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Adam is already worshiped so it could happen that way, plus that means he probably would not steal any of the CPU's Shares when he arrives, not only that but it might actually open up Gamindustri to the wider worlds and get them more shares from other worlds inhabitants.
Exactly! It would work so well!

I mean, theaceoffire is the one who will have to make the call, and he probably already has plans of his own, but I do personally believe that Hyperdimension Neptunia is perfect for this fic.

I guess we'll just have to wait and see!
 
Hmmm. Rules for Next Adventure.
This next trip will be... interesting.

Rules for this trip:
  • Vastly reduced ability.
    • Data returned after death.
    • Unable to change 'Sockets' after chosen for duration.
    • 'Sockets' will have passive only effects (Unless ability gained during travels).
    • Communication with soul nearly zero (Unless ability gained during travel).
  • Lack of Communication.
    • Time spent here will be negated during travel. Instant go, Instant return.
    • Due to time manipulation, no communication with Wives/Realms.
    • Due to soul communication restrictions, Simmy/Sammy/Pokemon are unreachable.
    • Squishy will still be observing, will have (minor) abilities to interfere. Limited Deus ex Machina.
  • Lack of data.
    • Due to limited biology, advanced meta-knowledge will be... flighty. If any.
    • Advanced schematics, constructions, are not accessible. Same for advanced tools.
In return:
  • Low Profile.
    • Any info that is compromising will be self-censored.
    • Low level 'Not My Problem' field will be enabled.
    • Soul will be locked down by 'Bind'. Tightly.
      • Soul Attacks, Mind Attacks, Emotional Attacks will be negated or heavily resisted.
  • Initial Low-Mid Level Probability Manipulation.
    • Due to some suggestions from Simmy, Opportunities are more likely to occur.
    • These manipulations become less valuable over time due to uncertainty.
      • Closer to Realm Entry, Larger the positive event manipulations.
    • Can be ignored.

There is more to it, but the general idea is there.
 
This next trip will be... interesting.

Rules for this trip:
  • Vastly reduced ability.
    • Data returned after death.
    • Unable to change 'Sockets' after chosen for duration.
    • 'Sockets' will have passive only effects (Unless ability gained during travels).
    • Communication with soul nearly zero (Unless ability gained during travel).
  • Lack of Communication.
    • Time spent here will be negated during travel. Instant go, Instant return.
    • Due to time manipulation, no communication with Wives/Realms.
    • Due to soul communication restrictions, Simmy/Sammy/Pokemon are unreachable.
    • Squishy will still be observing, will have (minor) abilities to interfere. Limited Deus ex Machina.
  • Lack of data.
    • Due to limited biology, advanced meta-knowledge will be... flighty. If any.
    • Advanced schematics, constructions, are not accessible. Same for advanced tools.
In return:
  • Low Profile.
    • Any info that is compromising will be self-censored.
    • Low level 'Not My Problem' field will be enabled.
    • Soul will be locked down by 'Bind'. Tightly.
      • Soul Attacks, Mind Attacks, Emotional Attacks will be negated or heavily resisted.
  • Initial Low-Mid Level Probability Manipulation.
    • Due to some suggestions from Simmy, Opportunities are more likely to occur.
    • These manipulations become less valuable over time due to uncertainty.
      • Closer to Realm Entry, Larger the positive event manipulations.
    • Can be ignored.

There is more to it, but the general idea is there.
aw man our dude got nerfed! Also he can die?
 
Meanwhile, at Cauldron...

David: Did anyone else feel that?​
Paul: Feel what?​
David: I'm strong again.​
DM opens a camera feed to the Garden, just to check: ... Shit.​
Rebecca: What?​
DM: The Garden's missing.​
From the description in last chapter, don't the garden have turned into the blue gems/fire Adam turns it into. Like Queen Admin was. Not absent but now made of a better material.

Not sure, to those who focus on the immaterial instead of reality, Adam is a fishbowl.
I know that floating objects won't be a new thing to supernatural entities but the though of a fishbowl spontaneously sprouting legs and talking makes me laugh.
Also the Immaterial is the 'true' state of being with reality being what we can perceive of it.
This means Adam is actually female with the fishbowl's hole being his her private parts.

