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I'd argue a goal should be to determine if we want to work with Leaf or not. I see three general ways we can progress from here:
  • Mantain Status Quo: Just get healed, then head back out into parts unknown, with Akane enlisted as "spy" or something for Jiraiya
    • Maintains some independence
    • Doesn't grant us many benefits of working with a village
  • Work with Konoha openly: likely done by founding a minor village with an open alliance with Konoha, have Akane be a "liason" or something
    • Grants access to Konoha's resources
    • Limits what we can do
    • Ties us to ninja politics
  • Work with Jiraiya directly: rather than just occasional workers for Jiraiya, work for him directly and often. Have Akane become a disciple of Jiraiya or something
    • Grants access to some of Konoha's resources
    • Limits what we can do
    • Ties us to Jiraiya's politics
There are positive and negatives to each of these courses of action, but as I'm unsure how we want to about uplift quest, I'm unsure which is the best suited.

Interesting, I wasn't really thinking about the situation in that way.

I think the last option is actually the current status quo, just like Jiraya wants. If we want to pursue the other options we need to outdo him somehow.

I will note that as a result of our actions, we have given Konoha a major military boost, and I expect ninja aerial warfare to become a thing in the next year or two. Konoha might go to war soon since it has a large temporary military advantage.

I doubt the boost will be that big. If it is, their best move now is to kill us so we don't spread the technique any further.

It is also kinda weird that we were the first ones to figure that one out. Does Konoha even have people that are trying to develop new stuff?
 
I'd argue a goal should be to determine if we want to work with Leaf or not. I see three general ways we can progress from here:
  • Mantain Status Quo: Just get healed, then head back out into parts unknown, with Akane enlisted as "spy" or something for Jiraiya
    • Maintains some independence
    • Doesn't grant us many benefits of working with a village
  • Work with Konoha openly: likely done by founding a minor village with an open alliance with Konoha, have Akane be a "liason" or something
    • Grants access to Konoha's resources
    • Limits what we can do
    • Ties us to ninja politics
  • Work with Jiraiya directly: rather than just occasional workers for Jiraiya, work for him directly and often. Have Akane become a disciple of Jiraiya or something
    • Grants access to some of Konoha's resources
    • Limits what we can do
    • Ties us to Jiraiya's politics
There are positive and negatives to each of these courses of action, but as I'm unsure how we want to about uplift quest, I'm unsure which is the best suited.

I will note that as a result of our actions, we have given Konoha a major military boost, and I expect ninja aerial warfare to become a thing in the next year or two. Konoha might go to war soon since it has a large temporary military advantage.

It is Akane's choice whether she wants to stay with us. After what happened, we shouldn't begrudge her choosing to stay as a regular member of the Konoha military. The only part of Hazou's speech that I didn't like was the part where he implied that Akane is too strong to leave the group.

That said, now that she has legitimacy as a Leaf-nin, and her loved ones know she's alive, there are less reasons to stay in Konoha.
 
Clearly the solution is to come up with several more militarily-applicable things similar to this to make Leaf's victory so crushing and sudden that the other nations are forced to capitulate or die.
So Pax Flama? Or Pax Konoha?

Hmm..
That is one solution to the diplomacy problem. The problem, is that I don't think Konoha has more military strength than literally every other nation, and if it does, once victory was achieved, infighting would likely break out, splintering the victorious nation into effectively the same thing that it stopped.

Interesting, I wasn't really thinking about the situation in that way.

I think the last option is actually the current status quo, just like Jiraya wants. If we want to pursue the other options we need to outdo him somehow.
Fair enough. By status quo, I meant what we had been doing. I fully agree Jiraiya is proposing we shift to the third option.

I doubt the boost will be that big.
Things they can do as a result of their discovery:
  • Place high altitude bombardment platforms
  • construct defensive platforms enemies (probably) can't reach
Additionally, now that we've shown them the basic idea, there are many ways that I expect Jiraiya would improve upon the idea such as follows
  • Make a laterally mobile platform by going to the side via the same manner we went up
  • Begin thinking about ways to militarize the sky (and make similar inventions we were trying to come up with)
So if they want to, they can just park a mobile attack platform above a city, and then bomb it (use pretty much any jutsu which makes something appear (e.g. condense water), then let it drop). To my knowledge, there is currently no way to attack something a mile in the sky. So if Konoha knows how to do this and other nations don't, they could just carpet bomb cities with no way to stop the carpet bombing. That seems like a very significant military advantage. It seems to me to be on par with one nation having nukes and other nations not having nukes.
It is also kinda weird that we were the first ones to figure that one out. Does Konoha even have people that are trying to develop new stuff?
The number of people who can make seals and have free time is incredibly limited. We have more of that. Additionally, thinking about using the air as a combat area was probably not something people generally did. My main concern is that if Konoha starts using floating air based platforms, this will unlock a new research branch of the tech arms race, meaning other militaries are going to begin researching aerial combat.

