[x] Ask about the rules of the Notebook.

Finally knowing how everything works is important.

[x] Go to bat for him, try to get him free right here and right now. He's at least nominally the… owner of something of this, the second Death Note.

Probably the more difficult choice, but he's just become the most important source of information we have.

[x] Talk to Igniatus and James about the implications of the book. What happens next. What happens if its existence gets out?
[x] Look into Izzy and his now-dead brother. Wrap up loose ends on that front.

Tying up lose ends and informing the team should come first.
 
[X] Ask about the rules of the Notebook.
[X] Arrest him temporarily, as an excuse to get him off the streets, and then try to make it a less than… true arrest.
[X] Look into the photos and information taken in the raid, see if anything points towards a notebook.
[X] Talk to Igniatus and James about the implications of the book. What happens next. What happens if its existence gets out?
 
[X] Ask about the rules of the Notebook.
[X] Go to bat for him, try to get him free right here and right now. He's at least nominally the… owner of something of this, the second Death Note.

This get's us more information about the notebook, which we need to understand what it's capable off and so we can inform our superiors. Go to bat for him as our partnership may be more fragile now that his life isn't in as much danger and he's the owner of a death note.

[X] Talk to the higher ups. A… a Death Note. A book that can kill people. Holy shit.
[X] Look into the photos and information taken in the raid, see if anything points towards a notebook.

Talk to the higher ups as there are implications far exceeding whatever district we police, and as the murders have occured all accross the United States and we suspect around the world. I don't believe it should be in our remit to decide to keep this secret or not, or what to do about it. Finally look into the photo's and information to see if we can find the second one; this takes priority over the other actions (which I still want to do) as delaying it could mean the girls murder others.
 
[X] Ask about the rules of the Notebook.
[X] Go to bat for him, try to get him free right here and right now. He's at least nominally the… owner of something of this, the second Death Note.
[X] Talk to Igniatus and James about the implications of the book. What happens next. What happens if its existence gets out?
[X] Look into the photos and information taken in the raid, see if anything points towards a notebook.
 
[X] Ask about the rules of the Notebook.
[X] Go to bat for him, try to get him free right here and right now. He's at least nominally the… owner of something of this, the second Death Note.
[X] Talk to Igniatus and James about the implications of the book. What happens next. What happens if its existence gets out?
[X] Look into the photos and information taken in the raid, see if anything points towards a notebook.
 
Haiii~

It certainly seemed like a clue, but then again, this wasn't the 80s, being a wiccan didn't mean you were the devil. Or it could be an affectation. It felt in some ways like one, like just another symbol of who she was and that it wasn't normal. She was the kind of girl who didn't accept things as it was: she'd worked and fought and protested all her life.
This feels like a decoy clue. Like, it's designed to be a red herring, or to make the real clue not look like a clue, or something.

Maybe this isn't working? I mean, interest from people has been dying for a while... I don't know.
I love it. It's just-- hard to engage in. My involvement is sporadic, and I often don't feel like my thought processes are up to my caliber of participation.

Like, there's a fair number of quests where I just drop in and snap off a vote and it'll be fine. This one's not like that. This one calls for noticing clues and for serious thinkery, and feels like if we make the wrong move we're kinda boned. Which is a completely appropriate tone for the type of mystery quest! But it raises the bar and sometimes I'm not up to it.

Vote closes tomorrow then maybe? I do wonder whether I'm just not writing a good mystery, perhaps? I mean, it is a genre I haven't done as much, at least not up front like this as opposed to shadows in the background.
This has a feel to it, like "stealth hit" or "cult classic" or something, where it would get big after it wrapped up. Which would be great, except that quests don't work very well that way.

James opened the door, and the two black men stepped inside. One had a guy to the other.
Probably a typo, should be "gun"?

Darius rolled his eyes, "Anyways, I'm the owner of the book, and that means that I'm staying part of this shit. Plus, I need you to back me up on the self-defense shit, or else I'm going to be dead."

"Dead?"

"It has something to do with the game. I'm just not sure what," Darius said with a sigh. "Whatevs. I got the book."
Well that's not ominous.

I wonder what the connection between the self-defense and the not being dead is? I doubt it's quite as simple as "if it wasn't self-defense, he's going to get killed".

