Magical Girl Mew! [Pokemon/DC]

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Prologue:

This is quite a nice day, I must admit. Holding the fishing rod with just one hand, I...
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Prologue:

This is quite a nice day, I must admit. Holding the fishing rod with just one hand, I take a sip of coffee with the other. The sun is rising over the the horizon, the fishes are biting aplenty and I already got a nice breakfast in the form of some ceviche that is already marinating.

I admit, going out for some alone time into the woods was a good idea. I really needed to relax, and after spending all semester in college a good ol' fishing day on the lake near my ranch was fabulous.

Now, if only some deer came in sight, that would make my day.

Suddenly feeling some weight on my old rod, I leave the coffee on the floor and start reeling, for a moment the string almost tangles itself with one of the pier's posts, but I manage to handle it. It does not takes me long to get another bass.

Taking just a moment to decide if I should keep it, I strike it's head, quickly take out my knife, cut an incision, and throw it into the freezer to bleed out. Today is really my lucky day.

I take another sip of my coffee while preparing the lure again until I hear a big splash come out of the water. I immediately start looking for the source and find nothing.

Frowning for a second, I let the issue go and prepare cast the rod once again. It was probably a jumping fish, a bird, or something.

~H-Help...~ I understand. I immediately look up and around as a white flash appears briefly on the water.

~Anyone, help me, please...~ I feel the desperation, the hopelessness, and I know whatever it is, it is coming from the water. I know I shouldn't, I know this is unnatural. But I simply can't ignore the plea for help.

After taking off my jacket and glasses, I immediately jump into the lake. The cold water hits me with a shock and I become dazed for a second. Quickly getting back my bearings I start swimming to where I saw the light.

I swim for a few minutes, until I reach the place where I saw the light. Taking a deep breath, I dive into the water. I stopped perceiving whatever was making me feel those things, and I am worried.

The water is murky, but thankfully the lake shores are shallow. Beneath the water I see a flickering pink bubble. It appears to suddenly grow from opaque to dim, and change it's size, becoming smaller and smaller each second.

I hesitate for a moment, but having the need for air I decided to just grab it instead of needing to dive again. It feels hard to the touch, and surprisingly warm. It is just big enough for me to carry it with a football hold, and thus I start to swim to the shore. For a moment I feel gratitude.

I reach the shore completely wet and a little too cold for my comfort. Quickly making way to my ATV on the pier I look at the bubble. It is growing dimmer by the moment, and I can see some kind of shadow inside.

My body is pumping me with adrenaline and my mind is trying to rationalize a fucking force-field. I set down the bubble on top of my chair as I start to undress. Making sure to get my cellphone out of my pocket, the gun and knives out of their holsters and leaving my clothes to dry on top of the ATV, I put on my jacket.

I glance at the bubble, and decided to (just in case) grab my colt and load it.

I approach the bubble cautiously as It starts glowing. Suddenly it fades into nothingness, and I find myself gobsmacked. There is not a single doubt, left behind there is a small pink kitten. A Mew.

I wonder for a moment if maybe, just maybe, I should start praying to Arceus until I notice it's state. The Mew is awfully wounded and unconscious.

I leave the gun on top of the front rack and hurry to dig up the First Aid kit from the cargo box. There is not much I believe I can do, but I shall certainly try. I have a weak spot for cats.

I quickly go back to the feline and start assessing its injuries. From plain view I can clearly spot it breathing heavily, a broken bone that it's breaking through it's leg, several cuts and patches of it's fur are missing. Doing the best I can I start cleaning the wounds with antiseptic and knitting the cuts.

It takes me awhile to treat its wounds as the small kitten whimpers in pain. I knit the cuts, dress it's wounds, and after finding that there is no bleeding make it makeshift splint.

The poor kitten looks like a mess and it needs professional help. After doing all I can, and know, how to treat, I hurry to pack my small camp. Just as I am about to finish I feel the feline wake up.

"Don't move!" I exclaim hoping it can understand me. In result the Mew slowly looks up to me with it's bright blue eyes. I feel like I am being judged, the weight of it's stare almost encumbering me physically.

~Thanks,~ it finally says, now a clearly feminine voice echoing on my mind. ~but you should hurry, pack up and run. Get away as fast as you can!~

I stare at it for a moment.

