Hierophantasm (Asari SI/Star Wars)

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Lost on an alien world in an alien body. What lost tombs and horrors await our daring and intrepid Asari protagonist?

A self insert story into an Asari in the universe of Star Wars.
Birth

Pridakarbiter

Unseelie
Location
Arctis Tor
Author's Note: Inspired by Memories of a Jedi: A Drell SI in Star Wars

Hierophantasm

I saw a red valley on a red world, mountains the color of spilled lifeblood. I saw towering edifices to divinities long past, and the mausoleums they made to lie in silent repose…

The very first thing I could even fathom to spare an iota of attention to was the feeling of the sun on my back. I could feel its steady burn. The kind of beating heat that preceded a nasty sunburn, like you felt when you lay too long in the sand beneath a midsummer July sun. The feel of the sand against my cheek, pressing into the smooth skin, leaving little imprints.

The lap of the waves against my fingers, touching, caressing, not icy cold like the northern Pacific but a pleasant warmth, a pleasant coolness against my outstretched hands. I curled one into a fist, feeling the sand slip from between my fingers, ebbed away by the tide.

I struggled to maintain a tenuous hold on the dream, which danced between memory and oblivion. If I faltered for but a moment, I knew that it would be lost for eternity. There was something about a tomb, or was it a god, and the red horizon like Mars, stretching on and on. I felt the dream slip further away, further away, like the sand that slipped from my fingers.

I let out a sigh, feeling the sand against my cheek. It had been an interesting dream, I would have liked to hold it. Maybe it would have made a good story... Of course, every time I woke and thought something would make a good story it usually turned more nonsensical the longer I considered it. Such was the way of dreams, I suppose. I sighed deeply, feeling the sand shift against my face, the little pinpricks of sand pressed up against my cheek.

I paused. My thoughts of dreams slithered away in a flash of shock that traveled down my body like an adder's strike.

Why exactly was I on a beach? My thoughts stuttered and my eyes flew open. White and purple and blue flashed before my eyes, and I squinted my eyes shut against the glaring light of the sun. Almost feebly, too slowly, I scrambled to put one arm under me, half-rising. It felt almost leaden from the effort like my arm had fallen asleep. Why was I on a beach? The world seemed to be swimming in slow motion, like I had been asleep and now everything was suddenly in high definition, which from a certain point of view was right, I had been asleep.

Pale white sand and pale blue and purple trees stretched into the sky, enormous roots pushed directly into the salty sea. I could taste the salt on my lips. I half lay in the sand, on a little alcove, surrounded on all sides by the great purple roots. Patterns of pale blue lights, glowing almost luminescent traced delicately across the surface of the roots.

I could feel the beat of my heart in my lips, I could feel it in my toes and scalp, along my skin. It hammered away in a climbing rhythm, higher and higher. My vision was tinged with black around the edges. Why was the sky purple?

Instead of a pale blue expanse the sky was a light and alien violet. Not the kind of color gradient a sunset or sunrise would have, bathed in purples and oranges, now this was the blue of the sky rendered in violet purple.

My heart hammered in my ears. Loud and roaring enough that for an instant I could not discern between the pulse of the surf and the crashing of my own heart. A cacophony of sound. The sky was wrong, that I knew beyond a doubt. It just touched something deep inside of me, the little voice that maybe would have said, maybe in some parts of the world the sky looks purple? No, that voice was shriveled and quiet.

Where was I?

The water was dark, crested with white. A wave came forward, cresting maybe a foot, and then washed up to my half-buried arm. I followed it as it glided over the white sand, carrying some pale blue leaves. Then my eyes followed the debris to my hand.

Okay, I thought semi-hysterically, or well, progressing quite a bit toward some kind of more than semi-hysteria. My hand was blue, not blue as in frostbitten, but blue, like really really blue.

I closed my eyes, feeling the sun on my skin.The still silence but for the gentle sound of the waves. The sand beneath my body, between my toes. The sand against my hand against the beach. The water against my hand again. I opened my eyes, staring down at my hand again.

Yes, I thought with perhaps quite a bit more dismay than I intended, my hand was still, in fact, all blue. Well, my fingernails were a pale violet, almost matching the color of the sky. I paused as an insane idea came to mind, and I blame it mostly on almost just awakening but for the briefest of instants, I spared a thought of whether somehow I had stolen the color of the sky?

Idiot. I thought.

I rolled my hand over, watching as the joints, the bones in my hand twisted. Was it actually my hand? I lifted my other hand from the sand, dry white sand crumbling away to fall to the pristine sand below. This hand was also, somehow, blue with little violet nails. I touched my other hand with my other other hand. It felt real.

Real. I lowered my face to the sand again, halfway between just wanting to pass out and let this be a future me problem and halfway to doing what I knew really needed doing. That was, mainly, figuring out what the hell happened. Contrary to what anime might lead people to believe, most people didn't just turn blue for no reason. Well, to be completely honest, nobody turned blue for almost any reason.

I lifted myself more from the sand, leaving the warmth of the sun and sand. Sand crumbled away from my body. A new wave, just as dark and foreboding, rolled up the beach to kiss my feet, carrying away the sand from between my toes. The tide ebbed away and I would have stared back after it if not for my new, very blue body.

