Girl's Frontline: Wicked Animandum


This won't ever get finished. I can't fix the mouth or general face into a slight frown or just neutral look and, much worse when I tried, I can't into eyes at all.

*Shrug*

Nonetheless... Also the hair is still fucked up, you just can't see it unless you zoom in.

Edit: ... Mostly. Damn you left side bangs.
Was this your attempt at a Veresk alter? Cause dang it's a nice concept XD

I can see the tiny bit of shade of lilac that remains in her hair, which I think only looks good. But yeah, it doesn't really have much effect when everything else - including her smile - remains the same. Maybe I could ask the artist to make that little edit, but I'd rather not bother him about such small things, certainly wouldn't want to pay for something this small. But just out of curiosity, what else did you plan to change? You mentioned her eyes. Cause I've got a buddy who's pretty experienced in photoshoping art like this - did a lot of stuff for me in the past, including the lilac hair Hunter - and he might be able to finish it, if you'd like.

Either way, your effort is commendable. Come here, lemme give you a headpat ^^

Side note: the victory animation for Veresk is being worked on, and it's looking pretty amazing so far. I'm sharing the work-in-progress in the discord server for anyone who'd want to see ^^
 
Grey hair and gold eyes seems to be what happens when a doll is hit by the virus and turns to SF going by M16 and the UMP twins (not 9).

Or at least I think it happened with those two.
I believe it only happened to M16 so far? Anyway. White hair, yellow eyes and a frown/neutral face. Would give a very different vibe from the usual pervert smuglord that is Veresk. I'll see what can be done ^^
 
I believe it only happened to M16 so far? Anyway. White hair, yellow eyes and a frown/neutral face. Would give a very different vibe from the usual pervert smuglord that is Veresk. I'll see what can be done ^^
Maybe? 45 and 40's hair and eyes could be called grey and yellow respectively without much room to argue. I thought they were solidly brown-haired, but they really aren't.

The face could be up for debate though. Frown/neutral cause she's unhappy with leaving Griffin was my thought, but a slightly more sharp/aggresive smirk fits as well?

A full blown grin, just the smallest touches of mania from how wide it is.

Whatever fits best.
 
SF Veresk
Maybe? 45 and 40's hair and eyes could be called grey and yellow respectively without much room to argue. I thought they were solidly brown-haired, but they really aren't.

The face could be up for debate though. Frown/neutral cause she's unhappy with leaving Griffin was my thought, but a slightly more sharp/aggresive smirk fits as well?

A full blown grin, just the smallest touches of mania from how wide it is.

Whatever fits best.
Asketh, and thou shalt receiveth... or something...
 
So, I don't know if it might matter to whoever's drawing the chibi, but Intruder's skill info just came out on the CN preview.

She can summon Doggo swarm as reinforcements for another echelon on the field in their next battle. :D

Hope no one's upset I bumped the thread back up for this? Wasn't sure whether to post here or on Lurk's profile page.
 
So, I don't know if it might matter to whoever's drawing the chibi, but Intruder's skill info just came out on the CN preview.

She can summon Doggo swarm as reinforcements for another echelon on the field in their next battle. :D

Hope no one's upset I bumped the thread back up for this? Wasn't sure whether to post here or on Lurk's profile page.
It's fine, I appreciate any and all attention brought to the thread. It's overdue for an update anyway ^^'

As for the chibi animation, it's being worked on and the progress is amazing so far, but there's still lots to do. It kinda blew out of proportions and is becoming bigger than I could've imagined, so expected something amazing ^^

And yes, it involves a doggo.

Gotta have a doggo.
 
It's fine, I appreciate any and all attention brought to the thread. It's overdue for an update anyway ^^'

As for the chibi animation, it's being worked on and the progress is amazing so far, but there's still lots to do. It kinda blew out of proportions and is becoming bigger than I could've imagined, so expected something amazing ^^

And yes, it involves a doggo.

Gotta have a doggo.
Ah, let me halp some more then.

Knight Versek riding atop her noble steed, waving her flag to rally the troops, and leading a stampede of doggo cavalry across the screen at the enemy.

:3
 
Ah, let me halp some more then.

Knight Versek riding atop her noble steed, waving her flag to rally the troops, and leading a stampede of doggo cavalry across the screen at the enemy.

