Blood of Entheofushia (Negima AU/Arika Lives)

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My name is Arika Anarchia Entheofushia, and these are my testimonies.

A Negima Alternate Universe from the POV of Negi's mother, Arika.

After Nagi's supposed death, Arika retired to raise Negi. But she has a secret that may turn her former comrades and even Negi against her, and her enemies are still out there, still hellbent on silencing her.

In the shadow of the mausoleums, an ancient one walks among the bones and dust of her ancestors, as she weaves her own machinations with the former princess as a piece.


My first fanfiction. Unfortunately, my English is not of the highest quality, so expect grammar errors and other mistakes. Because of that, I am seeking a beta reader. If you are interested, please PM me.

Style inspired by the Eisenhorn novel series, Warhammer 40,000.

Posted on AO3, FF.net, and SB as well.
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Chapter 1 - Rewritten

Terra Novan

Cheeky Naegi is Cheeky
Banned
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Busan Metropolitan City, Republic of Korea
One

"We are bound by blood, to memory and legend that write our fate."

These are not my words. Or rather, these were not my words.

A teacher said these to me. I thought I knew its meaning then. Now I truly know, as if the words had been mine from the beginning. That it was I, who spoke them to myself. In the past, that realization would have filled my heart with chilling dread.

Not anymore. In a way, that familiarity breeds greater terror.

Still, I am I, and my name is my own, not Her, even if she would not have cared about that. Thus, this account will be written in, and attributed to, my name.

My name is Arika Anarchia Entheofushia, and these are my testimonies. Let us begin.



"Headmaster, please explain."

I remember myself as being calm and collected when I spoke with the headmaster. He and I worked together for several years without feuds, myself as a teacher and security guard in his academy. And as a senior, he deserved a measure of respect. But Anya and Nekane, together with my son Negi, later swore that they felt a great disturbance. I am sure that they were just exaggerating.

It was a hot summer morning in Wales, July 2002 in Old World reckoning, just after my son's graduation. We came to converse with the headmaster over the matter of Negi's diploma.

The elderly headmaster coughed. "If It was written on the diploma, then that is the end of the matter, Mrs. Springfield. To complete his training to be a Magister Magi, young Springfield must become a teacher in Japan."

He was correct. By the tradition of this academy, each diploma came with an assignment. The assignment is intended to broaden the knowledge of the wider world and other people, as well as teaching the value of discreet uses of magic. For that purpose, the graduates were required to visit unfamiliar places away from home, to interact, help, and cooperate with strangers, often those who are unaware of the existence of magic and our magical civilization. You can call them mandatory community service, as well as training in the art of secrecy.

Still, I was not entirely comfortable with the assignment. Others agreed with me.

"Headmaster, sir! Are you sure there hasn't been a mistake? There is no way a 10-year-old can be a teacher!" Nekane, being the boy's de facto older sister, and having helped me raising Negi from a baby to a boy, naturally shared the same concern as myself.

"That's right! Negi is a real shrimp," What Anya said was true at that time, but as I reminisce, I cannot help but make a pointed remark about pot and kettle, "And on top of that, he still spaces out at times!"

"While I agree that he needs a great deal of further training, perhaps this is beyond the scope and ability of novice mage?" I said, wondering just what kind of logic determined that teaching people years older in a foreign country across two continents was a suitable quest for pre-pubescent children.

I continued: "I learned from this academy, that being a teacher means you must take up responsibility for the futures of dozens of students. Do you truly believe that my son can bear such a burden, such a duty?"

I could not see Negi's face, as he was standing behind me. But I sensed the feelings of conflict and nervousness from him. I was speaking in truth, however. He was a ten-year-old boy who had just finished his primary education. I wasn't just worried about Negi, but also what effects he might have on those students.

Do not mistake that for the lack of faith. I knew he would grow up to be the great mage and hero he wished to be. "Like you and dad!" He told me that once. I was ecstatic, but also sorrowful underneath the smile. I felt that I was deceiving him, considering how much of a failed hero I was.

Still, I tried my best to help him to achieve his wish. I taught him how to use his power. I imparted him the knowledge of magic as much as the school did. I even told him of my past, as well as of Nagi and his comrades, albeit with some parts carefully censored out, as a lesson in the strength of morality and the harsh reality he must face.

I did not wish to expose Negi to the darker, dangerous side of the two worlds. But I knew it was necessary. His parentage meant that he will be always in danger. I was well aware that our enemies were ruthless and vicious, that they will not care that Negi is his own person, not me or my husband. They will not hesitate to kill him or do worse, just to sate their vengeful desires.

Sins of the Parents. I hate myself for that.

I never considered ignorance as a defense. His blood, same as mine, would attract enemies like sharks. I knew that someday I will no longer be able to protect him, so he needed to know himself and his enemy and everything that is required to protect himself.

And perhaps, I hoped, he could change the world for the better, into a safer one for him to live in.

The headmaster looked apologetic. "Your Highness, I am afraid that the arrangement has been already made, and Mahora has accepted that. Even as a headmaster, I cannot just change that, especially when the matter is an international subject." Then, he added with a more positive tone. "I assure you that he will be safe in Mahora Academy. The school is under the protection of Japan's Kanto Magic Association, and the headmaster is an old friend of mine."

I did not object further. I still did not like this arrangement, but I realized that I won't be able to change it. This assignment did not feel like it had malicious intent behind it, either. Instead, I decided to inquire about Mahora.

"Tell me more about this school."

"As I said, the headmaster is a friend of mine. His name is Konoemon Konoe."

I had heard of that name. "The father-in-law of Eishun Konoe, the leader of Kansai Magic Association?"

I have not met Eishun after our farewells. I kept my distance from the remaining members of Ala Rubra. But I had occasionally received the news and rumors, including Eishun's marriage into the Konoe family.

The headmaster nodded at my word. "Indeed. There is also another. One of Your Highness' comrades in the past, Takamichi T. Takahata, is also a teacher in Mahora."

The headmaster appears to believe that I would be put at ease at hearing that. I wasn't, although I did not show it.

The presence of Takamichi, and perhaps others from Ala Rubra, could become a complication. I was not their enemy, or at least I hoped so.

But I had made a choice, even if it was for the sake of my husband. I made a deal with an enemy, even if it was done only once. Those extraneous details do not change that I have colluded with the force that we of Ala Rubra had stood against. Some of us had fallen in that struggle, and I cannot help but feel that I have betrayed them.

I did not want my former friends, or Negi, to find them out. She may not have directly fought us like the rest of Her kinds, but She was still one of them, and a servant of the True Enemy.

For many years, I have not heard from Her. I preferred to keep it that way, as something that no one but two of us knows. But that knowledge remained, hidden but festering in my heart, that made me avoid my former friends at all costs.

But, despite the guilt and the fear of exposure, I did not want Negi to go alone.
"I will raise no more objection. But I would like your permission to travel together with Negi to Japan." I spoke. My voice was hard as steel, and so it was done.



Our departure came near the year's end, after Boxing Day.

As we would not see our home for a while, I wanted to give Negi the best Christmas Dinner in his memory, so he could have one last moment of precious childhood before he will be forced to burn it away and become a man.

I am proud to say that I had succeeded. Over the years, I have grown quite proficient in culinary arts. Initially, it was a matter of necessity, but later I had grown to enjoy the making itself.

Negi wrote the invitations himself. Anya, Nekane, and their parents were all invited. He also sent them out to everyone he liked, including several of his classmates and villagers, and even to the headmaster himself.

It was a memorable feast. I made sure that there was plenty of dishes for all. We had a roast turkey, pigs in blankets, Christmas pudding, and many other things following them. When we had finished them all, the children were given gingerbreads and mince pies, while we adults had our shares of eggnogs.

Despite the celebratory mood, my heart was still heavy, and I wondered what I would find in Mahora.



As I grow older, which is a most unexpected occurrence, I have discovered a sudden passion for writing, motivated by a desire to preserve my deeds and those of others who I met and remember. For that purpose, I divided my life into several, measured chapters, each representing different phases of my life.

You have just witnessed the end of motherhood and the beginning of the new chapter of my life, to which much of this account will be dedicated to.

Before that, I spent eight years as a fugitive and a member of the warrior fellowship Ala Rubra, alongside my husband, Nagi Springfield. I had done more goods for the two worlds during those years than during my time as a princess. Yet, now in hindsight, they were not enough.

The Ala Rubra was together until our last battle. I survived, with help, but Nagi was gone. With him went Ala Rubra, and thus we scattered to the four corners of the Old and Magic World. The reunion will not come until many years later, as will be shown in further chapters.

