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「That man」 has committed a 「sin」. What 「that man」 has done cannot be forgiven. 「That man」 must...
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「That man」 has committed a 「sin」. What 「that man」 has done cannot be forgiven. 「That man」 must live with this 「sin」 until he dies, and despite the circumstances regarding it, no one will offer 「that man」 any patronizing words.


"You shouldn't be upset about this." No one except 「that thing」. "If you didn't kill her, there's no telling what kind of trouble she would've caused."


"..." 「That man」 was silent.


"Besides, it's not like she was a person, anymore."


"..." 「That man」 was still.


"If it's any consolation, you've been a great help in protecting the universe. I couldn't ask for anything else from you."


"..." 「That man」 was no longer still as he grabbed 「that thing」 by the neck and lifted it up.


"W-What are you-?!" If 「that thing」 could feel emotion, it would most certainly feel a very common emotion: 「fear」. This hypothetical 「fear」 was tremendously large, and it was brought about solely from the 「bizarre blue man」 appearing behind him!


"...You…" 「That man」 was no longer silent, and his voice was filled with rage. "You're pissing me off!" 「That man」 tossed 「that thing」 into the air, but before it could even descend, the 「bizarre blue man」 unleashed upon its body an incredible flurry of punches!


"ORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORA!" 「That thing」 was reduced to dust, not a trace of it left in the world. Now, 「that man」 was alone with but two things: the 「bizarre blue man」 behind him, and the 「butterfly dagger brooch」 at his feet.


"That was rather unnecessary."


Jotaro Kujo! Meets Madoka Kaname (1)
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April, 2011. Japan is still recovering from the Tohoku Earthquake of just a month ago, a tragedy that one might take as a prelude to the alleged apocalypse of 2012, but that is neither here, nor now. Our interest at the moment lies with one girl: Homura Akemi.

For a while now, Homura had been hospitalized due to problems with her heart, but now, she has reached a state of wellness that will allow her to start attending class at Mitakihara Junior High School. Even if one says this, though, you would never guess at first glance that Homura has ever had any problems. Her cool face, her beautiful hair, her confident walk, everything about Homura gives off the aura of untarnishable 「greatness」.


"Ah!" In contrast to this, Homura momentarily lost focus and bumped into someone. "Sorry, I-?" Homura took a moment to look at who she bumped into, and was very surprised at what she saw. His face(very stern) made him out to be Japanese, but he stood at nearly 200cm., making him the country's equivalent to a giant. Despite appearing to be a well-aged adult, he wore what seemed to be a high schooler's gakuran heavily adorned with gold, the sleeves also having the phrase "JOJO" running down them and a 「butterfly dagger brooch」 being attached to his left shoulder. What Homura found to be the most bizarre about this individual, though, was his hat that seemed to actually fuse with his hair; that was something even Homura considered to be crazy.


"Don't worry about it," the man said. He then walked around Homura and headed down the opposite way of her. Already losing interest, Homura continued to walk to school.


"Wait." It wasn't even five steps away from the man, though, that Homura was suddenly pulled back and turned around to face him; for a second, she could've sworn that there was 「something」 behind him.


"What… is it?" Without a verbal response, the man grabbed Homura's left arm and pulled it towards himself. Homura didn't know what he wanted, but this didn't support good intentions, so she was already preparing her escape.


"That's a nice 「ring」. Where did you get it?"


"?!" Now it was clear. What had caught the man's attention wasn't Homura, herself, but the 「ring」 on her left hand. For most people, this wouldn't be any sort of problem, but for Homura Akemi, having someone notice that 「ring」 was not a good thing.


"I… I don't know… don't remember…"


"...Alright, then." The man let go of Homura's arm. "You should get to school before you're late."


"Y-Yes…" With that, the two bowed to each other and went their separate ways.