My skin was blue, from the tips of my fingers to the tips of my toes. My nails were a light violet color. I pinched my skin at the elbow, feeling a dull sting, my skin darkened under the pressure. My skin was blue but had an odd texture. I ran one hand down my arm. It felt like it should be almost scaled, but it was too smooth. Visually, it looked like it was scaled, but under my fingers, I felt nothing but smooth skin, like the skin of my palm.

I couldn't feel the fine vellum hair beneath my palm that everyone had, I couldn't feel anything but smooth unblemished skin. I tracked my eyes down, scrutinizing the rest of my body.

I had a belly button. But it wasn't my belly button. That I could tell, and out of everything that was really what squicked me out the most, strangely enough. I grimaced, turning back to look at the tide. The water was still black, not black like pitch, but dark, far too dark for shoreline water. It looked more like the water you'd see when looking into a stream and contemplating whether you could actually get all the way across by just hiking up your shorts and praying. It never worked, let me say in advance, the water always betrayed you and you ended up with cold knickers.

I touched my belly for a moment, feeling the muscles under my skin, or rather the skin of this body, tense. I was toned, but not in a way that was immediately visible. I could feel my muscles corded under my touch. Another sliver of unease slipped down my spine. These muscles were hard like muscles under my touch but the texture was backward, where I would have expected the muscles to run laterally, they were running diagonally, separating at my belly button, but completely invisible and unnoticeable since they were under my skin in the first place. I twisted my waist, putting my feet under me for the first time, and lifted my head, staring again out at the blackened sea and white cresting waves.

There was no land on the horizon, the sea vanished into the distance, black meeting pale violet. I shuddered, wiping sand away from my torso and thighs. It wasn't wet sand, instead it was just the kind of normal sticking sand does. It was surface tension or something, I remember reading as much once. The sand made little bridges using the moisture in the skin, so dry sand would still stick, just using the moisture in the skin not from being necessarily wet or dry. Up close, staring at my arm, I could almost see tiny little black dots, almost like freckles. They were really more of a dark blue against the light blue, a true blue or french blue compared to the cerulean blue of my new skin.

I finished brushing the rest of the sand away. What was almost worse about the whole thing was the mostly nude part. I couldn't just be blue, I also had to be rather nude and blue. Perhaps leaving the sand on was the better part of discretion. I scoffed out loud and froze, letting the far more melodious sound of my voice be absorbed by the towering purplish mangrove-esque trees.

"Now that, in particular, is just weird," I murmured to myself, more to hear the sound of my own voice, rather than anything else. Now, I'd always kind of liked the sound of my voice, someone once said I sounded like a news reporter, kind of clear and distinct when I was speaking. And I kind of took that as an ultimate compliment, more than anything superficial, especially since the person who said it was a judge, and that made it matter a lot. It stung. Losing my voice, leaving a little hollow ache deep inside of my chest next to my heart.

I sighed, casting my gaze around again. It really seemed like I was on some sort of miniature beach, just a couple dozen meters on all sides, more of a sandbar. From this vantage point, I could see that it was more of a sandbar than a beach. A shallow sandbar, the water curving around behind with each high tide to make the sandbar a little island.

The sun, at this point, felt like it was roasting my scalp and my back, like there was a giant solar magnifying glass gleaming straight down toward me. One would think being blue would mean that there was an excess of melanin or something, what was the equivalent that made people blue? As it was, my shadow was almost directly below me, as well, so I estimated it must be about midday. Squinting, I looked toward the sun, shading my eyes from the sun.

I turned and took a few steps, feeling the burning sand beneath my blue toes. It was uncomfortable, but not unbearable. I wouldn't need to dance across the sand in a mad race toward the wholly uninviting refuse of water. Up close it was definitely still black. I knelt in front of the little stream as the tide barreled in with white froth and scooped up a handful. It didn't leave an oily sheen behind on my skin like I expected. No, instead it seemed just like ordinary water, albeit salty. I wasn't going to taste it again. But I raised it my nose and sniffed deeply, kind of wafting it toward my nose like it was something profoundly noxious.

I frowned. It also didn't smell like it looked either. It smelled like salt water. It felt like normal water. I splashed some on my arm, still no oily sheen.

Slowly, almost gingerly I stepped across the little isthmus as the tide receded for a moment, having to step a little more quickly as I made my way across. First, I decided, I would need to find some kind of civilization. I eyed the first of the purple trees as I stepped up toward it. Up close I could kind of see what I thought I saw earlier. There were patterns, little glowing blue lines in the tree's surface, embedded in the bark, almost fluorescent, really. I leaned forward to touch the tree's surface with one violet-nailed hand.

It was moist, really quite moist. Like a sponge. My brow furrowed. I wasn't a botanist by any means, but I was pretty sure that glowing purple trees were something that would've blown up over social media at some point. Or it would've been something I would have seen on a reel or something when looking at exotic plants. Because this, this was exotic. I pressed against it more firmly, digging my nails into the bark.

I lurched forward unexpectedly, drawing a startled yelp from my throat as my arm slipped forward into the tree as it suddenly gave way like it was made of foam and not bark. Or like it was a mushroom and not a tree at all.

I felt a wave of trepidation roll down my spine as I finally started to put the pieces together. This tree was not a tree at all. I dug my nails into the flesh of the tree and pulled free a handful of what should've been bark. Yellow sap ran down between my fingers as I clearly held something in my hand that was yellow flesh. My eyes watered at the stench, rotting flesh, and bad body odor mixed into one that wafted from the new hole in the tree.