I decided to retire to the home village of Nagi, raising the child we had. That was the start of my motherhood. It was mostly uneventful and joyous years, but I did not relax my vigilance, knowing my enemies will never forget me. I was correct, but again, I had help from a friend.

I have much to say about the Great War. My memories of that time are full of intense moments that will never pass into oblivion, and I don't think they can be described in just a few paragraphs. It was during this chapter that I met Nagi and Ala Rubra. I saw victory and defeat, and it ended with the extinction of my house, my people becoming kingdomless refugees, and myself falsely charged with war crimes A timely rescue from Nagi saved me from execution, and at that moment we became wife and husband.

So, dear readers, you have received a glimpse of me. Arika Anarchia Entheofushia, former princess, a martyr and villain, a failed hero, a wife, and a mother of Negi Springfield. Perhaps you need more descriptions? At the time of beginning, I was thirty-seven years old. I am tall and slender, with blue and green heterochromatic eyes decorating my long blond hair. My veins carry the blessed blood of the Maker – or so She would have said, but it is an irremovable truth regardless of my own feeling. My preferred fighting style is a conjunction of sword and spell.

I know, dear readers, that you have questions. No doubt all of them are important, and there are many more revelations to come, all of them will be explained, but only in due time.

Continue reading, if you wish to learn more.
 
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Note: Names and Spell Incantations
Names:

By default, I am using the official translation. Although I was tempted to change a few names, I felt that such a move might needlessly confuse the readers.

For example, Arika Anarchia Entheofushia. I thought about writing it as 'Entheophysia', because it looks more like an actual, Pseudo-Greek surname, and I personally think it is closer to the original pronunciation, too.


Incantations:

I will use the center alignment, as well as the Japanese single quotation mark, to denote the spell incantation. It was a necessary step, as I will introduce several original spells, and I am not an expert on Greek or Latin languages.

For comparison:

Original Manga
Veniant spiritus aerialis fulgurientes! Cum fulguriationis flet tempestas austrina… Iovis Tempestas Fulguriens!

Translation: Come, spirits of air and lightning! Let the Southern Storm Blow With Lightning. Jupiter's Lightning Storm!

This Story
「Come, spirits of air and lightning! Let the Southern Storm Blow With Lightning. Jupiter's Lightning Storm!」​
 
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First and foremost, I must say that I like the idea you're running with here. Negi's mother is a character who you seldom see at all in the (now sadly small and old) Fandom, and you've managed to make her present and relevant without obviating Negi's motivation.

Second, your English here is quite excellent, not just in spelling and grammar, but in how you've managed to capture Arika's voice. Her formal tone is difficult for even native speakers to emulate, and you're doing exceptionally. I'm definitely looking forward to more from you here!
 
Second, your English here is quite excellent, not just in spelling and grammar, but in how you've managed to capture Arika's voice. Her formal tone is difficult for even native speakers to emulate, and you're doing exceptionally. I'm definitely looking forward to more from you here!
Thank you. I tried my best and will continue trying my best, although I am still not sure I am getting her right, or just making it stilted.

That said, I would still like to have a beta/proofreader. I do make a lot of minor but glaring mistakes and, while I am doing my best to find and fixing them, I can't help but think I am still missing some.
 
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Negima? That's not a name I have heard in a while. And AU with Arika still alive? Okay, you have my interest now.
I will use the center alignment, as well as the Japanese single quotation mark, to denote the spell incantation. It was a necessary step, as I will introduce several original spells, and I am not an expert on Greek or Latin languages.
A shame, but understandable.
 
Negima? That's not a name I have heard in a while. And AU with Arika still alive? Okay, you have my interest now.
Not the most active fandom right now, that's sure.

I had joined in just after Negima ended. I remember the fandom being still quite vibrant back then.

Went through the manga, awaited UQ Holder with interest. That... did not work out very well.
 
Same. Hasn't gone past the first two chapters myself since it first came out. The plot elements are interesting but would have been more interesting had it been tackled in Negima like it should be.
Honestly, it feels like you can make two whole new stories out of UQ Holder. Instead, they are glued together to the detriment of both.
 
Chapter 2 - Rewritten
Two

January, the middle of winter. We have arrived in Mahora, sharing a train with hundreds of students returning for the new semester.

I believe we made a rather remarkable sight. There was I, wearing a double-breasted coat with thigh-high boots and leggings. Then there was Negi, wearing a winter-season mage robe, resembling a duffle coat with a cape attached. We were also carrying several rather unusual belongings. I had my sword and magical tome, the former carefully concealed under layers of spell-treated wrappings to avoid any unnecessary troubles. Meanwhile, Negi was carrying his various magical tools, including a cauldron and his father's staff.

I recovered the staff after Nagi's final fight and kept it in safety until Negi was old enough to attend the academy. As I handed it over to him, I told him: "You are now walking the same path as your father. Remember your father's lessons when you hold this staff in your hand, as you strive toward the future."

Nearing our destination, I spoke to my son. "Be ready to move as fast as you can, Negi."

At my words, Negi took out his pocket watch and confirmed the time. His eyes widened. "It's late! I can't be late on my first day!"

"Don't worry, son. It'll be like the times when you were running for school, just with more people around you." Then I added. "Let's see which one of us can find Ms. Konoe first."

Negi nodded; his face turned determined, motivated by my small challenge as intended. I heard the students around us giggle, some wondering why we haven't stopped at the station near the primary school.

They were greatly surprised when we launched ourselves like loosened arrows the moment the door opened, ahead of all of them.



This was not a simple race. Speed was important, but awareness was essential. Yes, time was running short, but our objective is finding Konoka Konoe, who in turn is supposed to take us to the headmaster's office.

Konoka, the Eishun's daughter, headmaster Konoe's daughter. I wondered how she was like. Considering her father, I assumed she was a mage, and possibly being groomed as a successor. I was in for a rude surprise.

Finding her was not an easy task, however. The description of our greeter was 'a straight black hair, brown eyes,' which, unfortunately, was rather common and generic traits for many Japanese females.

Not to mention that there were so many students and other school employees running together on the same great boulevard as us. Despite our initial lead, we were soon surrounded by a high tide of human bodies.

I did not detect any noteworthy traces of magic anywhere around us, either. Eishun taught her daughter well in subtlety, I thought at that time.

And the automobiles, streetcars, and even an odd motorbike that was running alongside the sprinters and selling them breakfasts.

We decided to go separate ways, so we can check people more effectively.

"Be careful, son!" I shout at him, as I dash forward, overtaking a male student with spiky, windswept hair.

"Don't worry, mom!" Negi shouted back, further to the right side of the boulevard.

I deliberately slow down, allowing others to catch up, to see if anyone is matching the descriptions.

I see a female student getting past me, a straight black hair, backpack, and a covered rod, possibly a sword. Eishun was a blademaster, one of the best I saw. Maybe?

Speed up, catch up, and check. Not Konoka, eyes black. Disappointing. Next, one of the streetcars.

I rush forward and jumps. My hand grabs the door frame, grips steady, and I pull myself onto using momentum and magical vigor. my feet find the solid floor, barely.

I hear the startled sounds of students, some even screaming. I apologize. I sense no one matching her description.

Still hanging on the streetcar, I turned my sight to the far side of the boulevard, into the stream of people, seeing if anyone matches the description.



In the end, I was the one to find Konoka Konoe. Along with a friend from the past.

I had jumped off from the streetcar and was at the edge of the boulevard when I heard a sound, something like bells ringing.

And a voice, loud enough to be heard over the commotion of the morning rush, speaking the strangest thing.

"Takahata-sensei! Takahata-sensei! Takahata-sensei! Takahata-sensei! Takahata-sensei!"

My first reaction was What? I did not recognize her voice at first. It has been, after all, a decade since we last saw each other, and she had grown up beautifully. But something about that loud, and truthfully rather obnoxious at that time, voice felt familiar.

And I did hear the name Takahata and wondered if that was the same Takahata that I know. So, I moved toward the direction of the voice.

The first thing I saw was the orange hair, twin-tail style affixed with bells, running alongside the girl with straight black hair.

I started to remember a certain someone. A relative, or rather, an ancestor of mine.

"Hello?" I called out.

Both girls turn toward me.

I held my breath. Those eyes! Blue and green like me, but in a different order! I see her eyes widening, looking straight into my eyes.

"Asuna? Is that you?"

Yet, on her face was not the expected look of recognition, but total confusion, as if she is seeing a stranger.

"Who are you?"

