Crimson Festival [F/SN]

Guys, Usandru has said his piece and he's got every right to do it his way. He didn't expect so many entries and it's just hard luck if you didn't get on board early enough. I've missed loads of cool games from being late to the party too, there'll be others down the road.
Cooling down a bit, it is honestly just the sudden change in app policy that caught me off guard. Every indication before today told me that I had time to put together my character concept and I had already started investigating ideas with Usandru from the beginning. So it is really the feeling of just being cut off so suddenly without warning that had upsetting me. I had put my foot in the door and suddenly the door got slammed on it, to put figuratively from my perspective.

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That said, it is ultimately Usandru's decision, who needs to keep a rein on things and has to make difficult choices, and I did reacted a bit too strongly back there. IMO, I can't really fault Usandru for the decision now that I calmed down. but that, IMO, I feel it could of been presented better though that is perhaps just me.
As such, I am leaving this matter to the past.
 
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Moving on!

Players have been chosen. The player list has been updated. Almost all Truths are in. I am, however, possibly going to be a little busy tomorrow, and especially Saturday, so you'll have a little bit of time to regret your decisions and change your mind. If possible, I'll begin working on the AU tomorrow evening, so expect me to lock Truths in some 20 hours.

There is, however, one more thing to be done! After all, just because they're not being played doesn't mean they haven't changed. Therefore, gentlepersons, please take a look at this slightly truncated list of canon characters, and throw your vote on which variant to use!

Shinji Matou [The Worm]
[ ] {Broken}
[ ] {Bloody}
[ ] {Beaten}
Issei Ryuudou [The Monk]
[ ] {Servant of the People}
[ ] {Servant of the Gods}
[ ] {Servant of None}
Ayako Mitsuzuri [The Warrior]
[ ] {Knight}
[ ] {Captain}
[ ] {King}
Luvia Edelfelt [The Noble]
[ ] {Princess}
[ ] {Queen}
[ ] {Empress}
Hisui Tohno [The Lost]
[ ] {Widowed}
[ ] {Besieged}
[ ] {Crushed}


You may vote either here in the thread, or in secret by PM. Voting will close at the same time as Truths, so in about a day, probably a little less.

Welcome to the Festival!
 
Whining about it is pretty bad form since he doesn't owe you anything. He's putting in a lot of time and effort to run a game and it's his prerogative not to add to his own workload.

I spent a few hours and wrote up 3000 words on a character who, as it turns out, will not even be looked at. If he had said "first come first serve" I would not have bothered doing this. Instead I was led to believe that the final decision would be on this coming Sunday, not the day right after I first looked at the thread. I have every right to be annoyed that led me to waste my time and effort, and to let him know I am annoyed at this.

That's my complaint, though. He should have stuck with his word and evaluated all applications at once rather than taking them piecemeal. He didn't, he chose enough, fine. I have no further interest in this thread.
 
Look @Cavalier, with all due respect?

If you were at 3,000 words and didn't even feel comfortable submitting a prototype, then I don't think another day or two would have changed that.
 
Shinji Matou [The Worm]
[X] {Beaten}

Issei Ryuudou [The Monk]
[X] {Servant of the People}

Ayako Mitsuzuri [The Warrior]
[X] {Captain}

Luvia Edelfelt [The Noble]
[X] {Empress}

Hisui Tohno [The Lost]
[X] {Besieged}

...yeah, let's go with that.
 
Shinji Matou [The Worm]
[x] {Bloody}

Issei Ryuudou [The Monk]
[x] {Servant of the Gods}

Ayako Mitsuzuri [The Warrior]
[x] {Captain}

Luvia Edelfelt [The Noble]
[x] {Empress}

Hisui Tohno [The Lost]
[X] {Besieged}
 
Shinji Matou [The Worm]
[X] {Broken}

Issei Ryuudou [The Monk]
[X] {Servant of the Gods}

Ayako Mitsuzuri [The Warrior]
[X] {Captain}

Luvia Edelfelt [The Noble]
[X] {Empress}

Hisui Tohno [The Lost]
[X] {Widowed}
 
Welcome to the Festival!

Shinji Matou [The Worm]
[X] {Bloody}

But neither Broken nor Beaten. I think that his implies a more principled Shinji. Whether they're good principles or not, I'll have to wait and see. But the idea of Shinji having them and holding to them? That's interesting.

Issei Ryuudou [The Monk]
[X] {Servant of the People}

Issei's a good guy. I can't really imagine him being unhelpful to people. But that's "People". Serving a 'God', well... He's a monk. A buddhist, if I recall correctly. They don't really worship gods, for all that his ancestors could've been taught by a dragon.

Ayako Mitsuzuri [The Warrior]
[X] {King}

Ayako could do with a chance to shine. 'Knight' and 'Captain' are pretty straightforward. But 'King'? That carries interesting connotations.

Luvia Edelfelt [The Noble]
[X] {Princess}

No deep reasoning here, I'm afraid. I just think having a bratty/innocent Luvia would be funny.

Hisui Tohno [The Lost]
[X] {Besieged}

This one was hard. Widowed implies a lost love. Crushed doesn't say nice things either. And Besieged isn't exactly a pleasant descriptor. But it brings conflict to the game, along with the hope that the siege can be broken.
 
Oh yes, a general announcement. There will be at least 14 Servant Slots - otherwise I would never get the chance to give the NPCs any, and I don't think it's necessarily much fun to be in the Holy Grail War without a Servant.