[X] Try to figure out more about the game.
[X] Try to find out if the other... "shingami", was it? Are using the Death Note/book format, or if there are other methods in play. Does it have to be a book? If we found other books, would we thwart the other killers?

[X] There has to be an investigation into the self-defense, obviously. But Darius is probably shooting you straight. Lay all the facts out on the table for the investigators, try to help him out.

[X] Check this Death Note for earlier killings, find out if it was used for anything besides the "Christmas Murders". If so, what? When? Speaking of the Christmas Murders, are there any of those left?
[X] Talk to the higher ups. A… a Death Note. A book that can kill people. Holy shit.
 
Episode 13: Game
Episode 13: Game

"So, how do you think the game is going?"

"I won't speculate. As long as you hold to your end of the bargain, I'll keep on playing. How many, though?"

"That'd be telling, wouldn't it? More than you'd want, I'll say that. You're really starting to get closer to becoming a hero like I said, but you need to pick up the pace. The time is ticking down, and I wanna see something… interesting."

"I… do have ideas."

"Oh good."
 
Episode 13-A
Episode 13-A

"What is some kid doing in my chair?" Oliver asked, later that next morning.

Alex looked over at Darius, examined him carefully, and then used their detective-like deduction to come to an answer. "It looks like he's spinning in the chair."

"It looks like he's spinning in the chair," Oliver said, turning the voice silly as he repeated it, "who is he?"

"Darius, don't you know? We're going to be working with him, sort of, from now on. Did you not check the emails again?" James asked, his voice dry.

"Buh...wah. What email?" Oliver asked. "It's the day after Christmas!"

"But information never rests," Alex said, "and now we have one of the two murder weapons, and we have one of the murderers dead."

"...what the hell else did I miss?"

*******

"People won't believe," Ignatius said, quietly, "at first. And then they'll believe and panic. This Darius, you know that getting him involved would just cause problems. I've seen his records, he's a vicious killer, and no matter what you see in him, the public won't see much. This is going to go up the chain of command. Maybe not quite yet, but the FBI will be involved, now that we have a supernatural notebook and a strange race of… Death Gods. Not sure whose jurisdiction that is."

"I'd like to see the United States declare war on death," James said, leaning back as he watched the scene, "but if they do believe and panic, then that might help. People would stop giving out their names online. They could wear masks or something, too? It seems like you could create a society where it was pretty hard to actually get someone's face and name. But then again, Ryuk, the shinigami, told us that his people just look down through portals into earth."

"Which means that they're not our business," Alex said firmly, "our job is to catch the first killer and figure out what's going on there. We can leave the negotiations to someone else. We shouldn't report on catching the second killer, because that'll merely lead to people asking about why there are two--"

"And if we claim to have stopped them, they'll ask how, and they'll tell us about all of the people dying," James said.

"Exactly. We need to keep this secret, but our higher-ups are going to learn. They've probably already realize that Darius matters. Darius matters a lot, and that means they're going to start asking why, and once they start asking…"

"Inevitable, and we can't keep it from them. We shouldn't," James insisted, "not if we like our jobs."

"Yes. But… a book that murders," Alex said, "they'll try to take it, and that…"

*******

"You want to know about the Death Note?" Ryuk asked, cackling, "do you have apples?"

"Actually, yes," Alex said. They were leaning back in their chair, right next to Darius, who seemed not to be paying attention, but was reading the book upside down.

Alex pulled out a red delicious and tossed it up, watching as the Shinigami caught it and ate it, core and all.

"Well, what first?"

"Can we take the note from Darius?"

"Welll, if you do, I'll have to kill you. It's the rules. Or the guidelines or whatever."

"Ah," Alex said, their heart-rate barely increasing as they reached out and took the book, flipping it open. "First, is this accurate? Anyone whose name is written there dies, if there's a face pictured as they write? How does that work with people they haven't seen in years, or decades? The face can change, after all."

"I dunno," Ryuk said.

Alex frowned deeper, a little frustrated with the shinigami already. They'd asked a few other questions, before this, and Ryuk had been at once open and also clearly not someone who took as much time as he 'should' in actually understanding how his note worked.

"You don't know. Alright, then. They die within forty seconds of a heart attack unless it's specified otherwise, in both time and date. I suppose it's not worth asking you whether the language of the writing matters, or if stenographer's shorthand works just as well as anything else?"