What?

"Don't you remember me?" I said, hoping she is just having a memory issue.

"Uh, no. I have never met you, uh, Miss?" She replied, clearly flabbergasted, then added, "Why are your eyes like mine?"

No, no, no. What have you done, Takamichi?

"Didn't, uh, Takahata-sensei mention anything about me?" I asked, hoping that might get her memories working.

A brief look of recognition flashed through her face, and so was my hope. Her next words crushed that.

"Ah, you must be the new teacher!"

Damn it.

As I was cursing Takamichi from inside, the other girl, one with black hair, bowed to me.

"Excuse me, Miss, are you the new teacher who is supposed to arrive today?"

It was then that I noticed her brown eyes. Konoka Konoe. I quickly read her signature. Higher than normal magical energy, but unrefined, untrained. It sent a chill, and a pulse of anger, through my spine.

Mentally, I added Eishun with Takamichi on my list for a harsh talk. Physically, I made a polite bow,

"The name is Springfield, Arika Springfield." Anarchia Entheofushia remained at the tip of my tongue, but I decided to be careful. I was about to clarify the mistaken identity, when, conveniently, my son ran up to my side.

"Mom! You found Miss Konoe!"

Konoka positively swooned at the sight of my Negi, as it should be. His spiky red and black hair, his cute eyebrows and the red-brown apple of the eye, and that little pince-nez completing the features. My son is adorable, this is an objective truth.

In contrast, Asuna scrunched up her nose. That girl wasn't right.

"However," I continued from before, "I am not a teacher. This is my son," pause, for dramatic effect, "And he is the teacher."

"My name is Negi Springfield. I will be teaching English at this school." He followed up, with a bow.

I still remember the face of those two. It was amusing, at least for Asuna. Konoka was less surprised and was first to recover.

"I see. Follow me, I will take you two to the headmaster's office."

"Eh? What!" Asuna shouted. "W-wait just a minute here…"

"Lead the way, Miss Konoka," I replied, cutting Asuna off and sparing the girl from embarrassing herself further in the public.



The first thing that I noticed about Headmaster Konoe was his head.

Rude, yes, insensitive, yes. But that was truly the first thing that had caught my attention from the sight of the elderly men, although I did not let that out loud. His head, large in size, had a quite different shape from that of others, protruded backward, ending in multiple strands of white hairs. I do suspect he has a nonhuman ancestry.

His other features were quite distinctive, too. I have never seen someone with such enormous eyebrows, that was almost like thick mustaches or large paintbrushes, covering over his eyes. Same with his ears; as with his head, they were also larger than other men and were stretched out in length, the earrings worn over their lower tips almost touching his shoulders at times.

Konoka was the first to enter his office, opening the door for us, and was the first one to speak. "Grandpa, the guests are here!"

The headmaster replied, with a grandfatherly kindness. "Ah, Konoka." Then he looked at me, "Mrs. Springfield." Then Negi, "Negi-kun." And finally, Asuna. "And Miss Asuna."

We stood in line in front of his desk. "Greetings, Headmaster Konoe." I and Negi bowed.

"Yes, I see that my friend in Wales was correct about you." The headmaster stroked his beard, making the ho, ho sound. "Teaching in Japan is quite a task for training."

"Yes, sir."

"Training?" Konoka whispered, curious.

"But first, you must gain some practical experience." The headmaster hmm-d. "Let's make it from today to march." Then one of his eyes opened, adding a serious impression. "It will be your evaluation period as well. This job will probably be very difficult." Raising the finger, "If it's too hard for you, you will have to return home. There are no second chances. Are you prepared to accept that?"

Negi looked nervous. I do not believe he was truly serious about the 'no second chance' part, but the headmaster was correct in that this will be a difficult job.

I lightly touched Negi's shoulder, giving him a reassuring smile.

"You can do it, son."

His face changed to that of finality and determination. "I'll do my best, sir!"

"By the way, Negi-kun. Do you have a girlfriend yet?" The headmaster spoke, pointing a finger at Konoka, "What do you think of my granddaughter?" I could not read whether it was humor or a genuine proposal.

"Aw, grandpa!" Embarrassed, Konoka blushed and brought the hammer down upon the headmaster's occipital. To this day, I still don't know where she was hiding it, and I swear I never even sensed her taking it out.

While we were both flabbergasted by their antics, and slightly disturbed by the blood dripping out of his head, I did seriously consider his suggestion. From what I have seen, Konoka Konoe was a pleasant girl, albeit the one who is ignorant of her potential. I needed more information, but I was not opposed to the idea of Negi and Konoka being together.

"Just a minute please!" Asuna exclaimed. "I… isn't it odd that a kid is doing the job of a teacher?"

"That's why I am here," I noted. "I have prior experience in teaching."

"Exactly! This should be a job for an adult like you, Mrs.! Are you sure that he is the right Springfield?"

I did not reply. She was correct that this was not a normal job for a ten-year-old boy.

"There was no mistake, Miss Asuna." The headmaster said gently, before he threw a verbal bomb, "He will also replace Takahata as your homeroom teacher."

"What? No!" Asuna shouted in surprise. "He can't replace Takahata-sensei! He is just a kid!" Negi flinched and shrink, losing his earlier confidence somewhat. My fist tightened.

"Stop that." I was getting annoyed. I did not care that she has lost her memory, or that she is someone I once saw as a friend, or that she is, technically, my ancestor. I looked directly into her widened eyes. "The decision has been made. It's final." I loaded the next with some force. "He is now your teacher, so show some respect, princess." The last word was intentional.

Asuna flinched, looking mildly afraid. Konoka looked nervous.

"Mrs. Springfield, I believe you are scaring my student."

"My apologies, headmaster." In truth, I felt no contrition, but courtesy demanded it. If the headmaster had noticed that, he didn't seem to care, and his attention turned to Negi.

"Our staff guidance officer, Shizuna-sensei, will explain the rest to you." As he spoke, the door behind us opened, and a busty, motherly-looking woman with eyeglasses entered. "Hello, I am Shizuna Minamoto."

"Unfortunately, I do not think we have a room for both an adult and a child." That was unfortunate, I thought, we would have to use a different room.

"Konoka, and Miss Asuna, can Negi-kun stay in your room for a while?"

Is he trying to deliberately get his granddaughter close with my son?

"Sounds good!" Konoka chirped. Asuna looked as if she was about to make another protest, then looked at me and gulped, not daring to say anything.

"And Miss Springfield, I am afraid you will have to share a room with the student, too." The headmaster sounded genuinely apologetic. "You will be assigned with Miss Evangeline A.K. McDowell. She is the only occupant in her domicile, and I feel that she needs someone with her."

"I understand." In hindsight, it was almost comical that I simply accepted that. To tell you the truth, that name had completely escaped my recognition at that time.

A careless mistake, I know. But it could have ended a lot worse. As it turned out, I arrived just in time.

"You can go to the class, Negi-sensei," I told my son. A bit strange to address him that way, but I felt he needed a boost in authority and confidence, especially with Asuna in his class. "I wish to speak with the headmaster alone."

"Yes, mother." And with that, Negi left with Shizuna, Konoka, and Asuna. After the door has closed, and I was certain they were far away, I turned toward the headmaster.

"May I speak with you, on some concerning matters?" My voice was deadly serious.

The headmaster was unaffected. "Of course, Your Highness."

"Why has Asuna Vesperina Theotanasia Entheofushia lost all her memories?"

"Your Highness will have to speak with Takahata, it was his decision, as well as her."

As was expected. "I see." Momentarily forgetting my dread to encounter another member of Ala Rubra, I continued. "Why is your granddaughter ignorant of her magical heritage?"

"My son-in-law told me that it was for her own safety and happiness." That fool. "He went through the Great War, just like Your Highness. He said he saw enough of the dark side of our world that he does not wish to show them to Konoka."

That logic was, to borrow from a local vernacular I picked up during my Wales residency, a total bollocks. I bit back the 'And you actually agreed?', and instead went with more diplomatic speech. "Surely, someone must have tried to take advantage of that?"

"Yes, that is why she is attending Mahora, away from Kyoto and Kansai. She also has her own protector."

"And that didn't convince him to tell her about her potential, and teach her how to defender herself?" My voice was starting to crack, as I seethed with anger. What Eishun did was the exact opposite of what I have done with Negi, ignorance instead of preparation.

"That will just leave Miss Konoe even more vulnerable to future attempts. Not to mention that you cannot just keep her here forever."

