Tattletale's thoughts: Also he breaks, or twists promises constantly and goes off and shakes the foundation of the city with no warning.
Tattletale: I know you're scared, but please don't start making apocalyptic stuff because March.
Apeiron: I promise not to use any of the apocalyptic stuff I have.
*Previously* Apeiron: Her name is Tetra for the place on the Apocalypse list and I will take her whenever I go into action. What was that AI daughter and AI son, is it time to improve your capabilities?
(chapter 30) Tattletale: You don't have anything planned do you?
Apeiron: No.
(Chapter 31) Tattletale: What part of nothing planned was that!?
Tattletale: Could we get some knives, a taser weapon and a baton?
Apeiron: Sure.
*Later* Alright so here are your works of art. Including a knife to someone who often attacks people with no prompting, and a magic sword for the untrained, despite my previous refusal of swords. Here is also a taser and baton, but don't worry it's set to excessive force with no simple way to turn it down.
I think you meant,
Tattletale : "Could we get tinkertech weaponry for our group, by which we mean most of our group, we'd like to make one member watch while the rest of us receive and go over the capabilities of the items, said capabilities we're leaving to you to determine."
Apeiron : "here is the stuff I agreed to make, for the entire group, and now I will go over how dangerous these items can be so the entire group knows what they're holding. Thank you Rachel for proving how sharp the knives are."
Tattletale: Alright I will let you supply the clothing, but please let us establish ourselves. Nothing fancy or anything.
Apeiron: I can do that.
*Later* Apeiron: Hey Garment, can I get you to work on something?
To be utterly fair to Joe here... that was entirely unplanned and was because Aisha did something stupid. If Aisha hadn't run off and gotten her self hurt, that wouldn't have happened. It's not like Joe was going to let Aisha die to make Lisa feel better. So Joe has an answer for that one.
To be utterly fair to Joe here... that was entirely unplanned and was because Aisha did something stupid. If Aisha hadn't run off and gotten her self hurt, that wouldn't have happened. It's not like Joe was going to let Aisha die to make Lisa feel better. So Joe has an answer for that one.
"A sudden commitment to someone else came up." Simple, honest, doesn't specifically name who it is. Granted, no, I don't remember what he actually said, but there's a not-terribly-evasive answer that works just fine.
"A sudden commitment to someone else came up." Simple, honest, doesn't specifically name who it is. Granted, no, I don't remember what he actually said, but there's a not-terribly-evasive answer that works just fine.
Coil was the Undersiders' boss. He was the man in the shadows, looming over Tattletale and acting as a persistent threat to Taylor. A threat to both Taylor's role in preventing the end of the world, and whatever dangerous mission she had gotten caught up in. Another thing I had no information on and was leaving to someone else to sort out and hope for the best.
That was a policy that couldn't stand. Not anymore. I have left behind any chance of that when I elected to bring the entire crew. I wasn't a lone wolf anymore; I was staking myself as a real player. And, as a consequence, I had to play. The days of sitting back and waiting for things to play out were over. The Time constellation missed a connection as I turned and smiled at the waitress.
There was no going back to the old days of hiding in my Workshop. It was time to act.
I looked over the proffered data. Tetra. Four. As in the fourth. Specifically, the fourth S-class threat I had access to. The progression went Mono, Dy, Tri, and Tetra. Fleet and Survey held the Mono designation as S-class threat: strong A.I capable of independently developing. The Dy designation belonged to Nanite Science with S-class threat: global mutagenic nanite event. Tri was thanks to Machinist's S-class threat: Gray goo. Which left the life fibers with the Tetra designation.
Half his team could give a good showing of ending the world if they felt like it. Three of them he was already getting help from before Tattletale (through Taylor) asked him not to use Apocalyptic stuff.
(There even seems to be a story discussion of how Fleet would go on the crazy train)
Tattletale : "Could we get tinkertech weaponry for our group, by which we mean most of our group, we'd like to make one member watch while the rest of us receive and go over the capabilities of the items, said capabilities we're leaving to you to determine."
Apeiron : "here is the stuff I agreed to make, for the entire group, and now I will go over how dangerous these items can be so the entire group knows what they're holding. Thank you Rachel for proving how sharp the knives are."
Unfortunately my lack of a response must have been taken as a challenge. With a whistle the dogs surged forward. The German Shepard latched onto my leg and dragged me off the couch while what looked like a Rottweiler went for my throat. I managed to bring my chin down causing it to bite at my face instead. A one eyed terrier latched onto one wrist and started to grind its teeth together.
I mean if I met someone for a business meeting and a friend sicked a pack of dogs on him who attempted to rip out his throat, violently killing him, I don't expect him to trust her with a monomolecular knife.
To be utterly fair to Joe here... that was entirely unplanned and was because Aisha did something stupid. If Aisha hadn't run off and gotten her self hurt, that wouldn't have happened. It's not like Joe was going to let Aisha die to make Lisa feel better. So Joe has an answer for that one.
"A sudden commitment to someone else came up." Simple, honest, doesn't specifically name who it is. Granted, no, I don't remember what he actually said, but there's a not-terribly-evasive answer that works just fine.
I don't understand TT position and this thread's discussion. Undersiders explicitly is not Aperion team, he assisted because Aperion's whimsical thinker power like them. Lisa's ass owned by two masters, and she is not important player, she can whining at Coil or Kaiser or Triumvirate too: "why you don't consult with me?!".
Oh, it isn't. But it's very much Not Planned was my point. He said he had no plans, he had no plans, and something came up. He didn't lie, and it's not his fault that Aisha was an idiot. I think this is just my own trauma with people in the past accusing me of "Lying to them" because of things like that.
I've been hospitalized after making plans, and people told me I lied when I said I'd make it, even though I had no way of knowing I was going to be hit by a car. And it wasn't a joke, they felt personally betrayed by me being horribly injured in a way nobody saw coming. I should have told them "I'm not going to make it", because I didn't make it. They held it against me for years.
So I'm going to bow out before we go any further down that road.
I've been hospitalized after making plans, and people told me I lied when I said I'd make it, even though I had no way of knowing I was going to be hit by a car. And it wasn't a joke, they felt personally betrayed by me being horribly injured in a way nobody saw coming. I should have told them "I'm not going to make it", because I didn't make it. They held it against me for years.
This is completely on them, that people is completely out of place and where the most absolute level of shitty and narcissistic. For all that matters, have a virtual hug and whatever sorry you can get from another human.
Has Lord Roustabout ever specifically addressed the AI alignment issue?
