Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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We really need a better way to deliver poison to a target. Something like shooting it at the target from a mile away at faster then the speed of sound so the payload hits before they hear it coming.
I submitted a Formation that launches poison arrows into the clan tech. But i did it as a Qi so it's probably limited

I guess if more work is done, no reason why the poison can't be amassed into the Qi arrow and fired. Although just firing isn't the solution since they're sure to have ranged defenses.
I think we're already suffering enough of heaven's displeasure from using foreign names, I don't want to know what would happen if we invented mundane artillery.
Xianxia usually has worse? Considering at high enough realms, a cultivator's every strike is like a bomb. The prob with just going artillery is that against overwhelming power it won't be able to do anything
 
We really need a better way to deliver poison to a target. Something like shooting it at the target from a mile away at faster then the speed of sound so the payload hits before they hear it coming.
I'd note that intention can be sensed and propagates faster than the attack does. Would need some kind of dedicated Assassin Path. The primary value would be letting a mortal hit a very weak cultivator.
 
I'd note that intention can be sensed and propagates faster than the attack does. Would need some kind of dedicated Assassin Path. The primary value would be letting a mortal hit a very weak cultivator.
What if the bolt was fired by mechanism without mind and therefor without intension?

But yes that really ups the needed complexity. Maybe if it shoots a poison not intended to kill? Like say a numbing agent.
 
Damn, even in the first paragraph i can feel the urgency of what's going on as well as the impression of the scene being nothing they haven't seen before in the past few days. Excellent showing of the War situation.

I like the Callback to her previous experience with a desperate march. She's probably one of the few who have prior experience leading that. Also nice to see her not realizing that they seem better off because they were inspired by being so close to her!

Heh, the standard war moment of interacting with the grunts. I really like how she's proving her worth as a Centurion here by working to keep morale up despite the situation.
Ferenike's omake series has been giving me a lot of practice in environmental writing, conveying emotions via a scene and environmental cues. It's kind of a callback, to Guo Wu, but its more a callback to Desolate Winds and the feelings she felt while approaching Fuxi's grave. I'm having a lot of fun exploring what it can be like to be hopeless. I'm also having fun establishing the trend that Ferenike knows the name of every soldier under her command, perfectly.

Nice way to showing the effects of the constant raids, and thank you for the emotional turmoil on Xiao Yi's behalf! The strategic importance of Pleuron being mentioned with the turmoil really shows that she the art of war is so in sync with her that even personal and military considerations are being blended together
Honestly I've just gotten started heehee.

So i like this scene because it shows that Ferenike has without a doubt moved beyond a Centurion's responsibilities. Unlike in the Devil Bee war where there was someone else calling the shots for the defense, here the full manpower and resources of the city are open to her and it's her call on what happens.

This is definite a Legate's job and ties in really nicely with there being no Core Formations left to handle it. She should definitely get a promotion from this.
Again, the strategic insight on both the Clan and the foes strength and weakness is great. It really shows just how well Ferenike is basically running this part of the front. With some greater experience on the strategic front, no reason why she can't be the new Elder Of War when she gets to Core.
You know it actually hadn't occurred to me that she could become the Elder of War? I've been spending time thinking about her wandering around the Verdant South as a Foundation Building hidden expert and having fun with spreading her philosophy into the South, and her Big Goal that I basically created her for; creating Clanwide Bonuses like Formations and martial arts techniques (though martial arts evolved into the picture later). I've just had 20+ omake and sixty in game years of set up for it so far and it won't be till after the Trials that I can really get at it. And then my thoughts for Core Formation and Nascent Soul level Ferenike were basically, Kung Fu Gandalf/Galadriel when she decides to be badass and a Buddhist Punch Saint respectively. This has helped a lot to refine my ideas for Core Formation Ferenike.

I like the speech about overcoming Fear although i was expecting at least one reference of burning it out with the flame of our actions. But i'll take the fire being within the Clansmen as well!
Like I've said before, her hope is a torch. Passed from one to the next to the next, on and on and on. It burns and it's fuel is hopelessness and despair. Losing sight of it would kill her.

Well mortals in the real world managed to figure out how to do it. But we don't have any good seed engineer.
We have array engineers, which is basically our equivalent.
 
You know it actually hadn't occurred to me that she could become the Elder of War? I've been spending time thinking about her wandering around the Verdant South as a Foundation Building hidden expert and having fun with spreading her philosophy into the South, and her Big Goal that I basically created her for; creating Clanwide Bonuses like Formations and martial arts techniques (though martial arts evolved into the picture later). I've just had 20+ omake and sixty in game years of set up for it so far and it won't be till after the Trials that I can really get at it. And then my thoughts for Core Formation and Nascent Soul level Ferenike were basically, Kung Fu Gandalf/Galadriel when she decides to be badass and a Buddhist Punch Saint respectively. This has helped a lot to refine my ideas for Core Formation Ferenike.
I mean the strategic and tactical sense being displayed in the Omake seemed to me to be very clearly showing her talent at combining the myraid little details a general needs to be aware of.

