EVA-Trek Behind the Scenes: The Writer's Guide, Part II
Turns out the Writer's Guide maxes out the number of characters in a single post, so I'll have to split it into separate posts.

THE STARSHIP NERV

THE U.S.S. NERV -- NCC-71855

One of the newer vessels of the Galaxy class, a sister ship with the Enterprise. Twice the length of the original starship Enterprise and thus approximately eight times the interior volume. (See cover illustration.) She retains much the same symmetry which includes an engineering module with twin nacelles and, of course, a great saucer-shaped command module. It is the home for over 700 people who live and work there over the course of its mission. (Unlike typical Galaxy-class vessels, the addition of Evangelion support areas in the saucer section reduces the crew and civilian complement.)


The Main Bridge

The COMMAND AREA of our Main Bridge is a semi-circle of control seats where the Captain Ikari, his next-in-command Fuyutsuki, and advisors are located.

On the stage-right side of the Bridge are three duty stations called STARBOARD CONSOLES. These three stations center on sciences, due to the nature of the NERV's missions. From fore to aft, these are:
  • SCIENCE I. Used by researchers, science officer, mission specialists, and the like. Typically manned by Ritsuko whenever she is on bridge duty and during Evangelion operations.
  • SCIENCE II. Additional console to allow researchers to interact with each other. Typically manned by Maya.
  • SCIENCE III. Additional console. Typically un-manned.
The rear of the Bridge has a raised semi-circular area, separated from the Command Area by a railing which is also a set of console stations. This is the TACTICAL CONSOLE. At this position, Aoba plus any necessary assistants are responsible for weaponry, defensive devices (shields, etc.) plus ship's internal security.

The rear wall of the Bridge is an additional set of duty stations called AFT CONSOLES. From left to right (facing aft), these are:
  • SCIENCE IV. Used by researchers, science officer, mission specialists, and the like. Typically unmanned.
  • MISSION OPS. Used to monitor the routine activities of Away Teams. Evangelion operations are monitored at the forward OPS station. Typically manned by Ensign Kitakami.
  • Life support and related environ-mental engineering functions. Typically manned by Lt. Nagara.
  • ENGINEERING I. Supplemental console to com-plement ENGINEERING II. Typically manned by Ensign Tama.
  • ENGINEERING II. This is a double-sized, major bridge station which includes control of matter and anti-matter engines. It is the center of Kaji's engineering functions when he is on the Bridge. It is capable of more than the other aft consoles. No one ever sits here except Kaji.
The stage-left side of the Bridge features three additional duty stations dedicated to Communications and will be typically unmanned except during battle operations. From fore to aft, these are:
  • COMMUNICATIONS I. Primary station for management of external ship's communications. Functions usually assumed by Aoba at Tactical except during battle operations, when these functions are transferred to allow tactical to focus.
  • COMMUNICATIONS II. Back-up station.
  • COMMUNICATIONS III. Back-up station.
Just ahead of this are two FORWARD STATIONS, "OPS" and "CONN" positions.
  • For vessel control and navigation. Usually manned by Hyuga but is occupied by a supernumerary when he's not on the Bridge.
  • Evangelion and vessel operations. Position usually manned by Misato. Occasionally the job will be handled by a supernumerary when Misato is off-duty, on an away mission, or is elsewhere on the ship.
Also on the stage-left side of the Bridge are two Turbolifts and a door leading to the Captain's Ready Room. On the right side of the Bridge is a door leading to the Bridge head and washroom.

Main Viewer

The forward part of the Main Bridge is a large wall-sized holographic "viewer." This Main Viewer is usually on and will dominate the Bridge and the action as the original framed viewscreen could never do.


Observation Lounge

Just behind the Main Bridge is a large Conference Room lined with huge windows facing rearward and giving a spectacular view.


Captain's Ready Room

On the left side of the Main Bridge (facing forward) is a door leading to the Captain's Ready Room. It contains the Captain's private head and washroom.

The Ready Room is intended as a private office for the Captain, offering both a confidential and convenient place to work and rest; but it serves a second and equally important dramatic function: It can be used for personal and private conversations.


Turbolift

The Turbolifts allow our crewmembers to travel vertically and horizontally to any part of the Nerv. The interior is comfortable, relatively spacious cabin eight feet in diameter.

To use the Turbolift, a crewmember simply enters the compartment and speaks their destination aloud. Example: "Sickbay" or "Bridge." The Ship's computer will instantly compute the most direct route and send the Turbolift to the exit nearest the desired destination. Because the ship's computer is constantly monitoring the daily routines of our people (something that really bothers Kaji), there will be many times when it will know exactly where to deliver the Turbolift's passengers without their even having to say (but if it does need instructions it will ask for them).


Ten Forward

A dramatic set, located on Deck Ten-Forward where the star clusters of the Milky Way seem to be rushing in and under the huge window ports. In the 20th Century, it would have been called a bar and lounge and does serve a similar purpose on our Starship except for the fact that alcohol is no longer consumed by humans.

However, Ten-Forward treats the same kinds of needs; i.e., a place to physically relax, conditions where judgement can be relaxed, where reality and dreams mix, where varied beliefs and performance are accepted rather than tested. One thing that helps make this possible is a substance called synthehol which acts much like alcohol when consumed but with effects that can be dismissed from one's consciousness at will.

But Ten-Forward offers more than just that. It is not a duty station but a place where the crew can interact with their friends or meet new ones. We will see non-uniformed people there, but these will usually be crewmembers rather than family members or passengers (who have similar facilities available). Another plus here on this deck is varieties of drink and food taken from the best in the entire quadrant of the galaxy. Now and then we'll see something being served that looks rather spectacular.


Holodeck

On first view, the Holodeck appears to be simply a large, empty set – until its computer magic happens. Then, depending upon what has been programmed in, the Holodeck becomes anything that exists in the starship's vast library memory banks – jet-setting spy adventures, any number of sporting events, film noir private eyes, and so on.

If the Holodeck has a flaw, it may be that it is so rich in story possibilities that the producers must limit its use to three or four times a season in order to keep the subject matter of episodes as broad and varied as the series format deserves.


Sickbay

As in the Original Series, but vastly improved: a three-room complex including the CMO's office, a set of diagnostic beds with complete medical monitoring, and a state-of-the-art medical research facility.


Corridors

Again, as seen in the Original Series, but without the same battleship sterility. The new Corridors are wider and more friendly-looking and (as elsewhere) will include vegetation.

Senior Officer's Quarters

Each person (with notable exceptions) has personal quarters of their own. These quarters are much more spacious and livable than we have seen in the past. Each person's quarters will reflect their own background and tastes. (This will be a standard set, redressed as necessary.)


Junior Officer's Quarters

Slightly more compact than the Senior Officer's layout and also without windows to provide a view outside the ship. Officers below the grade of Commander occupy these still very livable layouts.

Transporter Rooms

There are several Transporter Rooms throughout the vessel. The one we will see most frequently will be an updated version of the original Transporter Room and, as before, a Transporter Chief stands at a separate console opposite the Transporter platform.

Main Engineering

Our Engineering room contains a huge matter/anti-matter blender. It is located near the base of the main module of the ship.


Stellar Cartography

An impressive two-story set featuring a near 360° backdrop display of whatever section of the galaxy that may need to be called into view. At the second level is a catwalk extending to a platform with a control panel in the center of the room where our characters can manipulate star charts and review data.


Jefferies Tube

An angled shaft containing electrical conduits and light-fiber cables, the Jefferies tube is large enough for a human being to crawl through. Jefferies Tubes provide direct access to various parts of the ship's control mechanisms and computer monitoring systems.


Shuttlecraft

The NERV Shuttlecraft are eight-and-a-half meters long, five-and-a-half wide and three meters high. They are comfortable landing vehicles for travel between the ship and a planet when the Transporter is not available or practical to use. The interior of the shuttle can seat eight passengers and two operators comfortably. The passenger would be removed to convert to a cargo or ambulance shuttle. They also have interplanetary capabilities but at a speed of only warp one.


Runabouts

The NERV has multiple Danube-class Runabout patrol ships stationed onboard which allow our characters to travel to numerous star systems in the immediate sector of the ship for longer periods than a shuttlecraft. These ships are twenty meters long, with impulse and warp capabilities, a maximum speed of warp 4.7. They're generally operated by a two-person crew, but a single pilot can control them if necessary. They can transport up to forty people, but that's a crowd. There are cramped, uncomfortable sleeping quarters for six people. A multi-purpose room for meetings and dining is located at the aft section.


Battle Bridge

In extreme emergency situations, the saucer section of the Nerv detaches ("saucer sep") from the warp drive section of the ship in order to seek safety, enabling the Captain and minimum crew to face the danger. Control of the warp section is maintained from the Battle Bridge, a much smaller auxiliary Bridge as compared to the Main Bridge. Like the Main Bridge, there is a Captain's Ready Room adjacent to the Battle Bridge.

Evangelions

40 meters in height, humanoid in general shape, the Starfleet-designed Evangelion-class mobile units are quite like the canon counterpart. They're designed for quicker-reaction close-combat situations against Angels that starships, shuttlecraft, and one-man fighters are just not designed for. Each unit of the Evangelion class are named for cities in Japan. The Nerv will carry three Evas early on in the show's run:

  • USS Tokyo, MU-00. Piloted by Rei Ayanami. The pet project of Dr. Naoko Akagi before her death. MU-00, 01, and 02 were all designed and completed at the Daystrom Institute's Hakone branch. Following the accidents that happened to both doctors Ikari and Soryu, future construction contracts were agreed to be given to other shipyards as Daystrom-Hakone was informally thought to be cursed. A maximum of two Evangelion-class contracts are awarded to each shipyard, up through unit 13.
  • USS Hakone, MU-01. Piloted by Shinji Ikari. Shinji's mother, Dr. Yui Ikari, was the lead designer for the Hakone.
  • USS Kyoto, MU-02. Piloted by Asuka L. Soryu. Kyoko Z. Soryu was the assigned designer and developer for this unit.
Starfleet Evas are generally alike in their design. Only MU-00 has some different detailing as the protype model. The Evas, as is tradition in Starfleet, are a base naval gray in color, with the familiar "Aztec" patterns giving additional detail to the external structure. The major flashes of color will be the yellow denoting the thruster emplacements, robin's egg blue at the external plating hatch, and the familiar red in the typical Starfleet livery of identification logos and registry. The unit's name and registry number are printed on the upper shoulders and on the spinal column assembly below the plating hatch.

Hidden beneath external hull plating in the chest of the Eva is the familiar core, typically referred to as the "AI Core" in the show. The Evangelion lifeform itself is not affected by being in the vacuum of space, so the hull plating does not act as a spacesuit.

Pilots board a specialized entry plug system to connect and synchronize with the core AI of their assigned unit. Entry plugs are approximately 6 meters long and are inserted into the spinal area of the Evangelion via tractor beam. A hatch in the spinal hull plating opens to allow access to the entry plug tract. Once the plug has been seated into the entry tract, it is automatically pulled and locked into position by internal mechanisms. The plating hatch then reseals, adding a further layer of protection for the pilot inside.

The cockpit of the entry plug is designed like shuttlepods – a solitary, faux-leather textured seat with lumbar support and extra cushioning for the pilot's comfort (as well as a harness to keep the pilot safe during high-G maneuvers in battle), and an angular control panel. Behind the pilot are status readouts and emergency function panel for egress as well as isolinear chip access panels. To the pilot's front is a fully three-dimensional viewer that provides the pilot a nearly uninterrupted forward view.

Control of the Evangelion itself is done via neural connectors that are clipped in the pilot's hair. With the advanced technology of Trek's 24th century, there is no need for LCL to be a part of the pilot interface. The pilot handles all physical manipulation of the Eva via thought. Communications, weapons, management of life support are handled through the control panel in front of the pilot seat.

Communications inside the Eva can be done in two forms. In non-battle scenarios, the main viewing screen doubles as a comm screen. During a mission, holographic displays are generated above the control panel so as to not completely obscure the pilot's view. These displays can also show aft and/or oblique views via internal cameras in the Eva's structure. Sound-only communication is also possible through internal speakers in the cockpit.

Pilots board the entry plug from directly above the pilot seat – the orientation of the plug is perpendicular to typical deck plating. Due to the grav-plating in the plug, the occupant will automatically stand on the floor of the plug upon entry. Access to the plug consists of two doors – the inner door slides to the pilot's aft and the outer door slides to the pilot's left.

Evangelions are equipped with standard Starfleet defensive weaponry – phaser strips on the forearms, mini-photon torpedo launchers built into the shoulder/upper chest assembly. RCS thruster emplacements are located in strategic points across the hull plating – rear edges of the shoulder torpedo launcher assembly and the soles of the feet. Main propulsion is provided through an impulse engine integrated with the rear assembly, almost looking like a backpack on a typical Starfleet spacesuit. (NOTE: great care should be taken to ensure that it does not resemble the rocket pack of a Gundam or similar type of mecha. Rather than A.T. Fields, Evas utilize standard Starfleet deflector shields as starships.