What the hell was that? Homura thought to herself. Something like that… that's never happened before…!
~~~
Madoka Kaname, age 14. Currently in the eighth grade, attending Mitakihara Junior High School. Eldest child of Junko and Tomohisa Kaname, elder sibling to Tatsuya Kaname. Friends with Sayaka Miki and Hitomi Shizuki. In conclusion, Madoka Kaname is 「normal」! Everything in her life until now has been 「normal」! Nothing has ever happened to change the 「normalcy」 of her life! So! When 「mysterious transfer student」 Homura Akemi says something like 「don't change who you are, or you will lose everything you love」, Madoka can only feel confusion!


"Is everything alright, Madoka-san?" This feeling of confusion was not lost on Madoka's friends as they walked home from school.


"? Why?" Madoka asked.


"You've been pretty quiet since you took the transfer student to the nurse's office, that's why!" Sayaka exclaimed.


"Oh, have I…?"


"You're acting really weird, Madoka. What'd she do, anyway? Hit you? Make fun of you? Come on to you?"


"No, she didn't- wait, what was that last one?"


"Nothing~! Come on, let's just go- whoa! It's a giant!" Madoka and Hitomi turned their heads in the same direction as Sayaka and, just like several other students leaving the school, ended up staring at an incredibly tall man in a gakuran.


"What a tall man," Hitomi said.


"And he's Japanese, too?!" He kinda looks familiar… The man, noticing Sayaka's noteworthy gawking, started to walk towards the three girls.


"Excuse me, but can I ask you some questions?" The man asked when he was in front of them.


"Yes?!"


"I'm looking for someone who goes to this school." The man reached into his pocket and pulled out a piece of paper. On that paper, much to the girls' surprise, was a perfect sketch of Homura. "Have you seen this girl?"


"That's Homura-chan!" Madoka exclaimed.


"So you know her, then. Where can I find her?"


"Sorry, but we don't know. Homura-chan just transferred in today, so we don't know where she lives. We don't have her contact information, either…"


"That's fine. I don't really need to see her right now, anyway. I do have another question, though." The man folded the page back into his pocket. From a different pocket, he pulled out what looked like a photograph. "Have any of you seen what's in this photo?" The three girls all gave the picture a glance.


"I'm sorry, but… there's nothing in this picture," Hitomi said, feeling bewildered.


"What are you talking about, Hitomi?" Sayaka asked. "You can't see it? That white rabbit… cat… thingy?"


"I'll believe you if you say it's there, but I can't see a thing. What about you, Madoka-san?"


"...I… I can see it…" Madoka said, utterly stunned to see yet another thing from 「that dream」 in reality. "Um… what is this about? Does it have something to do with Homura-chan?"


"...It's nothing," the man said, putting the photo back in his pocket and walked away. Those two were the first to be able to see 「him」. Are they…
~~~
After that bizarre encounter, Madoka, Sayaka, and Hitomi went to a nearby restaurant, their first conversation immediately being about the man they talked to.


"Just what was up with that guy?" Sayaka asked. "Standing around a junior high, asking where to find some girls, is he some sort of perverted stalker?"


"I don't really think that's the case, Sayaka-chan; he didn't really look like that kind of person," Madoka said, mainly because of how he had a picture of the creature from 「that dream」.


"Hmmm… now that you mention 「looks」," Hitomi started, "his face kind of reminds me of… 「Clint Eastwood」."


"「Clint Eastwood」?"


"Oh yeah, he does!" Sayaka added. "...Ah! Now I know where I've seen him before!" Sayaka opened up her bag and pulled out a magazine on marine biology and, much to Madoka and Hitomi's astonishment, the man from earlier was on the cover. "That was 「Jotaro Kujo」, the super famous marine biologist who wears super fabulous clothes! I'm a huge fan!"


"Since when?" Hitomi asked.


"C'mon, you know that I'm really into ocean stuff!"


"...Again, since when?"


"Man, I can't believe I didn't recognize Kujo-san; I could've gotten his autograph!" Sayaka said, ignoring Hitomi's comment. "His work with dolphins last year was amazing!" Sayaka then went on to list various things that Jotaro had done.


"Oh, wait!" Madoka interjected. "Do you think that Kujo-san is Homura-chan's father, then?"


"Weren't you listening, Madoka? His name's Jotaro Kujo, not Jotaro Akemi... though I guess he could be an uncle or something. Oh! Since we're talking about her, tell us what happened between you and that transfer student!"


