In regards to Katsuhiro's death in the chronicles timeline, he will most likely be buried in an unmarked grave or incinerated. Nothing left to prove he existed. No one will shed a tear over his death. What he said about how you can not kill an idea is very true. Even if Seele is completely eradicated, one day another person or group might attempt such insanity again. That also reminds me of the trope "As long as there is evil." Even so, Humanity can at least make sure instrumentality never succeeds.
 
A&T!Asuka and Shinji's reaction, for their part, would be an uncertain mix of 'Holy smokes, our kid is so cute!' and 'HOLY SHIT WE HAVE A KID?!?! AAAAAAAAAAAA!' behind a not-very-convincing mask. :)
Given both of their histories with their parents, I can only imagine the deeper emotional implications of having a kid would have on them after those initial reactions.
 
I don't recall, was this ever addressed as being fixed? Because otherwise, it might still not bode too well for the survival on the planet. :V

The Moon's rotational velocity was slightly altered, which means its 'dark side' would finally be visible from Earth for the first time in recorded history. It'll eventually be tidal-locked again with Earth after thousands and thousands of years, but its actual orbital location relative to Earth was unchanged.

So the tides shouldn't be that effected. Hopefully. :V

Since I didn't have much to correct on the Chronicle side of things (the bit in the beginning was fine): "mein Kind" ;)

Okay, I'm officially confused as to when to use what then. What are the rules for applying 'mein' versus 'meine'?

Also, one more "odd German" thing I spotted in MFE, that wasn't asked before:
From what I could tell, this was actually from an early chapter re-used here, but even with that reference, I couldn't quite think of the intention here. There is "Sturer Bock!" as an insult for someone stubborn, but I'm not sure if she really wanted to insult him there or rather motivate him, but "Be as stubborn as a goat!" -> "Sei stur wie ein Bock!"? That seems a rather... odd thing to be told. If she wants to tell him to be strong, maybe "Sei ein Fels in der Brandung!"? That's more in a defensive, nothing can faze him kinda way though (a rock in a surge of waves).

Huh, missed that one the first time we went through Episode 12:

Shinji quietly examined the assault rifle, recalling Conagher-san's detailed lectures on the inner workings of the Eva's weapons systems. As he made one final check of the magazine, Asuka's image flickered to life in front of his eyes. "Yes?"

"I'll be watching your back, so I'll be counting on you to watch mine, Shinji!"

"Uh…okay?" said the Third Child, temporarily put off by Asuka's familiar use of his surname.

Asuka frowned. "Come on, what kind of answer is that?!" Her face lit up with a fierce, fiery passion."We're about to engage in mortal combat with an alien lifeform, protecting humanity from extinction! So show some fighting spirit! Stur wie ein Bock sein!"

"…sure thing." Shinji mentally cut off the video channel, opening up another to the Operations Deck at NERV-1. "Is Asuka always like this?"

Misato smiled. "You'll get used to it."

I think the German/English idiom source I was referencing involved motivating him to be stubborn and bullheaded? Probably the wrong message, I take it. ^^;

So, was God!Pen responsible for all the Rift material the gang has received? Or just the copy of MFE?
That passage seems to imply they all were, and will be.

Apparently so. Makes one wonder how in the world he got inspired to send the other works before polling was introduced.

MFE!Pen-Pen: CLEARLY, THERE ARE MULTIVERSAL SHENANIGANS IN STORE WITH THE MAIN PLOTLINE. GOOD LUCK GETTING ME TO SPOIL THOUGH, BECAUSE EVEN I DON'T KNOW.

...wait, then how did-?

MFE!Pen-Pen: SPOILERS~

...fine. Why the initial Evangelion-type works then?

MFE!Pen-Pen: BECAUSE THERE'S NOTHING LIKE SEEING HOW HORRIBLY THINGS CAN GO WRONG TO MAKE YOU APPRECIATE WHAT YOU'VE GOT EVEN MORE.

...so, why are you binding yourself to the poll results?

MFE!Pen-Pen: BECAUSE YOU'RE THE AUDIENCE.

OKAY brain's starting to hurt now bye-bye.

MFE!Pen-Pen: Wark. :V
 
Okay, so i've tried to polish this up, give it a bit of detail beyond "this number" and "that number", and I hope what comes out makes some vague degree of sense.

As noted, I started giving the various universes in Chronicles numbers for my own amusement, and developed a system out of that amusement for doing so. The system, in-universe, doesn't actually exist, as all the reality numbers are determined using a standard number-to-letter code (A=1, B=2, etc.). I say in-universe because, for the purposes of this, I imagined these as universe numbers Ritsuko had the MAGI churn out at random using specific parameters and limitations (such as each universe being labelled as 'Sphere-xxxx' rather than Earth/Universe/Reality, because it sounds vaguely Biblical, among other reasons, being shortened to 'S-xxxx' in practise), to document each universe when it became apparent labels pertaining to each world's work's medium were going to become confusing as more and more works came through.

Very well done, though who is she sending this report to?

We just made the biggest mistake of our lives. The gang and I just watched It and Us back to back.
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Nobody slept alone last night. NOBODY!

