Fallen in a Well (Worm/Exalted)

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Worm is the property of Wildbow, and Exalted is the Property of White Wolf.

A young Abyssal Exalted with nothing to lose throws all of her hopes into a risky plan to escape the hell she lives in, and finds herself in a world completely unlike her own.
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Chapter 1
For the record, yes I know that starting a new fic while already working on one is a terrible idea, but at this point I was getting worried that if I didn't write this story that it would somehow claw it's way out of my head and strangle me in my sleep. Enjoy!

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In an unassuming burial mound on the edge of the world, a young girl stared into the abyss.

The girl known as Shoat of the Mire swallowed. She knew this was a terrible idea. She had known that from the start. You would have to be quite stupid to believe that throwing yourself into what was likely an all consuming, all destroying void was anything but one of the worst ideas one could ever have. And for all of her many faults (and she had many of those), Shoat of the Mire was not stupid.

And yet, here she was, planning on doing just that. How ironic.

She felt a laugh bubbling up in her throat. Strange, she thought. She hadn't felt that in what was… well, she didn't really know. It wasn't like she had any way to keep track of time in this tomb.

She grit her teeth and forced it back down. This place was affecting her, though that wasn't unexpected. Even before her… adoption, as the Dowager called it, she had heard rumors of this place. Rumors that even being near this hole into the Void was enough to cause insanity, and that to stare into it's endless abyss was to surrender one's sense entirely.

Compared to that, a fit of giggles was fairly underwhelming. Shoat wondered if she should feel relieved or disappointed. She supposed it didn't really matter; either way, there was only one way this could end.

Or… maybe not. Making sense of the Dowager's ramblings was difficult even at the best of times, but from the little she had managed to decipher, the hole in front of her, or the Well of Udr as it was actually called, might not lead directly into Oblivion as she had once assumed, but instead lead to somewhere else entirely. Or multiple somewheres; she wasn't quite clear on that. Or the Dowager was completely wrong, and Shoat was about to commit what was possibly the most extreme suicide in the history of Creation. How delightful.

Claws of doubt gripped Shoat's spine as she stared into the Well. Was… Was this really the best idea? Surely there had to be a better way than this; a better way than throwing herself into the abyss and hoping for a miracle. After all, she didn't have a good record with those.

But what else was there to do? Escaping the normal way wasn't an option; even if she succeeded, she would spend the rest of her unlife running, never safe, leaving a trail of death behind her as the Dowager's agents did their best to drag her back. Fighting her was even stupider; at best, she would just die. At worst…

She shuddered. Best not to think about that.

No, as sad as it was, the Well was the only way Shoat could think of escaping that didn't end horribly. Sure, she had a good chance of dying, but then that would be it, and with her soul obliterated by the Void, even the Dowager wouldn't be able to hurt her anymore. And if the Dowager was right, and the Well didn't lead into Oblivion? Well, then that was just a nice bonus.

Shoat took a deep breath as she prepared herself. In some ways, the random nature of it all was almost comforting. Either she would live, or she wouldn't. Either way she would be free. Really, that was all she could ask for.

Taking one final moment to prepare herself, Shoat closed her eyes, and let herself fall forward.

As she tumbled over the edge of the abyss, she felt a small laugh finally escape her. It was done. Even if she wanted to, there was no way she or anyone else could take this back now. One way or another, she was free.

Turning over on to her back, Shoat watched as the hole leading back into the outside world grew smaller and smaller. Closing her eyes once again, she smiled, waiting for death - or whatever else happened to dwell there - to take her.

Then she felt it; a sharp pain in her chest, like something was trying to rip it's way out.

Her eyes flew open and she gasped in shock. Belatedly, she realized that she was so wrapped up in the idea of the Well killing her that she didn't bother to think about whether or not it would be painful.

Huh, she thought, as the pain continued to worsen. I really should have thought about that. Idly, she realized that the pain felt less like something trying to claw its way out, and more like something being forcefully pulled away from her.

The pain intensified more and more, until finally, just as Shoat was wondering if she had made a mistake, there was a strange snap, before something she couldn't see but could only vaguely feel struck her like a hammer. Then, everything went black.

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Shoat groaned as she came to. Rubbing her eyes, she sat up and looked around the dark alleyway she found herself in. Where am I? she wondered. Then she remembered what she had done.