The main shuttlebay complex in the Nerv is structured differently from the typical Galaxy-class starship to fit the holding cages and support facilities for the Evangelions. The units are stored standing up in the saucer section and launch from hatches in the dorsal of the saucer. Synchronization testing chambers are just off the shuttlebay. Eva simulations are done in a dedicated holodeck facility nearby to the testing chamber. Initial startup and synchronization testing on the Evas are never done aboard a starship after multiple incidents during the development process showed that the mobile units are safety hazards in enclosed spaces, as Ensign Ayanami can attest.
 
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EVA-Trek Behind the Scenes: The Writer's Guide, Part III
Our main cast:

CHARACTERS - EVANGELION PILOTS



Crewman Shinji Ikari

14, born June 6, 2358. Assigned pilot of MU-01. Son of Captain Gendo Ikari and Dr. Yui Ikari. Following Yui's death in a contact experiment, Gendo tried as best as he could to raise Shinji on his own, but ultimately, he was too broken of a man and too focused on his career as a Starfleet officer. Shinji was sent to live with his paternal grandparents on Earth. In the subsequent years since then, there's only been the sporadic communications and visits when Gendo was near Earth or for birthdays. The relationship between father and son is a bit warmer than in the original show, though a measure of distance remains between the two for having been living separately for so many years.

Shinji's personality and demeanor are mostly like the canonical EVA universe. However, by benefit of being in Trek's 24th century, Shinji is a bit more well-adjusted, capable of snark levels that can amuse, impress, and irritate just about anyone within his orbit. Shinji is certainly not a Wesley Crusher in the brains department, but he takes an almost scarily quick adaption to piloting an Evangelion that makes him rival the skills of Asuka, much to her annoyance.

Shinji's grandparents were a bit traditional in the age of the 24th century and generally tried to live their lives with as little technology as possible, outside of Shinji's schooling. Their home was partly a diner, with Shinji's grandmother being a rather renowned ramen chef in their corner of Kanagawa. Shinji's grandmother taught him how to cook from the moment he arrived at their doorstep as a way of bonding with him and trying to pull the shy and insular child out of his shell. There may not be many things that Shinji could distinctly point to as a passion, but cooking would be the closest. The next closest on that list would be his cello, something his grandfather encouraged Shinji take a stab at learning. Shinji's grandpa is a musician in the Tokyo Orchestra and one of the leading cellists on Earth, and he was eager to pass down those skills to his grandson just as his wife wanted to teach the boy to cook.

Being so young, Shinji doesn't quite have a direction he has in mind for his life as he gets older, music and cooking seem to be mere hobbies for him. The thought that he could turn one of those into a career someday doesn't quite compute for him. Before he's called up by his father to join the crew of the Nerv, Shinji is an average high-school freshman. He had no active aspirations to someday be a Starfleet officer like his father. Indeed, Shinji feels the responsibility of suddenly becoming an acting ensign rather overwhelming and finds difficulty dealing with it for a long time. Unfortunately for Shinji, this triggers his existing problem with anxiety and panic attacks in stressful situations.


Ensign Rei Ayanami

14, born March 30, 2358. Assigned pilot of MU-00. Background details and family information unclear. The official records state that Gendo encountered her as a homeless orphan during an away mission some years after his wife Yui's death and adopted her. Since then, she's lived with Gendo during each of his postings aboard various starships. What is known is that Rei is only part Human, meaning that she has certain strengths and abilities that exceed that of an ordinary teenaged girl. Thankfully, given that this is the 24th century, many of these abilities aren't looked upon as odd or strange, so she's not under as much pressure to keep them hidden (though there are still some abilities and secrets Rei has sworn to keep with her life).

Shinji initially resented Rei after learning about her adoption, but Gendo encouraged the two to talk as often as they could. Over the years, they've developed a friendly relationship. Indeed, it's this friendship that has also helped Gendo to keep in touch with his own son and try to prevent their relationship from going cold.

Rei seems rather reserved to those who don't know her. Some almost think she's a Vulcan without the ears. Once Shinji and Rei start spending more time together after he comes aboard, she starts to come out of her shell.

Though she's very capable as a pilot and an officer, Rei is still sent to school aboard the Nerv each week in an effort to give her as normal of a life as possible and to get her to socialize with others her age. This was done out of a measure of guilt from Gendo who always regretted not being able to give the same thing to his own son. Rei is quite intelligent, so she has to put forth little effort on assignments and tests to get excellent scores.

Lieutenant Junior Grade Asuka L. Soryu

14, born December 4, 2358. Assigned pilot of MU-02. Child prodigy and ace pilot, renowned throughout Starfleet for her rapid ascension through the Academy and pilot training. Asuka has an innate ability to figure out how to pilot just about any ship or shuttle within minutes of stepping into the cockpit for the first time, no matter what world it's from.

She's the daughter of Dr. Kyoko Zeppelin Soryu and Pieter Langley. Langley separated from Soryu not long following Asuka's birth and disappeared; his whereabouts are still unknown to this day. Asuka was orphaned following Kyoko's death from complications due to an experiment with MU-02. Briefly raised by associates of Dr. Soryu before she quickly showed academic aptitude and entered Starfleet Academy at the age of 10, declaring herself to be emancipated.

Asuka is still a tsundere in the finest fashion here. Overconfident, impatient, and a stickler for doing things her way. She finds it very difficult, if not impossible, to admit when she's in the wrong, often leading to contentious situations. Rumor has it she challenged a group of Klingons to a bat'leth competition during her third year at the academy and won. (Though, her prowess with the bat'leth belies a deeper psychological issue she refuses to discuss.) Her general attitude at the academy largely isolated her, leaving her alone and practically friendless.

Asuka graduates from Starfleet Academy with the rank of Lieutenant J.G., a feat that's rarely been accomplished since Jim Kirk graduated a century before. Indeed, she's the second person to have won the Kobayashi Maru simulation, and she didn't have to reprogram it to do it. She still got the commendation for original thinking, however.



CHARACTERS - U.S.S. NERV SENIOR OFFICERS
Commander Misato Katsuragi

29, born December 8, 2343. Chief Operations Officer of the USS NERV. Wears command red uniform instead of operations gold, much to the confusion of everyone aboard, including herself. Misato does an impressive Gendo impression at the drop of a hat... whenever he's not around. On duty, Misato is impeccable at her job and completely professional. It'll be little wonder that every ship in the fleet has her high on the list every time a first officer position comes open, but she turns them down – Misato loves what she does on the Nerv and can't bear to be separated from her friends and new family she's found there.

Misato is the daughter of Dr. Katsuragi, the science officer of the ill-fated USS Asimov that was destroyed during the Adam Incident 15 years before the start of the series. She's the only survivor of the ship's destruction, which left her with trauma that took some years to get through.

Misato's mother took care of her, refusing to let her be institutionalized in an antiseptic environment. This close and safe situation allowed Misato to gradually come out of her shell; she was able to make up for the time in school she missed and quickly enrolled in the Academy at the age of 19.

She quickly found her footing in the command track at the academy, making herself out to be a capable leader and outgoing friend to anyone. A personal point of pride for Misato is making friends with a severe introvert like Ritusko. On the other hand, a point of shame and regret is her time with Kaji. The relationship did not end pleasantly, and neither of them handled it well. Imagine her frustration the moment she realized she'd be serving alongside Kaji once again after she was assigned to the Nerv. Kaji and Misato will tease and push each other, giving and getting equally, though Kaji will usually get the upper hand.

Off duty, Misato is as big of a slob as ever, with her quarters looking like a disaster zone within a day if Shinji isn't around to keep it cleaned. Initially, she takes in Shinji because she feels sorry for the lonely child.

Captain Gendo Ikari

48, born April 29, 2324. Commanding officer of the USS NERV. As is tradition, Gendo is still a plotting, scheming, magnificent bastard. However, the distinction in this timeline is Gendo managed to deal with Yui's loss a bit more healthily and managed to keep his relationship with his own sanity and Shinji intact. As discussed, Gendo had Shinji live with family on Earth following Yui's accident, deciding it would be safer for the boy and him while Gendo continued his path to becoming a starship captain. Yui's death shattered him, and it took some time for Gendo to recover. He eventually dove into his work as a Starfleet officer to keep the memory of her loss from overtaking him.

Gendo is rather taciturn and often gruff, making much of the crew confused at how the hell he ever became or even wanted to be a starship captain. However, beneath that exterior, he's a sharp and decisive leader. Gendo cares for his crew and will protect them at all costs... he's just almost incapable of outwardly showing it. This behavior endears and frustrates the crew, with nearly everyone having their own Gendo impression of his signature stoic finger-tenting pose.

Gendo's relationship with Rei is a tad bit warmer since he adopted her and took her under his wing after "finding" her during an away mission not long after leaving Shinji on Earth. She's like a beloved daughter that he dotes over, and he'll go into papa bear mode whenever the topic of boys comes up.

From the start of the series, Gendo wears a VISOR of the same type sported by Geordi La Forge for all seven seasons of TNG. Whether we ever get down to explain how or when he acquired it has yet to be seen.

Commander (Doctor) Ritsuko Akagi

30, born November 21, 2342. Chief Science Officer and Head of Evangelion Development Project. Ritsuko is still the stoic, somewhat socially awkward genius as in the canonical timeline here. She's the Nerv's third-in-command after Fuyutsuki and Misato and is an efficient bridge officer. Project E and the Evangelions are her children, and she takes close care of her eventual brood of five. Beyond the Evas, Ritsuko has her beloved cat, Spock, living with her aboard the Nerv. Spock only seems to get along with her and, most improbably, Gendo.

Ritsuko first met Misato and Kaji during their time at the Academy and befriended them both. By her mother's association with Section 31 and SEELE, Ritsuko has been acquainted with Gendo and Shinji for many years. She's somewhat of an aunt to Shinji (she hates when Shinji calls her "aunt Ritsuko" or any variation of it), though the relationship between them is awkward at times due to their introverted natures. She has a close professional relationship with Maya, her equivalent of a "number one" in the Nerv's science division.

Ritsuko and her mother never had the closest relationship growing up, which fed into Ritsuko's introverted personality. She never knew her father, with Naoko never being completely honest as to what happened to him.

Lieutenant Commander Ryoji Kaji

30, born June 17, 2342. Chief Engineer. Kaji is sly, confident, jovial, and dedicated to his job as the Nerv's engineer. Although, Kaji projects a laissez faire and non-committal energy in most situations to downplay any intensity. The ship is like a child to him, at least that's how he likes to think it must feel like. Unfortunately, Kaji never knew his parents – he grew up as an orphan and faced a challenging childhood and adolescence.

From an early age, Kaji was passionate about starship design and warp engine mechanics. Even through the hard times he faced, his burning desire was to eventually go to Starfleet Academy and become a Chief Engineer aboard a starship. He spent a few years as part of the engineering department on a couple different ships following his graduation. His posting to the Nerv was his first shot at being a Chief Engineer, and he takes the post seriously, despite his outward demeanor.

He shares a common past with Misato and Ritsuko from their time at the Academy together. Kaji and Misato dated for a few years before she abruptly broke things off when they graduated, and they parted ways. Not really being fully mature yet and driven by his career aims, Kaji didn't try to chase after Misato, and just dived back into his career.

He forms a tight and efficient team in his engine room, with Takao as his right-hand man. Takao might be the closest to being Kaji's best friend. They worked together on their previous posting and got along so well that Kaji instantly requested from Captain Ikari that he be transferred as his assistant chief.

Commander Kozo Fuyutsuki

59, born September 4, 2313. First Officer of the USS NERV. Fuyutsuki is warm and genial to everyone he comes into contact, a stabilizing presence on the bridge and the ship in general. Some are rather surprised that he's not the Captain, but the Commander is perfectly at home in his current position and can't see himself anywhere else but at Gendo's side.

Fuyutsuki spent years gradually rising through the ranks before requesting a sabbatical from starship duty. At the time of the Adam Incident, he was an adjunct professor at Daystrom-Hakone, teaching in metaphysical sciences and biological technology integration. It was during his time at Daystrom that he became acquainted with Yui and Gendo Ikari.

In the years before Yui's death, Fuyutsuki would eventually become friends with Gendo after understanding his odd quirks. He even was a sort of grandfather figure to Shinji and Rei. Following Yui's accident, Fuyutsuki decided to end his time as a professor and take up starship duty again once Project E had progressed far enough along that space testing would commence. Principally, Fuyutsuki did this out of concern for Gendo and to make sure he would be okay (in some ways, their dynamic is similar to Kirk and Bones McCoy). Gendo and Fuyutsuki end up serving together as Captain and First Officer on the USS Nerv, acting as the mobile testing laboratory for Project E.