"Um… well…"
~~~
After Madoka divulged both her encounter with Homura in the hall and the dream she had with her in it, Hitomi had to leave for her tea ceremony class. Madoka and Sayaka, having time to spare, decided to go to the music store, the latter looking for another CD to give to her crush, Kyosuke Kamijo. While they were listening to music, though, Madoka heard a 「mysterious voice」!


Help me! The 「mysterious voice」 said. Confused, Madoka looked around to see who was talking, but not only was no one speaking to her, everyone was completely minding their own business, meaning only Madoka could hear the 「mysterious voice」!


What's going on? Madoka asked herself as she followed the sound of the voice. It eventually led her downstairs and in front of a closed off area, forbidden to access.


Help!


"..." Madoka Kaname wasn't one to break the rules, so the fact that the area in front of her wasn't supposed to be entered would be enough to stop her from moving forward. However! Madoka Kaname also wasn't one to ignore a cry for help! Therefore, while still feeling nervous, she pressed onwards into the closed off area! At first, there was no one, but suddenly, something fell out of the ceiling in front of Madoka. It was breathing heavily and covered in cuts, but Madoka immediately recognized as the creature in both Jotaro's photo and 「that dream」!


It's him…! Madoka thought to herself as she picked up the creature and held it in her arms. "Were you the one talking to me?"


Help… The repeated cry answered her question. Before Madoka could respond, though, Homura Akemi, dressed in the same outfit she wore in her dream, suddenly appeared before her!


"Homura-chan…?"


"Hand that creature to me," Homura coldly said.


"But he's hurt!"


"Yes, and I'll be sure to… fix that." There was nothing reassuring about that.


"N-No!" Madoka shouted, stepping back. "Don't touch him!"

"..." Homura simply stared at Madoka, as if she were contemplating her next move of some sort. However, before Homura could do something, Sayaka blasted her with a fire extinguisher, then ran off with Madoka and the creature in tow!
~~~
"What the hell is that transfer student doing, dressing like that and attacking people?!" Sayaka exclaimed as she and Madoka ran. "And isn't that the thing Kujo-san showed us? What's it doing here?"


"I'm not sure… but he needs our help!" Madoka said.


"Oh! What if it's Kujo-san's pet?! Do you think he'd let us in his house if we return it to him?!"


"Sayaka-chan, please focus!" The exit for the area was in sight, but before Madoka and Sayaka could reach the exit, it vanished! Not only that, but the entire area changed into a scene of butterflies and paper cutouts!


"This is… very strange…" Sayaka remarked, moving closer to Madoka. Then, as if the situation wasn't bizarre already, Madoka and Sayaka found themselves surrounded by strange creatures that looked like a cross between a butterfly and the Pringles man! "HOLY ACID TRIP!" The odd creatures creeped closer and closer to the girls, many of them gaining hollow eyes and vicious teeth in order to look even more disturbing!

But then! All of the creatures flew backwards into the walls and burst into nothing!


"Wh-What just happened?" Madoka asked.


"「Yare yare daze」." This voice was entirely unexpected. Madoka and Sayaka turned their bodies to see none other than 「Jotaro Kujo」 entering the scene!


"Ku-Kujo… san?"


"Kujo-san!" Sayaka exclaimed, her eyes beaming as she ran over to him. "Hello! I don't think we were properly introduced before. My name's Sayaka Miki, and I'm a huge fan of yours! Madoka and I found your pet, or whatever it is, so do you think I can get your autograph? Pretty please? Can I go to your house, too? I'd love to see what you're working on, right now, if it wouldn't be too much-"


"Oh my God, shut the hell up, already!" Jotaro shouted at Sayaka.


"?! I… I'm sorry!" Sayaka started bowing frantically. "I'm super, super sorry!"


"Whatever." Jotaro walked past Sayaka and stopped in front of Madoka. "So, 「Kyubey」 does belong to you, then."


"What?" Madoka asked. "His name's… 「Kyubey」?"


"Don't try and play dumb; I'm in no mood for it, kid. ...Hold on." A large number of the Pringle butterflies appeared from seemingly nowhere.


"Kyaaaaah!" Even Madoka was afraid!


"These guys just don't quit, do they?"


"What are you doing, Madoka, Kujo-san?!" Sayaka asked. "We've gotta get outta-"


"ORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORA!" The Pringle butterflies were all pushed back by some sort of 「invisible force」 and all suffered the same fate: 「destruction」!


"...here." When Sayaka said that, the area they were in vanished, bringing them back to where they once were. "I'm not sure what's going on, but I'm not really complaining, either."


"Did you do something, Kujo-san?" Madoka asked. "Thank you for helping us."


No, Madoka, you have to get out of here! Kyubey shouted into her mind. Jotaro's just as dangerous as Homura! Maybe even more! You have to- That sentence was never finished. A split second later, Kyubey was lying in a crater at Madoka's feet, his body torn to pieces!


"! What…? No… NO! KYUBEY!" Madoka fell to her knees and cried for the fallen creature.


"Stop crying, already; he's gonna come back," Jotaro said.


"He… He is…?" Madoka asked, wiping away her tears.


"Like you don't know. It fully heals itself, even after death… what a troublesome 「Stand」."


"S… 「Stand」?"


"「Stand」?" Sayaka repeated running over to the two. "What's a-" Suddenly, the two girls were grabbed at the collars and lifted off the ground by an 「invisible force」 similar to the one that destroyed the Pringle butterflies!


"You must be new to this, so let me tell you something important: when someone asks if you've seen a 「Stand」, especially your own 「Stand」, you don't say 「YES」! Now, then, which one of you is the 「Stand user」?!"


