Exaltation of a Scarecrow (Exalted/Naruto)

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A superweapon grafts itself onto the soul of a young, traumatized Kakashi. Surely this will make things better.
Death and a Second Breath
The house is dark. An inchoate sense of foreboding fills him and Kakashi's feet slow to a stop on white sand and smooth, pebbled stone. Winter is nearly over, the sakura trees coat a well-manicured lawn with petals of pale pink. Decorative stones hide pristine snow in deep shadows. Everything is as it should be. Except. The house is dark.

His father had returned home weeks ago, somehow smaller than when he had left, but he had come back and that was all that ever mattered. The house was never dark when he was home. Had he left again? On a mission? Without saying anything? No, it wasn't that. He had heard the whispers when trailing his father to the market one day. Words like traitor, and disgrace, and worse. After that day, his father had done the shopping alone. Some days at least. Other days, his father would lay in bed from sunrise to sunset. Kakashi had learned to recognize those days quickly, days when there wouldn't be anything for dinner. On worse days, darkness would hang like a cloud around the house and Kakashi would know with a bone-deep certainty that he needed to leave.

Even on the worst of the worst days, when screaming and shattered pottery sent him fleeing, the house was never dark. Foreboding settles deep in his stomach, turning to dread and Kakashi tries to force his feet to move. Tries, and fails. He breathes, a choked off, desperate sound, channels chakra, and tells himself that a shinobi is always brave. It doesn't help. Fear claws at the back of his skull, a hot, tingling sensation that flows down into his stomach and back in a nauseating cycle. Kakashi breathes again. Masters himself, masters his fear, masters his dread, and takes a single hesitant step forward. And then another. And another, until soft-soled shoes whisper against polished wood.

The metal doorknob feels cold under his hand as he moves, by instinct more than thought. The front door, dark wood set with the crosshatched symbol of the Hatake, swings open. Uncertainty fades with the smell of blood, with the smell of meat left too long in the sun. Dread rises and a voice screams in the back of his head. After a time he recognizes that voice as his own. His jaws snap shut and he does the bravest, most foolish thing he could ever imagine doing. He steps forward. Pauses briefly to set his shoes in their place and put on slippers and steps forward again.

Blood calls with clarion notes and his feet trace the well-worn path to the deck overlooking a close cut grass and a single maple tree. A memorial to his mother. His head feels stuffed with cotton. It floats alongside his body like a balloon. Numb. He looks down on the sight he had somehow known he would see. After all, the house was never dark with his father there to provide his light.

Dull, dark brown eyes look at the Maple tree where his mother had been buried. Look down at the... Look down at his father. He moves. Small hands wrap around the hilt of a blood-covered blade. He moves again. Stands in the dappled shade cast by that maple and digs with the sword into the cold earth.

Soon, far too soon the hole is finished. Kakashi floats alongside his body as it drags his father's body to its final resting place. White robes, white hair, all stained crimson lie at the bottom of the grave and Kakashi returns to himself.

"Why?" the word whispers out of him, chokes him with despair and his knees bang heavily against the ground as he collapses.

In a thousand iterations, that question is never answered and a young shinobi is left to go forth and make the best this of life that he can. This iteration is different. This time, a shard of infinite potential, cast through time and space, cast beyond Creation itself floats down to gently land on his soul.

A warm hand brushes lank white hair from his eyes, and Kakashi looks up into the Sun. "There is never an answer for sorrow, young one. All that we are is but a light shining against the void."

[] "If father had just let them…" he trails off not able to say the words, but knowing them for true. "If he had followed the Rules, he would still be here today." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy for upholding the Shinobi Rules)

[] "If they had just been stronger," he scowls, eyes fierce, burning, "if they hadn't been so weak. My father wouldn't have had to save them." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy hating weakness in those he relies on.)

[] "If this is the pain that comes from caring…" his face twists and his eyes burn, "then maybe it's better not to care at all." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy in rejecting the bonds that form with others.)

The words echo as though a pronouncement, echo in Kakashi's ears as though carved into bone-deep into his soul. The Sun nods, four hands clasped together as He studies him. A single hand unfolds and reaches forward, brushing glowing fingertips onto Kakashi's forehead.