Lt. Commander Mari Makinami

38, born August 22, 2334. Ship's counselor. Eccentric is one word to describe Mari, some might say looney is another. Very few people aboard the Nerv can understand how Mari became the ship's counselor when she seems to be a scatterbrained cloud cukoolander 99% of the time. It's this perception that Mari uses to her advantage in her job each day, especially with some of the tougher nuts to crack amongst the crew. To her disappointment, Gendo is the only one she hasn't gotten yet, but that doesn't mean she's going to stop teasing the living shit outta him anytime soon. If asked, Gendo would honestly say he couldn't figure out whether dealing with Makinami or Q is worse.

Outside of her needling of Gendo, Mari is a surprisingly calming and understanding voice amongst the crew, easily demonstrating why she chose psychology and mental health as her field of expertise. She takes a keen interest in the mental wellbeing of the Eva pilots.

Even in this timeline, Mari wears her trademark glasses. She's one of the rare people that are allergic to Retinax V and the idea of a laser scraping off part of her retinas doesn't sit too well with her. At this point in her career, Mari uses the glasses to her advantage in certain situations, with them mysteriously glazing over when she's attempting to be intimidating.


Lt. Commander (Doctor) Hitomi Amagi

27, born February 23, 2345. Ship's Chief Medical Officer. Hitomi is one of the kindest people onboard the Nerv, even giving Maya a run for her money in the sweetness department. She always wears a crescent-shaped hair clip with her duty uniform, which she somehow got past the regulations. Hitomi has a clear passion for her profession, which has a personal meaning for her. She treats Sakura as her little kouhai and is eager to show her the ropes in Sickbay.

At the time of the Pilot, Hitomi is still new to the Nerv. This is her first shot at being the CMO for a starship, so she's eager to make a good impression and do her best. Unfortunately, she was never told she'd be serving with Dr. Katsuragi's daughter. The two have a shared past that will be gradually revealed over the course of the series.

Misato is a bit of a sore spot for Hitomi. She's not outright rude to Misato, but the room temperature certainly drops a few degrees when they're together. On duty, she does all she can to be professional and respectful and is almost always successful.
 
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And the supporting cast and characters:

CHARACTERS - U.S.S. NERV CLASS 2-A



Touji Suzuhara

14, born December 26, 2358. Even in this timeline, Touji's still the brash and loud-mouthed hot head, but is dedicated to his friends. He's girl-obsessed, as is to be expected of a growing, hormonal boy, except for Hikari. Their personalities are practically oil-and-water, but because they grew up together, they know each other well. Before meeting Shinji, Kensuke was Touji's best friend for just about as long as they've both known Hikari.

Touji and Sakura are twins, with the former always needling the latter about how he's the older brother, even though he only came out a few minutes ahead of his little sister. He's fiercely protective of Sakura, sometimes getting irritated when Sakura gets ga-ga over Shinji. He's the more athletic of the two and is something of a star athlete of all the kids on the ship. Touji can even give some of the young ensigns a run for their gold-pressed latinum.

Touji and Sakura's mother died at some point in the past, so their father, an officer in the Nerv's sciences department, has raised them on his own. As a result, Touji and Sakura are very close with their father. On days when they're not in class, one of the twins will come to visit him during his meal break on duty to keep him company.

Sakura Suzuhara

14, born December 26, 2358. Touji's twin sister. She has a pleasant and sweet demeanor, making friends easily. The one exception to this is Touji; she loves the hell outta her brother, but dammit he can be a pain in the ass sometimes. Sakura has a bit of a complex about being the little sister between the two and hates it when Touji calls her that.

She's got aspirations to go into medicine and someday be the Chief of Starfleet Medical. Hitomi sees this budding passion and is all too happy to get Sakura some on-the-job training to help get her started. We'll see her occasionally shadowing one of the doctors or nurses in sickbay to get a head start on her future career.

Sakura literally runs into Shinji minutes after he first arrives on the Nerv, finding him cute and feels embarrassed for having made such an awkward impression. Once she finds out that it was Shinji was the pilot of the Eva that saved the ship and Earth later that day, she develops an instant crush on him. Shinji is flattered, flustered, and worried by this, typically at the same time.

Kensuke Aida

14, born September 12, 2358. Kensuke is very much the Starfleet otaku in this universe. Kinda like Wesley in Encounter at Farpoint, he can name just about every control on each bridge console panel, a fact he will always be proud of. It doesn't take much for Kensuke to go into intensively technical runs of dialogue explaining various tech, which will usually earn responses of "in English, Kensuke, please!" From the moment we first meet him in the series, Kensuke's got an obsessive drive to learn as much as he can about the Evangelion-class and is just as obsessed to get to pilot one.

Hikari Horaki

13, born January 25, 2359. Sisters Nozomi (younger, living with her family aboard the ship) and Kodama (older, attending school on Earth). Prim, proper, and a bit stuck-up, our Class Rep is very much the same here as in the canon. Hikari rules the classroom with a tritanium fist and doesn't hesitate to smack Touji or yank on his ear to get him to act right or get his attention. She instantly gets along well with Shinji when he joins their class.

Mana Kirishima

14, born April 11, 2358. Mana is outgoing and intelligent, always casting a curious glance at anything that interests her. At least, outside the times her teacher isn't lecturing during class. Her time spent sitting next to Rei in class has pushed her into becoming a voracious reader. They routinely recommend new books and articles to each other.

She has an interesting relationship with Kensuke. Much of their interactions are teasing done with equal measure from both sides. It's hard to tell sometimes whether the teasing is meant seriously or if it's all in good fun.



CHARACTERS - U.S.S. NERV JUNIOR OFFICERS



Lt. Maya Ibuki

24, born July 11, 2348. Executive Science Officer under Ritsuko. In a ship where it seems like everyone is broken in one way or another, Maya is a bit of an oddity. She's nearly always upbeat and probably the most "normal" of the bridge crew. The only issue she has is her tendency to be a bit timid and squeamish. Choosing a career in Starfleet and working with gigantic robots made from aliens makes for an odd dichotomy in that case, but somehow Maya makes it work.

Because of the intense and complicated nature of Project E and the intensive missions that put incredible strain on the Evas, Maya naturally spends long hours on duty working with her senpai, Ritsuko. She developed an instant crush on sight, which only deepens as time goes on

Maya is close friends with Hyuga and Aoba, having served together on a previous posting before getting assigned to the Nerv. As is tradition on many starships, the three often have poker nights in one of their quarters. Much to the annoyance of Huyga and Aoba, Maya has a knack for winning most of the time. If real money were still a thing, they'd be indentured servants to Maya at least until the 27th century at this point.

Lt. Makoto Hyuga

26, born February 13, 2346. Chief helmsman. Makoto is a sharp and decisive officer and an imminently talented pilot. He handles the Nerv as if it were a sleek shuttlecraft, to which the crew is thankful for inertial dampeners. Tends to be chosen to be part of Away Teams and may have somehow died and been resurrected a couple times (to which he usually responds with a flat "it's a long story" whenever someone asks about it).

Off duty, Makoto is a bit of a nerd for old manga, movies and TV shows, or "classical literature" as he facetiously calls them. He'll often use the holodeck to act out moments from his favorite series, often roping his best friend Aoba into coming along as a sidekick.

Makoto is the least sore loser out of the three poker buddy bridge bunnies. As he often says, "a loser in love, a loser in cards," so he takes Maya's often wins in stride. He'll often try to get some of the other bridge crew or even the Eva pilots to join the poker games, which gradually meets more and more success.

Lt. Shigeru Aoba

27, born May 5, 2345. Head of security and tactical officer. The closet nihilist and semi-professional cynic is ever present at the horseshoe on the bridge, taking his job as security chief very seriously. He tends to nerd out on new advances in Starfleet defense and weaponry and keeps up to date as much as possible. This common trait of nerding out endeared Aoba to his best buddy Hyuga ever since their days at the academy and first starship posting together.

You'd think that his dedication to security and weaponry advancements would leave little time for hobbies, but Aoba is a man of many talents. He's been a guitar player since he was a kid and keeps a couple on hand in his quarters.

Lt. Koji Takao

32, born 2340. Assistant chief engineer, works side-by-side with Kaji. Takao has a nearly encyclopedic knowledge about every system on the Nerv yet is happy to take a backseat to Kaji because he doesn't desire the leadership position. Kaji views him as the glue that holds his team together, thanks to his calm and welcoming demeanor. That doesn't mean that Takao is a pushover; if anyone on the team speaks outta line or gets insubordinate, he'll put them in their place so fast, they'll wish they were back at the Academy.

Ensign Midori Kitakami

24, born 2348. Engineering division, bridge bunny. Midori tends to have a prickly personality, every bit the opposite of Takao. She tries to control her anger issues, but her record shows a couple instances of reprimands for some incidents occurring off hours. She tries to excuse it by saying that she's never happened on duty but is quickly reminded by Misato that she's not helping her case.

Lt. Sumire Nagara

29, born 2343. Engineering division, bridge bunny. Sumire tends to blend into the background while on the Bridge, preferring to get her job done. Unfortunately, her station is right next to the outspoken Kitakami. The stress of that situation might just turn her gray at an early age.

Ensign Hideki Tama

24, born 2348. Engineering division, bridge bunny. Shy and serious, Tama is still learning his way as an Ensign (he's the Boimler of the Nerv). He deals with the stress of Imposter Syndrome almost every day, and almost can't believe someone like Kaji would have enough faith in a green kid almost fresh out of the Academy for a major bridge position in the main engineering station. He acts as Kaji's eyes and ears whenever he's not on the Bridge.


CHARACTERS - SUPPORTING AND RECURRING

Pen-Pen

5, born 2367. The "Spot" of our series, Pen-Pen is the beloved hot-water penguin pet of Misato. He only ever speaks in variants of the word "wark." Regularly seen sharing morning coffee with Misato before she goes on duty, and occasionally a draught of synthehol in Ten-Forward when she's off-duty (in the 24th century, a penguin throwing back a drink or two at the bar is probably one of the least strange things you might encounter). Pen-Pen is super intelligent, though we'll leave how that came to be a mystery.

Commodore Lorenz Kiel

unknown age. Senior member of Section 31. His method of running his department means he doesn't have to repeat an order twice to ensure it gets carried out. He is an imposing, even terrifying figure, though he fails to intimidate Gendo in their many conferences. Kiel has an unwavering motivation to see the Nerv's mission being successfully carried out, practically to the expense of any crew member's life.
 
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Episode 1x12.5: "Beyond Me"
Welcome back (kinda) to EVA-Trek! We're now in the seventy-fourth day of the Writer's Guild strike as of this posting, with the situation seeming to deteriorate by the day. Not only that, but the actor's guild, SAG-AFTRA has now joined the WGA in striking for fair pay and better contracts effective yesterday. I won't belabor the point of everything going on, but suffice it to say that shit is going sideways...

At this rate, it may be a while longer than I predicted before I resume posting regular episodes of the series. Production is still continuing behind the scenes, however. I'm currently working on the first draft of episode 16, hoping to finish it this weekend. If things continue like this, I may be able to post episodes twice a month after the strike is over. Stay tuned to see what happens.

This month presents something a little different. I decided to take a shot at writing in novel format for once as opposed to script format. What follows is partially based on the "unmade pilot" for EVA-Trek. I'd originally planned to just write/draw a one-shot manga for the series and call it done, however (as discussed previously), things expanded significantly. In the spirit of not letting things go to waste, I decided to rework the material from nearly two years ago into this.


And now, on with the show!



He was having that same dream again…

It always hit him around the same time: before and after fighting against those living nightmares, jokingly called "angels." Although, Shinji Ikari never thought anything about them was remotely a joke.

That didn't change the fact that he was being dragged into his personal hell once more by his own brain. It was like being forced to sit down at one of Lt. Hyuga's movie nights to a movie that he was the star of.

He saw his hands around a slender neck, yet he could feel the pulsing of blood through the veins there. His arms quaked from intense effort. A flash of the most brilliantly red hair, so utterly familiar. The feel of a bandaged hand caressing his cheek. The smell of humid air, laden with a faint whiff of blood. The sounds of waves lazily crashed near him.

Shinji finally forced himself to glance at his surroundings, breaking out of the narrative he found himself in. The waves he heard… such a strange color – orange! He'd heard the diffraction of light on the surface of Vulcan, coupled with the ever-present dust, could turn its scant bodies of water an orangish hue. This? This was different. The more he stared, the less he was convinced what he was seeing was even water. Not that he was a scientist, but the density looked off.

Suddenly, a wave of nausea overtook him, as though a sense memory pushed his eyes away. Something further towards the horizon, dark and unresolved, in the corner of his vision filled him with terror. He wouldn't look at it; he couldn't look at it. Instead, he tore his eyes skyward…

Oh, my god…!

A crimson stain far above, like someone painted a brushstroke in orbit, hitting the moon along its arc. He had never seen anything like it in his life… but yet, he had? Somewhere, deep within him, none of this felt like a dream, rather a distant memory.