I… I did it. She thought, barely able to believe it. I'm free. For the first time she could remember, she felt a smile come across her face. It was all she could do to avoid shouting in joy. Instead, she carefully stood up.

Despite her excitement, she knew better than to just stumble into a possibly dangerous situation without any knowledge; she wouldn't have survived for so long if she didn't. Drawing upon her Essence, she pushed out her senses, drinking deeply from the ambient noise.

As the noises around her became clear, Shoat couldn't help but frown. From the sounds she could hear, it seemed like she was in a city, and not a small one if the sheer volume of noise was to be believed.

Shoat didn't have much experience with cities, and that made her nervous. Not having experience with something meant not knowing what to expect. Not knowing what to expect got you killed.

Even worse though was the language. Shoat couldn't understand any of it, to the point the people might as well have been speaking gibberish for all she knew. It wasn't exactly surprising of course; with her being so far from home, the chances of this place speaking the same language as her were so low as to be nonexistent. Unfortunately, that fact brought her little comfort, as thoughts of all the ways this new disadvantage could kill her deluged her mind.

Shoat took a deep breath. Despite all of the problems she had, she knew that she couldn't stay here. At the very least, she needed to map out the city, figure out what dangers she could expect to find, and so on.

Pausing only long enough to gather her thoughts and smooth out her shroud, she stepped out into the city.

Shoat blinked a couple of times as sunlight hit her eyes. Then she blinked again, barely believing her eyes.

Shoat did not know much about cities, but she didn't think many were as built up as this one. The first thing she noticed was, oddly enough, the wide, well paved road though that may have been more due to the strange moving carriage-like constructs prowling over it than the road itself.

Horseless carriages? She wondered as she watched them roll by. She supposed it wasn't the strangest thing she had ever seen. Shaking her head, she looked towards the rest of the city.

Surrounding the road was a series of squat brick buildings, so closely packed that many of them were flat out touching. Bright signs hung from many of them, the words on them just as meaningless to her as the tongue the people spoke.

As odd as they were, the buildings were not what caught her attention. Instead, Shoat found her gaze locked on something far more distant.

Standing at a seemingly impossible height, a set of massive glass and steel towers glimmered off in the distance. Shoat vaguely knew that such constructs were almost common during the First Age, and that a few even existed in the current age, knowing that did little to take away the shock of seeing one directly.

The sound of shouting shook Shoat out of her daze. Turning around to face whatever was causing the commotion, Shoat was confronted with the sight of a pair of very large men walking towards her.

The men continued to walk towards her, eventually stopping only a few feet away from her. Now that they were up close, it was easy to see just how large they were, with the shorter of the two being almost two feet taller than her, and the taller being just over that.

The men seemed to be almost confused, likely because she hadn't run away. Shoat supposed that if she had been just the simple girl she had once been so long ago, she would have. To a girl of her size, even one of the men running her down would have been terrifying, let alone both of them.

Shoat hadn't been that girl for a long time.

The taller man yelled some more and waved a strange black club towards her. Shoat cocked her head to the side, wondering what he was trying to do.

The shorter man said something to his partner, who in turn lowered his club, a slightly sheepish look coming over his face. The two men continued to talk for a few seconds, seemingly trying to decide on something. Briefly, Shoat wondered if she should leave, only to decide against it. After all, it didn't seem likely that either of them could hurt her, and it would be good to see what this city's guards were willing to do.

Finally the men seemed to come to some sort of decision. The shorter one turned back towards her, saying something else that she couldn't understand. Shoat resisted the urge to roll her eyes. She felt it was pretty clear that she didn't understand a word they were saying, right?

The man said something else, this time waving his hand in front of her face. Shoat's eye twitched in annoyance as she valiantly resisted the urge to remove said hand.

Maybe if I only took the fingers…

Meanwhile, it seemed that the other man had run out of patience. Letting out a growl, he stepped forwards and reached out to grab Shoat, ignoring the angry yell from his partner.

Shoat didn't think. Just as the hand was about to reach her, she stepped aside, allowing it to just pass her by. Then, she reached out, grabbing the man by the wrist and twisting. The man let out a surprised yell, followed by a pained yelp as the wrist snapped. As the man stumped back, cradling his mangled wrist, his partner stepped forward, the shorter man drawing his own club.