Do we have a Fishbowl Pokemon yet?

Some R&R is always nice

Is it another world that Legend is unable to recognise the Simurgh?
At least the mystery should be quickly cleared up once whoever in the PRT is keeping track of Adam's adventures gets back to them
 
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I love this story and the wacky hijinks that constantly just happen that being said I personally hope that the next world is Disgaea since I am personally clueless about Neptunia that and I think that item worlds and reincarnation systems would be amazingly useful for Adam's system.
 
Mew is playing an MMORPG where she's all the players. At once.
And apparently, from her point of view, one of her characters spontaneously disappeared from the game, so she can't do anything about it. After a closer look, she found out that it found a walking benevolent bug (Adam) and was monitoring (playing with and following) it before disappearing.

In reality, the character was pulled into a different server that Mew couldn't access, so the AI basically went to autopilot, and is slowly gaining sapience thanks to eating peanuts supplied by the bug.

Also, based on the conditions and perks that Adam is using for the next world jump (he basically chose New Game+ for the added benefit of obscurity and better early game gameplay), it seems to be a setting with very strong people, a la the Pokémon verse and their legendaries, but less benevolent/indifferent about Adam's intrusion if found out. What universes have those people but also allow him to improve his System while visiting?
 
I'm not gonna lie, really hope you have a solid plan for the next arc because my first thoughts after looking at the rules for the next trip were that it was not going to be a fun read and/or it seemed like you just wanted to write a different story.

Your basically removing access to any prior characters, most powers, nerfing him biologically (when his body and various enhancements to it has been a lot of his schtick for a while now), the whole meta-knowledge (for the most part) advantage and a bunch of other things. Several of them combined might have been fine but when you add them all together it does not seem like we'll be reading about the same MC.

Seems more like you want to make an AU of Adam inserted into a different verse and turn that into a story like theirishdreamer on SB has done with several of his fics.
 
Your basically removing access to any prior characters, most powers, nerfing him biologically (when his body and various enhancements to it has been a lot of his schtick for a while now), the whole meta-knowledge (for the most part) advantage and a bunch of other things. Several of them combined might have been fine but when you add them all together it does not seem like we'll be reading about the same MC.
You may be right about it being an essentially different MC, or at least a different type of arc. However, I think that is a good thing. If he keeps all his powers/precog-friends, he's basically unable to be harmed, can uplift a world in days, and has no incentive to do much but wander around. Restricting him like this forces him to change his approach, learn more techniques/tactics, and basically incorporate another aspect of himself into himself. It's kind of how gods grow in a few stories. More to the point, I think it's necessary to give us readers a change of pace from the usual.

I don't know anything about Neptunia or Disgaea. I'm hoping it'll be either canon Gamer world (definitely strong enemies there, but not really a consistent "system"), or Kumo desu ga, nani ka (definitely a coherent system there, though not as all-encompassing as his current system).
 
Also, based on the conditions and perks that Adam is using for the next world jump (he basically chose New Game+ for the added benefit of obscurity and better early game gameplay), it seems to be a setting with very strong people, a la the Pokémon verse and their legendaries, but less benevolent/indifferent about Adam's intrusion if found out. What universes have those people but also allow him to improve his System while visiting?
My first thought was Bleach actually, which fits the criteria of "Lots of things that would smush him like a bug if they found out, but being a roaming blind spot can mess up everyone's plans"

Alternatively Disgeia is a GREAT game, and I love seeing crossovers with it, plus there's a number of redundant features that might help streamline System's updates there. Not to mention the fun of Item Worlds :)
 
Second Arc: System Preparation
The planning session started with a basic overview. Profits were up, businesses were booming, complaints were low, and people were starting to realize that 'Variance' may be responsible for the global takeover of 'Classes' and the various new powers. Meh, can't win them all.

Adam gestured towards the text. "Now that we have some stability, let's talk about how to improve the System."

Narwhal was slouched in her chair, as work had ramped up these last few weeks. "Why bother? Won't you just declare 'Improve the System' when activating your trip?"