"Disgusting…"

A voice, not his own, broke Shinji's reverie. He knew that voice… or maybe, he thought he did. It filled him with a pit of shame, hopeless and endless.

"Shinji," the voice range out again. Insistent, beckoning.

Reluctantly, Shinji turned…



The idiot was really pissing her off…

Lieutenant Junior Grade Asuka L. Soryu stood next to her dual-tier bunk bed, frowning at the occupant of the upper bunk in her shared quarters aboard the Galaxy-class vessel USS Nerv. She tapped her foot impatiently against the deck, an effect somewhat undercut by the beige carpeting dampening the sound. It was bad enough that Asuka had been volun-told by her superior officer to share quarters not long after arriving aboard, but to have to deal with the textbook definition of wasted space annoyed her to no end.

Said waste of space had his face half-mushed into his pillow, with a large puddle of drool drying from somewhat rapid breaths, Asuka noted. His eyebrows were somewhat knitted together, as though he were in distress. His own fault, Asuka thought to herself, he takes forever to fall asleep and wakes me up all the damn time. Turnabout's fair play, and all that. Asuka's gaze moved on its own, watching the rise and fall of his… bare chest… that peeked out from the edge of his bedsheet.

Dammit, I really have to check the environmental settings in here. He's been messing with it again, I'm sure of it. She suddenly felt flushed, tugged on the red-trimmed collar of her Starfleet duty uniform and wished the Uniform Code would permit rolled up sleeves on regular duty.

Asuka shook off the thought and frowned once more. She'd already tried to wake him up the easy way… so now it was time for the hard way. Her favorite way.

She took a breath.

"STUPID SHINJI," Asuka yelled at the top of her lungs.

Later, Asuka would chuckle to herself about the near-perfect slapstick routine Shinji unwittingly played out for her. At the current time, she merely frowned as his eyes shot open as if he'd been hit with a Klingon pain stick. He wordlessly sat bolt upright and turned to let his legs hang off the edge of the bed and tried to jump down. Unfortunately, his right hand trapped the sheets around his legs like a cocoon, so Shinji only succeeded in toppling off the bunk. One short scream later, Shinji found himself with a face-full of carpet, having landed painfully on his stomach.

Asuka's impatient foot tapping merely increased in tempo as she watched Shinji groaning in pain, slowly waking up. And once more, she found her eyes operating on their own… tracing their way down Shinji's bare back, and ending on his butt, perfectly molded by the immaculately tailored gray trousers of his cadet's uniform.

Wait, Asuka suddenly thought to herself, why am I focusing there? Damn my eyes. A split second later, Asuka's reasoning center finally activated as she felt the blush light her cheeks aflame with a feeling she couldn't explain. Naturally in this case, there was only one reaction…

"You perverted creep!"



"Dammit, not again…"

Even through the closed door in the living room, Commander Misato Katsuragi was able to hear Asuka's yell, followed by the sharp crack of a slap, and a yelp from Shinji in short order. From there, muffled voices carried on.

Misato sighed into her first cup of raktajino of the day – the best one of the day in her eyes. She mused aloud, "I thought we were supposed to be past interpersonal conflict by now in the 24th century." If this kept up, she was going to need multiple cups of the Klingon coffee she developed a taste for during the time she served at Deep Space Nine. Misato sighed when she realized that would only create more opportunities to be around Nerv's Chief Medical Officer, Dr. Amagi. The Doctor was more likely to shove Misato out of the Eva Cage egress hatch than treat her for hypertension.

A warbling voice came from beside her, "Wark-wark." It was Pen-Pen, Misato's penguin… sidekick? Yeah, that seemed to be the best way to describe him. Pen-Pen detested the word "pet," and "friend" also didn't seem right, either.

Pen-Pen was next to Misato on the couch beneath the oblong windows filled with streaking stars as the ship passed by at warp speed. He calmly sipped on a mug of tea she'd gotten for him from the replicator only a few minutes ago. A mug she was seriously considering tossing in his face.

"Oh, shut it, you," Misato angrily hissed at him, "Dr. Amagi is a different matter entirely, and you know it!" To this day, Misato still didn't quite understand how the Universal Translator could make Penguinese sound so condescending. She swore Ritsuko did that as revenge for all those arguments she lost.

In response, the suddenly taciturn penguin merely shot a sharp side-eye at her that spoke volumes more than any words could. No, Misato thought, withering in his gaze, Ritsuko didn't make the translator do that, Pen-Pen's just a dick.



Asuka kept a fast pace down the corridor as they approached an intersection on their way to class, not wanting to look at Shinji at the moment. She grumbled, "it's bad enough I've gotta see you all the damn time at home, but do you have to sleep in nothing but your pants? It's disgusting!" Asuka noticed the occasional crewman glance in their direction at the tone of her voice. Good. Once again, it's the idiot's fault he's being publicly embarrassed.

Inwardly, Shinji wanted to protest. He was so exhausted after they got back from yesterday's sync tests that he only had enough energy to take off his shirt. He'd fallen asleep before getting changed into his pajamas. Outwardly, Shinji just rolled his eyes, by now his typical conditioned response after being around Asuka so much since she arrived a few months ago. Just let her complain until she burns out and stay silent until it's over, was the standard plan that he and his "little" sister, Rei Ayanami, figured out. The only problem with this plan was…

"Tell that to your inability to look above my waist this morning…"

Shinji's mouth sometimes moved faster than his brain…

It was only a low mutter, but Asuka's well-tuned ears picked it up. In the blink of an eye, it was like Asuka loomed over him, taking up the entirety of his vision, one eye twitching, a vein throbbing at her temple, and a dark aura seemingly surrounding her.

"What. Was. That?" Asuka spoke each word deliberately with emphasis. A deadly, final emphasis that could possibly mean sudden death if challenged. A chill ran down Shinji's spine. He would rather go face-to-face with another angel than be on the receiving end of that look.

"Nothing," was all he managed to squeak out. He could feel himself physically shrinking in size. As Asuka returned to normal, even Shinji was smart enough to not dare bring up the light but obvious blush that had now formed on her face.

"Th – that's what I thought!" Asuka would never dare admit to Shinji she was replaying the view of his butt from this morning in her mind. Again. The only natural way for her to cover her tracks, so to speak, was with a swift punch to Shinji's shoulder. "Pervert!"

"Hey!" Shinji clutched his arm, more irritated than in pain from the smack.

"Stop that, Asuka!"

Sakura Suzuhara's voice, loud and angry, approached from the opposite direction down the corridor. Shinji turned to see his… well, Sakura was certainly a friend… but also something more? That was a dangerous question to contemplate, especially when around Asuka for some reason.

Bringing up the rear behind Sakura were her "older" brother Touji (by five minutes, as he always liked to boast), and Kensuke Aida. Touji and Kensuke had become Shinji's closest friends since coming aboard nearly a year ago. Occasionally, he'd hear someone in class referring to the three of them as the "three stooges." Shinji wasn't sure what a stooge was, but he had a feeling it wasn't a good thing, so he didn't want to find out for sure.

That was a thought for another time, because at the current moment, it appeared there was a situation between Asuka and Sakura that Shinji needed to defuse before it blew up in his face. Two fighting, angry Capellan power-cats had nothing on this.

Sakura angrily walked up and barked at Asuka, "I don't care what might've happened just now, don't you hit Shinji!" Sakura promptly hugged Shinji by the arm, her ever-present position whenever she felt like asserting her dominance over others trying to claim him. S-so soft, Shinji always noticed. In a normal situation, Sakura would giggle when Shinji blushed a little at the close contact of her chest against his bicep, but she had bigger fish to fry.

"Yeah, if you wanna pick on someone, you try me," Touji boasted, trying to look tough.

Asuka frowned at the Suzuhara twins, not quite sure which one irritated her most. Maybe the one forcing herself on my idiot – Asuka stopped that thought train right then and there. He's not my idiot, dammit!

Kensuke sardonically jumped on, "so, what did Shinji do this time? Open a portal to Devidia II in the sonic shower? Threaten to sell your image data to the character modelers of Vulcan Love Slave, Part IV?"

"Not like there's much there to model," Sakura added with a sneer, glancing at Asuka's chest.

"You're one to talk…," was all Asuka could utter.

Shinji's panic levels were skyrocketing as he swore he could hear the grinding of Asuka's teeth, followed by the clenching of her fists. His current fantasies of, um, size comparisons would have to wait for another time. Someone was about to get hurt. He desperately gestured to the two girls, "c'mon, guys, can we let this drop for today?"

He looked pleadingly at Sakura. How could she turn down that face? "Fiiiiiiiiiiine," Sakura said, not altogether convincing as she sighed dramatically.

Now it was his turn to look at the Medusa – er, Asuka. "Please, Asuka? Remember what Counselor Makinami ordered?"

There was a twitch of a muscle at Asuka's brow. Counselor Mari Makinami… god, how she detested being in those sessions, and it wasn't even because of her idi – dammit, not that again. She didn't want to follow the advice that weirdo prescribed, but an order from a superior officer was an order. Asuka recited Makinami's words, "pause, take a breath."

Shinji nodded, "right, and let it go. This isn't worth getting us put on report again, is it?"

From his vantage point, Touji could hear the growing grumble from Asuka's throat when she suddenly turned on Shinji, eyes fiery with rage. Just the sudden movement caused Shinji to flinch, moving his body to shield Sakura. But then, Touji could swear he saw something register on Asuka's face. Was it sadness, or maybe guilt? From the Red Demon herself? She turned quick enough to hide her face that Touji figured he'd just imagined it.

Asuka cranked up her typical haughtiness, "Fine!" She turned to Sakura, trying to stay somewhat civil. "I'll lay off for today, Suzuhara. Just stay outta my way if you wanna live."

A very satisfied smile crept across Sakura's face. "I'll do my best, ma'am," her voice dripped with honey and sarcasm. Ignoring the glare that Asuka was now shooting her way, she turned to Shinji, "I have a couple of things to take care of in Sickbay before class starts, so I gotta run. See you later, Shinji!" She took off down the corridor, waving to Shinji before she was out of sight.

Resisting yet another wave of anger, Asuka turned to see the three stooges just standing there. It only served to piss her off even more. "Alright," she barked out, "this isn't a cadet review. Let's get going to class already."

Touji and Kensuke merely rolled their eyes, saying a monotone "yes, ma'am" in unison as they took off down the corridor together, with Shinji bringing up the rear.

Asuka waited a moment, then took a few long strides to catch up with Shinji. She could feel his whole body tense up when she put her hand on his shoulder to get his attention. That… didn't have the effect on him she was hoping for, she noted. Leaning in close, Asuka whispered into his ear, "and you," even she could tell she didn't know what kind of tone she was going for in her voice, but she continued, "I'll deal with you later." With that, she quickened her pace, taking her ahead of Shinji once more.

Well, I'm dead, Shinji thought to himself as a cold sweat broke out down his face. Maybe I should ask Misato to prepare a burial torpedo for me?

It was going to be a long day on the USS Nerv for Shinji.



"Please state the nature of the medical emergency."

Dr. Hitomi Amagi frowned, annoyed as she stared at the balding medical library in front of her. She couldn't figure out why Starfleet Medical programmed the Emergency Medical Hologram to sound so damned condescending. Hell, its default facial expression had enough smug on it for five human beings. It was a big reason she (and a lot of other fleet doctors) hated using it to begin with. If it weren't for –

The doors to sickbay opened, and Sakura bounded in, all smiles. "Hiya, Doc," she excitedly beamed.

"Good morning, Sakura." Hitomi smiled, always happy to see her young assistant/intern whenever she was able to stop by.

Sakura quickly moved to the main medical display on the rear wall that Hitomi was working at, "I see you've already got Emmett fired up."

"Emmett?"

"Oh, just toying around with something to call him. 'EMH' sounds so… clinical and cold, doesn't it?"

Hitomi smiled, "I suppose so." It was a little more than a year ago that Sakura's father had mentioned her interest in medicine during his initial physical. Hitomi was only too glad to agree to let Sakura visit and check out sickbay. Sakura quickly impressed her with obvious drive and curiosity with medicine and physiology. By the time her visit was over, Hitomi had offered Sakura an intern position. Since then, Hitomi wouldn't hesitate to call Ms. Suzuhara an essential part of her staff.

"Are you sure you wanna do this," Hitomi asked as they turned back to 'Emmett.' "We're not going to be using it enough for anyone to have any real interaction with it."

"Him, Doctor," Sakura gently admonished. "He might be a hologram, but he was made into human form for a reason. Why shouldn't we make him more personable?"

"It's not like I'm saying you're wrong, but… the last personality subroutine we tried on him was too… too handsy." Hitomi frowned, remembering the EMH somehow found its way to her chest when she tried giving it less of a bed-snide manner and more of a bed-side manner. She cursed the fact her hand just went through empty photons when she tried to slap its infernal smug visage.

