There's no harm to it in my experience writing it, as long as that isn't the point of the story in and of itself. Which it isn't in this case, or my other stories. I add as many males as females, they do exist in setting after all.Urgh a guy in Touhou, that's disappointing considering nice first chapter, at least there's a silver lining that he's beyond worldy desires.
As a nitpick, I thought Byakuren was the elder sibling?I mean, assuming this is her brother. They are the only other Hijri we know of.
You had us in the first half, not gonna lie.From one side of the border, the shrine seems ramshackle, in a state of total disrepair. From the other side, it looks worse - outright condemned and abandoned.
Very much yes.
In case you or anyone else is unaware, there was a real person named Hijiri who was a famous Buddhist monk. In Touhou lore he had a younger sister, Hijiri Byakuren. He went through his life normally, as did she following in his footsteps, until finally he reached the end of his lifespan and died. This scared the crap out of Byakuren, and so she turned to youkai magics to preserve your youth and live for a very long time/forever. However the youkai magics require youkai to work, leading to her gathering youkai followers and preaching tolerance and acceptance of youkai.[X] [Ignore Cirno]
Ah yeah, new Touhou quest!
Hmm, I wonder is us sharing a name with Byakuren coincidence? Or is something else going on with that.
Also I must agree, objectively hilarious.