Horror flitted around my mind as I stared. My eyes rose to the rest of the purple trees, with little glowing patterns, and to the purple sky above me again. I could imagine I would look almost wild, with wide horrified eyes. My eyes found my skin, my blue skin again.

Was I an alien? Almost shakily I took the two steps back toward the tide, letting the yellow flesh fall into the sand. My cerulean knees hit the white sand with a thump and I thrust my sap-covered hand into the water first, almost simultaneously raising the other to my face.

I had five fingers, I had five toes. Five toes and five fingers with human-shaped digits and human-shaped nails for all that they were blue and violet respectively. I had little blue scales and no body hair, but the rest of my external anatomy was bog-standard human, albeit a beautiful and alien cerulean blue.

My fingers found my mouth, tracing along it. I could feel my pulse thundering in my heart. It was fast, way too fast. I had a human mouth. I had a human nose. My fingers were very soft against the skin of my face. I froze, the tips of my fingers stopping at my ears. Or they would have stopped at my ears if I had ears, no instead I had nothing, just a smooth expanse of skin. I could feel my heart pulse in my ears but I had no ears. My fingers traced up the smooth skin to an even smoother ridge, sweeping back toward the back of my head. My head twitched involuntarily at the contact, something profoundly unpleasant.

I was an Asari. My thoughts were colored with horror. My free hand slammed into the sand. Black spots danced in my vision. My breath felt like it was stuck in my throat and too fast all the same. Like I wasn't getting enough air even though I could feel my heart hammering and my breaths coming faster than thought. I dug my fists into the sand.

As Asari. From Mass Effect. An Asari. I wondered through a haze of thought how many times I would have to repeat it before it wouldn't be real anymore. It was irrational, ludicrous.

It was reality. I forced myself to my feet. Breathe. One foot into the sand. Two. Second foot into the sand. Three, release the sand.

I was an Asari, I repeated to myself, trying and failing to ground myself again.
I was an Asari on an alien planet.

My gaze stretched skyward, toward the violet-hued sky. Surely, not Thessia. Thessia didn't have purple skies. I couldn't remember any world with purple skies, at least not now when my brain was half-baked and totally addled.

There were no contrails from airliners or spaceships or anything like that. It was only the not-jungle or the sea. The black almost-pitch water or the strange flesh-trees.

What a choice.

At least this wasn't hell.
 
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An Asari Self Insert... in Star Wars?!? o_O
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I waited for such story for so long! <3 <3 <3
 
At least this wasn't hell.

I dunno about you, but rotten flesh smelling trees on black sand beach? Nah that sounds like hell for me.

Nice prose and writing, the paragraph size is perfect, and descriptions of stuff being.. not just dumps, but like there's an actual image being looked at, described.

Hope she finds something less trauma inducing than corpse trees.
 
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Welcome back! To writing at least, looks like a fun adventure to be had (for us at least, fungi planet would be a horrible nightmare to me)! :D
Wonder where they ended up, my limited star wars knowledge doesn't have a match.
 
An Asari Self Insert... in Star Wars?!? o_O
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I waited for such story for so long! <3 <3 <3

So did I! I really like Asari self insert stories but hardly anyone seems to do any, or if they do they aren't quite what I had in mind (even if they are otherwise well-written)

I dunno about you, but rotten flesh smelling trees on black sand beach? Nah that sounds like hell for me.

Nice prose and writing, the paragraph size is perfect, and descriptions of stuff being.. not just dumps, but like there's an actual image being looked at, described.

Hope she finds something less trauma inducing than corpse trees.

Thank you, I always appreciate comments on my prose and writing. I tried to avoid making dumps but I sometimes go through and add a little more description to some paragraphs to make it more immersive.

Welcome back! To writing at least, looks like a fun adventure to be had (for us at least, fungi planet would be a horrible nightmare to me)! :D
Wonder where they ended up, my limited star wars knowledge doesn't have a match.

On a planet on a hyperlane toward Batuu.
 
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Bleed
Birth

The taste of brine was on the air, it kind of clung to my nostrils. Brine itself was kind of an odd smell, it smelled like salt and death, at least the seashore brine did. Otherwise a kind of mineral smell but with that faint undercurrent of decay that the mineral scent couldn't every really mask.

It was the smell of the sea, at the very least. My fingers still ran gingerly over my fringe and my head tentacles for a lack of a better term. They were short and oddly less pliable than I would have expected, instead, they were kind of rigid and cartilaginous, and reminded me in an unpleasant way of a shark, at least once I made the connection in my head to something like cartilage. Way to go, brain, I admonished the lump of grey matter in my head.

I'd always disliked sharks, ever since I saw Jaws as a child. I abhorred the idea of open water. I mean sure, I'd swam across a lake before, a small lake, but the whole time a tiny little part of my brain kind of whispered, you don't know what's exactly down there. It could be anything. Sharks. Snapping turtles. Eels. Abnormally large snakes. The entire works.