"Fuck no!" I exclaim, "I dived to the bottom of this lake to save you, and then treated all your wounds! Like hell I am leaving you here like this!"
~He is coming! He only wants me and I am already dying!~ the Mew all but shouted, it tried to stand, but it clearly was too weak to even do so.

"You protest has been heard, but I have decided to ignore it." I reply as I look around in worry. I gently grab the Mew as it (unsuccessfully) tries to escape my grasp. Then I run to the ATV and throttle it as fast as I can, nesting the small feeling between my legs.

"So, exactly what kind of being do I need to look out for?!" Isay in worry. Whatever left a Mew, hell any Pokemon, like this definitely is dangerous.

~Y-You! You Idiot! Leave me behind! You are too good for your own good!~ I heard the Mew say as it channeled it's feelings of frustration towards me.

"Then escape!" I all but shout "How did you even reach this state without healing yourself?!"

I can feel both Mew's sadness and the frown on it's face as it replies softly "The Djinn blocked my healing abilities, I know I am dying." suddenly I feel the feline gently headbut my tight as it continues. "Please, forget about me. I really appreciate how you have treated me, and I thank you with all my heart. That is why I am begging you to just let me go."

"Fuck that!" I exclaim "I will not let anyone die if there is anything I can do ab-"

Oh. Fuck.

Suddenly a small golden ring appears on my path, and from within it a clawed arm appears to shoot out. I barely have time to avoid it as another one appears on my view.

It takes me a second to draw my gun and fire as many bullets as I can towards it. I know for a fact that several of them hit the arm, but all it does is make it recoil and withdraw back into the ring.

~Leave me! It's hopeless and he only wants me!~ The Mew exclaims as it attempts to jump out of the ATV with all its remaining force. I swear in annoyance as I grab it by the scruff of the neck by reflex and put it against my chest.

"If you were on my place, would you let me go!" I exclaim, and the Mew suddenly freezes for a moment.

~I wouldn't…~ the Mew mutters, and then I feel it trying to bite and scratch my forearm to free itself. Knowing what it should be capable of I start believing that the Mew, it is not only too weak, it might also be in fact dying.

But I simply can't let someone die like that.

Suddenly an enormous ring opens exactly in front of me, and from it a demonic visage appears in all it's unholy glory.

Fuck, Fuck, Fuckity Fuck. It's mother fucking Hoopa Unbound.

I swear as I rise up my gun and decide to fuck it. I unload the rest of my clip on it's fucking face at the same time I throttle to the max and ram the bitch through it's own portal.

The Djiinn doesn't appears to be wounded by the bullets, but it is definitely confused as I ram it. We enter the golden ring, and suddenly a black void is my everything. The dazzed Hoppa starts struggling, and the inky blackness of the ring starts shimmering in a thousand colors, I see a kaleidoscope of lights until we come out into a desert.

The ATV crashes into the sand, as Mew and I are sent bowling away. I feel the air on my lungs being blown away as I strike the ground, and the corners of my view grow dark. But I don't let that get me.

I look around for Mew, and see it laying down a few meters away. Above him Hoppa stands cackling in madness.

It takes me all my willpower, but I run towards the ATV and pull my rifle out of it's case before I start firing. The creature growls in anger before setting its sight on me. I can clearly see it's eyes. At that moment, I take the chance and pull the trigger.

I hear a scream of rage. I see blood flow from it's face. I feel cold. I feel weak. I look down, and I see one of Hoopa's arms plowing straight through my chest before I fall into the sand.

I feel life slowly flow away from my body, but I try to continue. I try to drag myself towards the Mew even with my last breaths.

~You Idiot!~ I hear a whimper. ~I told you! I TOLD YOU!~ it screams in grief.

'I do not regret trying to help you.' was all I could think before my hand fell on top of Mew's fur.

Suddenly a pink wave of energy hits me. I feel invigorated, I can feel my wounds close, but I know this is just making it last longer. I wonder why is Mew doing it as it replies.

~I won't let you die!~ it shouts. I raise my view and notice the Hoopa gleefully watching as we suffer in joy, and once again I look straight into Mew's eyes. But this time they look at me different. They look at me with purpose. ~I'm already going to die… But I won't let you!~ The kitten screams.

~Do you want to live?~

"What?!" I manage to rasp before I start coughing.