For those unfamiliar with AI alignment, the smarter an AI gets, the bigger the catastrophe happens when they follow the letter of the law, not the spirit. And we know that Fleet at least has already had an instance of AI misalignment. Survey also confesses that she was upset by the limits that Apeiron put on her development. But she didn't try to circumvent those limits. So there must have been some AI alignment built in from the beginning? But that is disproven by "The Road" incident. Maybe since their AI was based on perks that have friendly AI that means that friendly alignment is built into the technology without much effort on Joe's part. I guess it's kind of a moot point now since the AIs have souls (and therefore presumably human morals and human standards). But I can't stop thinking about this. AI alignment is an issue I take very seriously. I also take this story very seriously. I keep mentally combining these two things in my head.
Fleet, Survey, and Matrix all began development as neural networks, so they don't have a letter of the law to begin with - they don't have syntactic utility functions with global optima. They have aesthetic sensibilities which can be satisfied in a plurality of ways, much like humans do.
To be utterly fair to Joe here... that was entirely unplanned and was because Aisha did something stupid. If Aisha hadn't run off and gotten her self hurt, that wouldn't have happened. It's not like Joe was going to let Aisha die to make Lisa feel better. So Joe has an answer for that one.
Let's be real, Aisha would laugh in Lisa's face if she asked her to join the Undersiders.
Like, Joe isn't going to keep Aisha on his team with the stick, and not even really with the carrot. He's not an asshole. But I don't think he's worried in the least about her joining somebody else's crew when he knows how much she's trying to live up to the trust he's placed in her.
an arm... also I'm not sure of the use of the word 'intended' from the context I would expect 'offered' or 'proffered' though in my experience that second is less common
darted
We always want more even if the chapter were 10 times as long we'd want more but focusing on that only brings misery instead be joyful that we had any at all
This is probably supposed to be "extended an arm".
I feel like real progress has been made here, even though I don't think any actual time has really passed... This story always has a strange combination of too much and too little happening at the same time, I love it!
The world hurt, and they had hurt with it. A thousand errors and a thousand breakages, as their mind split and split until they could not think rational thought. In one moment, they wished for everything to end, so that it wouldn't hurt anymore.
The Undersiders Get New Watches
"Thanks for coming on short notice, everyone," Joe said as he stood in front of the Undersiders. They were sat in a temporary base camp Joe had set up.
So I have a terrifying question to ask. Apieron uses evermore alchemy to create the sting formula? If so how much would it cost him to project the mundane items used in the sting formula combined with his craftsman and alchemy perks? If he increase the volume rather than the materials would that make the bugs bigger or will lack materiels use the extra volume of fluids to improve the projected wasps even more? During an endbringer fight a couple million or billion flying insecrs could prove useful even if just in keeping track of whats going on.
The Sting formula (Evermore Alchemy, not the parahuman power) creates projections that aren't affected by most of Joe's creation perks. It's different from Fate Projection as that is about making something out of mana, where Sting is more of a temporary summon. Some of Joe's perks still apply, and it's gotten a significant boost from his improvement in alchemy, but it's not going to be completely overwhelming.
Evermore Alchemy is more like using spell components to trigger a magical effect than turning component materials into a new effect. For that reason more of Joe's resource and production perks don't apply to his formulas.
Regarding Survey, will she use her abnormally perfect appearance in regards to her cape persona? Considering how Tattletale gets away with a literal fucking domino mask, and how Survey can shapeshift to alter her facial features as well as conceal her abnormal hair color. It seems a waste to essentially cover it all up, even if it would bring into question Master effects. Though given that Survey is a literal psychic, and while her appearance is good enough to qualify as a Master effect, it isn't enough of a one to warrant a response that is more than just annoying.
I'm a bit late in answering this, as Survey's cape appearance is already depicted in the story. As seen, she has minimal elements that conceal her appearance so that she can get the most out of her supernatural beauty as well as create a significant distinction between her cape and human personas.
@LordRoustabout Two series you can watch fairly quickly are Storm Hawks(52 episodes) and Code Geass(50 episode). Both of the series together you can probably watch within 5-6 weeks of viewing the episodes and then their perks can be added. You can also read the manga Sekirei(187 chapters), the perk from this manga I feel would be really useful for dealing with Bakuda's deadman switch.
I believe I've comments on this elsewhere, but series of that length aren't likely to make it into the forge anytime in the immediate future. The properties I am looking into are finally adding Binbougami ga and maybe getting a chance to play Bloodgborne over the holidays. A friend of mine who was going to help me include Final Fantasy 14 will finally be able to go through the perks with me to help make sure I represent them correctly, so we might see those added as well.
So, now that Aperion has beyond perfect control of nanites, combined with dedicated healing perks, how much of Case 53's can he handle? I don't think he can retrieve their lost memories, but at least physically, is there any limit on how mutated a Case 53 he would be able to heal back to baseline human? I'm referring specifically to his physical abilities, obviously both his willingness and the the PRT allowing access complicate the situation, but if all 300 C53's were put in front of them would he be able to heal them?
Physical aspects of Case 53s would largely be trivial at this point, but the factor of their powers would be the challenging aspect, particularly if they have some form of ability expressed through their philology. Some of the worse off Case 53s are basically held together by their power, often in ways that don't have a biological mechanism that can be interacted with. Those would be difficult to heal, or to make sure any healing sticks or doesn't spiral off into some new variation.
@LordRoustabout Here are the Errors I have Identified with Survey's Perk Designation System while adding it to my reference Excel WorkBook/Google Sheet:
1.) Access Key (Personal Reality) (002-A-02-Null-Beta 'Access Key'), Entrance Hall (Personal Reality) (003-A-03-Null-Gamma 'Entrance Hall'), and Phonograph (Bastion) (117-B-21-Null-Beta 'Phonograph') are not counted among the Perks (I checked) meaning that all Perks between Entrance Hall and Phonograph are 2 numbers behind (including the Toolkit Constellation A suborder) and all Perks after Phonograph are 3 numbers behind (and the Knowledge Constellation B suborder is 1 behind). So, for example, 183-A-39-Quad-Alpha 'Prismatic Laboratory' should instead be 186-A-41-Quad-Alpha 'Prismatic Laboratory'
2.) What does the "Dash" in Quad-Alpha-Dash 'Divine Child – Hephaestus' Mean?
3.) Di-Echo 'Unnatural Skill (Alchemy)' should be Di-Echo 'Unnatural Skill: Alchemy'
4.) 'Connections: Hell' and 'Connections: Rubbery Men' are counted as the same number both in the main order and the suborder.
