his will. The channels of chakra erupted all over the stone, hewed away the excess, and carved into it a seal.

"Hazou's Minute Meteor," Hazou said, and let go.

The stone erupted downwards at an impossible acceleration, shattering the sound barrier three times and more. In its wake, the atmosphere itself glowed a cherry red, and Hazou followed it in.

Neji looked up at the meteor and blanched. Out came his mightiest fire dragon, and the impact shattered the sky and the dragon. Falling flames lit the sunless sky like a meteor shower, and yet the stone kept descending.

Next came lightning, ascending from the earth to divide the stone meteor. Yet a tiny flicker of wind broke out in front of the meteor and drew the meteor in faster. The meteor once again shattered the sound barrier.

Out of other options, Neji reached out his hand, and slapped the meteor aside.

The meteor, shockingly enough, gave way.

Neji had only a moment to recognize that it had been designed to give way before the meteor plunged deep into the empty field – and Hazou's palm met Neji's face.

The field cracked and shattered into oblivion, flaking away into nothingness as the illusion of the Preta Path collapsed before them. Neji was drawn along with Hazou's line of motion, falling into an endless space.

"Neji, destiny isn't a fixed thing! A destiny is a dream, and we have dreams so that we can achieve it! To surpass this Preta Path, take your dream, and use it as fuel!"

Behind Hazou, the flames of his chakra, even filtered through another source, brought a kaleidoscope of visions behind him. Jiraiya and Mari's wedding. A happy family dinner. Hazou and Akane's wedding. Akane and Ino's wedding. Shinji returning to the family. His own son, beating him at rock-paper-scissors.

"Now, Neji!" Hazou said, voice cracking in an exulted emotional high. "Burn your own dream!"

Neji's slackened face seemed to fall away behind him, tumbling in the buffeting winds of the Preta Path's dreamscape. Hazou reached out his hand, but they were too far apart to reach. He watched as Neji tumbled further and further, until he was nothing but a speck.

Then Neji ignited into a white flame. Even if the flame was a colorless white, in its wake came the dreams Neji told himself he'd never get to see. Even if they were indistinct, and Hazou couldn't pick out the events in his eye, they were there.

And in front of him, Neji's hand reached out and grabbed onto Hazou's.

"Universal Transport!" the two shouted in unison. "Destination: Deva's Path, the Voyager team!"



with love and affection for @eaglejarl i beat the update and am now out to get a victory lunch
 
Last edited:
We can gain a few more experts?

Also @Oneiros , we don't have to kill anyone, we just need Asuma/Mizukage/Ami/Ryu/whoever to support us. If they don't kill Ren then we have Hana and her too.
(Also probably to late, for Kurosawa politics)



The Kurosawa kicked a jonin and chunnin out and lost their next heir, who turned out to be a sealing genius.
Just mock them. Hazou mocked a Hyuga on the Council and but we can't mock them?

And the Pro-Leaf faction just kicked Ren out.

The Kurosawa would gain:
2 jonin
A summoner with a connection to Leaf (maybe this would convince Cannai to send some Dogs to the Conclave).
Possible voting power in Leaf.

We would likely be seen like Ami is seen in Leaf, not-super loyal but to useful to be kicked out. Also Ami has 2-3 votes, we would only have one.

And Cannai is pretty Pro-Leaf, as long as everyone in Mist understands that, there is no "Kill him and take the scroll" thing.
We can only be in one place at a time, so I seriously doubt we could bargain with the chips of *any* jōnin, since I'm pretty sure Leaf would object... strongly to that. Maybe if we get kicked out of Leaf in a way that leaves us with bargaining power somehow?

Kurosawa have a much much easier time becoming sealmasters, so its really not that big of a deal to lose one for them.

Mocking Ren/ the elders would not help our case with trying to get the rest of the clan to treat us as their clan head. Where would our support come from? We are the son of a woman who betrayed her duty to the clan, and went on to betray the entire Village. It doesn't matter if that's technically not true, it's the way the stories' been told since we left. It doesn't matter if we betrayed a different Mizukage, they're still the Mizukage. This is why Naruto is still mad at us even though there's a different Hokage, we demonstrated the trait of "Willing to threaten the Hokage". Imagine every single person in the clan disliking us as much as Naruto dislikes us, except they only have things to gain by working against us.

I don't know. Maybe I'm overly pessimistic but this just seems completely insolvent. We *might* be able to somehow end up the clan head de jure but never de facto.
 