No. Even if I could see some kind of land, the water was not the way to go. Instead, I had to go into the forest, or try to hug the coastline… That seemed like a better idea. If there was civilization it was far more likely that there would be some kind of civilization along the coast rather than inland. At the same time, I really had no idea where I was, when I was, or even whether there was any civilization at all.
At the same time, I didn't even really know whether I wanted to find civilization. If it was humans, would they have even ever seen an Asari? If it was Asari, what would they do with a blue waif who walked off the beach and didn't even speak a smidgen of whatever tongue Asari spoke? I mean, I suppose they'd have that auto-translator that omni-tools had. I didn't have an Omni-tool, I thought idly, trailing my hand up the inner side of my wrist, at least not any I could actually feel or see. While I might not want to find civilization it was something that needed to be done, all the same. It wasn't like I could expect to forage and drink saltwater.

I stepped over a low-hanging root onto the wet sand on the other side as the tide poured into the little inlet. At least with the trees I didn't need to worry about high tide. I could just climb one of them. It was a little disgusting to contemplate but I probably could just dig my hands into their flesh to climb. I felt a little sick contemplating it. Maybe I could even carve myself a little hole and live like some kind of sci-fi Ada Blackjack or Robinson Crusoe.

I clambered over a root that was just a little too tall to easily hop over, trying to ignore the way my toes dug into the flesh of the purplish tree just from trying to crawl over, leaving nasty little yellow streaks against my feet. Thankfully I had the black water to clean them in.

I started to look at the world. To really look at it. What did I know? The trees were purple and vaguely fungus-like. They bled a kind of yellow sap. The beach was normal white sand. The water was dark, almost black. There was really two options I could think of, first, I was on some horrific science fiction world in my universe, the second, I was in some just as horrific science fiction world in the world of Mass Effect. I definitely wasn't on Earth, unless Mass Effect universe had really taken a dramatic change toward the fungal. I also wasn't on Thessia… unless this was primordial Thessia.

Thessia was all smooth lines and almost haloish Covenant architecture but in silvers and blues, I didn't really remember wild flora and fauna at all. At least not in the form of a giant mushroom forest. That left some other planet, which was a far more important thing to worry about than whether or not I was in a fictional world, a parallel universe, or neither.

I looked up at the sky, beneath the trees I was partially shaded, only occasional flashes of sunlight piercing the canopy of purplish leaves. From below the leaves had the same kind of almost blueish fluorescent veins and patterns running over them. A thought occurred to me and I paused in the act of stepping under another root before letting out another overly and oddly melodic sigh.

It probably would be prudent to actually see what the sun looked like, wouldn't it? My lips stretched into a grimace as I eyed the closest tree with a distrustful gaze. Maybe I could find something else, anything else to climb? My eyes darted sideways, and I thought, or I could always swim out into that black water and see if I could see the sun?

I shuddered, a deep full-body shudder. Haha, no. Climbing it would have to be. I steeled myself for a moment before half-jumped forward onto a protruding root about a foot off the ground, I teetered for a moment on the oddly spongy support and then leaned forward, pressing my fingers against the trunk and reaching out with my right hand toward a twisting not-branch at the level of my breasts. It felt like it would give if I put any weight on it.

Blegh. I thought and with an undignified grunt heaved myself onto it, my violet nails in my other hand scrabbling at the trunk. The branch started to deform, twisting like it was foam and I half-scrabbled, half-climbed toward the next branch, trying to angle my toes toward the junction of branch and trunk where, theoretically, the branch would just have a little more internal structure.

My heart was hammering like a jackhammer against my ribs by the time I finally heaved myself up onto a thicker branch that didn't immediately give way, high enough that I could maybe see the sun. I clenched my thighs around the branch, to try and keep myself from sliding. My fingers gouged into the branch and I focused a moment on slowing my breath before casting my gaze up at the sky.

Let me see, a single solitary sun, a pale orange radiance. I pulled my eyes away, blinking away the momentary sunspots that even that quick glance was enough to burn into my retinas. Not my brightest moment, but how else was I supposed to see what the sun looked like. I was sure that there was better ways I might think of when I was home clear, but for now it was enough. It looked more orange than my normal Earth sun, but honestly, for all my deliberation, I couldn't even really tell.

It could be Earth's sun, or not.

What a heaping fat waste of my effort, I snarled in the privacy of my own mind, looking down with trepidation at the climb down. I could maybe half jump to that branch, I thought, the gnarly-looking one, and then half slide down to the next. Then I'd be low enough to jump to the sand.

Or… I could use biotics… the thought came almost unbidden, spurred on, no doubt, by the sight of my blue hands in my field of view. I thought for a moment. How did biotics even really work? Like, really? It was space magic. All Asari had biotics, they were funny like that. But was I even a real Asari or just an imitation.

I shook my head.

"What I don't need," I spoke out loud, "Is some kind of species identity crisis."

Could I just will my mass away and float to the ground like a feather? But the weight wasn't really determined by mass so I wouldn't float per se, I would just land more softly? Physics, or something. Cursed by knowledge, which was not helpful for figuring out how biotics worked because if they were anything like the game, I knew it was possible to float things, things which included people.

But how? That was the question. Could I just will it? I slid down the branch, half-falling to another which broke my fall and then onto another. If these had been real branches I never would even have attempted this, in my state they would have scratched my skin something really fierce. With these branches, and their texture, it was more like falling onto a foam branch, as in, really weird. I almost worried I'd get a rugburn or something, but they seemed organically smooth rather than textured like that and I could kind of slide...

I slammed into the next branch and then landed in the sand a moment later, almost stumbling forward into another tree head first before I found my footing.