Almost casually, Shoat sidestepped the oncoming blow, her essence enhanced steps making the man look clumsy by comparison. Reaching down, she felt one of her many knives flip up into her hand, before slashing upwards.

The man let out an even louder yell than his partner, screaming from the pain of the massive gash Shoat had sliced into his side. Shoat stepped forwards, ready to finish him with a slash to the throat, only to be interrupted by yet more yells. Looking over to see where they were coming from, Shoat saw yet more large men running towards them, all of them carrying either clubs or strange fire-wand like devices, and all wearing the same clothing as the first two.

Figures, Shoat thought disgruntledly. While she probably could fight all of them at once, she knew that if she stayed, then even more guards would come, and she didn't really want to deal with that.

Quickly slipping her dagger back into its hiding place, Shoat darted into the gawking crowds. With there being as many people as there were, it didn't take much effort to hide among them, and she knew that the guards would get tired of searching long before they found her.

Taking only one last glance back at the guards, Shoat turned about and disappeared into the crowd.

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Chapter 2
Stupid, stupid, stupid Shoat thought angrily to herself as she slipped through the crowd. After leaving the guards behind to tend their wounded comrades, Shoat had immediately been struck by the recklessness of her actions.

And their stupidity, she thought bitterly.

To start off with, even just walking out into the city could have been considered a bad move. After all, why just walk out into a place that she had no clue about the rules of when she could have just climbed up onto a roof and watched from there?

And then, you had the guards. Why in the names of every god and Neverborn did she feel the need to antagonize them? She could have just ran away, and there was no way they could have caught her even if they wanted to. Which they probably didn't, considering how they acted. But noooo, instead she felt the need to all but stroll up to them, all from a desire to see how far they would be willing to go. And then to straight up attack them… she wouldn't have survived a minute in the Mound if she had acted as foolishly as this.

Shoat shook her head. If she really wanted to know more about the guards, then she should have just watched them from a distance. Now, she would almost certainly have a bounty on her by the end of the day, assuming she didn't already.

And she hadn't even spent a day here!

Shoat allowed a sigh to pass from her lips. Well, whatever. Not much she could do about it now, she'd just have to be more careful.

Now, the next step would be finding a place to stay. That was going to be an… interesting experience, so to speak. Sadly, she doubted she would be able to find an inn willing to take her. Even if she hadn't just likely killed a guard, she didn't have any money. At least, she didn't think she did. She didn't actually know what people around here used as currency.

Well, if the people here value knives, then I'm pretty well off, she thought with a snort.

She doubted she'd be that lucky.

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Shoat woke up to the sound of shouting. Without thinking, she immediately jumped to her feet, her heart pounding as she drew a knife with each hand.

She stood there for a moment, completely still, waiting for something to happen. Eventually, after confirming that the shouting was not coming closer, she let herself relax. With a sigh, she sheathed her blades and heavily sat back down on her makeshift bed.
She had been lucky to find this place, she thought. Whether it had been due to mismanagement or something else, a few of the brick buildings had been built in such a way that they completely enclosed a sort-of alley-like place. Shoat only saw it because she was on top of one of said buildings, which was also the only way to access it.

The alley was protected from both the wind and more importantly, people. Shoat had taken one look at it and immediately knew it was perfect.

Unfortunately, the buildings did not prevent sound from getting in, an issue that Shoat was only realizing the implications of now.

Now, she had two options. Option one: she went back to sleep, or more likely, tried to go back to sleep in spite of the noise. Having already struggled to sleep the first time around, doing it again, this time surrounded by infuriating noises seemed rather unappealing.

Option two of course was to get up to see who was causing the noise, and if at all possible, get them to stop.

Option two it was then. Taking only a moment to hide her makeshift bed, she quickly began to scale the same wall she had used to enter the alley in the first place. Once she was on the roof, she slowly crept over to the edge, her Essence aided eyes and ears easily finding the group responsible for waking her.

The group in question was rather uninteresting, mostly seeming to just be a group of unsavory looking men; criminals most likely. Only two people in the group interested her at all; one a shirtless man wearing a white tiger mask, and a woman wearing some sort of cage-like mask along with a pair of sickle-like weapons on her waist.