The headmaster sighed. "I agree, Your Highness. But I also must respect my son-in-law's wish." Then he raised his right eyebrow mischievously. "Well, I must. But say, if something out of my control happens, like, if someone, say, either her teacher or another newcomer 'accidentally' reveals magic to her, that would be the most unfortunate, hmm?"

I understood his meaning. I smiled too. "Yes, headmaster. An 'accident.' How unfortunate." I decided that I like Konoemon Konoe.

"I do have to warn Your Highness, though. My granddaughter's protector, Setsuna Sakurazaki, is also a student here. She is devoted to Konoka, but she also believes in Eishun's reasoning. I don't think she will… appreciate the 'accidents.'" The elderly headmaster appeared… sad? "I think she might have been forced to distance herself from Konoka, to keep up the masquerade. They were very close friends once."

"I understand. Also, my apologies for the outbursts." I bowed apologetically, and this time I meant it.

The headmaster chuckled. "No offenses taken, Your Highness. It was good to hear a frank and sound opinion from a youth."



I left the headmaster's office and headed toward the Negi's class, Class 3-A. I arrived to find an embarrassed Negi being hugged by dozens of female students, all cheerfully screaming about how cute he was.

It was a good sign, I supposed. I just hoped they would also respect him as a teacher, not as a class mascot. Unfortunately, that was going to be hard, considering how they were ignoring Shizuna's words to not bother Negi.

She turned toward the entrance and noticed me. "Oh, and class, this is Mrs. Arika Springfield, Negi-sensei's mother. She will stay in Mahora for the duration of Negi-sensei's term, so be respectful when you see her in school."

I felt the eyes of students on me. I heard the loud squee sound as they reacted to my appearance.

"Greetings, Mrs. Springfield!" Letting my son go, the class girls shouted. I smiled pleasantly in turn. "Greetings to all of you, too. I trust my son will prove himself as a great teacher, and that you will all put faith in him." Negi nodded at me, although I think he was more grateful that he was no longer being squashed between girls and their womanly parts. I saw several of them whispering to each other, certainly sharing their opinion of me and trading gossips.

Among the throng of girls, a fair-haired, and I must say, beautiful and elegant, one came out and approached me. "Greetings, Mrs. Springfield. I am Ayaka Yukihiro, class representative of 3-A. I have complete trust in Negi-sensei, and will do my best to assist him in teaching our class."

"Thank you, Miss Yukihiro. I will put my trust in you."

"What's with the 'proper daughter' act, representative?" Asuna, not again.

"Oh my. It's only natural that I'd look like a proper daughter from the outside, since I am a proper daughter inside, too!"

Asuna scoffed. "Not because you are trying to rob the cradle from Mrs. Springfield?" What?

Ayaka reacted fast and fierce. "What? Stop these scandalous accusations this instant!" She stomped toward Asuna and grabbed her collar, and Asuna returned the favor. "You shouldn't be talking with your old men fetish, your obsession with Takahata-sensei!"

As the class devolved into chaos again, and as Negi was restoring order, I had to reconsider my earlier appreciation of Ayaka. Was the accusation correct, is she truly trying to seduce Negi and earn my approval? I did not know. I hoped Asuna was wrong, though. I found Ayaka to be pleasant and felt she could be of great help to Negi in controlling this… rambunctious group of students. But then, she may be fair outside, and foul inside. I had seen enough of such people.

That information about Asuna and Takamichi, though. That was… disturbing, although I knew, and hoped, that Takamichi was not intentionally taking advantage of her.

I stayed outside for a while, as Negi's first-day class went on. I did not intervene further. This was something that my son needed to do by himself. I did check each of the students, all twenty-seven of them. I also felt an ethereal presence within the classroom, and occasionally caught a glimpse of something white. I reminded myself to investigate later.

It was uneventful compared to the bedlam at the beginning. Negi was nervous, but he managed to perform his duty, with help from Ayaka. Although, I was not sure if the students were actually concentrating, or were simply appreciating his cuteness.

I did not like the thought of that. This was going to be difficult.

I was still outside of the classroom when the bell rang. The class was over. I watched as students leave, with Negi conversing with some remaining students, helping them in understanding today's subject. He was more confident in his manner, and with that, my confidence also rose.

Then, I felt someone, a mage with a familiar signature, walking toward me. I turned.

"Greetings, Takamichi."

"Greetings, Arika."

Rather short greetings for friends who had not seen each other for years. It was exactly because of that reason it was so short. That, and the fact that I did not want to become too close with him in fear of my secret shame, and because I was angry at him over the matter of Asuna.

"We need to talk," I said, and Takamichi nodded. He was expecting that.

"Takahata-sensei!" Asuna ran up beside me like a happy puppy greeting her master.

"Hello, Asuna."

"Takahata-sensei." Negi walked up by my side. This was their first meeting, but I have told Negi about him. He knew Takamichi as a companion of his father, and now as his colleague.

"Sorry, Asuna, and Negi-sensei, but I believe Mrs. Springfield and I need to speak privately for a while."

Asuna's face fell at that. I doubted that this will improve her opinion of me or Negi.

I will not lie. At that time, I did consider her the biggest problem Negi will have with his class.



When we were far away from students and prying ears, I spoke first, with a direct question.

"Why did you erase Asuna's memory?"

Takamichi took out a cigarette from his pocket. He put it on his lips but did not light it.

"After Ala Rubra was disbanded, me, Master Gateau, and Asuna traveled across the world for a while. Then, Master Gateau died. It… it broke Asuna. She asked, no, begged me to erase her memories because it was too painful." His voice was quiet, hurt. Immediately, my anger was replaced with a pang of guilt.

"And you agreed," I said, my voice softened now that I get the full picture, and felt sympathy for Takamichi and Asuna.

I remember Gateau as a stylish, levelheaded middle-aged man with a good heart. He helped my investigation into the Cosmo Entelecheia, even if it ended disastrously. He taught Takamichi how to overcome his disability, and became something of a father figure to Asuna, even if the latter always treated him like an equal. He will be remembered.

"I wanted to give her a chance at a normal life." His voice was sorrowful, and it clenched my heart.

I knew about the tragic life of Asuna Vesperina Theotanasia Entheofushia, or Asuna Kagurazaka as she justifiably prefers. She was part of my family, my ancestor, yet that same family had turned her into a weapon. She was imprisoned in stasis, occasionally freed only to be used for destruction. From Asuna's point of view, it was as if her life was simply a slideshow of nightmarish scenes after nightmarish scenes, with no moments in between. That was the existence we saved her from, and while our travels were fraught with lethal dangers, I think it was the happiest time in her life.

Then it came crashing down, first with Nagi, then with Ala Rubra's disbandment, and finally with Gateau's death. No wonder she was not able to take it anymore.

Despite my previous annoyance with Asuna and the disagreement with Takamichi, I did understand their choice, even if I still disagreed with it.

"I understand, Takamichi." And I truly did. "But I am not sure if this can continue forever. Anonymity is not reliable protection. Once her power is noticed, or she is identified as the Twilight Princess, many will come for her power. You cannot hope to stop all of them." Then I added, despite some reservations, "And her apparent crush on you… if remain unresolved, it could become a big problem."

Takamichi let out a sad, bitter chuckle. "I know. I am not sure how it progressed from friendship to that, but whenever she tries to get my attention, I cannot help feel like I am taking advantage of her. And whenever I had to turn her down, I see Asuna being hurt. I think Gateau will be very disappointed in me in the afterlife."

"No, Gateau will be proud of you. Of everything you have done for her." I spoke, with a steely tone. Takamichi looked startled by that, was it that strong? I tried to make my next less forceful. "But I think you need to prepare for the eventuality, perhaps find some way to restore her memory step by step, starting from happier ones to heavier ones."

Easy for me to say that. Unfortunately, both of us knew that the latter type of memory outweighed the former by several millennia.

"But how?"

"I don't know. But we will find a way, together." With that, I clasped Takamichi's hand. And, to my joy, he returned with a firm grasp after few seconds.

I swore that day to help Asuna. And, at that moment, I did feel like I was part of Ala Rubra again.



After that, I went to my new residence. It was already in the afternoon.

I briefly met Negi at the entrance to the classroom building and told him that I was going to check out my assigned residence with Evangeline A.K. McDowell.

He became serious at the mention of her name. He explained to me that Evangeline, or Eva as her classmates called her, did not attend class today. Her records had shown that she barely showed up for school at all, and recently even mostly stopped interacting with her classmates, although she was otherwise clean of any misdemeanors.

"Please check on her. I think something might be wrong with Miss Evangeline," said Negi, worried about his student. I assured him that I will.