:3
That... might actually be rather simple. Just requires one animation cycle of V riding the dinergate, then copypaste a bunch of dinergates following her. I'll definitely put it into consideration ^^

Though, in the animation currently being worked on, she's standing on top of the doggo. You know, height advantage :3

V and doggo, alone they smol, but together they tol.
 
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Been a while, hasn't it? No real excuse for the delay this time, just didn't feel like it until now, and been thinking of revising the other thing I'm writing (it may have been a little too thicc...). But I owe you a post after long periods of inactivity, so here it is. Enjoy the lovely banter, and buli the snek plenty, will ya?~
Adhoc vote count started by Lurkman on May 13, 2020 at 1:59 PM, finished with 22 posts and 7 votes.
 
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Chapter 70
You nod to Tiss, taking the flare gun. The ringleader has already fought you and perhaps already has some idea of how you operate, but the secret weapon might be much more difficult for her to counter. At least until you get back.

Although it hurts your soul to run off from your second date with the snake, it's just a quick detour to set up the fireworks. Ots-12 uses hand signs to signal to you when to go. 3… 2… 1… Go! Just as you sprint off, she lays down suppressive fire upon the enemy. Bullets fly around you, but none are accurate enough because of the threat of suppression. Even the twin machinegun fire of Ouroboros seemed more off than usual. You finally reach the corner and turn. You were out of harm's way for now.

Next step was to find the elevator shaft. Good thing you memorized a large part of this floor already. You met no resistance along the way, and the old sliding doors were just as open as you've left them. You head inside the cabin and look up through the escape hatch. It looked like a bottomless dark pit, only going up. Two thick cables extended into the darkness, which the T-dolls would use to get down most likely. You're not sure whether those rusty old cables will hold the heavier of your companions, but it's the fastest way down that doesn't involve broken joints… not certainly at least.

You look at the flare gun in your hand. A simple model, loaded with a single flare, but it's not like you'll miss. There's a Griffin insignia on the side, giving the owner authority for this piece of equipment. You wonder if Tiss will let you keep it…

Aiming upwards and pulling the trigger, you shot the bright ball of crimson fire up the elevator shaft, its bright light banishing the darkness. It reached higher and higher, making you wonder if it might even reach the ceiling. It almost looked like a star at its highest, brightest point, surely getting the attention of someone. You stuck around even after it's been extinguished, waiting for some sign that it worked. You wait a while, only silence returning to you. Until…

"Tiss? Does this have anything to do with the gunfire we're hearing?!"

You hear the echoing voice of Groza, reaching from who knows which floor all the way down to you. Quickly you respond, informing her of the situation with the previously thought-to-be dead ringleader and your current predicament. You can be witty later.

"This is unfortunate… change of plans! We're coming down! You and Tiss hold out until then!"

Sure, easier said than done. But help is on its way at least. Without having to wait for them to get down, you turn back to the hallway and head back to Tiss. You can still hear the gunfire, so she must be still holding her own. But for how much longer you cannot say, which is why you hurry after her. Surely your allies won't be far behind for long.

After a while of running you return to the main entrance where Ouroboros had the two of you pinned down. The reception desk was in shambles, ufit to hide anyone's presence any longer. You found Tiss not behind this bullet riddled obstruction, but behind a pillar that didn't offer much maneuverability, but at least it was thick enough to stop fire from cheating its way through to her. There were some tears on her clothes, likely from near misses. She's no SMG or handgun after all, she's only as good at evading as she is at offense. From behind a corner, you whistle at her. She notices you as she reloads, and you see the twinkle in her eye even through the dusty air.

From your current position you cannot do much, too much obstruction between you and the enemy. Best way to support her is to get back into the thick of it. She nods, readying her rifle. You'll both be firing to suppress Sangvis until you find cover. The next moment, fire began being exchanged, and you dashed out with your firearm raised.

More and more units came into view, some laying on the ground with their head compartments shot through, but their numbers did not seem to be getting any smaller. Your weapon sings, trading incoming fire while your legs help you dodge it. Among the horde you also see Ouroboros, her red eyes staring daggers at you. She tries to point her armaments at you, but as she does she appears to be losing balance. A nearby ripper unit disengages from the fire fight to support her body. It appears her leg is more damaged than it seemed. In her stumble you also saw pieces of rebar sticking out of her back. Even so, using her units as support she gestures her hand towards you, her twin rifles sending fire your way. Thankfully, you manage to transition from your dash into a slide, your small profile making it to another stone pillar.