It is Akane's choice whether she wants to stay with us. After what happened, we shouldn't begrudge her choosing to stay as a regular member of the Konoha military. The only part of Hazou's speech that I didn't like was the part where he implied that Akane is too strong to leave the group.

That said, now that she has legitimacy as a Leaf-nin, and her loved ones know she's alive, there are less reasons to stay in Konoha.
I agree. Mostly, I was pointing out that any of those options would still give Akane the choice to be with us if she wanted.

If it is, their best move now is to kill us so we don't spread the technique any further.
Hmm.... This...... seems..... true...... and the sort of thing a shadowy behind the scenes guy like Danzo would do. Likely while preventing Jiraiya from knowing about it.
 
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To my knowledge, there is currently no way to attack something a mile in the sky.

We don't know what the bijuu can do in MfD, so that is one option.

There are also some other S-class ninjas who can fly.

EDIT: Oh! And Lightning has that big-ass cannon!

That seems like a very significant military advantage. It seems to me to be on par with one nation having nukes and other nations not having nukes.

It really does. Now, why would they ever let us leave Konoha alive?

We clearly can't protect the secret and will be using it in the future. What sort of use could we possibly have as operatives that would outweigh the risk of nullifying an advantage that big?

Do we need to prioritize escape above everything else before they figure out how good of an idea this actually is? Or pre-emptively suggest that we join Leaf as support ninja and vow to never leave the village?

EDIT: I really didn't think we'd reach a bad end by being too creative, but I guess it happened?
 
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EDIT: I really didn't think we'd reach a bad end by being too creative, but I guess it happened?
How else would we reach a bad end? :p

Realistically, we've got Jiraiya's favor, and have established ourselves as being creative. They're more likely to bind us more firmly to Leaf than try to off us.
 
Clearly the solution is to come up with several more militarily-applicable things similar to this to make Leaf's victory so crushing and sudden that the other nations are forced to capitulate or die.

The temporary advantage lasts until the enemy reverse engineers the seals, so Konoha can hold it in reserve for as long as they don't use it, possibly with an eye towards combining it with other advantages.


We should try to wrangle something extra for giving them "sealing invention of the year".
 
There are also some other S-class ninjas who can fly.

EDIT: Oh! And Lightning has that big-ass cannon!
Clearly, I never watched enough Naturo.

It really does. Now, why would they ever let us leave Konoha alive?
Because we might come up with future innovations which also give them similar military abilities and thus they want to maintain a good relationship with us? Don't kill the golden goose and all that?

We clearly can't protect the secret and will be using it in the future. What sort of use could we possibly have as operatives that would outweigh the risk of nullifying an advantage that big?
To be fair, the other nations will likely learn to copy this technique after just a couple uses. I can't really think of good ways to hide how it works when using it, so Konoha can only really count on one or two attacks before they can expect their enemies to have the same abilities. It's a very temporary advantage. Given that we'll need to stay in Konoha until Akane heals, there's decent chance they use it before that happens. At that point, it doesn't really matter much if we leave.

Do we need to prioritize escape above everything else before they figure out how good of an idea this actually is? Or pre-emptively suggest that we join Leaf as support ninja and vow to never leave the village?
I strongly doubt our ability to escape Konoha without equipment or weapons, while constantly under surveillance by people who can see through walls and read our minds at will. Our best bet is to hope Jiraiya can protect us, that we're wrong about the military applications (we haven't witnessed country scale war before), there are a lot more counters to the technique than we thought, or that other actors (like the Hokage) find us valuable.

This means things we can do to help us survive: make Jiraiya protect us (I think our speech at the end helped a lot), or gather other allies, like the Hokage. I will note that when we left the chamber, I think Jiraiya was the only person who actually thought about the potential military applications for our invention, and the Hokage hadn't recognized them yet. The Hokage wants to talk with us in the future, so that'll be when we can try to convince him we're net beneficial to be alive for Leaf.
 