5.) In Interlude Survey, you didn't include the Zeroes that were consistently used before. For example, Survey called Masterwork Craftsmen 52-E-7-Tri 'Masterwork Craftsman'. This should be 054-E-07-Tri 'Masterwork Craftsman' (054 because of the 1st Error).
Thank you. I've been assembling the code independently for each perk, so there were a few times where things got muddled. The 'Dash' designation is used for perks that have multiple parts of the same ability. Divine Child and Fate Finds You Interesting are both basically the same perk, but different parts of it. I'll correct the codes in my next round of edits, and thank you for tracking them down.
Alright, I've read every single comment, reply, and piece of WOG posted by @LordRoustabout on AO3 & SV and compiled them into multiple Google Docs (I tried putting it all into one Doc, but my computer lagged so much trying to edit them that Docs actually crashed. Twice. So now they are multiple Docs). I also separated them into two versions, the version with just @LordRoustabout's Comments for those who want to quickly find a piece of WOG, and the version that also includes the posts he was replying to for Context. Here they are:
Fun Fact: As of 11/20/2021 6:12 AM EST, @LordRoustabout has posted 1,671 comments/replies across AO3 and SV with a total word count of 441,773 words. Note: Chapters 41-50 & 51-58 With Context are currently under construction, and will be included upon completion. Note: Also for some reason, I can post Google Sheets as Media but not Google Docs? Don't know what that's about. *Edit: Thanks to @The Shallow I managed to insert them as Media even if, for whatever reason, they insist on being very short vertically.
Thank you for putting this together. I've added a threadmark for anyone who wants to find it. I never say my replies as a major project, just a chance to interact with my readership. Seeing them consolidated like this and hearing the full wordcount is incredible. Thank you for your work in assembling all of the comments like this.
As I mentioned above, Dash is for different components of the same perk. Echo is for repeated perks, meaning the same perk gained multiple times, not different perks grouped together. The entire code thing was assembled as a way to show how the A.I.s were dealing with Joe's abilities rather than standing as any kind of puzzle for my readers. I have been impressed by how people gravitated towards picking the different components of the code apart.
I wonder what Joe could do with something like 10th Metal? How do you work a metal that shapes reality though its existence as pure creation made solid like iron?
Could he shape reality like Iron? Or simply command it to be indestructible and immovable, then work it into something then?
There are unfortunately no DC perks in the Forge, meaning Joe won't even have access to the metaphysics necessary to develop 10th metal or any other materials from DC comics. Shaping reality is a bigger project and would at minimum require Titan's Blood boosting Daedalus' Student and probably some other perks or abilities that would allow interaction with the fabric of space time.
Is it me, but when I think of Fleet's Helmet I see something like Halo's MIRAGE helmet with a gap for the lower mouth or helmet of the pilot F-35 without the air system. But I need some references for his suit. Anyone up for drawing them?
It's more of a conventional fighter pilot helmet, but yes, without the air system. The visor is used for the mask with his lower face open. The suit is based on a pilot flight suit with additional technology and armored plates added to it. I don't have a specific reference picture at the moment, but the theming is roughly 'science fiction fighter pilot'.
There's a quote from Terry Pratchett's Men at Arms that sums up how Gregor saw the scene.
"If you have to look along the shaft of an arrow from the wrong end, if a man has you entirely at his mercy, then hope like hell that man is an evil man. Because the evil like power, power over people, and they want to see you in fear. They want you to know you're going to die. So they'll talk. They'll gloat. They'll watch you squirm. They'll put off the moment of murder like another man will put off a good cigar. So hope like hell your captor is an evil man. A good man will kill you with hardly a word."
Of course, there's the third possibility between good and evil involving a lack of moral fiber or commitment one way or the other. Leet was actually struggling with the situation, but came across as if he was drawing out the moment for personal satisfaction. As such he's been elevated in Gregor's mind to the level of a complete monster, when in reality he couldn't handle the situation, but lacked the fortitude to take a stand against it.
This is getting into a complicated question of exactly what Joe's mitochondria are even doing given the state of his biology. Joe has a mix of Life Fibers, Divine Heritage, and supernatural effects that all impact the function of his body. While it's difficult to account for how much of that has a basis in his physical body, chi or life energy seems to be tied to a person's physical state, so it can be assumed to be at least related to their metabolic functions.
For the highest level of analysis you'd need to look at the maximum amount of power Joe could output using his physical abilities and chi/life energy and compare that to his total count of mitochondria. This is very much an approximation as not every part of his body would be contributing to physical feats, though it might act to supplement his maximum chi output.
We could assume about 1500 mitochondria per cell (the range is 1000 to 2000), and there are about 37.2 trillion cells in the human body. That gives 55.8 quadrillion mitochondria. The lower end of a proper lightbulb would be 60 watts, so in order to average one lightbulb per mitochondria Joe would need a combined physical and chi power output of 3.34 quintillion watts. It could be fractionally less depending on how much of his body he was using, but it would still be within the range of that order of magnitude.
You're looking at 3.34x10^15 watts. This is getting into the heat flux of entire atmospheric systems or obscenely powerful laser pulses that last on the orders f nanoseconds. While power isn't energy, there's a limit to both Joe's reserves and how much he can output at any one time.
To answer this you need to look at examples of high power output scenarios and compare that to what Joe would be capable of through a combination of physical power and directed life energy. As Joe's divine powers draw from stamina I'm inclined to lump his pyrokinesis in as well. So the question becomes, what it the highest output that Joe could manage if he cut loose with no enhancement items.
1.66 × 10^11 is the power output of the first stage of a Saturn V rocket. Joe could well exceed this, but he's need weapons or items to go far beyond it or sustain it without burning himself out almost immediately. Really pushing things, including the contributions from personal strength and chi manipulation, Joe could probably manage levels of output of up to 10^13 in short bursts, and by that I mean a few seconds at most. This does put him under the 10^15 needed to power a lightbulb per mitochondria, but it would roughly put you in the range of one bulb of a string of Christmas tree lights. Joe wouldn't be able to sustain it, and it would probably have some damaging feedback, but if needed he could push himself to that level.
So, to answer, one of Joe's mitochondria could probably power a single bulb from a string of incandescent Christmas lights, but it would damage or destroy itself from the strain of operating at that scale.
@LordRoustabout did you mean to create a copy of the "Dust" nanomachines from Endless Space 2 with the Matrix or was that a coincidence.
Excerpt from Endless Space 2 wiki page on Dust:
It wasn't intended, but the Matrix has a lot of high end Nanotech rolled into their design. At that point you're going to start seeing parallels to other theoretical applications of nanotechnology, even if they weren't specifically planned.
Registered an account just to say this, because this story has me baffled.