He sighed. "Too dangerous. This next trip will be... very risky." A small list showed up. "Did some research and some test queries first, and found that the type of Realm I will be visiting will be conceptual in nature."

A few images showed up. "Most Realms I visited so far were based on biology, or magic, or whatever. These places have something our System is lacking: A path forward, a procedural path from nothing to power."

He showed some images pulled from his investigation. "These worlds however have a process, from a normal mortal to immortal existences. Through drugs, meditation, rituals, surgery, and so on... you can transform yourself to represent ideals, social concepts, and martial legends. With the support of the local culture modifying reality, lethal actions can lead to fundamental improvements in health, lifespan, and abilities."

Adam glanced at the images and videos he had gathered. "Downside? Some of these Realms allow individuals to reach deity levels fairly consistently. So you get a lot of VERY petty people with huge power levels. Risky."

With a sigh, he pulled up his restriction list. "Simmy came up with this idea to help protect me during the next journey. Using what we learned from various Avatar abilities, like Scion's body and the Siberian projection, I will be sending a subsection of my existence into this Realm instead of visiting directly. It will take a week or two for me to recover here, and the copy of me over there will be... limited..."

Very limited.

He nodded. "But I as a whole will be safe. Anything learned by my Avatar will be returned to me when he finishes his trip or if someone manages to kill him, so there is no risk of this being a waste of time... and this will also protect me from various soul attacks, mind adjustments, mastering attempts, and so forth."

Narwhal frowned. "Is... is him dying a big possibility?"

Adam chuckled. "Well, technically yes. The whole culture there is based on betrayal, resource collection, exploiting graves and past heritages. Society groups together to defend itself, share resources to the most talented individuals, and create safe areas in a world where one person can theoretically become a God at any time. I plan on cheating all I can though... I will be using 'Research', 'Growth', and 'Purification' for my powers."

CD was still reviewing the data. "Will that have a significant impact?"

He nodded. "Immense. 'Research' will allow me to safely comprehend concepts, adjust cultivation methods and techniques, and hopefully find clever solutions to any problems. 'Growth' will improve my speed at growing in power, my ability to work with various plants and resources, and speed things up in general. 'Purification' will reduce the chances for bottlenecks in my progress, reduce corruption or cultivation deviance, and allow me to safely use resources others could not."

Narwhal tapped the table. "Maybe you should use 'Recovery', 'Consumption', and 'Tithe'? Should let you heal, absorb all kinds of stuff, and make your followers give you strength."

Adam sighed. "No, the Realm is conceptual. 'Demonic' and 'Evil' paths of cultivation exist, and the further down those you travel, the more it twists your personality and abilities. I need VERY positive natured abilities to help resist those issues, and while 'Recovery' would not cause a problem, both 'Consumption' and 'Tithe' could be used to absorb souls, drain followers, and so forth. Not worth the risk in my mind."

He gestured. "'Research' is more important than healing anyway. At high levels of understanding, it is possible to not just heal yourself, but to regenerate from a single drop of blood, to create living clones that you can use as a second body if someone kills you, to survive as a spirit and rebuild a body from scratch... and more. The world rewards self discovery and deep thinking... and I can't use the active parts of 'Recovery' anyway. Otherwise I would just scan a few people and change myself to use the best setup... assuming their body actually uses organics at all."

Seeing the confusion, he shrugged. "It is possible to replace flesh with conceptual materials, creating bodies that can transform into monsters or elements, adding metaphysical organs or potential energy sources... 'Recovery' would have issues with that. For now."

CD hummed. "Odd... the culture seems to have aspects of various myths and legends."

He nodded. "Yeah, this cluster of Realms are odd. Concepts are... literally the most important thing there. Mental ideas can be physically used to attack, planets exist for far too long and are far too large... gravity alone should crush everyone there if it followed our rules. Some planets are literal planes... infinite in each direction, infinite in depth, and so on."

Betty was tapping her notes. "Several species too. Beasts, Demonic Beasts, Demons, Monsters, Elves, Beastkin, various Human Half-breeds, Living Artifacts..."

