Aranfan
Team Plasma Grunt
I lol'd. I lol'd on and off for several days.
Cute! A very cute chapter that is lewd, but also wholesome.
Hot, and also hopefully good for Blackberry's self-esteem. I do gotta wonder tho, considering how much Lyle was relying on dress-chan to satisfy Blackberry when he did her horse pussy, just how much of his cum actually managed to get in her rather than dress-chan and if the chances of a foal are non-zero.
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Skipped over the dreams interlewd because I was triggered last time, sorry.
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A very interesting chapter with a lot of good thoughts from lyle. He's fully on board with the Mamamo society thing now I see. Not that I blame him, considering how much better life among them seems to be. Sadly, I suspect he underestimates the zealotry of the church.
I hope the final line indicates Lyle's egg is gonna hatch soon and I can start calling them by the correct gender, but for now Lyle still identifies as male so male I shall call him.
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This is really good, although I do kinda wish you hadn't skipped over breakfast even if it makes more narrative sense to do so. Beeps continues to be the best, she's able to both affirm that Lyle is a vigorous lover and express concern for his worries in a single world. Faust putting the dream and therefore also the previous chapter into perspective is also a good thing both in terms of narrative and helping Lyle keep his head screwed on straight.
Interesting that Faust is so furious at magenta for this, from the later talk about zombies and wights it doesn't seem like Faust is expecting Lyle to Alp. Even so, this indoctrination attempt is definitely making me like Magenta even less. It's good that Lyle is communicating with his wives tho, a healthy relationship is built on communication and it pleases me that this polycule has a lot of it going on.
The conversation moving on to lighter topics also lets me gush about how great the chemistry between Faust and Lyle is. The more we see them interact the more obvious it is that they have been very close friends for a very long time and that they make a great couple.
The lab mishap is also utterly hilarious.
I had been wondering when FRAN TASTIC would return. She's great. I see she has a larger rogues' gallery than just Faust.
This chapter also has a very clear signal from the conversation that the end is near for the narrative. Lyle is going to either incubize or alp soon, and I gotta say I'm here for it.
In other news, Beeps continues to be the best. Her comforting Lyle was very sweet and well done. You can tell that they are also close friends. I am glad they are able to communicate so well even through Beeps' taciturn nature.
The march hare thing was a big "what" from me. I am surprised at how easily Beeps put on the bunny ears after how skittish she's consistently been around Akubra, and also kinda sad that the touching moment got ruined by Akubra's hat inducing massive horniness. It was hot tho, so that's a plus from a reader's point of view. Assuming the ability to take off her vagina and have it serve as a still connected onahole is a feature of wonderland strangeness and not a default feature on her model.
Also, Beeps continues to convey more meaning in a couple of words than most characters can convey in several paragraphs.
Ow. I think I have a cavity now.
But seriously, that went from very hot to very, very sweet extremely quickly. Faust being flummoxed that Lyle was waiting for her to propose to him was hilarious, and also a damning indictment of the society they were raised in.
They've come quite a ways from the literal stand off that started the story haven't they? I wonder what Faust thinks about the knowledge that she could have gotten hitched to Lyle any day she wanted.
This chapter was not hot, I was not aroused by it. I was too busy squeeing at these adorable dorks being adorkable together. The reveal about Faust's phylactery in particular was amazing, and literally made me stop and pause to process the cuteness of it.
Those last lines tho. OOF.