[] Dawn engulfs Kakashi, radiating in shades of gold and red and violet. An eight-pointed star glows on his forehead, and sunlight burns in his muscles, incinerating dross. (Kakashi has taijutsu (martial arts) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on physique, then social, and finally mental)

[] Midnight expands, enveloping him in the welcoming safety of darkness. An empty golden circle glows on his forehead, and the paths of his thoughts twist and turn, becoming infinitely complex. (Kakashi has genjutsu (presence) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on social, then mental, and finally physique.)

[] Dusk engulfs Kakashi, bathing him in cooling shades of red and blue and gold. A golden circle, filled on the top and empty on the bottom glows on his forehead, and the five elements coil in his stomach. (Kakashi has ninjutsu (occult) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on mental, then physique, and finally social)

[A/N] Welcome to an homage to my favorite anime character and Exalted 3E. We'll stay pretty close to the core rules and mechanics of the game and graft on Jutsu etc. as necessary. Character creation will occur over the next few chapters as you all have a chance to vote on various a mix of general themes and specific abilities.

With regards to the timeline: Kakashi's father died at some indeterminate point while Kakashi was in the Academy when Kakashi was probably between 4 and 5 years old.

With regards to canon: a lot of things will probably change as a result of Kakashi's exaltation so don't rely too much on it. I don't know how much I'll use from the 4th shinobi war, some of it gets a bit silly. On the other hand, that's over twenty years in the future from the point now.
 
Character Sheet
Name: Hatake Kakashi
Aliases: None
Exaltation: Solar
Caste:
Twilight
Anima: ???

    • Kakashi is an Academy student, an avowed prodigy, and first in his class at taijutsu, ninjutsu, and genjutsu as well as basic academic studies.

      Bloodline: Hatake White Chakra
      Latent

      Intimacies
      Defining

      Kakashi hates weakness in those he has to rely on.

      Major
      Kakashi idolizes his father and hates the attempts to diminish his legacy.

      Relationships
      Orochimaru
      : ●○○○○
      Orochimaru is intrigued by Kakashi's abilities, though he does occasionally wonder at how good a test subject his apprentice would make

      Hiruzen Sarutobi: ●○○○○
      the Third Hokage is somewhere between curious and concerned by the relationship between Orochimaru and Kakashi. He has vowed to keep an eye on the two of them.

      Motivation
      Kakashi dreams of becoming the strongest shinobi ever. Of growing so strong that he never needs to rely on anyone
    • ESSENCE: ●○○○○

      MOTES
      Personal 13/13
      Peripheral 33/33

      CHAKRA
      Chakra: 40

      WILLPOWER:
      Temporary: ●●●●● ○○○○○
      Permanent: ●●●●● ○○○○○

      HEALTH LEVELS:
      - 0 [ ]
      - 1 [ ] [ ]
      - 2 [ ] [ ]
      - 4 [ ]
      - IN [ ]

      VIRTUE FLAW
      Virtue Flaw:
      Limit Break:
      Duration:
      Condition:

      LIMIT
      ○○○○○ ○○○○○
    • Equipment
      Blue Jade Daiklave, Artifact (●●●)
      Accuracy Dice Bonus: 5
      Damage Dice Bonus: 10
      Minimum Damage: 3

      Evocations:

      Shimmering Crescent Cut

      Locked

      Silver Wave Slash
      Locked

      Chakra Piercing Strike
      Locked

      Hearthstone (1):
      Empty

      Inventory

      Currency

      Ryo (●●●○○)
    • ATTRIBUTES

      Mental (Primary)

      Perception ●●●●●
      Intelligence ●●●○○
      Wits ●●●○○

      Physical (Secondary)
      Strength ●○○○○
      Dexterity ●●●●●
      Stamina ●●●○○

      Social (Tertiary)
      Charisma ●●○○○
      Manipulation ●●●○○
      Appearance ●●○○○

      Chakra
      Chakra Potency ●○○○○ ○○○○○
      Chakra Control ●●○○○ ○○○○○
    • Supernal Ability
      Ninjutsu ●●●○○ (Affinity of the Five Elements: (●○○○○))

      Exalted Abilities (Caste)
      Bureaucracy ●○○○○
      Craft ●○○○○
      Integrity ●○○○○
      Investigation ●○○○○
      Linguistics ●○○○○
      Lore ●●●○○
      Medicine ●○○○○