Combing the Logistics management with the defense of a active siege is tough as hell. Then she also goes keeping morale up and fighting on the front. It's a combination of the Chief Of Staff's Job, the Quartermaster, the general and the champion. And the most important thing is that she did not fuck it up.

In fact, thanks to her efforts in allocating the defenses, Pleuron was a success. Give her some experience on Offensive actions, Raids and counter-raids as well as Strategic maneuvers on the scale of months... She'll make it as a Elder of war.
 
We really shouldn't have taken Tribulation Trials at chargen. It only gave us 4 points! That's the same as Low Qi, and that runs out eventually! Even 5 points of karmic debt couldn't have been worse than this.
 
We really shouldn't have taken Tribulation Trials at chargen. It only gave us 4 points! That's the same as Low Qi, and that runs out eventually! Even 5 points of karmic debt couldn't have been worse than this.
Well a large part of the reason this Trials was so terrible was because of our 1 Point of Shiny Debt which became our Bad Karmic Luck curse, which was just expended absolutely thrashing our Core Elders. So I'm thinking a 5 Shiny Debt would have been fantastically terrible and demonstrably worse.
 
We really shouldn't have taken Tribulation Trials at chargen. It only gave us 4 points! That's the same as Low Qi, and that runs out eventually! Even 5 points of karmic debt couldn't have been worse than this.
I mean to be fair, we didn't know how bad it will be. This is our first trial turn in the quest after all

In addition, this Trial turn is WORSE because we choose the risky option to remove the karma malus permanently. Quite likely next trial will be better + the Good Seeds will be more prepared to do Saving Juniors
 
Sure, but word of god is we lose ~30% of our cultivators every trial normally. Even a normal trial is terrible for our clan (although as you say I expect them to lighten a bit when karmic debt is lifted, that's still 20% attrition)

Onto other "chargen choices in retrospect" thing, I forgot we spent three points on a limited use late nascent soul weapon. That should keep us secure in the aftermath of this trial reguardless and blunt any big moves on our lands. Still seems a bad choice in retrospect spending points on it when it's barely factored in so far but we couldn't have known the power layout of the area during chargen
 
Sure, but word of god is we lose ~30% of our cultivators every trial normally. Even a normal trial is terrible for our clan (although as you say I expect them to lighten a bit when karmic debt is lifted, that's still 20% attrition)

Onto other "chargen choices in retrospect" thing, I forgot we spent three points on a limited use late nascent soul weapon. That should keep us secure in the aftermath of this trial reguardless and blunt any big moves on our lands. Still seems a bad choice in retrospect spending points on it when it's barely factored in so far but we couldn't have known the power layout of the area during chargen
We can say that so far the situation has not been disastrous enough to use it, yet. Therefore, things that call for using the Will must be for preventing stuff that is worse than losing 80 percent of our elders. Otherwise we would have used it.

As an example preventing Manuel from dying, which is a lose condition. Or preventing a complete invasion from the Blood Cannibals into our recently conquered territory which we will not really be able to take back.
 
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Sure, but word of god is we lose ~30% of our cultivators every trial normally. Even a normal trial is terrible for our clan (although as you say I expect them to lighten a bit when karmic debt is lifted, that's still 20% attrition)

Onto other "chargen choices in retrospect" thing, I forgot we spent three points on a limited use late nascent soul weapon. That should keep us secure in the aftermath of this trial reguardless and blunt any big moves on our lands. Still seems a bad choice in retrospect spending points on it when it's barely factored in so far but we couldn't have known the power layout of the area during chargen
Again, alot of the points raised here are a " In hindsight ". Also i think you're under-estimating the value of the weapon here. Per QM, a Late Nascent soul is pretty top tier for our Sea.

Having that as a WMD pretty gurantees the Clan won't be stomped at during any weak points. Because if the core areas of the Clan is targetted and the weapon fires off, the enemy is out a Nascent soul. Which even for blood path are stupidly hard to raise.

Anybody that loses a Nascent soul present's weakness that will be seized. Unless it's literal live or die, having that as the silent WMD is a better use for it because it ensures that no matter how hard the Clan is being pushed, certain limits are set so that the Clan doesn't go crazy and aim for a mutual deathblow.

With that context, having it as a threat during the recovery phase arguably keeps us more safe then using it to smack Bhirgu. Yes, if rolls are shit we likely lose land and resources, but the core areas of the land will be preserved.

