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Ever since I was a little kid, my mom always told me that I had an angel watching over me, or...
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Chapter One- Vertigo
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    Ever since I was a little kid, my mom always told me that I had an angel watching over me, or more specifically Cassiel, The Angel of Thursday. The Archangel who fell down from heaven with Lucifer, assigned to watch over him from his cage.

    I don't know what mom has been smoking because as I later found out that wasn't a very good thing to say to your own son. I mean mom what in the actual fuck were you implying? That I was the Devil? I was born on thursday so maybe that was it.Maybe it was a joke that she kept to herself I would never know, because I couldn't ask her, I was dying.

    You know when you see people having strokes on TV you think it's a two minute struggle than lights out, you are done, but no, it wasn't two minutes it felt like hours. That whole life flashes before your eyes is a very real thing. That's why the last thought on my mind before I died wasn't that I was having a stroke at age 21, it wasn't that I never watched the last season of game of thrones(even though my friends told me it was shit.) it simply was why my mother saw fit to say The Archangel Cassiel was watching over me.

    Seriously.

    Fuck You Mom.

    AND I WAS REBORN, GIVEN PURPOSE AS AN ANGEL OF THE LORD.

    MY BRETHREN STOOD BESIDE ME, AT THE FRONT THE ELDEST OF US THE TWINS OF CREATION.

    MICHAEL DEMIURGOS THE ARCHANGEL, BESIDE HIM SAMAEL HE WHO WILL BRING LIGHT, THE POISON OF GOD.

    I AM THE ARCHANGEL CASSIEL THE ANGEL OF THURSDAY..... No, actually what the fuck?

    Seriously.

    Fuck You Mom.
     
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    • This shows promise. I can't really say anything more than that because I have to read more to actual SAY anything about it. Hope you do another chapter! Maybe a longer one? You do you if you don't want to
     
    Pope Of Floof said:
    This shows promise. I can't really say anything more than that because I have to read more to actual SAY anything about it. Hope you do another chapter! Maybe a longer one? You do you if you don't want to
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    Yeah it was just a spur of the moment thing I don't actually have a storyline right now, but the idea came to me because of supernatural and Lucifer(TV Show) and Lucifer(2016 comics), angels are supposed to be almost omniscient and omnipresent and I want to do the angel name justice, because this won't just be a curbstomp with an angel SI, there won't even be a curb left after the mc is done.
     
    ReddoNagaiyo said:
    Yeah it was just a spur of the moment thing I don't actually have a storyline right now, but the idea came to me because of supernatural and Lucifer(TV Show) and Lucifer(2016 comics), angels are supposed to be almost omniscient and omnipresent and I want to do the angel name justice, because this won't just be a curbstomp with an angel SI, there won't even be a curb left after the mc is done.
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    Ahhh this reminds me of another fanfiction on sb I was reading where someone was basically that. But couldn't leave that universe and had a certain range lol. Op si for the win
     
    ReddoNagaiyo said:
    Thanks! I actually did read this one, just wish he was more assertive.
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    It seems to be going that way given the newest chapter. Hopefully the new attitude sticks, the constant angst over being the closest thing to 'capital G' God was getting annoying. Only took the blatant death of millions of children to get his ass into gear.
     
    This looks really interesting! Can't wait to see more!

    Is this going to cross over with other series such as Supernatural and Lucifer (TV)? or are you going to stick with the comics?
     
    Awkane said:
    That mc is embarrassing, the problem with overpowered mc is that to compensate you have to make him an idiot or some angsty teenager, seriously I couldn't read a single chapter without the desire to punch the author in the face, that never happened to me before.
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    Ikr? He makes stupid decisions and I get that he's human. But then he gets all self righteous in the later chapters and criticizes the heroes when they don't want to kill. He acts like he's a saint when really the mc is an edgy teen mind with god powers. But I'll leave that off this thread lol
     
    There ls very little actual substance on here to judge appropriately, but I am cautiously optimistic.
    As far as I am aware, there is distinct lack of angels in fanfiction for most fandoms. Especially self-inserted ones. There is so much potential to fuck with people, especially if God is dead or DNGAF, and if it is proper God, not that crazy old/new testament depiction of it.
     
    zZzZzyxel said:
    There ls very little actual substance on here to judge appropriately, but I am cautiously optimistic.
    As far as I am aware, there is distinct lack of angels in fanfiction for most fandoms. Especially self-inserted ones. There is so much potential to fuck with people, especially if God is dead or DNGAF, and if it is proper God, not that crazy old/new testament depiction of it.
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    Yeah, theoretically angels should be pretty fcking OP, but they die in like 2 seconds or struggle with a human-level opponent, it's maddening.
    The ones that do have an angel mc are usally slash or they get hung up on stupid things which i usally can't stomach, especially supernatural fanfiction( dean and cass or luci and sam) fucking enough stop writing bad smut.(Can't forget the fluff fics.)
    meolidas007 said:
    I'm going to take a wild guess and say you update every Thursdays?
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    Once i get a general idea of what i wanna do with this it'll be daily but right now im drawing a blank on which universe to start, im open to suggestions though.
     
    Riggnarock said:
    Dresden Files?
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    Cosmology doesnt really work. Everything he does in that universe MUST be the will of the White God for him to act at all. Also they are literally flawless and perfect beings in that universe, and I doubt that any human author is actually capable of writing that from an internal perspective.

    WH30k could be neat, what with E money being forced to acknowledge that there is a God. Also lorgar might be less of a little shit.

    MCU could be cool, as might Starcraft or Warcraft.
     
    Astrobot said:
    WH30k could be neat, what with E money being forced to acknowledge that there is a God.
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    He realizes and accepts that there are Gods, and wants them all to die by forcing everyone else to disbelieve their existence.
    Which...wouldn't work even if things all went exactly to plan, but...just try telling him that one of his plans is stupid.
     
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    Sydonai said:
    He realizes and accepts that there are Gods, and wants them all to die by forcing everyone else to disbelieve their existence.
    Which...wouldn't work even if things all went exactly to plan, but...just try telling him that one of his plans is stupid.
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    No, he realizes and accepts that warp parasites exist. Gods on the otherhand were something that he was skeptical of the existance of, but would not be suprised by the existance of. He even defined what he would consider a god to be: something he could not comprehend. That such things existed (the big bang) basically meant he was more an on the fence agnostic.

    Of course he would never accept worshiping anyone, but thats a separate issue.
     
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