      Exalted Abilities
      Athletics ○○○○○
      Awareness ●●●○○ Scent based Recognition: (●○○○○)
      Dodge ●●●○○

      Larceny ○○○○○
      Resistance ●●○○○
      Ride ○○○○○
      Sail ○○○○○
      Socialize ○○○○○
      Stealth ●●●○○
      Survival ●●●○○

      War ○○○○○

      Shinobi Abilities
      Bukijutsu ○○○○○
      Genjutsu ○○○○○
      Fuinjutsu ○○○○○
      Taijutsu ●●●○○ Hatake Taijutsu Style: (●○○○○)

      Favored Abilities in Yellow


      Melee is replaced by bukijutsu and taijutsu
      Archery and thrown are replaced by bukijutsu
      Presence is replaced by genjutsu
      Occult is replaced by ninjutsu
      Brawl and martial arts are replaced by taijutsu
    • Eidetic Memory (●●)
      Kakashi has perfect recall of events that happened previously. Attempting to replicate a Jutsu or other technique he has seen previously receives 1 bonus dice to that learning check.

      Fleet of Foot (●●●)
      Kakashi is impressively fast and agile and he receives 1 bonus dice on all taijutsu and ninjutsu combat rolls.

      Danger Sense (●●)
      Kakashi enjoys an extraordinarily fine-tuned sense for danger and he receives 1 bonus die on all rolls to detect danger.
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      Mentor (●●●)
      Kakashi has gained the support of the Sannin Orochimaru as a mentor.

      Master of Elements: (●●●●●)
      Kakashi learns and masters elemental ninjutsu extremely easily and receives 2 automatic successes to both rolls.
    • Stealth
      Cost: 3m; Mins: Stealth 3, Essence 1
      Type: Simple
      Keywords: None
      Duration: One scene
      Prerequisite Charms: None
      The Lawgiver evades detection by hiding in plain sight. A Solar with this Charm is able to drift unnoticed through crowds or alone. This Charm models her talent for blending in and remaining unobtrusive. When active, characters cannot notice her unless she takes overt action. Such actions include any display of prowess—leaping from the street to the rooftops, braving a snowstorm in summer clothes, etc. Join Battle always counts as an overt action. This skill does not work against alert* guards or those who intend to stop everyone (as with a checkpoint), but can be overcome by magic only if the user has a Minor or greater Intimacy to the Solar or a Major or Defining Intimacy to a cause the Exalt's presence directly threatens. Certain Charms may aid in detecting the Exalt. Roll the Lawgiver's ([Wits or Dexterity] + Stealth) against her opponent's relevant (Attribute + Ability) or Resolve, if the attacking Charm is based on the opponent's Integrity

      *Since the 3E rulebook doesn't define alert in any context, for the purposes of this charm alert refers only to individuals at a heightened state of readiness (e.g. the Hokage's guards can be considered always alert, as well as shinobi in unsafe areas). This explicitly does not include guards performing mundane and regular guard duty.
    • Substitution Jutsu (Mastered)
      Cost: 1
      Difficulty: 1
      Pre-Reqs: None
      Type: Ninjutsu
      The user replaces themselves with a similarly sized an object weighing from one-tenth to five times what the user does in the immediate vicinity. Can substitute living objects when the combined (2 * Essence + Chakra Control) is greater than the object to be transported.

      Transformation Jutsu (Mastered)
      Cost: 1
      Difficulty: 1
      Pre-Reqs: None
      Type: Ninjutsu
      The user can transform into another shape. The transformation includes both physical and chakra and is physical provides a 3 die bonus 2 automatic successes to attempts at stealth against anyone with awareness (●●○○○) or less 2 dots or more less than the user's stealth plus applicable specialties

      Clone Jutsu (Mastered)
      Cost: 1
      Difficulty: 1
      Pre-Reqs: None
      Type: Ninjutsu
      The user can create illusory clones in an area around them. The clones provide a 1 3 die bonus to defense rolls against anyone with awareness (●●●○○) or less
    • Hatake Taijutsu Style (●○○○○)
      Provides 1 automatic success when in taijutsu combat against an opponent without a martial arts specialty.
 