That's kind of the point of horror movies. :p
 
That's kind of the point of horror movies. :p
.........yeah, but holy shit. We all showed up for school the next day barely able to stand from how stressed and tired we were. Actually:
Me and Asuka: We got the most sleep. About 1 hour. Asuka especially was freaked the fuck out, because an alternate version of herself and me. Plus Pennywise was a little jarring. However, oddly enough after 6 hours of me talking about orchestra, my home town and how much I love her. She confirmed that I wasn't an evil alternate version. And was not a strange clown ghost......................passionate love making followed. "Final test" as she put it.
Rei and Kaworu: I don't entirely know what happened, but considering that in there are clones of them. And they come from creatures that can form as ghosts...........these movies messed with them the most. Either way they showed up to school just as tired as us surprisingly. I thought they were unable to get that fatigued.
Kensuke, Sayaka and Kyoko: They spent the entire night staying up and "confirming that they were real". They were redder then when me Asuka and I said what we did. Use your imagination.
Hikari and Toji: They......watched.....so many romantic comedies......to wash the horror out of their heads.
 
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So the tides shouldn't be that effected. Hopefully. :V
Suuure... :V
Okay, I'm officially confused as to when to use what then. What are the rules for applying 'mein' versus 'meine'?
Ah, the fun world of German forms. Got kinda sniped by @curiosity there, but yeah, masculine/neutral -> mein, feminine -> meine. Now, in regards to what is what, I guess that's a matter of having to know... :V
I think the German/English idiom source I was referencing involved motivating him to be stubborn and bullheaded? Probably the wrong message, I take it. ^^;
Well, in that case, "Sei stur wie ein Bock!" would be "correct", since that'd be a demand ("Stur wie ein Bock sein!" would be "To be as stubborn as a goat" instead). But again, I don't think I've ever heard it used in such context. ^^
 
Man, imagine if the Chronicles gang got (read-only) access to "our" TV-Tropes... If nothing else, they'd be able to look at tropes of some other Eva fan-works that they don't get to watch/read wholesale.

Plus, there's the whole 'Trope Pantheon' bit:

Shinji: "So apparently, I'm the "God of 'Not Getting Any Mental Help'..."
Misato: "Hoping to get that fixed soon..."
S: "Asuka is the Goddess of Tsundere..."
Asuka: "I feel both slightly offended and proud hearing that..."
S: "Rei is the 'Goddess of Emotional Girls'..."
Rei: "Not anymore, thanks to you guys."
S: "My father is the 'God of World Ending and Finger-Tenting'..."
Ritsuko: "He does do that thing with his hands a lot, doesn't he?"
S: "Misato is the 'Goddess of Childish Adults and Attracting the Young Males'..."
Mi: "Hey, I take offense at that first one!"
A: "And the second bit?"
Mi: "...Meh, if the shoe fits."
S: "Mother is the 'Goddess of Empathic Weapons'..."
Re: "I suppose one could call it that..."
S: "Kaworu-kun is the 'God of Mystical White Hair'..."
Kaworu: *runs his hand through his sparkly white hair while striking an exaggerated pretty-boy pose*
Re: *lightly smacks him*
K: "Sorry."
S: "Arael is the 'God of Mind Rape'..."
A: *deadpan* "Eeyup."
Re & K: *scowling*
S: "Keel Lorenz is the 'God of Important Tertiary Characters'..."
Mi: "Of what?"
Ri: "Means that he played such a major role in things despite the fact that the Laserdiscs hardly ever had him in focus."
S: "And, Ramiel is the 'Deity of Sinister Geometry'."
 
Very well done, though who is she sending this report to?
No-one. The way i'd imagined it, hence the login bit at the start, was that these are her personal notes, for her own perusal, rather than to be sent to someone, hence the implication that there's more detailed files elsewhere.

I'm half tempted to reuse my 'acute' joke from about half a year ago, but that only really worked with the image of Ramiel wearing a schoolgirl uniform. :p
 
No-one. The way i'd imagined it, hence the login bit at the start, was that these are her personal notes, for her own perusal, rather than to be sent to someone, hence the implication that there's more detailed files elsewhere.

I'd imagine that if needed to, she could print a report on a particular world/sphere of interest when the topic comes up.

Although the "rescue the laserdisc pilots" would be an interesting direction. I really hope chronicles attempts something like this. If only for the contrast.
 
I'd imagine that if needed to, she could print a report on a particular world/sphere of interest when the topic comes up.

Although the "rescue the laserdisc pilots" would be an interesting direction. I really hope chronicles attempts something like this. If only for the contrast.

Hopefully it'll be less disastrous than what happened in Nobody Dies, where during the Multiverse Arc,

ND!Rei and Unit-05 (aka Go-kun, aka Liberty Prime as an Eva, aka the daddy of ND!Rei's mindbabies) inadvertently dragged an enraged ND!ADAM into the post-3I End of Evangelion. She picked up EoE!Shinji/Asuka before the battle with ND!ADAM pretty much destroyed Earth. The giant Tang gestalt that was humanity post-3I promptly NOPE'd away into deep space before ND!Rei transitioned into another universe.