Likely the leaders of the group, Shoat thought to herself. Deciding to hold off on attacking, she contented herself with just watching them for now.

Suddenly, the woman's head slightly jerked up, and her hands strayed for her weapons. Then, she paused, and seemed to relax. Shoat's eyes narrowed. She knows I'm here. Dragon-Blooded maybe? For all her cruelty, the Dowager had made sure that her greatest weapon knew her likely foes like the back of her hand, and the Princes of the Earth were among the greatest of those enemies.

Despite herself, Shoat felt her lips twitch upwards. She didn't have much experience with Dragon-Bloods; the only time she had faced one was when the Dowager had sent her to assassinate some merchant. She hadn't known why the Dowager wanted the man dead, and she didn't dare ask, though she harboured the suspicion that the whole thing was actually some sort of elaborate test.

As it turned out, the merchant had had a bodyguard; an outcaste Dragon-Blood, who had been clearly just as surprised to see Shoat as she had been to see them. The resulting battle was short and bloody, as well as being one of the few times Shoat could remember feeling truly happy since entering the Mound. She could still remember the rush she felt as she carved the unfortunate Exalted apart, and the panic on their face as they realized they had found an opponent they could not beat. Even during her worst moments, those memories never failed to at least slightly cheer her up.

Sadly, said fun did not extend to carrying back their head.

Well, I'm always interested in making new memories, Shoat thought as she unsheathed her blades.

Suddenly, the masked man swung around towards her, swinging his hand as if throwing something. Rather than any object however, a strange shimmer came hurtling from his hand, like claw marks in the air itself.

Thinking quickly, Shoat leapt from her position, her feet skidding as she slid down the side of the building. Behind her, there was a loud boom, as if something had exploded.

Shoat winced. I better make sure to avoid those. Her lips curled upwards. Well, at least this should be interesting. With a flick of her wrist, she tossed one of her knives at the group

Arcing through the air, the knife's first target was the woman, who barely managed to get one of her weapons in position to block it. Sliding off with a hiss, the knife looped around to its second target; the tiger-masked man. This time the knife found its target, cutting deep into his chest. It would have gone into his throat, but he recoiled at the last minute, conjuring a blast of wind to throw the knife off its course. Undeterred the knife continued on, slicing its way through the remainder of the group. Shoat suppressed a smile as she saw several of the other men fall, most clutching their throats.

Quickly moving into the cover of darkness, Shoat took a second to observe the group further.

Most of the group was still panicking, with some waving their firewands in ways that really didn't seem safe, and others doing their best to help those that had been hit with her first attack. Only the woman seemed to have been able to track her, likely using whatever it was that allowed her to find Shoat in the first place.

Calmly drawing another knife, Shoat took only a second more to watch her target. Then, she lunged forward, moving towards the Dragon-Blood at a seemingly impossible speed.

Moving surprisingly quickly, the woman raised her own blades, and Shoat's first strike bounced off with a loud clink. With her weapons already raised, the woman swung both of them down towards Shoat's head.
Deftly sidestepping her swing, Shoat swung her own blade up, aiming to cut through the woman's arm. To her pleasant surprise, the woman dodged as well, evading the blade by only a hair.

The two fighters paused, both reevaluating what they thought they knew about the other. Meanwhile, the rest of the group watched, wanting to intervene, but not able to get a clear shot with Shoat and the woman so close together.

Finally, the masked man seemed to have enough. Muttering something that Shoat suspected was a curse, he dove in, his speed boosted by a current of air. At the same time, the woman dove in, one of her blades swinging down, the other held in reserve.

Rather than try to contest both of them at once, Shoat ducked underneath the woman's swing, throwing out her own halfhearted swing to keep the other blade occupied.

Making sure to keep the woman between herself and the man, Shoat continued to trade blows with the female Terrestrial. Whenever the man tried to move around the woman, or the woman tried to move aside, Shoat would move in sync with them to maintain their position. And while the woman was still putting up a good fight, it was clear she was tiring. Her blows were becoming easier and easier to deflect, while Shoat's own strikes came closer to hitting each time.