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Mechanics

    • Each Jutsu has the following format:

      Example Jutsu
      Cost:
      Difficulty: 1
      Pre-Reqs:
      Type: Ninjutsu
      Jutsu Description

      Cost
      describes the chakra cost to use a Jutsu, either per use, per scene, or per unit time

      Difficulty
      describes the number of successes needed to learn a particular Jutsu

      Type
      Defines which ability is used to learn and to cast a particular Jutsu

      Description
      Provides a general description of the Jutsu as well as any limits of effectiveness.
    • Trainers and Scrolls
      Learning a Jutsu requires either a scroll or a trainer. Learning Jutsu from a scroll has a difficulty modifier of +1 to +5 depending upon the scroll. Learning from a trainer likewise has a difficulty modifier of -1 to -5 depending upon the skill of the trainer. A Jutsu can never be reduced below a difficulty of 1

      Base Difficulty
      E-Rank: 1
      D-Rank: 2
      C-Rank: 3
      B-Rank: 5
      A-Rank: 8
      S-Rank: >8

      Learning Rolls
      Learning a new Jutsu requires a number of successes greater than the modified difficulty of the Jutsu with the following formula:
      (Chakra Control) + (Ninjutsu/Genjutsu/Taijutsu/Bukijutsu) + (Essence)

      Mastering Jutsu
      Jutsu of may be mastered when learned if the number of successes exceeds the Base Difficulty of learning that Jutsu by >3. Jutsu may also be mastered specifically by training them, only one attempt at mastery may be made. Mastered Jutsu are altered on thematic grounds to be more powerful or more broadly applicable.
    • Fuinjutsu can be learned as techniques as per the rules for learning all other Jutsu. Fuinjutsu may also be learned as components and then combined to create unique effects.

      Finding Components: Trainers and Scrolls
      Components of a seal may be learned from a scroll specifically written for that purpose or from a trainer with the same modifiers as regular Jutsu.

      Finding Components: Research
      Researching a component from a completed fuinjutsu requires a number of successes greater than the difficulty of the whole seal with the following formula:
      (Fuinjutsu) + (Essence)

      Learning Components
      Learning a component of a fuinjutsu requires a number of successes greater than the difficulty of the component with the following formula:
      (Craft) + (Fuinjutsu) + (Essence)

      Creating Custom Seals
      Components may be combined to create custom seals when the combined difficulty of the components is < (Fuinjutsu + Essence)
    • Chakra Reserves
      Kakashi has access to an amount of chakra according to the following formula (A truly monstrous shinobi would have chakra reserves > 200):
      Essence*10*(Bloodline + Stamina + Chakra Potency + Other Bonuses)

      Chakra Potency
      Defines how dense or how easily chakra flows through an individual's network.

      Chakra Control
      Defines how easily chakra is manipulated either externally or internally to manifest a Jutsu or other enhancement.

      Jutsu Cost
      Jutsu have a cost according to the following formula
      (Base Difficulty - Chakra Control)*10 (minimum of 1)

  • Earning XP
    XP is earned and awarded per story arc with bonuses being granted for insightful thread commentary and creative use of write-ins.

    Spending XP
    XP is spent as per the 3E rulebook, relevant portion excerpted below:

    Attribute increase = Current Rating * 4
    Non-Caste Favored Ability = Current Rating * 2
    Caste Favored Ability = (Current Rating * 2) - 1
    Supernal Ability = (Current Rating * 2) - 2
    New Ability = 3
    Speciality = 3
    New Merit = Rating * 3
    Willpower = 8
    Solar Charm = 10 (8 if caste or favored ability)
 
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I am assuming we can post right?
Edit: question will there be other exalted?

Edit2: Midnight means Night caste right not an Abyssals or am I mistaken and it a homebrew?
 
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[X] "If father had just let them…" he trails off not able to say the words, but knowing them for true. "If he had followed the Rules, he would still be here today." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy for upholding the Shinobi Rules)

[X] Midnight expands, enveloping him in the welcoming safety of darkness. An empty golden circle glows on his forehead, and the paths of his thoughts twist and turn, becoming infinitely complex. (Kakashi has genjutsu (presence) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on social, then mental, and finally physique.)
 