Evangeline had given Shizuna her key. Her address told me that she was living some distance away from the dorms, separate from other students. After some walking, I finally found her residence.

I discovered that it was a lovely, two-story cottage, in a style of Northern European house that I had seen a few times in Britain. I marveled at its sight, and wondered who was the original owner of this dwelling, and how did Evangeline come to live in this place.

The house looked empty, however. I assumed that she was not inside. I opened the door and found another surprise.

The living room was filled with all kinds of plush toys and dolls, as well as many other kinds of decorations, lavish but also childish in taste. Intriguingly, many of them had cross motifs, from Roman to Maltese to Saint John.

However, my eyes have soon noticed that most of them were scattered across the room, without any kind of care or order. I have also noticed that the layer of dust has settled over most of them. It appears they have remained untouched for a while. It was as if Evangeline simply threw them around the house after she got bored with each of them, and after that, never bothered to clean them up. This place, in my opinion, was a total mess, in contrast to its homely face.

I carefully moved through the piles of dolls, toward the stair to the second floor, making sure not to touch the disturbingly large number of animals plushies. This place needed a major cleanup, I thought, and I made a note to speak with Evangeline about this.

The second floor was in a much better state. There was a bed, bookshelf, a traditional Japanese hearth at the corner, and a wall clock, although the last was inactive, with unmoving hands pointing at eleven-nineteen. Either Evangeline rarely uses her house anymore, or she no longer cares enough to even keep her clock going. Neither was a good sign.

I noticed that here, too, was a doll. My roommate was fixated on them. It was a curious-looking puppet doll, with a big head and tiny, almost skeletal body. The completely mismatched proportion should have been almost comical, but I felt an opposite emotion instead, especially since my intuition was telling me that this is not a mundane puppet.

I also noted that, unlike others downstairs, this one was clearly treated with care, as no dust was visible on its body, and it was sitting on top of a bookshelf, away from all others. More interestingly, I felt a trace of magic within it. This merited an inspection.

Closer, I could see that it had short green hair, with a maid's headpiece. On either side of the head, where ears should be, there were structures in their places, resembling either horns or wings. Its clothing was decorated with red bat-wings and a green tie, and both of its feet had a tiny black shoe on each.

Its empty green eyes and wide mouth were remained open, forever stuck in a kind of lifeless laughter. A curious sense of unease filled me.

"Get your hands off, thief!" An angry, feminine voice, no older than my son, came from behind. I was letting my guard down, distracted by that perturbatory puppet doll, and have not sensed any magical signatures coming toward me.

I whirled around in surprise and was treated with my first sight of Evangeline A.K. McDowell.
 
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Note: Chapter 2 Miscellaneous
Some miscellaneous notes on Chapter 2:

Regarding the class 3-A's students, "All twenty-seven of them" is not a mistake. Of 31 students, Sayo was invisible, but Arika did notice her presence as seen in the story. As later scene noted, Evangeline did not attend a school that day.

As for the other two missing students, that's a plot point. You will see it in the future.

Regarding Asuna, she is less antagonistic here because the two embarrassing incidents with Negi in the canon were averted. Namely, Negi telling her that her crush on Takamichi will never happen and then accidentally stripping her naked in front of Konoka and Takamichi (and probably at least several onlookers far away and out of POV). Negi, being more careful and experienced thanks to Arika's teaching, has also managed to avoid drawing her suspicion by using his magic more subtly. She is also rather afraid of Arika.

Evangeline being more messy, rude, and withdrawn than canon is, again, a plot point.

In general, a lot of canonical scenes are missing because the story is from Arika's POV, not Negi.
 
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Admittedly this is my first story, but reading this again, I think I will have to rewrite Chapter One some days. Feels like I could have done better.
 
Admittedly this is my first story, but reading this again, I think I will have to rewrite Chapter One some days. Feels like I could have done better.
In my humble opinion, there is no point in rewriting the old chapter, it will just confuse the audience as the events change.
My suggestion is - carry on writing, try to improve, to make the next chapter better than the previous one - you will always have something tangible to compare your new chapter against, to see if and how you an improving. Especially if this is your first writing.
 
Hmm... twenty seven, combined with the fact that Evangeline's home is in such a condition... Chachamaru isn't here. She seems to be replacing Chachazero, in fact, which, like, definitely a good thing if Arika's going to be living with her? Like, psychotic murder-puppets are not good housemates! But it also means that nobody's picking up after her or generally taking care of her, so that's probably a net negative!
 
Hmm... twenty seven, combined with the fact that Evangeline's home is in such a condition... Chachamaru isn't here.
Yes.

She seems to be replacing Chachazero, in fact, which, like, definitely a good thing if Arika's going to be living with her?
Zero's been always with Evangeline. She's just in the state of deactivation due to Infernus Scholasticus.

But it also means that nobody's picking up after her or generally taking care of her, so that's probably a net negative!
Exactly. It is also a reason why the headmaster has assigned Arika to her place.

Unfortunately, the damage has been already done, as you can see with her angry demeanor. Not to mention that their relationship is going to be... complicated, a lot more than canon Negi - Eva relationship, because of who Arika is.
 
"By the way, Negi-kun. Do you have a girlfriend yet?" The headmaster spoke, pointing a finger at Konoka, "What do you think of my granddaughter?" I could not read whether it was humor or a genuine proposal.
This reminds me, didn't early in UQ Holder we had actually thought that Negi got together with Konoka - which always felt weird because they shipped Konoka and Setsuna real hard even in the ending of Negima.
Hmm... twenty seven, combined with the fact that Evangeline's home is in such a condition... Chachamaru isn't here. She seems to be replacing Chachazero, in fact, which, like, definitely a good thing if Arika's going to be living with her? Like, psychotic murder-puppets are not good housemates! But it also means that nobody's picking up after her or generally taking care of her, so that's probably a net negative!
Huh. Chachamaru not being there raised some questions about Chao. I'd imagine Chao is still there, but Arika being a known presence probably influenced some things with her.
 
This reminds me, didn't early in UQ Holder we had actually thought that Negi got together with Konoka - which always felt weird because they shipped Konoka and Setsuna real hard even in the ending of Negima.
I remember that.

Honestly, I don't mind Negi and Konoka, but I like Konoka and Setsuna better, so don't want to break that. I am trying to find a way to make all 3 of them work that won't get me in trouble in SV.

I'd imagine Chao is still there, but Arika being a known presence probably influenced some things with her.
Perhaps.

That said, Arika's presence is not that common knowledge. Only those with reasons to know about that knows.
 
Chapter 3 - Rewritten
Three

"My apologies, Miss McDowell," I started to speak, hoping to defuse the situation and correct my mistake, "I am Arika Springfield, and I was assigned as your housemate." As I speak, I brought up her key in the view.

Her glare softened, but only a little. Her look was still hostile, and I was confused. Why is she reacting with such hostility? We have never even met before, and I doubted that my offense was grave enough to warrant such anger.

"Yes, I heard about you from that old geezer," More confusion. Is she talking about the headmaster? How can she be so openly and brazenly disrespectful like that? "Told me that I need someone living with me, to take care of me." She spat out, clearly finding the idea to be distasteful. In turn, I was starting to get irritated by the rudeness of my housemate.

"I do believe you need someone helping you," I replied, and that was the truth, considering the untended first floor.

"I certainly don't need you in my life, Arika Springfield." Bitterness and outright hatred bled from that last word to the point of almost making me wince. But I did not, for I felt my own anger rising at such undue disrespects and hostilities. How dare she.

"Watch your tongue, young lady." I snapped back. I did not know then, but I made the mistake of touching Evangeline's most sensitive issue.

Immediately, at the edge of my awareness, I saw the danger.

A sound, something primal, something unintelligible, something enraged, comes out from Evangeline.

The Extrasensory Perception magic, or ESP, is not one spell. Rather, it is a system of several different kinds of magic and spells, predominantly sensory and precognition, but also empathic and telepathic, in addition to the enhancement for physical senses, woven together to provide the mage with expanded and heightened perceptions of the surrounding world, limited pre-and-retrocognition, and revealing the details unseeable with eyes, all of which would be impossible with just the five senses.

And right now, I don't like what I am perceiving.

My eyes catch a small glass vial in her right hand, a typical container for magic catalyst and potion, I recognize, and I feel magical energies and elemental chill coming from them.

Almost simultaneously, I raise my left arm in defense, and she throws a vial at me. My magic-sharpened sight sees that it's open and spilling contents.

And –


Wind Shield!