Sakura innocently shrugged, "trial and error. Issues are bound to happen while we fine-tune him."

Hitomi rolled her eyes, deciding she'd play along for now. As long as the next version doesn't go after Sakura, I guess… "Okay, let's try this again." She hit a couple buttons on her tricorder. "EMH personality subroutine overhaul, Mark II."

At the bleeping of a computer chime, the EMH's posture relaxed. He turned, looking at Hitomi with… charm? However, when he saw Sakura, he frowned instead.

"What in blazes is a-goin' on here?" Sakura and Hitomi looked at each other, confused at how the EMH had adopted an American accent, specifically a southern one.

Hitomi turned back to the EMH, "I don't understand your meaning?"

"The kid! What is this, a sickbay, or a daycare?" The EMH's usual disinterested gaze at Sakura had been replaced with open hostility.

Sakura pouted peevishly, "I'm not a kid! I'm her intern!"

"My god, an intern! In my time, we'd never have kids in my sickbay unless they were a patient!" The EMH stalked away from them, shaking his head in irritation as he scanned the room, waving at the LCARS displays. "They keep replacing basic human care with a bunch a' damn computers! I always warned Starfleet Medical that engineers love to change things."

Hitomi turned to Sakura, "what the hell did you use for the baseline?"

Sakura grabbed her PADD, paging through her notes. "I took some bits and pieces from some past CMOs – Phlox, McCoy, Pulaski, and others, but…" Her words trailed off as she caught something in her notes.

"What is it," Hitomi asked, while she noticed the EMH critically eyeing the row of illuminated specimen jars in the corner of the room.

Sakura groaned, "I asked Lt. Hyuga for some help with this, since I hear he's got experience with programming characters, and… he got a bit carried away."

"How carried away?"

"The personality file is twice the number of quads it should be, with no mention of anyone but McCoy, and I see some notes in here from a guy named Felix, too." Sakura shook her head; she shouldn't have gone to Hyuga about this. Makoto Hyuga, Nerv's chief helmsman was well-known aboard the ship as a holodeck aficionado and cinema historian. Most enjoyed the taste he had in those "movie" things he showed every couple of weeks, and the attention to detail was spectacular. But this… this was too much detail.

Hitomi sighed. Back to the drawing board. "Alright, at least this one kept its hands to itself." She called out, "computer, uninstall personality subroutine and deactivate EMH."

The EMH abruptly turned, looking offended as he lifted himself up on his toes a couple times impatiently, "dammit, I'm a doctor, not a –" His words were cut short as the EMH shimmered and vanished.

Hitomi and Sakura shared a disappointed look for a moment. Sakura sheepishly admitted, "guess we'll have to try again…"

"Yeah…" Hitomi really wasn't looking forward to it. "Some other time, however. You're going to be late."

The surprise registered on Sakura's face as she realized. "Oh, crap! Sorry, Doc, I'll see you later!" She started out on a run.

"Next time, though," Hitomi called after her, making Sakura stop for a moment, "don't go to Hyuga."

Sakura sighed, on the same wavelength, "yes, Doctor…"

As the doors closed behind Sakura, Hitomi suddenly had the feeling it was going to be a long day for her.



Bonus artwork - unfinished pages from the abandoned EVA-Trek manga one-shot.

As mentioned prior to the episode, these are the three completed pages from the abandoned one-shot manga. I did sketches for all 15 pages of the planned manga, but the remainder are so rough that I'd rather not subject anyone to them.






 
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The Drive link shows 71 pages, what is the intended pacing if you don't mind my asking? Catching up on the rest of page 2 shortly.
One episode script should be about the equivalent of 45-50 minutes of screentime, imitating the format of the 90's Star Trek series. In typical screenwriting rules, 1 page roughly equals a minute, but TNG scripts tended to run quicker once edited together. Each act end is where the commercial break would be.
 
Oof, that is rough. I never considered the "chopping block" could toss aside as much as 26 pages (if we are going by the minute per page rule) to fit within a 45-minute block.

Well, considering the range of styles between NGE and Trek, where the action scenes center around an attrition in mere minutes, hopes for the hero characters melt away like armor. But, you don't get to wait for a cliffhanger at episode end, these harried scenes are scattered across the episode run with multiple angel fights, often duplicate attempts to take down the one still standing.

But, now I'm just rambling a bit here. Look forward to the fic continuing, but for now hope you are reading up one some of the news regarding SAG-AFTRA. We are already a year out from when the latest exclusivity agreement was announced, crazy how this is playing out.
 
Yup, exactly. Page space and final edit can vary widely. For instance, the Star Trek: TNG finale script is 132 pages, but add in A/B revision pages, and the cast lists, it pushes it to 155 pages for the entire document. The Final Cut of the episode is 93 minutes with credits, and there's not that much that was deleted, either.

I've been keeping an eye on the strikes since the start. It's hard not to when I'm within short distance of many of the studios being picketed out here in LA. A shame that things will likely get worse before the studios even consider coming back to the negotiation table.
 
EVA-Trek Main Title Theme
Once more unto the breach, dear friends, it's EVA-Trek time!

At this point, we are into day one-hundred and eight of the WGA strike, exceeding the 2007-8 strike by nine days. It's only been in the last week that the AMPTP has finally come back to the negotiation table, but seemingly in bad faith, disregarding their own media blackout request and trying to spin the talks with media outlets. We'll see how the situation develops. I would very much like to go back to posting new episodes each month, but until the writers are able to back to work with a fair contract, we're still on hiatus.

As far as future episodes go, drafts are ready to go through episode 17. Work begins next week on 18's first draft. From there, the final third of the series is already mapped out and will hit the (digital) typewriter in short order.


Instead of a short story this month, I'm doing something a little different. If you remember back in episodes 1 and 2, I mentioned EVA-Trek's main theme is based on Shiro Sagisu's piece "EVA-02" / "Ambassadrice Rouge". Finally, all these months later, I took advantage of a break week from the writer's room to compose the full theme. Luckily, I realized "Ambassadrice Rouge" is already structurally similar to the main theme from Star Trek: The Next Generation. Even the orchestration lined up, alternating sections lead by the horns/brass and strings.


Once I located a midi file of "EVA-02," I plugged it into Guitar Pro 5... and promptly had to do a bunch of cleanup on the base orchestrations before doing anything else. Next step was coming up with the ethereal opening, which had to be pitched up to match the rest of the song. I'd wanted to use the opening melody from "Rei I," but it just didn't work. So, I kept a bit of Alexander Courage's melody in there. It was only logical to use the vocal melody from "A Cruel Angel's Thesis" in place of the TOS fanfare after that.


For the main body of the song, I only had to do a bit of trims of the arrangement to make it more like Dennis McCarthy's rendition of the TNG theme. The final step was filling out the arrangement with additional wind/brass instruments and percussion to round it out. Final audio mixdown and sound emulation was done in Acoustica Mixcraft. A little audio easter egg appears at the end like any proper Star Trek theme.


And now, the stage is set, the orchestra is tuned up, and the conductor is aching to go. 3... 2... 1.... LET'S JAM!


View: https://youtu.be/idUA52c9jas?si=-iANaX4wk8vnFuAm

This is dedicated to Shiro Sagisu, Alexander Courage, Jerry Goldsmith, and Dennis McCarthy, without whom, I could never have made this possible. See you all next month!
 
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So how would the opening sequence be like, other than the "Evangelion" elements (guess the Hakone meeting Ramiel art in the video is a key frame)? Something a la TOS/TNG with the Hakone zooming towards the camera, or something more like Lower Decks/Strange New Worlds with the Hakone flying through weird places in space?
 
So how would the opening sequence be like, other than the "Evangelion" elements (guess the Hakone meeting Ramiel art in the video is a key frame)? Something a la TOS/TNG with the Hakone zooming towards the camera, or something more like Lower Decks/Strange New Worlds with the Hakone flying through weird places in space?
I think it would be the latter. Having the USS Nerv just warping past camera for 90 seconds would get a bit dull.
 
Finally got some tech issues figured out behind the scenes which enabled me to upload a new mix of the EVA-Trek main title theme that sounds far less tinny/artificial than the first version. I also added a bunch of new visuals, not really timed to the music, but at least it's more interesting than looking at the same illustration of Ramiel and the USS Nerv from episode 4 for the entirety of the video.
 
EVA-Trek Format Music - Commercial Bumper and End Titles
Howdy out there to everyone in the known regions of Federation space and beyond - Firebird here, hoping everyone is as ready as I am to finally be getting out of this scorching summer season into a (hopefully) more temperate fall. I'm sure everyone in the WGA and SAG-AFTRA on the picket lines are looking forward to not melting in the heat.

Speaking of the strike, we're currently into day One-Hundred and Thirty-Six since the AMPTP abandoned their common sense and failed to negotiate in good faith with the WGA's bargaining committee. On the SAG-AFTRA side, it's day Sixty-three. After things stayed pretty much at a standstill over the last month, the past couple weeks have been rather eventful. Warner Bros suspended deals with several high-profile writer/producers, such as J.J. Abrams and Bill Lawrence in the wake of announcing a $500 million loss due to the strikes. (Coincidentally, that's the same amount as WB CEO David Zaslav's bonus, but who's counting, right?)

This week, Drew Barrymore and Bill Maher decided they were above the regulations of their unions and are going to bring back their shows and cross picket lines. Barrymore's crew was abusive and rude to audience members who wore WGA or SAG shirts/buttons, which ended up motivating the audience members to join the picket lines.

And in just the last couple days, a bill is moving its way through the California senate that will provide unemployment insurance to WGA & SAG members on strike. Coincidentally, the AMPTP then announced that they were suddenly calling the WGA back to the negotiation table in this coming week.

All this because the studio CEOs refuse to give up less than 1% of their annual profits to the writers who create the entertainment that give them their cushy executive positions in the first place...


Moving on from your monthly edition of strike news, I'm happy to present a couple more special videos, expanding EVA-Trek's original soundtrack recording. We've got the "Commercial Bumper" and the End Titles.

First up is the "Commercial Bumper" fanfare. In future episodes, you'll see this at the end of act two, which roughly lands at the midpoint of the story. You see something similar to this in most anime, and even TNG used one during its original syndicated broadcast. Evangelion used one, sans music. Eventually, I'd like to add some animation to this of the USS Nerv warping into the image between the title typeface, but I lack the tools for that. The composition for the bumper music popped into my head nearly fully formed, and I had it completely finished in about 90 minutes.



Finally, we have the End Titles. The music itself used the same arrangement from the main title theme, but eliminated the ethereal opening. I also adjusted the instrumentation to switch the muted trumpet to a standard trumpet. At the coda of the video, there's a special audio treat for 90's Star Trek fans - it was something I knew was absolutely necessary for a Star Trek-style end credits sequence.

When I was putting this together tonight, I got a bit of inspiration - what if I made this a full credits sequence, with titles and the starfield background? So, I found a suitable starfield loop, and put together the titles based on TNG & DS9's end credits. I used this as an opportunity to list my inspirations for this series, ranging from directors, to actors, to screenwriters, and even fellow fanfic authors. I feel like this came together so amazingly well, and I'm proud to present it here.



Both of these videos, along with the main titles, will be embedded with future episodes in their proper placement. This will give each EVA-Trek episode that extra touch of period authenticity that I've been striving for.


One final word for this month. Since the strike may either end anytime between October and the end of the year, I'm curious what readers would prefer for the release schedule of future episodes. As of now, I have six episodes of the back half of the season at a final draft stage, mostly with a couple rounds of revisions. With the strike over, I could conceivably have anywhere between seven to nine episodes in a releasable state, and the rest not far behind.

So, I'm curious what your opinion is:

  1. Weekly release schedule, taking off traditional American broadcast TV holiday/sporting event breaks
  2. Alternating weekly releases, ignoring any holidays
  3. Continue monthly releases
My preference is #2, releasing every other week. This allows me to continue production on later episodes while readying others for release, and saving my sanity in the process. Weekly could be done if the strike doesn't end until 2024. I don't want to do monthly releases, because I'd rather make up for lost time and not keep everyone waiting for the finale. There's a lot of stuff coming in the next 13 episodes that I'm proud of and excited to release. Let me know in the comments what you'd like for the release schedule!



That's all for now. See y'all next month with... well, I have no idea, honestly. I don't have any plans for more side stories, and I think 3.5 minutes of musical score is as much as I'm capable of composing. So, we'll see what happens!

Live long and prosper, friends - hailing frequencies closed.
 
Announcement: EVA-Trek Will Return!
Hey everyone!

After 148 days, the Writers Guild of America strike has finally come to an end, which means EVA-Trek will be back with new episodes on October 13th!

But, not only that - I'm far-enough ahead with production that I'll be releasing episodes twice a month at least through January! I'm looking forward to bringing the voyages of the USS Nerv to you once more.