[X] "If father had just let them…" he trails off not able to say the words, but knowing them for true. "If he had followed the Rules, he would still be here today." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy for upholding the Shinobi Rules)

[X] Midnight expands, enveloping him in the welcoming safety of darkness. An empty golden circle glows on his forehead, and the paths of his thoughts twist and turn, becoming infinitely complex. (Kakashi has genjutsu (presence) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on social, then mental, and finally physique.)
 
[X] "If father had just let them…" he trails off not able to say the words, but knowing them for true. "If he had followed the Rules, he would still be here today." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy for upholding the Shinobi Rules)

[X] Midnight expands, enveloping him in the welcoming safety of darkness. An empty golden circle glows on his forehead, and the paths of his thoughts twist and turn, becoming infinitely complex. (Kakashi has genjutsu (presence) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on social, then mental, and finally physique.)
 
[X] "If they had just been stronger," he scowls, eyes fierce, burning, "if they hadn't been so weak. My father wouldn't have had to save them." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy hating weakness in those he relies on.)


[X] Dawn engulfs Kakashi, radiating in shades of gold and red and violet. An eight-pointed star glows on his forehead, and sunlight burns in his muscles, incinerating dross. (Kakashi has taijutsu (martial arts) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on physique, then social, and finally mental)

Weakness can be trained away and with the charms dawns can get training people can be fast and easy plus exalted martial arts are op

I think it's called tiger soldier or something either way you can make anyone not an exalt near human max real quick. I think drill sergeant kakashi could be fun lol
 
[X] "If this is the pain that comes from caring…" his face twists and his eyes burn, "then maybe it's better not to care at all." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy in rejecting the bonds that form with others.)

[X] Dusk engulfs Kakashi, bathing him in cooling shades of red and blue and gold. A golden circle, filled on the top and empty on the bottom glows on his forehead, and the five elements coil in his stomach. (Kakashi has ninjutsu (occult) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on mental, then physique, and finally social)

Social dump stat.
 
I am assuming we can post right?
Edit: question will there be other exalted?

Edit2: Midnight means Night caste right not an Abyssals or am I mistaken and it a homebrew?

I don't think so. I think high level shinobi are in general comparable to younger solar exalt, although I won't rule things out entirely.

Yeah, midnight fits thematically better with specific events (Dawn, Dusk, etc.) than night. The choices are all Solar though.
 
[X] "If they had just been stronger," he scowls, eyes fierce, burning, "if they hadn't been so weak. My father wouldn't have had to save them." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy hating weakness in those he relies on.)
[X] Dusk engulfs Kakashi, bathing him in cooling shades of red and blue and gold. A golden circle, filled on the top and empty on the bottom glows on his forehead, and the five elements coil in his stomach. (Kakashi has ninjutsu (occult) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on mental, then physique, and finally social)
 
[X] "If they had just been stronger," he scowls, eyes fierce, burning, "if they hadn't been so weak. My father wouldn't have had to save them." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy hating weakness in those he relies on.)


[X] Dawn engulfs Kakashi, radiating in shades of gold and red and violet. An eight-pointed star glows on his forehead, and sunlight burns in his muscles, incinerating dross. (Kakashi has taijutsu (martial arts) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on physique, then social, and finally mental)
 
[X] "If they had just been stronger," he scowls, eyes fierce, burning, "if they hadn't been so weak. My father wouldn't have had to save them." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy hating weakness in those he relies on.)
[X] Dusk engulfs Kakashi, bathing him in cooling shades of red and blue and gold. A golden circle, filled on the top and empty on the bottom glows on his forehead, and the five elements coil in his stomach. (Kakashi has ninjutsu (occult) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on mental, then physique, and finally social)
 
[X] "If they had just been stronger," he scowls, eyes fierce, burning, "if they hadn't been so weak. My father wouldn't have had to save them." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy hating weakness in those he relies on.)
[X] Dusk engulfs Kakashi, bathing him in cooling shades of red and blue and gold. A golden circle, filled on the top and empty on the bottom glows on his forehead, and the five elements coil in his stomach. (Kakashi has ninjutsu (occult) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on mental, then physique, and finally social)
 
[X] "If this is the pain that comes from caring…" his face twists and his eyes burn, "then maybe it's better not to care at all." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy in rejecting the bonds that form with others.)