It was that kind of fic. :V
 
Hopefully it'll be less disastrous than what happened in Nobody Dies, where during the Multiverse Arc,

ND!Rei and Unit-05 (aka Go-kun, aka Liberty Prime as an Eva, aka the daddy of ND!Rei's mindbabies) inadvertently dragged an enraged ND!ADAM into the post-3I End of Evangelion. She picked up EoE!Shinji/Asuka before the battle with ND!ADAM pretty much destroyed Earth. The giant Tang gestalt that was humanity post-3I promptly NOPE'd away into deep space before ND!Rei transitioned into another universe.

It was that kind of fic. :V

Ah yes, I remember Nobody Dies.

It was batshit insane.
 
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Hopefully it'll be less disastrous than what happened in Nobody Dies, where during the Multiverse Arc,

ND!Rei and Unit-05 (aka Go-kun, aka Liberty Prime as an Eva, aka the daddy of ND!Rei's mindbabies) inadvertently dragged an enraged ND!ADAM into the post-3I End of Evangelion. She picked up EoE!Shinji/Asuka before the battle with ND!ADAM pretty much destroyed Earth. The giant Tang gestalt that was humanity post-3I promptly NOPE'd away into deep space before ND!Rei transitioned into another universe.

It was that kind of fic.
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After a point I think the author ran out of story and improvised....

From what I recall of those days several years ago, the subsequent season after the Leliel arc suffered sufficient backlash (and I honestly can't remember why, other than some vague recollections that he had written himself into a corner for one reason or another) that the author ended up reversing months' worth of writing with an "all just a dream" maneuver utilizing Arael.

Alas, that didn't pan out well either, and Nobody Dies became a proverbial Dead Fic not too long afterwards. :/
 
Hopefully it'll be less disastrous than what happened in Nobody Dies, where during the Multiverse Arc,

ND!Rei and Unit-05 (aka Go-kun, aka Liberty Prime as an Eva, aka the daddy of ND!Rei's mindbabies) inadvertently dragged an enraged ND!ADAM into the post-3I End of Evangelion. She picked up EoE!Shinji/Asuka before the battle with ND!ADAM pretty much destroyed Earth. The giant Tang gestalt that was humanity post-3I promptly NOPE'd away into deep space before ND!Rei transitioned into another universe.

It was that kind of fic. :V
Huh, shows how little I remember of the actual plot of ND. I certainly recall elements, like obviously the Ree and now that you mentioned Go-kun, that kinda rang a bell too. But for the life of me, I can't remember them going for EoE!A&S. Honestly, the only thing I vividly remember is sadly...
that the author ended up reversing months' worth of writing with an "all just a dream" maneuver utilizing Arael.

Alas, that didn't pan out well either, and Nobody Dies became a proverbial Dead Fic not too long afterwards. :/
Yeah, that. That one certainly hurt. "It was all a dream" is rarely a good idea, in this case resetting months of plot certainly didn't help at all. And while I may not remember details, I do kinda recall there also some pretty good/important developments being erased by that (though I'm not sure if he reintroduced some again?).
Though it did spark an idea for the "next Ikaris chapter" (which only goes to show how long that's been dormant... :V):
Asuka wakes up, goes to the bath, finds Misato under the shower (not sure if youngsters these days get that given that it was already kinda too old for me)
A: "Uh... What are you doing here...?"
M: "Huh? What do you mean? Taking a shower in my very own apartment, of course."
A: "I'm... pretty sure you were kicked out yesterday..."
M: "Whaaat? No, no, certainly not. That..." *waves fingers* "~That was all just a dream~"
A: ...
A: "No, it wasn't!"
M: "Alright, alright! Rei only has frikking cold water! I don't know if she can stand to live in that dump! And I'm certainly not gonna shower at NERV, with their cameras everywhere!"
A: *sigh* "Well then..." ! "WAIT, THERE ARE CAMERAS IN THE SHOWERS!?"
 
Yeah, that. That one certainly hurt. "It was all a dream" is rarely a good idea, in this case resetting months of plot certainly didn't help at all. And while I may not remember details, I do kinda recall there also some pretty good/important developments being erased by that (though I'm not sure if he reintroduced some again?).
There was sadly a lot of cool things that got retconned by that 'dream' trick, yes. The two things that stick out the most for me are all the awesome of the Battle of Tokyo Bay and Pieter and Kyoko's reconciliation and remarriage, which completed Kyoko's turn from 'hideous abusive mother who made ND!Asuka a stuttering wreck with Canon!Shinji-levels of zero self-worth' to 'mama bear who set Asuka's step-mother's hair on fire for insulting her daughter and making her cry in public'. ND overall suffered from a lack of advance planning, which could produce awesome, but made a satisfying ending elusive.

Anyhow, an apology. I've been far busier here than I expected to be, which is bad for writing, but great professionally. I'm doing a lot of intel support to several units here, and they're pretty happy with how things are going. I am going to get some bloody writing done soon, though. It's really starting to give me an itch, how I've been at a standstill for so long.
 
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