So who else found it significant that Leaf knows about 5SB well enough that just from the name alone where able to check our math on the floating lookout tower? Is this a hint and who held Kagome(Root?) and how he became as damaged an individual as he is.

On our stay within Leaf, I think we should talk with as many people as we can to gather ideas on what would benefit the most people with our ninja powers. Spread the idea in the heads of everyone we meet that our village of which we are dignitaries from is looking to specialize in civilian application of all the stupid magic being flung around. Germinate the idea that the powers nearly everyone has could be used to the benefit of all. Going to the trade district would be a good place to do this, from our perspective, as our plans are inherently disruptive to the current social norm. I want to paint as large a target on our fake village as we can so that we can have a talk with any assassins who try and trace back our origins and try and convince them that our way would be best for the whole world. We have to get strong enough to enforce this or form a coalition of people and ninja willing to start from Peace and then escalate only in response.
 
We should try to wrangle something extra for giving them "sealing invention of the year".
Agreed. I'm thinking a list of prior "sealing invention of the year" devices, and coaching in how to make at least one.
To be fair, the other nations will likely learn to copy this technique after just a couple uses. I can't really think of good ways to hide how it works when using it, so Konoha can only really count on one or two attacks before they can expect their enemies to have the same abilities. It's a very temporary advantage. Given that we'll need to stay in Konoha until Akane heals, there's decent chance they use it before that happens. At that point, it doesn't really matter much if we leave.
Seal research takes time. Several days at minimum, at Hazou's level, to produce something really simple. (Assuming I recall correctly, that's the time required for each Macerator variant.)
Five Seal Barriers are, as best as I can tell, a lot more complex, and require a lot more skill to infuse correctly. Weeks at least, probably more like months, assuming they have Jiraiya and he doesn't have one of the seals to reverse-engineer. So if Konoha builds a few hundred platforms, trains their most trusted strike teams in secret, and attacks the rest of the world, I could believe that anyone without flying or super-long-range-bombardment ninja loses their immobile assets.

Not quite analogous to nukes, but still a superweapon.
 
This means things we can do to help us survive: make Jiraiya protect us (I think our speech at the end helped a lot), or gather other allies, like the Hokage.

With that in mind, if we go to back to this point:

I'd argue a goal should be to determine if we want to work with Leaf or not. I see three general ways we can progress from here:
  • Mantain Status Quo: Just get healed, then head back out into parts unknown, with Akane enlisted as "spy" or something for Jiraiya
    • Maintains some independence
    • Doesn't grant us many benefits of working with a village
  • Work with Konoha openly: likely done by founding a minor village with an open alliance with Konoha, have Akane be a "liason" or something
    • Grants access to Konoha's resources
    • Limits what we can do
    • Ties us to ninja politics
  • Work with Jiraiya directly: rather than just occasional workers for Jiraiya, work for him directly and often. Have Akane become a disciple of Jiraiya or something
    • Grants access to some of Konoha's resources
    • Limits what we can do
    • Ties us to Jiraiya's politics
There are positive and negatives to each of these courses of action, but as I'm unsure how we want to about uplift quest, I'm unsure which is the best suited.

We are pretty much forced to go with the third option since that is what J wants. If we want to do something else (like find Village Hidden in the Heaven*), we need to wait for a better opportunity.

I guess Hazou could internally commit to an alternative goal, but he is not really in a position to communicate anything that sensitive to other party members. We have to seem like we are doing exactly what Jiraya wants us to do for now.

I guess the best way to get protection from third parties would be to voice our worries to J: "That thing we gave you is extremely dangerous and we are super worried that you or someone else inside Konoha's system will kill us now."

When he counters that nobody but him, the Hokage, and his trusted guard were there, we go with something like: "You have a village full of exotic sensory powers and spying and double crossing is what ninjas do. How confident are you that a Konoha insider with high access and experience couldn't compromise the discussion we had with the Hokage?"

Actually, it would be easier to compromise the discussion we are currently having. Or maybe not, since Hokage's office is a known factor and this place could've been picked at random? Maybe we need a cover story or code to even have this discussion?

*It is kinda silly, but now that Konoha stole our secret for VHitH I suddenly don't feel like doing that anymore.
 