Until then, here's a recent illustration of Lt. Soryu I did, impatiently waiting for the EVA-Trek writing staff to get back from the picket line at Paramount. See y'all in two weeks!

 
Episode 1x13: "Lonely As You"


From the TV Guide listing...
[P+] EVA-TREK (CC) -- Science Fiction/Drama
Stardate 49046.6: Cross-synchronization tests are interrupted by an angel attack, resulting in the kidnapping of one of the pilots.



After five long months, I am pleased to welcome everyone back to new EVA-Trek episodes! Just this week, the Writers' Guild of America has officially ratified their new contract, which gave them incredible gains in compensation and protections against the use of AI.

It's not reflected here in the thread, but in the full versions on Ao3, I've now added the various EVA-Trek soundtrack pieces to make each episode feel like you're sitting down to watch it on Paramount Plus.

Finally, this episode marks the start of bi-monthly releases through January or February. If I can keep my writing production rate up, there shouldn't be a break until right before the finale. Due to it being a double-length episode, I'm probably going to need additional time to write, revise, and re-revise it. Strap yourselves in, folks, there's a lot of good stuff coming up in the back half of the season that I'm really proud of.

I'm also looking for collaborators for a couple things in the coming episodes. It would be nice to start diversifying things up... and also not killing my brain trying to do everything on my own...
  1. A composer for a future episode that will need a cello/acoustic guitar piece.
  2. A fellow illustrator that could draw key scenes in each episode. I have at least a couple drawings already done for every episode through the end of the series, but not all of them are actual scenes. And unfortunately, I really don't have enough time to try to continue writing and make four to five more illustrations apiece.
And now, on with the show!




View: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GkPOk9__5c6v2y2s_crTgQD-4_9zgP00/view

Teaser
  • Title Page: Rob Bowman directed 13 episodes of Star Trek: TNG across its first two seasons, as well as "Brothers" in its fourth season. He later moved on to be a director/producer on The X-Files, helming over 30 episodes, the first film, and multiple episodes of its spinoff, The Lone Gunmen.
  • Page 1, Scene 1.1: Lake Shoji is one of the five major lakes surrounding Mt. Fuji.
  • Page 1, Scene 1.2: The Christmas caroling Shinji refers to is a reference to an illustration I did a couple years ago while developing the series as well as the relationship between Shinji and Gendo.
  • Page 5, Scene 4: Howard Hawks directed some of the most brilliant physical comedy ever put to film. In particular, Bringing Up Baby (1938) is a stunning example, as well as a classic screwball comedy that has barely aged over the last 85 years.
Act One
  • Page 6, Scene 5: Elsewhere in Trek, Dr. Bashir and Chief O'Brien are about to be captured by a rogue group of Jem'Hadar in Star Trek: DS9: "Hippocratic Oath."
  • Page 6, Scene 6: Refer to EVA-Trek, episode 2, for the flashback of Rei's accident.
  • Page 9, Scene 12: Shout-out to the future Captain Liam Shaw, the Dipshit from Chicago.
Act Two

Act Three
  • Page 31, Scene 55: Not the first time I've switched events around between Shinji and Rei, but as you'll see coming up, there's a reason for it.
Act Four
  • Page 35, Scene 62: In doing a little research, the canonical Dirac Sea didn't quite seem plausible enough for me, so I reworked it into something that was a bit more scientifically accurate and Star Trek-ish.
  • Page 37, Scene 63: Asuka is referring to the events of episode 7 that lead to her and Shinji undertaking sync training.
  • Page 39, Scene 65: One presumes Leliel approaches its attack of its victims the same way before homing in on their most psychologically vulnerable spot.
Act Five
  • Page 46, Scene 74: I decided to use an old fan theory that Naoko was the soul inside Unit-00. I was curious to see, as a counterpoint to Yui, what years of isolation might do to someone that perhaps didn't go willingly.
  • Page 47, Scene 74: Of course, we know what happened between Naoko and Rei I in the original timeline...
  • Page 52, Scene 79.1: The Jurai royal family is from the various Tenchi Muyo series, one of my entry-point anime back in the day.
  • Page 52, Scene 79.2: MC Escher was a graphic artist, whose piece "Relativity," with its impossible and intricate arrangement of staircases was the inspiration for Kensuke's line.



Next time on EVA-Trek: "Learn to Fly," coming 2023.10.27


Episode Artwork


USS Nerv Senior Officers
Top Row (L-R):
Captain Gendo Ikari, commanding officer / Commander Kozo Fuyutsuki, first officer / Commander Misato Katsuragi / Operations Officer
Bottom Row (L-R):
Commander Ritsuko Akagi (DSc), chief science officer / Lt. Commander Ryoji Kaji, chief engineer / Lt. Commander Hitomi Amagi (MD), chief medical officer
USS Nerv Senior Officers
Top Row (L-R): Lieutenant Makoko Hyuga, helmsman / Lieutenant Maya Ibuki, science officer / Lieutenant Shigeru Aoba, chief of security
Bottom Row (L-R): Lt. Commander Mari Makinami, ship's counselor / Lieutenant Meika Komi, communications officer

Character Concept Sketch: Ensign Rei Ayanami, Pilot
 
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Episode 1x14: "Learn to Fly"


From the TV Guide listing...
[P+] EVA-TREK (CC) -- Science Fiction/Drama
Stardate 49101.5: Nerv is assigned a fourth Evangelion unit and a new pilot is chosen.



Welcome back to the 24th century! Gonna keep comments short and sweet this week. Thanks for continuing to read and (hopefully) enjoy EVA-Trek. With all the craziness in the world at the moment, I can only hope I'm providing some refuge for an hour or so.

Up in the writer's room on the Firebird Pictures lot, production is progressing ahead at a good pace. I'm getting detailed script outlines written for episodes 20 through 25 so I can bang out the first draft scripts in quick order and keep up the bi-monthly release schedule through March - which actually pulls the finale up by two months sooner than I'd originally forecasted! I say this often, but it's hard to believe I'd be this far along with the series when, just two years ago, I never thought I'd make it past a couple episodes at most before the network (or rather you, dear readers) cancelled the series.

As mentioned last episode, I'm still looking for illustration and musical collaborators for future episodes if anyone is interested in helping me out.Time to turn the lights down low, ease back in the recliner, and let a new episode unfold...



View: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KujoHPMitXE05uzd8bCu1TcO6KJIxjZ7/view

Teaser
  • Title Page: Director Cliff Bole (1937-2014) directed 42 episodes of Berman-era Star Trek, over half of those being TNG episodes, including both parts of the classic "Best of Both Worlds." He was also the namesake of the blue-skinned Bolian race.
  • Set List: EVA-Trek's beleaguered line producer and VFX supervisor nearly had a heart attack when they saw how many locations were required for this episode's shooting schedule.
  • Page 1, Scene 1: The Utopia Planitia shipyards is where the Enterprise-D and its sister ship, the USS Nerv, were both constructed and commissioned.
  • Page 1, Scene 2: Marie Vincennes originated from The Nerv White Paper RPG game.
  • Page 2, Scene 3: Sadly, this won't be the only time a technological disaster happens at the shipyards, as depicted in the first season of Star Trek: Picard.
Act One:
  • Page 6, Scene 6: Elsewhere in Trek, Major Kira and Gul Dukat are searching for a crashed Cardassian freighter in DS9: "Indiscretion," and Chakotay investigates mysterious visions in VGR: "Tattoo."
  • Page 6, Scene 7: The Treaty of Algeron was established in TNG: "The Pegasus."
  • Page 7: First contact with the Cardassians hasn't actually been established canonically. Though Memory Alpha lists Captain Lorca had a Cardassian vole in his menagerie, it's still up to interpretation. The 2321 date is based off of the Voyager novel "The Brave and the Bold, Book Two." 2327 comes from the TOS Comic "Enter the Wolves."
  • Page 8: Technically, the occupation of Bajor began in 2319, but 2328 is when the Cardassians officially annexed Bajor.
Act Two:
  • Page 14: As Uhura once told an over-eager junior officer, "be careful what you wish for, you may get it."
  • Page 15: The Trivas system has only recently been abandoned by the Cardassians. It's the location of the former ore mining station Empok Nor, a sister station to Deep Space Nine.
  • Page 16, Scene 15: Kensuke and Shinji both wear the provisional crewman uniform first worn by Wesley Crusher in the second season of TNG.
Act Three:
  • Page 22, Scene 22: Refer to episode 6, "The One" for the first crossover with The Orville.
  • Page 24: Refer to episode 8, "My Hero" for the events regarding the Murasaki-type phenomena.
  • Page 28, Scene 37: Something about angel DNA prevents the saliva of an Evangelion from freezing within the vacuum and frigid temperatures of orbital space.
Act Four:
  • Page 32, Scene 51: I couldn't resist throwing in a little reference to Jaws.
  • Page 40, Scene 83: A polaron is a type of particle. I real life physics, they're used to understand and explain the interactions between electrons and atoms in solid materials. Star Trek physics usually use polarons as Dominion weapons, Borg scanning beams, and disruption of various electronics. By 2384, the USS Dauntless in Star Trek: Prodigy would use polaron torpedoes.
  • Page 42, Scene 89: As established in prior episodes, rage and anger issues have been passed down from Yui to Shinji.
  • Page 42, Scene 91: Another End of Evangelion reference.
Act Five:
  • Page 48: As mentioned for his first appearance in episode 3, "Fraternity," Mr. Aida is voiced by Garrett Wang, Voyager's Harry Kim.
  • Page 49, Scene 100: Here we have the first sight of the mass-produced Eva series in this timeline.
  • Page 50, Scene 102: These coffins were an idea native to the Rebuild of Evangelion film series.
  • Page 51, Scene 105: For the voice of Kaworu, I decided to do something a bit different. I imagine him being voiced by Casey Mongillo, who is the voice for Shinji in the Netflix dub of Eva. I thought it would put an interesting spin on the character, while keeping with a tradition in the English dubs of Kaworu having a shitload of dub actors.



Next Time on EVA-Trek...
A new arrival to the USS Nerv... friction coming to a head between Shinji and Asuka... an angel attack... and dire consequences...

"Friend of a Friend," coming 2023.11.10



Now that we're into the back half of the series, and nearly all of the main cast has been established, I thought I would revisit the EVA-Trek cast list. This only covers the main, supporting, and recurring cast, and not the incidental/one-off characters. As previously mentioned, the voices I write to are a blend of the Netflix Amazon dub casts for the franchise.

MAIN CAST
Crewman Shinji Ikari: Spike Spencer
Ensign Rei Ayanami: Amanda Winn Lee
Lt. J.G. Asuka L. Soryu: Tiffany Grant
Commander Miasto Katsuragi: Allison Keith-Shipp
Captain Gendo Ikari: John Swasey
Commander Kozo Fuyutsuki: JP Karliak
Commander (Dr.) Ritsuko Akagi: Erica Lindbeck
Lt. Commander Ryoji Kaji: Greg Chun
Crewman Kaworu Nagisa: Casey Mongillo
Lt. Commander (Dr.) Hitomi Amagi: Carrie Keranen
Lt. Commander Mari Makinami: Deneen Melody

SUPPORTING CAST
Dr. Yui Ikari: Amanda Winn Lee
Kensuke Aida: Benjamin Diskin
Sakura Suzuhara: Felecia Angelle
Touji Suzuhara: Johnny Yong Bosch
Hikari Horaki: Abby Trott
Mana Kirishima: Stephanie McKeon
Lt. Makoto Hyuga: Daniel MK Cohen
Lt. Shigeru Aoba: Billy Kametz
Lt. Maya Ibuki: Christine Marie Cabanos
Lt. Meika Komi: Amber Lee Connors
Lt. Koji Takao: Jake Eberle
Lt. Sumire Nagara: Rebeka Thomas
Ensign Midori Kitakami: Bijou Vann
Ensign Hideaki Tama: Scott Golden
Nurse Henry Park: Gavin Lee
Commodore Lorenz Kiel: D.C. Douglas
Dr. Naoko Akagi: Mary Faber
Ship's Computer: Majel Barrett-Roddenberry

RECURRING CAST
Mr. Aida: Garrett Wang
Mr. Suzuhara: Vaughn Armstrong
Ensign Barnes: Donald Glover
Ensign Nadir: Danny Pudi
Captain Ed Mercer: Seth MacFarlane
Nerv's EMH: Robert Picardo



Episode Artwork

Scene 10 - INT. CLASSROOM


Scene 19 - INT. TRAINING ENTRY PLUG (OPTICAL)


A Typical Misato/Kaji Scene:


Cast Photo - Crewman Shinji Ikari
 
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The post for episode 14 has been updated with a new illustration featuring USS Nerv's newest Eva pilot.
 
Episode 1x15: "Friend of a Friend"


From the TV Guide listing...
[P+] EVA-TREK (CC) -- Science Fiction/Drama
Stardate 49120.1: A suspicious new arrival to the USS Nerv is interrupted by an angel attack that may exact a higher price than anyone expects.