"Well, you have to be pretty blunt, Alex," Ryuk said, "if someone goes wrong, then that's someone not dead." Ryuk twisted himself around, looming over Alex.

"Yes, that's so. But, if you're just looking down into the world, then how do you get the names? Do you hear someone say it?" Alex asked.

"Ah! It took Marcus forever to ask about this, and you're already asking."

"It's simple logic," Alex said. The annoyance was starting to rise up, because Ryuk was strange. Weird, silly, not someone that Alex could imagine knowing for any real length of time without getting frustrated with.

"There is a deal that Darius could make," Ryuk said. "We shinigami have two main differences from you humans. Can you guess at what they might be?" Ryuk looked playful, in his weird, monster way.

"The why?" Alex guessed.

"We can take a human's lifespan from him. If I wrote down your name in my Death Note," he said, gesturing to the note that was attached at his belt, "I'd gain all the years you would have lived. And I could add them to my lifespan." There was something oddly sinister about the way he said it, as if he were--

"How can you know my lifespan?" Alex asked, then they realized. "Is that the other difference?"

"Shinigami can see a person's name and lifespan about their head. The hour, minute, the second of their death. Ticking closer and closer. But no matter how many names you write in the book, it can't make you live longer--"

"What happens if you kill someone who would have killed you?" Darius asked. "Cause I shot that motherfucker dead right before he finished writing my name."

"That's the power of the Death Note. It can alter the lifespan of other humans. I dunno how it works, my friend was always more clever with these sorts of things. He's the one who is with the first Death Note user, I bet. But any human can make a trade with us Shinigami. Our eyes, for half of their lifespan."

Darius whistled, "Is that what he was doing? The kid was screaming about eyes."

"Yes, he didn't know your name." Ryuk laughed, "Who would guess?"

"It is a silly name, isn't it?" Darius asked, shaking his head. "So, do you think Killer #1 made the deal?"

"No. I am absolutely sure that they didn't. They're too ambitious for that. They aren't the type to sacrifice themselves, they're the type to work towards their goals. Giving up lifespan, especially if they don't know how much they're giving up? And the Death Notes surely warp it. If they hadn't gotten the note, then none of this would happen." Alex shook their head, "And I bet that they're changing the lifespans of large groups of people. They kill a dictator, and things get worse, or they get better, but… determinism, huh." Alex frowned, "And a way out, but through murder."

This Death Note, Alex decided, was more dangerous than they had thought. And that was a hard task indeed.

"If you say so," Ryuk said, "the eyes are pretty convenient."

"Maybe. So what other rules are there…"

*******

You had to be fast to write in the details of the death. Or, you could write them in ahead of time. That seemed to make most sense. And because all of the actions had to be possible to do, or at least, you couldn't order someone to do something they couldn't, it meant that you had to be careful. As they had been.

As the second killer had not been.

The first killer, though, still killed no matter what. If the target couldn't do the action, then they just died of a heart attack. Hence why saving the pedophile coach from the noose hadn't actually saved his life.

Other details were weird, or silly, like how you could not kill anyone under two years old, and the rule that four misspellings made one immune to the powers of a particular Death Note.

And notably, you could lend out pieces of paper. Only someone who had touched the Note could see the Death God, and more than that, the Death God followed the owner at all time.

Which meant that if either Rachel or Patricia was the killer, a shinigami had been watching Alex as they had lied and presented themselves differently.

Though Ryuk swore up and down that a shinigami couldn't take either side, and apparently the deal Darius had made, in general, was that he wouldn't kill Darius, like he'd sworn to do with the Death Note users when they died or lost, and in exchange…

In exchange, this investigation became a petty game, to watch and see whether or not the first killer would be caught. It disgusted Alex, really, but they tried to think through it.

********

A single scrap of paper. If any of the investigators had been digging through those boxes, then just touching a single small slip of the paper hidden would mean that they'd suddenly see a Shinigami where there were none.

So, would Rachel or Patricia have been so clumsy as to leave it lying around? But what was definitely obvious was that they had hidden the Death Note itself, well. With the way the cover was so obvious, the gothic writing and the rules inside, it was immediately obvious as a murder weapon.

Of course, you could, actually, destroy the cover. Alex suspected that they were not taking out the book itself, in a pristine and untouched form, and that they were clearly offloading their material. If, for instance, they hid a single slip of paper somewhere private, they could write down the names on it, and the paper shredder in Patricia's room/office would definitely be useful.