~I… I can sacrifice myself to crystallize my lifeforce. From there a Burst Heart will form. I will lose my body, but it will allow us to fuse, and for you to get my abilities.~ The Mew took a moment of silence before continuing. ~All I ask is for a promise, for a promise to protect the world in my place.~

At this, I notice the Hoopa start to approach us, probably to finish us once and for all. My mind is fuzzy, I have no idea what it means, but all I can reply is with: "I accept."

I know not exactly what happens to Mew's body, it is something that I simply can't comprehend. Suddenly it is there, then there is a lemon-sized pink gem on my hands.

I see the Hoopa pause in confusion at what it is seeing as I raise up the gem. Following what my mind is telling me to do I yell: Heart Burst! as I press the gem into my chest.

I feel energy completely engulf my being as I start to float up in the air. My wounds begin to mend and in a flash of light, I am.

I have no time to look at myself, but I clearly notice that I am wearing a pink dress of sorts instead of my underwear. And that I seemingly have the figure to show it. I frown for a second before deciding that the freaking evil god in front of me needs all my attention.

Apparently deciding that it must kill me now, it starts charging at me. And I see it all, I see the small holes in reality open around me, I see every one of his muscles twitch, how his energy moves, how he will move.

And I move.

A Maelstrom of Hyperspace Fury surrounds me, yet I dance around it with grace. But the Djinn manages to catch me. His punches surround me, and I see no way out.

I trust on my instincts, and immediately raised a barrier. It was no psychic energy, instead a comprehension of of Aura, of life force itself. It broke against the Dark-type attack, but at the very least it nullified some damage.

The punch connected, sending me barreling through the horizon with a gasp, suddenly Hoopa was in front of me launching a sucker punch before I could react. The hit set me barreling down into the desert. A trench of sand was open by the sheer impact as the monster howled in joy.

Now I understand why Mew was having so much problems. I wondered what to do, but before I knew what was going out his rings started once again materializing around me. His fists pummeled me, their Dark nature doubling their considerable damage against me.

It's very touch burned me. The eldritch energies of the Djinn searing my flesh with agony. I wondered how to get out, how to escape.

As I laid my eyes into the gloating form of Hoopa, realization struck me. The moment the next portal opened, I jumped above the punch and transformed.
My form changed into Mew's, allowing me to fly over the punch and jump into the portal. Once again I found myself in the black expanse of the void, but this time as the kaleidoscope reappeared: I teleported home.

The world changed, everything stretched, I tasted orange and felt up. My senses overloaded with strange sensations, then the world came back. Everything was faint after that. All I remember is landing in a Lake at terminal velocity, then darkness overtook me.

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What do you guys think? Depending on how it turns out, may or may not scrap this.
 
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The world changed, everything stretched, I tasted orange and felt up. My senses overloaded with strange sensations, then the world came back. Everything was faint after that. All I remember is landing in a Lake at terminal velocity, then darkness overtook me.
And then you were rescued by a well meaning, cat loving fisherman.
 
Yey new mew story.

And then you were rescued by a well meaning, cat loving fisherman.
It begins!


I had stopped perceiving whatever it was, and I am worried.
Tense change.
and after finding that there is no bleeding re-set the bone and make a makeshift splint.

The poor kitten looks like a mess and it needs professional help.
Either you know how to set and splint a broken bone, of a cat like thing, or you need professional help.
 
Tense change.

Either you know how to set and splint a broken bone, of a cat like thing, or you need professional help.

Thanks you, gonna fix it.

Mm.... true, true. I am no veterinary even if I know some basic animal care, but to be honest, It's a Mew. I would have thought "The kitten God can handle it, let's avoid further infection and possible bleeding."
The poor kitten looks like a mess and it needs professional help.

If we say it was a bone like the Ulna, there is no much chance of massive fuck-up (it's the big bone on the front leg.) I'd rather try to set the bone than leave it to possible get worse. I can't be keeping it wet and look at it until I get to a veterinary. But you might have a point, it is a cat bone. I will change it to just making a split.

And then you were rescued by a well meaning, cat loving fisherman.
Not sure if that is a reference or not...
But my current plan is to simply wake up on the bottom of the lake. Mew is the ancestor of all Water-type Pokemon.

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So... did you guys like the chapter?

I honestly found it... lacking, but decided to post it and see what you guys thought.
 