And we're back! This week's EVA-Trek comes out with good news – the SAG-AFTRA strike has finally come to an end after 118 days. With this, American film and television productions can finally resume after the hubris of overpaid executives caused the industry to shut down for over six months at the cost of billions of dollars.

Anyways, episode 15 continues the mini-arc that kicked off with episode 13. A lot of pieces are starting to fall together that will play into the final act, and another of our key players arrives onboard. Writing on future episodes is progressing well – I'm due to finish the detailed outline for episode 23 next week, which just leaves one full episode to outline. It's possible I might have first draft scripts for the rest of the season done by New Years!

Get ready as we present the following program in living color on [NETWORK NAME REDACTED]!





View: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KrhfaglkcAZFAhXENvThX8H-O8MRr7MF/view



Teaser
  • Title Page: Robert Scheerer (1929-2018) directed episodes of TNG, DS9, and Voyager. His first credit for the franchise was the classic Data-focused story "Measure of a Man."
  • Page 1, Scene 1: since the events of this episode follow right from episode 14, the Elsewhere in Trek update still applies here.
  • Page 3: Phase inducers are a useful piece of technology in a variety of Federation systems. If you want to know how it works, all I can say is that it works very well, thank you.
  • Page 4: This is one of the first dialogue exchanges I wrote when developing the series, because I knew I had to explain or handwave why Misato is in the command red uniform, though she is the Ops Chief, a position typically in the mustard yellow uniform.
  • Page 5: Unfortunately, Gendo is quite prescient in his theory Changelings would make it to Earth, as Sisko and the others will soon find out in the two-part Starfleet Coup arc of DS9: "Homefront" and "Paradise Lost."
Act One:
  • Page 7, Scene 8: Why do those flashes of "End of Evangelion" keep happening to Shinji, I wonder...?
  • Page 8: For the Tau Ceti incident, refer to episode 3, "Fraternity."
  • Page 9, Scene 10: See also episode 12.5, "Beyond Me" for a full version of Shinji's nightmare.
  • Page 10, Scene 13: You know the shot this references.
  • Page 11, Scene 15.1: Starbase 375 will soon become a major logistical hub and the central set of Federation power in the sector during the upcoming Dominion War.
  • Page 11, Scene 15.2: As shown in previous episodes, the USS Orville in this timeline is a Nebula-class exploratory vessel. The Norway and Saber classes were first introduced in Star Trek: First Contact's "Battle of Sector 001" sequence at the start of the film. The USS Oslo is an invention of mine, since only one Norway-class ship has canonically been identified (USS Budapest). The USS Jaeger is named for the designer of the Saber class, ILM's Alex Jaeger.
  • Page 11, Scene 16: The DS9/Voyager jumpsuits have slowly been distributed out to Starfleet vessels for shipboard service. Previously, the classic TNG-style uniforms had been dedicated to starship service. While the "Picardigan" was never seen again after TNG, I like to think that it's still allowed under the Starfleet Uniform Code.
  • Page 13: My intention was that Mao refers to Melissa Mao, originally from Full Metal Panic. Several people aboard Nerv seem to think she and Misato have very similar voices, though I don't hear it myself.
  • Page 14: For Misato's disastrous promotion party, see episode 12, "Good Grief."
  • Page 15, Scene 19: It's a shame Trek doesn't do more of those big and brash close-ups anymore.
  • Page 16.1: A reminder that I hear Kaworu being voiced by Casey Mongillo (Shinji in the Netflix Eva dub).
  • Page 16.2: Kaworu refers to benefactors of the Daystrom Institute, whose main campus is in Okinawa, with an annex location in Hakone.
Act Two:
  • Page 21, Scene 22: Welcome to the birth of TsundeRei in the EVA-Trek timeline.
  • Page 21, Scene 23: The Cinerama Dome is a theater in Los Angeles originally constructed in 1963 to be able to show 3-strip Cinerama films (meaning one image constructed from three separate 35mm strips of film, side by side). The first movie shown there was Stanley Kramer's epic comedy It's a Mad, Mad, Mad, Mad World. The Dome closed down during Covid when Arclight went bankrupt, but it will soon open under new management. It is one of only three theaters in the world that is capable of showing Cinerama.
  • Page 22: Akira Kurosawa's Yojimbo is a signature samurai action-comedy classic. One of my favorite performances from Toshiro Mifune. It was later remade by Sergio Leone as the Clint Eastwood spaghetti western A Fistful of Dollars.
  • Page 24: The whole resonance frequency thing was inspired by a line Scotty has in TNG: "Relics" where he could tell the speed the Enterprise was travelling by the feel of the deckplates.
  • Page 26, Scene 26: Kaji's personal file designation comes from the film THX-1138.
  • Page 26, Scene 27: While Kaji's brother was something that was only established in the Evangelion manga, I've obviously taken a totally different spin on him here.
  • Page 27, Scene 29.1: Other Kurosawa western remakes include The Magnificent Seven and The Outrage... which stars a pre-Trek William Shatner.
  • Page 27, Scene 29.2: Canonically, we don't actually know where Hyuga is originally from, so creative license wins the day.
  • Page 27, Scene 30: I've extrapolated some of this from what's been established in Strange New Worlds and comments from Star Trek: Picard showrunner Terry Matalas about how massive bombing raids were the heralds of the third World War. Naturally, when you set off nuclear bombs, those suckers put out electromagnetic pulses that fry electronics.
Act Three:
  • Page 30.1: Trottel means "fool" in German.
  • Page 30.2: See episode 10, "Resolve," for the bandage incident Asuka refers to.
  • Page 31, Scene 32: Sakura is referring to the events of episode 13, "Lonely As You."
  • Page 33, Scene 35: This scene, of course, is a visual reference to the exhaustively-memed elevator scene between Rei and Asuka in the original series.
  • Page 36, Scene 37: Of anyone aboard, it makes sense that Mari would be the least phased by the real truth of everything going on. She's sorta like Tony Shalhoub's character in Galaxy Quest in that way.
  • Page 37: In this timeline, the Adam Incident is roughly analogous to the Second Impact.
  • Page 39, Scene 40: Since Zeruel is referred to as the angel of power, it's only natural it would have an incredibly staggering energy level. To give a relative example – V'Ger in Star Trek: The Motion Picture, a vessel-entity the length of Long Island and capable of creating an energy cloud 2 AU in diameter had an energy level at twelfth power.
Act Four:
  • Page 47, Scene 66: Rodinium is one of the hardest substances known to Federation science, approximately 21.4 times harder than diamond.
  • Page 50, Scene 77: See episode 1, "New Way Home" for the first time Hakone/Yui went berserk.
Act Five:
  • Page 57, Scene 101: EVA-Trek uses Kyoko's design from The Shinji Ikari Raising Project manga. For her voice, I hear Janyse Jaud, whom I generally know best as Akemi on Maison Ikkoku (my favorite anime series).
  • Page 59, Scene 106: I may or may not have cribbed some inspiration from the copier/printer beatdown scene in Office Space here.



Next time on EVA-Trek...
Nerv's crew deals with the fallout from Zeruel's attack and Asuka's disappearance.

"Come Back," coming 2023.11.24!



Episode Artwork

Scene 29 - INT. TEN-FORWARD




Scene 34- CLOSE-UP - ASUKA





Scene 35 - INT. TURBOLIFT





ILLUSTRATION NOTES:
  • Hyuga is accidentally drawn in the wrong color uniform. He should be in Command Red, the typical uniform for all pilots and helmsmen in Starfleet.
  • The turbolift illustration was done early during development of the series, before the decision was made to switch over to the DS9 jumpsuits in this episode.
 
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Episode 1x16: "Come Back"


From the TV Guide listing...
[P+] EVA-TREK (CC) -- Science Fiction/Drama
Stardate 49120.4: The crew picks up the pieces from Zeruel's attack while Asuka... goes where few have gone before.



Surprise! With the Thanksgiving holiday kinda throwing my week for a loop, I decided to upload the new episode a day early so I can enjoy my extended weekend. For once, I'm going to actually keep my comments brief before this week's episode, mainly because there's not much new going on. Hope everyone is continuing to enjoy the series as it develops towards its conclusion. This week is the culmination of the mini-arc that started the second half of the season.

And now, roll 'em!




View: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1BB5Ri1sRTFpr1Fm8bP5A_yKMCTrA_5xc/view



Teaser
  • Title Page: Hanelle M. Culpepper is a director who's worked on the first three seasons of Star Trek: Discovery and the first three episodes of Star Trek: Picard's first season.
  • Page 1.1: Something to notice thematically throughout this episode are mirroring actions to events from previous EVA-Trek installments.
  • Page 1.2: Asuka's school uniform is similar to its canon Eva timeline counterpart.
  • Page 1.3: As mentioned last episode, Kyoko Soryu uses the character design from The Shinji Ikari Raising Project and I hear her being voiced by Janyse Jaud.
  • Page 4: Naoko Akagi is the resident soul in the USS Tokyo. See episode 13, "Lonely as You."
Act One:
  • Page 6, Scene 8: It seems Shinji is always destined to find himself in a cell thanks to Gendo in every timeline.
  • Page 8: Refer to episode 9, "Normal," for Misato, her father, and Hitomi's father's experience in the last moments aboard the USS Asimov during the Adam Incident.
  • Page 9, Scene 9.1: Ritsuko refers to The Great Bird of the Galaxy, usually a joking reference to a deity. In reality, it was the production in-joke for Gene Roddenberry.
  • Page 9, Scene 9.2: The use of the transporter to restore personnel to previously-healthy states is a tried-and-true Trek trope.
  • Page 10: See last episode for Rei's run-in with Asuka in the turbolift where she stuck up for Shinji.
  • Page 12.1: Kaji sadly never learned the lesson from Mr. Scott on inflating repair times by a factor of four to make up appear a miracle worker.
  • Page 12.2: A sehlat is a Vulcan pet, which is sort of a cuddly teddy bear... with huge fangs. Spock had one as a child pet, see TAS: "Yesteryear."
Act Two:
  • Page 15, Scene 12: It will become clearer as the episode goes along as to why there's this split narrative of timelines.
  • Page 15, Scene 13: Misato is referring to the events of Star Trek: First Contact.
  • Page 16: So I guess Misato is familiar with waterboarding...
  • Page 17, Scene 13: Misato makes a slight reference to Great Teacher Onizuka.
  • Page 18: Technically, I got some of the geography wrong here, since the school is supposed to be in Hakone while Shinji lives in Kanagawa, where Hoshikawa Station is, but there is a reason for this. Just sit tight.
  • Page 19, Scene 16: A bussard collector are the red or orange caps on the nacelles of Starfleet vessels. These take in stray hydrogen and other space matter to refuel the ship's warp drive. It is named for Robert W. Bussard, whose theoretical Bussard ramjet was a proposed method for interstellar spaceflight.
  • Page 19 & 20, Scene 16: The nudge in the ribs/swift kick in the ass is a nod to Patton.
Act Three:
  • Page 26, Scene 23: I almost regret admitting this, but this shot is inspired by chapter 164 or episode 36 of Rent-a-Girlfriend. Don't worry, I hate myself more than enough for being unable to stop reading it.
  • Page 27, Scene 25: See here for a performance of Brahms' "Cello Sonata No. 1:"
  • Page 29, Scene 25: The DS9/Voyager jumpsuits are a little confusing. Most of the time, they appear as a one-piece article with no clear delineation between. However, various episodes of DS9 and Voyager have shown characters wearing the uniform pants with the purple undershirt, as if the jumpsuit top is separable. It's another in a continuing series of Trek inconsistencies.

Act Four:
  • Page 37, Scene 33: I gave Ritsuko a line from Kirk in Star Trek: The Motion Picture. Hopefully, she doesn't give it the Shatner dynamism.
  • Page 38, Scene 35 & 36: You have no idea how often I have to double check I'm not confusing "Kyoto" and "Kyoko."
  • Page 39, Scene 39: To be clear, Rei is in her Starfleet uniform, not her canonical school uniform.
  • Page 45: A reminder that canonically, Sakura is Touji's little sister.
Act Five:
  • Page 51, Scene 61: I got chills when I first wrote this moment of Shinji shouting at the Kyoto because I could hear it so clearly with Spike Spencer almost growling that line in a way that he delivered "I want Rei, GIVE HER BACK" in Evangelion 2.0.
  • Page 52: Kyoko's friend is Yui, who originally told Fuyutsuki her belief about paradise to Fuyutsuki in The End of Evangelion.




Next time on EVA-Trek:
On the hunt for angel lifesigns, Nerv must negotiate with an adversarial species in order to get there in time.

Episode 17, "Make it Right," coming 2023.12.08!



Episode Artwork

Scene 59A, Take 2 - INT. EVA CAGES (Medium Shot on Rei)



EVA-Trek Cast Photo - Crewman Kaworu Nagisa



Outtake - Captain Ikari and Shinji in (somewhat) happier times when midterm grades were released.
 