Adam added some data. "Depends on the Realm. One was focused on gathering the souls of Demonic Beasts and using them as power and ability sources. Created a series of rings, where the older the Beast the more powerful the abilities. Another Realm gathered the energy refinement cores from these Beasts as a cultivation resource, or for potion and pill ingredients. This one over here is similar to Pokémon, where you bond to spiritual beasts and can summon them to and from your soul, enhancing them would enhance yourself."

CD hummed. "And not all these revolve around monsters or beasts. Some Realms have dungeons, or something similar to System's Quests. Not to mention the ones where their version of the System is physically viewable."

He nodded. "Yeah, worlds where you gain power by choosing classes, mastering them, then unlocking branching class paths. Those are interesting, as instead of gaining levels yourself you actually level up each class individually, gaining permanent bonuses upon mastery. On the other hand, this one has 'paths' that you can master instead, where you gain points for mastering skills and can spend them on various 'paths of development' to gain bonuses, extra abilities, or special effects."

Narwhal glared at the... MASSIVE list of options. "Are we going to be reviewing this stuff forever!?"

Adam chuckled. "Maybe, I guess. Haven't even talked about game related Realms where the System is silent and invisible while creating structure for society. Or the ones where System gives you an OP boost, like your own personal cultivation dimension or the farming system from a mobile application." He tapped the smaller list. "But I am probably going to enter one of these 'Cultivation' Realms. The real problem, and the reason I will be stuck there so long, is the cost of transfer."

She blinked, and looked back at the notes. "Huh? But... it doesn't seem that expensive."

He sighed. "The cost bump is due to me spending MOST of my points on the most important feature: I need a Cultivation Realm without a story line. A 'Slice of Life' fic is literally life saving."

Adam waved a hand, many stories showing on the table. "In most Cultivation stories, the main character rapidly grows in power... and meets equally dire consequences. You start off in a small town, then move up to a city... a state... a continent... a world... a solar system... a reality layer... and so forth. At several steps along the way, the possibility of a foe killing an entire region of people becomes an issue. Entire worlds can be lost during conflict."

He glared at the paperwork. "I do NOT want to put up with that shit. Why should I risk the planet blowing up because two upper level existences were arguing over who was showing too little respect to whom? So no, I am accepting several penalties and risks to ensure that my visit will occur during one of the many, MANY ten thousand year intervals where absolutely nothing interesting happens."

Narwhal blinked. "Ten... wait, how long?"

Adam shrugged. "Sects with thousands of years of cultivation history are considered 'new' and 'edgy'. Plants that take a hundred years to mature are common. Regions that have a million years of history are respected, but not uncommon. This kind of thing is a side effect of having conceptions be so vital to existence. Doesn't hurt that some families and Sects were founded by a person who grew so strong that they basically became immortal."

He sighed. "Honestly, the cost of preventing main character shenanigans was low compared to finding a place without constant war and invasions. Oh, they will still occur, but at least I won't be sent directly into a never ending war to build up contribution points or whatever. Death and murder is near constant, but by comparison to the alternatives I will practically be having a peaceful vacation."

He felt her arms wrap him in a hug. "Still... will you be alright?"

God he would miss her. Or to be more accurate, the him traveling will miss her. "Yeah, to be honest my emotions don't quite line up with normal humanity at this point. I won't go around torturing people or anything, but if you attempt to kill me then don't expect to get off scot-free."

He felt her frown into his neck. "He may be an Avatar of you, but I still want him to be careful."

Seriously, she was just wonderful.

Betty separated a page. "How are you going to handle this? You don't have enough points to learn the language, or gain a history, or anything."

He winced. "Right, that goes back to the long time investment issue. In return for safety and enough time to build up strength there... I am going to have to basically reincarnate there. As a baby."

Their eyes got large. And sparkly.

Adam sighed. "Yes, I will have Squishy save memories. And ensure that we can make pictures later."

To be honest, this particular 'drawback' wasn't a huge issue. He had no memories of being a kid, and there was a strong possibility that he had spawned here in Worm as an adult, memories needed just squished into his brain. So maybe the chance to have a family and all that would be a positive one? He could always help them cultivate as well, letting them live long enough until Adam got enough power to safely bring them back here.

