Fate/Clusterfuck (Fate/Stay Night)

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[X] [Next to a Golden Sheep]

Now now people, let's not get ahead of ourselves. The golden fleece? Oh please thats not clusterfucky enough. No theres another golden sheep you guys seem to have forgotten about…..Dumuzid, the husband of the goddess Ishtar and companion to Ereshkigal in the underworld. If Shirou wakes up next to him? Boy that'll be very interesting and personally I want to see it.
 
Erien said:
Circe is certainly grand something alright.
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1. Considering one of the prerequisites for Grand Caster is being pre-post-current-cog, Circe's ability to talk across time probably qualified her.
2. Just to check, Medea did see her old teacher and hear her call us out, right?
ARSLOTHES said:
Now I somehow get updates from the comments
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That's how the alerts are programmed for Xenforo. You get the OP comment, you get the next-ish post, and if you read to the end of the thread you will continue to get alerts. But if a certain amount of time passes and you haven't read anything, it stops alerting.

I remember when every post in a thread was e-mailed to you in it's entirety. That got stopped for stability/spam reasons.
 
Hans getting dunked on? This chapter approved by Sessyoin Kiara
[X] [Rin's Mansion]
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH
is this the best outcome? probably not, but my bet is that it's the most entertaining
(also possibly more time with Mordred! and more Rin/Baeber shipping!)
 
Erien said:
Oh, and please let me know what ya'll think. First real Fate fight scene. So let me know what you think of it, and the chapter!
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I've never seen an author capture the vibe of an EMIYA scene the way you did. You did an amazing job creating the recognizable internal monologue and magical commands, as well as the copying of skills that imprint themselves onto him without understanding how, as well as hints to what might be driving his powers forward, leading to a climactic, seemingly doomed stand against an opponent so superior we might as well be cannon fodder to them, with the realization afterwards that we are A) alive and B) horribly mutilated as a result of abusing magic far beyond our current level.

I legitimately thought this would go the Sparks Liner High route of giving us an absurdly cool EMIYA moment before making us "be a team player" and "trust in your servant(s) to finish the job in a tactically sound manner" like some nerd, but you said "Hell no!" to that and gave us an unexpected subversion of the Tiger Dojo while also confirming that Circe is in physical contact with us and can apparently help us in battle somehow (not gonna question it). All in all, a banger of an update that pays off multiple established plot threads, shows your ability to imitate Nasu's classic style, and provides intrigue for future plot points while also making Shirou act like an... Archer. The only change I'd make is putting the actual Emiya theme into the text instead of making me find it myself on Youtube, because no EMIYA moment is complete without it (seriously, would love it if you put in the Realta Nau version).

If you couldn't tell, I really like Shirou.
 
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