BANG! A gunshot sounded off! A bullet flew through the air, directly towards Jotaro's head! Madoka and Sayaka were thrown onto their butts. They regained their composure just in time to see the bullet 「stop in midair」!


"You went straight for the head. You must have experience, kid." The sound of footsteps echoed through the area. The footsteps ceased when the source was but a little under a meter away from Jotaro. The source, itself was none other than 「Homura Akemi」, now wielding some sort of 「gun」!


"Homura-chan has a gun?!" Madoka exclaimed.


"What the hell is going on?!" Sayaka added.


"...I'm thankful to you for killing Kyubey, Jotaro-san," Homura said. "However…" The girl pointed her 「gun」 at Jotaro, "I won't forgive you for trying to hurt 「Madoka」!" The three silver circles on Homura's shield-like device opened, revealing the smaller two to contain sand and the large one to be a set of gears. Without a single word, the face of the shield turned onto its side… and the world went gray!


I don't know what's going on, but this man clearly has a bizarre 「power」. I don't know what it is, but if he's willing to hurt Madoka, then he's too dangerous! I need to get rid of him now, while he can't move! Homura readied her weapon and prepared to fire at Jotaro in the frozen time.


"Well well well..."


"?! I… Impossible!" Evidently, it was not impossible, for Jotaro was indeed moving in the frozen time.


"Never thought I'd have to deal with this power, again." Before Homura could react to this, her eyes widened as a 「muscular blue man」 appeared out of nowhere behind Jotaro! Together, these two men kicked Homura in the face and stomach, knocking her to the ground and making her accidentally unfreeze time!


How?! How can he move in the frozen time without touching me?! And that thing… what the hell is that thing?!


Clink This action from Jotaro would cause fate to diverge even further. When Jotaro kicked Homura, a 「locket」 fell out of his pocket. When this 「locket」 hit the ground, it opened up, revealing that it contained a certain 「stone」! As if there was some sort of 「magnetism」 at work, the 「stone」 flew out of the locket into the air… and pierced through Madoka's neck!


"Aaah… gghhh… guhaaa…" Madoka tried to speak, but the hole in her neck coupled with the incredible pain made her unable to do so.


"MADOKA~!" Homura and Sayaka shouted, the former seeming rather out of character to Sayaka. What was Jotaro's reaction to this scene?


"...「Yare yare daze」."


Part 1: Fate


TO BE CONTINUED
~~~
「INDEX」
Jotaro Kujo! Meets Madoka Kaname
(2)
(3)
The Visitors
Kyoko Arrives! DIO did Nothing Wrong!
(2)
(3)
GO! GO! ORIKO!
How much is that worth to you?
Silver Twist
Being Sayaka is Suffering
(2)
(3)
(4)
(5)
tragedy and fate 「BAD END」
Karma
(2) -Long Night-
(3) -Long Night-
UHIHIHIHIHIHI
The Battle Polygram
(2)
(3)-arrival of Walpurga-
(4)-stratagem of Walpurga-
(5)-despair of Walpurga-

Extras
The Pleasure Principle
It's Good To Have Options
 
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Following this. The way it's written just feels so JoJo, that's nice. Hope we can see more of this soon.
 
So, out of curiosity, what would keep Homura from bailing on this timeline early?

Especially since Madoka now has a hole where her neck should be?
 
Jotaro's a little off; by which I mean he had mellowed out a lot as he grew up if Part 4 was any indication so he probably wouldn't have snapped at Sayaka like he would've when he was seventeen.
 
Oh hey, this is that idea I posted on SB a while back.

You could have asked to use it you know.
Interesting.

My main experience with Jojo being the Anime, what is wth the weird brackets?
It's a fairly common practice in Manga, but Araki likes to put emphasis on certain words of character dialogue a bit more than other people. So much so that he'll occasionally have up to three bolded, bracket, italicized words in a single speech bubble.

I dunno if I actually like it here though, it's incredibly distracting.
 
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Hmmm... Just how bad of a news for a puella magi would be an encounter with a hamon user?
 
Hmmm... Just how bad of a news for a puella magi would be an encounter with a hamon user?

The Ripple would be more effective on a magical girl than a human because they aren't living beings anymore, but because they aren't zombies in the same manner as the JoJo zombies, it loses some effectiveness. In short, the Ripple would damage them, but not too heavily.
 
It's a fairly common practice in Manga, but Araki likes to put emphasis on certain words of character dialogue a bit more than other people. So much so that he'll occasionally have up to three bolded, bracket, italicized words in a single speech bubble.

I dunno if I actually like it here though, it's incredibly distracting.
I like it. It reminds me of the "MENACING" that would come up whenever someone looked at another.
 
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