He blinked when he felt his soul open, let a small pink cat inside, then slam shut again. "WHAT!?"

Seriously, when the hell had Mew LEFT his soul!?

His thoughts were distracted when a door in space opened up and Alexandria floated through. "Excuse me, normal man of not much importance. I was in pursuit of an artificial pink creature of very slight importance. Have you seen a floating cat pass through here?"

Everyone pointed at the door. Mew had been giggling as she hid inside his 'Grid of Confinement', which once again was locked from inside. Somehow.

She nodded. "Thank you for your time."

...And she was gone.

Adam frowned as Simmy and Sammy floated into the room. "Have... have you guys been messing with the Triumvirate?"

The red-eared Plusle cheered on Sammy's head, while the blue-eared Minun was sleeping on Simmy's lap.

Narwhal chuckled. "Dragon sent me some notes on that. Poor Eidolon has been chasing Mew around the continent all day. Didn't know Alexandria got in on the act though." She blinked. "Didn't know she could make that portal thing either, really."

He grumbled. "Wish I could travel like that. Whenever I use 'Transfer' I keep getting that giant metallic skull thing. It was cool, but not remotely subtle."

CD was still reading the massive amount of data Adam had provided. "Your flaming blue hair isn't subtle either. Or the spider bone limb thing. Honestly, I'm just happy you have been including flesh with your bodies... I guess my expectations have dropped a little, now that I reflect on it."

He winced. "I'll have you know, I had a human like body for the ENTIRE trip this time!"

Betty giggled. "And six spider bone limbs."

Narwhal nodded. "Don't forget him being on fire all the time. Seriously, people from the Pokémon Realm were FAR too accepting."

He was NOT pouting. Jerks.
 
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Honestly, in his place, I'd be very worried about a powerful immortal finding his appearance 'interesting' and sending back a corrupted data packet, even if they couldn't travel to say, the worm realm.
 
Hopefully it'll be one of the not-as-terrible Xianxia settings. I've read a bit of some that weren't the worst, but I've heard some bad things about others.
 
Ah Xianxia those settings that have way way way too much revenge porn innvolved... and way way too many ethical violations for no other reason beyond.. reasons.
 
Hopefully it'll be one of the not-as-terrible Xianxia settings. I've read a bit of some that weren't the worst, but I've heard some bad things about others.

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What would a Xianxia MC do?Seriously, what would they do? Asking for a friend.
The title doesn't do it justice. Basically someone gets isekai'd into a young master (aka Cultivation Idiot) and tries to survive while taking advantage of tropes left, right and centre.
 
One of the bigger issues in Xianxia beyond the revenge porn is how they pretty much utterly fuck up stuff for women in it... too much drinking of the "muh purity" aspect. Like yeah we get it but can the women be more than just little cauldrons for the Mc to power up using his dick.. please and thank you.
 
Hopefully it'll be one of the not-as-terrible Xianxia settings. I've read a bit of some that weren't the worst, but I've heard some bad things about others.
There are only 2 types of plotlines for a Xianxia protaganist.

1. If male, it starts as a revenge story AND/OR as a young man who discovers a cheat item/style/cultivation method. Regardless of which plotline it started as, the 2nd also intrudes.

2. If female, it starts as a revenge story AND/OR as a peasant girl falls in love with a rich guy, who usually dies eventually. Regardless of which plotline it started as, the 2nd also intrudes.

Once the story progresses far enough, these plotlines repeat.

Edit: Don't get me wrong, I like reading a good Xianxia. As long as they are relatively short. Problem is, you don't read Xianxia stories for the characters.
Every 5-10 arcs, other than the MC the entire cast gets replaced. Don't even mention love interests. Some just get forgotten by the authors.
 
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Yeah Xianxia is a mess... it's pretty much the pinnacle of examples of toxic culture and saving face ethics. Which basically means it's sucks major ass and is incredibly backwards.

If your male you turn into an edgy jackass or just straight up die. If your female your fate is to either become an edgy bitch, a little wall flower, or raped constantly or all of the above.

It's honestly a mess...Someone going full on Western Hero on those verses asses would be cathartic to the extreme.
 
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