EDIT: Also that 20% is not accounting for Saving Junior rolls, which as can been seen so far seems to help by a huge amount. We also have the ability of contributing Formations and upgrading it till they can tilt the odds even further. The Key thing is Time and the Clan's survival
 
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We can say that so far the situation has not been disastrous enough to use it, yet. Therefore, things that call for using the Will must be for preventing stuff that is worse than losing 80 percent of our elders. Otherwise we would have used it.

As an example preventing Manuel from dying, which is a lose condition. Or preventing a complete invasion from the Blood Cannibals into our recently conquered territory which we will not really be able to take back.

I don't think the logic is wrong, it's just we never see it discussed in character or in Manuel's thoughts. This might be precisely what's going through his (and the QMs) head, but when we never see it discussed and mentioned IC it's hard to distinguish that from the QM and readers forgetting it existed. I can totally buy Manual not using it against Bhirgu because he feared retribution from the "Judges" or it being better used in the future but when it's not even mentioned it's hard to see him making that judgement.

And yea this discussion is totally hindsight bias, but having just binged the Quest (mostly just QM posts, still working through Good Seeds) it's what's on my mind - how some benefits/penalties have had alot more impact on the quest than others.
 
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Mildgyð Galene 5 - Inexpensive alchemy
Inexpensive alchemy. (Thank you @Katana1515 for the beta)

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Many alchemists complain about how expensive our profession is. And they are generally correct if you want to make any particular alchemical concoction the ingredients are likely to be very rare and therefore expensive. The first trick to inexpensive alchemy is to start from ingredients available and figure out how to make useful things from that rather than going the other way round. For example I know 101 different recipes* (cost 50 CP) that use qi drained sand as their base ingredient all of which have very niche and limited uses, but if you know enough niche and limited uses then you have a broad repertoire. The same principle applies everywhere. Find out what things you have in abundance and try to find or invent as many recipes using those ingredients as possible. Even if most of them are useless in most situations if you know enough of them you will find a situation where one or more apply.

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The last kind of common yet hard to obtain ingredients is old things. This might fall under what has been said before, but it is such a common and useful type of ingredient that I feel it deserves a special mention. Even an ordinary rock is a useful reagent if it hasn't been moved for a thousand years****, water that has never seen sunlight or air not been breathed for a thousand years. All of these things have uses in alchemy. The problem is verifying. Most rocks do not come with clear records showing that they have not been moved for a thousand years. This problem can be overcome either by purchasing ingredients from long established and old things farmers*****, but that comes with the before mentioned wealth of nations problem. The other option is with extremely practiced and accurate qi sense it is possible to detect the difference. However it is very easy to be mistaken using only qi sense and if you are wrong the whole recipe is ruined.

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I don't think the logic is wrong, it's just we never see it discussed in character or in Manuel's thoughts. This might be precisely what's going through his (and the QMs) head, but when we never see it discussed and mentioned IC it's hard to distinguish that from the QM and readers forgetting it existed. I can totally buy Manual not using it against Bhirgu because he feared retribution from the "Judges" or it being better used in the future but when it's not even mentioned it's hard to see him making that judgement.

And yea this discussion is totally hindsight bias, but having just binged the Quest (mostly just QM posts, still working through Good Seeds) it's what's on my mind - how some benefits/penalties have had alot more impact on the quest than others.
If Manuel know that Bhirgu could kill his core Formation Elders without retribution, he might have considered using the will.

Bhirgu wasn't worth using the will on. Manuel only needed to destroy a token. When the core elders appeared that goal should have been easier to accomplish.
 
Simon Euaerizo - Good Seed Background
Simon Euaerizo

Good seed for turn after trials @occipitallobe

Simon was born Qirong, son of Berserk Slayer, a core-forming Battle Blood Cannibal. Qirong's father was a captive Xin Kingdom cultivator who happened to have the bronze bloodline. Berserk Slayer ate his soul (and everything else) before Qirong's birth.

Qirong's childhood was about what you'd expect in a vicious family of man-eating nobility. Before age 10 he killed a sister and a brother, not to mention the toll he took on other families. This was while toadying for his older, cultivating siblings for mere survival. As he survived and grew, he gained more of his mother's attention and approval, but wasn't initiated into cultivation yet.

Then one night his mother stumbled home greviously wounded, and his world crashed down. Showing more affection than he ever remembered, she told him about his bloodline, and convinced him to save his own life, leave north and never return.

Soon after the Trials ended, a very quiet boy walked into the Shining Mountains. With obvious Bronze blood, he was quickly adopted by an upstanding legion family, the Euaerizo, looking to make up for their recent losses. His keen intelligence, initiative, and aptitude at cultivation made them proud. He's opened up to his new friends and family, but feigned amnesia about most of his past. He left much behind in the deep desert.

