Crimson Festival [F/SN]

OP
Location
委員長の牢獄
[No longer accepting new players]

The Fifth Holy Grail War begins in but two more weeks. Whether through fate, heritage, luck or mere happenstance, you have discovered this fact, and now you face a choice.

However there is more going on than you first assumed. In your mind stirs strange thoughts and powers. A subtle, seductive influence touches you. Things are not as they should be.

It matters not. War is upon you.

PREMISE
In this game, you play as a character thrust into the turmoil and danger of the Fifth Holy Grail War in Fuyuki. The year is 2004, and for whatever reason, you have felt something change or stir. Perhaps you have suddenly developed strange powers, come to see strange visions. Or perhaps you were already deeply entwined with the Moonlit World and have merely come to see distorted portents of a future that is not to be, and a past you should not know.

Whatever the cause or reasons, you face the deadly battle for the sake of a mighty wish. You have six weeks to shape your fate.

What path will you walk?

CHARACTERS
There are two character categories. The first is canon characters, modified somewhat to suit the game and be reasonably playable. The second is original characters. If a player prefers, they can make their own character. Finally, both categories are faced with a sprite, a ghost, a numinous entity which has made its home in their soul and whispers truths into their dreams, and which influences them even when awake.

The list of permissible canon characters includes, but is not necessarily limited to the following:
Rin Tohsaka [The Magus]
[ ] {Jewel Mage}
[ ] {Curse Witch}
[ ] {Martial Artist}
Shinji Matou [The Worm]
[ ] {Broken}
[ ] {Bloody}
[ ] {Beaten}
Issei Ryuudou [The Monk]
[ ] {Servant of the People}
[ ] {Servant of the Gods}
[ ] {Servant of None}
Ayako Mitsuzuri [The Warrior]
[ ] {Knight}
[ ] {Captain}
[ ] {King}
Luvia Edelfelt [The Noble]
[ ] {Princess}
[ ] {Queen}
[ ] {Empress}
Yukika Saegusa [The Pure]
[ ] {Innocent}
[ ] {Forgiving}
[ ] {Saintly}
Hisui Tohno [The Lost]
[ ] {Widowed}
[ ] {Besieged}
[ ] {Crushed}
Azaka Kokutou [The Blaze]
[ ] {Crime}
[ ] {Adrift}
[ ] {Justice}


Each canonical main character has three variants. The first variant is invariably one based on the typical canonical version of that character - adjusted as necessary given other changes, and with some flexibility to avoid the issue of faulty player and GM memory - while the following two distort and change the past of that character to some extent.

You will not come to know the details of any variants, as they are usually interdependent with the other characters, and thus the details do not as yet exist.

Original characters are instead generated through the character creation system detailed below.

CHARACTER CREATION
At the core of any original character is a reason for being involved. This motive or circumstance is required, and a character without enough connection to the fundamental plot will not be accepted.

Once an acceptable concept exists, original characters are assigned abilities by the following method.

First determine Specialties, Resources and Supernatural Powers. This is done by allocating six points to various items which then determines skill level, extent of resources or innate power and talent.

As an example, a typical Magus might have:
(Specialty) Research 1
(Specialty) Magecraft 1
(Resources) Magus Crest 1
(Resources) Wealth and Magecraft components 2
(Supernatural Power) Circuits 1
(Supernatural Power) Wind Magic 1
And three points of miscellaneous tricks and specialties


Here, a rating of 1 corresponds to being professional in a field, having unusual amounts of resources, or being capable of meaningful effects with supernatural powers.

A rating of 2 corresponds to being a leader in a field, having extensive and powerful resources and having supernatural powers that demand respect from even other supernatural beings - a Magus with a rating of 2 would be noteworthy to even the younger Dead Apostles.

A rating of 3 is normally considered the limit of human achievement, and borders transcendental mastery or influence, except in the case of resources where it is merely ridiculous. Having a rating of 3 is the lowest point at which Dead Apostle Ancestors, Alaya, Zelretch or others would normally become interested in someone. In terms of resources this level normally leaves merely scope, and begins to concern itself with rarity and potency. Possessing a powerful artefact means rating 3.

A rating of 4 is normally only seen in special families, and even then only rarely. The notable but lesser known skills and capabilities of Heroic Spirits would normally correspond to rating 4.