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I liked it. Though the monster didn't have much of an impact probably because there wasn't much buildup.

Not so much this. The way it is written works because things are so confusing. Neither the character nor the audience really has a full grasp on the situation. What this story really needs is direction. Where does the story go from here? In complete honesty, you need to write a little more before we can give you constructive advice. Whether this is a good beginning or not will entirely depend on where you are going from here.
 
1.1
I woke up with a groan as I tried to clutch my aching head. There was a strange weight around me, and as I opened my eyes, I stared at my paws.

I blinked once, then once again as I flexed my little, cute, pink paws. I then stared down at my body.

Uh. I'm a Mew. I-It wasn't a dream? Did the Mew really… Did the Hoopa really kill me? I stared down at my (pink!) chest, and almost -almost- could feel his arm piercing me again.

I shuddered for a second before looking around. Well, that's new.

I took a deep breath, and tried to understand how I was breathing water without avail. I was not sure what just happened to me. After just laying down for long while, in the bottom of a lake, trying to understand everything that had happened. I decided that I had been brooding for far too much.

I started swimming towards the surface, and it felt weird. It wasn't as though I felt strange. Rather, I felt very normal, as though i've been like this all my life and just hadn't realized it.

And that was exactly what bothered me. Being like this should not feel so natural.

I continued lazily swimming for a few minutes until I reached the surface, and continued flying upwards. I honestly wasn't paying attention until I noticed that the ground was far below me.

And once I did, I simply stared. I was flying. I was really flying.

I couldn't control it, I started giggling as a loon, doing loops simply flying. It was freeing, calming, it felt good. I tried to go faster, and faster, until I broke through the sound barrier.

Then I kept going.

I stopped after a while, panting and covered in sweat, but with a grin on my face. That had been so much fun. I giggled again for a moment before looking down.

I had no Idea where I was.

I looked around, and started to flight towards a nearby road. Around me only wilderness and farmland existed as far as my eyes could see. Not long after that I finally saw a city.

I needed to try to contact my family… if I was still on my own earth. I did jump into a Hoopa's portal. Shaking my head to avoid thinking such things, I landed in an alley on the outskirts of the town.

Now… how to return to normal.

I frowned trying to remember… no, it's not remembering. To recall? I just wanted to transform back to normal.

And in doing so, I changed.

My body briefly glowed and enlarged itself to that of a human. And still definitely not my body. Now that I had time, I looked at myself. I was definitely shorter, going from 6'2 to somewhere around, maybe, 5'4", is definitely noticeable.

But beyond that I was a woman. And quite a petite one. I touched the fabric of my clothes -a long sleeved dress with different tones of pink- and wondered where they came from.

I surreptitiously rubbed my bare skin. It was really silky. And... soft. It hadn't been like that before. Apparently the transformation also waxed my legs. Probably my everything.

Oh-kay.

A little curious I raised my skirt, and a modest pair of white panties greeted me. How would I fly like this! I'm not going to become Miss Fanservice! Suddenly a small glow surrounded my legs as white leggings (or pantyhose?) were created.

Mental note, being a shapeshifter was awesome. But, I'm not a girl. I want to transform back to normal. I thought hard, yet my transformation did not happen. Dammit, I know I can do it!

I want to be a boy? I tried, and suddenly I felt a bulge on my crotch. Ok, that's going in the right direction, but not what I wanted.

I concentrated, I tried to remember every detail about my old body, about myself. I want to transform into Me. And so I did.

"Yes!" I exclaimed as I raised my fist. I was back to myself, and wearing some jeans and a simple shirt. Without further ado, I walked out into the town.

The streets were almost completely empty, except for a young boy walking hand on hand with an older woman. There was not much else to catch my attention besides a convenience store.

I simply started walking, I had no money, no ID, nothing. Would going to a Police Station help if I am on another Universe? I sighed, worrying will not help me. In the distance I could see a Fire station. Taking a second to think if I should, I decided to just do it.

I entered the front door of the place, a standard lobby stood. Stepping up to the counter I saw a uniformed man reading a newspaper. I plastered a wide grin on my face, before asking, "Uh, excuse me?"

Startled, the man looked up. "Oh, I'm sorry, kid, I didn't hear you come in… Can I help you?" he said in a friendly tone, a smile seeming permanently etched on her face.

