Evillevi
A Pikachu for everything - Shadow Pikachu,2015
Do you happen to post on QQ , I have some decided NSFW things I want to say that aren't really suitable for SV
DRAGONS! DRAGONS! DRAGONS!
- Thread starter DragonCobolt
- Start date
- Original Mature Fantasy
- Pronouns
- He/Him
You can always put it in a spoiler!
Evillevi
A Pikachu for everything - Shadow Pikachu,2015
SFW stuff first.
But otherwise lets move on to the story so far. One of the interesting and stupid things is that it kinda touches upon how no one values the body as a person, but when it's a resource it's all of a sudden valuable.
A lot of the first few chapters really highlight that discrepancy as well. In particular I felt that the halfling Roleplay could have expanded on the subject a lot better. Namely because I wonder if the illusion of a relationship is more valuable than the person underneath that illusion.
And that theme I think has the potential to be a really interesting throughline for the story since it opens up a more intimate if still fantastical POV.
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It'll probably require Sand to actualize it, which implies that it's possible to shop for disposable bodies. Where you body jack a body which you have modified to your liking, whether or not that modification is safe/healthy is irrelevant as you can relatively safely get a new one.
Top priority things that I think off with this story. Mostly problems because It looms larger than the actual story said:
But otherwise lets move on to the story so far. One of the interesting and stupid things is that it kinda touches upon how no one values the body as a person, but when it's a resource it's all of a sudden valuable.
A lot of the first few chapters really highlight that discrepancy as well. In particular I felt that the halfling Roleplay could have expanded on the subject a lot better. Namely because I wonder if the illusion of a relationship is more valuable than the person underneath that illusion.
And that theme I think has the potential to be a really interesting throughline for the story since it opens up a more intimate if still fantastical POV.
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One of the interesting things I notice is that this is told to a kobold. Which implies that Kobold also have transformation abilities.
It'll probably require Sand to actualize it, which implies that it's possible to shop for disposable bodies. Where you body jack a body which you have modified to your liking, whether or not that modification is safe/healthy is irrelevant as you can relatively safely get a new one.
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Evillevi
A Pikachu for everything - Shadow Pikachu,2015
NSFW stuff here
I do like the characters so far. You got the mom, the daughter and the ?slave? / indentured servant/other protagonist.
I do like the characters so far. You got the mom, the daughter and the ?slave? / indentured servant/other protagonist.
Honestly I'm kinda dissapointed somewhere deep down that sandi didn't grow a dick and fuck the kobold. More to the point I kinda can't help but think in that if biomancy exist, what's stopping people from mindbreaking others with pure pleasure. Just somehow ramp up the pleasure response for a while.
Additionally with biomancy it feels like a lot of kinks becomes possible. You got everything from roleplay to body mod to literally physically impossible sex to enhanced masturbation to one woman gangbangs.
But Sandy is a handholder. OFC
Additionally with biomancy it feels like a lot of kinks becomes possible. You got everything from roleplay to body mod to literally physically impossible sex to enhanced masturbation to one woman gangbangs.
But Sandy is a handholder. OFC
I do like how replacing the cyber punk with dragon punk creates a more pronouced implication that Dragons are like a monarchy where power originates from Dragons and flows outwards.
THat said if that's the case, would humanoid bodies be commodities in the black markets. With biomancy and implants and bodyjacking I can't help but think there's an even more pronounced underground where children, disabled people, or otherwise people with no protection are used and sold because their bodies have more value than their minds.
Like hypothethically you can do an even more depraved version of child sex smuggling. Have children who are bodyjacked by the more capable sex workers. That way you have both a rare commodity (actually underage body) and not deal with their immature mind and lack fo skills.
And while I use sex in the example, that's because the other ways to exploit body's are much much worse. Bodyparts are now target for theft and sale, forced labour in conditions where the actual body need not be kept alive, etc.
THat said if that's the case, would humanoid bodies be commodities in the black markets. With biomancy and implants and bodyjacking I can't help but think there's an even more pronounced underground where children, disabled people, or otherwise people with no protection are used and sold because their bodies have more value than their minds.
Like hypothethically you can do an even more depraved version of child sex smuggling. Have children who are bodyjacked by the more capable sex workers. That way you have both a rare commodity (actually underage body) and not deal with their immature mind and lack fo skills.
And while I use sex in the example, that's because the other ways to exploit body's are much much worse. Bodyparts are now target for theft and sale, forced labour in conditions where the actual body need not be kept alive, etc.