So who else found it significant that Leaf knows about 5SB well enough that just from the name alone where able to check our math on the floating lookout tower? Is this a hint and who held Kagome(Root?) and how he became as damaged an individual as he is.

I'm almost certain that Kagome isn't actually the original creator of the seal, as that's never actually said. It's more likely that it is a known seal within the sealcrafting community, not some secret that he developed.
 
So who else found it significant that Leaf knows about 5SB well enough that just from the name alone where able to check our math on the floating lookout tower? Is this a hint and who held Kagome(Root?) and how he became as damaged an individual as he is.
I assumed Five Seal Barriers were a common seal, like storage and explosive seals, so every nation had them. I figured that if Kagome had been held in Konoha, he'd have raised objections about going there. Also, I think the more significant hint about where Kagome was is in Chapter 77, when someone else cooraberated Kagome's story. Quote here:
"Are you kidding?" Kagome-sensei burst out. "How can you not know the stories of Muri Fortress? A secret offshore prison, hidden deep in the Water Country, where Hidden Mist holds the world's most dangerous sealmasters captive, using their powers…"

"…to reinforce the crumbling barriers protecting our reality from the horrors outside, or, some say, to summon those horrors and try to bind them to the Mizukage's will," Kagome-sensei and an Irie woman ("Minori"?) finished in unison.
On our stay within Leaf, I think we should talk with as many people as we can to gather ideas on what would benefit the most people with our ninja powers. Spread the idea in the heads of everyone we meet that our village of which we are dignitaries from is looking to specialize in civilian application of all the stupid magic being flung around. Germinate the idea that the powers nearly everyone has could be used to the benefit of all. Going to the trade district would be a good place to do this, from our perspective, as our plans are inherently disruptive to the current social norm. I want to paint as large a target on our fake village as we can so that we can have a talk with any assassins who try and trace back our origins and try and convince them that our way would be best for the whole world. We have to get strong enough to enforce this or form a coalition of people and ninja willing to start from Peace and then escalate only in response.
I'm.... not in favor of trying to get assassins after us yet. I could be in favor of propogating the idea that we're dignitaries from a village, but it's really risky, since our minders will have had a briefing about who we are and where we're from, and this seems like the sort of activity that leads directly to mind scans for all of us.

Seal research takes time. Several days at minimum, at Hazou's level, to produce something really simple. (Assuming I recall correctly, that's the time required for each Macerator variant.)
Five Seal Barriers are, as best as I can tell, a lot more complex, and require a lot more skill to infuse correctly. Weeks at least, probably more like months, assuming they have Jiraiya and he doesn't have one of the seals to reverse-engineer. So if Konoha builds a few hundred platforms, trains their most trusted strike teams in secret, and attacks the rest of the world, I could believe that anyone without flying or super-long-range-bombardment ninja loses their immobile assets.
I was working off the assumption that Five Seal Barriers were a common thing (since Jiraiya recognized it from it being named). If they aren't then I agree with you.

We are pretty much forced to go with the third option since that is what J wants. If we want to do something else (like find Village Hidden in the Heaven*), we need to wait for a better opportunity.
Probably. I think Jiraiya's support of us might still exist if we found a small minor village, I see that as a way of trading favor with Jiraiya for favor with someone else. In particular, it seems like a reasonable way to create a relationship in which we export military sealing ideas to Konoha in exchange for their protection. This could get the Hokage on our side.

I guess Hazou could internally commit to an alternative goal, but he is not really in a position to communicate anything that sensitive to other party members. We have to seem like we are doing exactly what Jiraya wants us to do for now.
True. I'm incredibly uncomfortable with discussing long term goals and ideas in Konoha. But there's probably some information we could gather on which of these would be best. For example, we could ask if it's even a possibility, or how minor vilages get founded.

I guess the best way to get protection from third parties would be to voice our worries to J: "That thing we gave you is extremely dangerous and we are super worried that you or someone else inside Konoha's system will kill us now."

When he counters that nobody but him, the Hokage, and his trusted guard were there, we go with something like: "You have a village full of exotic sensory powers and spying and double crossing is what ninjas do. How confident are you that a Konoha insider with high access and experience couldn't compromise the discussion we had with the Hokage?"

