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Gohan the God of life
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"It's time for you to die!" cell roared as he pumped more energy into his attack.
Gohan felt his entire body become numb to his world as time seemed to stop around him.
"Gohan!" his father yelled concerned as did everyone else Vegeta, however, said nothing but clenching his fist meant that he had felt something.
Gohan's previous life had flashed before his eyes. He had been reborn ncr as Baldur the god of life and light from Norse mythology to a guy who viewed his life as an...anime? Like cartoons?
If he was normal he would probably scoff at such a thing as reincarnation, but normal isn't really who he was, heh, his father was a Freaking Alien!
"W-what is this?"Cell was shocked he was for sure he thought that Gohan was finished How did he get this much power
The rage Gohan had felt when he saw what he had gone through in his previous lives made his power increase.
The world was shaking buildings crumbling glass shattering the waves were crashing wildly
"G-Gohan!?" Goku was shocked he knew his son had strong power he knew that this wasn't all he had but he never knew this much and the rahad felt it was insane.
Gohan gave a loud roar as another shock wave occurred knocking all of the fighters unconscious before the area was blinded by golden light once the light died down cell was gone in his place was a huge crater the size of a football field.
"Damn you boy!! Cell hollered before. A large wormhole appeared.
once the light died down. A huge wormhole stood swirling behind him Gohan panted heavily as he was even bulkier than before his golden hair stretched to his ankles ad his eyebrows were no longer in existence he had a shocked look on his face before he passed out as the strain was too much
GOHAN!!!' Goku screamed horrified as the wormhole began to suck him in.
I have to go save him!"
"Goku no!" king Kai shouted, "it's against the ancient laws."
"Forget that" Goku snarled "my son needs my help!"
and with that, he vanished but he was too late the wormhole has already signed him in and closed
No!" Goku roared as he claimed into the ground "damn it it wasn't supposed to be like this" he mourned as punched the ground in anguish.
Dc universe - New York city random forest
A pair of eyes slowly fluttered open
"ugh, where am I?"
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Dc/ si start before the invasion when the justice league is formed location
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Gohan felt his entire body become numb to his world as time seemed to stop around him.
"Gohan!" his father yelled concerned as did everyone else Vegeta, however, said nothing but clenching his fist meant that he had felt something.
Gohan's previous life had flashed before his eyes. He had been reborn ncr as Baldur the god of life and light from Norse mythology to a guy who viewed his life as an...anime? Like cartoons?
If he was normal he would probably scoff at such a thing as reincarnation, but normal isn't really who he was, heh, his father was a Freaking Alien!
"W-what is this?"Cell was shocked he was for sure he thought that Gohan was finished How did he get this much power
The rage Gohan had felt when he saw what he had gone through in his previous lives made his power increase.
The world was shaking buildings crumbling glass shattering the waves were crashing wildly
"G-Gohan!?" Goku was shocked he knew his son had strong power he knew that this wasn't all he had but he never knew this much and the rahad felt it was insane.
Gohan gave a loud roar as another shock wave occurred knocking all of the fighters unconscious before the area was blinded by golden light once the light died down cell was gone in his place was a huge crater the size of a football field.
"Damn you boy!! Cell hollered before. A large wormhole appeared.
once the light died down. A huge wormhole stood swirling behind him Gohan panted heavily as he was even bulkier than before his golden hair stretched to his ankles ad his eyebrows were no longer in existence he had a shocked look on his face before he passed out as the strain was too much
GOHAN!!!' Goku screamed horrified as the wormhole began to suck him in.
I have to go save him!"
"Goku no!" king Kai shouted, "it's against the ancient laws."
"Forget that" Goku snarled "my son needs my help!"
and with that, he vanished but he was too late the wormhole has already signed him in and closed
No!" Goku roared as he claimed into the ground "damn it it wasn't supposed to be like this" he mourned as punched the ground in anguish.
Dc universe - New York city random forest
A pair of eyes slowly fluttered open
"ugh, where am I?"
end chapter
How did you like it?
Dc/ si start before the invasion when the justice league is formed location
Bought eyed try something new.
I Got a lot of errors, sorry about that My phone is acting up. Claimed is slammed and Ncr is actually mcu baldot I'm making Baldor Thors older brother in the mcu. How did ya like it.
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It's a bit too short to really judge, but there are a few points I'd like to raise.
First mixing universes well gets more difficult the more universes ypu add so I'd suggest dropping either Marvel or DC given that they have a complex conflicting lore. Also are you basing the fic in DB? why was Gohan reincarnated as Balder without actually dying and being reborn?
the story is also a bit confusing in the sequence of events(Cell says damn you after vanishing for example), but the main problem is show, don't tell. that is to say that you tell us that a lot of things happen in a short interval of time, but there are no descriptions and few explanation about what is happening
First mixing universes well gets more difficult the more universes ypu add so I'd suggest dropping either Marvel or DC given that they have a complex conflicting lore. Also are you basing the fic in DB? why was Gohan reincarnated as Balder without actually dying and being reborn?
the story is also a bit confusing in the sequence of events(Cell says damn you after vanishing for example), but the main problem is show, don't tell. that is to say that you tell us that a lot of things happen in a short interval of time, but there are no descriptions and few explanation about what is happening
I think the mc was first born as Baldur then a guy that knows our world to finally being born as Gohan and mixing universe will be hard like you said but the dragon Ball part will be gone cause Gohan will be going to another universe not being reborn in another,but anyways hope for the mc to kick ass and get girls