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Episode 1x17: "Make it Right"


From the TV Guide listing...
[P+] EVA-TREK (CC) -- Science Fiction/Drama
Stardate 49176.6: On the hunt for angel life-signs, Nerv must negotiate with a hostile species for passage through their region of space.


A 24th century odyssey returns with this week's installment of EVA-Trek. This will be a bit of a "breather" episode that took advantage of the narrative space and became a story that's the closest to an episode of Star Trek: The Next Generation that I can possibly reach. I'm quite proud of this final product and hope you enjoy it.

Behind-the-scenes, work is going at an incredible pace to complete the story. Shortly after publishing episode 16, I finished all of the script outlines through the rest of the season, and in the last week, I've written three complete first draft scripts, up through episode 22. Altogether, that's 155 pages, or the equivalent of about two-and-a-half hours of television. Episode 23 will be tough to land, so that will undoubtedly take a bit more time. The final two episodes will only increase the difficulty in the effort to land this show in the way I've been envisioning for the last two years.

Before moving on, something that will aid the understanding the episode before proceeding is visuals for a new race of aliens called the Brenlaui. Below are concepts for one of their battlecruisers and the representative of their race you'll meet, named Iretalcs.

CONCEPT ART - BRENLAUI CRUISER

The Brenlaui cruiser embraces the Berman-era design ethos of reusing previous designs as much as possible in order to save time and money. The basis of the ship is the Miradorn Theta class starship, originally designed for DS9: "Vortex." It was later reused as Baran's mercenary vessel in the TNG two-parter "Gambit."

CONCEPT ART - PRELATE IRETALCS
The Brenlaui race is a relative to the Erect-crested Penguin (Eudyptes sclateri). Indeed, Iretalcs owes his name to the Latin name of the species – Iretalcs is sclateri in reverse (hey, not ever name has to be maximum clever). Their typical garments have an ecclesiastical flair, according to Iretalcs' title as Prelate. The overall shape and vestments are based on a priest's cassock. The color harkens back to William Ware Theiss' work on TOS as its costume designer. Even the control apparatus on his forearm harkens back to the Eymorg device in TOS: "Spock's Brain."

With that, Firebird Pictures is proud to present a new chapter of our story...




View: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1g6XnWb54h44skLoS3hL9jyr1Togwy3-B/view



Teaser
  • Title Page: David Livingston started out as a Unit Production Manager on Star Trek: The Next Generation before graduating to a supervising producer for all of the subsequent series of the Berman Era. As a director, he helmed a total of 62 episodes for TNG, DS9, Voyager, and Enterprise.
  • Page 1.1: A Mugato is a hulking, dangerous primate native to the planet Neural, first seen in TOS: "A Private Little War."
  • Page 1.2: If I have to explain Spock...
  • Page 2: Daystrom Station was first seen in PIC: "Dominion."
  • Page 4: Kaji refers to the cross sync accident that nearly killed Shinji in episode 13, "Lonely as You."
Act One:
  • Page 5, Scene 3: Don't bother trying to Memory Alpha the Brenlaui. They are a totally new species I've created. It was past time that I started adding my own bits into the Trek canon.
  • Page 10: In-story time, it's been about three months since Kensuke's accident in episode 14, "Learn to Fly," where the USS Matsushiro was infiltrated by Bardiel.
Act Two:
  • Page 16.1: Veteran character actor John Fleck voices Iretalcs. While he's principally known for being the Suliban antagonist Silik on Enterprise, Fleck has played a variety of alien species on Star Trek and The Orville.
  • Page 16.2: The convention of dollying or zooming in on a character when they switch from subtitles to English is something I took from Judgment at Nuremberg and The Hunt for Red October.
  • Page 19, Scene 15: Kitakami still hasn't lived down starting a riot in Quark's Bar during episode 12, "Good Grief."
  • Page 26, Scene 20.1: I've been trying to figure out for ages just how to get the Galaxy-class version of Cetacean Ops into the show. Versus some concept art Andrew Probert did back in 2005 for the prototypical version of Star Trek Online, I envision Nerv's set looks like the one seen in Lower Decks. As described in the Star Trek TNG Technical Manual, Galaxy class vessels employ orcas of the Takaya's Whale subspecies to aid the ship in navigation.
  • Page 26, Scene 20.2: Garret Wang once again guest stars as Kensuke's father.
  • Page 29: See episode 11, "Times Like These," for the incident of the angel infiltration.
  • Page 30: Since the Brenlaui are about 100 years behind in researching Federation technology, Iretalcs makes the same mistake about Nerv's dilithium crystals that Scotty made about the Enterprise in TNG: "Relics."
Act Three:
  • Page 31, Scene 23: It wouldn't be the holidays without a dinner where everyone around the table is hoping that one relative doesn't say something stupid?
  • Page 33.1: Kaji's line somewhat paraphrases a line in the John Wayne film The Barbarian and the Geisha (1958), about the first American consul in Japan following the opening of its borders in the 1800s.
  • Page 33.2: It's easy to forget just how hot the waters are in the days before the beginning of the Dominion War.
  • Page 34: Gendo references a line spoken by Kirk in TOS: "The Corbomite Maneuver," the first episode produced when the series went into production after the second pilot episode. His monologue here is probably the closest I'll ever come to writing a good old fashioned Picard speech.
  • Page 37, Scene 24: Have I ever mentioned how much I love writing TsundeRei?
  • Page 39, Scene 27: The following sequence is originally from TOS: "Arena."
  • Page 40, Scene 31: I've been planning this reveal as far back as episode 3.
  • Page 42, Scene 35: This mountain look suspiciously like all the other caves and rockfaces on our standing "Planet Hell" set on Stage 16. Can't imagine why...
Act Four:
  • Page 46, Scene 42: The Pike wheelchair was first seen in TOS: "The Menagerie."
  • Page 48, Scene 44: Shat-fu is legendary for its liberal use of the judo chop as a defense technique.
  • Page 50, Scene 48: This may be a bit of a big swing in my interpretation of Asuka, but I feel this catharsis is something she and many of the characters badly need.
  • Page 51: Lower Decks canonized that TOS stands for "those old scientists" in the episode "No Small Parts."
  • Page 53: This cliffhanger scene was partially inspired by the climax of Hitchcock's North by Northwest (1959).
Act Five:
  • Page 55, Scene 56: Gendo's parting line to Maya references The Hunt for Red October.



Next time on EVA-Trek:
With Ritsuko and Fuyutsuki captured, their lives on the line, and time running out, a way must be found to rescue them. Can they be saved before the unthinkable happens?

Episode 18, "Breakout," coming December 22nd!



Episode Artwork:

Between episodes 16 and 17, Ritsuko asks Maya to take care of Spock while she's away at Daystrom Station.


Scene 5 - INT. BRIDGE


Scene 66 - INT. BRIDGE, ANGLE ON SHINJI


Concept Art - Acting Ensign Shinji Ikari
 
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Episode 1x18: "Breakout"


From the TV Guide listing...
[P+] EVA-TREK (CC) -- Science Fiction/Drama
Stardate 49179.4: Dr. Akagi and Commander Fuyutsuki have gone missing, and it's up to Kaji to find them before time runs out.


Welcome back and happy holidays, all you royalty of Starfleet, you sovereigns of the quadrant! EVA-Trek is continuing to barrel towards its finale with an episode that could become a turning point for the series. A slight content warning – episode 18 includes scenes of torture that may be too intense for younger viewers. EVA-Trek has never been a lighter and softer reimagining of Evangelion, and the subject matter this week is certainly no exception.

Behind the scenes, the writers' room has been abuzz with activity. First draft scripts have now been completed through the penultimate episode of the series. Final drafts have been locked up through episode 22. All-in-all, that makes five episodes written in December alone, with sixteen having been completed in 2023. Compare this with 2022, where I only finished nine scripts in all that time.

Over the Christmas holiday, I'll be working hard to deliver the first draft of the feature-length finale, "The Last Song," by the first of the year. If I manage this, I'll have completed the last major bit of writing for the series exactly two years after I delivered the pilot episode's first draft script. Kind of insane to think how far this series has come, and indeed how far I've come as a writer since then.

With that, I leave you with the final new episode of 2023. Not exactly the most festive Christmas episode ever, but still one that I think is worth reading.




View: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1E3mFyO9xZhayGUcBWMMptZlYFbTD0bDp/view



Teaser
  • Title Page: Allan Kroeker directed 38 episodes of Trek across DS9, Voyager, and Enterprise, including eight season finales. He's also directed the Battlestar Galactica reboot, Firefly, and many others.
  • Page 1: This entire opening sequence is taken straight from my favorite Trek feature film, Star Trek: The Motion Picture.
  • Page 2, Scene 3: I've always intended for Mana to be a Roddenberry-era Trekkie, while Kensuke is a Berman-era devotee.
  • Page 3: Kensuke refers to the muted color palette used in Robert Fletcher's costume designs for TMP.
Act One:
  • Page 5, Scene 6: Elsewhere in Trek, this episode takes place roughly between the Voyager episodes "Cold Fire" and "Maneuvers."
  • Page 9, Scene 10: As mentioned last episode, Ritsuko and Fuyutsuki were en-route to Daystrom Station for research.
  • Page 10.1: "A hole in my mind," I may or may not have been watching a lot of Babylon 5 when I wrote this episode...
  • Page 12: SEELE #1 is based on the French SEELE representative from the original series. #2 is based off the UK SEELE member.
  • Page 13: The Cardassian pain device was first seen in TNG: "Chain of Command" as a means to torture Captain Picard into providing information.
Act Two:
  • Page 14, Scene 13: The last time Kaji spoke with Sloan was when he went back to Earth to pick up the USS Kyoto in episode 5, "Ain't it the Life."
  • Page 13.1: Sloan refers to Kaji's visit with Garak from episode 12, "Good Grief."
  • Page 13.2: Hakton is one of many disputed worlds near the Cardassian Demilitarized Zone.
  • Page 17, Scene 15: See episode 1, "New Way Home" for the Sachiel engagement.
  • Page 18.1: See episode 3, "Fraternity" for the Shamshel battle.
  • Page 18.2: Asuka fought Sandalphon in episode 8, "My Hero."
  • Page 19.1: Ireul infiltrated Nerv's computer systems in episode 11, "Times Like These."
  • Page 19.2: The events of episode 8 confirmed that Murasaki-type quasars can act as incubators for angels.
  • Page 20.1: Bardiel nearly killed Kensuke in episode 14, "Learn to Fly."
  • Page 20.2: Zeruel was defeated by Asuka in episode 15, "Friend of a Friend."
  • Page 23, Scene 17: Traditionally, Danube-class runabouts are named for rivers. Nerv's fleet are named for Japan's rivers. Shinano is longest and widest one in Japan and is located in northeastern Honshu.
Act Three:
  • Page 26: A pieta is a typical subject in Christian artwork that typically has the Virgin Mary cradling the body of Christ after being removed from the cross.
  • Page 29-30, Scene 22: Thanks to the TNG Tech Manual and Memory Alpha for helping me to make sense of warp field mechanics.
  • Page 32, Scene 23: This is based on a similar moment in The Sand Pebbles where Steve McQueen's character sees his ship's engine for the first time and introduces himself. DS9: "The Dogs of War" referenced this moment as well when Sisko tries out the new Defiant for the first time.
Act Four:
  • Page 37, Scene 34: Kaji's use of an electromagnetic pulse to shutdown equipment was last seen in episode 2, "Enough Space," when the pulse was used to stop the berserk USS Tokyo.
  • Page 38, Scene 37: the holodeck set from Star Trek: Voyager had a more "warehouse" look to it than the black and yellow checkerboard of Nerv's.
  • Page 39, Scene 37: Kaji spent some time with Garak in that prison camp, as shown in episode 12, "Good Grief."
  • Page 39, Scene 38.1: TNG: "Data's Day" established that Galaxy-class vessels use a reduced light mode for the nocturnal Delta shift.
  • Page 39, Scene 38.2: An N.D. is a non-dialogue background character.
  • Page 41, Scene 38: Hyuga and Aoba spent some holodeck time at Quark's with Bashir and O'Brien when Nerv visited DS9.
Act Five:
  • Page 50: Yes, Misato is outright quoting one of Susan Ivanova's best speeches in Babylon 5, because it made perfect sense to use that here.
  • Page 53: We first saw the photo of Kaji and his younger brother Genji back in episode 15, "Friend of a Friend."



Next time on EVA-Trek:
While the ship responds to a distress call from a Cardassian freighter, a friendly competition results in Asuka forcing Shinji to undergo Starfleet Academy entrance exams.

Episode 19, "All My Life," coming January 5th!



Episode Artwork:

EVA-Trek Cast Photo: Commander Kozo Fuyutsuki


EVA-Trek Cast Photo: Ensign Rei Ayanami
 
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