I looked back at the water, it was a little further, I estimated I was about two or three layers of trees from the shore. I could plainly see the edge of the forest when I was above. It wouldn't be that hard to keep climbing the trees if I ventured further in, I supposed. I clenched and unclenched my toes in the sand, staring out at the black water still visible from in between the tree trunks.

Still, I didn't know what was in the water, if anything, but I couldn't see into it. There could be anything under that water and I would never know. I frowned minutely, thinking, perhaps I should keep a little more distance.

I stepped away, staying under the underboughs of the trees, keeping the black water to my left visible in between the tree trunks. At least there wasn't any real underbrush, there was some little dandelion-like flowers in white and pink that peeked out from near where the roots entered the sand, but they didn't look edible. I thought for a moment about grabbing one and checking–who knows how long I would be stuck–but decided not to at the last moment.

Maybe I'd try to find something actually edible looking, like a fruit, or something. I stopped for an instant to glance toward the water again, and that was the only reason I heard it. I immediately stiffened, some long dormant prey instinct freezing me in place as I heard the only sound I'd heard but the wind and waves and my own voice since I arrived on this worldscape.

It was a low scraping sound, almost too low to hear, if I had been moving I wouldn't have even noticed it. It sounded again almost rhythmically. My heart started to build up its tempo, and I could feel a tension seeming to coil around my chest like a vise, pressing down on my body. I inhaled a strangled hiss of air as I heard another scrape, followed by a wet sounding squelch from behind me. Why hadn't I thought about what would be on land?

Slowly, ever so slowly, I twisted at the waist to look behind, back toward where I had come clambering over tree roots. My eyes, for a moment, skittered over the purple trees and blue luminescence, and green spider limbs-

Green spider limbs?

Now it was my thoughts that skittered to gibber in the corner as I froze, one foot up on a purple tree root, the other planted on the white sand.

There were too many legs and it was way too large to move that silently. It's head was small compared to it's gargantuan body but I knew what this thing was. I'd seen it in a movie I'd watched almost religiously as a child. It had six long legs that ended in chitinous spikes, it's mouth was full of needles, and it's eyes, numerous eyes, at least four, were a dull yellow, slit like a snake.

I saw it and it clearly saw me, my pale blue ass just standing out in the open like a total idiot. Its tiny little head, which was really quite large, just its body was so so much bigger, cocked to the side, as the rest of the creature almost seemed to rear back in surprise.

An Acklay. What the fuck.

For a moment we both seemed frozen in place by some inexplicable will, holding is in a state of suspended motion. I swallowed, my throat felt dry as ash.

It shrieked, and shriek was really the right word for the noise. It was one thing to hear it through a screen, it was another to feel it in your ear-bones, sending them ringing. It darted forward, long limbs stabbing into the purple foam-trees, sending splurts of yellow sap up to paint its long forelimbs yellow.

A jolt like lightning fired down my nerves, setting them afire. My heart was suddenly clamoring in my ears and I burst into a sort of primal motion. My toes dug into the foam of the root I was crawling over and I leaped away, one foot careening off the sand, sending it flying behind me as I jumped for another root.

I heard the sound of tearing flesh behind me and the shrill resonating, almost reverbing screech of the Acklay behind me. An Acklay. Where the hell was I?

This wasn't Mass Effect, I thought with dawning horror as I slid under a branch, my feet struggling for purchase. The Acklay made a weird gurgling call behind me that definitely sounded far too close. I couldn't risk a moment to look. Just step. Step. Step.

Slide.

Up and over. Again. And Again. Again.

Time seemed to blur. I had a vague sensation of a green claw narrowly missing me, of diving below purple roots,

I lost track of how many roots I vaulted over. I wanted to climb but I didn't that would help at all.

My breath left my body in great heaving gasps.

My sides, both my right and left, and up my back along my spine were sending sharp jolts of pain up my back, like a runner's stitch. Wasn't adrenaline supposed to keep that from hurting in a life-or-death situation? I heaved another breath, it sounded like a death rattle.

I put a hand out as I stumbled once, twice, almost falling to my knees.

My pulse felt like it was pounding against the back of my skull, and my lungs didn't feel like they had enough air. Just another step, had to take another.

I stilled, barely able to hear anything over the roaring of my own pulse. There was no crashing sound behind me, no alien calls. Instead, the purple jungle was still and silent again, save for the sounds of my ragged heaving breathes.

I turned in a short circle, my heel, which smarted something horrid, sending a sharp pain as I did so. No, nothing. I leaned against the tree.

Why was there an Acklay? I thought, and to my mind, the thought seemed almost delirious with panic. Why?

I put my head against the tree and focused on breathing, wincing slightly as the pain started to radiate down from my shoulder. I must've hit it against something, I mused sourly as more and more rationality slipped back into my mind. I raised a finger to my shoulder, wincing again as it came back wet, sap, or blood–

I had another mini existential crisis as I leaned against the purple tree and discovered that my gloriously human blood was now a shade of very not-human pinkish purple. I think I would have maybe broken down then and there and just wailed until a giant freaking Acklay put me out of my misery. Instead, I had to woman up and act like an adult.

I focused on my breathing again, probing the deep scratch in my arm, it wasn't bleeding too badly, it was pretty shallow. My thoughts immediately fixated on the worst-case scenario and images of cauterization danced in my mind eye. Could I even make a fire?