Mocking Ren/ the elders would not help our case with trying to get the rest of the clan to treat us as their clan head. Where would our support come from? We are the son of a woman who betrayed her duty to the clan, and went on to betray the entire Village. It doesn't matter if that's technically not true, it's the way the stories' been told since we left. It doesn't matter if we betrayed a different Mizukage, they're still the Mizukage. This is why Naruto is still mad at us even though there's a different Hokage, we demonstrated the trait of "Willing to threaten the Hokage". Imagine every single person in the clan disliking us as much as Naruto dislikes us, except they only have things to gain by working against us.

I don't know. Maybe I'm overly pessimistic but this just seems completely insolvent. We *might* be able to somehow end up the clan head de jure but never de facto.
What actually makes this possible is that we know that if we would have been named heir if Hazou would have gone back to the clan. Apparently we have the purest bloodline. They def would be interested in avoiding a succession crisis when they are on the Mizukage shit list. For our power base we have the AMI and Hanna. In fact we can just have Hana run the clan when we aren't around
 
I could see us making our way to the head of the Kurosawa clan but only if we're at least Jonin, if not S-rank, and only as part of a broader push for Leaf-Mist unification... Which seems unlikely to happen anytime soon.
 
I think that our political position would be weaker as the head of the Kurosawa than as the head of the Goketsu. (We definitely can't do both.)

We have a powerful ally in the Nara and we're on good terms with the Hokage. (I think that we have a better working relationship with Asuma than we would with Ami.) We're liked by a number of clans and we have a reputation in the village which is at least sometimes pretty okay.

If we showed up in Mist I think that we'd have a lot of enemies both within our clan and without. We wouldn't be Jiriya's son, Mari wouldn't have her network, and we wouldn't have delivered skywalkers or skytowers to Mist.

At best, we'd have the Obayun as an entry point, but who knows if he's alive or in power or wholly in the pocket of Leaf. We wouldn't have any relationship or political tokens from forging an alliance with Isan and we wouldn't have Tsunade or the KEI or ANBU members who think we're cute.

We can barely run the Goketsu. The Kurosawa would be much harder.

I'd love to get some clan education if we can trade for it. I'm not sure that can actually happen, but maybe we'll have something Ami wants one day and she can get it for us.
 
Interlude: War Jutsu
Interlude: War Jutsu

February 20, 1070 AS Two days after Hazō sorta-kinda worshipped Jashin and almost a week before Hazō got frustrated with his lack of Earthshaping ability...

Hazō was draped comfortably over a chair, reading by the living room's fire, when a faint foot-scuff announced Kagome-sensei's exploration of the door.

"Evening," Hazō said, looking up at his teacher with a smile. "Want to come in?"

"They're not back yet?" Kagome-sensei asked, craning his long neck through the door to check the room's corners.

"They've only been gone twelve hours, sensei," Hazō said, struggling not to laugh.

"Hrmph." Despite that, Kagome-sensei sulked through the door and into a chair.

Seeing his teacher's mood, Hazō wisely went back to his book. Best to let grumpy uncles start the conversation on their own time.

"What are you reading?"

"Hm? Oh, it's Volume II of Yumehara's History of the Elemental Nations. I read Volume I...ages ago. Not even sure how long. Tonight I figured I'd take a crack at the second volume."

Kagome-sensei's beaky nose was capable of masterwork derisive snorts.

"You don't approve?" Hazō asked.

"I suppose it's fine if you like twaddle, fairy tales, and propaganda. Of course, Yumehara was basically a plagiaristic cheater who took Nagasato's scrolls and turned them into lies."

One eyebrow rose and so did Hazō, closing his book. "Nagasato's scrolls?"

Kagome-sensei toed his fuzzy green slippers off so he could put his feet up on the raised hearth and broil his soles a bit. "Nagasato Goro. He was about a century before Yumehara."

"Go on..."

"It's been a while since I read it. I might not remember it all."

"That's fine, that's fine," Hazō said, leaning forward with his elbows on his knees. "Tell me what you do remember."

Kagome-sensei leaned back, staring at the invisible words written on the ceiling that contained far-off memories. "Well, first, they've been called the Elemental Nations a lot longer than the villages have been here. Nagasato speculated that they had been created and named by the Sage, although he was only able to find definitive proof tracing back to the second century AS."

"Were they the same as the current ones?"

"Not even close. Used to be that Fire was a narrow triangle that started in what today is Claw and ran down to the coast of the Hanguri Gulf. The border of Wind reached to almost where Tanzaku Gai is today. Earth Country stretched down through what we call Fang and took a corridor of land all the way to the ocean. Basically, the length of the Tanburingu river. That whole area was rain forest at the time. Northern Wind wobbled between forest and grasslands as it went east to the Hanguri Gulf. Lightning owned what we call Rice, Iron, Waterfall, and Snow, as well as a stripe up the north side of Earth and that chain of islands down to Wave."