[X] Dusk engulfs Kakashi, bathing him in cooling shades of red and blue and gold. A golden circle, filled on the top and empty on the bottom glows on his forehead, and the five elements coil in his stomach. (Kakashi has ninjutsu (occult) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on mental, then physique, and finally social)
 
[X] "If they had just been stronger," he scowls, eyes fierce, burning, "if they hadn't been so weak. My father wouldn't have had to save them." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy hating weakness in those he relies on.)
[X] Dusk engulfs Kakashi, bathing him in cooling shades of red and blue and gold. A golden circle, filled on the top and empty on the bottom glows on his forehead, and the five elements coil in his stomach. (Kakashi has ninjutsu (occult) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on mental, then physique, and finally social)
 
[X] "If they had just been stronger," he scowls, eyes fierce, burning, "if they hadn't been so weak. My father wouldn't have had to save them." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy hating weakness in those he relies on.)
[X] Midnight expands, enveloping him in the welcoming safety of darkness. An empty golden circle glows on his forehead, and the paths of his thoughts twist and turn, becoming infinitely complex. (Kakashi has genjutsu (presence) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on social, then mental, and finally physique.)
 
[X] "If father had just let them…" he trails off not able to say the words, but knowing them for true. "If he had followed the Rules, he would still be here today." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy for upholding the Shinobi Rules)
[X] Midnight expands, enveloping him in the welcoming safety of darkness. An empty golden circle glows on his forehead, and the paths of his thoughts twist and turn, becoming infinitely complex. (Kakashi has genjutsu (presence) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on social, then mental, and finally physique.)
 
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[X] "If this is the pain that comes from caring…" his face twists and his eyes burn, "then maybe it's better not to care at all." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy in rejecting the bonds that form with others.)

[X] Dusk engulfs Kakashi, bathing him in cooling shades of red and blue and gold. A golden circle, filled on the top and empty on the bottom glows on his forehead, and the five elements coil in his stomach. (Kakashi has ninjutsu (occult) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on mental, then physique, and finally social)
 
[X] "If this is the pain that comes from caring…" his face twists and his eyes burn, "then maybe it's better not to care at all." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy in rejecting the bonds that form with others.)

[X] Dusk engulfs Kakashi, bathing him in cooling shades of red and blue and gold. A golden circle, filled on the top and empty on the bottom glows on his forehead, and the five elements coil in his stomach. (Kakashi has ninjutsu (occult) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on mental, then physique, and finally social)

Young kakashi solar? It can work!
 
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Adhoc vote count started by dmclain2 on Aug 11, 2020 at 7:42 PM, finished with 18 posts and 14 votes.

  • [X] "If they had just been stronger," he scowls, eyes fierce, burning, "if they hadn't been so weak. My father wouldn't have had to save them." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy hating weakness in those he relies on.)
    [X] Dusk engulfs Kakashi, bathing him in cooling shades of red and blue and gold. A golden circle, filled on the top and empty on the bottom glows on his forehead, and the five elements coil in his stomach. (Kakashi has ninjutsu (occult) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on mental, then physique, and finally social)
    [X] Midnight expands, enveloping him in the welcoming safety of darkness. An empty golden circle glows on his forehead, and the paths of his thoughts twist and turn, becoming infinitely complex. (Kakashi has genjutsu (presence) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on social, then mental, and finally physique.)
    [X] "If father had just let them…" he trails off not able to say the words, but knowing them for true. "If he had followed the Rules, he would still be here today." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy for upholding the Shinobi Rules)
    [X] "If this is the pain that comes from caring…" his face twists and his eyes burn, "then maybe it's better not to care at all." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy in rejecting the bonds that form with others.)
    [X] Dawn engulfs Kakashi, radiating in shades of gold and red and violet. An eight-pointed star glows on his forehead, and sunlight burns in his muscles, incinerating dross. (Kakashi has taijutsu (martial arts) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on physique, then social, and finally mental)
 
[X] "If they had just been stronger," he scowls, eyes fierce, burning, "if they hadn't been so weak. My father wouldn't have had to save them." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy hating weakness in those he relies on.)