I looked away from the tree, taking in the clearing more closely. The ground wasn't sand anymore, it was more mossy, and the trees were less purple and more bubblegum pink. Great, I thought, just what I wanted, bubblegum trees. And a big ol' rock, right smack dab in the far end of the clearing, a kind of nasty granite-looking rock.

I staggered back to my feet, sending a silent blessing to whatever the Asari believed in. Goddess Athame or something, but, my semi-hysterical mind could not help but note, that she was just an AI the entire time. She couldn't really help me here. I guess only the big 'G' God could.

It took what felt like an entire moment of staring before I registered that what looked like a rock, crusted over with roots was actually metal.

A tarnished silvery metal, blackened with age and stretching up into the sky like an untended ancient monolith.

And at the monolith's base, half covered by roots, there was a square clearly outlined in the ancient metal, a square about as wide as two or three men walking abreast, and a little triangle where the middle one would stand.

It was a freaking door.

Well, I found my civilization, and it looked like they'd all gone out fishing a long time ago, given the state of the door.

Still, I had no choice.

Distantly, I could almost imagine I could hear the Acklay still shrieking somewhere behind me. It felt like standing on the threshold of Moria, and I didn't quite know why it burned some kind of quiet menace into my mind.

It was a monolith. Nothing more.

Nothing more.
 
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Felucia? Couldn't think about another planet like this.
Acklay... his letting her go is suspicious
 
I definitely like how alien you've made the asari feel even before getting into the biotics. For a bit I wondered if the strange colours. I'm still half-wondering if the strange colours are just how her new eyes see colour, but Felucia itself is a fairly colourful place.
 
I definitely like how alien you've made the asari feel even before getting into the biotics. For a bit I wondered if the strange colours. I'm still half-wondering if the strange colours are just how her new eyes see colour, but Felucia itself is a fairly colourful place.

Thanks. I try to avoid the idea that fantasy/sci-fi species are basically human with different color or head palletes. Plus, it's interesting to think of how they might be superficially similar but actually completely alien.

Apparently they were originally designed to be aquatic-adjacent.

wonder if thats still a thing here?

Most of the aquatic stuff I think is fanon, but I may include facets of it I like. Superficially it does make sense based on appearance for the Asari to be at the very least at home in the water.
 
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Atrium

Urgency gnawed at my mind, the same creeping foreboding that whispered doom when I looked upon the door, also whispered exactly what would happen if I remained paralyzed by indecision. My shoulder ached something fierce, the stab of pain forcing me from entering a mental fugue. The Acklay was out there, I appeared to have outran it for now, but I would be a fool if I thought it wouldn't be on me as soon as it could.

I glanced at my fingers, at the pink-purple blood on them. And that wasn't even taking into account other things that could smell blood, that might come crawling if I stayed put for too long. My eyes darted around the clearing again, searching for a stick, maybe, or a rock, or anything I could use as a weapon, but there was nothing. The sticks were almost literally foam, and there were no rocks, just a pale whitish-green moss with the texture of slick seaweed. Maybe there were rocks underneath it, I supposed, but there was no way to check short of starting at a corner of the clearing and peeling back the moss, which was an insane idea for what amounted to an uncertain reward.

What even would a rock do against an Acklay? That thing's claws were probably bigger around than my torso. I shuddered, again, lurching away from the tree and toward the door. I'd already spared enough time to frightened indecision.

I could feel that my life was at a precipice. This wasn't a video game where I got to redo bad decisions. Where I could reload save files when I made a mistake. This was fully and tangibly real. I lurched forward, crossing the clearing with an unsteady gait. The moss was soft under my feet, kind of like sheet moss, but the texture wasn't quite the same, it felt damp without leaving moisture on my feet.

The monolith itself extended upward like it was a sword that had been thrust into the ground, a silvery metal, blackened by tarnish, parts of it, lines really, appearing to be almost slate-grey, radiating outward in thin lines from the door and curving around the structure. The door itself was heavy, looking more like a blast door than anything else. It looked like it was solid steel through and through. I stepped up close, raising a hand to touch against the door. It was cold to my touch, none of the heat of the sun having seeped into the structure's surface. I pressed up against it, raising up on my tip-toes to peer into the tiny triangular window. That did something weird with the muscles in my legs, it wasn't uncomfortable per se, it was just unusual, instead of feeling it in my ankles, some muscle up near my knee shifted. I resolutely ignored the sensation, instead, focusing on the door.

Oof, I mentally said in the silence of my mind a second later. I inhaled, thinking for a long moment, before letting all the air out in a strained exhale. The glass itself looked thick too, and I highly doubted that even if I broke it, even if I managed to find something strong enough that a door handle or lock would be conveniently within my arm's reach on the other side. I shifted a little, looking at the window from the side, I would probably estimate the door was about three, maybe four inches think, one in a half to two inches on each side of the glass. It was hard to tell for sure, the distortion from the glass was too strong. It didn't have hinges on the outside, and the seam between the door and wall was thin, so thin that I could only just slide my fingernails into the space between the enormous overcompensating door and the left doorjamb. Obviously, there was no way I would be able to pry the door open, even if I had a crowbar or pickaxe, or anything really.

Perfect for keeping out roaming murderously minded Acklays. Also perfect for keeping out hobo Asari that murderous Acklays had a keen desire to eat. I stepped back, my gaze carefully scrutinizing the door again, before I spared a glance back at the rest of the little glade. Still all quiet, but the sun was noticeably shifted from its position directly overhead. Now it was a little to the position I decided to dub west, for lack of a better position.