I took a breath before replying "Sir, I got separated from my parents and kind of lost them… would you let me use the phone? I'd rather avoid having to walk all the way home." Not exactly a lie either.

The man blinked for a second "Ok, kid, just write down the number and I will call them."

He passed me a post-it and a pen. I hesitated for a second, but wrote the number and gave it back. Thankfully he didn't seem to care about the area code as he placed the call. The man frowned for a second and called again.

"Kid, you sure about the number? It doesn't seems to exist." I barely managed to contain my grimace as I shaked my head. "Sorry officer, I dont have the best memory. Thanks you anyway, I will just walk home."

Before the man could react I bolted out of the door and jogged to a nearby alley. The man would have probably called the Police to take me home or something if I stayed.

I tried to lift myself into the air, but just managed to jump. "Uh" Why couldn't I fly? I tried it once again, but once again just managed to jump. Suddenly an epiphany hit me as I tried to lift a nearby can with my mind.

Dammit, I can't use Mew's powers while transformed.

Taking a deep breath I though once again 'I want to transform back to normal.' My form shined bright white as a swirling dark haze with shining sparkles covered my form for a second.

Once again I was female. Deciding to see if my theory was true, I tried to fly. And I did.

Rising high into the skies, I decided to head east. I just needed to find a big city to blend in, acquire somewhere to stay, some money and an ID. After that I have all time in the world to think what to do with my powers. If worst comes to shove I could try to teleport a few Immigrants from Mexico for some quick cash. Otherwise I am quite sure the Pentagon will be quite interested in acquiring a real psychic to their payroll.
 
1.2
Finding the interstate took me small while, reaching a big city wasn't too hard after. I was a little surprised when I found myself all the way to Kansas City. I hovered over the city for a few moments, deciding where to land.

For a moment I could swear a red blur streaked through the city, but ignored it as my imagination. In the middle of the city stood a big park, the perfect place to land.

Touching down was a little disappointing, flying was so much fun! But I needed to get my priorities right first. In the middle of the park, I looked around. It seemed there was no one in sight.

Perfect.

I need to find out what I can do. I sat down in the grass, an-

What's that? Laid in the ground next to me, there is a long furry, bulbous pink appendage. I poked it, and I definitely felt it. I moved it, and it moved. Huh. I have a Tail. Oh Mew, I'm a Cat. Girl.

Quickly raising my hands to the sides of my head I finally noticed, I had no human ears. A little curious I raised them higher.

Yeah. I have Mew ears.

'I need to hide those extra appendages.' I willed, and my body obeyed. Strangely enough, now that I was focusing on it, I could -kind of- feel my power. And hiding those definitely made me weaker.

I brought them back, and there was definitely a noticeable change. Dammit. Ok, I now have phenomenal cosmic powers, but they are keyed to the form of a teenager catgirl.



Well, it could be worse. At least I can still turn back into a man, still, I really need to get a mirror. Taking a deep breath, I shook my head and remembered what I planned to do.

Concentrating, I tried to clear my mind. I sat down in a lotus position and closed my eyes. I tried to meditate, and in doing so, to follow my instincts and find the source of my powers.

And it was beautiful. I, myself, had a core of energy that shined as bright as a star. It radiated from my heart shining in all different colors. But around me, I saw life.

Aura, my mind reminded me. Everything radiated the energy of creation, from the tiniest creatures to the heavens themselves. And I was one with it. I was life, and so I could manipulate it.
I could do things with this energy, and with the energy within me my mind could barely comprehend. It feels like If I could do anything, and everything. My mind showed how Mew manipulated the elements, created curses, used her psychic might! Even manipulating space and time themselves!

It was a humbling experience, one that apparently took me hours to enjoy, for once I opened my eyes, a black deep sky and a full moon greeted me.

It was official. I am a Mew in all but name. Albeit, it seems Mew fusion wasn't exactly straightforward. Looking at my getup I wondered, would a Magical Girl Mew be a better description?

I actually giggled at the thought for a few moments before sobering. I had the powers of a God. But I had no identity, no money, no residence, not even food.

I needed to do a lot of stuff, and I wasn't even sure where to start! What I was sure of, is that I needed to go somewhere familiar, somewhere I at least knew the basic layout of. South it is then, to Austin. I just needed to take the 35th South and I could reach it in a while.