Turn 12: He's almost surpassed his adoptive grandsire, and developed an obsession with Formations, in direct reaction to his Cannibal origins.

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Overall Concept: Adopted kid trying to shake off being raised to be a psychopathic killer. Digesting new concepts like "siblings will not murder you in your sleep if you let your guard down". Driven by an animal fear of rejection, he tries to both act tough and please everyone, and succeeds at both. He's now the star of his adoptive family of very minor cultivators.

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Current Status: 1st Heavenstage, still with family.

Starting Perk: Heightened situational awareness. Even when he tunes out to focus, Simon keeps track of everything. Due to his upbringing, he subconsciously analyzes the world for threats and potential solutions to those threats. In combat, this sensory awareness becomes unreal. Also a very light sleeper. (Effectively: combat bonus)

Dao: The Dao of Bronze. In this path formations are held to be the key to enlightenment. "Extend your awareness outward, beyond the self of body, to embrace the self of group and the self of humanity. The goals of the group and the greater clan are transcendent, and to embrace them is to achieve enlightenment."

Current Objective: Make his (dead) birth mother proud. Create new and experience new formations.

Completed Omake:
#1: Everything Belongs to the Strong
#2: Night Flight
#3: For one to live, another must die
#4: (Turn 11): Lipita Delphi #1 collab
#5: (Turn 12): The Greater Self, Lipita Delphi collab#2
 
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Simon Euaerizo

Good seed for turn after trials @occipitallobe

Simon was born Qirong, son of Berserk Slayer, a core-forming Battle Blood Cannibal. Qirong's father was a captive Xin Kingdom cultivator who happened to have the bronze bloodline. Berserk Slayer ate his soul (and everything else) before Qirong's birth.

Qirong's childhood was about what you'd expect in a vicious family of man-eating nobility. Before age 10 he killed a sister and a brother, not to mention the toll he took on other families. This was while toadying for his older, cultivating siblings for mere survival. As he survived and grew, he gained more of his mother's attention and approval, but wasn't initiated into cultivation yet.

Then one night his mother stumbled home greviously wounded, and his world crashed down. Showing more affection than he ever remembered, she told him about his bloodline, and convinced him to save his own life, leave north and never return.

Soon after the Trials ended, a very quiet boy walked into the Shining Mountains. With obvious Bronze blood, he was quickly adopted by an upstanding legion family, the Euaerizo, looking to make up for their recent losses. His keen intelligence, initiative, and aptitude at cultivation made them proud. He's opened up to his new friends and family, but feigns amnesia about most of his past. He left much behind in the deep desert.


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Overall Concept: Adopted kid trying to shake off being raised to be a psychopathic killer. Digesting new concepts like "siblings will not murder you in your sleep if you let your guard down". Driven by an animal fear of rejection, he tries to both act tough and please everyone, and succeeds at both. He's now the star of his adoptive family of very minor cultivators.

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Current Status: 1st Heavenstage, still with family.
Starting Perk: Heightened situational awareness. Even when he tunes out the world to focus, Simon keeps track of everything. Due to his upbringing, he subconsciously analyzes the world for threats and potential solutions to those threats.

Current Objective: Make his (dead) birth mother proud.

Completed Omake: Next to be posted.
Looks like you posted this twice my guy
 
Simon Euaerizo 1 - Everything Belongs to the Strong
Everything Belongs to the Strong
Simon Euaerizo omake #1​

Far-off thunder cracked. Though the evening air was humid, it was likely the rain would miss the fortified family compound. The deep desert storms were intense, but usually small and scattered.

In a comfortable room with adobe walls and open doorways, a one eyed man played lute, accompanying the dancing of a scarified young woman. Her only clothing, long silk streamers at her wrists and ankles, trailed her movements elegantly. A voice comparable to the growl of a lion ant or a rockslide issued from a young man seated on a rug in front of the lute player. Both his eyes were put out. He sang of the glory of battle, bitter betrayal, and the transcendant emptiness of vengance. Another woman held a small sealed cask of ice shavings, waiting motionless as a statue in a corner of the room. Finally, another blinded man stood under an archway waving a large fan.

Qirong paid none of these any mind. His siblings were either out hunting cattle with Mother or at Sect. As far as he was concerned, he'd been alone in the house for a days. Slim and muscular, the ten year old boy sat cross-legged on an ornate rug, copying diagrams from an array scroll by lamp-light. The house-thralls, more than food but less than pets, had long ago gone beyond terror to an engrained sense of duty. They made the house lively and comfortable, and would attend to any fancy Qirong might have.

Three chimes rang. Mistress returning. The revelry stopped. Qirong put down his pen and stretched his hands. Only mother? And so early... A door somewhere distant smashed open, and an awful wail arose, then cut off just as quickly. Was that Yu Jin? Mother must be out of sorts to eat a guard.