Not good news in the slightest, I had absolutely zero desire to stick around out in the open after night fell, and whatever was in this monolith was certainly a better choice than whatever was out here. But, that, of course, left actually getting inside.

I eyed the roots tangled around the door. It was odd to me, I slowly considered, that there would be no handle or button or even an intercom thing on this side of the door. This door, while clearly old and decrepit, was obviously built with some knowledge of modern metallurgy and glassworks, as evidenced by the thick glass window. Ergo, it also followed that maybe there was some external mechanism I could use to open the door. If I was an astronaut or frontierswoman on some alien as heck planet I would definitely want to be able to open the door if I accidentally locked myself out.

I could remove the roots? I mentally flipped a coin, which was stupid because there was really no randomness in my choice, I probably just thought left looked better subconsciously. I had to take several steps to even reach the edge of the door, where the roots started to encroach. Here, some of the moss crawled up the side of the wall, almost at the level of my shoulders and in a few places up to my head, there was none on the door but on the side it was pretty rooted. They were almost unbearably flesh-textured in my hands, and I braced myself with one foot against the wall and pulled. The entire side of the roots stretched like taffy, leaving yellow slime mold-like residue on the side of the metal, but it did peel away nicely, not tearing like I half expected.

Jackpot! There was an instrument panel of some kind. It was a dull gunmetal gray, absolutely covered by moss, but there was a little red and green light flashing dully beneath all the moss and roots. I grabbed the moss with my hands and pulled, the pieces immediately in my fingers broke off, leaving most of the sheet moss behind, like I was trying to uproot blades of grass.

I leaned forward, really digging my nails into the moss until I hit metal, and then pulled. It didn't pull nicely, instead, it just shredded in my hands, covering them in a pale blue chlorophyll. Honestly, it was pretty gross, but it was just a plant, and little by little I revealed what looked like a microphone aperture with two pale grey buttons next to it. Below that there was a cluster of square-shaped buttons, made of metal and a round reddish-looking circle.

I made to wipe my hands on my thighs, and stopped for a moment in silent contemplation before kneeling down and wiping my hands free of the chlorophyll on the moss bed beneath my feet. Not that it made too much of a difference, because the buttons were pretty nasty looking themselves. I stepped forward, peering at the controls carefully before with a mental shrug I decided to just go for it.

I hit the first button near the intercom, pressing it down. It depressed with a click and I leaned close.

"Hello?" I said, hesitating for a moment at the alien sound of my own voice.

"Hello?" I repeated, "Um, is anyone there? Hello?"

I paused. My fingers on the button before I considered whether maybe it was only one-way or something and I'd need to release the transmit button. Nothing but silence. I breathed in, steeling my nerves again, and thumbed the other button, repeating my message.

"Hello, hello, anyone there?" Still nothing. Silent as a tomb. I grimaced at that cheery thought and spared a quick glance up at the monolith. It could be some kind of science fiction Mass Effect tomb, I supposed… or a tomb in Star Wars, given that Acklay.

I leaned away from the instrument panel and considered it carefully again. Would I have to hit the lower buttons in sequence or something? How many combinations would I have to try? An errant thought zipped through my mind and I snorted.

It wouldn't be that simple, would it? Maybe I should just press the red button? I eyed it suspiciously, sparing a quick glance back toward the clearing. At this point I half expected that it would manage to sneak up on me, I couldn't really rely on being able to hear it coming. What I was worried about was that the giant red conspicuous button was just an alarm, and what I did not want was hitting an alarm in a forest with giant woman-eating bugs from Star Wars. Here, come eat me! Yeah, dinner bells for the monsters.

I hit the button with two fingers, and it clicked down, turning from a dull red to a bright red. I heard a hydraulic thump and then a loud noise blared right next to my ear and I half-stumbled backward, my heart jumped in my chest like I'd just been hit with an electric shock. Or maybe a cattle prod, at least the way my heart took it.

The noise was gibberish, but it was a voice, saying something that sounded like it maybe could be words. Did that mean someone was here, or was that just an automated message? The door made a deep clunking sound, enough that I could feel it under my feet, through the moss, before slowly sliding upward. I just stood there and watched until it slowly progressed its ascent. I spared a glance around me for any lurking Acklays and then quickly stooped under the door the moment it was high enough that I could slip underneath it. For an instant it was dark, and the sudden shift from bright sun to pure shadow made it difficult to see for a long instant. I blinked slowly, once, twice, and by the second blink, I could sort of make out rougher details. It was a gray room, completely empty except for a metal grate on the floor, which was absolutely freezing to my bare feet, like ice water cold. I shifted on my feet, trying to minimize my time on the grate, to stand on the parts in between the grates, which were marginally less cold There was no moss or roots inside, which was probably a good sign.

There was another instrument panel inside, well actually, there were two. One near the door I just entered, and another near a second giant overcompensating blast door. I glanced backward, squinting against the sun before I stepped to the side and slammed the red button next to the door I just entered with my first. The same gibberish almost startled me again-

The door groaned and then with another pneumatic hiss dramatically started to lower. I blinked again as total darkness began to descend on the room. Evidentially whoever made this didn't believe in lights.