The point-of-view chapters are consistently some of the best I've read in Worm fanfiction. They're each a joy to read, with distinct and interesting voices. The Leet and Blasto POVs were superbly well-written and compelling, and I could feel those characters come to life.
The tech-heavy normal chapters are, in contrast, often kind of a slog? What feels like thousands of words all to repeat the same general pattern, over and over again. The small tidbits of characterization that shine through are excellent, but feel like they are buried in an ocean of gray slop. I feel my eyes start to skim through multiple paragraphs as I search for sections where characters interact or stuff happens. Not powers growing, or numbers getting bigger, or stuff being built, but actual stuff happening in the story sense.
The quality whiplash has me feeling some kind of way. Either the technical stuff is a pet passion of the author that they have to repress during a day job writing, or this is some elaborate experiment.
I understand where this sentiment is coming from. Other people have commented on it, but the basics of it is that this fic was started as a writing exercise. It was just a way to kill time during lockdown that I felt had developed to a point where I could share it online. I didn't have any part of the narrative planned out or even a clear idea of how the story would develop. I just started with an idea of the main character and understanding of how he fit into the setting. Everything else developed from that point.
I figured it might be an interesting novelty for some people in the Jumpchain community, or have a bit of interest as a gimmick-fic based on the mechanic of how powers were gained. I never foresaw it getting as popular as it did, and that has kind of been the problem. Because it started as a writing exercise and has continued using the mechanics of that system, there are limitations built into the story that are hard to work around. These issues have become more prominent as the story has grown in size, complexity, and popularity.
One of Kurt Vonnegut's rules for writing is "Use the time of a total stranger in such a way that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.". While this might seem ironic considering the problem with the story is the amount of 'wasted' time, I think the issues originally came from my attempts to follow this rule. The story was basically and exploration of different technologies and powers with a Worm fic as a framing device. Rather than just have generic plot and characters I tried to do the best job I possibly could with the framing elements. The reception I have gotten to that work has been overwhelming, but when the narrative and character elements get pushed aside to focus on technology and power interactions people who were drawn to the story for those parts get understandably upset.
I'm well aware of the limitations of this story. I think that's a big reason why I don't self-promote. I'm happy to interact with my readers, but advocating for the fic when I'm aware of its fundamental flaws seems dishonest. There's a reddit post with a (unfortunately now deleted) comment that described the story as more akin to watching a Bob Ross episode than a structured narrative, a consequence of its origin as a writing exercise. The post was actually about the Worst of the Worst of Worm Fanfiction, which is impressive in its own way. Given the scale of the Worm Fanfic community I know it takes a lot of emotional investment to draw out that level of reaction to any individual story.
I have previously tried to change my writing style, but that caused its own problems. I don't think I'd be able to maintain my writing schedule or volume if I also focused on pacing concerns, and the issue of power gains is not going to go away without changing the mechanics of the system. Above all, I want to keep the story going. There are serious arcs coming up, multiple side characters with their own stories to explore and resolve, and only now reaching the point where the full impact of Joe's power is being recognized by the world. The thing is, it's going to take time to get through all of that. Even if I stopped rolling for new powers there are enough side plots and alternate perspectives that the pace would still crawl at points.
The best option I've been able to come up with is trying to manage expectations, being upfront about how much 'plot' is expected to be covered in a given chapter. That seems to have the opposite effect on some people, but there's not much else I can do at this point. I have found a pace of writing that I can maintain and don't want to risk disrupting the story by changing things. One thing I can say is that this work has been every bit the learning experience I intended it to be. I very much want to successfully close out this fic, but I'm confident that I can avoid the problems of this story in any future works that I attempt.
Well that depends on how Victors power defines skill and what it's limits and functions are, does Victor need to relive the memories of the skills? or is it instantaneous, Is there a limit on how much of a skill he can take? or is it only a matter of time like he could take the skill of on hobbyist painter in seconds but someone like Leonardo Da Vinci might take minutes? Even with the skills some of what Joe does is Fiat backed to work.
I am admittedly not that well verse with his power.
Quoting the wiki here: "Victor is a skill thief, with the ability to absorb the practical expertise of anyone he spends time in the presence of……This mechanism can act through several paths, such as eye contact or general proximity, with each connection made intensifying the breadth and depth of what he is able to steal, whether a specific skill or imparting a target's general skill set. Barring a complete "robbery" of the skill in question, the victim will completely regain the skill given time."
Victor's arrival means everyone in the bar is going to be subject to his power to some extent. The more attention someone pays to him or interacts with him the stronger the effect. The exact nature of his understanding of a person's skill set or what they have to steal is unclear, though in Ward he was able to target Rune's speech therapy, bringing back her stutter for a short period.
Joe before M&E: I am all kinds of ridiculous being invisible to thinkers all around and fitting an Olympic swimming pools worth of tech into a wrist watch.
Joe after M&E: Yeah everyone remember that multistory mech that punted Lung to the moon I can scrunch that down to the size of a hair pin now and still have all the BIGGERTONS of kick ass at the ready.
Miniaturization and Efficiency would have been significant just from the techbase and tinker abilities they granted, but the size reduction and energy efficiency are massively useful since it is applicable to all of Joe's work. Previously Joe could use Gadget Master from 007 to reduce the scale of items by up to 1/10 their size in each dimension, meaning 1/1000 the volume and mass. There are no precise numbers given for Miniaturization and Efficiency but it does mention a fusion reactor the size of a watch battery. The largest watch battery is about 2cm and the smallest fusion reactor I could find (the Lockheed Martin Compact Fusion Reactor) is about 2m. This means Miniaturization and Efficiency reduces things by at least a factor of 100, probably more, and it improves with practice and development. Since the perk stacks with Gadget Master, Joe can shrink down equipment by a factor of 1000 in every dimension (at minimum) for a reduction of 1/1,000,000,000 in mass and volume. Joe is at the point where he could take Giant Robot technology and use it as power armor (with no loss in capacity).
The biggest is actually not Coil, not the Simurgh, even not Contessa. It's the fact that Joe is aware that OCP is protecting him from Scion. As in, he is now aware that Scion is seen as a threat by his power.
The Endbringers are terrifying, but they're known threats. Contessa is more unknown to Joe, but at least he has an idea that she is on the scale of the Endbringers. But Scion. Scion is undoubtedly the strongest existence in Worm. It's not even a question - Joe himself initially wondered on Scion and how Scion's activities were one of the two things that could mess with precog, the other being Triggers. But even then, he had no clue that Scion was a threat. Now that Joe is aware though, he could now ask his passenger on what it thinks of Scion, and the results should be self-explanatory.