A second wail sounded, like a soul being dragged to hell. As soon as it finished, his mother bellowed, "Fall in," loud enough to shake the furniture. "Assemble in the courtyard, all of you." The dancer ran, the other lady put down her cask and ran too. The one-eyed lute player led the blind singer on, and the fan-holding man was already gone. Qirong left his work there and hurried to the courtyard.

The breeze in the courtyard smelled like warm mud, the sky burned red with the setting sun's light. It was already crowded, with more arriving. Hither came Mother, hulking, stumbling and dripping blood. An unfortunate cook screamed as Mother exsanguinated and soul-drained her, the dessicated corpse droppping to the floor in seconds. Instantly, the slaves arranged themselves in rows and columns, standing at attention. Next to die were a pair of children, for running too close to Mother on their way to join the others. Qirong was under a covered walkway on the opposite side of the courtyard from Mother, and got his first good look at her...

This was bad. There were many deep wounds crudely bandaged, still bleeding. A metal patch was freshly nailed onto her skull. Even so injured, she was still an imposing figure, thick-thewed and sinewy. She gave a hard look at the assembled thralls. All loyal slaves, broken, trained and tested. Much more valuable than wild cattle. But when a man starves, he'll find his dog may nourish him too. Seeming to finish a count, Mother raised a hand, and fully two-thirds were slain as the others had been, their screams a chorus, blood arcing through the air in elegant fountains. Fifty lives at a stroke. Mother was bleeding less now, breathing easier, her wounds more knit. She stood straighter. Not quite straight, but taller than anyone else here.

She marched boldly among the remainder. Some were shaking, some sobbing, a few had pissed themselves. She grabbed the blind singer's ass with one hand, and bent, kissing him. They made love, clothed, for a full minute while all the rest stood mute. "Feng" said she, "Mad Dragon will not let you live." At this, she smiled, kissed him again, and devoured him until he was practically a skeleton. She chewed and swallowed a choice bit of his flesh before speaking again.

"Mad Dragon comes. He will defeat me, then he will inherit. Everything belongs to the strong." The naked dancer bolted, and Mother... let her go? Qirong could see Mother contemplating killing everyone else.

"Remain here for Mad Dragon or take your chances running," she announced. "You're no longer mine. Qirong, armory."

Qirong barely noticed what the slaves were doing any more. "Yes Mother." She hadn't even looked at him. They walked together in silence, past stout gates and layers of defenses, deeper into the fortress. The armory was a square room 30 feet on a side, many curious tools and weapons racked there. A faint smell of mud penetrated even here.

"It was just Mad Dragon," Mother said. His oldest brother alone, overthrowing her? "The bronze were ready for us. He must have told them we were coming. He hid and watched while they slaughtered us. That did for Spleen Eater and Corpse Lilly. And the hirelings."

"My other brothers. Back Stripes and Deep Vein?"

"He got them later. He hunted us when we escaped the bronze. Mad Dragon has friends we've never met before. I think he'll let his siblings at Sect be."

"But not me."

"Not you. He'll get creative if he catches you." She sat on a bench and took off her ruined armor bit by bit. "I wanted to see you take your name. I wanted to initiate you into the rites."

"I thought that you wanted me dead."

"I never wanted you dead specifically. You lived, Xi died, and you were tempered! You learned! The worthier of you won, and was stronger for it. I don't even want Mad Dragon dead. You're both strong boys, strong enough to take anything you set your minds to. Proud of both of you." Her armor off, from the waist up Mother only wore bandages. She drew him into a bone-bending hug. "I'll give Mad Dragon a good fight. If he fucks up I'll kill him and make his skin into a shirt. But he won't fuck up. Good boy, Mad Dragon. As long as he lives, I think my story lives. Does that make me soft?"

"What about as long as I live?" he asked when she let him go. Her blood was all over him now.

"There's no place for you in the deep desert now. Forget us. Forget me. Forget our wicked ways, forget our Dao. Forget your family and the Battle Blood Cannibal Sect. Live without our thrills and intoxications. The bronze will take you in."

That shocked him out of his mood. "The bronze? You mean take me in irons and forge my bones into spears."

"Your blood isn't metal, it's bronze, like your father's. I took a Xin Kingdom man to make you, but his blood was bronze too. With that blood, the bronze will treat you like one of their own... if you behave yourself. Just keep your eyes open and your mouth shut."

She took a token from the wall and pressed it into his hands. "Here," she said, "with this amulet, it doesn't matter if you can't cultivate yet. A wingworm will obey your every thought for a day. Maybe less."

She traced a pattern on the floor, then opened up a trap door that was invisible before. "This tunnel will take you to the worm pits. Wear the gear before you get in there. Go North, stop for nothing. Ditch the wingworm before you reach the bronze."