[X] Dusk engulfs Kakashi, bathing him in cooling shades of red and blue and gold. A golden circle, filled on the top and empty on the bottom glows on his forehead, and the five elements coil in his stomach. (Kakashi has ninjutsu (occult) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on mental, then physique, and finally social)
 
[X] "If they had just been stronger," he scowls, eyes fierce, burning, "if they hadn't been so weak. My father wouldn't have had to save them." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy hating weakness in those he relies on.)
 
I'll close it here. Looks like Kakashi's going to be a twilight caste, and probably have some real difficulty with teammates.

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Adhoc vote count started by dmclain2 on Aug 12, 2020 at 11:46 AM, finished with 22 posts and 17 votes.

  • [X] "If they had just been stronger," he scowls, eyes fierce, burning, "if they hadn't been so weak. My father wouldn't have had to save them." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy hating weakness in those he relies on.)
    [X] Dusk engulfs Kakashi, bathing him in cooling shades of red and blue and gold. A golden circle, filled on the top and empty on the bottom glows on his forehead, and the five elements coil in his stomach. (Kakashi has ninjutsu (occult) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on mental, then physique, and finally social)
    [X] Midnight expands, enveloping him in the welcoming safety of darkness. An empty golden circle glows on his forehead, and the paths of his thoughts twist and turn, becoming infinitely complex. (Kakashi has genjutsu (presence) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on social, then mental, and finally physique.)
    [X] "If father had just let them…" he trails off not able to say the words, but knowing them for true. "If he had followed the Rules, he would still be here today." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy for upholding the Shinobi Rules)
    [X] "If this is the pain that comes from caring…" his face twists and his eyes burn, "then maybe it's better not to care at all." (Kakashi gains a defining intimacy in rejecting the bonds that form with others.)
    [X] Dawn engulfs Kakashi, radiating in shades of gold and red and violet. An eight-pointed star glows on his forehead, and sunlight burns in his muscles, incinerating dross. (Kakashi has taijutsu (martial arts) as his supernal ability. His primary focus is on physique, then social, and finally mental)
 
A Visit
These next few chapters will involve a mix of voting on specific items (merits for this chapter) or selecting from pre-formed options.

Some abilities will reveal themselves as well as appropriate.

This style of character creation is something of an experiment for me since I'm trying to find a way to avoid overloading a vote with all the 3E character options. Feel free to say if it's confusing, or not working, or whatever.

The dawn rises cold and pale as Kakashi sleeps under thin blankets. Eyes crusted with dried tears and sleep blink open. He sits up, shivers once, and breathes out, a mist of white condensation. Why was it so cold? The thought muddles around his head for a moment until, Oh, it wasn't a dream. His heart clenches and his chest tightens, but his eyes remain dry. He had cried all of his tears last night in front of a four-armed Sun.

Stealth test, difficulty 3
Stealth (3) + Dexterity (5) = 8 dice
Rolled 8d10: 10 06 04 08 08 05 03 09 = 5 successes

28 Ability Points - 8 (Caste Abilities) - 3 (Stealth) = 17

His feet slap lightly on cold, polished wood as he stands up, still wearing yesterday's clothes. For a long moment, he simply stands, suddenly unsure and apathetic. Kakashi thinks of his father then. He thinks of the fugue the man would lapse into some mornings when his father couldn't muster the energy to get out of bed. That sad thought sets him moving and he leaves his bedroom. Bare feet slip silently over floors set to sing at the slightest pressure.

Kakashi pauses foot raised in midstep and frowns. He had never been able to avoid tripping that third plank. Curiosity bubbles within him, and his hips twists, and he leaps. His planted foot spinning up in a wheel kick which arcs through the space where an adult's head would be. Completing the wheel kick, he lands, still without sound, and frowns again.

Taijutsu test, difficulty 2
Taijutsu (Martial Arts) (3) + Dexterity (5) = 8 dice
Rolled 8d10: 09 02 06 01 03 08 04 02 = 2 successes

Martial Arts test, difficulty 5
Rolled 8d10: 05 10 10 02 04 02 06 07 = 5 successes
Unlocked: Taijutsu Specialty Hatake Taijutsu Style (●○○○○)
Provides 1 automatic success when in taijutsu combat against an opponent without a taijutsu specialty.