Relatedly, I'd appreciate if you began thinking about which Servant you might like. Canon, non-canon, I'm generally fairly fine with anything, though I'd prefer to do as little of the research as possible.

There are some of the canon Servants that I won't use though. Largely because I think they're stupid. Others won't have their canon personalities.

You can generally assume that all the Fate/Zero, Fate/Stay Night and most of the Fate/Extra Servants are going to be largely like their canon variants.

There will be no modern heroes summonable. 19th Century is the absolute latest.

Remember that you will generally need a catalyst.

There is no rush with this, though, since I still need to write the AU, and the AU might impact your choices. Just keep it in mind, yeah?
 
Right, Truths are locked. Voting has ended. AU generation begins now. It's going to take me a while. I have 27 goddamn changepoints after all.

The winning variants:
Shinji Matou
[X] {Bloody}

Issei Ryuudou
[x] {Servant of the Gods}

Ayako Mitsuzuri
[x] {Captain}

Luvia Edelfelt
[X] {Empress}

Hisui Tohno
[X] {Besieged}
 
Since you have 14 slots, will this be a free for all style battle, or will you be creating two main factions (e.g. Black and Red)?
 
Likely multiple smaller factions. It's the natural reaction to having too many enemies after all.

There will not be two main factions, unless you somehow manage to make two.
 
History Lesson #1
Progress is being made, but the Fourth War is being complicated, especially since a lot of the details will be important to you. To assure you that things are happening, have some timeline teasers though.

***​

Up on the hill where the Kotomine Church stands, there is a small Christian graveyard. There, almost as though hidden away from sight, is the Matou family plot.

There are quite a few stones there, but among the oldest there is one in particular which might be considered noteworthy.

'Here lies Matou Zouken
Father, Grandfather, Teacher
May his spirit live on
through his teachings

Died on the 8th of October, 1879'

***​

In the aftermath of the second world war, as the American occupation of Japan began to really get into gear, an unusual thing happened, as the American forces began to experience incredibly ill luck in most of their ventures. Where things had initially gone well enough - if not smoothly, then at least generally productively - suddenly almost any attempt by the Americans to do something ended in miserable, unmotivated failure. And despite fears of sabotage or a resistance movement, no cause except plain bad luck was ever discovered.

Oddly enough, as these problems began to mount, the occupation force was approached by certain Japanese officials, businessmen and families, who offered to solve the problems if the Americans would just delegate the tasks. American records show that the problems were implied to be due to the spirits native to Japan, who took offence at the bumbling actions of the Americans.

As the following years saw the strings of bad luck mysteriously evaporate whenever the administration of tasks were delegated to the Japanese, and still no plots of sabotage were ever discovered, many people have come to consider the notion more seriously.

The practical consequence was a vast increase in the influence of certain groups in Japan, as the Americans were forced to rely extensively on their quite willing collaborators, prior to the full establishment of democracy and the cessation of the occupation, the full impact of which is still not entirely appreciated by scholars.
***
The world grieves when Hikari Kawamura, the woman considered almost singlehandedly responsible for satisfactorily bringing the Cold War to a close, dies in her countryside home in Japan in 1993, only two years after her retirement after almost forty years of service. It, along with the global demilitarization and the peaceful soviet dissolution, becomes a tangible sign that an era has come to an end.

Her funeral is broadcast live throughout much of the world, and attendance is enormous.

Funding for the UN programs she had a hand in increases massively almost overnight, as national governments pledge significant sums in her memory. Analysts note that with the additional funding on top of the already excellent progress, it may be possible to ensure food and water security to the entire global population fairly early on in the next century, potentially ridding the world of famine.​
 
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That's what happens when you're allowed to introduce 27 butterflies into a setting.
 
I've hardly touched on the massive clusterfuck that is the secret Japan or the 4th War yet either! :3
 
As the following years saw the strings of bad luck mysteriously evaporate whenever the administration of tasks were delegated to the Japanese, and still no plots of sabotage were ever discovered, many people have come to consider the notion more seriously.
That would be an outstanding material for a thesis!
Is that a name I should know?
It, along with the global demilitarization and the peaceful soviet dissolution, becomes a tangible sign that an era has come to an end.
How demilitarised are we talking here? Seems to be quite a shiny happy little Earth in this AU.
 
That would be an outstanding material for a thesis!

It would indeed! There's actually quite a little body of scholarship on it, though surprisingly little by the Japanese themselves, but it's damnably hard to figure out how it works.

Is that a name I should know?

Not prior to when I told you, but basically anyone that pays attention in school or has an interest in politics would know her by name, and anyone who works in politics, international relations or NGOs would be quite familiar with her. She's basically legendary within the UN.

How demilitarised are we talking here? Seems to be quite a shiny happy little Earth in this AU.

Quite demilitarised. The stocks of nukes are lower than OTL, the middle east is not quite as much of a simmering pot of tensions, the hatred level of East Asia is lower than OTL, the former Soviet states are generally more prosperous, and the prosperity has deflated some ethnic tensions.

Basically everybody is richer on average, though it is most notable in everything that isn't the West.

Honestly, even with all the nasty things creeping around, aside from a few specific cases, the world is just basically better off, yes.

Just a pity about the nigh immortal elder vampiric things that sometimes eat random towns.
 
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