"Goodbye then, Mother. I will honor your requests. When I die you'll know I've done you proud."

"There's no more time. I loved you child, now get going."

Qirong closed the trap door over his head and descended a long ladder. His eyes were wet, and he didn't understand why.

Word count: roughly 1300
Cool thing: lifesaving treasure (the amulet)

Looks like you posted this twice my guy
Nope, deleted the first one first- I hadn't tagged occipital in that one.
 
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Saving Juniors 4 - The Miracle at Pleuron
Magnus tottered, almost unable to stand.

His face was twisted in pain, and for a moment it looked like he might fall.

He righted himself, and stood straight.

"I have it. I... have it."

Ferenike looked over at Tisamenos.

"Record the details. If we fail and the city falls, try and hide them somewhere. They might be useful in future."

He nodded. He had figured out the shape of things now.

"You're going?"

Ferenike shook her head.

"There's nobody left to command. If they all die... somebody needs to get you juniors out."

Tisamenos swore in his heart that if he lived, she would be known as the leader of the Indomitable Thirteen. Accurate? Well, maybe. But the cauldron girl just flew around killing people, the snake man was... hissing at his snake? They all were focused, seemingly uninterested in the rest of them. He knew it wasn't true, but still. Of all of them, Ferenike had been the only one to talk to him. A little petty, now he thought about it. No, he'd better report it accurately.

Atop the wall, an archer stood. Tisamenos had read up on the Basilakes, but Tasos hadn't been doing much so far. Apparently he had all sorts of powerful techniques, but hadn't used them at all in the defense of the walls for some time.

Rina spoke, her voice higher and softer than he had though it would be in such a situation.

"You're ready, Tasos?"

The man nodded. Rina smiled.

"As we planned. Only one shot at this, so let's make it count."

The north wall burst and shattered, a massive wave of force spreading out, catching thousands of enemy cultivators in a field of amber, making them slow, unsteady. Clearly something that had been prepared before.

Seven cultivators ran out, Amaranth Castellanos in front.

There were two at the centre of the pack, protected. Rina, and Magnus.

As they ran, figures moved to oppose them. It seemed for the time being all the Qi Condensation cultivators were trapped in the amber, as far as Tisamenos could tell.

The first was a figure of tremendous power. Tisamenos was used to this now. He could feel the subtle differences, understand what they were facing. While his eyes couldn't even see the movements, he could discern what was happening with some logic.

"Foundation Establishment..", he whispered, hands writing down all he saw.

The figure moved with blinding speed, and Amaranth struck. With blinding speed he intercepted the enemy, matching them blow for blow. Once. Twice. Thrice.

Again and again he struck, but as he did Tisamenos could see Qi bleeding from him like a great bronze fire, a furnace consuming his life.

A second Foundation expert strode from the crowd, lazily going towards Amaranth.

"Go!", Amaranth shouted.

Tisamenos had been long practicing the Qi-Piercing Eye Art, allowing him to see far, and to see what manner of Qi was used. Useful as a scout, or as an intelligence officer. Amaranth was burning now, his body on fire in truth as he erupted, blood streaming from him and turning into steam, surrounding the air around him. He moved through it at incredible speed, matching the two experts for five, ten, fifteen seconds. Twenty. Thirty.

It was on the thirty-first second Tisamenos saw him fall. The two experts turned and looked, ready to chase, but Amaranth grabbed and held on. One of them looked down contemptuously and kicked him, shattering ribs and causing him to cough up what little blood he had left. The remaining cultivators of the Thirteen were running towards a Core Formation Elder, that healer that had apparently made the siege impossible.

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Diogenes Aparámillos was next, peeling off to face an enemy.

He struck, and was immediately sent flying, an arm broken. His Devil Silver Body saved him for a but a moment, and his second strike was deflected as well. Another Expert ran in, striking at the core of their group. Diogenes twisted, deflecting one strike, and thrown to the ground. In anger, the woman attacking him blurred and struck - a deadly blow he could not avoid.

Suddenly the Ninth Prince was there, spears and snakes flying, a bottle in hand, shattering it. It contained the Foundation Building expert, and the Ninth Prince drew out a puppet, striking repeatedly at another expert.

They were blurs to Tisamenos, but in one moment an expert stopped. A tall man, with a shaved heard and long, white beard. Bent slightly with age, he struck at the Ninth Prince with a massive axe, cutting at him, hacking off a leg.

The puppet rose up and struck the man down in a moment, poison on its fists - some sort of snake venom, Tisamenos hypothesised. He fell, and another two experts came. These were Qi Condensation - apparently the field was fading quickly, having only bought a few moments time.