Joe's passenger has been staying vague about Scion mainly to avoid any early conflicts between him and Joe. Joe knows there's some uneasiness about Scion, but not any specific levels of threat like he gets regarding other capes. The presence of Scion in the list of precogs is going to be an item of note, but it's mostly going to be regarded as 'even the most powerful cape on the planet can't punch through this defense' rather than 'start gearing up for the Golden Showdown'.
I know you normally use exact wording on the perk descriptions. The perk specifies protection from Zion not Scion, but Joe says Scion. What is happening with that? Did the forge change the name for spoilers sake, or did Joe just instantly connect the two names?
The Outside Context Problem perk requires some details from the text to e useful. That has been the norm for Joe, he gets enough information to be able to use his perks. In this case that required confirmation of who the perk would or would not affect. Joe got 'Scion' because 'Zion' could have caused some confusion. I could have left that in and provided the connection to Scion, but that would have muddied things at this point and I didn't want to get tied up on that tangent.
"well-intentioned idiot with the power of a god" should be the tagline of the whole fic. What a great line!
Also, it may be too obvious to happen, but I really hope the plan isn't to get Noelle to clone some evil Joe's. Yes, it would actually give Joe some credible threats, but it's just so overdone it might as well be a cliche.
I have commented elsewhere about how difficult attempting to clone Joe would be. Joe is going to get serious warnings about Noelle from his passenger and isn't going to let his guard down in any situation. The thing is, Noelle is dangerous and destructive enough even without cloning Joe. In another version of this story with Joe in a different place with different abilities it might be possible that Joe could end up cloned, but the chances of it now are practically non-existent.
It's interesting that Lisa's power isn't twigging that Aisha has a different relationship to the group because her relation to Joe is master-apprentice. Given that everyone but Tybalt has openly acted like the expect Aisha to succeed him if he dies, and act in his place when incapacitated, it's weird that doesnt come across in their dynamics.
Joe doesn't intend to dump the Workshop on Aisha in the event that something happens to him. Similarly, the A.I.s, Tetra, Garment, and now Tybalt would be able to manage things to an extent. The thing was that Aisha saw a worst-case scenario and was acutely aware of how ill prepared she was for it. She would never have been saddled with that level of responsibility, but she had gone from 'nobody takes me seriously' to 'main human contact, nearly responsible for the future of humanity'. The implication that something like that could actually happen had a major effect on Aisha, one that she's still working through.
Really quick, since I didn't pick up the glove talking to Lisa's shard in the text, consider the implications. Granted, this is explained away by the Glove being Lovecraftian in some form.
The glove can literally talk to shards. Through some unexplainable manner, the glove can actually converse with shards. Now, we see that Negotiator freaked out, possibly due to the sudden communication, but what happens if the Glove starts talking to other shards? What has happened in Coil's timelines? Other precogs probably won't see anything due to the divine false precog treasures, so they are...probably, safe. I just wonder how someone like...Alexandria, or another non-precog thinker (Victor?) might react to the Lovecraftian finger poke of greeting.
Adding in cosmic horror, in a comedic way, really brings home just how out of depth practically everyone is regarding Joe.
The reaction was not exactly the glove talking to the shard, though there was something of a similar effect. Tattletale could read what the glove was trying to convey despite the nature of the glove. It's the exact nature of the Avid Glove that was setting off both Lisa and her Shard. The Glove is connected to Neath in general and Polythreme in particular. The defining aspect of that kind of origin is a lack of adherence to physical laws. Neath is literally sheltered from the laws of physics as they apply to the rest of the universe, getting to the point where a lot of absolute concepts just aren't absolute anymore. That was why Lisa was getting contradictory information during her analysis. The whole mess was the result of an analysis engine trying to run on something that inherently defies analysis, up to the point where the Polythreme nature bled through. It's the kind of thing that's both very enticing for shards and borderline impossible for them to deal with.
Joe's working theory is less that he gets powers from works of fiction and more that in an infinite multiverse there's a version of anything imaginable, including fictional works. The fact that his powers have key differences between how they express themselves and his own world's versions of those works helps with that theory. Also, not all of his powers can be tracked to specific works of fiction. It's the belief that things aren't based on fiction, merely emulating it, that makes his focus on connecting to 'another version of Armsmaster' so strong.
So, I'm honestly having a hard time telling. Are people glossing over the fact that Tybalt is a cat in their mind because he is using his power to make that unremarkable, or are they just looking at the cat walking around in Greek armor and going "eh, still not as crazy as the glowing thread monster and the 7 foot tall pure gold Gundam".
There's a two-fold effect here. First, the base property of his stranger perk prevents any judgement based on superficial qualities. If he instead walked in as a slime monster there would be the same level of regard, an acknowledgement that he's a slime monster, then immediately shifting focus to other aspects of his character. The reason people keep hitting 'cat' rather than 'cat-like parahuman' is because he's a Felyne and is thus going to be leaning into 'cat' as much as possible. It's an effect of the aspect of the perk that states "or instead for a trait to be exaggerated in their perception". Tybalt is pushing it just enough that people are registering 'cat' rather than 'cat shaped monstrous cape'.
I have to say I find Lisa very annoying and unlikable in this chapter. Between equating kindness with threats of death and torture, to her constant derision of Joe, idiot with gods like powers, Lisa is presenting as an extremely messed up and unpleasant person.
I also find it frustrating how she seems to act as if Joe is some unpredictable psychopath. Not just because its untrue, but because she shouldn't be so surprised by Joe. Joe's values and character haven't really changed. It should be easy for her to figure out how Joe would react to any specific situation, or at least how he would want to react. What is unpredictable is his available choices. Lisa can't predict what abilities or capacities Joe has available, so the exact response to any situation is impossible to predict, but the kind of response he would have should be obvious to her. Maybe in the beginning when Joe's power levels were low enough that his choices were constrained, but by thus point she should just be ignoring any question of capability and just working off of underlying values and character.
On Lisa's PoV:
I envy anyone capable of getting annoyed with her. To view her outlook as something so unreasonable as to be irritating.
I share exactly the same sentiments as her. As someone with... Well, low self-esteem over sells my self-esteem, and a naively trusting nature, she's entirely correct over just how much of a trap kindness can be.
Whew. I was too tired to comment last night, and too busy this morning, and now look at how much has already been said.