Preparing myself for the journey, I suddenly had an epiphany. I wondered for a second if it would work as I concentrated, I focused my mind, channeled my Psychic power and followed the instincts within my genes. And then I opened my eyes.

"Mew dammit!" I muttered out loud with a facepalm. I could teleport all time!

Around me stood the Texan desert in all it's glory. And my Ranch wasn't in sight. Just one more proof that I wasn't home.

I teleported once more, the process significantly easier after the first time. Appearing above where my house was supposed to stand, I found a different building. Albeit, most of the city layout appeared to be the same.

I merely took a deep breath before teleporting for a last time. I appeared in an alien living room. My apartment was still here, but it definitely wasn't mine.

Trying to control my emotions I opened the balcony door and jumped out into Austin's skies.

Dammit, I was too careless. What if there had been someone there? Still… it was disheartening to find out my family, my life, wasn't here anymore.

With some luck the shelter I know of still exists on this reality. And I could spend some days there as I work out what I am going to do. With a sigh, I made my way towards downtown.

Landing down in an alley, I made sure to hide my tail and ears and started walking. If anything, people would be more eager to help a small girl in the middle of the night than a young man.

Suddenly the earth shook for a second. I frowned. Then the earth shook again, and again. I looked around and blinked.

I don't know how the fuck I did not notice, but coming out of the nearby river a couple of -I kid you not- giant freaking robots started walking towards the city.

They looked like the wet-dream of a 50's science fiction writer, A tesla coil instead of head, a cylindrical torso and wobbly arms with claws coming from the front of the body. An impossibility all by itself.

Then the screams started, the robots started walking into the Riverside and shooting lightning out of their heads. I saw as the beams of plasma started to destroy buildings, as they struck cars and almost hit some people.

"LONESTAR, TODAY YOU WILL BE EXTERMINATED! FIGHT US OR THE CITY WILL BE RAZED." A voice blared from the machines. I am not sure what was happening, but I could not stand and do nothing. I had power, and Mew asked me to protect the world didn't she?

My ears and tails immediately popped up as I took flight into the sky, a pink bubble of psychic energy surrounded me bringing me an extra layer of protection as I broke the sound barrier and tackled one of the machines.

Against all odds, I merely dented it's hull and barely made it stagger. Before I could react as I recovered from the impact a freaking laser beam struck my side and sent me flying into the riverbank.

"INTERLOPERS WILL NOT BE TOLERATED, RESISTANCE IS FU-" The robot I struck started to exclaim before a blue, white and red blur suddenly slammed against it's head.

From what I could observe, a Captain America lookalike started to beat up the 60 feet robot with its fists. Then the army arrived amongst the chaos, barrages of missiles were launched from a squad of helicopters, but the remaining robot replied in kind. Missiles launched from it's back, as several lasers shot towards the missiles destroying them, and hitting the city on their back.

Fuck. The city on the back! The people!

Raising from my dazed state I launched myself towards the fight, one robot was occupied fist-fighting that other guy, but the other was fighting the army. And they were doing nothing against it!

Fuck, I needed to deal with this quickly! I needed to hit them hard, I needed victory! I-! Suddenly my mind supplied me with information. I could hit it hard, but it would make me weaker and probably affect me too.

Yet I did not care. I flied towards the machine as shimmering pink layer of energy surrounded me once more, and then fire erupted from my forehead. An enormous "V" of flame took shape and launched me at speeds I had previously thought impossible.

With a mighty clash, I broke through the robot, and out of the other side. A enormous -hot red- gaping hole appearing on its torso. The moment the flames dissapeared, I suddenly felt a weight on my shoulders as my power significantly decreased. I felt slower, weaker. It was a weird sensation.

But I could not stop. Looking back at the battlefield, I noticed the military launching another barrage of missiles. The already mauled robot was blown into smithereens.

No so far, the other robot was on a fist fight agaisnt the strange man. Considering it was not destroying the city, I considered that a win.

Looking away from the fight, I made my way towards the city. There was a lot of people that needed to be saved. Opening up my Aura senses, I started to locate all people in need of help.

This was going to be a long night. Where the fuck did I end up!
 
SV! Y U NO LEAVE COMMENTS!~
 
Well, for my case it's because I initially found and commented on this at SB, and I didn't want to just duplicate all my comments.
 