Magic Arrows, Six Ice Arrows!」​

Our spells clash, her arrows against my shield. I feel phantom sensations across my hand. My defense hold, the magic of my blood adds to the potency of my shield, her icy projectiles dissipating before my extended arm.

Before she could open more catalyst vials, I close the distance. Being much taller, I have a greater reach, and my hand moves in to restrain her, to force her to stand down.

It misses. Evangeline has evaded me at the last second, and her seemingly dainty hand grabs on my forearm. In the next moment, I was thrown over the wooden railing, flying and falling toward the ground floor. She turned my strength and momentum against me, I thought in amazement and embarrassed rage.

On the air, I regain my balance and land on two feet, any impacts being absorbed by my barriers. Something was crushed beneath me on landing, but that was far from my priority right now. Instead, feeling the stab of an incoming threat, I whirl back, focusing my attention toward the opponent. As I do, I see Evangeline landing on the floor, having followed me down.

In that brief moment, I think. I was trying to restrain her until now, and certainly, I can easily defeat and slay her if I don't hold back, but killing one of my son's students was not something I wanted to do unless demanded by necessity.

I consider Evangeline's strengths and weaknesses. She is clearly a skilled martial artist, possibly even better than me, one that appears to be specialized in fighting someone bigger and stronger than her. Her magic, however, was extremely weak, forcing her to rely on catalysts, and likely no magical senses and warnings, either.

Just as Evangeline's fist was about to make a contact with me, I made up a plan.

I feel an impact in my abdomen, and my body was hurled backward. It stung, and I involuntarily let out a gasp despite the layer of protective barrier around me. At that same moment, I point my finger at the girl and unleash the magic.

It was not a spell, not in the sense that it is a codified and formulized technique, complete with the incantation. Rather, it was a pure manifestation of elemental light, given form by my will alone.

I manage to close my eyes before the burst of intense light fills the cottage. No destructive property, just a short and blinding illumination, exactly as I intended. Like the flash grenade of the Old World, except without the sound.

I feel Evangeline's focus break, and hear her crying out in pain and surprise. At the same time, my own pain forces my eyes open, as I crash into the wall with enough force to shook the entire house. I hear an audible crack behind me, and without magical protection, something within me would have certainly broken as well.

Biting down the pain, I start making an incantation, feeling the element and its spirits responding to my command.

「Eleven spirits of wind, make shackles and capture my enemy. Magic Arrows, Capturing Wind!」​

The energy coil around me and eleven arrows of wind are loosed forward. Evangeline had just regained focus and had seen the incoming magical projectiles. As I suspected, she had no spell-enhanced senses, and my Magic Arrows were coming too fast for her to evade. Her eyes widened, and she had pulled out several more vials when my spell made struck her.

The summoned winds encircle her, and even as she tries to move, the long projectiles tighten around her body and limbs, forming strong bindings of magic, restraining her from charging toward me or using the catalysts.

Despite this advantageous turn, I sense that I am still in serious peril. I see the ways she can still escape within the next several seconds, and as Magic Arrows wear out, her chance will only increase. I must end this fight, now.

「Air and Water, Become a Fog and Grant a Short Rest to This One! Hypnotic Fog!」​

My elemental affinity lies with air and light, but my skill as a mage allows me to draw from other elements as well. This spell, like its name describes, shapes air and water into a thick mist. Less useful against nimble opponents in open space, especially if they have protective spells or magical resistance, or if they can simply scatter and dissipate the fog away.

Within the enclosed space, against a restrained opponent without any kind of active and passive magical protection, the spell is highly effective.

Her movement becomes frantic for a moment, then dies down. Her bindings disappear, and she falls to the floor, face first, although not hard enough to hurt her.

The fight was over.



Dispel.」​

With that simple command, Evangeline started to regain her consciousness. I had cuffed her to the chair and placed her in the middle of a ruined room. No rope was found in time, so I used extension cords instead. I stood in front of her, with a spell at the tip of my tongue and my sword hand at the hilt. I hoped that I would not have to draw it today.

"Nagi…?" That was the first word she whispered, the name of my husband, still half-asleep from the effect of the spell. It was soft, longing, and melancholic in tone, taking me aback by surprise. Her expression rapidly turned sour, however, as her visions became clear and she recognized the person in front of her.

"Oh, it's you." Her tone was bitter. "Looking to gloat?"

"No, I want answers," I replied with a stony face.

"Well, my answer is that I don't like you, and I don't care about you."

"Yes, the former is obvious," I noted dryly, still calm. "But you cared about me enough to hate."

I continued. "And I am certain that we have never met before," Which was true, but I did hear her name and reputation in the past. Looking back, it is embarrassing how I was not able to recall that, even when I heard Evangeline's name from the headmaster. "So, I want to know who you are, and why you have treated me with such loathing at first sight." I did not count out the possibility that she was someone indirectly hurt by my actions, my failures.

"Because you are that man's wife." Evangeline spat out, anger marring her fair, doll-like face. Someone who has a history with Nagi, I thought, how typical. Yet, it felt like her venom was directed more toward me than Nagi.

"My husband has many enemies," Almost as many as myself, I mentally noted. A Thousand Foes for the Thousand Master, and we shared a lot of them. "And you have not told me who you are," than a bait, "Young lady."

At those last words, Evangeline's facial features reverted back to those I saw during our fight. But being cuffed to the chair, she could only snarl at me while struggling fruitlessly.

"Stop belittling me! Stop calling me a child! I am Evangeline Athanasia Katherine McDowell, the Dark Evangel!"

That, that was not what I had expected. My eyes widened, and my hand reflexively clenched the sword tighter.

"You are the Dark Evangel? The Doll Master?" I muttered in bewilderment and alarm.

Dark Evangel was a name that carried infamy, even in the Magic World, and had inspired terror for centuries. From what I remembered, Dark Evangel was reportedly an immortal, day-walking vampire, ruthless and bloody-handed with numerous records of killings and other criminal activities, both in the Old and Magic Worlds, although it was also said she never killed women and children.

There was no credible account of her origin, but her deeds alone made her a feared villain, even among other criminal and dark mages. She had carried six million bounties with her, but remained undefeated and uncapturable, a dread master of elemental ice and darkness and other myriad spells, until fifteen years ago when she simply vanished into obscurity, her bounty cleared.

My mind was full of questions. Why is someone like that in Mahora, as a student? Why is Headmaster Konoemon letting her roam freely, does he know her identity? Why is her magic in such a weak state? And why does she look like a child, when she is described as a seductress? However, after a closer examination, I realized that she did resemble the look of Dark Evangel I know, albeit in a much smaller, and if I dare, more adorable forms: icy blue eyes, hair of gold, straight and ankle-length, with blunt bangs (something that, in a curious coincidence of fate, resembled my own).

It also did explain the presence of so many dolls. Someone with a reputation as a puppeteer would have a natural affinity with them. I remembered the strange and unsettling puppet upstairs; one I had found a trace of magic within it. It must have been a familiar, a focus, or something similar, I concluded.

"Scared, now that you know who I am?" Evangeline's mocking words brought me back to reality. She was smirking, and I felt the urge to wipe that out of her face, along with the possible threat she might pose to Negi, the 3-A, and others.

"Should I?" I retorted back. "After all, I defeated you just now," The smirk disappeared from Evangeline. "The power you wield as Dark Evangel is gone. You cannot cast even the simplest spell without catalyst," Then I added, grudgingly, "Your hand-to-hand fighting skill is certainly impressive, but do you honestly believe you can stand a chance now if I don't hold back?" To emphasize my point, I raised my sword up, so that Evangeline could see it clearly. "Even if there are still some remnants of vampiric might within you, you are no longer the feared Undying Mage, and the world is moving on without you, away from you." I finished, expecting another outburst.

Her reaction was not what I had expected. Her shoulders sagged, and she looked at me with bewildered, yet tumultuous eyes. My words, I believe, actually hurt her.

"Do you think I want to be like this?" Her voice was quieter now. "It's all the fault of the Thousand Master. He promised, and I waited, and now I can never leave this prison."

I was thrown into confusion. Her behavior did not match the wicked reputation of Dark Evangel. It was then, hearing the epithet given to my husband again, that I, at last, remembered a certain crucial detail. It was true that I had never met Evangeline personally, but Nagi did, alongside Albireo, and Rakan. And Nagi did tell me about her once.



It was in 1988, Old World calendar, after one of Nagi's excursions to Japan. We were together at the fireside, just after finishing the dinner meal. I sat on one side of the crackling fire, cleaning the tableware, Nagi was on the other, unfolding the bedrolls, when he asked me a question.