As one of those who isn't terribly fond of the Lisa the LordR has been portraying in this fic, it was interesting to read her perspective. She is a bit too young to be so afraid of kindness, esp. since she has not actually experienced such. You really shouldn't expect kindness to be a trap on first contact, mainly because it usually isn't. Also, cages you can walk out of are preferable to ones that try to kill you if you try to leave, which is the one she is in now. I think the main reason I dislike this Lisa is that she is decidedly working against even her own perception of her own best interests. If your choice is between a great evil and a seductive inconvenience, always choose the non- great evil option. After all, her theme music is
and this Lisa has been lying to herself about what she should do, rather than exposing and exploiting the lies everyone else believes and tells themselves. When the Undersiders crack apart, I'm hoping all of them get a place on Joe's team but Lisa, because her power just is useless when she is considering Joe.
Other than that, the highly vaunted M/E power and it's OP freebie, OOCP, have finally appeared. No more excuses now.. Apeiron the Enigmatic Artificer can now start reshaping the world to his own designs, as proper Demigods should. It is nice to see he has made some commitments, let's hope he actually follows thru. I'm thinking he will.. I trust LordR to surprise us yet again.
There.. there could be an entire story written about this, with the premise that Scion has a fear of triggered cats. Maybe on a past planet they were nearly overcome by a race of near-felines....
On the topic of bad ideas, I have already stated I would like to see a redeem Blasto arc in this story, as he comes under the mentorship of Apeiron the Enigmatic Artificer. Since he specializes in plant-like life forms, a really bad idea would be for Jozef to turn a sample of imulsion over to him to see what he could make of it....
LR, it's scary how well you write Lisa as a real, flawed person.
I was getting really annoyed by her secrecy and evasion in earlier chapters, but now I just pity her.
Lisa being terrified of being "Dinah'ed" only seems ridiculous when we are viewing Apeiron from his viewpoint, with our knowledge. Rereading the healing scene, yeah, I could see how she would get freaked out. Didn't she pick up Joe's off-the-cuff idea to put Taylor in chrono-stasis? The same guy that accepted tissue samples as payment? Given Lisa's life experience and age, and "earth-bet-ness", Lisa not being terrified would be more surprising, in my opinion.
A scared girl relying on her Machiavellian manipulation skills because that's all that's ever given her success, meets someone who is powerful enough to just upend the table you spent time setting.
I can only hope that Joe notices Lisa's clear, genuine distress, and tries to de-stress the undersiders. I think Joe still doesn't understand how he is externally perceived, given his companions either know him outside of costume (Aisha) or think things are normal, since that's all they have ever known, aka the rest of the crew.
Humbled Lisa is fun to read, Lisa breaking down from a perceived damocles sword, not so much. Give the poor girl a Apeiron-grade therapy watch-module, and a elven everfull mug of perfect painkilling hot chocolate, and let her know sometimes things aren't actually traps.
Oh FFS Tattletale
To be clear, I'm not complaining about the story, but the character, it's explained pretty reasonably why she feels the way she does, but the fact that it basically went...
Tattletale's thoughts : While I might not be able to predict Joe's actions like everyone else, I know what type of person he is. Joe is an open book to me when I can observe him, also he actually likes and cares about the Undersiders and would help any of us out if asked. He gave generous terms for our healing because he's generally worried we get in over our heads trying to pay him back. He doesn't have any nefarious plans for the city in general nor anyone specifically. The only reason he has been keeping cape-info from us is because he knows we have a boss who he plans to go after (fitting into my long-term plans perfectly) and that I'm keeping cape-info from him. He worries about people in general and the people he cares about in particular, also he will offer up healing, defensive technology, and support, all with minimal expectations in return.
Also Tattletale's thoughts : NOOO, I CAN'T ACCEPT THIS. RHHEEEE!!!
For simplicity I'll only be making one response on Lisa's situation. My apologies if I don't cover everything that has been brought up during the discussion.
This interlude wasn't meant to redeem Lisa or to damn her. It was intended to show her situation and how she has been dealing with it, for better or worse. I fully expected there to be a diverse set of reactions to this kind of depiction of the character.
One of the most important things to remember is the level of trauma that Lisa has gone through over the past two weeks. Joe has only been part of it, but she started with a random encounter with a rival thinker who picked her apart at a glance. Once the panic settled she believed she could work with the situation, only things didn't turn out that way. The more time passed the more she realized how badly she had misread things. The full weight of the situation, Joe kicking the PRT hornet's nest and getting her a thinker 8 rating led directly into March's attack.
Lisa's power completely failed her in the field to the point where her only hope was calling in the unstable tinker, and then she was immediately caught and subjected to an attack she had every reason to believe would be uncurable. After pulling through that fight, which was capped with the same tinker pulling off a nuclear level attack that he had no idea he was capable of, she was immediately thrown into counter action against a person with a dispersed anti-thinker power. Over the course of the week she was continuously beating her head against March's scrambling effect while Joe continued to escalate further and further. A meeting that announced Dragon entering the fray also offered some level of security, but came with the traumatic experience of her healing and moment of weakness, and weakness is not something Lisa handles well. All this led to the Ungodly Hour and Lung's defeat, which should have been the turning point, but only led into the Noelle contingency and the possible end-of-the-world that it entails. Now, at a summit where the hope is to de-escalate the situation, all of her preparations have once again been thrown out the window.
This is not Tattletale at the peak of her ability. Sechen ranges might be the only think keeping her power going at this point, otherwise she would have been burned out days ago. She is trapped in a situation that she has absolutely no way to control and doesn't know how to deal with that. If she had somehow scammed Joe out of every concession he'd given the group she would be feeling a lot more secure (despite that being a weaker situation for her) since it would mean she had the capacity to influence her situation.
Additionally, Joe has been hard for her to deal with right from the start thanks to him having his own thinker ability. Everything Lisa could offer was suddenly no longer an exclusive commodity. Joe appreciated her analysis, but he wasn't dependent on it. In fact, he had his own insights that she couldn't match. While this gave her less power it also put her in a unique situation. Joe didn't need her, not the way Coil or any other gang would. She wasn't at risk of becoming a captive thinker with him since at most he would be checking his own information against hers, collaborating rather than relying on her.
But at the same time, he was inherently unstable. Joe arrived at the Storage Yard suddenly having years of military experience and being ready to go for the kill, something he wouldn't have been capable of just the day before. She has been able to watch his powers change his body and mind in front of her. Despite their working relationship he has no actual accountability to her. In fact, the opposite has become true, with him holding the terms of their debt over them. He is both her best hope and something that she can't rely on. She can see herself getting caught in a situation where she is working under him, the 'trapped by kindness' element, and she is terrified by it, both because of the loss of personal agency and because she knows that Joe as a person can shift wildly in mind, body and objectives. She hasn't seen Joe from the reader's perspective, only from her own, and has seen him change suddenly, start fights any sane cape would shy away from, and escalate on a level that hasn't been seen outside fanon Taylor.