"The snake seems a lot more interested in you!" called Ots-12, hiding behind cover again now that you're safe.

"Hope she didn't give you a hard time, snake-chan can be very demanding of attention!" you jested, reloading your own gun. You smile as you feel a heightened amount of fire against the pillar you're hiding against.

"Actually, she couldn't stop talking about you!" mused the assault rifle "If I didn't know any better, I'd say she has developed secret feelings for you!~"

"Are all you Griffin trash obsessed with courtship behavior?!" called the annoyed voice of the ringleader, further hammering against your concrete obstructions "Well, let me tell you, you're terrible at it!"

[ ] "A certain shotgun would disagree~"
[ ] "And yet you're all over me! Just admit it, I rocked your world like no-one else~"
[X] "Ah, typical tsundere behavior. We'll penetrate that shell yet, snake-chan~"
[ ] Write-in

Tiss giggles to herself at the efficiency of your taunting, definitely taking notes. But you had to drop the playfulness a little when Sangvis units started entering the building. It became rather difficult to pick them off with all that fire being sent against just the two of you, and they were only getting closer. But then-

BANG!

The body of a vespid unit was shredded by blasts of pellets, moments before it managed to get to your cover. And when energy rounds were sent the attacker's way, only metallic clinging was heard as they were all deflected and stopped.

"I leave you alone for 5 minutes..."

Spoke the familiar tone of AA-12, reaching your side with her ballistic shields up. She looked annoyed, but you met it with a smug smile of your own as usual.

"What can I say, I felt lonely~"

"Well, hope you're satisfied with just us, cause the others are still a bit behind."

"Hm? Why's that?"

"Uh… the cable I was sliding down on snapped, rusty old thing. The others will have to be careful with the remaining cable."

"Hm… maybe I should start regulating your rations~"

"D-don't even joke about that!" she said, distress in her voice. Clearly she wouldn't want her last reliable source of sugar to start limiting her, how sweet.

"Well then, let's show her our secret strategy!" called Tiss, invigorated now that there are three of you. But from behind, another voice called as it approached.

"We're in the open! How is any of this secret?!" the hurried tone of Specter spoke, sliding up to a pillar near Ots-12. She looked well, except for her wet top that made her look more like a shameless bikini model. But judging by her reading material, she might've been going for that anyway.

"Well, it would've been if you secretly flanked them…" says Tiss, pouting playfully.

"L-l-like I wanna go out into the rain again! You can do that yourself, oh super secret firecracker!"

You smile at their almost carefree banter, even in the face of a ringleader. Your numbers did just multiply after all, but it'll be awhile before the major bulk of reinforcements. And you were still under fire.

"So, what now?" asked AA-12. You might have a more fortified defense now, but you've still got no real way to fight them off aside from suppressing them. Either you or Tiss were of some higher authority right now, so whatever you say goes, as long as it makes sense. But with your current position, SF will keep gaining on you. It is your luck she's not using her rocket launchers.

"Hah, starting to realize it now, Griffin trash?! Even with higher numbers, a corner is a corner, and there's no way off this board!" taunted the ringleader, even as she leans against her units as support. Looking over, you see another unit kneeling at her side, performing field repairs on her. With how exposed it is, you try to take a shot at them, but they immediately suppress you again. At this rate her combat efficiency will only increase, and you won't just be fighting a crippled command unit anymore…

"Be careful not to get backed into your own corner, Sangvis!"

The gazes of both sides turned upwards, to a voice that echoed from several floors up. It might only be visible to the ringleader and her units, but you already knew who it was. Commander Groza and the other dolls of Echelon 2 are looking over the side of the building, their weapons aimed at the mass of SF beneath.

"Light her up!"

You hear the thunk of a large, explosive shell being expelled from its chamber, alongside the combined fire power of two machine guns, followed by an explosion on the streets below. Now that's what an ambush looks like, just what you'd expect of the secret weapon's little sister. With SF in disarray, you add your fire onto theirs, attacking them from two points. If you push now, you may be able to go on the offensive.