Well, for my case it's because I initially found and commented on this at SB, and I didn't want to just duplicate all my comments.
Don't worry! I don't expect people to post on both, but it's a little weird we are already reaching page 4 over there, and in here not even the first.

Hitting the building behind the robot?
Behind both, but yeah. :V
Will edit it later to make it clearer~
 
I was wondering guys. Do you think Mew should be a God? I'm debating whether I want her to become (in my order of current preference):
  1. Goddess of Life; Ailuropomorphization of The Red (and The Green?)
  2. God-like Feline; Can go Paw-to-Mano against most Gods.
  3. Creator Deity; For whom else laid Arceus' egg?
The first one is the one that makes more sense once we translate him to DC Comics, but what do you guys think? I'm open to suggestions.
 
Well Mew is the Originator of all Pokemon, including the Pokemon God and Giratina, a ruler of the Distortion a Realm so I don't see it as much of a stretch. It actually makes sense seeing as she can learn every single move in the series and transform into any pokemon too. So you can do that if you want to. Considering she Created every legendary, including the ones of though, free will, emotion, the Land and the Sea etc. And so many more I could see her as the Pokemon-verse Creator Diety. Although that does leave the question as to how the hell she was dying in the first place.

I do find it odd everytime I re-read the beginning chapter though, damn your MC is pretty much a complete Saint, risking his life for a pink cat, then when both he and it are dying and he's failed saying he's haloy anyway just because he could try to save it? That's like Emiya Shirou level of distorted. Espcially considering we find out he has a family at home too waiting on him.
 
Well Mew is the Originator of all Pokemon, including the Pokemon God and Giratina, a ruler of the Distortion a Realm so I don't see it as much of a stretch. It actually makes sense seeing as she can learn every single move in the series and transform into any pokemon too. So you can do that if you want to. Considering she Created every legendary, including the ones of though, free will, emotion, the Land and the Sea etc. And so many more I could see her as the Pokemon-verse Creator Diety. Although that does leave the question as to how the hell she was dying in the first place.
Arceus was also dying in the Movie, and there are TONS of myths where Gods or GOD is killed. It's not a stretch to suppose Hoopa summoned the Ebil versions of all the Poke-Pantheon, used Heal Block, Curse, and the other bunch of nasties. 1HKO moves notwithstanding.

I do find it odd everytime I re-read the beginning chapter though, damn your MC is pretty much a complete Saint, risking his life for a pink cat, then when both he and it are dying and he's failed saying he's haloy anyway just because he could try to save it? That's like Emiya Shirou level of distorted. Espcially considering we find out he has a family at home too waiting on him.
Really? Honestly it's not much of a stretch for me.

Once upon a time (Two years ago or so) we had a flood over here in Maverick County, the Rio Bravo rose more than 20 meters. My family and I were on the roof of our house, and I saw that as the water continued to rise, my cats (on another lower building) were about to to be dragged by the water. I swam in the middle of a fucking flood for my cats.

And that's a mother fucking cat, not a person.

If I can do anything to help another sapient, I will try to do it. This is not a simple Pink Cat, it's a TALKING, SAPIENT, Pink Cat. Would you be able to live with your conscience knowing you practically killed another sapient when there was a chance to save it?

I know I couldn't.

It's not like I knew there would be a "Suddenly Hoopa!"
 
Oh don't get me wrong I'm not saying people wouldn't do it for their own pets, a lot of the time pets are part of the family and loved just as much. I just found it kind of odd that it was happening with some strange pink cat thing, even then it wasn't much of a stretch, it was more the being completely fine with dying thing and not regretting it even though he thought he was going to die that I found was wierd to me. If he had of regretted dying or regretted not swimming or working out more etc. I likely wouldn't have found it so wierd. I just couldn't help but find it wierd that this what 18-21 year old or younger? Wasn't afraid of dying or regretted doing more with his life/ never seeing his family again when he failed to save the creature he set out to save.
 