I focused. I could just make out the other instrument panel in the gloom. It had another tiny blinking red and green light next to its intercom thing. Should I wait, I thought, there had been a voice, and I had no idea what it said. On the other hand, the door seemed to be opened and closed by the red button, so if there was someone inside, I hopefully hadn't offended them too much with either my alien gibberish or attire, or current lack of attire. Hell of a first impression.

I slowly made my way across the room, shivering slightly from the cold. It was the same instrument panel as before, and with the briefest moment of hesitation, I extended a finger again and gently depressed the button, watching it carefully as it shifted to bright red.

Same song and dance. The door groaned and then started upward slowly. I didn't duck underneath this one the moment I could. That same lingering sense of foreboding made my heart jitter in my chest. I could feel the coiled tension in my arms, and the ache of my scrape in my shoulder. And my feet were cold, but that didn't really count.

The interior was dim, much the same as the little airlock I was just in, but the floor wasn't grating so I stepped forward, my eyes taking in as much as I could. There was a little anteroom, and then stone steps leading downward. Soft brown lines were painted on the side of the walls. I stepped forward. There was an instrument panel to my left but it almost certainly controlled just the door, at least if I was considering the obvious symmetry with the other door's controls.

The moment my foot hit the first step on my descent, soft but incredibly dim white lights flickered near the floor, lighting my path down. The steps themselves looked worn and aged, the kind of steps you see where hundreds of thousands of people walk down them every year, eroded enough in the middle that their texture was smooth.

Well, I placed one hand on the wall and slowly descended, my bare feet echoing slightly in the silence. The lights did not hum like I half expected, instead, the entire place was as silent as a tomb. The wall was about as cool as the grates, but the vaguely tribal brown paint made it seem warmer, less foreboding.

Almost abruptly the stairs terminated, and I was met with a flash of warm damp air and then I was stepping back onto what felt like concrete but slightly damp beneath my feet. I could hear rushing water and in a moment I realized just how parched I was. I stepped forward a little more eagerly, even as the whisper of danger continued to slowly twist in the back of my mind.

I stepped forward, around the corner at the base of the stairs and stopped, a short shocked little gasp of wonder leaving my throat unwittingly.

It was a miniature oasis, broad pillars with the width of grand sequoias stretching toward the ceiling, a ceiling that had to be level with the ground outside. But the sheer green was a shock. Green ferns. Green vines. Green moss. Green bushes. Green, but sterile. Little white flowers on the bushes but no insects. No bird song. Just a still silence and the steady rush of water from somewhere.

I slowly stepped into the room, plants grew in between the pillars in massive stone planters, which were probably about as deep as I was tall, and the vines and plants had grown upward, tangling in the pillars around me. Above me was a pale white light that seemed to suffuse the entire ceiling, but it was not the sky. There was a fountain in the middle of the room, positively overgrown with moss, which leached out from it and across the floor. But the fountain itself was running and the sound of water was like a siren song.

It was for that reason I hesitated, despite my desire. This place was odd. First, waking up in some kind of demon forest, and now an oasis arboretum? Still, I couldn't see anything immediately. I crept forward, my head on a swivel. There were other rooms off to the side, dark passageways lit by the same dim floor-level lights.

The water in the fountain was clear, but still vaguely darker than it should be. At this point I didn't really care that much beyond the fact that it was water. I cupped my hand in the water, the residue from the chlorophyll washing away, pulled down by some sort of current. I restrained the urge to just dunk my head in like some sort of barbarian no matter how attractive an idea it seemed and slowly brought my lips to my cupped hand.

Water.

Divine.

I gorged myself on the water like a glutton, feeling the cold seep down my throat and into my stomach. I let out a sigh a moment later and sat back, leaning against the edge of the fountain's pool. I felt a little like a child who had stumbled into some fae's palace, except for the fact everything was sci-fi.

Something behind me echoed, metal on stone, and I lurched to my feet, half spinning, my gaze spinning wildly. My heart lurched in my chest, and the cold in my stomach from the water dissipated instantly.

Where?

What?

There was a figure that had just emerged from one of the darkened hallways, moving with an odd gait and it sent real shivers down my spine. It moved wrong, slowly clomping across the room. Like a puppet on strings. To beady blue mechanical eyes stared at me and I could hear my heart stutter.

It was a dull tundora grey, unmistakably humanoid with claw-like hands, each with three fingers. It's limbs were long and thin, without the space for it to possibly be a suit of some kind, the same with its torso, which was split into two halves, and its head was split into four parts with a round circle in the middle, like a skull-plate.

It was a droid. Like a Star Wars kind of droid. A chill ran down my back, not from fear or horror, but from recognition. There was a dull red symbol on its chest. A bird rising into the air, and a sword, the hilt gleaming like a star in between its spread wings, all encased in a circle. I wasn't in Mass Effect? My thoughts seemed slow, to be moving a little too sluggishly as if my brain was struggling to process exactly what it was seeing.

The droid continued to advance, slowing as I noticed it. I remained rooted to my spot, my heart echoing in my head.

A noise came from the droid.

Gibberish without meaning.

I wasn't in Mass Effect was I? I though to myself with a sudden certainty. The droid. The Acklay. The horrible-looking planet. This whole facility. The door. the blast door, now that I was thinking about it. All of it just screamed one thing–

And the symbol only cemented it.

I was in Star Wars.
 
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