"Wouldn't that include where Hidden Rock is?"

"Where it is today, sure. The precursor to it used to be much farther west, at the fork in the Gushiken river. They only moved it east after the third water elemental rampage."

"Water elemental rampage?"

"Sure. The idiots wanted a defensible location, so they built on top of a plateau and used a war jutsu to pull water up through the stone to supply the place. From there it spilled out and became the Gushiken. Stupid move. Over time, the chakra construct that was drawing the water up to the surface leaked into the water itself and brought it to something like life. Over the next hundred or so years, whenever the concentration of chakra got too strong the river would spawn off an elemental which would rampage around destroying everything. Sometimes they would stick around and kill the locals, sometimes they would wander off and kill other people. Mostly people from Wind, since there was a lot more water in that direction than to the north and the water elementals were naturally drawn to the water."

He took his feet off the hearth, rubbing each sole across the opposite calf to get rid of some of the excess heat, then stuffed them back into his slippers. "Anyway, the people of Wind weren't too keen on that. Water elementals are too dangerous to fight close up, so they used their own war jutsu—"

"What's a war jutsu?"

"It's a large-scale, long-lasting jutsu. A ritual. Usually created by multiple jutsu casters sacrificing together to create and power the construct."

"Sacrificing what?"

"Each other, duh. The ritual leader begins the casting, his acolytes join in. Once they have expended their chakra, the ritual leader cuts their throat and uses their foutaining blood as a channel for their life force, feeding it into the construct in order to sustain the jutsu. Nobody uses them anymore since the Great Desertification."

"The what now?"

"Weren't you listening? I said that the western border of today's Wind and then-times Earth used to be a rain forest. Today it's a massive desert. What do you think happened?"

"...One of these war jutsu went out of control?"

"Yup. The jutsu 'masters' of Wind created a desiccation jutsu in order to oppose the water elementals. For whatever stupid reason they deployed it as a fence along their northern border. I think it was probably just supposed to destroy the bindings on any chakra construct passing through it—basically make the water elementals fall apart. Probably would have destroyed any seals moving through the area as well, which would make sense since the people of Earth used seals a lot more than the people of Wind." He sniffed derisively. "Stupid stinking idea. The war jutsu, not seals. Seals are smart.

"Anyway, they must have gunked up their casting, because the jutsu didn't have enough power. Naturally, any jutsu that size and complexity has a semblance of intelligence, same as one of your rock clones does. It reached out to its environment, pulling in chakra to support itself. Living things don't live without chakra, so over the span of a decade-ish this destroyed all life in the area. The jutsu kept reaching wider and wider, spreading north and south in order to find more chakra to power itself." He clapped his hands, the sound making Hazō jump. "Bam. Two hundred years later, Earth and Wind are deserts and the rain forest is gone."

Hazō digested that while Kagome-sensei riffled through his storage seals and produced a wool blanket, grapes, cheese, and bread. He fussed the blanket around himself and nibbled on the various comestibles.

"Granted, the whole situation wasn't helped by the fact that Earth and Wind were fighting through there the whole time. They kept chopping trees down with misaimed wind blades, creating big chunks of granite that redirected small streams, that sort of thing. Of course, those trees were holding the topsoil in place and breaking up the katabatic winds that come down off the mountains. And the streams were the headwaters of the Tanburingu, which reduced the overall volume and left less water to supply the trees, which meant more of them died off so more erosion and less of a windbreak. Add in some fire jutsu that get out of control and burn off big swaths of land, and soon enough you had open areas where the winds could howl through and reach onto the warmer lands below where they spawned off dust devils, some of which got strong enough to become full-on tornadoes and tear the place up."

"But aren't burned area very fertile? Shouldn't the trees have grown back?"

"Sure. Very fertile. Unless you've got generations of ninja fighting across the same patch of land and repeatedly burning everything down again, and a steadily-spreading jutsu that's eating all the chakra so that it's impossible for anything to live there."

"Wow."

"Mm-hm."

"Is the jutsu still there?"

"No way to know for sure without having an actual jutsu hacker go there, but I doubt it. I would imagine it starved to death after the place went desert. Or maybe it just settled down to a lower level and that's why there is still some life there, but not a lot." He shrugged. "Still, after you hit certain tipping points, you're not coming back. Once the desertification had spread enough, there was no stopping it or reversing it. The Tanburingu is still there and the edges of it are still fertile, but the ground along its borders was too badly damaged to sustain the growth that used to be there. The lack of a windbreak is part of why the interior is nothing but sand. Plus, I think some of the water elementals might have hidden within the Tanburingu and still be sucking chakra out of the area immediately around their nests. It would explain why things get worse as you go south."