17 Ability Points - 3 (Taijutsu) = 14

His left foot sweeps out in a low strike, and his whole body twists, bringing his right foot around and up. Two quick open-handed strikes, first to throat and then torso follow and Kakashi flows through the basic kata of the Hatake Taijutsu. Memory flashes with crystalline clarity a memory of his father, limbs flashing through a kata faster than his young eyes could follow. Only, now, in memory, he could. Each move plays in his memory and his feet shift.

[Eidetic Memory (●●) - 8 merit points remaining]

Gone were the rigid strikes that characterize the Basic Hatake Taijutsu. Kakashi moves as though water, with the grace of a flowing stream and the force of a waterfall crashing down. He dances with the memory of his father, burning it into searing perfection and feels alive again. The kata finishes with a swinging downward kick, designed to crush the ribcage of a downed foe. Through it all the floorboards remain silent.

Something was different, something had changed. Kakashi knew what the Academy instructors call him, what others call him. Prodigy. He knew the limits of his own abilities. Had known them, at least. Looking inward, he reaches with invisible fingers toward a bonfire raging in his soul and pokes.

Color spills out. Whirling shades of red and yellow and purple illuminate the hallway, and a warmth grows on his forehead. Pushing harder, Light blazes around him, rising in wisps of sunlight off his skin and casting everything around him in brilliant gold. Kakashi grins briefly, sorrow buried under the joyous feelings that burn through his veins. He nearly laughs at a brief, incongruous, thought that floats through his mind. How am I supposed to sneak around with this? Understanding, somewhat distantly, the seductive nature of the power that flowed through him, he pulls back. The comforting warmth of the sun fades from around him and sadness returns, but lessened, muted.

Fully awake now, Kakashi drifts toward the kitchen, hoping there would be food, and fearing there wouldn't. Cabinets open and bang shut, dozens of them, until finally Kakashi admits defeat. Coins jingle faintly in a small leather pouch as he bounces it in his hand. Enough for breakfast? Opening the pouch, he sighs, 10 ryo. Enough to get a steamed bun, but nothing more. Hardly enough for a full day.

As he ponders whether he could make it through the day without eating or trying to hunt down some of the deer that wander throughout the forested areas around Konoha, the seals on the front door chime, announcing a visitor.

[Mentor (●●●) - 5 merit points remaining]

[] A younger blond-haired man stands politely at the door, grinning easily, "Is Sakumo-sama here? I wanted to speak with your father about some things." (Kakashi gains Namikaze Minato as a mentor.)

[] A spiky, white-haired man with red marks lining his face staggers slightly, holding a brown jug, and calls past you, "Sakumo you old goat, come on out, I've got some Honjozo that I don't want to finish by myself." (Kakashi gains Jiraiya as a mentor.)

[] A man with long dark hair looks down at you, "you are the new prodigy Kakashi-kun?" He eyes you solemnly, "has something happened?" (Kakashi gains Orochimaru as a mentor)


Approval voting is in effect for voting on merits. You have 5 points left to spend, and the top votes that hit that number will win. Thus if first place is 3 points, second place is 3, and third place is 2 then the first and third place choices will win.

[] Boundless Endurance (●●). Kakashi can go for days without rest and he receives 1 bonus die on all rolls to avoid exhaustion or sleep.

[] Danger Sense (●●). Kakashi enjoys an extraordinarily fine-tuned sense for danger and he receives 1 bonus die on all rolls to detect danger.

[] Fast Reflexes (●●●). Kakashi is rarely caught flat-footed and he receives 1 bonus die on all join battle rolls.

[] Fleet of Foot (●●●). Kakashi is impressively fast and agile and he receives 1 bonus dice on all taijutsu and ninjutsu combat rolls.

[] Chameleon (●●●) Kakashi has a supernatural ability to fade into the background. He receives 1 bonus die on all stealth rolls.

[] Enhanced Sense (●●). Kakashi has an enhanced sense and receives 2 bonus die on all rolls involving perception with that sense
-[] write in which sense.

[] Resources (●). Kakashi receives a trust-fund from his father that would allow him to live comfortably until he becomes a genin. (Will be used to fill out the fifth merit point if two (●●) merits are selected.)
 
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