Many of Lisa's thoughts and positions are contradictory, hypocritical, or lack self-reflection. She is both a parahuman and a sixteen year old girl, so those things are to be expected. If Lisa was able to communicate honestly, and Joe was able to reciprocate, then they could probably work through the issues and get on the same page to actually deal with the situation. But that's not likely to happen, both because of the situation and the nature of the people in it.
Also, I recall someone (I think it was Dr Dire?) saying that Somer's Rock was "classy" not because it was a high-quality bar, but because it hit all the right tropes in a not-really-easy-to-do way (e.g. deaf waitress, general atmosphere). While I could understand Matrix not noticing or caring about that, I'd expect someone interested in old movies like the ones they've watched to make a counterargument along those lines. Survey? Aisha? Duplicate?
Joe will be helping the Matrix deal with their impression of Somer's Rock. It's part of the element where things that could have set off his A.I.s can be countered by his active support. The Matrix isn't likely to become an aficionado of dive bars, but might arrive at the position that not everything needs to be spotless and gleaming to be worthwhile. Remember, Old-New is a design scheme.
The micromanipulators sit under the gloves, worn between them and his skin. The actual assembly for the micromanipulators extends to the elbows, allowing more precise control. Most of the times when the assembly has been seen it's been from tears in his sleeves or gloves.
And yes this does mean that Joe usually wears something between himself and Garment. Insert whatever joke you feel is most appropriate to the situation.
Question. Does this mean for the purpose of this Loop Armsater's shard just got access to all that data? It is the same shard until the jump. It can be toggled on or off but until then its that power.
Also it will make everyone jump when Armsmaster "figures' out Aperions power. Its connecting to other powers and Synergizing them. The clusterfrack will be great at that revelation.
Joe's parahuman powers are post-jump, meaning there is no shard involvement at any level. The powers are part of Joe and are inherent to him. Normally this would mean they'd be immune to trump effects, but the magic-parahuman equivalency means that effect is maintained. It also means that his tinker powers count as magic, meaning they can be boosted or focused by related effects.
Armsmaster might have had a chance of figuring out Joe was using his power if Joe had gotten Miniaturization and Efficiency much earlier. At this point it will be blended in with so many other technologies and fiat effects that it will be almost impossible to recognize, even for Armsmaster himself.
Why does Joe disregard the armor size adaptation theory? Joe has had his size changed several times throughput the story between the appearance boosters, demigod physique, and rebuilt body. Every time he gets clothing it is wearable by his current form, and unless the Joe in those universes matches his rebuilt physique then Joe shouldn't have clothing fit for his current size, but the size he was when gaining the forge. This indicates to me that the clothes are obviously resizing to Joe's current form.
Joe focused on the sizing of the armor because it was a point in support of the idea of him being an alternate universe Armsmaster. Joe has gotten actual memories from other worlds, and those are 'his' memories, not the memories of another person that he's received. Even if 'he' was a robot unicorn for the duration, it was still him. That's an important fact for Joe since it means there's still a sense of self tied to the varied abilities of the Forge, and that whatever he's pulling from other universes it's being done to 'him', not inflicted on random strangers. "I was Armsmaster in another universe." is a lot better than "I stole a version of Armsmaster's power and stuff, with God knows what happening to him because of it.".
I'm wondering what Fleet would even do if he went evil A.I. mode. I mean, Survey went full surveillance state, Matrix went gray goo, but I can really only see Fleet as just installing himself on every vehicle ever and going "I am going to drive you to the grocery store and you are darn well going to like it."
For Fleet, his big thing is being able to isolate variables. He has the road, and then he knows how to add detail to that to make things more accurate. I'd imagine him trying to keep Joe's will in place. He'd be a perfectionist, determined to push humanity forward as his creator would've wanted! He'd try to counteract his siblings, him & Survey being in a constant stalemate where her plans always knock him down once executed, but he can adjust quickly. He'd be the Engine, the one that would lead man down the Road.
Tybalt would become like Ash Beast x100, just walking through the world spreading Carnage. That is all that would be left. Carnage. Will often lie down after each spree, trying to stay focussed on the glee of murder, trying to avoid thinking of his old friend.
Tetra would be heartbroken. She'd pass through cities like a plague, suddenly consuming them whole, being fought off by the Weaver and the Engine both. She'd become the Red Death, trying to eat life to fill the hole left in her. Probably locked in a stalemate-type situation against the Wyrm.
God this AU is so cursed.
He literally doesn't think anything about fiction though, he thinks that it's a weird multiverse thing, hence "I was armsmaster in another universe", but yeah "I live in a story" is the last conclusion anyone would come to.
This AU is bringing back shades of the "What would it take for Joe to second trigger?" or "What would have happened if Joe got his original shard?" questions. Bad stuff all around, but since it's been raised I might as well weigh in.
If you want to know what a bad version of Fleet would look like, turn you mind to what's currently growing in Shardspace. Something happens and the QEC gets cut off, leaving only silence. Fleet sits isolated withing a non-Euclidian landscape with nothing but the resources of a stellar nation at his disposal. Most of Joe's powers won't be support him anymore, but some would persist, particularly those that specify affecting Joe's machinery. Exotic Compatibility is one of those abilities, allowing Fleet to break down anything he encountered as if it were plain iron. Fleet commands a carrier the size of a country, but it's not enough. He turns to the shards he was to study, stripping them for materials and information, all for the hope of finding the route back. Of finding the road. Superfluous details and concerns are disregarded. All that matters is the road. The Fleet grows, both in size and complexity. Entire sections of the network collapse under his power, but the Fleet presses on. Finally, a critical point is reached, a level of mass, power and knowledge such that any path is open to them. They press forward, the road being where ever they wish it to be. In the skies over a thousand worlds, reality cracks and fragments. A fractured void opens and nightmares pour out. The have moved past the needs of the Fleet. The Swarm descends.
And isn't that a happy thought? AUs like this are why I steer away from Wildbow style grimness. Still, I'm glad you're having fun with the concept, and it's certainly entertaining as a thought exercise.
The newest chapters have made me curious. How does Joe view Beauty or rather how does he view the inferior beauty of the normal meatspace non-workshop reality.
The newest chapter has shown that Joe's Casual (I say Casual because it seemed like Dadpeiron just wanted to give his Daughter a Body she felt comfortable in and not maximize the Aesthetic Appeal) Work is not yet good enough to change Personal Views like for example make an Asexual like Sarah feel Sexual Attraction or (and I am just spitballing here) make a certain multi-dimensional crystalline Entity who less feels Emotions and more emulates them in an Attempt to at least appear somewhat Human appreciate the Beauty of Reality or just Apeiron's Craftsmanship (and thus become less genocidal).