"How's that now?"

"The northern border of Wind is dry enough to count as desert, but there are still plants. Go a few hundred miles south and it's just sand. Vast amounts, like granular waves tumbled by uncaring rivers of air. Massive sandstorms, tornadoes, that kind of thing. It's still technically part of Wind but I don't think anyone actually goes there." He sniffed. "Stupid if they do, but what can you say? People are stupid. Oh, except you, Hazō. And me, and Akane, and Noburi, and Mari, and—"

"Got it, sensei. So, you mentioned that the borders were different back then. How did things change to what they are today?"

"Oh, well, that's a long story. I suppose it all starts with..."





XP AWARD: 0 It's an interlude.

Voting remains closed. We expect to have the last of the various family missions rolled out soon (all hail @Paperclipped and his wonderful helpfulness), at which point we'll write those and then time will resume.

Fun fact that I discovered while researching for this: It's possible for lakes to have more than one outlet, and for rivers to bifurcate. This makes the official MfD map substantially more plausible.
 
Last edited:
Faflec.reaction

I wonder if Pain's ritual was partly a War Jutsu. On the one hand, he was sacrificing jinchuuriki and feeding their chakra (and lifeforce?) to the ritual. On the other hand, they weren't exactly willing participants.
 
Last edited:
I wonder if there are any clans who still have war jutsu in their catalogue of Clan Secrets. On one hand, it'd be pretty cool... On the other hand, I'm pretty sure war jutsu would require huge stats to cast/coordinate (Master-level Element stunts, Naruto-levels of chakra, and whatever else) so it might be that only an S-ranker could cast it... And it's not like S-rankers are plentiful enough that they can be used as ritual components. Not to mention that the disappearance of Uzushiogakure is evidence enough that (in the rabid nature of the modern ninja era, who erased bards and the Souldrinker Exterminator Clan from existence), if you're a big enough threat, everyone will team up to try and kill you on the off-chance that you become a threat in the future. So any clan with war jutsu would likely keep such knowledge on the highest orders of opsec.

...and it's been 800ish years since Kagome's mention of war jutsu (it's currently 1080-1090AS, and he said it happened back in 200AS). So it's more than likely that such knowledge has faded from memory. It'd be like if everyone who knew Shadow Clone died, but stories/legends still lived on. Even so, it'd be cool if one or two ninja clans had a war jutsu, just in case.

Pseudo-Edit: random thought, I wonder if the Thinker Clans --obsessed as they are with maintaining stability and with access to a deep and mysterious well of Forbidden Lore --might have war jutsu. If any clan would have them, I suspect it would be one of the Five. Maybe this is one such instance of what Ami was referring to when she said "here be Dragons?" The power to reshape the landscape, but as the immense cost of human life, and with a significant danger of going haywire?

War Jutsu might also be a contributing factor of why every clan wants to find out another Clan's Secrets. Sure, the practicality of it, but also because myths and legends of War Jutsu. All that power, locked away in the minds of a few clan members? Other clans would salivate at having such a trump card. Over time, all the war jutsu were lost, but the clans' hunger for clan secrets remained.
 
Is anyone opposed to at least trying to create a strong alliance with the Kurosawa?
I'd be happy to create a strong alliance with the Kurosawa. We should probably start by trying to work out a similar trade deal as we have with the Wakahisa. Might even be able to get Iron Nerve training if we negotiate well enough.
 
Is anyone opposed to at least trying to create a strong alliance with the Kurosawa?
I'd be okay with that. IN-socials seem like a cool shiny. I just worry that Goketsu (a relatively small and poor clan) don't have anything worth offering. Still, that's something we can work up to --after laying down a proper foundation.

I suppose we could leverage the fact that the new Mizukage wants closer ties to Leaf, and that Hazou (nephew of the Kurosawa Clan Head and the only son of one of Mist's few remaining jonin) is a Clan Head in (relatively) good standing with the Hokage. We've been sending letters to Hana, so the familial relationship is still there --if somewhat diminished.
 
Ok realized the actual play for getting control of the Kurosawa. We go and support Hana as clan head and get Hazō named as heir. We have a non missing nin to support who already has knowledge of how the clan works. Plus as a jounin she has more personal power than any of the other contenders. This also removes the burden of actually running it. We can sell it to Hana because we would wind up spending more time with her.
 
@eaglejarl Can Hazō verify any of this at all? And how much is it stuff Kagome read and how much is it inference? Like if Kagome knows water elemental behavior, ancient wars, the potential power of war jutsu and the fact that Wind used to be fertile not so long ago then the specific desertification ritual and the motivation for its deployment may well be logical inference.
 
Back
Top