Though, even a shred of the paper could hold the power to kill and yet also reveal. So, either someone had touched the shreds, or, if she were the killer, she had a more thorough way to get rid of it.

Which was an interesting thought.

What's the scheme here? (Choose 1)

[] Try to get Darius into a position where he'll cross paths with Rachel and Patricia. It'd be hard, since it's just after Christmas, but it might lead to them being tipped off in a way that might lead them to panic… or cover their tracks.
[] Follow them around, and try to find any evidence of paper exchanged, or dropped off, or anything like that.
[] Go the the higher ups. Get the FBI involved. It'll start to make waves, and those waves will ripple, and then one will see what happens.
[] Try to see how they react, if a slip of paper touches each of their hands and they see a shinigami.
[] Back off, act as if nothing has been solved or changed, and bide time while monitoring them, to see if they slacken off...

*******

A/N: Here we go.
 
[X] Try to get Darius into a position where he'll cross paths with Rachel and Patricia. It'd be hard, since it's just after Christmas, but it might lead to them being tipped off in a way that might lead them topanic… or cover their tracks.
 
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[X] Try to get Darius into a position where he'll cross paths with Rachel and Patricia. It'd be hard, since it's just after Christmas, but it might lead to them being tipped off in a way that might lead them topanic… or cover their tracks.
 
[X] Go the the higher ups. Get the FBI involved. It'll start to make waves, and those waves will ripple, and then one will see what happens.

We've been getting screwed via our lack of resources and powers to investigate, due to us being local police. This helps solve that, and more importantly, what's happening just honestly shouldn't solely be within our jurisdiction given murders have been happening across the country and internationally.

In general they should also be aware of what's possible (if they aren't already, and are just keeping it contained like some of the officers here advocated), along with the fact that another race exists.
 
To get rid of pages, why not dissolve then in a edible solution and then drink it?
Or dissolve it and dump the solution into the ocean? Or a river.
 
Death Note is apparently magic

Wait, are we expecting the book that spooky eyed psychopomps created to mess with people to follow like, physical laws and stuff?

The only reason it's a physical object is so that the Shinigami's game can involve it passing to another person if you die and so it has some sort of weakspot to keep things interesting. You're not gonna get around that by rules lawyering, you're going to get around that by being interesting.

[X] Go the the higher ups. Get the FBI involved. It'll start to make waves, and those waves will ripple, and then one will see what happens.
 
[X] Go the the higher ups. Get the FBI involved. It'll start to make waves, and those waves will ripple, and then one will see what happens.
 
Vote Closed.
Adhoc vote count started by The Laurent on Jun 30, 2017 at 8:29 AM, finished with 14 posts and 7 votes.

  • [X] Go the the higher ups. Get the FBI involved. It'll start to make waves, and those waves will ripple, and then one will see what happens.
    [X] Try to get Darius into a position where he'll cross paths with Rachel and Patricia. It'd be hard, since it's just after Christmas, but it might lead to them being tipped off in a way that might lead them topanic… or cover their tracks.
    [X] Follow them around, and try to find any evidence of paper exchanged, or dropped
    [x] Follow them around, and try to find any evidence of paper exchanged, or dropped off, or anything like that.
 
Episode 13-B
Episode 13-B

"A notebook that can kill anyone whose name is written in it?" the new chief of police asked. Roland, a good cop, people had said, Alex thought. But it was normally Ignatius who dealt with these things, and so looking at the balding, dark-skinned old man, Alex didn't know how to manipulate him.

How to, to put it bluntly, lie to him in a way that also told him the truth. They were a caged bird, sitting in a chair, explaining the impossible to an old man, and ultimately, there was the fear that someone would try to take the book by force, or would even attempt to use it. There were people who were like that, on the police force and otherwise.

A lot of power was resting in Darius' hands, and Alex's as well, and there were also others who would suspect that Alex wasn't worthy of it.

"Yes," Alex said, gesturing to the door. Darius stepped through, wearing a three-piece suit that in no way fit him quite right. He seemed like he wanted to be anywhere but there, but he strode forward, Ryuk behind him, holding the notebook out so that its title 'Death Note' could be easily seen.