Then, it happened. The two fighters moved as one, the woman throwing herself to the side, while the man lunged forwards. Shoat barely had time to block the strike before a massive blow struck her head on, sending her skidding backwards. Thankfully, her fast reflexes had prevented her from being injured, but now she had a new problem. Before, the close proximity of the fight had prevented the rest of the group from using their firewands. Now however, there was no such deterrent, and from how the men were pointing their weapons, they had realized the same thing.

Suddenly, all of the men jerked as if they had been struck. Continuing to flail wildly as if they were puppets being controlled by a particularly bad ventriloquist, the men collapsed to the ground, their weapons still gripped tightly in their hands.

Shoat and the two Terrestrials paused for a moment, all three of them equally confused. Shoat recovered first. Moving like a shadowy wave, she darted across the distance separating them and slashed up at the man.

The male Terrestrial recovered just in time to deflect her strike with a burst of wind, but Shoat had expected that. With her other hand, she stabbed a second knife upwards, aiming for his chest. This blade found its mark, and the man staggered back, blood dripping down his chest.

The woman immediately came to the defense of her wounded comrade, ironically enough standing between him and Shoat. Shoat didn't mind; she seemed more fun to fight anyway.
The two once again traded blows, each one being blocked or otherwise avoided. The woman swung high, and Shoat ducked and swung low. The woman swung down, and Shoat dodged before replying with her own swing.

Finally, the woman, clearly tired, made a mistake. Swinging with one last powerful blow, she misjudged the power of her strike, and overextended. Shoat immediately took advantage, stepping around the blow while making her own strike. The woman tried to pull back, but it was too little, too late, and Shoat's swing cut straight through her wrist, nearly cutting her hand right off.

The woman recoiled back, clutching her wrist with a pained hiss. Taking advantage of her distraction, Shoat lashed out at her knee with a kick. The woman let out another pained yelp as her leg collapsed in from under her, though she somehow managed to avoid falling all the way down.

I can fix that, Shoat thought. Bringing her hand back, Shoat struck the woman in the temple with the pommel of her dagger, sending her crashing to the ground.

With the woman dealt with, Shoat paused to admire her handiwork. The woman was on the ground moaning and clutching her head, while the masked man seemed to be trying to both stem the bleeding from his chest wound and stand up to continue the fight.

A quick kick to the head put a stop to that.

Shoat sighed. To be honest, she was somewhat disappointed. She had hoped that the two Dragon-Bloods would have put up more of a fight, but other than that one blow that had forced her back, not much had really threatened her. In fact, the one Outcaste she had fought for the Dowager had put up more of a fight than these two. For Heaven's sake, they didn't even manage to make her Caste Mark show!

She frowned. Were they Dragon-Bloods? Their wind manipulation and senses made her want to say yes, but in hindsight, neither of them had demonstrated much in the way of other abilities.

Well, in any case, it seemed that mystery would have to remain unsolved for now. With a shrug, she began to reach down for a knife to finish them off.

Suddenly, she heard the noise of someone speaking coming from right behind her. Whirling around, Shoat found herself looking at… well, she wasn't quite sure how to describe it. The closest thing that came to mind was some sort of insect, though she wasn't aware of any insects with two arms and legs.

Or insects with long hair.

The odd figure raised its hands in a placating manner and took a step backwards. Idly, Shaot nodded that its footsteps were completely silent, which was probably how it had snuck up on her. It spoke again, this time in a questioning tone.

Shoat wanted to sigh. Of course this being would also speak the same cursed language as everyone else here. "Can you understand me?" she tried, more out of frustration than expectation that it would work.

From the way the entity cocked its head to the side, it could not in fact understand her. Shoat sighed.

Wait, she thought, remembering the way the other men had fallen. Pointing at them, she looked back to the entity and cocked her head to the side. Even with the language barrier, she was pretty sure the message was clear. Did you do this?

The entity's gaze followed her hand, before it looked back at her. Slowly, it began to nod.

Alright, that's something at least, Shoat thought. She wanted to ask why it had gotten involved, but she doubted she would be able to ask that with just pointing and head movements.

We're going to be here for a while, Shoat thought tiredly.

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Thank you for reading!
 
They did attack first.

I assume the guys she ran into first were actually cops, I wonder why there were so many in that area at that point. Big screw up to try to grab the unknown who clearly didn't understand, especially in a world where Case 53 is a thing.
 
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