A rating of 5 is for all abilities prior to that stage where actual ranking becomes blurry, and contextual factors wholly supercede which power or skill has primacy. Satsuki Yumizuka, who became a Dead Apostle nearly instantly, had Circuits 5, as did Ciel. Ratings of 5 are incredibly rare and very potent.

As another example, Kiritsugu Emiya is rated to roughly have:
Combat Experience 2
Terrorist 2
Stealth 2
Magecraft 1
Einzberg Support 1
Black Market Contacts 1
Origin Bullets 1
Circuits 1
Time Magic 2


This however is often insufficient to capture certain rare skills or abilities. Thus, some characters may have a power referred to as their Unique Skill, or more commonly "bullshit".

Unique Skills include such things as Reality Marbles, being a Dead Apostle, Mystic Eyes of Death Perception and others.

Any original character may choose to have a Unique Skill, at the cost of between three and five of their Specialty points. Unique Skills must also be approved on a case by case basis.

MOTIVATION
Those who discover the War are invariably driven. Something hangs above them, pushes them, leads them, guides them. Mayhaps it is a wish, or prayer. Mayhaps it is a curse or blasphemy. It is something.

All original characters have at least one motivation, and may have two. The first motivation must link to the Holy Grail War in some manner. Whereas the second may be anything that incites that character to action.

The wishes carried in the heart determine much of what the Grail and the War means to you, and in touching the paths of others, what you seek in your heart will inevitably colour that meeting.

Wishes may be changed, but the ones carried deeply change reluctantly and often painfully.

INNOCENCE
Purity of heart. The unscarred. The unbroken.

All original characters begin with five points of Innocence. These may be exchanged one for one to Specialty, Resource or Supernatural Power points.

Be wary. Innocence, once lost, is rarely regained.

And yet, purity of heart shall not save you from the War. What value does Innocence hold, in a Moonlit World of monsters and devils?

Stain your innocent heart in the colours of sin that you may become glorious.

The poison of the cup of corruption is sweet indeed.

COMPLICATIONS
The grand have enemies many, varied and multifaceted.

Declare your foes, and mayhaps you shall find yourself rewarded.

If you wish for your original character to be more powerful, suggest a thorn in their side that shall haunt them even into the War, and mayhaps you shall earn more power in exchange.

There is no template for this. The world is too large for it.

So. Be it your rivals, or your very blood that burns with inhuman hunger, that which seeks to destroy you may empower you.

BOONS
The Grail War is dangerous, even to those with enough power to live in the Moonlit world. The force possessed by even the weakest Servants is enough to make any but the strongest tremble in fear.

However something has heard your prayers.

All characters may wish for boons to be granted them. Advantages they wish they had, things that they believe will tip the balance of victory and defeat in their favour.

These boons will be granted.

They will be granted, and yet…

There is a cost.

Having chosen a character, you may make as many requests as you wish, be it one at a time or many at once. Be warned though, that each request carries a cost, whether overt or hidden, and that each time you make requests may also incur penalties.

In general, a Boon should be one of Skill, Resources, Talent, Knowledge or Truth.

A Boon of Skill is usually another point or more in Specialties. It is important to note that this Skill is supernatural in origin - it is something from outside the character itself - and that for some purposes this can be important.

A Boon of Resources is a contortion in the world that changes the path of time such that you have Resources that you should not. They are statted much like Resources normally are, but do not forget that their existence is a crime against the World. For certainly, the World may not.

A Boon of Talent is is one of supernatural power. A soul bereft of circuits may be given them, eyes may be granted mystic power. Again this is handled much like Supernatural Power, but also Unique Skills can be granted as Boons. But they are not of you, not wholly.

A Boon of Knowledge is to know a secret. To be granted awareness of some thing or being. Hidden artefacts, hidden lands, whatever you wish to know, you can. This is the gentlest Boon, for it is just whispers in your soul, and the curses are rarely great. Though grand secrets also carry grand curses. Be wary, you that would seek to know that which man should best leave alone.

A Boon of Truth is a declaration. It is an imposition of What Has Happened upon the history of the World. A Truth is absolute - inviolate - in itself. However if it conflicts with another Truth, there may be a tear, and where history is torn… who knows what may come when it is unravelled?

To declare Truth is the heaviest of burdens. The cost to make your mark upon the World in such a fashion is heavy. However if you can bear the curses, then… wishes may be granted.