Oh don't get me wrong I'm not saying people wouldn't do it for their own pets, a lot of the time pets are part of the family and loved just as much. I just found it kind of odd that it was happening with some strange pink cat thing
You missed my point there :V
The point is that if I would do it for a freaking animal, I would not doubt to do it for a person, for a sapient being. Mew is not a "Creature."
Mew is an Intelligent, Telepathic, Sapient being.

ven then it wasn't much of a stretch, it was more the being completely fine with dying thing and not regretting it even though he thought he was going to die that I found was wierd to me. If he had of regretted dying or regretted not swimming or working out more etc. I likely wouldn't have found it so wierd. I just couldn't help but find it wierd that this what 18-21 year old or younger? Wasn't afraid of dying or regretted doing more with his life/ never seeing his family again when he failed to save the creature he set out to save.

There is a very big difference between "I don't regret anything." and "I don't regret trying to help you." Think about it for a second.

And by the way, Relevant from SB and in part your question:

Hm, intriguing. I like!

But one thing - you turned back into You, so presumably 6'2" again, but the officer seems to respond as if you were quite young - are You the age your new Normal appears to be, you're just tall? Or is the new You just a young version of the old You? Or am I misreading things entirely?
Technically, a Burst Warrior. Transform is just that nice.


Well, I am 19. I still hear people call me kid from time to time.
Still, my self-image will never be able to grasp exactly how I looked before, so I may or may nor look a few years younger and more fit.
Magical Girl Mew! Apparent age is a 16 yo girl or so. So I'm planning to have the SI simply not care that he looks a little younger when he discovers it. It's not that much of a difference anyway, just not having to shave.

Still, will edit it later for clarity. Thanks you!
Technically...
The SI is a male fused with a Burst Heart.
But when fused to the Burst Heart, the SI natural form is Magical Girl Mew!
Which haves all of Mew's Abilities. Which include Transform, and allows one to choose... well anything, like a hat. The SI is able to simply end the Burst and return to normal, but he never bothered to figure that out, and used Transform instead.

And Mew may, or may not, be considered a Creation God or a Goddess of Life.

Also, Magic exists and kind of falls within Ghost and Fairy types in the Pokemon World, so she technically really is a Magical Girl.
What do you mean?




Kid Flash definitely will be there.
Definitely expect the lulz.

And... actually, look at my avatar? That's Magical Girl Mew! Standard form. She just hasn't noticed the Ears and the Tail. It's hard to do so without mirrors, and the fact all transformations feel completely natural. Will include it in history asap.

I would love you guys to think of ideas of a "Super" mode. At the moment, my options are
A) Go full Mew (Exponentially increase power levels at the cost of Mew's personality bleed-off.)
B) Break the Godzilla Threshold and go Mega-Rayquaza/Mega-Mewtwo.

Going full Mew will definitely be a Plot Point, but it definitely does not feels like it fit an a "True" Super Magical Girl transformation. Nor going full Kaiju.

As a side note, this might be relevant to you guys:
[QUOTE="Anon̦̦, postI must admit, that if I became Magical Girl Mew and figured it wasn't a permanent transformation (Or even one [but without shapeshifting that leads to gender dysphoria and other angst issues]) I would not only look at a mirror and say "I am so fucking Cute." and mean it, but actually enjoy it and have fun after getting used to it.
Temporarily becoming the most adorable Magical Girl does not change my sexual identity, potentially makes me biologically Immortal, gives me Extraordinary Cosmic Powers and the ability to reproduce with anything if I ever want to marry an alien, a rock, or something. You can bet that shapeshifters do not have self-image issues, and even find gender a concept that depends on their mood.

So meh.

Beyond the first time the SI transforms, I see no reason to complain. The fun parts will be the Interaction with the other people. Once he unmask to the Justice League and/or the Team there will be lot of space for shenanigans. Especially since I would definitely use my powers to troll people.

"Are you a girl, or a boy?" "Yes."
"Sorry, it's not you; It's me. I'm... wait. Am I Gay or Heterosexual right now?"
"Megan, what do you think? You are also a shapeshifter!"
"There's no one alive who can comprehend my sexual preference."
"I'm a Magical Girl because it's the most efficient form to use my powers, not because I enjoy looking cute!"
"... Ok, I do rather enjoy looking cute. But that is not the point! I am a Man, really!"

As a side note... just noticed the most likely pairing in YJ would be Megan. Both are Telepathic, Psychic, Shapeshifting beings and one of the core issues of Megan character is her loneliness. Having someone that resembles her so much and doesn't scorns her for being a White Martian would at the very least make them BFF's
 
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