He could see now, that the field was shaped. He didn't know how the array had been repeatedly brought down to accomplish this, but there was no doubting that it was a magnificent accomplishment. The amber light gave the Thirteen a corridor directly to the Core Foundation elder, but they had needed to be able to get through. A great gate stood at the front of the field, and as the majority of the field fell, it left only two walls on either side of concentrated amber light, with a great gate behind the Thirteen.

Now, those who had been paralyzed were flowing around, running into the gate.

Against what had to be hundreds of Qi Condensation cultivators stood a woman. Atop a bear.

Peta and Wajo, fighting in unison. Massive swipes and growls, slapping enemies time and time again. Peta wriggled up, swimming through the air, striking with force from above that was difficult to counter. Wajo was cut, and she dove down to save him, but a mighty blow from his paw sent back tens of enemies, and sent her flying into the sky as well.

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Three Foundation Building experts had been driven off or wounded by the puppet, and the Ninth Prince stood bravely against a fourth. The puppet was exhausted, and had fallen to the ground. The Ninth Prince laughed boldly, and challenged the man, thumping his chest, daring him to fight him.

A moment later he was run through, a massive metal spike shoved into his chest. It had been an attempt to buy one or two more seconds of time, and it had worked. He coughed, and collapsed, spitting out a mouthful of snake venom as he did. The expert glided smoothly around it, chasing the rapidly-moving remainder of the force.

Diogenes Aparámillos was bringing up the rear, stabbing and slashing at those who dared approach him. It was only a delay, a minor delay, but it would be enough. Hopefully, it would be enough.

Behind them flew several arrows suddenly, clouds of poison interposed between Diogenes and his pursuers. A few seconds, no more.

At the gate, Peta had fallen, two spears piercing her stomach. In front of her Wajo stood, roaring with rage, killing and killing with furious blows, ten, eleven, twelve spears piercing his body. They kept striking at him, and he kept fighting, harder and harder, corpses littering the ground. For another minute they lasted, and it was not until a Foundation Building expert arrived that Wajo fell. A single skull-cracking blow, and the bear lay silent, as much pincushion as anything else, his blood staining the sand. Even in his fall he had shielded Peta, paws and the like covering her over. Those around them hurried in the gate of amber light, ignoring them two fallen enemies.

Wei Feng, Rina, and Magnus. Two seemingly unable to fight, Wei Feng saw a spear hurtling towards Magnus. He stepped in front of it, and pulled it out, and scoffed.

This time a sword, cutting off three fingers. Wei Feng said something - though Tisamenos could no longer hear - and he saw a Foundation expert's face stiffen with rage. The fingers regrew, and this time a spear to the thigh.

Wei Feng ran, pulling out spears, blocking blow after blow with his body. One spear struck his back and protruded from his belly - he pulled it out, turned around and struck down an enemy with it. The belly healed over, though the skin was looking patchier. Pale.

There.

In the middle of this formation of light a woman stood, unmistakable. She was tall, beautiful, and commanding.

She spoke, and all could hear her, her voice sweeping over the desert, into the city. Tisamenos felt an urge to bow, to prostrate himself and apologise for the mere pretension he had of thinking she could be challenged. He gritted his teeth and remained standing.

"You come to challenge me, children. And for what? You cannot hope to hurt me. You have eyes, I presume. Can you not recognise Mt. Tai?"

At their rear three cultivators were stabbing at Wei Feng, cutting off fingers and toes, part of an arm, slicing and stabbing. One tried to run past him and Wei Feng turned, threw himself at the man and sliced his throat out with his teeth.

Still fighting.

"Phoenix...", muttered Tisamenos.

"Phoenix! Phoenix!", cried a man next to him. Tisamenos didn't recognise him, but the cry went out.

"Phoenix! Phoenix! Phoenix!"

Tisamenos looked, and the Core Formation cultivator spoke again.

"Let me show you what power is. Take your shot. Do whatever you want."

She waved a hand.

"I won't strike the first blow. Of course, once your friend there dies, my disciples will kill you anyway. So? What do you have?"

He didn't, couldn't hear Rina Callista's words.

She spoke, and the Core Formation cultivator smiled.

"Do you really think so?"

More words from Rina, Wei Feng's eyeballs bubbling with blood, one arm here and a leg there, standing on what remained, blocking off five. It didn't seem possible that the man was still alive. His arm squirmed towards him and re-attached, a shattered and protruding bone snapping as it was pushed into an enemy's eyeball, another one dead. Wei Feng yet lived, unthinkably.

He didn't hear anything but the final two words.

"...will be."

They rung through the world like an absolute command, Tisamenos felt an urge far greater than before, to believe. Whatever was said was true, and if it was not true it would be true. A truly vicious word, trampling all other beliefs, all other paths.

For just a sliver of a moment the image of a pillar hung in the sky, domineering and demanding. Even the Core Formation woman was shaken, looking up with fear.