Actually, it would be easier to compromise the discussion we are currently having. Or maybe not, since Hokage's office is a known factor and this place could've been picked at random? Maybe we need a cover story or code to even have this discussion?
Not a bad idea in principle, though we might want to try to word it differently? Honestly, I think Jiraiya is probably the only person who's figured out all the easy applications for it, so we're probably ok until he begins to explains those ideas to other people and convinces them, which will likely take at least a few hours.

*It is kinda silly, but now that Konoha stole our secret for VHitH I suddenly don't feel like doing that anymore.
Shrug. I'm game for either way.

E: though I'll admit, losing even the first mover benefit for inventing it sucks
 
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If it is, their best move now is to kill us so we don't spread the technique any further.
I'm not sure if you're joking. If you were running a semi-benevolent military dictatorship, and someone who is demonstrably willing to work with you and over whom you have a significant level of influence presents you with an ingenous military innovation, your move is to kill that person? Really?? You're not gonna, like, have them come up with more of those for you?

Does Konoha even have people that are trying to develop new stuff?
Should definitely add asking this to the plan, at the same time as we discuss what we're going to get paid for this innovation.
 
I'm not sure if you're joking. If you were running a semi-benevolent military dictatorship, and someone who is demonstrably willing to work with you and over whom you have a significant level of influence presents you with an ingenous military innovation, your move is to kill that person? Really?? You're not gonna, like, have them come up with more of those for you?
Depends on if you think you'll need future inventions and how much you trust them.
 
I'm not sure if you're joking. If you were running a semi-benevolent military dictatorship, and someone who is demonstrably willing to work with you and over whom you have a significant level of influence presents you with an ingenous military innovation, your move is to kill that person? Really?? You're not gonna, like, have them come up with more of those for you?

I guess I was equating "killing" with "forced captivity until death" since those are pretty much identical from a player perspective.

If you want more of that stuff, then you should make damn sure that the inventor doesn't go anywhere where he might get captured or otherwise compromised. Like extremely hazardous ninja missions.

Also, if the invention is comparable to a nuke, then denying that asset from enemies is almost as important as acquiring it yourself.
 
True. I'm incredibly uncomfortable with discussing long term goals and ideas in Konoha. But there's probably some information we could gather on which of these would be best. For example, we could ask if it's even a possibility, or how minor vilages get founded.

Another topic to research at a library even if we ultimately decide not to go that route.
 
I guess I was equating "killing" with "forced captivity until death" since those are pretty much identical from a player perspective.

If you want more of that stuff, then you should make damn sure that the inventor doesn't go anywhere where he might get captured or otherwise compromised. Like extremely hazardous ninja missions.

Also, if the invention is comparable to a nuke, then denying that asset from enemies is almost as important as acquiring it yourself.

I mean... would we actually mind that? I mean, it wouldn't be ideal to be kept in-village, but as long as we were allowed SOME degree of freedom (which unless Danzo got his hands on us, we would be), Hazou and friends being kept safe and productive wouldn't be that bad.
 
I mean... would we actually mind that? I mean, it wouldn't be ideal to be kept in-village, but as long as we were allowed SOME degree of freedom (which unless Danzo got his hands on us, we would be), Hazou and friends being kept safe and productive wouldn't be that bad.
I would be willing to stick with MfD through a timeskip with a vote for a course of research. As long as it wasn't tediously going through every single update.
 
I mean... would we actually mind that? I mean, it wouldn't be ideal to be kept in-village, but as long as we were allowed SOME degree of freedom (which unless Danzo got his hands on us, we would be), Hazou and friends being kept safe and productive wouldn't be that bad.
I figure this is one of the ways we make a minor village if we want to do that. We found ourselves as a minor village which exports research to Konoha, and go from there. Quest changes time scales from individual ninja missions to projects and general actions to research goals and village ideas. It'd change the flavor of the quest very much. That said, it would reduce our ability to act outside the system, since we'd then be a village like everyone else. So it seems to me Konoha should be happy with either us working for Jiraiya, or as a minor village bound to them.
 
I want more people on board with uplifting the standard of living to everyone. Getting people thinking in that direction is important to starting that change.
 
I picked a good time to catch up! Of course, life steps in at the most opportune of weeks, but at least I get to binge the last two chapters together! Very well written.

This is not an acceptable outcome.
I love these kinds of spine-tingling moments!

I'm happy enough with how this all turned out, pending Akane's recovery. I hope 'liaison' means she still accompanies us around, though.
I'd still prefer a more '1st person' style quest, honestly, even if we go minor-village-in-truth quest.
 
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