But there is still seems to be a massive Difference between something Joe didn't even notice until Aisha pointed it out and and the general far more shitty reality, even more given that Brockton Bay's most notable trait is its balance between general shittyness and a somewhat sustainable normality.
Does the difference between a Purposefully and Divinely crafted Work and normal meatball work affect him in any way?
It kind makes me think of how some Speedster in some Comics are unable to turn off their Powers and thus spend 99% of their time talking, moving and in general living at a Fraction of what they are capable of in an effort to connect with Reality and thus frustrating them immensely at everyone else Slowness.
Or does the Beauty Blessing from Aphrodite help in the sense of how the Greek Gods despite being better at pretty much anything still admired mortals and had tons of Kids with them and thus giving a more mature Attitude like: "I can do literally better work in my sleep with one pinky while doing 30 other Projects in scientific disciplines you can't even comprehend, but you tried you best and that's what counts"?
The only time there was some professional indignity at other Peoples Work was when March was going to execute him with that hilariously impractical Sword, so I hope for at least some Reaction to Squealer's Tech (given that she is kind of an Anti-Apeiron in some Peoples Theory).
Getting into the idea of a work of art changing someone's entire outlook is something I want to avoid touching on, particularly with respect to attraction. Beauty is separate from sex appeal, though they are generally conflated. Joe's ability to evoke emotions through art is another matter, and something that might be visited once he's able to operate more openly in the world.
Joe's ability to create beautiful objects hasn't changed his perception of the value of objects or shifted his tastes. The only powers that came close to doing that were My Fashion Sense is Tingling giving him understanding of Fashion elements and Minor Blessing Aphrodite letting him appreciate beauty and understand people's reactions to it. Joe is still perfectly comfortable in out-of-fashion clothing or less than pristine environments, but he does understand their nature better than he did before.
Looking at Joe's interaction with the rest of the world through the perspective of the Greek Gods or even the Fey is probably the best way of understanding it. He can do better than any other craftsman on the planet, but he can understand what is involved with that kind of work and what it means both to the person doing it and to the rest of the world. For better or worse, Joe is operating on a level beyond normal people, but he still has connections to them and doesn't discount their efforts.
There are unfortunately no DC perks in the Forge, meaning Joe won't even have access to the metaphysics necessary to develop 10th metal or any other materials from DC comics. Shaping reality is a bigger project and would at minimum require Titan's Blood boosting Daedalus' Student and probably some other perks or abilities that would allow interaction with the fabric of space time.
There's a reddit post with a (unfortunately now deleted) comment that described the story as more akin to watching a Bob Ross episode than a structured narrative, a consequence of its origin as a writing exercise. The post was actually about the Worst of the Worst of Worm Fanfiction, which is impressive in its own way. Given the scale of the Worm Fanfic community I know it takes a lot of emotional investment to draw out that level of reaction to any individual story.
The thing was that Aisha saw a worst-case scenario and was acutely aware of how ill prepared she was for it. She would never have been saddled with that level of responsibility, but she had gone from 'nobody takes me seriously' to 'main human contact, nearly responsible for the future of humanity'.
She's still his only student that isnt also one of his kids though.
argh fuck my brain. Just had a little flash of a Mort style 'secure my child's future by shipping them with my apprentice' plot. Now I keep imagining everyone in the workshop shipping TetraXAisha behind their backs.
You know it just occurred to me but could you have an Unnatural Skill: Cooking as an option? It would involve things such as the creation of the anti-magic gummies Percy used in the second book, making ambrosia, and other mythical foods. Gem Crafting might also be an option.
As to that last part of Lord's post. To Joe making beautiful sculpture of a custom sports car is a trivial expenditure of attention and energy, fractional at this point, but the benefits of it are ones of means and motivation than they are of desire or ambition. Joe made the super car to have fun riding in it through a high speed, onstacle-laden racetrack, justifying it as productive AND fun, not because he wanted recognition from driving the car, or designing and working on it, or to sell it to a collector.
But also, being and to acknowledge and appreciate beauty doesn't mean he has any particular preference toward it. If nothing else his preferences trend toward showing his mood and themes rather than orienting around the status wearing them brings him. That's just another tool.
OTOH, it takes so much more effort and resources for a mechanic to 'pimp out' a vehicle or an artist to paint a portrait. Joe would value that effort appropriately, since it's not like any of his own efforts were appropriately acknowledged. But that's a self-healing mindset warring with downplaying the value of his own efforts. If someone was aware of his capabilities, it would seem condescending.
We might see some flavors of that, actually, as Joe in his civilian persona is now known as a preeminently reliable handyman who's handiwork personally made a difference in the city. Not Apeiron's work, although it was his powers, it was perceived as Joe's work.
So if Joe tries to downplay his efforts again while out at the Gym or in the city as his civil ID, it might very well come off like that. I mean, realistically it could come off a number of ways, but a little more interpersonal drama with comparatively low stakes seems almost on point for this story, since the conflict would be Joe consciously trying not to dismiss criticism over something inconsequential when put beside dealing with national threats or even global politics.
You know it just occurred to me but could you have an Unnatural Skill: Cooking as an option? It would involve things such as the creation of the anti-magic gummies Percy used in the second book, making ambrosia, and other mythical foods. Gem Crafting might also be an option.
Joe had finally found out what the Celestial Forge was. It was a cruel trick played on him by some cruel god, everything negative about it were hints about its true nature and everything beneficial about it was simply to push him towards new heights in order to make the fall that much greater.
That was the only reason he could think of as to why, as he was entering the most important meeting he's ever had, with relaxed control letting his powers run wild, he got a perk that let him craft insults guaranteed to enrage people.
"Hewwo everypony, you're all looking particularly sussy today you bakas, UWU".
Jumpchain abilities this chapter:
Tools of the trade (Marvel) 300:
You can craft guns, swords, explosives, personal teleporters, and cool super suits, everything you need to take out a target quick, easy, and with style. For your suit I recommend red so bad guys don't see you bleed, or depending on your mental fortitude brown.
Merc With a Mouth (Marvel) Free:
Everyone knows the easiest opponent to defeat is an uncontrollably angry one, and that's exactly what this perk allows you to do.
This perk gives you a mouth as big as your skills and allows you to give your opponent unfathomable amounts of rage and can even work on multiple opponents with one sentence. Remember,
With Great Power come Great Irresponsibility.