She stepped back for half a breath, shaking her head - and as she did Magnus leapt.

His now-blackened hands wrapped themselves around her neck, poison sliding from him into her.

She screamed in anger, and flung him away with tremendous force, sending him flying.

He hadn't been able to do it.

They had failed.

It was over.

Except...

Tisamenos saw two hands still wrapped around her neck.

Magnus was flying away, arms torn and bloodied. Rather than be torn away himself, he had chosen to leave his hands!

One breath of time.

A second.

The core formation woman stood forward, her mouth gaping like a fish.

Her eyes turned green, and even those attacking Wei Feng stopped.

She walked forward, towards Rina.

One step.

Two step.

Three steps.

In the middle of the fourth, she fell down.

Dead.

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The roaring in the city was unimaginable.

It was a woman who shouted it first.

"Qi Condensation killing Core Formation! Unrivalled Beneath Heaven!"

Tisamenos shouted as well.

"Indomitable Thirteen! Unrivalled Beneath Heaven!"

The shout went on and on, though a single voice rose up through the rest. A dry, broken voice, like a thin reed about to be snapped.

It was Minervina.

"Tasos. Be a dear and clean up, would you?"

Tasos smiled, and drew an arrow. It shimmered impossibly, and when Tisamenos looked at it he felt as though it was not merely one arrow, but a space containing many.

The bow was drawn back and shot, the arrow splitting time and time again.

Tasos shot again and again, thousands of arrows raining down on the Fifth Sea Cultivators.

Minervina cackled, and clouds of golden mist rose up, combined with a sickly green.

"You there, scribe."

Tisamenos froze.

"Yes, you."

As she spoke, tokens began shattering, and people began teleporting out. First one, then ten, then hundreds, then thousands, an entire army melting away like snow in summer.

"Write, write. I have notes for you."

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Minervina Barda

Omake reward - Sentient Venom
Fate -
Held Pleuron against all odds. Brewed the ShatterDao Four-Step Poison, killing a Core Formation cultivator and forcing tens of thousands of others to retreat. Due to a lack of time, brewed this poison in her own body to allow it to be used, allowing the Indomitable Thirteen to complete their impossible strike. At the moment has the strength, speed, and vitality of an old mortal woman, though her touch is still death to any who oppose her.
Cultivation - Early FB (Second Pillar)
Health - Crippled. Dantian has become a Poison Cauldron, meridians now only flow with Poison Qi. Minervina exists but a step away from death at all times until this is resolved.
 
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MUahahahahahaahaahah!

"You're going?"

Ferenike shook her head.

"There's nobody left to command. If they all die... somebody needs to get you juniors out."

Tisamenos swore in his heart that if he lived, she would be known as the leader of the Indomitable Thirteen. Accurate? Well, maybe. But the cauldron girl just flew around killing people, the snake man was... hissing at his snake? They all were focused, seemingly uninterested in the rest of them. He knew it wasn't true, but still. Of all of them, Ferenike had been the only one to talk to him. A little petty, now he thought about it. No, he'd better report it accurately.

Atop the wall, an archer stood. Tisamenos had read up on the Basilakes, but Tasos hadn't been doing much so far. Apparently he had all sorts of powerful techniques, but hadn't used them at all in the defense of the walls for some time.
Honestly? Honestly this probably would have burned a part of her but it is very much the decision she would make.

Minervina Barda

Omake reward - Sentient Venom
Fate -
Held Pleuron against all odds. Brewed the ShatterDao Four-Step Poison, killing a Core Formation cultivator and forcing tens of thousands of of others to retreat. Due to a lack of time, brewed this poison in her own body to allow it to be used, allowing the Indomitable Thirteen to complete their impossible strike. At the moment has the strength, speed, and vitality of an old mortal woman, though her touch is still death to any who oppose her.
Cultivation - Early FB (Second Pillar)
Health - Crippled. Dantian has become a Poison Cauldron, meridians now only flow with Poison Qi. Minervina exists but a step away from death at all times until this is resolved.
Goddamn.
 
Tisamenos had been long practicing the Qi-Piercing Eye Art, allowing him to see far, and to see what manner of Qi was used. Useful as a scout, or as an intelligence officer. Amaranth was burning now, his body on fire in truth as he erupted, blood streaming from him and turning into steam, surrounding the air around him. He moved through it at incredible speed, matching the two experts for five, ten, fifteen seconds. Twenty. Thirty.
Woah, he was literally burning his physical blood when he burnt his bloodline for power. That's pretty neat. I suppose he turned his constitution's ability to absorb blood for power onto himself?

Ngl, if I didn't know that he was only crippled, not dead, I'd have thought that much exanguination would have done him in. I guess cultivators of the 10th Heavenstage are more sturdy than that though.
 
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