Ryuk was cackling as he set down the book on the table and gripped it, opening it slowly. "Please touch it. And try not to scream, it upsets Ryuk."

"What is this nonsense?" Roland asked. "But ah well, if this is nonsense…"

He froze the moment he touched the book, staring up at Ryuk. "W-what are you?" His voice was cracking, but he hadn't fallen on his ass, and he seemed to have frozen in the way a rabbit might before a snake.

"I'm Ryuk, I'm a God of Death. And you're Roland Masters, ohohoho."

Alex rolled their eyes. Ryuk had done that same kind of trick on the others, such as Oliver. He couldn't, or wouldn't, reveal how long someone had to live, but he always laughed in a way that made it seem as if there was something amusing about everyone he met, their name and how long they had to live.

Alex was just thankful that Ryuk hadn't revealed 'their' name. Because it seemed obvious that what mattered was the name at birth, not the name that actually fit who they were in any way, shape, or form. It was a frustrating fact, and Alex wondered whether there was any metaphysical significance to all of this.

"Gods of Death can see the name and the time of death of anybody. The name they were born with, or given within a short time of their birth. It is why, as the report says," James said, having been quiet while Alex talked, "that the recently married women weren't killed. Because their new name was the only one the killer could find. A name and a face means death, and while a God of Death can steal a person's lifespan, all a user gets is a corpse. Another person dead. The names in that book match up to absolutely everyone publically killed, which means that this is definitely the murder weapon. We cannot ethically test this, however, but Ryuk has confirmed this, as well as confirmed, in a sideways way, that…"

"That there are more Gods of Death out there. And that at least one down here, and possibly more," Alex said, "we don't know what this game of theirs is, Ryuk has been very shy in that respect, but we're going to figure it out, along with other rules. Right now, we can assume that the first killer has a Notebook, and that they need a name and face."

"Jesus Christ," Roland muttered, rubbing his eyes, "we need to call in… what?"

"The FBI."

"Just the FBI? These crimes are apparently international. We're… Goddamn."

Ryuk began chuckling, but Alex ignored him.

"I understand, sir, but we need to do something," James said. "Informing the FBI is a first step."

"And getting the book away from a teenager?"

"Not as likely. The teenager counts as the owner of the book until he dies, and that means where he goes, so will Ryuk," James said.

"Until he dies, or until 490 days pass without access to the Notebook. We cannot afford to wait that long, and we need to talk to Ryuk. There are a lot of rules we don't know, and there are also rules that we want to know, or that the authorities will want to know. We could of course lock up the notebook so that Darius cannot take it," Alex said, their voice confident, maybe even a little smug, "but removing it completely doesn't seem wise, nor does taking him out of rotation."

"So we have to include a criminal?" Roland asked.

"Afraid so, sir," James said, "there's no choice."

"What sorts of questions are we going to be asking this… being?"

"Well, we thought it rude to ask questions about his society, or how to kill all of them," Alex said, their face blank.

Ryuk chuckled. "Oh, that's easy. If a Death God writes the name of someone in the book for the purpose of saving the life of a human, they die. We kill to live, not to save others. Or something." Ryuk rolled his eyes, "What Shinigami would do that, though?"

"Huh," Alex said. "And no other way?"

Ryuk shrugged, "Beats me. He was always the clever one, that's why he made up the game in the first place."

"He?" Roland asked, leaning back.

"We suspect that this he is the first killer's Death God," Alex said, "we intend to find out as soon as we find the notebook."

"So, about the FBI…"

First, how do you prove that the Death Note is real, to the FBI?

[] Write-in.

Second:

[] Joint team?
[] Or two separate teams, an FBI team and a police team?

Third:

[] Write up to, say, 5-7 questions for Ryuk, whether about his powers, his plans, etc, etc.

********

A/N: Remember, a write-in at all is good, don't be shy! Sometimes the answer is very simple!
 
Alex was just thankful that Ryuk hadn't revealed 'their' name. Because it seemed obvious that what mattered was the name at birth, not the name that actually fit who they were in any way, shape, or form. It was a frustrating fact, and Alex wondered whether there was any metaphysical significance to all of this.

Oh. Well that kinda sucks.

First, how do you prove that the Death Note is real, to the FBI?

[X] Call them up, tell some details, and announce that we're going to demonstrate it on a target of their choosing?

[X] Joint team?

Not sure on questions yet.
 
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