That's when you notice that your target, the snake, has evaded and only left the impact point of the grenade in her footsteps. You scan the street to spot her, noticing one lonely unit slowly picking herself off the concrete ground, barely standing on two feet. The floating devices shifted their gears, revealing the inner explosive rocket compartment. She's not aiming at you, but above, likely believing that the building can take damage further up. You try and take a shot, but a row of Vespids immediately steps in-between to protect their ringleader. If you don't do something now, Groza and the others will get blown up.

[ ] Get closer and throw a Frag Grenade
[ ] Ask Ots-12 for another flare and get close to shoot it at Ouroboros
[X] Rush in with AA-12
[ ] Write-in
 
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... Our courtship ends up with us killing them. Hmm, kinda disturbing in hindsight. Ah well, its not that bad unless we make it bad.

At least we don't get off on it like Nier Automata androids? (Well they kinda did, more they conflated sex and killing as the same thing in an odd way).

Frag might get body blocked, flare does nothing except highlight that they're about to get fucked(?), and rushing in gets us fucked. Hmm... Well, probably/maybe.
 
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[X] "Ah, typical tsundere behavior. We'll penetrate that shell yet, snake-chan~"

[X] Rush in with AA-12

It's either this or the frag grenade, but I fear that one grenade will simply get shot down and detonated prematurely and thus not be effective enough to disrupt Ouroboros.
 
V with a doggo
You can be witty later.
I can be witty for you!
"Bring that hard long tube of yours along!~"

"Actually, she couldn't stop talking about you!" mused the assault rifle "If I didn't know any better, I'd say she has developed secret feelings for you!~"
Must have been the flames of love you threw at her V~

"Are all you Griffin trash obsessed with courtship behavior?!" "Well, let me tell you, you're terrible at it!"
Yet V wormed her way straight to your core and rocked your world~

Come! Become our mobile artillery and floating dogo dispenser!

"What can I say, I felt lonely~"
And went on to find a new friend for her party!
What great and efficient use of time!

"Hm… maybe I should start regulating your rations~"

"D-don't even joke about that!"
Or we can increase them even further!
That way you can start carrying more stuff!
Like extra rappelling lines, hooks, blankets, tarps, fuel cubes...

"Hah, starting to realize it now, Griffin trash?! Even with higher numbers, a corner is a corner, and there's no way off this board!"
Are you perfectly sure you don't want to get the board flipped in your face again young woman?

The stars have aligned as we all speak in one voice!!~~
PAIN TRAIN! CHOO CHOO!!

[X] "Ah, typical tsundere behavior. We'll penetrate that shell yet, snake-chan~"
[X] Rush in with AA-12

Have a doodle of V with a dogo.
 
[X] Write in: Combine the grenade with rushing with AA-12. Throw it over their heads at Ouro, and trust allies to lay down some cover on the vespids to hopefully keep them from countering it. AA-12 should be able to get us at least close enough for a good throw. Whether we continue charging or retreat so that allies can keep firing at her safely will depend on how effectively the grenade does its job.
 
As we saw in the most recent Christmas event, Dinnergates aren't exclusively a Sanvis thing. Griffin uses them as well, just not so much as combat units apparently. V might be able to get herself one simply by putting in a request or purchasing one from a griffin employee supply station.
 
Proposed rough outline for V's stats and abilities. By no means final, of course.

SR2 Veresk ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Stats (as rated in comparison to an average SMG)
Damage: A
ROF: A
Accuracy: B
Evasion: S+

Tiles
Buffs AR, Shotgun
30% Damage to AR, 20% Armor to SG
X V -
X X -
X X -

Ability 1: Grenade Charge
Throws a stun grenade that stuns normal enemies and reduces boss accuracy for a few seconds. During this period, Veresk's ROF is reduced, and her evasion increased, by a moderate percentage. If she does not take damage for 2 seconds, she leaps onto the enemy with the highest combat effectiveness and attacks with knives for highly multiplied damage.

Ability 2 (Mod 2 or 3): Enslaver Friend Collector
Veresk's stun grenade has a 20% chance to turn enemy non-boss units that it hits against their allies.

Mod 3 Unique Equipment
Taunt Database Chip
Goes in Accessory Slot (where a suppressor would go)
Minorly increases enemy damage, while moderately reducing enemy accuracy. Also interfaces with V's virtual dummies to let them help her with increased Evasion and Crit Rate (to make up for the loss of a scope or suppressor).
 
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