CURSES
The cost of boons is fundamentally accumulated curses. Each curse may manifest in a different way, and as they add up, they may pile together and bring about a terrible fate. Some will be obvious, a Geas, a demand, a Quest to undertake. Some will be insidious, haunting echoes, enemies, hidden disadvantages

You may declare things you wish your Curses to manifest as, and thereby have them absorbed by those manifestations. This can only be done at character generation, and you will not know how many Curses are thus absorbed, or how many Curses are left.

If the number of Curses absorbed exceeds the number of Curses you have, then you will accumulate something else. What exactly this is you do not know.

If the burden of your Curses grows too onerous, then you may always cast them aside. Reject them. However to tear off that which has become entwined with you is to tear off parts of yourself. To shed your burdens in this way equally strips you of an aspect of yourself. And if there are no more Boons to throw away for the sake of this then… your soul itself shall have to make payment.

SPIRIT
A spirit haunts you. It clings to your being - your soul - and whispers secrets to you. It grants you power.

All that is not native to your character, belongs in truth to this sprite, this ephemeral being. By its power you are made great, grand, glorious. But it is not yours, this power.

At least, not yet.

The spirit haunts you and is foreign to you, but as the days pass, it sinks deeper into your soul. Slowly, they intermingle, slowly, the differences blur. In the end, you become a single being.

TRUTHS
Your spirit, no matter how weak or how powerful, whispers Truths to you. You are granted three Truths, much like those you might request as Boons, no matter what else you request, no matter what else you may be.

Three Truths.

Let them light your way.

CHARACTER SHEET
Name:
Gender:
Age:
Nationality:
First Motivation:
Second Motivation:


Abilities:

Unique Skills (if any):

Innocence:

Complications (if any):

Boons (if any):

Curses (if any):

Truths:






GENERAL DETAILS
PLAYERS
Okay, time for the general housekeeping details. I have not set a player-limit. I will arbitrarily decide on however many players I feel like. This is not first come, first serve. Responding to character concepts requires a decent bit of effort, so don't be surprised if I start by just rejecting ones I don't find interesting out of hand. I'm vastly more likely to consider characters I find to be interesting in the context of the game.

SERVANTS
It is rather plausible that not everyone will get Servants. This could change. There's no guarantee, but I consider it perfectly likely that some set of the player characters will be denied Servants. Plan your concepts based on this.

EFFORT
Let me be brutally honest. This is not my A-game. It isn't even my B-game. Hell, my C-game is another thing I've been running for a while. This is probably something like my F-game. I intend to be very, very lazy about this, and largely update only as much as I feel like, with potentially long breaks, even month long breaks with no warning. At the end of the day I just don't care enough to really put in the hours for this particular game. If it begins to feel seriously like work, then I will drop it. So be interesting! :p

CANON
I barely remember the details of the VN at this point, and frankly I don't care. The game is intentionally set up to be a massive AU, and if you care notably for the particulars of the Nasuverse, please just go away. The history, mechanics, metaphysics, thematics... all of them are liable to be significantly different, and I consider this to be the biggest feature. The players contribute to this, by adding their own spin to events.

SCOPE
This game will last for six in-game weeks, plus or minus one week. The first two weeks are the preparatory phase, and will likely be truncated heavily. The middle two weeks are the War proper, and will likely be the meat of the game. The final two weeks are the aftermath and exists to wrap up loose ends. My goal is to ensure that the story ends. I will generally attempt to adjust things to match this. Likewise, design your characters to have things to do during the Grail War, not after the Grail War, because those things won't likely matter much at all.

LETHALITY
I am a softie at heart, and I hate killing off player characters. However I will kill off people doing stupid things. I will usually mark any such thing, I will declare the challenge, I will let you turn back, turn away, flee from danger. However if you stick your head into the dragon's mouth, I would rather kill off your character than contrive your survival.

GOOD END
It will likely not happen. The base thematics of the game and the setting say that you will win, but winning hurts. You get some of what you want, but it costs you. Remember this.
 