"Honey, do you remember Evangeline? That girl I told you about last year?"

"The child mage with a doll? What about her?" I asked back, still focused on dishes and utensils.

"Well, it turns out she is Evangeline A.K. McDowell, also known as Dark Evangel. She followed me to Japan, and we fought."

The manner of his speech was so casual, like if he was talking about a trivial matter like weather and a cloud with an amusing shape that he saw during the day, that my mind did not comprehend his speech for a moment.

"Sounds like you had quite a trip." And then, a heartbeat and two, "Wait, what?" I cried out, sprang up, and ran toward Nagi.

"What do you mean, that the girl was Dark Evangel? What did that black-hearted villain want from you?"

Nagi, in his typically cheerful, careless manner, which was both charming and infuriating, simply grinned back. "It's okay! She's not a bad person, just someone who had a rough life. Pretty cute, too. We met and had a fight, that's it."

I gave him an exasperated, but not unlovely look. Nagi was many things, and the word idiot was one of them, but he was an excellent judge of character and he was my idiot, so I decided not to question his view of Evangeline. "How did you defeat her?"

"Garlic and leeks!"

"What?"

"I said, garlic and leeks. I dug a pit, filled it with my anti-vampire soup, and she fell into it!"

I must have been looked rather foolish myself, with my mouth open in an unbelieving gape. Still, you must understand me. Evangeline was, as I noted before, one of the most infamous and powerful villains known in both of our worlds. To defeat her in that way, with such unorthodox and comical way was… well, exactly like Nagi, but still too ridiculous to hear.

But then, I had learned that almost everything, no matter how unlikely, is possible with Nagi and Ala Rubra, so I recovered my composure fast.

"That is… unorthodox. But clever. Yet, I doubt your 'soup' could have been more than an obstacle to her."

"Sure, that's why I used the Infernal School curse to seal her power away. She is harmless now."

"Infernal School? That spell requires a school nearby," My eyes widened at the realization. "You sealed her, a wanted criminal with six million bounties on her head, with students?"

"Yup!" Stupid Nagi, with his stupid and lovely smile. "Don't worry, the place is manned by mages, and the headmaster is a powerful mage as well." Well, that is a relief at least. Then he dropped another bombshell. "She has been enrolled as a student. I made a promise to come back and lift the curse from her once she graduates."

This time, I did not even bother to be surprised. I simply asked, with a flat voice. "Why?"

My husband was still smiling, but it turned into something more serious and softer at my question. "Because I think she deserves a chance to live out a normal life, in the world of light, without being hated and hunted. Despite her reputation, and whatever crimes she committed until now, I saw that she is not truly an evil person at her heart."

I shook my head, but with affection, not disapproval. "I swear, once we have a child, I'll have to raise you together with them." Then I smiled, too. "But perhaps she does deserve a chance. It will be a nice period of rest for her, at least."



Nagi, however, never returned to Evangeline. He never got a chance. We became too busy with traveling, fighting, and hiding. There was always something to be done, new threats to defeat, and more clues about our true enemy to uncover.

And five years later, he was gone. Being busy with raising Negi and grieving over Nagi's fate, I forgot about that conversation, too.

And Evangeline, my mind realized with a tinge of horror, had been left here for fifteen years. For that, I felt a pang of sympathy for her.

However, I reminded myself of our short clash. While I may bear some responsibility, by entering her home without prior introduction and going through her belongings without permission, Evangeline showed antagonism toward me even after I explained myself, and then, she did not hesitate to use a potentially lethal spell against me.

Is it possible that, after a broken promise, after fifteen years of imprisonment which is certainly enough time for resentment to fester into outright hatred, she now simply wanted to escape the Infernal School curse by any means necessary? Or perhaps, a vengeance? Nagi is out of her reach, but me, his wife, and possibly even Negi, his son, are not, and conveniently for her, our life has brought us all to Mahora, and I have even been made her housemate.

At that point, I was tempted to simply end her existence right there. It would be easy, simply slitting her throat with the blade, cutting open the jugular veins, letting her bleed out. She will not be able to escape or resist, at all, in her current state.

Are you surprised? Do not mistake me for a pacifist. I do not revel in bloodlust like some, but when demanded by the necessity, the deed needs to be committed.

I held my blade back, however. Regardless of who and what she is, Evangeline is listed as a student of Mahora, meaning she is under the headmaster's authority, not me. Not to mention that she is also part of Negi's class. I may be able to eventually convince Negi of the necessity of the deed, but I had my doubt about the headmaster, especially since I was convinced that he intentionally made me her housemate, as Evangeline had told me before we clashed: "Told me that I need someone living with me, to take care of me." Everything I had seen since entering this cottage, from the sorry state of her residence to her emotional instability, told me that she truly needs that someone, although I had no idea why the headmaster thought me, of all people, was suitable for that task.

Then, I was reminded of Evangeline's curious sense of honour. Even as she was inscribing her part in the history with the blood of her victims, she had never killed women or children. I wonder, I mused, is it because you are both of those? Especially the latter? Regardless, perhaps I could appeal to that, assuming she still ascribes to it.

I also remembered Nagi's words. "She's not a bad person, just had a rough life." "Because I think she deserves a chance to live out a normal life, in the world of light, without being hated and hunted." "Despite her reputation, and whatever crimes she committed until now, I saw that she is not truly an evil person at her heart." His voice echoed through my mind.

And I believe in you.

But I was still cautious. A conversation, perhaps, to ascertain her character and desire.

"So, is it the vengeance you want?" I made my best effort, to keep my voice cold and emotionless, like an executioner's sword. "For the Thousand Master, who left you here, deprived of your power?"

"No." I had not expected such a straightforward, immediate answer. "I admit that I hate being trapped here, eternally repeating the middle school. But I… never mind." I sensed that there was something more, in those unsaid words, but there were too few contexts for me to guess what it was. "The point is, I am not going to seek vengeance against your husband. Besides, he is dead."

"What about me, his wife, and Negi Springfield, his son and your new teacher?"

Evangeline's face darkened at that, but against my expectation, she did not burst into anger again. "Truthfully, I don't like you, and what you are, at all." As if that was not obvious already. "But I have no ill-will for your brat, and I don't believe in the concept of the Sins of the Father. And," She paused, then continued, as if she is ashamed of what she was about to speak out. "Despite the little brawl just now, I don't kill a woman, nor a child." Looking down, she uttered the most unexpected words: "I am sorry."

I was surprised, honestly. Shocked, even, by that admission. 'Sorry' was something I was not expecting to hear from Dark Evangel. It did, however, felt genuine and gave me hope that this whole thing may be resolved smoother than I thought. Trying my best to keep my cold, unmovable facade up, I continued with a question.

"Even if, hypothetically, killing us may allow you to escape from you?" At that, Evangeline looked up. "Surely, you must have looked into ways to break the curse you are held under? And someone of your history would be familiar with darker, bloody ways of magic."

For several moments, Evangeline did not speak, and I could not read anything on her blank face. Finally, her lips parted.

"I admit that it is a tempting idea. But like I said, I don't kill a woman or a child."

That, I did not like. It means she is open to schemes that are still inimical toward our wellbeing, if non-lethal. But, perhaps, I can use the matter of the Infernal School to restrain her?

"I may be able to free you from the binding curse." That perked up her interest, yet her gaze was skeptical, even cynical.

"I doubt you can, or that you even want to. You are not the Thousand Master."

"The former, not right now, but I can find a way. The latter? It would depend on how you act. I want you to fulfill your end of the Infernal School's conditions. Start by returning to the class, treat my son with respect, and do not even dare to think about harming either of us or any of students."

Evangeline scoffed. "So, you are just trying to bargain with me."

"I am afraid that you are gravely mistaken," I answered. "Bargaining is done from the position of weakness. I am negotiating, from a position of strength, with your life held in my hand, my will. I could slay you here and now if I want. And I could have slain you during our clash if I didn't hold back!" As an emphasis, with a sudden motion, my sword was held right under her chin, its edge barely touching the neck, close enough for the faint sensation of Evangeline's startled tremble to reach my hand. It would be easy from now, to simply push the blade further forward, and let the biology take care of the rest.

But, as suddenly as I brought the blade up at her throat, I withdraw it. "But I trust my husband. He was an excellent judge of the character, and if he believed in you, so will I. He is not with us today, but I am, and I will carry out his promise to you in his stead"



"By the way, I am certain that the class is going to throw a welcoming party for your son."

