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Fate/All In Your Hands [AU Fate/Extra RP]

Fine, I'll get the quote...

Um, Master? This may seem kind of random, but would you consider just stopping right here and now? To live in absolute freedom. Just let the Holy Grail, and that child, be. And there's a way around the rule about dying if you don't win. It's not that hard to create a loophole. Then we could go back to the beginning when the school was calm. That'd be okay with you, right?"
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BlackHadou said:
Discernment of the Poor B
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Alex can tell where you are, but doesn't seem to have a depth perception of where you are. He isn't that surprised, and he is the cold, focused and calculating type underneath his demeanor.

burningclaw2 said:
@BlackHadou does Mordred have anything that'd conceal her gender on? Or does she look like a king?
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BlackHadou said:
Looks like a king. Body figure isn't exactly obvious under her clothes, but her face is feminine enough you could probably guess it.
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Did Mordred cancel her invisibility? Just because she talked doesn't mean PC is off.

burningclaw2 said:
Alright, time to edit it what I see of her.

@Silver W. King Would all the factions know what King Arthur looks like?
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No. Only if you meet her, or someone took a pic and send it to you.

Nanimani said:
That seems way too lenient.
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Really?

Too sleepy now. I'll make more severe when I get back.
 
burningclaw2 said:
Alexander Sajyou Yggdmillenia
Week 1, Day 1​

"Is it not proper manners to introduce oneself first before asking the name of another, your majesty." Alexander replied keeping a hand on his chest while maintained his act even as stood up before continuing, "However if you truly wish to know, my name is Alex."
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Are you saying "your majesty" sarcastically, or knowingly?
 
It's Called Borrowing ze~ said:
Hey, have we moved along? Me and @Zeranion, that is.
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Sorry Ze... My muse is being stupidly uncooperative. Every time I try to write something for Hagane it comes out as either garbled junk, or something even more off-key/OOC than the last post. I feel like I've lost sight of what he was supposed to be like and can't get it back. I know I wasn't happy with the last post before I did it, and the new attempts I've made have been much worse.

I just don't know what to do about it... *facedesk*
 
Zeranion said:
Sorry Ze... My muse is being stupidly uncooperative. Every time I try to write something for Hagane it comes out as either garbled junk, or something even more off-key/OOC than the last post. I feel like I've lost sight of what he was supposed to be like and can't get it back. I know I wasn't happy with the last post before I did it, and the new attempts I've made have been much worse.

I just don't know what to do about it... *facedesk*
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Well... Why not go back and read over your previous posts?
 
A Melted Cheese Sandwich said:
@Silver W. King , d'ya need me to edit it?
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Its fine, if it needs a change, I'll let you know.

Zeranion said:
Tried that... Just started despairing harder about how off my attempts were... This post just does not want to get written T_T
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Write it bad. I know, not the most helpful criticism, but write the response that comes to you, and ignore how badly it makes you feel.

It should help you to get back into it.

Also, and this is a bit of advise for artists everywhere (that I've read somewhere but can't find now), when you create something, and it feel bad or falls short from the image in your mind, someone else would see it and think its great because they are not comparing it to anything. This is paraphrased, and I need to find the original quote, but the point it, its probably not as bad as you think, and once you get in the groove of it, the rest should come back naturally.

Still take your time, and good luck.
 
Additionally, Silver's happy to help. Post it in a convo with him before you put it in the IC thread.
Maybe you're just psyching yourself out.
 
So, I think it can be said that this is dead and many of you have moved on.

However, if anyone is interested, I could write the plans I had for the Week Arcs of this RP, and you could have a bit of fun just writing how you would have reacted.

Thoughts?
 
Silver W. King said:
So, I think it can be said that this is dead and many of you have moved on.

However, if anyone is interested, I could write the plans I had for the Week Arcs of this RP, and you could have a bit of fun just writing how you would have reacted.

Thoughts?
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Necromancy exists for a reason Silver...

Edit: But sure, lets hear it.
 
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