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Dramatis Personae, Factions, Master/Servant Pairs
Dramatis Personae
Yuu Satonaka
Virgil Fisher
Theresa Ashcroft
Azaka Kokutou
Ryszard Twardowski
Shizu Nanaya
Rin Tohsaka

Kirei Kotomine
Claudia Kotomine
Caren Kotomine
Cassandra Kotomine
Kanna Kotomine

Kaho

Itoe Inaya
Yuki Satonaka

Touko Aozaki


Factions
The Mage Association
The Assembly of the Eight Sacrament of the Holy Church
The Great House of the Einzbern
The Golden King
The Tohno Clan
The Matou Family
The Inaya Family
The Great House of Dubhshláine


Servant Slots
#1: Servant [Unknown], Master [Unknown]
#2: Open
#3: Open
#4: Open
#5: Open
#6: Open
#7: Open

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#1: Open
#2: Open
#3: Open
#4: Open
#5: Open
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Mwahahaha.

After 3 long years...

Finally, Usandru has come back to this game!

Dibs on Rin.
 
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I should like to note that with my GM perogative to remove stupid shit, I have excised the worst excesses of Shinji because they were terrible, horrible shit that added nothing whatsoever to the story. Thus, there is no sexual abuse. Lots of other kinds of abuse because the Matous are fucked up, but Shinji being a terrible rapist was both extremely skeevy and utterly meaningless, and I will have none of that shit in my game.

Oh yes, this reminds me. There is no "sex transfers power" thing here. The headache would be annoying. Instead, there exists an inconvenient ritual that requires a decent bit of trust which lets prana be transferred but does not require seafood metaphors.

Finally, I find secrecy amusing, but not overwhelmingly so, therefore please keep all Truths in PMs so you can't cooperate on that, but otherwise do as you wish.
 
Do want.

Have to hit the sack, but will sleep on a character concept.
 
I'll need to go to sleep myself soon, but tomorrow, as soon as I know I can stick around one, I'll make an IRC channel and link to it here for people that want faster clarification of things.

How early this will be depends on how busy I'll be at work.
 
Hmph, that's a completely different thing. While we may be rivals in the game of love, in the war of words there is only one possible victor.
 
It looks like we have nine potential players so far. I have to say, I'm really doubtful that I'll be convinced to let everyone play, since that's a lot more effort for me. Just need to note that.

The deciding factor for which players and which characters I want is going to hinge a lot on what the player intends to do with that character - how interesting I think their plan, vision or idea is. It's fine and all to just say "I want X" but the ultimate outcome of that is that I pick the people I know in a fairly small group because that's easiest on me.

Note also that the AU is not pregenerated. The character creation process is part of shaping the AU, primarily through Truths, Complications and character variants.

I'll also just note in case it wasn't clear that this is not a self-insert at all. While this is basically a reboot of the short-lived Fate/Heaven's Gate on SB, they're very different things at this point.

Anyway, tl;dr:
Please invest your time in writing me a reason for why I should rather have you as a player than anyone else, because you have a sweet, sweet concept or idea for your character. Something to make me go "yes! I want to GM for this character! It sounds hilarious."
 
Maybe I overlooked it, but since there can be Original Characters, should I assume everyone is to play as the character, and not some kind of self-insert?
 
Alright then.

Are there different criteria in showing our desire to play for either OCs and canon characters?

Somewhat, but only due to the specific context of those characters. An original character needs a motivation that binds them to the Grail War, they need to be drawn to it as outsiders. A few of the canon characters do too, but a lot of them are already bound up in Fuyuki and thus don't need to necessarily be concerned about the War, just things that relate to the War.

But that's not a requirement! I expect most interpretations of Issei, Ayako and Yukika won't really care too much about the wish, but will instead be bound up in a lot of relationships they consider important, and likewise I expect most original characters will have a wish that drives them there, an overarching motivation that informs how they deal with everything, but you can certainly flip that expectation! Maybe Issei actually has a burning, overwhelming desire for something, which he is willing to even cut off his relationships and connections in order to attain. Maybe not!

One thing to keep in mind is that I'm very fond of characters and goals which are basically set up to fail. Mighty's proposed character is an excellent example. They're motivated by spite, and their actions are liable to lead to a universally worse situation for basically everybody. If Mighty wins, he loses. If Mighty loses, he also loses. Only by having the character actually change as a consequence of interactions with others in the Grail War will Mighty have a chance of a bittersweet victory that won't turn to ashes in his mouth. I love that shit. It hits all the things I like about Nasu and high drama stuff.

This is not to say that you have to be set up to fail. It's honestly a good thing to have a few people with just generally wholesome goals to balance out the misery, but I want to see some tragedy - or failing that, farce - not a pleasant stroll in the park with puppies and spring flowers before making a safe, pleasant and productive wish that makes everyone happier.
 
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