Evangeline said while massaging her limbs, still sore from the bindings. After my little theatrics, she did, reluctantly, accepted my arrangement, and swore an oath by Nagi to carry them out faithfully. In turn, I swore to lift the curse of Infernal School off, by the time of her graduation and freed her from the chair.

"Truly? If so, you'll join us there." I replied while looking at the mess we made at the cottage in dismay. I had no idea where to start the cleaning from. Already in the state of disarray by the time I entered, our battle had made the mess even worse, although few furniture had been outright destroyed, so that was a small relief.

"Why should I? It's boring."

"Consider it as your make-up class for today's absence." Of course, I did not doubt that Negi will later assign her actual make-up as well.



After making sure to hide the more visible signs of struggle, I headed back to the school building, with Evangeline at my side.

The welcoming party was already going on by the time we reached the classroom. The students were gathered in several groups, chatting among themselves in a festive mood. The largest group was, of course, surrounding Negi, making noises of appreciation and offering local foods and drinks.

He, alongside other students, turned toward us at the sound of the door opening.

"Ah, mother! Miss Evangeline!" "Eva-chan!"

Negi introduced himself to Evangeline, asking if everything is okay with her, saying how worried he was. The students also talked about how worried they were for her. I think Evangeline was startled, and there was an odd look on her face, perhaps noting Negi's resemblance to his father.

I noticed that Takamichi and Shizuna were also present. Takamichi gave me a knowing look, I replied with my own, deadpan, 'What were you expecting?' look. He did not make any follow-up conversation, so I assume he was relieved that nothing too serious had happened between me and Evangeline.

As Evangeline joined in with Negi and students, albeit unenthusiastically, a voice caught my attention.

"Excuse me, Miss Springfield!"

The owner of the voice was a student, a girl with a pineapple-shaped haircut, with smooth, spiny 'leaves' of coppery red colour. With a pen and notebook in her hands, and a camera hanging from her neck, she came up to face me, with the eyes glimmering with signs of intelligence and inquisitiveness.

"Greetings, my name is Kazumi Asakura, seat number three, and I am class 3-A's resident reporter!" Oh no. "If you are okay, I would like to briefly interview you."

She's one of THOSE types of persons, that exist in every group. The gossip, the snooper, and at worst, a blackmailer.

However, I could not see a way to politely reject the interview, and my intuition told me that the little miss reporter will never give up on questioning me. And I suspected that her questions will only become more difficult to answer in the future, as she gets to know more about me and Negi. Best to answer her right now.

"Ask them, Miss Asakura."

"Okay! Let's take seats."

We sat on the classroom chairs, with the students gathering around us, not hiding their interest and excitement in what I am going to say, which only increased my unwillingness. Just try to humor them, answer truthfully but don't reveal important information. I told myself.

"By the way, some of my questions are gathered from the class." Guess that explains why they are so interested in this. "First, may I ask for your full name and age, please?"

"Arika Springfield, I am thirty-seven."

"Where did you live with Negi-sensei?"

"Wales, United Kingdom." So far, mundane enough. Maybe this won't be too bad.

"Who is Mr. Springfield?"

"His name is Nagi Springfield."

"Are you from a European royal family?" What? How? My mind plunged into a brief panic, wondering if they somehow managed to find out who I was, before regaining my composure.

"What makes you think that?"

"Well, you are beautiful and elegant, and you do look and act like a princess or queen." Oh, I see. Just an active imagination, nothing serious. If anything, this was my fault, I admit. Even after nearly two decades since the fall of Ostia, I still conducted myself in a regal manner. Upbringing, especially the one as strictly disciplined as mine, don't fade away easily.

"I was." The squee of delight from the surrounding was so loud, that I almost winced, and I had to wait until they died down. "I said I was. I am not anymore." I made a hasty addendum.

If anything, it made them squee even louder, and I heard them shouting Forbidden Romance! and Elopement of love! which, while not technically wrong, made me blush hard.

Kazumi, after others quieted down, continued: "Thank you for your truthful answer. Next, which sports do you like?"

"Nothing in particular. Fencing, I guess?" Which was not sport fencing or Kendo they would be familiar with, but close enough.

I noticed one of the students behind Kazumi perking up. Setsuna Sakurazaki, I remembered her from the class roster, Konoka's protector.

"What kind of book do you like?"

"Natural and social sciences, dialectic, history, and speculative fictions." The first included arcane sciences as well. I bet that the last was unexpected, but I do enjoy seeing the other side's imagination about us.

"Looks like Yuecchi has a new sparring partner." Said one of the girls. "Bookshop, too." Another chimed in.

"What kind of relationship do you have with Takahata-sensei?" Too obvious, Asuna, try to be more subtle.

"An old friend that I had not seen for many years."

"Would you like to spar with me, aru?"

"Sure, but who are you?"

"Which among us you prefer to have as a daughter-in-law?"

"Ask that after both Negi and all of you turn adult." I deadpanned, letting out a hint of displeasure, and that was enough to quash that talk, for just a few days.

"Mrs. Springfield, are you related to Asuna?"

The volume of the voices died down. I felt everyone's eyes and ears upon me. Asuna has become very quiet, startled by the question.

I remained silent for several moments. At first, my mind reeled at that question, then I debated whether I should answer or not. This was a sensitive, and potentially dangerous, topic, one that may lead to premature exposure of Asuna and myself. But, I have realized that at least one of the students has already connected the clues, and all of them would now certainly notice my heterochromia and realize their similarity to Asuna's own. I doubted avoiding an answer, or even lying, would satisfy their curiosity.

Besides, I have already committed myself to restore Asuna's memory. This could be a starting act.

So I decided to answer truthfully.

"Yes." I hear their voices rising again in surprise, "We are distantly related." Which was true. I just conveniently bothered not to mention the fact that there is a gap of hundreds of generations between us.

I looked at Asuna. She looked at me, eyes widened with realization, and then at Negi, who was also surprised by this revelation. I decided to give her time to think, she needed that.

I wondered, however, about the identity of the student who submitted that question.



After the interview was, thankfully, finished, and the party was wrapping up, I approached Evangeline.

"From tomorrow, we clean up our cottage, together." I put great emphasis on the last word.

Irritated, she looked up into my eyes. "Why should I?"

"Because we are going to live together from now, and to be honest, the cottage is a complete mess right now."

"Fine, I'll help, you housewife." If she intended that as an insult, it was completely ineffective. Instead of a verbal riposte, I simply replied in a completely normal tone.

"And, if you need any help with personal matters, like sickness, for example, don't worry. I'll be there for you."

Seeing Evangeline's perturbed reaction, it was more effective than any counter-insult I can throw at her.



There was no spare bed in the cottage, but Evangeline had several sets of spare beddings. So I made my sleeping place downstairs in the kitchen, which was relatively undisturbed by Evangeline's neglect and our brawl during the day.

That night, I would encounter another piece of my past, an unwelcome guest.
 
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Still need a beta/proofreader, and can't shake off the feeling that I need to rewrite the chapters, even if it's as minor as correcting grammar mistakes.
 
It's fun to have some adult drama with the older Negima cast. I still don't get why Negima had to be middle school - especially when they literally look like anime high school age and involved in subjects that are more of action high school characters' subject.
 
It's fun to have some adult drama with the older Negima cast. I still don't get why Negima had to be middle school - especially when they literally look like anime high school age and involved in subjects that are more of action high school characters' subject.
That is true. Maybe Negi (a 10-years old) being paired with high schoolers was a bit too much? Of course, age concern went out of the window after Evangeline was introduced.
 
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That is true. Maybe Negi (a 10-years old) being paired with high schoolers was a bit too much? Of course, age concern went out of the window after Evangeline was introduced.
They ended up just age-up pill'ing him anyways. Even as the "ecchi harem romcom" it was pretending to be, it was clear that the aesthetic it was going for is the Shota x JK one with those character designs.

It just felt awkward, especially with how "adolescent action fantasy" story it ended up being. Mana in particular felt awkward - her age makes the Danganronpa absurd level of telents and experience look tame in comparison.
 
Mana in particular felt awkward - her age makes the Danganronpa absurd level of telents and experience look tame in comparison.
Ah, Mana. I thought about crossover with her and Mukuro, but that went nowhere.

Considering that she is half demon and likely unaging, I do think she is actually older than other students except Evangeline and Zazie.
 
Note: Rewriting is happening. The chapters will be updated alongside when I post Chapter 4.

EDIT: Do not be worried. They are mostly grammar fixings and paragraphs compression, with minimal impact on the plot.
 
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